This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 7 marzo 2012 at 17:19:49

Artist: Katy Perry
Title: Teenage Dream (Liam Keegan Remix)
Tags: ayey -kevincela-
BPM: 128
Filesize: 6896kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:

1. ayey's Dream (4,5 stars, 401 notes)
2. Insane (4,77 stars, 494 notes)
3. -kevincela-'s Easy (1,95 stars, 136 notes)
4. Normal (2,75 stars, 189 notes)

Download: Katy Perry - Teenage Dream (Liam Keegan Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Modding Status:
Selee @Jan 28, 2011 Done~
-kevincela- @Jan 29, 2011 Done~
Nivalis @Mar 15, 2011 Done~
TheVileOne @Mar 29, 2011 Done~
Behonkiss @Mar 30, 2011 Done~
HellDawn @May 29, 2011 Done~
Card N'FoRcE @Aug 21, 2011 Done~
Chewin @Aug 25, 2011 Done~
Kytoxid @Aug 26, 2011 Done~
Armin @Sep 19, 2011 Done~
Chewin *Re-Mod* @Sep 29, 2011 Done~
Wiinter @Dec 15, 2011 Done~
Chewin *Re-Re-Mod @Jan 08, 2012 Done~
Takuya @Wed Feb 01, 2012 Done~
[Te][Amo] @Fri Feb 17, 2012 Done~
Yucali @Sat Feb 18, 2012 Done~
Guerra @Mon Feb 20, 2012 Done~


Thanks to ayey & -kevincela- for Guest Diff.

Easy by -kevincela-
Normal & Insane by giO-
ayey's Dream by ayey

super XD

good job, star~

star ~

<3

ratS

Bravo ^_^ star

♥

Cool song bro.

These notes don't really fit with the song, change it with something else:

00:46:991 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Should make this spinner at: 03:02:929 (1) -
go all the way to 03:07:382 -

Other than that pretty fun map bro!

IRC modding, done

[General]

• Offset: 1070 (Timing--Resnap all notes)
  
  Delete two .osb file if you can.
  
  soft-hitclap.wav and soft-hitfinish.wav aren't used. That's how you enable your custom hitsounds.
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  However, I don't think these two hitsounds fit well...Try normal-hit?
  Download: soft-hitclap.rar
  
  You can also use Normal sample set by adding Inheriting section.
  
  You need a preview point in all diff (Timing-Set current position as Preview Point)
  
  Also kiai?(Add Inheriting section -- Timing -- Timing Setup panel -- Style -- kiai mode):
  01:01:054~01:30:116
  02:01:054~02:15:585
  02:31:054~02:46:054
  03:08:554~03:23:554
  
  If you only map to 03:24:960, you'd better cut the mp3...

[Normal]

Easy setting+Normal arrangements really make me sad ;_;

Remember to use distance snap at grid lv3...some spacing looks bad...

• HP+2 Circle size+1 AR+2 OD+1
  00:25:445 (12,1) - Spacing
  00:22:147 (5,6) - Stacking (Use distance spacing 0.0x and disable grid snap)
  00:22:850 (6,7) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack these, too hard to read.
  00:32:694 (4,5) - Spacing?
  01:08:554 (1,2,3) - unreadable ;_;
  01:25:429 (X) - Why don't you map this part?
  01:33:632 (5) - Remove whistle?
  02:23:319 (9,1) - Spacing

[Hard]

Too much copy&paste ._.

• 00:25:897 (7) - Whistle begin?
  00:29:296 (1) - Shorten 1/4 beat?
  00:31:054 (X) - Add a note?
  00:46:991 (2,4,6,8) - Whistle instead of clap?
  00:53:554 (9) - New combo
  00:54:022 (10,12,14) - Remove whistle
  00:56:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3) - Remove some hitsounds?
  01:04:804 (1,2) - Stacking
  01:05:507 (3,4) - ^
  01:45:585 (3) - clap? 01:45:702 (4) - Remove clap
  01:46:991 (8,9) - ^
  01:49:804 (4,5) - ^
  02:04:804 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking
  02:19:335 (10,1) - Spacing

Not bad for your first map, but you do need more modders' help to immprove your map.

