This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月7日 at 下午 06:39:21

Artist: Ichigo
Title: YU-MU
Source: Touhou
Tags: Firce777
BPM: 160
Filesize: 8713kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:

1. Firce777's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1462 notes)
2. Hard (4.91 stars, 573 notes)
3. Lunatic (5 stars, 688 notes)
4. Normal (3 stars, 251 notes)

Download: Ichigo - YU-MU
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
Enjoy it!

Skin by: S i R i R u (Thanks for allow me use this skin)

Normal --- done by me
Hard --- done by me
Firce777's Taiko --- done by Firce777
Lunatic --- done by me

mod in irc

hi~
這個有點長, mod 也做得較random了。。

[Normal]

1. normal 請不要用跳的, 因為osu 新手眾多。都跟distance snap來排吧
2. 02:06:000 (1) - 這裡開始有一堆copy的 sliders. 全部都用whistle 聲的話很吵耳。像insane 那個做得不錯
3. 03:27:000 (1) - ^
4. 03:25:500 (1,2,3) - 不好按。建議換成slider, 在03:26:625 - 完結

[Hard]

1. 建議使用對稱的slider. 00:03:000 (1) - 這些看上來有點不美觀的感覺~
2. 02:22:687 (1,6) - ^
3. 01:15:937 (3) - 有點太長了。可以考慮改短他再補點note
4. 02:31:500 (3) - 好奇怪的形狀..
5. 03:33:937 (3) - ^
6. 03:02:062 - 加個note
7. 03:05:062 - ^
8. 03:06:562 - ^
9. 03:08:062 - ^
10. 03:38:437 (1) - 順時針轉個90度

[Insane]

1. 一開始那些。令我有產生幻覺的感覺。。建議3號和1號note 重疊再用旋轉來調整位置
2. 00:09:093 (8) - 不要往前面連打的方向去.
3. 02:09:750 (1) - 這樣令人誤會了。建議不使用
4. 03:16:500 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:19:500 (1,2) - ^
6. 02:28:500 (1) - 改成彎形。感覺比直角轉彎好
7. 03:10:500 (1) - 不對稱
8. 03:27:562 (2,3) - 不適合使用跳
9. 03:24:750 (2) - 用(1)的flip horizontally
10. 03:36:187 (2) - 改成直角?
11. 03:38:531 (1) - 刪掉

這歌好聽,做得也不錯~
留個星~加油

General:
i've got a filling like offset is a bit wrong =/
normal:
no distance spacing at all?(you don't use distance snap?)
and there mustn't be any jumps in normal (below 3 stars)\
right now it's ont checkable.
Hard:
00:03:000 (1,2,1,2,) - spacing
00:21:000 (1) - ^
00:30:375 (2,3) - ^
00:32:437 (2,3,4,1,2) - ^
00:34:500 (1) - ^
00:36:000 (1) - ^
00:37:500 (1) - ^
00:39:000 (1) - ^
omg! check the whole diffs on distance snap!! and then pm me and i'll recheck. cause right now it's just...nah...
but still star for nice song =/

Licnect wrote:

offset 2993 感覺比較好

我测的差不多 大概再-5左右

mp3是320kbps..现在的标准要压的说 <_<
192kbps的↓ Offset: 43
http://puu.sh/1GII

謝謝chungskale 辛苦了@@

嗯!! 謝謝Licnect

謝謝Selee幫我壓好了 也幫我測出來 ^^

Thanks everyone

request from mod queue
Sorry , I can't understand Chinese. @_@

[General]
Change " Touhou " to source in all diff
uh... maybe you didn't fullsubmit??
If you change mp3 , you must choose fullsubmit.

