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Uchida Aya (Ascoeur) - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size)

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twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, February 25, 2011 at 9:04:05 PM

Artist: Uchida Aya
Title: Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size)
Source: KIDDY GIRL-AND
Tags: SapphireGhost Ascoeur ED Sun and Moon
BPM: 132
Filesize: 10275kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.29 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Hard (4.6 stars, 171 notes)
  3. Normal (3.36 stars, 112 notes)
  4. SapphireGhost's Normal (2.25 stars, 89 notes)
Download: Uchida Aya - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size)
Download: Uchida Aya - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Short and cute song mapped to the melody. :)
Last edited by twistedice , edited 36 times in total.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
hi~ >w<

nice song, but try to resnap your notes with grid level 3, with distance spacing on. A unique spacing multiple should be used~

no kd for this, star~

ask me for rechecks / any problems~
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
fun song, but the mapping is quite off at points

[timing]

offset: 1,994

a LOT of these notes need to be re-placed timing-wise.

Heres why: this song is primarily made with 1/6 spacing with notes, not 1/4 timing wise.

check these screenshots:

WHAT YOU HAVE NOW:
SPOILER

WHAT YOU WANT:
SPOILER


notice how in the upper right, beat snap divisor is at 1/6 here instead of 1/4

you'll need to snap ALL of your notes how you want with these new settings.

post in my queue when its done, so i can mod it for real
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

fun song, but the mapping is quite off at points

[timing]

offset: 1,994 done

a LOT of these notes need to be re-placed timing-wise. done

Heres why: this song is primarily made with 1/6 spacing with notes, not 1/4 timing wise.

notice how in the upper right, beat snap divisor is at 1/6 here instead of 1/4

you'll need to snap ALL of your notes how you want with these new settings. and done
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
OK! now it can be modded

[hard]
00:13:584 (1) - extend this slider to the next 1/6 tick
00:14:494 (3) - move this note forward to the next 1/6 tick
00:27:448 (3) - move to 00:27:297
00:28:130 (1) - start this slider on the next 1/6 tick and finish it on the white tick
00:28:584 (2) - move forward to the next 1/6 tick
00:29:039 (4) - same
00:30:403 (1) - same
00:30:630 (2) - extend to next 1/6 tick
00:38:357 (3) - snap the end of the slider to 00:38:660
00:39:115 (5) - move forward to next 1/6 tick
00:39:494 (6) - extend to next 1/6 tick
00:41:539 (2) - same
00:41:994 (3) - change this into three notes at 00:41:994, 00:42:297 and 00:42:448, as the note spacing between the first and second notes is different to the second and third notes
00:42:751 (6) - move forward 1/6 beat and extend the slider to 00:43:357
To make it easier for you, snap the following time to 1/3 note spacing
00:45:175-00:50:175
01:00:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - start all of these sliders 1/6 beat later, but end at the same time as you have now
01:05:479 (1,2) - move forward 1/6 beat
01:08:130 (3) - move forward 1/6 beat
01:09:190 (2,3) - remove 3 and move 2 1/6 beat later
01:11:084 (1) - shorten this by 1/6 beat
01:14:039 (4) - same
01:20:024 (2) - move forward 1/6 beat
01:20:857 (2) - same
01:21:994 (1) - shorten 1/6 beat
01:22:751 (3) - move forward 1/6 beat

RESNAP SPACING! dont forget that part

[normal]
00:32:903 (2) - unsnapped ending
00:50:175 (1) - move forward 1/3 beat
00:50:478 (2) - move the sixth slider point (the first is the beginning of the slider, not the one after) left one tiny square
then move the ninth slider point right one tiny square

[easy]

you forgot to change the offset in this difficulty. dont forget to resnap!
00:28:054 (1) - start this slider 1/3 beat later
00:37:600 (1) - same
00:41:236 (1) - same
00:50:024 (1) - move to the next white tick
00:50:478 (1) - move the third slider point left one tiny square
then the fourth one up one tiny square
then the seventh one right one tiny square
01:00:781 (1) - start slider 1/3 beat later and end it on the white tick
01:02:751 (2) - same
01:05:327 (1) - start 1/3 beat later

fix the offset in easy at the very least, and repost for a star
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

OK! now it can be modded

[hard] done
00:13:584 (1) - extend this slider to the next 1/6 tick
00:14:494 (3) - move this note forward to the next 1/6 tick
00:27:448 (3) - move to 00:27:297
00:28:130 (1) - start this slider on the next 1/6 tick and finish it on the white tick
00:28:584 (2) - move forward to the next 1/6 tick
00:29:039 (4) - same
00:30:403 (1) - same
00:30:630 (2) - extend to next 1/6 tick
00:38:357 (3) - snap the end of the slider to 00:38:660
00:39:115 (5) - move forward to next 1/6 tick
00:39:494 (6) - extend to next 1/6 tick
00:41:539 (2) - same
00:41:994 (3) - change this into three notes at 00:41:994, 00:42:297 and 00:42:448, as the note spacing between the first and second notes is different to the second and third notes
00:42:751 (6) - move forward 1/6 beat and extend the slider to 00:43:357
To make it easier for you, snap the following time to 1/3 note spacing
00:45:175-00:50:175
01:00:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - start all of these sliders 1/6 beat later, but end at the same time as you have now
01:05:479 (1,2) - move forward 1/6 beat
01:08:130 (3) - move forward 1/6 beat
01:09:190 (2,3) - remove 3 and move 2 1/6 beat later
01:11:084 (1) - shorten this by 1/6 beat
01:14:039 (4) - same
01:20:024 (2) - move forward 1/6 beat
01:20:857 (2) - same
01:21:994 (1) - shorten 1/6 beat
01:22:751 (3) - move forward 1/6 beat