Mia mod~
[General]
Il volume audio,come ti ho detto,è troppo basso per me,ma può anche andare,visto che non so di preciso che volume deve avere per essere buona
Dovresti aggiungere il kiai time sulle mappe

[Normal]
Credo che dovresti un po' arricchire gli hitsounds,ora è un po' povero di hitsounds
00:17:460(4):Metti la nota sopra lo slider,e quando hai fatto,correggi lo spacing delle 3 note prima
00:31:288(1,2,3,4):a me suona meglio se queste note vengono messe sulla linee bianca del timeline
01:25:429:perchè non aggiungi qualche nota qui?
02:23:788(1):avvicina la nota allo slider di prima,sennò è troppo lontano
02:30:350(6,7):mettili sotto lo slider

[Hard]
00:17:694(7):fai una new combo
00:27:069(11):come sopra
00:28:475(13):come sopra
01:03:046(9):spostalo sulla timeline a destra sul tick rosso e fai new combo (devi anche staccare la nota dallo slider e metterla vicino alle altre note avanti)
01:25:897(7):new combo
01:47:108(9):rimuovi la nota
01:47:460(10):new combo
01:50:389(5):spostala a destra nella timeline sul tick rosso
02:03:046(9):spostalo sulla timeline a destra sul tick rosso e fai new combo (devi anche staccare la nota dallo slider e metterla vicino alle altre note avanti)
02:19:100(9):correggi lo spacing
02:54:374(5):spostala a destra nella timeline sul tick rosso
03:10:897(9):new combo

Non male come mappa quindi la starro,e se vuoi ti posso anche fare una guest diffy

done

The GD is going to be a little late , because I'm so busy and lazy , Sorry

Anyway, starred~

ayey wrote:

The GD is going to be a little late , because I'm so busy and lazy , Sorry

Anyway, starred~

ok
thanks

1st map

hmm


some mod on normal diff, rly? what the f*ck with your normal D: do you still like remap after mod

Star anyway

♥

i like it

Finally done yay (you can change the diff's name)
The timing is a little bit off i think
How bout you change the BG into this?

Edit:
Add the tags?

Download: Katy Perry - Teenage Dream (Liam Keegan Remix) (giO-) [ayey's Dream].osu

ayey wrote:

Finally done yay (you can change the diff's name)
The timing is a little bit off i think
How bout you change the BG into this?

SPOILER

Edit:
Add the tags?

uploaded
thanks

and i changed to your bg, with some effect added

poi la moddo questa u.u <3

Mok wrote:

poi la moddo questa u.u <3

ty dude

Modding by ayey's request

[General]
-> Add "ayey" to the tags? (You can add the song's album to the tags too)
-> There are two .osb files in the folder, delete them.

[Normal]
-> This Normal is still too hard in my opinion, the difficulty settings (especially the low Approach Rate for a map with lots of 1/2 notes) seems forced to get a 3-star normal. Maybe you can increase AR by 1 and make convert 1/2 notes to 1/1.
00:23:554 (7) - Move this note 1/2 earlier and change to a 1/2 slider sounds much better in my opinion. (also add a new combo in here or (8))
01:08:554 (1) - Not sure if stacky notes with long delay is a good idea for Normal, maybe change into repeating slider?
01:33:866 (6) - New combo?
02:03:397 (6,7) - Why jump ><
02:08:554 (1) - Same as 01:08:554
02:21:913 (6,7) - Inconsistent spacing. Players may hit note too early here.
02:55:428 (6,7,8...) - This stack covers (5) in play mode. Unstack?

[ayey's Dream]
00:21:444 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked
00:42:069 (6) - 3 grids up for the middle waypoint, 1 grid down for the endpoint
01:11:600 (3) - Press CTRL+R here?
01:58:710 (9) - Delete the break after this note?
02:33:866 (5) - Try to curve it like this perhaps:
03:17:225 (5) - 2 grids up and 1 grid right?

[Hard]
00:27:069 (1) - Waye it smoother?
01:54:491 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Inconsistent spacing between each other
03:19:804 (13) - New combo?