[Normal]
hmm, I know easiest diff have over ☆3.00 is likely to unrankble.
HP Drain Rate -3 & Approach Rate -3 will be under ☆3.00
00:59:668 (n) I think this break don't need. Add spinner like [Hard]?
01:16:543 (1) remove new combo
01:18:793 (1) ^
01:57:793 (n) I think this break don't need. It's bored. Add something?
02:03:418 (n) ^
03:09:793 (1) remove new combo
03:11:293 (1) ^
03:12:793 (1) ^
03:14:293 (1) ^
03:15:793 (1) ^
03:17:293 (1) ^
03:18:793 (1) ^
03:20:293 (1) ^
03:25:543 (T) resnap this timing point

[Hard]
Overall Difficulty +1
02:19:168 (n) I think this break don't need. Add something?

[Lunatic]
01:03:043 (T) starting kiai here
01:27:043 (n) add note & ending kiai here
02:19:543 (1,1) remove new combo
02:44:668 (1) ^
02:55:543 (1,2,3) wrong spacing
03:02:855 (8) stack with (7)?
03:27:043 (T) starting kiai here
03:40:543 (1) remove new combo

Good
star

banvi
Thank you ^^

You posted on my mod queue an eternity ago.... sorry for the extended delay.

General:
New combos are used a bit too often and haphazardly, try to have consistency.

Normal:
None of the sliders seem to be symmetrical. What bothers me is that it looks like an attempt was made, so you end up with a whole bunch of kinda-symmetric-but-not-really sliders, which detract from the map. Check out the guide to delicious sliders to see how to fix this. Also, when you manage to get one pretty good slider, it'd be best to copy,paste, and rotate that for the same type of beat. That way the curve remains consistent. For instance, 00:45:043 (1,2,3,4) - ought all to be identical so the curves would be parallel.

00:25:355- The sliders before this get kinda boring in terms of hitsounds because it's just an endless stream of clap, clap, clap... consider using different hitsounds to spice it up. Also, it's kinda loud.
00:28:543 (1) - Not New combo
00:31:543 (1) - ^
00:34:543 (1) - ^
00:37:543 (5) - ^

00:35:293 (3,4,1) - Flow of movement feels weird.
02:06:043 (4) - directly stack this under (3)
02:39:043 (1,2,3,4) - Would be prettier arranged like:

03:06:043 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Looks bad tilted in comparison w/ earlier combos.

03:39:043 (1,2,3,4) -
Ok this is weird. In editor, I see that the pattern is nice and ordered:
but then in test mode it becomes distorted:

And there's the same problem for notes after the break.

I'll edit in a mod for Hard and Lunatic sometime soon. For the while, keep on working on your map! Starred.

akrolsmir
Thank you
You taught me an important lesson

Hard:
Sliders are better, but still not perfect. Some of the long slider shapes were quite nice, but a majority of the shorter ones were not.

00:27:793 (4) - 1 grid right for spacing
02:20:105 (7,8,9,10,11) - Found this pattern needlessly confusing, try making it more intuitive and moving it away from overlapping with where (6) was.
03:57:043 (1) - Silence the spins and end of this spinner. Also, a 10 second spinner is kinda long, think about some way of shortening it.

Lunatic:
Though your sliders in general are imperfect, you use jumps very, very well here.

00:58:074 (6,8) - Get this in the center of the screen? Modify surrounding notes accordingly.
01:00:230 (4,5) - Make the end of these land on 3.
02:06:043 (1,2) - Caught my attention in particular, fix to be more circular/symmetric.
02:44:855-02:56:011: Same repetition of circling slider gets boring.
03:03:043- Place a beat here, and have the finish from (15) be on this instead?
03:57:043 (1) - See Hard note about the final spinner.

I think your timing of notes was very good in your choice of sliders and circles, (except for streams because I hate streams but that's just me), and though some of the sliders weren't pretty, a few were quite good. Continue working on this and your map will turn out great!