RESNAP SPACING! dont forget that part

[normal] done
00:32:903 (2) - unsnapped ending
00:50:175 (1) - move forward 1/3 beat
00:50:478 (2) - move the sixth slider point (the first is the beginning of the slider, not the one after) left one tiny square
then move the ninth slider point right one tiny square

[easy] done~ :)

you forgot to change the offset in this difficulty. dont forget to resnap!
00:28:054 (1) - start this slider 1/3 beat later
00:37:600 (1) - same
00:41:236 (1) - same
00:50:024 (1) - move to the next white tick
00:50:478 (1) - move the third slider point left one tiny square
then the fourth one up one tiny square
then the seventh one right one tiny square
01:00:781 (1) - start slider 1/3 beat later and end it on the white tick
01:02:751 (2) - same
01:05:327 (1) - start 1/3 beat later

fix the offset in easy at the very least, and repost for a star
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
much better! now i can star!

oh also, you'll want to re-space notes, open aimmod to help, but he's a bit derp-ish when it comes to spacing

star~
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Add hitsounds to all the mapset, maybe a Clap every second beat?
  2. Resize the BG to 1024 x 768
  3. You have 2 osb files in the song folder, remove one?
  4. Make sure the Preview Time is the same for all the diffs.
  5. Tags: "Anime" - Remove it, It's too generic.
Easy
  1. 00:32:903 (2) - Move this away.
  2. 00:39:266 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  3. 00:50:478 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:478 (2) - Fix Spacing please.
  5. 00:54:721 - Kiai time should start here.
  6. 00:58:812 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  7. 01:13:357 (1) - ^
  8. 01:23:812 (5) - Use Finish here.
  9. 01:24:266 - I suggest to add a spinner here (Spinner ends here: 01:27:448 oh and add finish to the spinner if you decide to follow my suggestion).
Normal
  1. 00:18:357 (1) - End this slider here: 00:19:721
  2. 00:29:266 (3) - Finish.
  3. 00:40:175 (1,2) - Use a 1/3 slider with 2 repeats instead of these notes, liek you did with the last pattern.
  4. 00:54:721 - Kiai time should start here.
  5. 01:13:357 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  6. 01:23:812 (3) - Finish.
  8. 01:24:266 - I suggest to add a spinner here (Spinner ends here: 01:27:448 oh and add finish to the spinner if you decide to follow my suggestion).
Hard
  1. 00:14:569 (3,4) - This jump is too wide and too random, reduce the distance between those circles.
  2. 00:18:357 (5) - End the slider here: 00:19:721
  3. 00:29:115 (4,5) - Again, Don't use this kind of jumps, please reduce the distance.
  4. 00:50:403 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 00:50:857 (1) - ^
  6. 00:48:357 (1) - ^
  7. 00:49:266 (1) - ^
  8. 00:54:721 - Kiai time should start here.
  9. 01:21:994 (1) - ^
  11. 01:24:266 - I suggest to add a spinner here (Spinner ends here: 01:27:448 oh and add finish to the spinner if you decide to follow my suggestion).
mmm Ok, have a star.
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

Gonzvlo wrote:

General done~
  1. Add hitsounds to all the mapset, maybe a Clap every second beat?
  2. Resize the BG to 1024 x 768 Is this necessary? The whole image looks disproportioned and bad at this resolution so I would rather keep the current resolution.
  3. You have 2 osb files in the song folder, remove one?
  4. Make sure the Preview Time is the same for all the diffs.
  5. Tags: "Anime" - Remove it, It's too generic.
Easy done~
  1. 00:32:903 (2) - Move this away. I don't understand, do you mean break the distance snapping and move it further away?
  2. 00:39:266 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  3. 00:50:478 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:478 (2) - Fix Spacing please. I think this is fine the way it is, but I will change it if I get more complaints.
  5. 00:54:721 - Kiai time should start here.
  6. 00:58:812 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  7. 01:13:357 (1) - ^
  8. 01:23:812 (5) - Use Finish here.
  9. 01:24:266 - I suggest to add a spinner here (Spinner ends here: 01:27:448 oh and add finish to the spinner if you decide to follow my suggestion).
Normal done~
  1. 00:18:357 (1) - End this slider here: 00:19:721
  2. 00:29:266 (3) - Finish.
  3. 00:40:175 (1,2) - Use a 1/3 slider with 2 repeats instead of these notes, liek you did with the last pattern.
  4. 00:54:721 - Kiai time should start here.
  5. 01:13:357 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  6. 01:23:812 (3) - Finish.
  8. 01:24:266 - I suggest to add a spinner here (Spinner ends here: 01:27:448 oh and add finish to the spinner if you decide to follow my suggestion).
Hard and done~
  1. 00:14:569 (3,4) - This jump is too wide and too random, reduce the distance between those circles.
  2. 00:18:357 (5) - End the slider here: 00:19:721
  3. 00:29:115 (4,5) - Again, Don't use this kind of jumps, please reduce the distance.
  4. 00:50:403 (1) - Remove New Combo.
  5. 00:50:857 (1) - ^
  6. 00:48:357 (1) - ^
  7. 00:49:266 (1) - ^
  8. 00:54:721 - Kiai time should start here.
  9. 01:21:994 (1) - ^
  11. 01:24:266 - I suggest to add a spinner here (Spinner ends here: 01:27:448 oh and add finish to the spinner if you decide to follow my suggestion).
mmm Ok, have a star.
Jagang
89 posts
Joined May 2010
Jagang
hi,here is my mod~
i don't like songs which are only mapped by lyrics very much and so it was difficult for me to mod it,but i hope i could help^^

