This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 7월 1일 목요일 at 오전 11:31:05

Artist: HO-KAGO TEA TIME
Title: Pure Pure Heart (Full Ver.)
Source: K-ON!!
Tags: 31's samiljul Taiko toyosaki aki hikasa youko satou satomi kotobuki minako taketatsu ayana hirasawa yui akiyama mio tainaka ritsu kotobuki tsumugi nakano asuza k-on keion hisaka yoko
BPM: 154
Filesize: 10430kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:

1. 31's Taiko (4.89 stars, 589 notes)
2. Easy (1.05 stars, 229 notes)
3. Insane (4.79 stars, 601 notes)
4. Normal+ (4.18 stars, 457 notes)

Download: HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Pure Pure Heart (Full Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st ranked map!

inserted in a K-on 7th

Pure Pure Heart Full Ver.

31's diff half Ver. but hardly

enjoy~

Thx samiljul , SadKangaroo , banvi , dvorak , lRasl
wmfchris , Eirene , Frill , I_Tatsuo_I , MittenMasterzz
Clare , xxheroxx , Astom , Armin , Mafiamaster , Alace

10.06.17 add 31's Taiko
10.06.18 Modification of the interval and were placed.
10.06.19 add Normal / combo colors done.
10.06.19 artist,title name edit / Normal add combo and HP drain drop
10.06.19 add Easy / grid lv3 edit
10.06.21 hitsounds edit / Normal change Noraml+ and add combo / grid edit
10.06.21 31's Taiko file Update
10.06.23 nomal+ add note / green line move
10.06.25 Insane HD drain drop
10.06.26 green timing move / spinne move / Insane add notes
10.06.29 Easy notes fix / preview point move
10.06.29 offstet fix / snaps fix
10.06.30 hitsound fix / Normal+ end move
10.07.02 ranked

　

Download: Hisaka Yoko - HTT - Pure Pure Heart(Full Ver.) (hujune) [31's Taiko].osu

Hi.

[General]
Where's Preview Point?
Set it via Timing --> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
Also,use more precisely grid level.View--> Grid Level --> 2 or 3.
31's Taiko is a guest difficulty? Add it's author to Tags to both diffuculties.
"kon mio heart yoko" - you wanted to add it to tags maybe? But anyway,change the Source to "K-On!" then.
Don't forget about .osb file.Delete it.It may re-appear,so keep it mind,and check for it after making another changes,especially if you making some SB or changing BG.

[31's Taiko]
Well,I think you need more experienced taiko-modding player,so I'll skip it.

[Insane]
00:37:791 (1) - Stack it with 00:36:817 (10)?
00:42:662 (2) - Allign better.
00:44:025 (1) - Fix distance.Put much further,please.
00:45:388 (5) - ^
00:47:921 (2) - Distance,fix it.
01:01:752 (1) - ^
01:04:284 (9) - ^
02:01:947 (1) - Put further.
02:42:466 (x) - Kiai ends here.

You need more work on it.And at least another difficulty with less then 3.00 Star Priority.

Good luck,star~

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hi.

[General]
Where's Preview Point?
Set it via Timing --> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
Also,use more precisely grid level.View--> Grid Level --> 2 or 3.
31's Taiko is a guest difficulty? Add it's author to Tags to both diffuculties.
"kon mio heart yoko" - you wanted to add it to tags maybe? But anyway,change the Source to "K-On!" then.
Don't forget about .osb file.Delete it.It may re-appear,so keep it mind,and check for it after making another changes,especially if you making some SB or changing BG.

[31's Taiko]
Well,I think you need more experienced taiko-modding player,so I'll skip it.

[Insane]
00:37:791 (1) - Stack it with 00:36:817 (10)?
00:42:662 (2) - Allign better.
00:44:025 (1) - Fix distance.Put much further,please.
00:45:388 (5) - ^
00:47:921 (2) - Distance,fix it.
01:01:752 (1) - ^
01:04:284 (9) - ^
02:01:947 (1) - Put further.
02:42:466 (x) - Kiai ends here.

You need more work on it.And at least another difficulty with less then 3.00 Star Priority.

Good luck,star~

Thanks to help have been brought.
Kudosu

star~ must complete it!

이렇게하면 되는건가..;?

