Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix) · forum

Royal Flare

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-11-05T06:42:03+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月28日 at 23:00:39

Artist: Teimu
Title: Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)
Source: Touhou
Tags: NanaDesu vivicat sherrie__fay Keine Kamishirasawa th08 imperishable night
BPM: 131
Filesize: 13435kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:

Nana (4.88 stars, 549 notes)
Nini (4.29 stars, 488 notes)
Opop (2.9 stars, 280 notes)
Vivi (4.84 stars, 497 notes)

Download: Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my second map.This time the map is finished by teamwork
And we hope you can like it.
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Thank you for your join and help:
NanaDesu(Nana diff)
vivicat(Vivi diff)
sherrie_fay(little bakaXDD)
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Thank you for your Mod;
2010.11.26-mystica's mod
2010.11.26-wmfchris's mod
2010.11.27-Tonoko's mod
2010.11.28-impossiblexu's mod
2010.11.28-Haruhi-boy's mod
2010.12.1-Ballance's mod
2010.12.3-Kochiya Sanae's mod
2010.12.5-xinhe's mod
2010.12.6-Colin Hou' mod 2011.1.22 recheck
2010.12.15-Astom's mod
2010.12.25-lovhin456's mod
2010.12.26-Sandpig's mod
2010.12.28-James2250's mod
2010.12.30-rust45's mod
2011.1.2-kissfly's mod
2011.1.3-Derekku's mod
2011.1.18-Tenshi-nyan's mod
2011.1.22-chamelepeace710's mod
2011.1.31-sonnyc's mod
2011.2.4-Wiinter's mod
2011.3.23-loveFantasy's mod
2011.3.28-ZLOdeuka's mod
2011.4.14-Zekira's mod
2011.4.23-xierbaliti's mod
2011.4.24-Kitsuneko's mod
2011.4.25-S i R i R u 's mod
2011.6.10-akrolsmir's mod
2011.6.24-deepsea's mod
2011.7.22-spboxer3's mod
2011.8.22-Sakura Hana's mod
2011.8.27-Leorda's mod

Last edited by Royal Flare 2013-10-28T14:03:49+00:00, edited 123 times in total.

NanaDesu

NanaDesu 2010-11-05T07:42:13+00:00

star

Axey

1,216 posts

Joined October 2009

Axey 2010-11-05T15:15:56+00:00

good song

song setup>>audio>>music track 调1-3秒否则map一开始还没反应就ms了

期待成品 star❤

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-11-06T11:48:04+00:00

谢谢支持

bambool

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bambool 2010-11-06T11:50:05+00:00

star

DeadAlready

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Joined August 2008

DeadAlready 2010-11-11T18:56:45+00:00

star~ >~</

A Q U A_old

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A Q U A_old 2010-11-22T14:25:53+00:00

修理费加油>.>

ken710

145 posts

Joined February 2009

ken710 2010-11-24T12:12:30+00:00

mod in irc

Last edited by ken710 2011-05-31T16:11:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mystica

798 posts

Joined January 2010

Mystica 2010-11-26T13:18:12+00:00

Just Star~

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2010-11-26T14:04:42+00:00

~STAR~

Mystica

798 posts

Joined January 2010

Mystica 2010-11-26T14:34:00+00:00

首先 slider消音为什么77难度offset不一样.
~~钢琴曲是各种压力组合体~~
[opop]
00:40:623
03:03:295 Normal音效起来多棒
03:17:722 适当加大volume [/color]
[nini]
个人觉得clap不适合这曲子
00:45:203 distance 后面还有各种这样的纯粹性的迷惑而不是anti的话是分不清楚的
[nana]
volum减少 15~20% 钢琴曲的话70%影响效果嗯
适当的用些hitnormal比较好？
排版的话没问题就是S-W用的有些地方还需要斟酌下

好吧本来是想看下音效但是slider没消音听的各种沙沙的 [stress]
顺便附送slider消音文件
~~对于钢琴曲我音效无力（死~~

Download: sliderway.rar

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

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wmfchris 2010-11-26T14:56:33+00:00