[Hard] is great, good luck (:

Nivalis wrote:

Modding by ayey's request
[ayey's Dream]
00:21:444 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked Done
00:42:069 (6) - 3 grids up for the middle waypoint, 1 grid down for the endpoint ^
01:11:600 (3) - Press CTRL+R here? ^
01:58:710 (9) - Delete the break after this note? ^
02:33:866 (5) - Try to curve it like this perhaps: Done, i think

SPOILER

ATTACH[ayey-mod.png]

03:17:225 (5) - 2 grids up and 1 grid right? Done

Thanks Nivalis

Download: Katy Perry - Teenage Dream (Liam Keegan Remix) (giO-) [ayey's Dream].osu

thanks for mod Nivalis, ill fix and add new ayey diff as soon as possible

I think you don't have to put "katy" "perry" to the tags gio, because she is already the artist singing

ayey wrote:

I think you don't have to put "katy" "perry" to the tags gio, because she is already the artist singing

oh right, ill fix it

all mods done

kevin's Easy

00:47:929 (3) - How about moving this a half note back and adding a note here 00:49:335 - ? This suggestion is completely up to you. Both patterns work.

Do the same with this pattern if you use my idea 00:55:429 (4) -

01:05:741 (2) - This note bothers me. The vocal is a half beat back and it always feels like it should be on that vocal to me.

This diff ends in a REALLY weird spot in the song. I really suggest you give it a proper ending. I suggest mapping to here. 02:16:054 -

ayey's Dream

00:31:288 (2,3) - Lower the volume for the slider ends. It sounds weird.

00:47:343 (1) - ^ (Basically if it is a slider that ends on a 1/4th tick, then lower the slider volume)

01:18:163 (2,3,4,5) - Confusing stack




Other diffs

IRCed the hell out of them.


Can't forget the star. hehe

thanks TheVileOne for mods

TheVileOne wrote:

kevin's Easy

00:47:929 (3) - How about moving this a half note back and adding a note here 00:49:335 - ? This suggestion is completely up to you. Both patterns work. I prefer to maintain this pattern

Do the same with this pattern if you use my idea 00:55:429 (4) -

01:05:741 (2) - This note bothers me. The vocal is a half beat back and it always feels like it should be on that vocal to me. Moved the note half beat back

This diff ends in a REALLY weird spot in the song. I really suggest you give it a proper ending. I suggest mapping to here. 02:16:054 - Done

Thanks~

Download: Katy Perry - Teenage Dream (Liam Keegan Remix) (giO-) [-kevincela-'s Easy].osu

TheVileOne wrote:

ayey's Dream

00:31:288 (2,3) - Lower the volume for the slider ends. It sounds weird. Done

00:47:343 (1) - ^ (Basically if it is a slider that ends on a 1/4th tick, then lower the slider volume) Done

01:18:163 (2,3,4,5) - Confusing stack not sure with this but I'll leave it for now

Thanks TheVileOne

Download: Katy Perry - Teenage Dream (Liam Keegan Remix) (giO-) [ayey's Dream].osu

updated

General:

- Every difficulty but Dream has soft sounds only, while Dream has normal sounds for almost the whole thing. You might want to make this more consistent between all difficulties; my recommendation would be to make the quieter non-chorus parts have soft sounds, while the choruses have normal.

Easy:

- There seem to be a lot of notes only 1/2 a beat apart, which is usually a rarity in Easy maps. Maybe you could get rid of a few?

- Why no breaks?

Normal:

- This could use more finishes (I only counted 1 in the whole thing), but I'll leave it up to you to put them where you feel they best fit.

- 02:23:554: Add a hitcircle with a new combo here and get rid of the new combo on the next circle. You've mapped every lyric on this part except here, and it might throw people off and cause them to hit the current 1 at 02:23:788 early.


- 02:59:647 (Spinner): Maybe change it to end at 03:01:054?

Dream:

- 02:53:554 (5): Considering what the other sliders in this difficulty look like, this should probably be more symmetrical.

Hard:

- Don't see anything wrong here other than the soft sound issue.

all done
thanks for mods

;3

like it!

Nice.

Star~~

star

starrrrrr

Omg <3

Hard

01:52:147 > Circle here ?
01:59:413 > dont need spinner ? or extend pls.
02:15:350 > Remove ?
02:26:835 > New combo ?
02:48:163 > NC

Nice diff :3

ayey's Dream

00:31:288(2,3) > O.o
01:16:054 > Remove new combo
02:09:491 > RNC ?
02:16:054 > RNC

Normal

00:25:663 >This slider move >00:25:897 (00:26:835)end.