[overall]:

1. BG 800x600 or 1024x768 better change or resize
2. Delete osb
3. Combo color 4 resembles combo color 3; please change it
4. All diff use soft finish? Suggestion
5. 01:03:043 - Preview point ?
6. Forum Titel YU-MU (Full) lol change YU-MU

[Lunatic]:

1. 00:08:480 (1) - new combo
2. 00:14:949 (8) - Spacing why next 0.81

[Hard]:

1. 00:45:043 (1) - 1gird right and down
2. 00:45:418 (2) - 1grid down
3. 01:00:043 (1) - end01:01:918 -
4. 03:18:043 (1) - 03:19:918 - end

[Normal]:
Fine

Fight~

S o r d a
Thank you ^^

Your offset in every difficulty varied (Normal=15043,Hard =3043,Lunatic =3043), that what your friend noticed. You should make the offset on all difficulty is the same offset (43). Moved all offset to this, you doesn't need resnapping as this offset is the same line as in all difficulty. Though it is recommended to double check the snapping on each notes. I will mod more on the contents later. Just make sure the offset are the same setting first.

The starting notes doesn't imply the starting of offset. It not necessarily offset will start at the beginning of the first note at all the time. Selee's timing is already there beforehand. Though I got 2ms later than him, I believe it wont affect much and making offset 45 mean your inherited time will be 2ms later on all difficulty.

I will mod your map later, I wanna see and play your Yu-Mu ver.

Thanks Ayeen

I love this song**
star :3

nice song, starred

I have some important things to tell you.
Is ... I'm going to redo this Beatmap
If you can
I hope you can tell me which left the difficulty of doing good
I did this because I think that is not good enough beatmap
I feel strange when playing
So I intend to redo
Thank you all like this beatmap

nice song, starred

nice song, starred

so01go wrote:

nice song, starred

加油加油 ～～

Edit: Don't give kudos to people who do nothing

請你別亂亂給 Kudosu.

Also, good luck. I know my map was pretty bad. XD

對不起..我還搞不太清楚那個用法OTZ

Hi.

General:
Your easiest diff is not 3 stars or less. You need to have a diff that is 3 stars or less. Map an easy or try to make normal a little easier. Your normal is 3.24 stars.
I suggest you
A)Change normal into easy. (Should be simple. Remember 3 stars or less!) and remap a normal that can give about 5m score.

Normal:
Errrr. Don't make ticks have hitsound. It sounds weird. If you want to have hitsound, use a beat instead of a long slider.
00:51:045 (1) - This doesn't sound good with the hitsound. The slider ticks are adding wayy too many sound to the slider.
00:57:045 (1) - ^
Found a way to fix it. Change 00:37:732 timing section and use Custom sound 2 (S:C 2)
01:06:045 (1) - Space this properly
01:07:920 (3) - NC
01:09:045 (6) - I still don't like how ticks have the hitsound but it sounds okay here.
01:55:545 (2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing for normal. Change it please.
01:58:545 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:59:107 (5) - This makes the combo confusing. Remove it and add a note.
03:12:045 (SB) I think thank you for playing should be near the end and not here yet. >.<
03:25:545 (1,2,3,4) - This made me offbeat a bit. Use two sliders or 1 slider for this part?
03:29:295 (6,2) - I don't like how 6 is overlapping 2. Move 6 lower.
03:39:045 (6) - NC?
03:43:545 (5) - ^

Hard:
00:33:980 (2,3) - Wrong spacing. Space correctly please.
00:35:480 (5,6) - ^
01:00:043 (9,10,1,2) - Don't like how 9,10 is overlapping (1,2). You can do something simple as this.
01:24:793 (4,5,6,7) - Nonono. Space 5,6,7 properly. I was confused because spacing looks the same but it really shouldn't be. You could do something like this. Stack 5 on 4. Move 6,7 over.
02:20:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might be fooled into thinking its a stream. Space properly please.
03:26:043 (3) - Spaced kinda close to 2 compared to 1,2. Move a little farther away.

Lunatic:
More than 18m score. This will be an approved map unless you make it easier.
00:07:355 (5) - One grid left
00:08:105 (7,8) - ^
03:00:605 (3) - Don't do this. I can barely see that it's a slider. Move this slider somewhere else.
03:01:730 (4) - ^

Hi!
以下都是建議,不喜歡請隨便略過

[sb]

[General]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Lunatic]
這個跳得太鬼畜了我無力Orz

滿不錯的圖~Star

good

Special Thanks
aesopl19193
Raging Bull
Thanks
Norn_NNN

Hi~ 很抱歉拖到了第二天.