[Nana]
0:01:687 (4,5) left 1 grid
0:40:617 (6) down 1 grid
1:21:380 (4,5,6) up 1 grid
1:34:434 (5) right 1 grid
2:10:387 (2) down 1 grid
2:47:486 (4) left+down 1 grid
3:43:364 (10) right+down 1 grid

[Opop]
0:35:814 (5) down 1 grid
spacing varies from 0.8x~ 0.95x, try to resnap a bit (or check AI mod)

nice song, star*2

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2010-11-26T14:56:37+00:00

[Nana]
0:01:687 (4,5) left 1 grid
0:40:617 (6) down 1 grid
1:21:380 (4,5,6) up 1 grid
1:34:434 (5) right 1 grid
2:10:387 (2) down 1 grid
2:47:486 (4) left+down 1 grid
3:43:364 (10) right+down 1 grid

[Opop]
0:35:814 (5) down 1 grid
spacing varies from 0.8x~ 0.95x, try to resnap a bit (or check AI mod)

nice song, star*2

post duplicated

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-11-26T15:49:31+00:00

mystica wrote:
首先 slider消音为什么77难度offset不一样.
~~钢琴曲是各种压力组合体~~
[opop]（OK）
00:40:623
03:03:295 Normal音效起来多棒
03:17:722 适当加大volume [/color]
[nini]
个人觉得clap不适合这曲子想用特殊音效替代之.
00:45:203 distance 后面还有各种这样的纯粹性的迷惑而不是anti的话是分不清楚的anti是什么- -？

好吧本来是想看下音效但是slider没消音听的各种沙沙的 [stress]
顺便附送slider消音文件为什么我下载不能（无力状，明早再试试）
~~对于钢琴曲我音效无力（死~~死什么？藕片会伤心的>.<你要是死了我就救活你..

Tonoko

507 posts

Joined June 2009

Tonoko 2010-11-27T01:53:25+00:00

hi

hmm 需要一个更简单的easy难度这个是毫无疑问的了...easy里不能出现连打(233..)

[nini]
00:04:440 (8) - 上移1格注意细节.
00:06:730 (4) - 右一格
00:37:646 (2,3,4,5,6) - 形状调一下
00:43:371 (8) - new combo?
00:47:035 (5) - 这里摆成

好一点.
01:07:188 (4) - 这个0.5 是否有必要?
01:10:165 (5) - ^
01:19:783 (5) - 这里开始slider似乎比较好?
01:55:279 (10) - 弄成上下slider好看些
后面一些摆放而非节奏问题很难说清楚只能靠你自己感觉了节奏差不多了音效这个图其实可以弄的很华丽的.

[nana]
00:09:702 (1,2,3) - 和前面相似的节奏应该尽量用相似的摆放方式前面x0.5后面也应该0.5
后面做的真的挺好。不过这算是hard级的难度呢要到lunatic的话要在难一点。

建议参考一下haru系列.

star.

vivicat

618 posts

Joined February 2010

vivicat 2010-11-27T04:05:11+00:00

LQX

55 posts

Joined November 2009

LQX 2010-11-27T04:41:02+00:00

沙包路过~~ ★

Preiya

28 posts

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Preiya 2010-11-28T02:37:19+00:00

好歌:D

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2010-11-28T04:41:17+00:00

以下只是建议:

[General]

