You didn't follow everything I said in my previous post. If you just forgot or were confused that's ok, I'll explain again. o:
Change these first:Artist - Utada Hikaru
Offset - 11,728 (Previous post offset was wrong)
1. Click the compose tab and look on the top right where it says Beat Snap Divisor. Change that to 1/2.
2. Click the timing menu on the top and select Resnap All Notes. This will make all your sliders/spinners/hitcircles move on top of the white + red ticks so they are on time with the music. Everytime you change the offset, you should do this.
Normal:I'll help you fix what you have right now. Only do the following if you did everything above.
00:06:858 (1) - Move this over to the left on top of the white tick.
00:12:117 (1) - ^
00:15:624 (2) - Move this over to the right on top of the white tick. Shorten this slider so the repeats are snapped on the ticks.
00:28:091 (1) - Move this over to the left on top of the white tick.
00:29:066 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:37:053 (1) - Either shorten this slider or make it longer so the repeats are snapped on the ticks.
00:39:585 (2) - Move this over to the left on top of the white tick. Shorten this slider so the repeats are snapped on the ticks.
00:42:117 (3) - ^
00:46:403 (1) - Shorten this slider so the repeats are snapped on the ticks.
01:01:793 (1,2) - Move to the left on white tick.
01:04:130 (2) - Move to the left on red tick.
01:13:806 (4,5) - Snap these on the white + red ticks.
01:14:260 (6) - Move to the left on white tick.
01:39:390 (1) - Shorten by 1/2.
01:41:727 (1) - ^
01:54:780 (1,2) - Move to the left on white tick.
01:55:753 (x) - Add note.
01:56:143 (x) - ^
01:56:338 (1) - Remove note.
01:57:117 (4) - Move to the left on white tick.
02:11:728 (1) - Shorten this slider so the repeats are snapped on the ticks.
02:13:871 (2) - Move to the left on white tick.
02:27:118 (3) - ^
02:40:169 (7) - Shorten this slider so the repeats are snapped on the ticks.
Make sure you have grid snap and distance snap on. Check the right side of compose mode and you'll see both of them. Your notes have random spacing and that is not good. With distance snap on, the editor will show you an acceptable distance between each notes. So go back through the entire map and re-align your notes. You can change how far each note can be placed by changing the distance snap spacing. Hold alt and on the top right the slider should change to "Distance spacing".
After you do all these changes, go back through the map and make sure you understand exactly what you did. Even after you make these changes, your map has no flow. When mapping, try to make it enjoyable and use different patterns. Keep a consistent pace going. All the minibreaks you have don't really help. For example: 01:09:779 (2) - The minibreak after this 2. What's the reason for it? You mapped her saying the exact same thing at the start of the chorus, why not now? So map some of those minibreaks while keeping everything above in mind.
If you don't get anything, just ask!