[Hard]

00:14:569 (3,4): spacing
00:33:812 (x): add break
00:39:494 (6,1): spacing
00:49:948 (1,2): 1 tick left on timeline
01:07:448 (1,2,3,4): spacing
01:18:357 (2,3,4,5): ^

[Normal]

00:14:569 (x): add note
00:29:115 (x): ^
00:33:812 (x): add break
00:49:872:
Yours:

i suggest this order: sound better and the slider ends at the right position

[Easy]

00:19:115 (1): add repeat arrow
00:20:024 (x): add break
00:33:812 (x): ^

star~

Jagang ;)
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

Jagang wrote:

hi,here is my mod~
i don't like songs which are only mapped by lyrics very much and so it was difficult for me to mod it,but i hope i could help^^

[Hard] done, the spacings are left that way to make the map more fun

00:14:569 (3,4): spacing
00:33:812 (x): add break
00:39:494 (6,1): spacing
00:49:948 (1,2): 1 tick left on timeline
01:07:448 (1,2,3,4): spacing
01:18:357 (2,3,4,5): ^

[Normal] done, thanks for the suggestion at 00:49:872

00:14:569 (x): add note
00:29:115 (x): ^
00:33:812 (x): add break
00:49:872:
Yours:

i suggest this order: sound better and the slider ends at the right position

[Easy] done

00:19:115 (1): add repeat arrow
00:20:024 (x): add break
00:33:812 (x): ^

star~

Jagang ;)
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
for some odd reason i can not mod this.

Sorry. i just see things wrong that you probably wont fix.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
Major problem mod

BG is 1024x640, osu works atm only with 4:3 BG's, by putting such a weird size bg osu will stretch it to fit the osu window, i advise to either put this to a 4:3 res or find a different BG :|

Easy
00:18:357 (1) - out of time to the melody you are following , like this insted


(suggestion) 00:28:206 (1) - this slider is rather ugly, give it a nicer curve?
00:48:812 (1) - remove this new combo to follow your pattern
00:50:175 (1,2) - nice pattern but HORRID spacing, this has the same spacing as all the 1/1 in your map yet this note is faster, please make this spacing smaller, there is many ways to fix this without making the pattern look ugly
01:00:933 (1,2) - the timing on these 2 note really do play bad, i advise this timing, you will need to remake the pattern, but it flows A LOT better starting at 01:01:084


01:05:478 (1) - again this slider plays and flows bad, starting at 01:05:630 and ending at 01:06:084 sounds much better

Normal
00:13:660 (1,2,3,4) - widen the spacing of these to be the same as the combos before it
00:28:206 (1,2,3,4) - same here
00:48:812 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:024 (1,2,3,4) - timing is wrong on this, also the slider ends too late, like this for timing starting at 00:50:024


Hard
Lower HP drain by 1 , it dont suit such a easy map being high

00:10:175 (1,2,3) - swap the new combo onto (3)
00:13:584 (1,2,3,4) - (3,4) are too wide in spacing, give them the same spacing as (1,2)
00:18:357 (5) - end at 00:19:115
00:28:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - (2) is out of time, move it one tick forward then fix the spacing of this whole combo to suit your distance snap
00:36:539 (1,2,1,2) - make the spacing on these abit closer so it plays better
00:38:887 (4) - out of time, move it back to the white tick, then fix the spacing in this combo
00:40:175 (1,2,1,2) - make the spacing on these abit closer so it plays better
01:08:054 (2,3,4) - give all these 3 notes the same spacing
01:18:357 (2,3,4,5) - timing and spacing are out here, timing should be

wow go through the map again with distance snap on and make sure any inconsistent spacing is fixed :/

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got a lot of work to do on these maps, but good luck o/
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

jericho2442 wrote:

Major problem mod

BG is 1024x640, osu works atm only with 4:3 BG's, by putting such a weird size bg osu will stretch it to fit the osu window, i advise to either put this to a 4:3 res or find a different BG :| I've changed the BG resolution to 1024x768.

Easy done~
00:18:357 (1) - out of time to the melody you are following , like this insted


(suggestion) 00:28:206 (1) - this slider is rather ugly, give it a nicer curve?
00:48:812 (1) - remove this new combo to follow your pattern
00:50:175 (1,2) - nice pattern but HORRID spacing, this has the same spacing as all the 1/1 in your map yet this note is faster, please make this spacing smaller, there is many ways to fix this without making the pattern look ugly
01:00:933 (1,2) - the timing on these 2 note really do play bad, i advise this timing, you will need to remake the pattern, but it flows A LOT better starting at 01:01:084

01:05:478 (1) - again this slider plays and flows bad, starting at 01:05:630 and ending at 01:06:084 sounds much better

Normal done~
00:13:660 (1,2,3,4) - widen the spacing of these to be the same as the combos before it
00:28:206 (1,2,3,4) - same here I've widened the spacing but it breaks distance snapping. I'm not sure if this is what you meant.
00:48:812 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:024 (1,2,3,4) - timing is wrong on this, also the slider ends too late, like this for timing starting at 00:50:024


Hard done, I think I fixed the timing issues. I also added a few new patterns.
Lower HP drain by 1 , it dont suit such a easy map being high

00:10:175 (1,2,3) - swap the new combo onto (3)
00:13:584 (1,2,3,4) - (3,4) are too wide in spacing, give them the same spacing as (1,2)
00:18:357 (5) - end at 00:19:115
00:28:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - (2) is out of time, move it one tick forward then fix the spacing of this whole combo to suit your distance snap
00:36:539 (1,2,1,2) - make the spacing on these abit closer so it plays better
00:38:887 (4) - out of time, move it back to the white tick, then fix the spacing in this combo
00:40:175 (1,2,1,2) - make the spacing on these abit closer so it plays better
01:08:054 (2,3,4) - give all these 3 notes the same spacing
01:18:357 (2,3,4,5) - timing and spacing are out here, timing should be

wow go through the map again with distance snap on and make sure any inconsistent spacing is fixed :/

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got a lot of work to do on these maps, but good luck o/
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[General]
Countdown doesn't fit well IMO, you may as well disable it.