我可以吐槽 8.jpg 左下角的文字吗

[Normal]
这个diff里有很多1/2的slider.
我感觉1/2的slider在低AR下打起来感觉很怪, 特别是单独的那些.
我觉得可以适当的把一些换成两个1/2 circle. 这样也可以玩起来不那么单调
00:06:045 (3) - New combo?
00:39:420 (1,2,3) - 这样排我觉得难了些 ;_; 不如一条曲线不要三角了.
00:40:920 (4,5,6) - ^
02:39:795 (2) - 和02:38:670 (7)叠上吧?
03:17:107 (4) - Ctrl+R 然后再弄一下spacing?
03:29:295 (6,1) - 这两个有部分重叠.
03:31:545 (2) - Ctrl+R?

[Hard]
00:42:043 (3,4) - 这两个拉开点吧, 最起码弄到0.7x 0.8x 让别人看出这两个时间间隔与前面不同
01:11:668 (8,1) - ^
01:17:105 (8,9,10,11) - 这四个摆正点吧, 和前面的几个组成一个正方形
01:44:293 (5,6,7) - 想坑人吗? 如果这样的话就在(5)加个new combo.
02:32:293 (1) - 这里new combo?
03:20:855 (6,1) - 间距突然小了?
03:27:793 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个和前面三个排个六边形怎么样?

[Lunatic]
分数快超过1800万了 ;_;
00:25:543 (5) - 无预兆的跳会让人措手不及, new combo here?
00:38:480 (6,7,1) - 不要在跳之后马上间距0.5x..
01:54:043 (1,2,3) - 各自ctrl+r怎么样? 不然玩起来挺别扭
01:55:543 (5) - New combo here?
01:57:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 复制前面那段然后ctrl+H
02:19:168 (8) - 和前面的02:17:855 (2)叠好

(: Good luck~
Star.

make it look like this please:

in normal
Symmetrical.

all diffs:
the last beat should be on 03:56:902 (2) -


Hard
02:34:730 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these anti-jumps are the biggest combo breakers ever. please change. ;_;
Please use your distance snap more and less anti jumps. :C

Also.. Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
This is the case for many of the stuff you've got in your hard
Here for example: 00:05:105, 00:06:605, 00:08:105, etc. You must change all this. This doesn not apple to your lunatic since it's insane or normal since there are no hidden beats under sliders there.

didn't find much else. good luck! :)

OH! And also, if you want.. I could make an easy for you. Won't take long at all. You'll love it.

theowest wrote:

Also.. Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
This is the case for many of the stuff you've got in your hard
Here for example: 00:05:105, 00:06:605, 00:08:105, etc. You must change all this. This doesn not apple to your lunatic since it's insane or normal since there are no hidden beats under sliders there.

I will improve. Thanks
Special Thanks
Shiki
theowest

[General]

- Put the audio lead-in 2 sec please?
- The patter of sound that are using sounds bad. And you can up the volume a little.

[Normal]

- This difficulty have a different offset.
00:03:045 (1) 1 Grid down
00:04:545 (1) 2 Grid left
00:06:045 (1) Same like the previous (1)
00:16:732 (4) I'm not sure about the sound of the sliderpoints, maybe you can remove it, sounds bad for me ~
00:19:732 (4) ^ Same
00:22:732 (4) ^
00:27:045 (1) Remove new combo, isn't necessary
00:45:045 (5) I don't feel a break here, maybe you can put a few notes here. Just a suggestion.
01:15:045 (1) Finish
01:36:420 (4,1) Spacing.
01:42:045 (~) Is really necessary put a lot of breaks? I suggest to remove this.
03:19:920 (4) Improve this slider.
03:44:295 (2) The repeat is not hidden, but is confusing for the beginners, I suggest to move it.
03:57:043 (1) End this slider in a same time.

