1. Install (2.86 stars, 264 notes)
2. Uninstall (4.68 stars, 481 notes)

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. I feel the offset is too early. Add 10 ~ 15. I'm using the ranked version's timing so I think it should be correct o.o
2. Move the beginning of the last kiai time to 03:36:351. Done

[Install]
01:04:255 (8) - Silence the end. Done
01:54:459 (1) - Add finish. Done
02:08:418 (7) - Extend one 1/2 tick. Sounds awkward.. stacked a note at the end instead
02:15:275 (1) - Move the last point two tiny grid up. Then... Done
02:16:010 (2) - Move this one tiny grid up. Now they looks neater. Done
02:17:969 (4) - Move this one tiny grid up too. Done
02:26:541 (7) - Silence the end. Done
03:57:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm afraid this will be too hard for the easiest diff. Changed
04:13:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Changed
04:21:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Changed
04:23:357 (1) - Silence the end. Done

[Uninstall]
-- Add a warning SB before around 04:07:698. I don't know how to storyboard. Is it really necessary anyways? o.o
00:43:208 (5) - Move this one tiny grid left will make it looks neater. Done
01:04:270 (6) - Silence the end. Done
01:11:617 (3,4,5,6) - Don't soften their hitsounds. Bad idea. I think it sounds pretty good like this, no change for now.
01:19:453 (5,6,7,8) - ^ I think it sounds pretty good like this, no change for now.
01:20:188 (9,1) - Swap new combo. Done
02:08:433 (9) - Extend one 1/2 tick. Or reduce it one 1/2 tick then add one repeat. I don't like how that sounds ):
02:09:902 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move them all one tiny grid right. Done
02:22:759 (2) - Oh no no. I broke my combo here. Stack it under the end of the spinner instead of the beginning. Done
02:40:270 (7) - Add new combo. Done
02:55:453 (6,7,8,9) - Don't soften their hitsounds. Bad idea. Done

Star.

Garven wrote:

Yay, I can finally mod back for the time you modded my map, hehe.

[General]
I hate to say it, but I like the third kiai time starting at 03:36:336 instead of where it is now. That's right where the bridge hits a good apex into the chorus again, and the soft finish would help accent the fountain.
I really like the ending spinner. Fits really well with that last chord.
The bg is kind of fuzzy. :/

[Install]
At the very beginning, you have a lot of unused timing points from Uninstall as a template. Get rid of 'em.
The end of the last kiai is weird in this difficulty, as it is in the middle of a spinner. At least extend it to the end of the spinner.
This diff plays really nice.

[Uninstall]
Thank you for not overmapping this to death for the sake of difficulty.
...and that's about it. The 2x sliders were startling, but they .. sorta fit. Nothing to cry milk over.

Ekaru wrote:

Install:

Fine.

Glasslake wrote:

Don't complain about something being "too hard to be put in a Normal". thanks.

Derekku Chan wrote:

Glasslake wrote:

Don't complain about something being "too hard to be put in a Normal". thanks.

Sorry, but I have to. .-.

[General]
*Offset feels a bit early. Try 16,508.

[Install]
00:53:724 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - A bit too jumpy for a normal, imo. If this were in a harder diff, then it would be fine.
*Sliders around the Earth in the chorus are pretty cool
02:16:010 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Too jumpy, again
03:19:683 (1) - Might as well move this 1/8th back so that it sounds correct.

[Uninstall]
01:00:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I love this. Diamond -> Pentagon -> Hexagon <3
02:06:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And a perfectly-spaced heptagon around the Earth <33
02:08:418 (9) - expected this to end on the next red tick.. (or at least a note like in the other diff)
03:19:622 (1,2) - Bleh, these are kinda hard to hit on-time without music. Could you make this a slider?
03:20:663 (3) - move back 1/8th

My only "real" problem with this map is that I think [Install] is too hard to be the easiest diff in the set. It could be toned down by using closer spacing, getting rid of some single-note offnotes, and etc., but I think that making a third difficulty would provide a better spread than just two diffs. Do you think that you could make a third, easier difficulty? (It doesn't even have to be mapped to the end of the song, since it's a 4 1/2 minute song.. @.@)

1. 00:22:377 (1,2) - 1 grid right
2. 01:01:561 (2) - add a back, then you should change the way you place (1,2,3)
3. 01:05:479 (1) - this is fantastic
4. 02:09:397 (8) - finish?
5. 02:22:622 (3) - make this a 1/4 beat long slider?

1. 00:32:663 (3) - put it at 00:32:540 and the same place as (2)
2. 01:54:826 (3) - ^
3. 01:19:438 (5,6,7,8) - their volume is quite low
4. 02:41:724 (3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 03:44:418 (3,4,5,6) - ^
6. check the spacings and make sure that they looks good in HardRock