[Easy]
AR is too fast to beginner. X( Decrease it by 2 tick.
00:43:812 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:47:448 (1) - ^


[Normal]
AR -1 ?
00:43:812 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:47:448 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:43:812 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:47:448 (1) - ^
00:49:115 (3) - put finish
00:50:857 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:54:266 (1) - put finish at end of slider
01:16:539 (1) - add finish


STAR 8-)
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Countdown doesn't fit well IMO, you may as well disable it. I agree, disabled countdown.


[Easy] done~
AR is too fast to beginner. X( Decrease it by 2 tick.
00:43:812 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:47:448 (1) - ^


[Normal] done~
AR -1 ?
00:43:812 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:47:448 (1) - ^


[Hard] and done~ thanks!
00:43:812 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:47:448 (1) - ^
00:49:115 (3) - put finish
00:50:857 (1) - put finish at start of slider
00:54:266 (1) - put finish at end of slider
01:16:539 (1) - add finish


STAR 8-)
LesTrucsRoses
271 posts
Joined July 2010
LesTrucsRoses
Normal
SPOILER
00:50:630 (4) - I need a way to know that this spinner is clockwise.
01:00:781 (1) - Move this slider back by 1/2 tick, then extend it by 1/2 of a tick.
01:02:600 (3) - Move this slider back by 1/2 tick, then extend it by 1/2 of a tick.
01:06:539 (1) - I need a way to know that this spinner is clockwise.
01:20:024 (2) - Move this slider forward by 1 tick, then shorten by 1 tick.

Hard
SPOILER
00:50:857 (1) - I need a way to know that this spinner is clockwise.

Very good.

Well done.
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal
SPOILER
00:50:630 (4) - I need a way to know that this spinner is clockwise. It's pretty noticeable when you play isn't it? You can even see the slider appear clockwise...
01:00:781 (1) - Move this slider back by 1/2 tick, then extend it by 1/2 of a tick. Fixed.
01:02:600 (3) - Move this slider back by 1/2 tick, then extend it by 1/2 of a tick. Fixed.
01:06:539 (1) - I need a way to know that this spinner is clockwise. Again, I think it's fine
01:20:024 (2) - Move this slider forward by 1 tick, then shorten by 1 tick. I tried your suggestion but it sounds weird to me.

Hard
SPOILER
00:50:857 (1) - I need a way to know that this spinner is clockwise. Again, I think it's fine.

Very good.

Well done.
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi !! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Preview time is not the same on all diff, check that

Skin;
- BGs are not 1024x768, well they are, the file says so but the images aren't
- Flip comboburst-1 horizontally
- I fixed comboburst-2, it had a border around it, an orange border ... and also the BGs fixed too
Download: Uchida Aya (Ascoeur) - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size).rar

Easy;
- 00:20:024 >> Add finish
- 00:54:266 >> Remove a repeat and move to 00:55:175, then add a slider here that ends at 00:54:721 with a finish
- 00:57:751 >> Curve better and finish at the end

Normal;
- 00:09:115 >> Curve better
- 00:18:357 >> ^ and finish at the end
- 00:28:206 >> Curve better
- 01:09:115 >> ^
- 01:10:933 >> Remove new combo

Hard;
- 00:32:903 >> Finish at start of slider
- 00:48:357 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next note, then remove new combo at 00:49:266

* Overall; Check that you start and end kiai time on a note on all diffs, try to make a pattern with hitsounds and work on the placement of notes ~~
* Star & Good Luck ~ >w<
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
Easy
00:20:251 - remove break,that not useful
00:33:887 - ^
00:39:721(3) - whistle
00:44:721(1) - ^
00:46:539(2) - ^
00:50:478(2) - don't make a slider like this in easy diff,try to make it easy and beautiful
01:02:903(2) - maybe 7 grid up better,I don't suggest you to stack notes in easy diff

Normal
AR-1?
00:20:251 - remove break,that not useful
00:33:887 - ^

Hard
00:26:994(2) - shorten 1/3
01:22:221(3) - extend 1/6
01:27:297(1) - finish

not bad for new mapper,but I suggest you check the notes again
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice
lovhin456's mods

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi !! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Preview time is not the same on all diff, check that I thought I fixed this a while back, thanks~

Skin;
- BGs are not 1024x768, well they are, the file says so but the images aren't They are indeed 1024x768. I just made it transparent on the few pixels on bottom and top to prevent the image from stretching. I will keep the BG I have for normal and hard.
- Flip comboburst-1 horizontally done~
- I fixed comboburst-2, it had a border around it, an orange border ... and also the BGs fixed too
[attachment=0:5d290]Uchida Aya (Ascoeur) - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size).rar[/attachment:5d290]

Easy; done~
- 00:20:024 >> Add finish
- 00:54:266 >> Remove a repeat and move to 00:55:175, then add a slider here that ends at 00:54:721 with a finish
- 00:57:751 >> Curve better and finish at the end

Normal; done~
- 00:09:115 >> Curve better
- 00:18:357 >> ^ and finish at the end
- 00:28:206 >> Curve better
- 01:09:115 >> ^
- 01:10:933 >> Remove new combo