[Hard]

00:45:043 (~) I don't feel a break here...
01:03:043 (5,1) Spacing.
01:12:043 (8,1) ^
01:36:043 (1,2,3,4) Inconsistent spacing.
01:37:543 (1,2,3,4) ^ Maybe this is a pattern? Looks bad because the change of spacing is very small.
01:44:293 (1,2,3) Considering the previous spacing, these three notes are too close.
01:46:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Confusing jumps considering that is just a hard :\
01:47:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I suggest change these notes for sliders.
02:32:480 (1~) Very long and separate stream for me...
02:56:293 (2,3,4,5,6) This is most hard I think =.=
03:02:480 (3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing
03:55:543 (1,2,3,4,5) Hard stream.
03:57:043 (1) End this slider in a same time.

[Insane]

00:01:543 (1,2,3) make a symmetric triangle? and center it. Use grid level 4 If is necessary.
00:15:043 (1,2,3) Jump and antijump, this is very confuse. Please fix it.
01:50:293 (1) Very short spin considering the following and the previous notes, I suggest change it for a slider.
02:19:168 (8) too close to the previous note, considering the previous spacing this is a little confuse.
02:28:636 (1~) these slider are bad, the normal is sliders with 2 repeats.
03:57:043 (1) End this slider in a same time.


That's all. Good luck.

Star ^^

Good

Your map wishes Rnked certain.

This map lover



Stra~　★

Hi :>

[Normal]:

1. 01:37:918 (3) - Add a new combo here. It looks "bad", so try to follow like the previous form. For example: 00:33:418 (1,2,1,2).
2. 01:39:418 (5) - New combo, and then... 01:39:980 (1) - Remove this new combo, looks much better by following the lyrics.
3. 02:36:418 (5) - New combo?
4. 03:07:543 (6) - ^

[Hard]:

1. 00:04:543 (6) - New combo, is not necessary to extend the new combo.
2. 00:07:543 (6) - The same ^
3. 00:13:918 (6) - New combo here then, Remove this new combo 00:14:293 (1), and after that, add a new combo here: 00:15:230 (5).
4. 00:31:543 (6) - New combo.
5. 00:34:543 (4) - ^
6. 00:37:543 (4) - ^
7. 01:10:543 (5) - ^
8. 03:30:043 (4) - ^
9. 03:51:793 (6) - New combo then, remove this new combo: 03:52:543 (1).

[Lunatic]:

1. 00:04:543 (5) - New combo, the same as [Normal], is not necessary to extend the new combo when it could be short.
2. 00:05:855 (1) - Remove new combo then, start new combo here: 00:06:043 (5).
3. Nice diff. O=

Thanks to
Mystica
phonic

Special thanks to
eldnl
vivere


I will improve soon .

nice maps~
Your message is too short.

Download: Ichigo - YU-MU (l1106188) [Firce777's Taiko].osu

[Normal]
00:16:730 (4) - humm I don't like this slider, try like this : http://puu.sh/4Qsg
other slider too.

03:08:105 (2) - same
03:25:543 (1,2,3) - This object must 1/3

[Hard]
01:13:918 (7) - add new combo
03:21:043 (1,2) - hard to read
03:25:543 (1,2,3,4,5) - must 1/3
03:37:543 (5) - add new combo

[Lunatic]
00:15:605 (2,3) - hard to read
00:55:168 (3) - 1 grid left
01:13:543 (5) - hard to read, so add new combo
03:25:543 (1,2,3,4,5) - must 1/3
03:28:543 (6) - add new combo
03:34:355 (5) - same
03:45:043 (3) - add new combo

[Skin]
Nothing to say, i like it so Star

[SB]
It's decent, minus the fact 1.jpg is the same as 3.jpg ... only do this if you find yourself doing.
Maybe a more "Stylish" thank you for playing will do a better work :3

If you directly apply the code to the .osu file you'll be at the 80% of the mod...