Hello.
K-ON!

mod

nicemap! star & gl

banvi wrote:

Hello.
K-ON!

mod

SPOILER

Normal
You should choose combo colors.
00:52:791 (5) 1 grid left?(grid lv1)
01:20:648 (7) 1 grid right?(grid lv2)
03:19:479 (1) ^(^)
03:29:219 kiai time start 03:38:570?
Insane
You should choose combo colors.
And you should use grid lv3 (or lv2). Because of lv1 , spacing is wrong...
00:13:830 (3,4,5) spacing
00:15:388 (3,4,5) ^
00:16:752 (3,4,5) ^
03:03:310 (1) remove new combo?

nicemap! star & gl

Thx XD kudosu!

....

음...
다른것도많이만들어주세요 ㅋㅋ

gl for approved !

dvorak wrote:

gl for approved !

Thx artist name

nice map!

star~

[General]

1. Source : K-on!!
2. Tag : samiljul taiko (그외에 케이온 애니 관련쪽 성우나 캐릭터 이름들을 넣으셔야 합니다. 갠적으로 디팝에 있는 태그가 좋음.)
3. Artist & Title : HTT - Pure Pure Heart (Full Ver.)

띄어쓰기 구분...<_<

1. 언랭요소 중에서 최근에 생긴것이 있습니다. 3 Star0이하의 난이도를 포함하고 있지 않으면 랭크될수 없습니다.

[Normal]

1. 전체적으로 Normal이라고 하기엔 Slider Velocity가 너무 높습니다.
2. 그리고 왠만하면 HP Drain Rate는 노말에선 5이하로 놔주세요.

00:54:739 (1) - 복붙인거 같긴한데 일단 노말에선 거리가 상당합니다. 대칭을 사용해서 바꿔주시는게 좋을꺼 같아요.
02:12:661 (x) - 노트추가
02:14:414 (1,2,3,4) - 초보자는 물론 숙련자들도 알아보기 어려운 패턴입니다. 실제로 쓰이지도 않아요.
03:05:843 (x) - 노트추가
03:44:804 (6) - 거리가 너무 가깞습니다.

[Insane]

01:39:544 (8,9) - 1,2번하고 대칭을 이루는건 어떨까요? 그냥 Meidium기준으로 grid 왼쪽으로 한칸
02:13:635 (5) - 거리가...너무 가까워요 비트하고 비례하면



아티스트 타이틀 바꿀땐 송셋업에서 바꾸고 저장하지 말고 바로 풀섬밋하시고 나중에 다른난이도도 바꾸시고 스텐다드섬밋하시면 돼요.

lRasl wrote:

[General]

1. Source : K-on!!
2. Tag : samiljul taiko (그외에 케이온 애니 관련쪽 성우나 캐릭터 이름들을 넣으셔야 합니다. 갠적으로 디팝에 있는 태그가 좋음.)
3. Artist & Title : HTT - Pure Pure Heart (Full Ver.)

띄어쓰기 구분...<_<

1. 언랭요소 중에서 최근에 생긴것이 있습니다. 3 Star0이하의 난이도를 포함하고 있지 않으면 랭크될수 없습니다.

[Normal]

1. 전체적으로 Normal이라고 하기엔 Slider Velocity가 너무 높습니다.
2. 그리고 왠만하면 HP Drain Rate는 노말에선 5이하로 놔주세요.

00:54:739 (1) - 복붙인거 같긴한데 일단 노말에선 거리가 상당합니다. 대칭을 사용해서 바꿔주시는게 좋을꺼 같아요.
02:12:661 (x) - 노트추가
02:14:414 (1,2,3,4) - 초보자는 물론 숙련자들도 알아보기 어려운 패턴입니다. 실제로 쓰이지도 않아요.
03:05:843 (x) - 노트추가
03:44:804 (6) - 거리가 너무 가깞습니다.

[Insane]

01:39:544 (8,9) - 1,2번하고 대칭을 이루는건 어떨까요? 그냥 Meidium기준으로 grid 왼쪽으로 한칸
02:13:635 (5) - 거리가...너무 가까워요 비트하고 비례하면



아티스트 타이틀 바꿀땐 송셋업에서 바꾸고 저장하지 말고 바로 풀섬밋하시고 나중에 다른난이도도 바꾸시고 스텐다드섬밋하시면 돼요.

