1. BUBBLES (2,57 stars, 83 notes)
2. RAINBOWS (4,86 stars, 189 notes)
3. STARS (4,39 stars, 129 notes)

banvi wrote:

SPOILER

General
Add "Vocaloid" in source. OK~
Delete "Vocaloid" in tags , add "Vocaloid2" in tags. OK~
This song composer is name withheld by request. So we don't know compose name.
BUBBLES
00:42:336 (3) move 1 right?(Gris LV3) OK~
STARS
I think okay.
RAINBOWS
00:14:303 (1) move 1 down? OK~
00:15:778 (1,2) move 1 left? OK~
00:17:991 (5) ^ OK~
00:38:647 (3) ^ I think this is better at center ^^;
00:53:155 (4) move 1 down? OK~
01:02:254 (7) move 1 up? I think this is better like that ^^;
01:24:631 (7,8,9) add jump?(my suggestion) OK~

Thismap is very nice～
star & gl
I hope thismap become ranked soon.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset:+5 OK~
it seems you need a approachcircle.png, because you have hitcircle and hitcircleoverlay. OK~
it's far better to use soft hitsounds sample than normal i think... but your choice. I think normal suits this map better.

[BUBBLES]
00:30:532 (3,4) - 3- 1 grid left, 4- 1 grid right+ 1 grid down? OK~
00:52:172 (2) - the second and third point 1 grid left to get more symmetry. OK~

[STARS]
00:27:582 (5,6,7) - a tiny nazi here. OK~
01:11:106 (3,4) - spacing OK~

[RAILBOWS]
RANKS XD
00:37:418 (9,10) - turn off grid snap and make them align with (8)? OK~
01:04:221 (6) - ugly. Fixed~

not much to point out since i don't know how to deal with normal hitsounds orz. ;w;'

Garven wrote:

I really like the subtle storyboard. ^^

Your use of whistles are kind of weird to me, but it's not bad either.

[BUBBLES]
00:22:668 (1) - Maybe be a bit soon after the spinner for the easiest diff Fixed~
00:59:800 (1) - Lower this one grid so the end of the slider isn't sticking into the slider prior. It's not breaking distance snap that much anyway. OK~

[STARS]
00:56:111 (4,5,6) - This spacing on purpose? Yes.
01:02:259 (4) - Maybe try to reform this so it isn't sticking into the slider after it? OK~

[RAINBOWS]
Nice and relaxing. I like. Yay~ ^^

Always a pleasure to mod your maps. Good job!

Neethime wrote:

[BUBBLES]
00:15:291 (1,1) - maybe new combos here is not necessary? Yes they are~ :'3
01:02:013 (3) - new combo OK~

[STARS]
00:15:045 (1,1) - maybe new combos here is not necessary? Yes they are~ :'3
00:37:914 (6,1) - new combo from 6 OK~

[RAINBOWS]
00:14:800 (1,1) - maybe new combos here is not necessary? Yes they are~ :'3
00:37:177 (8) - new combo OK~
00:58:324 (2) - adjust this slider to be more symmetrical like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13058 OK~
01:15:783 (7) - new combo OK~

I must star this!lol

Clare wrote:

hihi~

[BUBBLES]
00:47:750 (3) - new combo? OK~
01:07:423 (3) - ^

[STARS]
00:22:423 (1) - end in 00:23:160 ?It didn't feel nice in my opinion. ;_;
00:27:341 (4) - new combo OK~
00:45:783 (1) - start in 00:45:783,and 00:45:783 add circle? OK~

[RAINBOWS]
01:23:037 (4) - 1 grid up OK~

nice map
star!

Davidz123 wrote:

[RAINBOWS]
00:19:472 - Add Note (?) * OK~
HP DRAIN go left 1 OK~
Overall Diff go left 1 OK~

[STARS]
00:04:964 (1) - Remove Note
00:04:841 - Add Slider
EG. | | |
Place slider on 00:04:841, slider track going left to white tick and reverse back to 2nd blue tick. If you don't understand this, I'll come back with an image. Sorry but it sounded pretty stupid when it started at blue tic.

[BUBBLES]
Fine.

+Star!~

Frill wrote:

[General]

- delete osb file and full submit There is a storyboard~

[BUBBLES]

00:37:914 (2) - add finsih OK~
00:51:685 (1) - ^ OK~

[STARS]

00:44:800 (2,3,4) - this is spacing error.. 00:45:045 (3) - 1grid left 00:45:291 (4) - 2grid left ..It's repaired. OK~



The this map is overall beautiful.

[DBF] wrote:

[BUBBLES]
00:29:554 (1) - clap. OK~
01:09:390 (4) - KIAI time off.
01:09:636 - KIAI time start. I changed the kiai so that the fountain will come at the first beat, hope you don't mind. ^^

[STARS]
00:25:865 (1) - put it to closer for (3). I don't wanna~

fix KIAI time like in easy. OK~

[RAINBOWS]
all fine.

fix KIAI time like in easy. OK~

Star~

Leorda wrote:

Oi

[General]
Your SB Element (sb.png) are too big, the maximum of SB Dimensions is 640x480 Ouch, I'll edit it tomorrow. ><;

[BUBBLES]
Rename to Bubbles? I like them being all caps. ^^

00:03:365 (2) - Finish? OK~
00:30:537 (3) - New combo?
01:03:488 (3,4,5) - Is this diff is easy diff? If yes, please no jump at here OK~
01:11:849 (4) - Move 1 grid left? OK~
01:13:078 (1) - Move 1 grid down? OK~

[STARS]
Rename to Stars?

00:02:499 (1) - Unsnapped, FUCK YEAH Oooops.
00:03:365 (2) - Finish? OK~
00:15:045 (1,1) - Remove new combo? No, I want to keep them in different colors. ;_;
00:23:406 (2) - Move 1 grid right? No, because I think it looks nicer this way. ;_;
00:32:013 (4) - New combo? OK~

[RAINBOW]
Rename to Rainbow?

00:02:499 (1) - Unsnapped, FUCK YEAH Oooops.
00:03:365 (2) - Finish? OK~
00:06:439 (5) - ^ Ouuuggh I was sure there was a finish here.
00:14:800 (1,1) - Remove new combo? No. ;_; ^

Good song
STAR

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Vocaloid isn't a source. Fixed~


BUBBLES

Fine

STARS

00:25:619 (3) - I don't think this note fits in. Remove it? OK~

00:29:554 (1) - Move here 00:29:677 -? Ummm, I don't see why should I do that

00:56:111 (4,5,6) - Spacing? Jumps

RAINBOWS

00:56:111 (4,5,6) - Spacing. Jumps

01:08:160 (6,1) - This is quite awkward to hit. Change it up a bit? It works fine for me. ;~;




Good maps. Star.

-_Kite_- wrote:

[RAINBOW]
00:33:611 (9) - Imo this beat doesn't fit, remove? Hmm, Ok~
00:59:062 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Imo this stream doesn't fit D: Try this maybe? I removed the middle one but kept the last note on red tick so it's not exactly the same as you suggested, but I hope it's better now. ;u;

Krisom wrote:

Please add "Colorful" in tags (english translation)
Uhhh, shouldn't the title be "Karafuru"? (wihout periods? even though the kanji is like this... カ・ラ・フ・ル ) EDIT: Or maybe even change it to KA · RA · FU · RU (though I'm not sure if osu! supports the "·")
Also, I think this song was from a group called "MihimaruGT", add them to tags? (or maybe even source, moving vocaloid to tags...)