[Normal]
00:06:043 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something like this? i quite didn't like that pattern, because of boxyness, u know...

40,40,6043,5,2
104,152,6418,1,0
104,280,6793,2,0,B|176:282|221:209,1,130,2|0
104,152,7543,5,2
212,219,7918,1,0
271,332,8293,2,0,B|335:299|340:214,1,130,2|0

00:30:793 (3,4,5) - Tweak this pattern a bit to remove the 00:30:793 (3,5) - overlap? maybe like this

208,288,30793,2,0,B|128:264|160:184,1,130,0|8
152,56,31543,2,0,B|110:45|62:74|51:118,1,130,0|8
159,188,32293,2,0,B|208:192|216:144,2,65,0|0|8

00:32:293 (5,1) - Spacing
00:46:918 (1,2,3,4) - i didn't like that much that pattern... so try like this?

256,216,46918,5,8
131,177,47293,2,0,B|123:209|129:240,2,65,0|0|8
376,256,48418,1,8
501,220,48793,2,0,B|509:252|503:283,2,65,0|0|8

00:51:043 (1) - Move it at the centre, if you accepted the last suggestion, do like this ( 00:49:918 (1,2,1) - )

256,296,49918,5,8
32,176,50668,1,8
152,120,51043,6,8,B|232:120|232:120|256:72|256:72|280:120|280:120|352:120,4,260

01:14:668 (4) - make it 3 grid 3 up? to complete the 01:13:918 (2,3,4) - triangle
01:30:043 (1,2,3,4) - Just to make it better, do like this?

256,192,90043,5,4
345,288,90418,2,0,B|304:320|256:336|204:320|168:286,2,195,8|0|0
256,192,91918,2,0,B|215:160|167:144|115:160|79:194,2,195,8|0|0
376,236,93418,1,8

01:45:793 (1,2,3) - If you wanted to do a blanket use this

176,96,105793,6,0,B|144:160|180:224,1,130,8|0
292,156,106543,2,0,B|324:220|292:285,1,130,8|0
179,221,107293,1,8

01:51:043 (1,2,3) - just copypaste and flip horizontally and vertically the 01:45:793 (1,2,3) - suggestion

320,100,111043,6,0,B|352:164|316:228,1,130,8|0
204,160,111793,2,0,B|172:224|204:289,1,130,8|0
317,225,112543,1,8

01:52:543 (3,4,1) - do this to complete the awesomess :3

317,225,112543,1,8
387,111,113293,2,0,B|320:74|255:109,1,130,8|0
316,224,114043,6,0,B|255:255|191:219,3,130,4|0|8|0

01:57:043 (1) - you can simply copypaste and Ctrl+R 01:54:043 (1) ( curvy is better sometime )
02:28:543 (1) - could you map with circles and sliders ?
03:18:043 (1,2,3,4) - Complete the triangle and blanket (4) on (3) like this

176,272,198043,5,4
432,328,198793,1,4
348,84,199543,1,8
380,208,199918,2,8,B|344:228|292:200,6,65,8|8|8|8|8|8|12

[Hard]
00:31:918 (3) - Make it Blanket 00:31:730 (2) - ,like this

344,256,31918,2,0,B|272:256|232:192|274:112,2,160,8|0|8

00:51:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Rearrange them in a more complex shaped manner. like this.

256,192,51043,5,8
160,320,51418,1,8
64,192,51793,1,8
160,72,52168,1,8
256,192,52543,1,8
352,320,52918,1,8
448,192,53293,1,8
352,72,53668,1,8
352,72,53855,1,4

00:54:980 (x) - Add a Slider that finish in 00:55:355
00:54:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - arrange themin this manner, maybe?