아아 감사합니다 Kudous!
난이도 하나 더 만들어야....

[taiko]
no comment

*grid refers to grid level 3.
*need easier diff lower than 3 star

[insane]
0:28:051 (10,1) It's not a big problem... but better incease the spacing by 1 grid.
0:35:648 (5,6) suggestion: left 1 grid
0:57:076 (3) spacing... maybe lower (1,2)?
2:11:102 (1) spacing
3:03:700 (x) break?
3:38:570 (1) left 1 grid

[normal]
need re-snapping. use grid level 3
e.g. 0:19:869 (2,3,4,5,6) (2) can actually right 2 grid and etc.

nice song and star

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko]
no comment

*grid refers to grid level 3.
*need easier diff lower than 3 star

[insane]
0:28:051 (10,1) It's not a big problem... but better incease the spacing by 1 grid.
0:35:648 (5,6) suggestion: left 1 grid
0:57:076 (3) spacing... maybe lower (1,2)?
2:11:102 (1) spacing
3:03:700 (x) break?
3:38:570 (1) left 1 grid

[normal]
need re-snapping. use grid level 3
e.g. 0:19:869 (2,3,4,5,6) (2) can actually right 2 grid and etc.

nice song and star

Thx wmfchris

-> colors are very bad imo ... using only brown :s

[Insane] :
I can't find any big timeline problem ... but patterns are horrible o.o
so I will only give you some exemples :

00:26:103 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - that's really ugly !!!
00:36:817 (10) - curve this ...
00:39:934 (10) - ^
01:02:726 (6,7,8) - ugly pattern too
01:08:570 (5) - ugly shape imo
01:10:518 (1) - ^
01:18:310 (6,7,8) - ugly pattern
etc...
so what I think you should do :
-> keep the timeline, it's not bad
-> you still have grid 1 shapes so remap all the song with grid 3, and try to make awesome shapes with curved sliders :3 (long straight thin sliders are awful!)

for hitsounds :
00:46:752 (4) - finish
00:51:622 (2,6,9) - add claps
00:53:765 (2,5,8,12) - ^
00:56:297 (1) - remove the clap at the end
00:56:687 (2) - remove clap at the begining
00:57:271 (5) - add clap
00:57:661 (7) - remove clap
00:58:343 (1,6) - add claps
00:59:219 (7) - add finish
00:59:609 (1) - add finish at the begining
01:11:297 (2) - add clap
01:12:076 (8) - add finish
01:14:219 (6) - add one or two claps on this slider ?
01:18:310 (6,8) - clap at the begining
use the same hitsound patterns for all the diff if you like it


[Normal] :
there are a lot of parts without hitsounds...

00:18:310 (3,5) - remove claps
00:19:284 (1) - add clap at the end
00:20:258 (4) - clap
00:20:648 (6) - clap at 2/4 and 4/4
00:22:401 (1,4,6) - ^
00:31:752 (1,4,6) - ^
00:34:869 (1,4,6) - ^
00:25:713 (3) - clap
00:26:102 (4) - clap at 2/4 and 4/4
00:28:051 (6) - clap
00:28:635 (8) - remove clap
00:29:999 (1,2) - clap on each white tick
00:42:271 (1,2) - ^
00:40:519 (6) - clap
00:41:103 (8) - remove clap
00:45:778 (1) - clap at the begining
00:46:557 (3) - clap
00:47:531 (3) - ^
00:47:921 (4) - clap on 2/4 ans 4/4
00:52:207 (2,5) - clap
00:53:765 (2) - clap
00:55:324 (2) - clap
etc...
for the chorus, try to add a clap every 2 white ticks ... it's better to do that rather having no hitsound
same things for the calm parts with soft hitsounds : a whistle every 2 white ticks


I won't do that for all the map because it takes me a lot of time >.< if you don't understand something or want more help for shapes or hitsounds catch me in-game

hujune wrote:

31's diff half Ver. but hardly

hardly??

