1. aru's Taiko Oni (5 stars, 395 notes)
2. Kyubi (4,94 stars, 235 notes)
3. Nibi (1,12 stars, 71 notes)
4. roflninja's Biju (4,86 stars, 192 notes)
5. Yonbi (3,61 stars, 128 notes)

Please REMAP with 1/1 or 1/2 rythem...

1. Try using this slider velocity, Easy: 1.20 , Normal: 1.40

HolyBoy wrote:

hmmm... i went on hard mode and i did the first 35 seconds of the song...

its an example on how u can structure the song. and the notes i added follows the rythm of the music (well, i am 80% sure it does) ...

Hope this helps you make the map better k *cheers*


oh.. the notes aren't well put (so u will need to mvoe them around if u decide to keep the design to suite the map better k

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Nibi:
You don't need to use custom overrides if you don't have custom hitsounds.
Don't silence notes this way. It can be confusing for players.
00:14:892 (3) - Move it one grid right so it lines up with (2).
00:17:750 (3,4) - Move them one grid left so they form a square with (1) and (2).
00:27:571 (2) - Move it one grid left.
00:27:928 (3) - Move it one grid up.
00:28:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
00:52:035 (5) - ^
00:52:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - If you want to stack them, stack them properly, although I'd recommend you not to stack them.
00:55:071 (1,2,3) - If you stack objects in a normal diff, avoid stacking objects with different timings like here. It is hard for new players.
00:59:714 (1,2) - Those are hidden by the 300/100 when you complete the spinner.
01:01:499 (1,2,3) - Those three notes are too close to each other. The distance between two consecutive notes shoudl be the same as the distance between (3) and (4).
01:03:642 (5) - Too close to previous object.
01:03:642 (5,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack them for the same reason as 00:55:071 - .
01:06:499 (1,2,3) - ^
You should perhaps try adding hitsounds if you feel like it.

Kyubi:
The beat placement makes no sense... You aren't following the vocals nor the music most of the time... Fix that.

noneed wrote:

Thx Gonz for the mod ^^
But I didn't add a break.Playtime of 1:25~.. well not really break needed.
And also roflninja for the Background right sized.
Erm I think for a guest diff you need to turn your file into a .rar file.Do it with Winrar
Awesome Diff (:

And to Teras:
When I change the name of the map and I upload it, it comes to a new thread.But what will happen to Toumei Datta Sekei ((not tv size)?

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
Thanks for the mod and star =) also ^^

General
Why it's so quiet song? =( i think you need more high quality song... lol I always listen to music very very loud so I didn't notice that at alll.How can I make it louder? ô.ô
It is have BG and video..there is black screen оО ó.ô ?download bug?how should i fix that?

Nibi
Too many finish sounds ><sounds terrible I suck at hitsounds ;_;
00:20:250 (2,3,4) - move it to 00:20:428 (sounds bad) hmm gonz meant it's fine, so I leave it
00:25:785 (2) - 1 grid right ups
00:29:535 (1) - i think it's too short spinner for easy diff might be.I lenghted it
00:31:857 (3) - 1 left kay
00:44:535 (2) - 1 down kay
00:52:928 (1,3) - 1 down (mb stuck them?) lol first i stucked them but someone said thats not that good.
00:57:928 (6) - 1 up done
01:01:857 (2,3) - spacing yop
01:03:642 - i think it's better sry dont think so.would mess up following beats.

01:04:535 (1) - 1 down done

Kyubi
00:02:214 (2) - 1 left ups~
00:05:428 (3) - 1 right yo
00:08:285 (3,4,5) - spacing fixed
00:16:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2 grids up + spacing ^
01:04:892 (3,4) - 1 right but it wouldnt be align with 1 and 2 then..
01:13:642 (2) - 1 left done

star

yangzd88 wrote:

Hi~

[Nibi]
00:00:785 - add a circle k
00:01:142 - ^ .^
00:01:500 - ^ .^
00:11:500 (1) - end it at 00:12:928 [color=#BF0000k[/color]
00:17:035 (1) - spacing hmm i just added some notes
00:29:535 (1) - move to 00:29:178 done
00:55:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2) - Hitsounds.Don't use too much finish hitsound. kay
01:06:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ .^
01:17:035 - Add a circle changed the part

[Biju]
Awesome diff~
00:45:249 (10) - Spacing.
[attachment=0:dc057]1.png[/attachment:dc057]
00:49:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too hard for hard diff.