72,312,54230,6,0,B|72:232,1,80,0|8
32,160,54605,2,0,B|72:144|112:160,1,80,0|8
184,192,54980,2,0,B|256:224|256:224|336:184,1,160
400,160,55543,2,0,B|438:144|478:160,1,80,0|8
440,312,56105,2,0,B|440:224,1,80,8|12
440,312,56668,1,8

00:57:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Rearrange them? somewhat like this

256,352,57043,5,12
256,192,57418,1,8
120,272,57793,1,8
120,112,58168,1,8
256,24,58543,1,8
392,112,58918,1,8
392,272,59293,1,8
256,360,59668,1,8
256,272,59855,1,8
256,192,60043,1,8

01:00:230 (1,2,3,4) -tweak them like this?

184,232,60230,6,0,B|168:192|184:152,1,80,0|8
328,232,60605,2,0,B|344:192|328:152,1,80
256,192,60980,2,0,B|256:112,1,80
296,45,61355,2,8,B|256:24|212:48,1,80,8|12
296,272,62105,2,8,B|256:293|212:269,1,80,8|12

01:02:480 (x) -Add a hit Circle
01:02:855 (x) - ^
01:02:105 (5,6,7,8) - tweak like this?

296,272,62105,2,8,B|256:293|212:269,1,80,8|12
256,192,62480,1,0
216,124,62668,1,8
296,124,62855,1,0

01:03:043 (1) - Stack it under 01:02:105 (5) - if you followed all :3
01:09:043 (1) - Complete the 01:08:293 (7,8,1) - triangle like this

312,276,69043,6,0,B|312:196,1,80

01:09:418 (2) - Tweak like this?

384,156,69418,1,8

01:39:605 (4) - move it to make 01:39:043 (1,2,3,4) - a diamond like this
01:44:293 (1,2,3) - Use an antijump, and not a simple slow down ... spacing looked up to similiar... this is an antijump

296,264,104293,5,8
284,272,104668,1,0
272,280,105043,1,4
296,344,105230,6,0,B|344:344|376:312,1,80

01:45:605 (2) - Add a repeat
01:46:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't think the 01:46:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern is good to use before a jump to some streamy hits.... do like this
01:46:168 (1) - from here to 01:49:168 (3) - i losed the track of the graphical and rhythmical changes.... but the resulting code is

356,200,106168,5,0
324,124,106355,1,0
252,84,106543,1,0
180,124,106730,1,8
148,200,106918,1,0
180,276,107105,1,0
252,316,107293,1,8
324,276,107480,5,8
336,284,107574,1,8
344,292,107668,1,8
352,300,107761,1,0
360,308,107855,2,0,B|420:372,1,80,0|4
444,292,108230,6,0,B|492:292|516:252,2,80
444,212,108793,1,8
432,184,109168,1,0

01:54:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Those are likely positioned without logic.... ( i'm not point the spacing changes, i'm just saying the graphical pattern )
02:32:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Insanish streams.... maybe delete 02:32:855 (6,7,8) - and use a slider that start on 02:32:855 (6) - and end in 02:33:043 (1), try to follow the circular shape or directly use this

384,256,152855,2,0,B|368:308|332:324,1,80

the riff part is generally Insane....
02:59:105 (2) - the slider repeat is covered by 02:57:980 (3) - hitburst
03:03:793 (2,3,4) - Move those like this?

368,300,183793,1,0
296,332,183980,1,0
304,252,184168,1,8

03:16:543 (4) - 4 grid 3 left and 1 grid 3 up to make 03:15:793 (2,4,5) - a triangle like this

[Lunatic]
i can't mod wisely Lunatic diff's, but i checked and is saw you did use some diligence .

The Mod mostly cover Graphic, but a little part of Rhythmn.
So i can give you 1 star for the Skin and the Hitsounds, that were good

Thank you , HakuNoKaemi
I will improve.
Sorry to my poor English

Well, if you saw i gaved you the 2nd Star :3
So don't be sorry ( my english somewhat poor too ... ), and well, i saw you diligently mapped that map...

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Well, if you saw i gaved you the 2nd Star :3
So don't be sorry ( my english somewhat poor too ... ), and well, i saw you diligently mapped that map...

Thank you , and my English also poor . I can chinese .