Cool diff <3

Easy

00:59:179 >remove clap.
01:57:069 > Remove clap

Can't find anything much,
Star

star (:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• - -kevincela-'s Easy:
  

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:27:304 (4) - lo metterei 1/2 prima, stackato sotto lo slider (per la voce e per cose simili già fatte tipo 00:22:147 (3,4) )

- Normal:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   In gennerale, troppi 1/1. Mi è piaciuto quando hai variato qui 01:23:554 (1,2,3), quindi se puoi cerca di inderire quel formato anche altrove.
   Non vedo perché non mappare l'ultimo ritornello. Aiuterebbe anche a creare una differenza di punteggio più significativa con la Easy.
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:25:897 (6) - oddio, sinceramente è bruttino :x
   00:33:397 (5,6,7) - il cambio di spacing è piuttosto ingiustificato (nessuna variazione nella musica) e lo slider precedente che ti fa concentrare sul bordo della schermata non aiuta a leggerlo.
   00:40:897 (11) - mettilo a destra (così da correggere il grande distacco con lo slider dopo)?
   00:44:179 (1) - fallo finire a 00:46:054.
   01:04:804 (1,2,3) - 02:04:804 (1,2,3) - non mi pare adatta ad una Normal, soprattutto visto che poi per il 3 sei tornato allo spacing normale.
   01:10:897 (5) - 02:10:897 (5) - separerei in due slider così:
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:37:382 (2,3,4,5) - metti 3 e 4 in una formazione a triangolo con 2 e 5?
   01:40:897 (1) - fallo finire a 01:42:304
   01:57:304 (1,1) - meglio un unico spinner che finisce a 02:00:585
   02:26:132 (7,8,9) - piuttosto brutto e improvviso.
   02:40:429 (8) - metti una ripetizione o allunga di 1/2
   In generale, molti beat hanno una disposizione un po' scialba perché apparentemente random e poco curata.
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   01:39:022 (5,6) - o togli una ripetizione al 5 o metti il 6 in stack.
   02:18:632 (7,8,9) - è piuttosto ovvio l'errore.
   02:23:085 (8,1) - stesso tipo di errore di 01:39:022 (5,6)

- ayey's Dream:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   I liked the first chorus: quite original patterns that fit well.
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:25:194 (1) - 00:45:116 (1) - (nazi) one square down to fix the shape?
   00:31:288 (2,3,4) - why are this silenced? I don't hear anything from the music suggesting to silence notes.
   00:55:663 (2,3) - while playing it's not as bad as it looks, but that spacing still looks weird.
   02:22:030 - awkward place for a break. I think that removing 02:16:288 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) makes the break better.
   Add a spinner from 02:59:413 to 03:01:054?

- Hard:

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:42:772 (1) - fallo finire a 00:45:116.
   00:59:882 - perché niente?
   01:00:116 (9) - il finish suona MALISSIMO.
   01:02:225 (4) - direi di metterlo sopra:
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:03:163 (1,2) - perché balzi improvvisi senza preavviso? D:
   01:10:897 (5) - nuova combo
   01:15:585 - aggiungi beat?
   01:52:616 (1,2,3,4) - lo stack è sballato giocando.
   02:01:054 - *Copia-incolla cose del precedente ritornello qui*
   02:36:679 (5) - mettilo bene sotto lo slider
   03:14:882 (8) - nuova combo
   03:23:554 (1) - usa un beat qui, lo spinner va troppo oltre e finisce in un punto strano.
3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
   00:46:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - cosa seguono?? O_o
   00:56:952 (2,3,4) - eliminali; 00:57:304 (5) - nuova combo; 00:56:835 (1) - rimuovi nuova combo

La Normal ha bisogno di parecchi ritocchi.
La Hard è meglio ma necessiterebbe di "pulizia" in qualche pattern, ma quello non è il mio forte e ti converrebbe chiedere a qualcuno più nazi di me.

fatte tutte le modifiche grazie fabio





messaggio troppo corto aiksdioqhwndo

Salve gio- <33
Non aspettarti chi sa che u.u
Gli hitsounds non mi piacciono come sono messi, ma non me ne intendo molto quindi evito di moddarli.
-kevncela-'s Easy:

General: Ti consiglio di settare new combo sulle linee bianche grandi, in fondo è una easy.
Lolwut? Devi completarla, come le altre difficoltà o non te la rankeranno MAI.