Hard; done~ thanks!!
- 00:32:903 >> Finish at start of slider
- 00:48:357 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next note, then remove new combo at 00:49:266

* Overall; Check that you start and end kiai time on a note on all diffs, try to make a pattern with hitsounds and work on the placement of notes ~~
* Star & Good Luck ~ >w<

karenying's mods

karenying wrote:

Easy done~
00:20:251 - remove break,that not useful Well, it's easy... the break stops hp drain for a few secs
00:33:887 - ^
00:39:721(3) - whistle
00:44:721(1) - ^
00:46:539(2) - ^
00:50:478(2) - don't make a slider like this in easy diff,try to make it easy and beautiful Originally I wanted to encircle the previous note with this slider but it's just impossible to do that and make it look pretty with distance snap on. I don't see why there should be problems with this slider.
01:02:903(2) - maybe 7 grid up better,I don't suggest you to stack notes in easy diff I insist on keeping this stacked.

Normal done~
AR-1?
00:20:251 - remove break,that not useful
00:33:887 - ^

Hard done~ thanks!!
00:26:994(2) - shorten 1/3
01:22:221(3) - extend 1/6
01:27:297(1) - finish

not bad for new mapper,but I suggest you check the notes again
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

00:50:857 (1) - make it like this so that the head and end of this slider is easier to recognize
SPOILER
01:15:630 (1) - maybe remove new combo from this note? it should be together with 01:15:478 (2)


Normal

01:09:266 - add a note?
01:09:115 (1,2,3) - spacing (or add a note on 01:10:478?)
01:12:448 - add a note? I think player should make a click here.
01:20:175 - and a click here? (I'd prefer if you don't use a slider to skip the first beat of a stanza)


Easy

00:13:660 (1) - I think it should be started on 00:13:812 (plz don't always try to follow the lyric. notes on white line are important to rhythm!)
00:20:024 (2) - make it on a white line? it's silly that a circle can be accurately clicked only if player focuses on the approach circle!
00:28:206 (1) - same problem as the 1st one
00:30:478 (1) - ^
00:37:751 (1) - ^
01:19:872 (1) - ^ (I don't mind short sliders but if the slider is long you'd better start it from a white line)

star
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice
Sandpig's mod

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard done~

00:50:857 (1) - make it like this so that the head and end of this slider is easier to recognize
SPOILER
01:15:630 (1) - maybe remove new combo from this note? it should be together with 01:15:478 (2) I disagree


Normal done~ instead of adding notes I changed the sliders

01:09:266 - add a note?
01:09:115 (1,2,3) - spacing (or add a note on 01:10:478?)
01:12:448 - add a note? I think player should make a click here.
01:20:175 - and a click here? (I'd prefer if you don't use a slider to skip the first beat of a stanza)


Easy done~

00:13:660 (1) - I think it should be started on 00:13:812 (plz don't always try to follow the lyric. notes on white line are important to rhythm!)
00:20:024 (2) - make it on a white line? it's silly that a circle can be accurately clicked only if player focuses on the approach circle!
00:28:206 (1) - same problem as the 1st one
00:30:478 (1) - ^
00:37:751 (1) - ^
01:19:872 (1) - ^ (I don't mind short sliders but if the slider is long you'd better start it from a white line)

star
SapphireGhost
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2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Grr... something happened and all my mods got wiped away.
As compensation, please take this Star and this Guest Difficulty!
(Rename to "Sapphire" please)

Download: Uchida Aya (Ascoeur) - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size) (twistedice) [SapphireGhost's Star].osu
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Normal

00:13:660 (1) - Reduce by 1/12 (since the song is mostly 1/3, and it's 1/4 at the end...)
00:26:387 (2,3) - Reduce space if you want, but I think that intermediate players can guess it.

This map has a lot of ranking issues. This deserves a star.
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

SapphireGhost wrote:

Grr... something happened and all my mods got wiped away.
As compensation, please take this Star and this Guest Difficulty!
(Rename to "Sapphire" please)
Ok, added your difficulty

Gezoda wrote:

Normal

00:13:660 (1) - Reduce by 1/12 (since the song is mostly 1/3, and it's 1/4 at the end...) done~
00:26:387 (2,3) - Reduce space if you want, but I think that intermediate players can guess it. I will keep it as it is. thanks!

This map has a lot of ranking issues. This deserves a star.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
your map has wrong beat

so I can't mod

If you wnat my mod

please sned me pm
DJ Lightning
90 posts
Joined January 2010
DJ Lightning
i don´t found any problems

star~
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

dksslqj wrote:

your map has wrong beat I don't understand

so I can't mod

If you wnat my mod

please sned me pm
I sent you a PM. Help please someone?
nante
248 posts
Joined December 2009
nante
Hey, I'm not really good in timing, but current seems off a bit.
Try setting offset at 2,447 and check yourself on 25% speed if it doesn't sound better for you. If it doesn't, undo offset change.
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice

nante wrote:

Hey, I'm not really good in timing, but current seems off a bit.
Try setting offset at 2,447 and check yourself on 25% speed if it doesn't sound better for you. If it doesn't, undo offset change.
Your offset sounds better. I've fixed the notes that sounded off; hopefully the map is good now. Thanks!
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
hi ~ i love this song ~ :3


i think offset 1996
if you change offset here my suggestions :)
[hard]
00:07:450 : add note and add finish
00:13:359 : add note and add clap
00:15:177 : add note and add clap
00:27:905 : add note and add clap
00:29:723 : add note and add clap
00:34:268 : add note and add clap
00:34:723 : add note
00:35:177 : add note and add clap
00:35:632 : add note
00:36:086 : add note and add clap
00:53:359 : add clap
00:54:268 : add clap
00:54:723 : add fin / move kiai time here
00:55:177 : add clap
00:56:996 : add note and add clap
01:00:632 : add note and add clap
01:02:450 : add note and add clap
01:04:268 : add note and add clap
01:04:723 : add note
01:05:177 : add note
01:08:700 : add note
01:08:814 : add note
01:16:996 : add clap here
01:18:814 : add clap
01:20:632 : add clap
01:21:541 : add clap
01:22:450 : add clap
01:23:359 : add clap
twistedice
117 posts
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Topic Starter
twistedice
indyinyou's mods

indyinyou wrote:

hi ~ i love this song ~ :3


i think offset 1996 I played with the timing at 25% speed for about 1 hour... I think this is closer than 2447 >.>
if you change offset here my suggestions :)
[hard]
00:07:450 : add note and add finish
00:13:359 : add note and add clap
00:15:177 : add note and add clap
00:27:905 : add note and add clap
00:29:723 : add note and add clap
00:34:268 : add note and add clap
00:34:723 : add note
00:35:177 : add note and add clap
00:35:632 : add note
00:36:086 : add note and add clap
00:53:359 : add clap
00:54:268 : add clap
00:54:723 : add fin / move kiai time here
00:55:177 : add clap
00:56:996 : add note and add clap
01:00:632 : add note and add clap
01:02:450 : add note and add clap
01:04:268 : add note and add clap
01:04:723 : add note
01:05:177 : add note
01:08:700 : add note I skipped this
01:08:814 : add note this too
01:16:996 : add clap here
01:18:814 : add clap
01:20:632 : add clap
01:21:541 : add clap
01:22:450 : add clap
01:23:359 : add clap
Thanks for your mods!
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. unsnapped notes exist
[Hard]:
  1. 00:26:312 (2) - snap this with 1/3, 1/6 is a bit fast(off). remember the end of it.
  2. 00:31:389 (4) - ^
  3. 01:06:084 (3) - place this right on the end of (2) plz
  4. 01:16:084 (1,1) - cancel the new combos?
  5. AR8 is too fast, 7 is best imo
[Normal]:
  1. fine
[Sapphire]:
  1. 01:20:632 (1) - ending time error! use 1/3 snap and at 01:27:299
[Easy]:
  1. fine but sooooo alike with Normal OTL
don't forget to resnap~ star!

lovely song :3
twistedice
117 posts
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Topic Starter
twistedice
Colin Hou's mods

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. unsnapped notes exist I think this is fixed.
[Hard]: done~
  1. 00:26:312 (2) - snap this with 1/3, 1/6 is a bit fast(off). remember the end of it.
  2. 00:31:389 (4) - ^
  3. 01:06:084 (3) - place this right on the end of (2) plz
  4. 01:16:084 (1,1) - cancel the new combos? I like it the way it is
  5. AR8 is too fast, 7 is best imo
[Normal]:
  1. fine
[Sapphire]:
  1. 01:20:632 (1) - ending time error! use 1/3 snap and at 01:27:299 fixed~
[Easy]:
  1. fine but sooooo alike with Normal OTL I changed some notes around in Normal because I think so too
don't forget to resnap~ star!

lovely song :3
Thanks :3
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
don't forget indyinyou and my kudosu >~< thx
twistedice
117 posts
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Topic Starter
twistedice
Don't worry, I might forget sometimes but I always give kudosu to those who deserve it sooner or later!
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
By mod request:

Easy
00:18:357 (1) - move so the end won't be under the other slider
00:25:630 (1) - odd shaped slider...
01:01:084 (1,2) - turn it horizontally clockwise? And put it on the top.

Sapphire
01:20:630 (1) - the spinner is a bit too long, i suggest starting it at 8 white ticks up, same end point, and fill up the empty space

Normal
fine!

Hard
00:12:297 (3) - move from under the slider

star!
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice
chamelepeace710's mods

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By mod request:

Easy
00:18:357 (1) - move so the end won't be under the other slider It's not a problem when you play but I moved it anyway
00:25:630 (1) - odd shaped slider... I don't really think so
01:01:084 (1,2) - turn it horizontally clockwise? And put it on the top. done~

Sapphire done, thanks
01:20:630 (1) - the spinner is a bit too long, i suggest starting it at 8 white ticks up, same end point, and fill up the empty space

Normal
fine!

Hard
00:12:297 (3) - move from under the slider no, this is fine in my opinion. did you even try playing? Thanks for the mods on easy ;)

star!
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SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Okay, here's my update. You might have to change to "SapphireGhost" though because "Sapphire" was already taken by some guy who played like 7 times and then left the name taken :P

Download: Uchida Aya (Ascoeur) - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size) (twistedice) [Sapphire].osu
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
General
Add "SapphireGhost" to the tags of all difficulties.
The background video is too big (width over 800px).

Easy
64 objects aren't snapped.
For an Easy, and the easiest diff of the mapset, you should use the biggest circles imo. I also highly suggest you lower both AR and OD by two ticks.
01:06:539 (2) - I'm not sure this kind of slider is allowed. Although the speed is low enough to follow the sliderball without breaking, the end and the beginning of the slider are almost the same. You should make the slider a bit bigger here so that the end is clearly separated from the beginning.

Normal
86 objects aren't snapped.
I think mapping to the lyrics is a bit hard for a Normal because the lyrics have weird rhythms at times - but it plays kind of fine. I'd suggest you use the biggest circles, and you lower the AR by 1 and the OD by at least one tick.
00:35:177 (3) - Okay, I'm nazi, but you should move it down a bit so that the spacing with (2) and (3) is more even.
00:50:630 (4) - This slider needs a storyboarded warning for the direction it goes to. The hitburst from (3) hides the beginning and end points, making it impossible to read them.
01:06:539 (2) - This slider's case is not as bad but I'd suggest you follow the same advice.