建议各难度都去掉Countdown
要对齐重音的话 offset应该是1921（Nana难度offset为什么不一样）

[Opop]
这个难度没大有必要加Lead-in

00:16:577 (4): 开头Finish
00:23:676 (6): 建议把Finish音效放到后面的1上
00:31:234 : 加个Circle感觉更好（再加上Finish音效）
00:44:287 (9): 建议删掉这个Slider在44:516和44:775加俩Circle
01:02:239 : 加个Circle 并把9后面的Finish移到这
01:18:562 : ^ 虽然感觉不是太好但还是建议加个Circle
01:16:119 – 01:17:722 : 既然前面也加了Break 那这里也加个吧
01:18:867 (2): Finish
01:25:737 (5): 把Finish放在后面的1上
01:33:524 (3): Finish
01:48:180 (1): 换Normal音效 Kiai从这开始
01:57:798 (5,6): 位置摆得有点误导人
02:02:837 : Kiai结束
02:17:493 (1): 这里加Finish
02:20:012 (6): 去掉Finish 并右移6格
02:33:982 (2): 这里加Finish
03:17:952 : Kiai这里开始（03:17:722也可以）建议加到歌曲结束
03:02:608 (3): 加Finish
03:29:020 (9): 这个Finish移到后面的1上

[Nini]
这个难度里有的Note间距离太近不过如果你认为没问题的话以下关于间距的建议可以全部忽略

另外建议Kiai Time与Opop里加得一样

00:10:966 (4): 离3太近
00:11:768 (6): Finish音效听起来不算太好
00:19:096 (8): ^
00:16:577 (5): Finish
00:29:630 (6): 离5太近
00:35:356 (6): ^
00:38:562 (6): 因为离后面的1太近了所以建议把Slider向右移一移
00:45:203 (1): 离7太近
00:49:554 (5): 离4太近
00:54:821 (1): 离7太近
01:18:867 (1): 这里加Finish
01:25:279 (7): 把Finish移到后面的1上
01:36:043 (8): 建议去掉Finish
01:40:852 : 加个Circle并把前面的Finish音效移过来
01:50:470 (8): 离7太近
02:05:127 (7): 离6太近
02:11:081 (2): 离3太远
02:39:707 (4): 离3太近
02:42:913 (6): 离5太近
02:44:287 (9): 离8太近
03:15:203 (3): 离2太近
03:16:692 (1): 这个转盘太短了建议去掉或者改成Slider
03:35:814 (6): 离5和7太近
03:17:944 : 我认为Kiai Time应该从这开始一直到最后
03:47:267 (2): 开头加finish

[Nana]
音效声有点大建议调小一点

00:45:656 (7): 这个慢速Slider有点让人措手不及
00:47:717 : 加个Circle
01:15:197 (7): 建议重复-1 让后面的转盘提前半拍开始
02:02:143 (8): 这里加Whistle
02:17:487 (9): 这里加Finish
03:09:929 (6): 这里加Whistle
03:17:944 : 这里开始Kiai Time
03:31:226 (6): 不要消得太静了
03:39:241 (6): Whistle
03:53:669 (7,8,9): 整个难度里就这么一点跳是不是有点太孤立了
04:04:317 (1,2,1): 这里BPM已经发生了变化建议删掉这段或找到正确的BPM

Nitsuki_Yukikawa

27 posts

Joined February 2009

Nitsuki_Yukikawa 2010-11-28T08:44:26+00:00

nice song

star~

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-11-28T10:11:13+00:00

impossiblexu wrote:
以下只是建议:

[General]（ok....Countdown
忘记去掉了..）

建议各难度都去掉Countdown
要对齐重音的话 offset应该是1921（Nana难度offset为什么不一样）
[Opop](ok)
这个难度没大有必要加Lead-in