[Kyubi]
Clap and finish sounds terrible⊙﹏⊙

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
Thanks for the mod and star =)

General
Why it's so quiet song? =( i think you need more high quality song...
It is have BG and video..there is black screen оО

wmfchris wrote:

[insane]
0:02:220 (5) right 1 grid erm there is no (5) at that place.. O.o(and if i move it one grid right it wouldn't be paralel with (1)
0:31:591 (5) ^ again.. wtf?!
0:07:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) red combo (1,2) and purple combo (3) left 1 grid i don't have purple colour
0:14:048 (1,2,3,4,5) right 1 grid
0:38:739 (2,3,1,2,3) left 1 grid?
0:56:474 (1,2,3,4) unique the spacing...

nice map, but I think you'll need to re-snap all notes with gird level 3 for most of the diffs~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi~

This color means is important

General;
- Get a louder mp3 please, the hitsounds are louder than the song
- Change the color of the circles for ones that match[/color] is it that important?well I'll change it
- Change the BG ?? but that's your choice nah I think Naruto and Pain are fine
- Delete osb file and full-sub


Nibi;
- An easy/normal- diff ?? Well the stars say is easy but when I played it, I felt like it was a normal+ maybe because of the place of the notes, they're a lot of hide notes and that's what makes it absolutely not an easy diff. some hidden parts will not kill the beginner...
- 00:11:499 >> silence this spinner [color=#BF4000kay[/color]
- Try to place notes mostly on white ticks
- 00:17:392 >> one tick forward I changed this part and I like how it is..
- 00:17:749 >> one tick forward ^
- 00:17:108 >> one tick forward and end at 00:18:999 ^
- 00:19:535 (1)(2)(3)(4) >> one tick forward yap
- 00:21:142 >> add a note waitwat?when I fix ^ then there is already (4)
- 00:33:464 >> one tick forward but end at the same place as before k
- Just a suggestion, if a map has a lot of short spinner or kind of short spinner, sometimes it annoys people, to make it more clear you have some not-so-useful spinners
- 01:18:107 >> end this spinner at 01:21:499 and silence the whole spinner also end kiai time here kay

* This is as far as I get since I'm not good when it comes to mod insane or hard or hard+ which is like an insane- LOL
* Anyways Star ~ Good luck with your map and don't let it go to the graveyard :3

1. the video should be recoded without audio.
2. you need a approachcircle.png.
3. Motohiro Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size) (noneed).osb this file contains some SB events, but I didn't find any file related. maybe you should fix the SB or remove this file and full submit.
4. set a preview point for all diffs.

1. volume of hitsounds is too low
2. 00:36:142 (1,2) - 1 grid right
3. 00:38:999 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:42:571 (3,4) - 3 grids right
5. 00:44:535 (2,4) - with these notes, this diff is not easy enough, maybe you should change the way you place notes
6. 00:58:285 (1,1) - too close, and too hard for an easiest diff.

1. 00:25:249 (6,1) - too far
2. volume of hitsounds is too low

1. 01:23:999 (T) - end the KIAI here.
2. Overall Difficulty +1
3. 00:32:571 (5,1) - spacing
4. 00:43:821 (3,4,5) - ^

Colin Hou wrote:

[Biju]:

1. 00:25:249 (6,1) - too far thought so, fixed
2. volume of hitsounds is too low upped a bit, I don't like loud hitsounds, i dislike hitsounds in the first place

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's my mod

[roflninja]
Hai roflninja! Hi xD
01:11:321 (5) - Move down one grid. Alright
.. That's it

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. the video should be recoded without audio.
2. you need a approachcircle.png. Where do I get it? D:
3. Motohiro Hata - Toumei Datta Sekai (TV Size) (noneed).osb this file contains some SB events, but I didn't find any file related. maybe you should fix the SB or remove this file and full submit. Ah this was needed in the prev. video.I'll delete it.
4. set a preview point for all diffs.