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

- Move to ' Pending Map ' (see is comlete..)
- delete osb file and fullsubtmit
- Background is resize plz (800x600 or 1024x768)

[Easy]

00:56:492 (1,2) - spacing
00:59:609 (1) - remove clap add finish

[Normal]

00:59:609 (1) - add finish in start

Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Just like Frill said, you need to move this to pending.
Delete those two osb files in your songs folder. Why are there two?
My queue rules state that I can only mod two difficulties for 4 - 5 minute songs. I will mod [Normal] and [Insane]

[Normal]
The beginning is really dull. It doesn't pick up the pace til 17 seconds in. I suggest adding some hit objects there
01:07:401 through 01:08:960 - Big empty spot here. Add some hit objects into here.
01:17:336 (x) - Add a hit circle here?
01:38:570 (2) - New Combo
02:55:323 through 03:04:284 - Boring, I felt like there could be more hit objects here, due to the guitar solo.
03:56:297 (x) - Add a hit circle here?
04:12:856 through 04:18:310 - I don't like how these are all new combos. Please make them all one combo.
04:29:219 (1) - What is this doing here? Remove it!

[Insane]
It seems like the only thing you did on this difficulty was raise the HP Drain and Overall Difficulty to make it harder. You didn't add much to make the beatmap play harder. There's the occasional stream, and the even rarer jump but that was it.
02:53:765 through 03:01:167 - This more or less feels like [Normal] only with a faster slider velocity. You could map this better.
03:03:700 - What is this break doing here? Map here, you ruined the flow of the beatmap.
I'm not a fan of your Insane difficulty.

Bah, you can have a star.
*star*

Eirene

great advice hitsounds

Frill

ok. delete osb file and fullsubtmit - Background is resize plz (800x600 or 1024x768)

Requested Taiko Mod

[31's Taiko]

First off, change the audio to 100% on Normal hitsounds.

00:57:856 - This roll sounds bad. Might wanna change it.
01:22:791 - ^
01:35:453 - ^

The only thing I really have to say other than that is that you used way to many finishers in the kiai time part.
Nice map~

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Just like Frill said, you need to move this to pending.
Delete those two osb files in your songs folder. Why are there two?
My queue rules state that I can only mod two difficulties for 4 - 5 minute songs. I will mod [Normal] and [Insane]

[Normal]
The beginning is really dull. It doesn't pick up the pace til 17 seconds in. I suggest adding some hit objects there
01:07:401 through 01:08:960 - Big empty spot here. Add some hit objects into here.
01:17:336 (x) - Add a hit circle here?
01:38:570 (2) - New Combo
02:55:323 through 03:04:284 - Boring, I felt like there could be more hit objects here, due to the guitar solo.
03:56:297 (x) - Add a hit circle here?
04:12:856 through 04:18:310 - I don't like how these are all new combos. Please make them all one combo.
04:29:219 (1) - What is this doing here? Remove it!

[Insane]
It seems like the only thing you did on this difficulty was raise the HP Drain and Overall Difficulty to make it harder. You didn't add much to make the beatmap play harder. There's the occasional stream, and the even rarer jump but that was it.
02:53:765 through 03:01:167 - This more or less feels like [Normal] only with a faster slider velocity. You could map this better.
03:03:700 - What is this break doing here? Map here, you ruined the flow of the beatmap.
I'm not a fan of your Insane difficulty.

Bah, you can have a star.
*star*

add hit and add combo Thx

MittenMasterzz wrote:

Requested Taiko Mod

[31's Taiko]

First off, change the audio to 100% on Normal hitsounds.

00:57:856 - This roll sounds bad. Might wanna change it.
01:22:791 - ^
01:35:453 - ^

The only thing I really have to say other than that is that you used way to many finishers in the kiai time part.
Nice map~

Thx Taiko mod

MittenMasterzz wrote:

00:57:856 - This roll sounds bad. Might wanna change it. I think It's not bad..
01:22:791 - ^ ok
01:35:453 - ^ I think it's not bad either

Download: HTT - Pure Pure Heart (Full Ver.) (hujune) [31's Taiko].osu

samiljul wrote:

MittenMasterzz wrote:

00:57:856 - This roll sounds bad. Might wanna change it. I think It's not bad..
01:22:791 - ^ ok
01:35:453 - ^ I think it's not bad either