00:16:577 (4): 开头Finish
00:23:676 (6): 建议把Finish音效放到后面的1上
00:31:234 : 加个Circle感觉更好（再加上Finish音效）
00:44:287 (9): 建议删掉这个Slider在44:516和44:775加俩Circle
01:02:239 : 加个Circle 并把9后面的Finish移到这
01:18:562 : ^ 虽然感觉不是太好但还是建议加个Circle
01:16:119 – 01:17:722 : 既然前面也加了Break 那这里也加个吧
01:18:867 (2): Finish
01:25:737 (5): 把Finish放在后面的1上
01:33:524 (3): Finish
01:48:180 (1): 换Normal音效 Kiai从这开始
01:57:798 (5,6): 位置摆得有点误导人
02:02:837 : Kiai结束
02:17:493 (1): 这里加Finish
02:20:012 (6): 去掉Finish 并右移6格
02:33:982 (2): 这里加Finish
03:17:952 : Kiai这里开始（03:17:722也可以）建议加到歌曲结束
03:02:608 (3): 加Finish
03:29:020 (9): 这个Finish移到后面的1上
[Nini](间距问题我调了一些..但有一些不太好改...)
这个难度里有的Note间距离太近不过如果你认为没问题的话以下关于间距的建议可以全部忽略
另外建议Kiai Time与Opop里加得一样

00:10:966 (4): 离3太近
00:11:768 (6): Finish音效听起来不算太好
00:19:096 (8): ^
00:16:577 (5): Finish
00:29:630 (6): 离5太近
00:35:356 (6): ^
00:38:562 (6): 因为离后面的1太近了所以建议把Slider向右移一移
00:45:203 (1): 离7太近
00:49:554 (5): 离4太近
00:54:821 (1): 离7太近
01:18:867 (1): 这里加Finish
01:25:279 (7): 把Finish移到后面的1上
01:36:043 (8): 建议去掉Finish
01:40:852 : 加个Circle并把前面的Finish音效移过来
01:50:470 (8): 离7太近
02:05:127 (7): 离6太近
02:11:081 (2): 离3太远
02:39:707 (4): 离3太近
02:42:913 (6): 离5太近
02:44:287 (9): 离8太近
03:15:203 (3): 离2太近
03:16:692 (1): 这个转盘太短了建议去掉或者改成Slider
03:35:814 (6): 离5和7太近
03:17:944 : 我认为Kiai Time应该从这开始一直到最后
03:47:267 (2): 开头加finish

Haruhi-boy

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Haruhi-boy 2010-11-28T13:19:19+00:00

Star

Haruhi-boy

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Haruhi-boy 2010-11-28T13:20:14+00:00

Star

Crystal Dream

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Crystal Dream 2010-11-29T10:28:17+00:00

支持

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2010-11-29T10:30:01+00:00

great!
amazing music.
ahahahahaha~~~~

duchze

2 posts

Joined June 2010

duchze 2010-11-29T10:32:30+00:00

修理费这图不错！

Kite

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2009

Kite 2010-11-29T12:22:13+00:00

Shouldn't the background be Keine Kamishirasawa? Since it's her theme afterall....
I'll mod it a bit later, just love Plain Asia!

NanaDesu

NanaDesu 2010-11-29T23:48:00+00:00

Download: Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix) (xlFXTZ) [Nana].osu

Ballance

osu!painter

449 posts

Joined September 2009

Ballance 2010-11-30T17:05:24+00:00

star
不怎么会mod……

[Nana]总感觉单调了一点……
高潮部分可以难一点的啊=A=

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-12-01T03:08:56+00:00

Ballance wrote:
8-)
star
不怎么会mod……(没关系,开始的时候都不会的.....谢谢)

[Nana]总感觉单调了一点……
高潮部分可以难一点的啊=A=（我会向77老师反应的=W=）

Saten ruiko

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Joined November 2009

Saten ruiko 2010-12-02T09:24:23+00:00

star

oqoq_old

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oqoq_old 2010-12-02T09:25:37+00:00