00:17:929 (3) - New Combo
00:18:632 (5) - Migliora il blanket. Imposta cosi gli waypoints: http://puu.sh/4Kib
00:17:929 (3) - Sposta in x:325 y:173
00:20:272 (1) - Migliora il blanket: http://puu.sh/4Kiv
00:21:679 (2) - Dimenticato clap e New combo
00:22:382 (4) - Imposta in questo modo che è più ordinato? http://puu.sh/4KjW

Se vuoi le coordinate dei waypoints:
1- x:454 y:165
2- x:454 y:76
3- x:392 y:8
4- x:308 y:38

00:24:022 (1) - Muovi in x:312 y:128 e fixa lo spacing con le note successive
00:25:429 (3) - http://puu.sh/4Kka e new combo
00:32:929 (4) - New combo
00:36:679 (3) - ^
00:40:429 (2) - ^
00:42:304 (4) - ^
00:44:179 (6) - Secondo me new combo.
00:55:429 (4) - ^
00:58:710 (1) - No new combo
00:59:179 (2) - New combo
01:08:554 (1) - Blanket errato, usa 4 waypoint negli slider: http://puu.sh/4Kmm
01:12:772 (5) - New combo?
01:17:929 (2) - ^
01:21:679 (2) - ^
01:31:054 (6) - ^
01:31:522 (1) - No new combo
01:36:679 (3) - New combo..
01:40:429 (4) - ^ (Vabbè per le combo hai capito, ogni white big tick new combo, se ovviamente va bene [95% si])
02:09:960 (2) - http://puu.sh/4Knq


Normal:

General: Stessa cosa della easy, termina la map.

00:22:382 (5) - Aggiungi un circle
00:22:616 (5) - Sposta in 00:22:382
00:23:085 (6) - Sposta in 00:23:319
00:23:554 (1) - Sposta in 00:23:788
00:34:803 (8) - Nuova combo qui e toglila da 00:35:740 (1)
00:38:553 (6) - New combo
01:32:929 (4) - ^
01:33:866 (1) - No new combo
01:34:804 (2) - New combo

[BREAK TIME] Mappa qualcosa, dopo diventa troppo noiosa.[FINE BREAK TIME]

ayey's Dream:

00:18:632 (3) - L'ultimo waypoint spostalo in x:320 y:48
00:42:069 (6) - Waypoint due grid in basso
00:47:343 (1) e 00:48:046 (1) - Non puoi inserire note silenziate, sono unrankabili. Meti 30% o qualcosa.
00:48:046 (1) - Spostalo in x:168 y:188 con grid lvl 4

Hard:
Non mi sembra un hard, ma un insane xD Chiamarla Insane?

00:19:804 (9) - new combo
00:20:507 (1) - No new combo
00:51:679 (7) - clap?

[General]

Countdown is enabled on half your diffs.
That white hitcircle hurts eyes during kiai.

[Easy]

Tick rate 2 makes some sliders look nicer because you have a lot of sliders that start or end on a red tick. Then again, a lot of these sliders could look nicer. (e.g. 00:25:429 (3) - is asymmetric slanted towards the top-left, 00:37:382 (5) - is slanted towards the top left too). Fix a few up?

00:29:647 - Delete this break, really pointless.
01:06:210 (3) - Move a bit so endpoint lines up with 4,5?

Seemed a bit boring. Also, you can't cut it off early like this for no reason.

[Normal]

00:29:413 - Delete this break~
00:31:054 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue here.
00:41:365 (1) - Could look better.
01:38:319 (3) - Don't put this so close to the repeat; looks like there might be a 2nd repeat on this slider.
01:39:022 (5) - Exactly the opposite; you put it looking like there's only one repeat and then a stacked note...but there's a second repeat.
02:08:554 (1,2,3) - This triangle could be better.

This is cut off too, and there's a kiai after the map ends...

Sliders could be nicer too.

[ayey's Dream]

Star rating below that of Hard? Shouldn't this be Insane?

Your sliders feel slow, and the slider-slide sounds loud.

02:09:491 (2) - Move this 1/2 sooner? This is really unexpected. Add a note after it too.
02:16:522 - This break is ehh. You end kiai, there's a break, and then kiai starts again.

After playing through it, I guess this is also a Hard?

[Hard]

You're not allowed to have two Hards. Map this harder, make it an Insane. This diff played well as a Hard, but you can't have 2 Hards.