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Update

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hello~

set PreviewTime in all diff

[Easy]
00:57:661 (3,4,5,6) - 1 grid right
00:59:622 (T) - kiai time points not snapped
01:12:102 (T) - ^
02:01:947 (2,3,4,5) - 1 grid left
02:15:193 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up
02:53:765 (T) - delete this green line
02:58:051 (5) - new combo
03:07:401 (T) - move green line before note
04:15:973 (5) - new combo

[Normal+]
00:11:297 (1) - 1 grid right
00:14:414 (1) - 1 grid up
00:29:999 (1) - this slider begin in 00:29:804 ?
00:46:947 (X) - add note?
02:07:206 (X) - ^
02:19:674 (X) - ^
02:20:453 (X) - ^
02:29:804 (X) - ^
03:29:219 (T) - delete this green line
03:32:336 (T) - move green line before note
03:33:895 (T) - ^
03:33:895 (3) - new combo
04:15:973 (5) - ^
04:23:765 (1) - add finish

[Insane]
move all green line(except kiai time) before note
00:59:609 (T) - add new green line before note,if you want change soft audio

star!

Clare wrote:

hello~

set PreviewTime in all diff

[Easy]
00:57:661 (3,4,5,6) - 1 grid right
00:59:622 (T) - kiai time points not snapped
01:12:102 (T) - ^
02:01:947 (2,3,4,5) - 1 grid left
02:15:193 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid up
02:53:765 (T) - delete this green line
02:58:051 (5) - new combo
03:07:401 (T) - move green line before note
04:15:973 (5) - new combo

[Normal+]
00:11:297 (1) - 1 grid right
00:14:414 (1) - 1 grid up
00:29:999 (1) - this slider begin in 00:29:804 ?
00:46:947 (X) - add note?
02:07:206 (X) - ^
02:19:674 (X) - ^
02:20:453 (X) - ^
02:29:804 (X) - ^
03:29:219 (T) - delete this green line
03:32:336 (T) - move green line before note
03:33:895 (T) - ^
03:33:895 (3) - new combo
04:15:973 (5) - ^
04:23:765 (1) - add finish

[Insane]
move all green line(except kiai time) before note
00:59:609 (T) - add new green line before note,if you want change soft audio

star!

D: green line edit Thx and Normal+ add note Kudous~

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Add "samiljul" into Tags

[Easy]

• • 00:59:219 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:59:609
  • 01:07:791 (green timing section) - Delete this timing section
  • 01:11:687 (green timing section) - ^
  • 02:17:141 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:17:531
  • 03:32:336 (1) - End this spinner here 03:35:453
  • 04:25:713 (1) - End this spinner here 04:29:414

[Normal+]

• • 00:59:219 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:59:609
  • 01:07:401 (green timing section) - Delete this timing section
  • 01:11:687 (green timing section) - ^
  • 01:40:128 (x) - Add a circle
  • 02:17:141 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:17:531
  • 03:01:167 (6) - "New combo"
  • 03:38:375 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 03:38:570

[Insane]

• • 00:17:531 (1) - End this spinner here 00:19:089
  • 00:58:245 (x) - Add a circle + "New combo". Also 00:58:343 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 01:07:693 (green timing section) - Delete this timing section
  • 01:11:784 (green timing section) - ^
  • 03:03:895/03:05:453 - Add some circles and sliders
  • 03:11:687/03:13:245 - ^
  • 03:38:473 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 03:38:570
  • 04:25:518 (1) - End this spinner here 04:29:414

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Add "samiljul" into Tags

[Easy]

• • 00:59:219 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:59:609
  • 01:07:791 (green timing section) - Delete this timing section
  • 01:11:687 (green timing section) - ^
  • 02:17:141 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:17:531
  • 03:32:336 (1) - End this spinner here 03:35:453
  • 04:25:713 (1) - End this spinner here 04:29:414

[Normal+]

• • 00:59:219 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 00:59:609
  • 01:07:401 (green timing section) - Delete this timing section
  • 01:11:687 (green timing section) - ^
  • 01:40:128 (x) - Add a circle
  • 02:17:141 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:17:531
  • 03:01:167 (6) - "New combo"
  • 03:38:375 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 03:38:570

[Insane]

• • 00:17:531 (1) - End this spinner here 00:19:089
  • 00:58:245 (x) - Add a circle + "New combo". Also 00:58:343 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 01:07:693 (green timing section) - Delete this timing section
  • 01:11:784 (green timing section) - ^
  • 03:03:895/03:05:453 - Add some circles and sliders
  • 03:11:687/03:13:245 - ^
  • 03:38:473 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 03:38:570
  • 04:25:518 (1) - End this spinner here 04:29:414

Thx xxheroxx kudous~ and 03:11:687/03:13:245 - ^ i can't because of increases the maximum score

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이대로 랭크되길!