[Nibi]:

1. volume of hitsounds is too low grr always is someone complaining about too loud or now too low hitsounds ~.~ I'll keept it
2. 00:36:142 (1,2) - 1 grid right
3. 00:38:999 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:42:571 (3,4) - 3 grids right
5. 00:44:535 (2,4) - with these notes, this diff is not easy enough, maybe you should change the way you place notes deleted
6. 00:58:285 (1,1) - too close, and too hard for an easiest diff.

shortened the spinner

[Biju]:

1. 00:25:249 (6,1) - too far
2. volume of hitsounds is too low

[Kyubi]:

1. 01:23:999 (T) - end the KIAI here.
2. Overall Difficulty +1
3. 00:32:571 (5,1) - spacing
4. 00:43:821 (3,4,5) - ^

fixed thanks
I think there is something wrong with the timing :S D':

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's my mod

[Nibi]
So this is your easy difficulty.. ..... yes o.O
00:17:571 (4) - The spacing you have here will confuse new players a lot. Try and keep spacing consistant on easy difficulties. well it will confuse them playing it the first or second time.but so they will learn, huh?
00:32:928 - One grid left.
01:13:285 - Start your Kiai time here

[roflninja]
Hai roflninja!
01:11:321 (5) - Move down one grid.
.. That's it

[Kyubi]
Increase overall difficulty by one or two please.
Needs more spaced out hit objects. Feels kinda cramped.
01:22:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Please map this differently.
01:23:999 - End Kiai time here.
fixed, thanks!

Okay mapset. (Good difficulty ninja)
*star*

_llkey_18 wrote:

hiii ^_^ yeah naruto lol, yes naruto ^^

here some sugguestion

nibi

00:01:142 - add finish? I think it's fine
00:01:857 - whistle? ^
00:02:214 - ^ ^
00:02:571 - ^ ^
00:36:857 - how about stack it with 4 hmm beginner don't always manage 300 at stucking notes and i have already some stucked
00:39:714 - same
nice ^_^

biju

00:10:071 - add finish?
This is nice ^_^

kyubi

00:08:642 - add repeat to this slider sound better ^^ you're right, thanks^^
00:18:107 - ^ maybe ? jop
00:42:928 - add note? hmm kay
00:45:607 - add note? slider for that and ↓
00:45:785 - add note?

well nice job ^_^ hope you get this rank soon thank you!yeah hope this too ^^

Lanttu wrote:

The mp3 is really quiet.. Make it louder please. ;_; eh I don't know how.lovhin456 has already made it louder.

Also, there's no preview point set.


[Kyubi]
Lot's of weird spacings here.. ._o Sry.Beginner mistakes, huh?

00:28:464 (6) - Is this jump necessary? New combo.
00:32:928 (x) - Add note here?
00:37:571 (7,8,9,10,11) - What the heck is this? New combo on (7) just making it a bit harder..
00:40:428 (7,8,9,10,11) - Again, new combo on (7)
00:47:928 (5,6) - Delete (5) and make the slider start from 00:47:928? hmm nah
00:50:607 (4) - This feels REALLY out of place here.. Maybe just move it to where the first three notes are? yes and it looks even better so ^^
01:02:035 (4) - ^.^
01:22:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ....WHAT IS THIS. A IMPOSSIBLE INTENSE DEATHSTREAM JUST x/c+mouse CAN MANAGE.lol jk deleted.

[Roflninja's Biju]
00:44:178 (8) - Maybe new combo here?
01:11:321 (5) - One grid down