52chan

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52chan 2010-12-03T06:20:27+00:00

star

Night_Side

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Night_Side 2010-12-03T06:20:51+00:00

star

Kochiya Sanae

179 posts

Joined June 2010

Kochiya Sanae 2010-12-03T06:42:00+00:00

im a noob modder

[Opop]
01:02:379 (10) - ds?
01:59:172 (6) - copy and paste 02:00:088 (7) ? ctrl+h/j/r
02:42:684 (9,10) - 1 gird down?
[Nini]
00:34:440 (5,6) - spacing?
00:36:043 (9,1) - ^
00:44:745 (7,1,2) - ^
00:46:577 (4,5) - ^
too much spacing problem lol (just suggestion)
[Nana]
cool

star

xinhe

116 posts

Joined February 2010

xinhe 2010-12-05T14:48:47+00:00

不是很会MOD～～～可以参考一下～～

[opop]
00:39:363(4,5)-spacing
00:44:172(4,5)-^
01:19:325(5,6,7)-^
这难度的音效感觉HIT的音效和音乐有点不和～～听着感觉不是很好～～可能在小点比较好～～

[nini]
00:35:095(5,6)-spacing
00:45:661(1,2)-^
00:46:691(4,5)-^
00:49:098(4,5)-^
01:01:234 (3,4)-^
我发现你的几个SPACING问题都是一组COMBO内DS变了的问题～～～之前是半拍空的是这个距离～～到了出问题的地方～拍子空的是一拍～结果SPACING还是一样的～～感觉很诡异～～

[nana]
建议有些跳的地方可以NEW COMBO一下～不是什么大问题～～～

STAR

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

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Colin Hou 2010-12-05T17:55:52+00:00

[General]:

silent the spinnerspin.wav spinnerbonus.wav, or turn down the volune when a spinner came out
前两个难度的offset都改1000 (1004?) 你这个1921的offset移过去是1004...然后第三个是1000 自取一个吧反正三个难度请用一致的

[Nana]:

作为最高难也就是可以最好贴近音乐的难度... 这个也许够了但是感觉还是少了很多跳
02:02:830 (1,2,3) - 这个pattern重复了5次感觉有点充数的意思 @_@ 同样的hitsounding可以用不同的pattern来完成但如果这是你有意这么放的话我个人感觉打起来很枯燥
02:32:143 (1) - 这个spinner可以做音量渐强但是spinnerbonus.wav最好还是静音掉
02:55:959 (1,2,3,4) - 可以考虑2和3换位置...
04:05:233 (1) - 末尾没有压在音上用25%听很明显可能需要最后稍微改动下bpm 其他难度同

[Nini]:

02:01:234 (4,5) - spacing?
怎么这个难度里会有C2的soft-clap是默认的clap...也可能是我这里下图太早需要更新检查下吧

剩下那个难度没什么..

star~ 图不错（除了红色的其他的都可以无视）

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-12-14T12:05:18+00:00

xinhe wrote:
不是很会MOD～～～可以参考一下～～

[opop]（ok）
00:39:363(4,5)-spacing
00:44:172(4,5)-^
01:19:325(5,6,7)-^
这难度的音效感觉HIT的音效和音乐有点不和～～听着感觉不是很好～～可能在小点比较好～～

[nini](嘛，有些是故意的..恩，改了一些)
00:35:095(5,6)-spacing
00:45:661(1,2)-^
00:46:691(4,5)-^
00:49:098(4,5)-^
01:01:234 (3,4)-^
我发现你的几个SPACING问题都是一组COMBO内DS变了的问题～～～之前是半拍空的是这个距离～～到了出问题的地方～拍子空的是一拍～结果SPACING还是一样的～～感觉很诡异～～

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-12-14T12:06:15+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:
silent the spinnerspin.wav spinnerbonus.wav, or turn down the volune when a spinner came out
前两个难度的offset都改1000 (1004?) 你这个1921的offset移过去是1004...然后第三个是1000 自取一个吧反正三个难度请用一致的
（OK）
[Nini]:（OK）
02:01:234 (4,5) - spacing?
怎么这个难度里会有C2的soft-clap是默认的clap...也可能是我这里下图太早需要更新检查下吧

Astom

1,588 posts

Joined October 2008

Astom 2010-12-14T17:11:40+00:00

Hi~

[.osb]
-Bad folder path, you need delete this or fix it:

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 M,0,108174,108381,351,415,358,315
 F,0,108174,108861,1
 M,0,108381,114815,358,315,361,198
 F,0,108861,114815,1
 M,0,114815,,361,198
 S,0,114815,,1.512
 F,0,114815,129700,1
 F,0,129700,,1
 F,0,129700,136113,1
 F,0,136227,,1
 F,0,136227,137258,1
 F,0,136571,137258,0.20032,0.98976
 F,0,137258,137487,0.98976,1
 F,0,137258,138403,1,0
 F,0,137487,138403,1,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Songs\Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)\nana's bg2.jpg",320,240
 S,0,108174,,0.6211202
 F,0,108174,109090,0,1
 M,0,108174,110006,136,253,449,245
 F,0,109090,110006,1
 F,0,110006,110464,1,0.90784
 M,0,110006,111838,449,245,319,239
 F,0,110464,113212,0.90784,1
 M,0,111838,113212,319,239,318,240
 F,0,113212,114815,1,0
 M,0,113212,115044,318,240,318,239
 M,0,114815,115044,323,125,318,239
 F,0,114815,115044,0
 F,0,115044,,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Songs\Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)\flow.png",320,240
 F,0,197715,197944,0.38048,1
 S,0,197715,197944,0.37536,0.8975999
 R,0,197715,197944,-1.7408,-1.754454
 R,0,197944,198173,-1.754454,-1.481387
 F,0,197944,198402,1,0
 S,0,197944,198402,0.8975999,2.46432
 R,0,198173,,-1.481387

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Songs\Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)\2.jpg",320,240
 F,0,129700,130616,0,1
 S,0,129700,130616,1,0.6825601
 M,0,129700,130822,320,240
 F,0,130616,131532,1
 S,0,130616,136113,0.6825601
 F,0,131532,136571,1
 F,0,136571,137487,1,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Songs\Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)\2bg2.jpg",320,240
 F,0,133822,135197,0.83616,0
 S,0,133822,135197,0.76448,0.8668799

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Songs\Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)\sign.png",320,240
 M,0,250615,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Songs\Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix)\sign sp.png",320,240
 F,0,251531,251989,1,0
 S,0,251531,251989,0.8668801,1.11264

-Delete this or use it in a better way

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"black.jpg",320,240
 F,0,135884,,1

-Some fix, you need replace your code with this and delete the "_" and replace it with a space.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_M,0,64205,,196,167
_F,0,64205,65235,1,0
-S,0,64205,65235,0.2740802,1.20592

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_M,0,9702,,252,286
_F,0,9702,10160,1,0
_S,0,9702,10160,0.24224,0.98976

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_M,0,10160,,524,189
_F,0,10160,10961,1,0
_S,0,10160,10961,0.2320001,1.28672

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_M,0,13824,,135,387
_F,0,13824,14282,1,0
_S,0,13824,14282,0.2217603,0.6108804

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_F,0,14740,15198,1,0
_S,0,14740,15198,0.2524799,2.29024

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_M,0,20007,,279,129
_F,0,20007,20923,0.78496,0
_S,0,20007,20923,0.2320001,0.7747201

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's p1.png",320,240
_M,0,21839,,450,395
_F,0,21839,22297,1,0
_S,0,21839,22297,0.2831999,1.14336
_F,0,22297,22411,0,0.4864
_S,0,22297,22984,1.14336,2.25952
_F,0,22411,22984,0.4864,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's sp1.jpg",320,240
_S,0,23900,,0.62112
_F,0,23900,24816,0,1
_F,0,24816,25732,1
_F,0,25732,26648,1,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's sp2.jpg",320,240
_F,0,66151,66953,0.81056,0
_S,0,66151,66953,0.63136,0.7337601

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"nana's sp2.jpg",320,240
_F,0,97411,98327,0.74912,0
_S,0,97411,98327,0.63136,0.7440003

[SB]
-Resize black.jpg to 640x480, don't need be that large (1296x690).
-Did you used heng line.png?
-Cut unnecessary transparency in:

sign.png
sign sp.png

-A recommendation for future, in general max. size for imgs in sb is 800x600, but, you can use large images but isn't really necessary and uses more space in the song folder.
-Also another recommendation for future, create a SB folder.