Hi =)
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Set preview point in 02:17:434

[Easy]
-Finish kiai time here 01:24:544
-Finish kiai time here 02:42:466
-03:42:076 (1) Move it to 03:41:687
-03:42:856 (2) Move it to 03:42:466
-03:43:635 (3) Move it to 03:43:245
-03:44:414 (4) Move it to 03:44:025
-03:44:804 (1) finish it in 03:47:141
-03:47:531 (1) move it to 03:47:921
-03:48:310 (2) delete it and move 03:49:089 (2) to 03:48:700
-03:50:648 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) move all of them to the previus white tick

[Normal+]
-finish kiai time here 01:24:544
-finish kiai time here 02:42:466
-04:00:388 (1) finish it in 04:02:434 and finish kiai time in 04:02:434

[Insane]
-Start kiai time here 02:17:531
-finish kiai time here 02:42:466
-04:00:388 (1) finisht it in 04:02:434 and finish kiai time in 04:02:434
-Finish kiai time in 01:26:102
-Hitsounds from 03:07:401 to 03:32:23?

Aww.. so many suggestions ;o;
Still, Star I like the song =3

Astom wrote:

Hi =)
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Set preview point in 02:17:434

[Easy]
-Finish kiai time here 01:24:544
-Finish kiai time here 02:42:466
-03:42:076 (1) Move it to 03:41:687
-03:42:856 (2) Move it to 03:42:466
-03:43:635 (3) Move it to 03:43:245
-03:44:414 (4) Move it to 03:44:025
-03:44:804 (1) finish it in 03:47:141
-03:47:531 (1) move it to 03:47:921
-03:48:310 (2) delete it and move 03:49:089 (2) to 03:48:700
-03:50:648 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) move all of them to the previus white tick

[Normal+]
-finish kiai time here 01:24:544
-finish kiai time here 02:42:466
-04:00:388 (1) finish it in 04:02:434 and finish kiai time in 04:02:434

[Insane]
-Start kiai time here 02:17:531
-finish kiai time here 02:42:466
-04:00:388 (1) finisht it in 04:02:434 and finish kiai time in 04:02:434
-Finish kiai time in 01:26:102
-Hitsounds from 03:07:401 to 03:32:23?

Aww.. so many suggestions ;o;
Still, Star I like the song =3

Easy suggestions nice Kudous~

Optimize the offset: 5050, then Resnap All Notes


[Easy]

Next time.. use the Distance Snap. There are a lot of spacing errors.
The most relevant are these:


00:06:622 (1) - Finish
00:17:141 (1,1) - Hm, this is quite difficult for an easy. I suggest to make the spinner 1/1 shorter
00:40:908 (1) - This spinner is placed in a bad position, and also is short. Consider to delete it and add 2 beats instead?
04:25:713 (1) - Make it end here: 04:29:219

[Normal+]

00:44:025 (1) - Jump, unintuitive.
03:29:219 (3) - Fix this using the DS, even if it's a 0,5x BPM Section. Or use 1,6 Distance snap between 03:28:440 (1,2)
03:36:232 (1) - This doesn't fit the rythm o.o Move this 1/2 back

[Insane]

00:31:557 (1) - Spacing
01:52:596 (1) - This doesn't fit with the vocal voice. Remove it?
02:04:869 (1) - VERY confusing. Spacing, even if you can't notice it using the DistanceSnap (due to grid limitations)
02:18:310 (1) - Remove this new combo
02:25:908 (1) - New combo
04:24:154 (1) - Spacing (it's a stream eh!)
04:25:518 (1) - Make it end here: 04:29:219

Armin wrote:

Optimize the offset: 5050, then Resnap All Notes ok offset 5050 fix


[Easy]

Next time.. use the Distance Snap. There are a lot of spacing errors. yes. maybe grid3 going to change what happened. Thx
The most relevant are these:

SPOILER

00:24:154 (2)
00:35:843 (1)
00:44:025 (2,3,4,5)
00:49:869 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:53:375 (3)
00:57:271 (2)
01:18:310 (2,3)
02:11:297 (3)
02:15:193 (2)
02:17:531 (1)
03:01:167 (2) - [Huge jump]
03:13:245 (1)
03:19:479 (1)
04:23:765 (1,2,3,4,5)

00:06:622 (1) - Finish
00:17:141 (1,1) - Hm, this is quite difficult for an easy. I suggest to make the spinner 1/1 shorter
00:40:908 (1) - This spinner is placed in a bad position, and also is short. Consider to delete it and add 2 beats instead?
04:25:713 (1) - Make it end here: 04:29:219

Snap fix

[Normal+]

00:44:025 (1) - Jump, unintuitive.
03:29:219 (3) - Fix this using the DS, even if it's a 0,5x BPM Section. Or use 1,6 Distance snap between 03:28:440 (1,2)
03:36:232 (1) - This doesn't fit the rythm o.o Move this 1/2 back

all fix done

[Insane]

00:31:557 (1) - Spacing
01:52:596 (1) - This doesn't fit with the vocal voice. Remove it?
02:04:869 (1) - VERY confusing. Spacing, even if you can't notice it using the DistanceSnap (due to grid limitations)
02:18:310 (1) - Remove this new combo
02:25:908 (1) - New combo
04:24:154 (1) - Spacing (it's a stream eh!)
04:25:518 (1) - Make it end here: 04:29:219

fix done.

nice advice Kudous

Change artist to HO-KAGO TEA TIME. Not just the abbreviation.
Capitalize all letters of the source. It should be "K-ON!!"

[Easy]
00:19:465 (1) - Add clap
00:20:244 (2) - Remove clap
00:21:024 (3) - Add clap.
01:12:062 (1) - Add a finish to the beginning.
01:19:855 (4) - Remove finish
01:20:634 (1) - Add finish
01:40:115 (3) - ^
02:01:933 (2,3,4,5) - Why aren't these finishes like 00:44:011 (2,3,4,5)?
02:08:166 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:400 (1) - Finish at the beginning?
02:17:517 (1) - Add a finish.
02:22:192 (6) - Remove finish
02:23:751 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
02:29:985 (1) - Add a finish.
02:34:661 (6) - Remove finish.
02:36:219 (2) - Add a finish.
02:37:778 (4) - Remove finish...
02:38:556 (1) - How about a finish on this spinner?
03:01:153 (2) - Add finish.
03:07:387 (1) to 03:28:037 (4) - What happened to hit sounds?
03:07:387 (1) - Add a finish.
03:56:478 (1) - ^
04:12:842 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:12:842 (1) - Add a finish.
00:19:075 (5) - ^
01:12:062 (2) - ^
01:16:738 (8) - Remove finish.
01:18:296 (5) - Add a finish only to the beginning of this slider.
01:21:413 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner.
01:36:998 (1) - Add a finish.
01:40:114 (7) - ^
01:49:075 (5) - Remove finish.
01:49:465 (1) - Add finish.
02:01:542 (5) - Remove finish.
02:17:127 (7) - ^
02:17:517 (1) - Add finish only to beginning.
02:23:751 (1) - ^
02:29:985 (2) - ^
02:36:218 (6) - Add finish.
02:39:140 (5) - Remove finish.
03:07:387 (1) - Add finish to beginning.
03:13:621 (1) - ^
03:19:465 (1) - Add finish to the end only.
03:38:556 (1) - Add finish to the beginning.
03:47:907 (1) - Add finish
03:54:140 (4) - ^
04:23:751 (1) - I'd like this spinner to be like the other ones in the other difficulties. Starting at 04:25:504 and ending at 04:29:400