Hard
146 objects are unsnapped.
00:19:723 (1,2,3) - These three circles are very confusing and I think misplaced. Move them 1/3 earlier and add a fourth circle after.
00:50:931 (1) - Same comment as the heart sliders in the other diffs.

SapphireGhost
Why does this have a bizarre diff name when the other diffs have a regular one ? You should name it "SapphireGhost's Normal" imo.
82 objects aren't snapped.
00:34:266 (1) - This slider's repeat is partially hidden by the previous slider. You should move it elsewhere so the repeat is fully visible.
01:20:177 (5) - The end and the beginning of this slider are almost in the same place. Although there's the repeat to tell which one is the end, I doubt many new players will think of it. Try to make the slider a bit bigger so the end and the beginning are clearly not in the same place.
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice
Odaril's mods

Odaril wrote:

General
Add "SapphireGhost" to the tags of all difficulties. done~
The background video is too big (width over 800px). Changed video to 640x360

Easy
64 objects aren't snapped. Fixed.
For an Easy, and the easiest diff of the mapset, you should use the biggest circles imo. I also highly suggest you lower both AR and OD by two ticks. okay, done~
01:06:539 (2) - I'm not sure this kind of slider is allowed. Although the speed is low enough to follow the sliderball without breaking, the end and the beginning of the slider are almost the same. You should make the slider a bit bigger here so that the end is clearly separated from the beginning. I think the end is noticeably separated now.

Normal
86 objects aren't snapped. Fixed.
I think mapping to the lyrics is a bit hard for a Normal because the lyrics have weird rhythms at times - but it plays kind of fine. I'd suggest you use the biggest circles, and you lower the AR by 1 and the OD by at least one tick. okay, I've applied your suggestions
00:35:177 (3) - Okay, I'm nazi, but you should move it down a bit so that the spacing with (2) and (3) is more even. lol fixed ;)
00:50:630 (4) - This slider needs a storyboarded warning for the direction it goes to. The hitburst from (3) hides the beginning and end points, making it impossible to read them. I added an arrow guiding the direction of the slider.
01:06:539 (2) - This slider's case is not as bad but I'd suggest you follow the same advice. I think it's noticeably separate now

Hard
146 objects are unsnapped. Fixed.
00:19:723 (1,2,3) - These three circles are very confusing and I think misplaced. Move them 1/3 earlier and add a fourth circle after. done~
00:50:931 (1) - Same comment as the heart sliders in the other diffs. ^

SapphireGhost Fixed~
Why does this have a bizarre diff name when the other diffs have a regular one ? You should name it "SapphireGhost's Normal" imo.
82 objects aren't snapped.
00:34:266 (1) - This slider's repeat is partially hidden by the previous slider. You should move it elsewhere so the repeat is fully visible.
01:20:177 (5) - The end and the beginning of this slider are almost in the same place. Although there's the repeat to tell which one is the end, I doubt many new players will think of it. Try to make the slider a bit bigger so the end and the beginning are clearly not in the same place.
Thanks for modding!
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indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
ok 2nd time mod : p

[nomal]

00:07:450 : add note and fin
00:07:905 : remove whistle / add clap
00:09:117 : move slider to 00:09:268
00:10:177 : add slider to 00:10:632
00:13:359 : add note and clap
00:18:359 : this slider end at 00:19:268
00:19:723 : add slider to 00:20:632
00:21:086 : add slider to 00:21:996 /add fin at end of slider
00:26:389 : move slider to 00:26:541 to 00:26:996
00:27:905 : add note and clap
00:29:723 : add note and clap
00:30:177 : add note
00:30:480 : move slider to 00:31:086
00:32:905 : add fin
00:33:359 : add clap
00:35:177 : add clap
00:42:753 : remove note / add slider to 00:43:359
00:49:723 : add note and clap
00:53:359 : add clap
00:54:723 : add fin
00:56:541 : remove note / add slider to 00:57:450
00:57:753 : move slider to 00:57:905 to 00:58:359
01:00:632 : add note and clap
01:02:450 : add note and clap
01:03:814 : remove clap add fin
01:04:268 : add slider to 01:05:177 /add clap at 01:04:268
01:05:480 : move slider to 01:05:632 to 01:06:086
01:08:359 : remove note and add slider to 01:08:814
01:09:268 : add fin
01:10:177 : remove note and add slider 01:10:632
01:11:086 : this slider make reverse slider end at 01:11:996
01:11:541 : add clap
01:16:086 : add slider to 01:16:541 /add fin at end of silder
01:16:996 : add clap
01:18:814 : add slider to 01:19:268 /add clap at 01:18:814

[hard]
01:08:662 :add note
01:08:814 :^
twistedice
117 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
twistedice
indyinyou's mods

indyinyou wrote:

ok 2nd time mod : p

[nomal] done, faster paced map is more fun

00:07:450 : add note and fin
00:07:905 : remove whistle / add clap
00:09:117 : move slider to 00:09:268
00:10:177 : add slider to 00:10:632
00:13:359 : add note and clap
00:18:359 : this slider end at 00:19:268
00:19:723 : add slider to 00:20:632
00:21:086 : add slider to 00:21:996 /add fin at end of slider
00:26:389 : move slider to 00:26:541 to 00:26:996
00:27:905 : add note and clap
00:29:723 : add note and clap
00:30:177 : add note
00:30:480 : move slider to 00:31:086
00:32:905 : add fin
00:33:359 : add clap
00:35:177 : add clap
00:42:753 : remove note / add slider to 00:43:359
00:49:723 : add note and clap
00:53:359 : add clap
00:54:723 : add fin
00:56:541 : remove note / add slider to 00:57:450
00:57:753 : move slider to 00:57:905 to 00:58:359
01:00:632 : add note and clap
01:02:450 : add note and clap
01:03:814 : remove clap add fin
01:04:268 : add slider to 01:05:177 /add clap at 01:04:268
01:05:480 : move slider to 01:05:632 to 01:06:086
01:08:359 : remove note and add slider to 01:08:814
01:09:268 : add fin
01:10:177 : remove note and add slider 01:10:632
01:11:086 : this slider make reverse slider end at 01:11:996
01:11:541 : add clap
01:16:086 : add slider to 01:16:541 /add fin at end of silder
01:16:996 : add clap
01:18:814 : add slider to 01:19:268 /add clap at 01:18:814

[hard] done~ I think you really love this song ;)
01:08:662 :add note
01:08:814 :^
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Done with the modding. 86 objects are not snapped? Are you sure? Maybe I have stuff to fix :P

Download: Uchida Aya (Ascoeur) - Taiyou to Tsuki (TV Size) (twistedice) [SapphireGhost's Normal].osu
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[Hard]
0:20:935 (7) clap
0:#1:086 (3) clap
0:48:359 (4) clap at ending
0:48:965 (1,2,3...) adjust spacing like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/46333
NICE~

[Normal]
0:17:905 (4) right 1 grid

[Easy] - ok

much better than before :D

pink star.
twistedice
117 posts
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Topic Starter
twistedice
wmfchris' mods

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard] done :)
0:20:935 (7) clap
0:#1:086 (3) clap
0:48:359 (4) clap at ending
0:48:965 (1,2,3...) adjust spacing like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/46333
NICE~

[Normal] done~
0:17:905 (4) right 1 grid

[Easy] - ok

much better than before :D

pink star.
Thanks!! ;)
IceBeam
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IceBeam
[Easy]
00:20:480 (x) - So short break,I'm not sure if it's rankable.
00:25:632 (1) - Could you place up 1 grid? I don't like how they touching.
00:32:905 (2) - ^ Same.
00:32:905 (2) - Also,add finish?
00:49:268 (3) - Finish?
00:51:086 (3) - Add any hitsound please.
01:09:268 (1) - Finish.
01:16:541 - Add a note with finish here?

[SG's Normal]
00:11:086 (1) - Eh,1/2 snap divisor? Despite mapset mapped on 1/3? I think you should use only 1/1 notes then,so remove a note from red tick.
00:29:268 (1) - Finish.
00:36:541 (1) - ^
00:43:814 (1) - ^
00:54:723 (1) - ^
01:09:268 (1) - ^
01:16:541 (1) - ^
01:20:177 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:36:541 (1) - Finish.
Cute!

[Hard]
00:27:299 (3) - Whistle.
00:52:905 (1,1,1) - Maybe pointed out as combo spam.
01:09:268 (2) - Finish.
01:15:632 (1,1,1) - Same bout combo spam.

Sweet map,star~
twistedice
117 posts
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Topic Starter
twistedice
IceBeam's mods

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy] done~
00:20:480 (x) - So short break,I'm not sure if it's rankable. I removed the short breaks.
00:25:632 (1) - Could you place up 1 grid? I don't like how they touching.
00:32:905 (2) - ^ Same.
00:32:905 (2) - Also,add finish?
00:49:268 (3) - Finish?
00:51:086 (3) - Add any hitsound please.
01:09:268 (1) - Finish.
01:16:541 - Add a note with finish here?

[SG's Normal] done~
00:11:086 (1) - Eh,1/2 snap divisor? Despite mapset mapped on 1/3? I think you should use only 1/1 notes then,so remove a note from red tick.
00:29:268 (1) - Finish.
00:36:541 (1) - ^
00:43:814 (1) - ^
00:54:723 (1) - ^
01:09:268 (1) - ^
01:16:541 (1) - ^
01:20:177 (5) - ^

[Normal] done~
00:36:541 (1) - Finish.
Cute!

[Hard] done~
00:27:299 (3) - Whistle.
00:52:905 (1,1,1) - Maybe pointed out as combo spam. I think it's fitting but if it's really a problem I will change it.
01:09:268 (2) - Finish.
01:15:632 (1,1,1) - Same bout combo spam.

Sweet map,star~
Thanks! ;)
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indyinyou
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indyinyou
ok 3rd mod : p

[easy]
00:07:450 : add note and fin
00:07:905 : add clap
00:09:268 : add slider to 00:09:723
00:09:723 : add clap if you add slider
00:12:905 : add slider to 00:13:359
00:13:359 : add clap if you add slider
00:15:177 : add note and clap
00:16:086 : add note /move silder to 00:16:541
00:16:541 : if you move ^ silder end at 00:17:450
00:20:632 : add silder and clap here slider end 00:21:996
00:21:996 : if you add silder add fin here
00:27:905 : add note and clap
00:29:723 : add note and clap
00:34:268 : add silder reverse 00:35:177 end at00:36:086
00:36:541 : add fin
00:52:905 : add silder reverse 00:53:359 end at 00:53:814
00:53:359 : add clap if you add silder
00:55:177 : add clap
00:56:996 : add note and clap
00:58:359 : add fin
00:59:723 : remove note add slider end at 01:00:177
01:00:177 : remove note if you add slider ^
01:00:632 : add note and clap
01:02:450 : add note and clap
01:03:814 : remove clap
01:04:268 : add note and clap
01:05:177 : add note
01:19:117 : move to 01:19:268

good luck : D
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