=_= mapping is fine.
Long mod try to use it please <-<
Star~

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-12-15T00:07:39+00:00

Thank you vary much for your mod~

I will fix them where you said ....
I‘m sorry for my poor english

lovhin456

1,965 posts

Joined December 2008

lovhin456 2010-12-25T03:27:45+00:00

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Make audio lead-in the same for all diffs
- Make preview time the same for all diffs
- Use these colors ??

Combo1 : 145,70,134
Combo2 : 215,40,40
Combo3 : 253,121,148
Combo4 : 221,153,221
Combo5 : 255,198,199

Skin;
- Hitcircle should be in a grayscale but this is optional

Opop;
- Make difficulty settngs like this because this is supposed to be the easiest diff

- Some of your combos are too long, more than 9 is too much
- Make sure you start and end kiai on a note
- 02:55:965 >> New combo

Nini;
- 00:24:706 >> Add a note
- 02:33:981 >> Start kiai time here ??
- 02:44:286 >> New combo
- 02:44:973 >> Ugly, too curved
- 02:57:568 >> New combo
- Some of your combos are too long, more than 9 is too much
- Make sure you start and end kiai on a note

Vivi;
- Circle size+1, bigger ??
- Good diff, maybe try to curve your sliders better >w>

Nana;
- 04:04:665 >> This and the next timing sections are useless, delete them
- Good diff, try to work on the placement in the playfield
- Make sure you start and end kiai on a note

* Star & Merry Christmas ~ !! (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ♥

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-12-25T04:42:23+00:00

[quote="lovhin456"]Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Make audio lead-in the same for all diffs(ok)
- Make preview time the same for all diffs(later...I will ask nana and vivi)
- Use these colors ??(ok)

Combo1 : 145,70,134
Combo2 : 215,40,40
Combo3 : 253,121,148
Combo4 : 221,153,221
Combo5 : 255,198,199

Opop;(ok)
- Make difficulty settngs like this because this is supposed to be the easiest diff
[attachment=0:af9bf]Untitled.png[/attachment:af9bf]
- Some of your combos are too long, more than 9 is too much
- Make sure you start and end kiai on a note
- 02:55:965 >> New combo(???)

Nini;(ok)
- 00:24:706 >> Add a note
- 02:33:981 >> Start kiai time here ??
- 02:44:286 >> New combo
- 02:44:973 >> Ugly, too curved
- 02:57:568 >> New combo
- Some of your combos are too long, more than 9 is too much
- Make sure you start and end kiai on a note
Thank you very much for your mod

Merry Christmas~

Sandpig

847 posts

Joined September 2010

Sandpig 2010-12-26T12:40:21+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

下载以后只有3个DIFF

请允许我先吐槽一下sb里面那个圆圈……和approach circle一起眼花缭乱啊- - （修改下透明度啥的）
还有从01:48:178位置开始感觉sb的图片移动速度有点快._. storyboad里面不要出现太显眼太突然的东西，否则会影响读图

Vivi

00:53:904 (5,1) - 这个地方衔接得不太好，跟音做然后跳过了很多整拍的点击._. 建议前面slider加一个来回结束在白线上，后面也从白线上起（比如00:55:049和00:55:278两个单圆）
01:19:781 (2) - 停顿后面接二连感觉这里还是用circle好一点，或者距离再拉大一点
01:29:628 - 加个音，从红线跳到第二根白线破坏连续感觉
02:04:552 (1) - 建议这种二连不要用slider
02:15:201 (4) - new combo
02:41:307 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这距离有点坑爹了而且前面的排列也看不出减速的提示
03:08:330 (3) - 这里注意一下stack leniece对实际位置的影响（后面同理）
03:18:864 (2) - 和后面的再分开一点
03:19:322 (3) - new combo应该下到这里吧？
03:19:780 (1) - remove new combo
03:49:093 (1,2) - spacing 虽然好像打起来影响不大但是还是建议改一下