[Insane]
00:47:907 (2) - New combo.
01:05:829 (4) - Add a finish to the beginning.
01:12:062 (2) - Add finish.
01:18:296 (6) - Add finish to beginning.
01:36:998 (1) - ^
02:17:517 (1) - ^
02:23:751 (1) - ^
02:29:985 (5) - Add a finish.
02:36:218 (6) - Add finish to beginning.
03:07:387 (1) - ^
03:13:621 (2) - ^
03:18:296 (1) - Add a finish here.
03:18:881 (3) - ^
03:19:855 (2) - Add finish to the beginning.
03:26:088 (2) - ^
03:29:205 (1) - ^
03:30:764 (6) - ^
03:38:556 (1) - ^
03:47:906 (2) - Add finish.
03:52:582 (5) - Remove finish.
04:25:114 (6) - New combo because it's a jump.
04:25:504 (1) - End this spinner at 04:29:400
03:54:140 (5) - Add finish.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Change artist to HO-KAGO TEA TIME. Not just the abbreviation.
Capitalize all letters of the source. It should be "K-ON!!"

[Easy]
00:19:465 (1) - Add clap
00:20:244 (2) - Remove clap
00:21:024 (3) - Add clap.
01:12:062 (1) - Add a finish to the beginning.
01:19:855 (4) - Remove finish
01:20:634 (1) - Add finish
01:40:115 (3) - ^
02:01:933 (2,3,4,5) - Why aren't these finishes like 00:44:011 (2,3,4,5)?
02:08:166 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:400 (1) - Finish at the beginning?
02:17:517 (1) - Add a finish.
02:22:192 (6) - Remove finish
02:23:751 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
02:29:985 (1) - Add a finish.
02:34:661 (6) - Remove finish.
02:36:219 (2) - Add a finish.
02:37:778 (4) - Remove finish...
02:38:556 (1) - How about a finish on this spinner?
03:01:153 (2) - Add finish.
03:07:387 (1) to 03:28:037 (4) - What happened to hit sounds?
03:07:387 (1) - Add a finish.
03:56:478 (1) - ^
04:12:842 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:12:842 (1) - Add a finish.
00:19:075 (5) - ^
01:12:062 (2) - ^
01:16:738 (8) - Remove finish.
01:18:296 (5) - Add a finish only to the beginning of this slider.
01:21:413 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner.
01:36:998 (1) - Add a finish.
01:40:114 (7) - ^
01:49:075 (5) - Remove finish.
01:49:465 (1) - Add finish.
02:01:542 (5) - Remove finish.
02:17:127 (7) - ^
02:17:517 (1) - Add finish only to beginning.
02:23:751 (1) - ^
02:29:985 (2) - ^
02:36:218 (6) - Add finish.
02:39:140 (5) - Remove finish.
03:07:387 (1) - Add finish to beginning.
03:13:621 (1) - ^
03:19:465 (1) - Add finish to the end only.
03:38:556 (1) - Add finish to the beginning.
03:47:907 (1) - Add finish
03:54:140 (4) - ^
04:23:751 (1) - I'd like this spinner to be like the other ones in the other difficulties. Starting at 04:25:504 and ending at 04:29:400

[Insane]
00:47:907 (2) - New combo.
01:05:829 (4) - Add a finish to the beginning.
01:12:062 (2) - Add finish.
01:18:296 (6) - Add finish to beginning.
01:36:998 (1) - ^
02:17:517 (1) - ^
02:23:751 (1) - ^
02:29:985 (5) - Add a finish.
02:36:218 (6) - Add finish to beginning.
03:07:387 (1) - ^
03:13:621 (2) - ^
03:18:296 (1) - Add a finish here.
03:18:881 (3) - ^
03:19:855 (2) - Add finish to the beginning.
03:26:088 (2) - ^
03:29:205 (1) - ^
03:30:764 (6) - ^
03:38:556 (1) - ^
03:47:906 (2) - Add finish.
03:52:582 (5) - Remove finish.
04:25:114 (6) - New combo because it's a jump.
04:25:504 (1) - End this spinner at 04:29:400
03:54:140 (5) - Add finish.

lol BAT is different too!
All fixed.
Thx kudous~

Ok... Bubbled.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Ok... Bubbled.

Thx!

버블 기념 별 투척!

star~

Well claps don`t sound so sweet to me (a bit too much in some parts )
But it can`t stop me to rank this

Congrats on your first ranked map!

Alace wrote:

Well claps don`t sound so sweet to me (a bit too much in some parts )
But it can`t stop me to rank this

oh,,,,

Thx

Nice job for being 1st map, really nice job. Gratz