The best advice I can give you is to stop being afraid of adding 1/2th notes in easy. It could play so much better than it currently does if you represented the beat more, but it's your map.

OD - 1 and then space some of your more closer notes out more to make up for it? I am suggesting this, because the vocals and the beat conflict and I found it hard to find the beat in places over the power of the vocals and the fact that your spacing doesn't follow any guidelines at all at times. The extra OD cushion would ensure that any confusion of the beat wouldn't register a 100.

Next please submit this with the beatsnap at 1/2th for future modders.

00:09:339 (1) - Move up 1 unit (aligns it with the rest of the combo)

00:16:094 (1,2,3,4) - Randomly placed? I don't like it. There's no sense of beat when notes are placed randomly like that.

00:21:372 (1,2,3) - Please space these greater apart (suggestion) Note this might not be required if you space the notes after it similarly.
00:21:794 (2,3,4,5,6) - These absolutely need to be spaced the same in order to find the loosely based version of the beat. It is one of the main reasons why I get 100s here.
00:25:594 (7,1) - This should be spaced the same as 00:25:171 (6,7) - . The change in spacing kills the beat. The slider should be redesigned.

00:09:972 (3) - Make the end of this a clap. It sounds odd that the first sets of claps had 4 claps and the next set only had 3. Adding a clap here sounds really good IMO.

00:27:282 (5) - I highly recommend that you remove one return and add either a spinner or a slider for the last sound. It plays strange when the slider repeats once and this slider repeats twice. I feel there needs to be that slight gap in noise that ocurs when you switch notes. If you choose a slider, it could go straight down the vertical line. If you chose a spinner (recommended) I think it would end nicely here 00:28:971 -

On a side note: You may want to add an inherited section to lower the spinner volume to go with the song.

Your x2 has created anti jumps all over the place. >.< It also feels quite overmapped. Slider velocity at x2 feels two fast for the spacing.

00:05:328 (2,3) - I don't like this anti jump. 3 should be a new combo for sure if you want to keep the spacing like that. I don't recommend it. You have a 2.8 SV slider crashing into an anti jump. Yeah that doesn't sound like a thing the BATs will like.

00:06:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing is inconsistant. On top of that I think it's sort of misrepresents the beat IMO.

00:07:439 (3,4,5,6,7) - This represents a mish mash of sounds. The notes aren't smmoth enough tone wise to be represented by a stream. I feel that you skipped over the true stream pattern here 00:06:594 (1) - . Listen closely to the beat and you'll hear a consistant note every 1/4th beat up to 00:07:016 (2) - , then the beat skips a tick and starts here 00:07:228 -(add a note) , skips another tick and appear where you started the stream here 00:07:439 (3) - . Now my suggestion for your current stream is to turn it into two sliders or 4 notes and one note.

00:07:439 (3) - This would be the first slider that ends where note 4 is 00:07:544 -
00:07:650 (5) - This would be the second slider. It would end where note 6 is 00:07:861 -
00:07:861 (7) - This I really suggest you remove and move 00:08:072 (1) - to its position and make that note as long as note 00:08:705 (3) - (Eh if that doesn't work, I guess it's alright that you keep it as a 5 note stream, but add a hitsound to that fifth note (00:07:861 (7) - ). A finish sounds great.

Ignore the spacing in the screenshot and look at the correct beat in the timeline.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18194

00:06:383 - You might want to use this somewhere in the beat too, because it's the true start of this pattern. 1-12345-1-12345

00:09:339 (4,5,6) - Unequal spacing.

00:15:249 (2) - Apply distance snap to this. (Move up 1 unit)

00:15:461 (3,4) - Space this the same as notes 2 and 3. (2 1/2 diagonal squares)
I think it would also play better if you placed it below note 3. Centered on the horizontal line is a nice fix and the transition to the next combo feels alright too.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18197

00:22:216 (3,4,5) - Unintuitive spacing change. Make 3 a new combo if you want to change the spacing like this.

Even better idea inspired from the problem below. (I'll explain in the My Fix section)

00:22:955 (1) - Unrankable. The osubot needs to get +2000 off the spinner.

My Fix

Delete 00:22:849 (5) - and start the spinner here and extend the spinner to 00:23:694 -

Once the awkward note 5 is out of the way, you should apply distance snap to 00:21:794 (2,3,4) - so they are all equal distance apart and properly spaced out, then straighten 3 and 4 out. you may want to adjust the shape of note 2 to make a new pattern.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18200

00:25:594 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing shouldn't deviate this much in this pattern. Apply distance snap to note 3. <(Really should fix)I don't know about your anti jump after the pattern either, because it goes right into a jump. It's awkward and confusing to read and hit. You're on your own when fixing this, because it needs to be remapped. The jumps that end it are fine, but they will need to be relocated after properly fixing the anti jumps. Eh if you are on the fence about this fix, I would ask a second opinion or help from a MAT or a regular on mod.

EXTREMELY BORING. Even for an easy, imo.

That's the timeline I'll suggest:
00:02:372 (2) - Try to put this slider 1/1 and make it repeat.
00:08:072 - Add 2/1 long slider.
00:09:972 - ^
00:11:661 - ^
00:13:350 - Add note.
00:15:461 - Add 1/1 long slider.
00:17:149 - ^
00:18:838 - ^
00:20:105 - Add note.

Note: Feel free to use it/modify it at your convenience.

Nothing major here.

Just some suggestions:
00:04:483 - Why not mapping the break?
00:27:282 (5) - Remove one repeat and add slider at 00:27:916 ending at 00:28:971.

It's all right, a bit overmapped though.
00:03:217 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:216 (1) - ^
00:12:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - That's ridiculous. Make some jumps, it'll fit more the song.
00:20:105 (1) - Why not following the battery instead of just putting a spinner.
00:22:849 (1) - This spinner feels like lazy mapping
00:25:594 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Eek.