Nana

00:15:660 - 与其静音这个note不如直接把slider拉到2的位置（比如和前边一样用0.5x的slider）（我的观点：如果你觉得某个NOTE严重需要静音一定是你在不需要NOTE的地方下了NOTE，重新排图._.）
01:28:483 (2,3) - 感觉这里应该左右分开而不是叠起来
02:02:834 (1,2,3) - 这种组合连续用了4次打起来略显烦躁
03:02:605 - 加个音，感觉停顿破坏连续感了._.

Opop

00:44:973 (7,8) - spacing (怎么突然1.75了)

star

Royal Flare

78 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Royal Flare 2010-12-26T15:04:35+00:00

Sandpig wrote:
下载以后只有3个DIFF(.....难道我悲剧了？我重新FULL一遍试试)

Opop

00:44:973 (7,8) - spacing (怎么突然1.75了)（没注意到..修正了）

NanaDesu

NanaDesu 2010-12-26T15:49:21+00:00

all fixed...

maybe

Download: Teimu - Plain Asia (Piano Club Mix) (xlFXTZ) [Nana].osu

James2250

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Joined July 2008

James2250 2010-12-28T07:51:23+00:00

Do you need '2" and '2bg2' in folder? I don't think you should need both for the pulse in the storyboard
Pictures for the storyboard move kind of randomly around to me
I recommend to end kiai on the white ticks not blue ticks
Make the preview point the same on every difficulty

Opop:
Add hitsounds to the kiai time -- same for any difficulty that hasn't at the moment
Get rid of un-needed audio lead in time
AR/OD -1 for the easiest difficulty?
Map looks good

Nini:
Try and make HP/OD/AR more equal for this map between Opop and Vivi (they are pretty high at the moment) Would be nice to make it easier for the difficulty spread too
00:09:248 (3,4) - try and avoid anti jumps
00:35:813 (4,5,1) - keep spacing equal
00:38:332 (5,6,1) - ^
00:41:767 (4,5,6) - ^
00:44:515 (6,7,1) - ^
01:09:477 (3,4,5) - ^ Go through the rest of the map and check spacing like this. If the notes are further away on the timeline they need to be spaced further away from the previous notes

Vivi:
01:28:025 (4,5,1) - odd spacing
03:01:231 (4,1,1,1,2,3) - ^
03:25:276 (1,2) - spacing

Nana:
Has lower HP than Nini, try and sort all that out so it makes sense and goes up equally across the difficulties
Notes sound too loud for the song, make them quieter like the other difficulties
Sounds slightly empty with hitsounds at times, I would add some more
01:16:117 (1) - silence this slowly, sounds too sudden at the moment
01:25:964 (4,5) - odd jump
01:36:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move right side further away seeing as left side is?

Not bad, just needs some work with a few spacing issues and to work together more as a mapset
Star'ed~

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2010-12-28T09:05:12+00:00

[quote="James2250"]
Pictures for the storyboard move kind of randomly around to me
[quote]
..
Oh no I still think that my movings just randomly but it doesn't matter...
REALLY need to change them?

if it is necessary...I...I will obey...

Just my first time for mapping SB._.I felt so sorry for this

James2250

osu! Alumni

4,059 posts

Joined July 2008

James2250 2010-12-28T09:18:57+00:00

"Randomly back"

No you do not need to change them if you don't want to. I just wondered if there was any pattern they were following
If you like how it is now and no one else minds you are welcome to keep them the way they are

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2010-12-28T09:30:28+00:00

James2250 wrote:
"Randomly back"

No you do not need to change them if you don't want to. I just wondered if there was any pattern they were following
If you like how it is now and no one else minds you are welcome to keep them the way they are

Speed!
THANKS for reply and I will make better efforts than before[bow
[grateful

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