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Oriental ST8 - SQUEEZE

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xBubu
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xBubu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年4月24日 at 下午 10:28:58

Artist: Oriental ST8
Title: SQUEEZE
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJ MAX Trilogy
BPM: 147
Filesize: 16121kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.99 stars, 92 notes)
  2. Hard (4.58 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Insane (4.95 stars, 419 notes)
Download: Oriental ST8 - SQUEEZE
Download: Oriental ST8 - SQUEEZE (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd beatmap
Last edited by xBubu , edited 26 times in total.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
good job xbubu
royathrun
18 posts
Joined June 2009
royathrun
star~
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Offset 2185 (resnap all notes)
    • Remove countdown
    • You should make another diff
[Easy]

  • • 00:59:327 (9,1) - Spacing
    • 01:01:980 (1,2) - ^
    • 01:15:042 (5,1) - ^
    • 01:20:550 (break) - This break is huge :? Is it necessary?
    • 01:56:470 (1,2) - Spacing
[Insane]

  • • 00:22:593 (1,2,3,4) - This part is evil: make the spacing easier
    • 00:24:327 (7,8,1,2) - ^
    • 00:25:042 (1,2,1) - ^
    • 01:20:550 (x) - Add a break
    • 02:00:145 (x) - ^
    • 02:08:715 (1,2,3,4) - This part is evil: make the spacing easier
    • 02:10:450 (7,8,1,2) - ^
    • 02:11:164 (1,2,1) - ^
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
for excellent mapper 8-)
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

tsukamaete wrote:

for excellent mapper 8-)
mod in-game, so give kudusu
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • • Offset 2185 (resnap all notes)
    • Remove countdown
    • You should make another diff I will make hard diff
[Easy]

  • • 00:59:327 (9,1) - Spacing
    • 01:01:980 (1,2) - ^
    • 01:15:042 (5,1) - ^
    • 01:20:550 (break) - This break is huge :? Is it necessary?
    • 01:56:470 (1,2) - Spacing
[Insane]

  • • 00:22:593 (1,2,3,4) - This part is evil: make the spacing easier
    • 00:24:327 (7,8,1,2) - ^
    • 00:25:042 (1,2,1) - ^
    • 01:20:550 (x) - Add a break
    • 02:00:145 (x) - ^
    • 02:08:715 (1,2,3,4) - This part is evil: make the spacing easier
    • 02:10:450 (7,8,1,2) - ^
    • 02:11:164 (1,2,1) - ^
All fixed!
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
蓝色为建议

Easy
slider速度减点？
00:02:185(1) - 加finish(并使这个finish降低音量)
00:08:715(1) - 加finish
00:26:674(2) - 加finish(end的音量降低)
00:51:164(4) - 加whistle
00:55:654(X) - 加一个note,用soft的finish hitsound
00:59:327(9) - 在开始加入whistle
01:01:164(3) - 加whistle
01:03:817(5) - 这个的间距发生变化,而且意义不大
01:12:184(5) - 加whistle
01:14:225(3) - 加whistle
01:51:164(9) - 同上
01:53:509(2) - 同上(音量感觉应该适量减小)

Insane
00:02:185(1) - 加finish
00:08:715(1) - 加finish
00:14:429(4) - 在end加finish(适当减小音量)
00:32:797(x) - 缺一个note感觉上
00:39:736(4) - 这个音量调整下?
01:20:348(1) - finish
好有难度~XD
star~
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

H-boy wrote:

蓝色为建议

Easy
slider速度减点？
00:02:185(1) - 加finish(并使这个finish降低音量)
00:08:715(1) - 加finish
00:26:674(2) - 加finish(end的音量降低)
00:51:164(4) - 加whistle
00:55:654(X) - 加一个note,用soft的finish hitsound
00:59:327(9) - 在开始加入whistle
01:01:164(3) - 加whistle
01:03:817(5) - 这个的间距发生变化,而且意义不大
01:12:184(5) - 加whistle
01:14:225(3) - 加whistle
01:51:164(9) - 同上
01:53:509(2) - 同上(音量感觉应该适量减小)

Insane
00:02:185(1) - 加finish
00:08:715(1) - 加finish
00:14:429(4) - 在end加finish(适当减小音量)
00:32:797(x) - 缺一个note感觉上
00:39:736(4) - 这个音量调整下?
01:20:348(1) - finish
好有难度~XD
star~
done!
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hard
00:08:715(x) - 加一个finish note
00:31:368(5) - add whistle
00:37:899(10) - end的finish去掉,开始处的声音减些会更合适
00:43:613(8) - whistle

I的 00:31:776(1) 的slider弄成对称的？
其余没的多说了...
hard很好~kudosu star~
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

H-boy wrote:

Hard
00:08:715(x) - 加一个finish note
00:31:368(5) - add whistle
00:37:899(10) - end的finish去掉,开始处的声音减些会更合适
00:43:613(8) - whistle

I的 00:31:776(1) 的slider弄成对称的？
其余没的多说了...
hard很好~kudosu star~
all fixed~
-Sai-_old
6 posts
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-Sai-_old
居然网页错误。。不信加不上
Breeze
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4,949 posts
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Breeze
Timing听起来没问题

[General]
  1. 所有难度设一个相同preview time
[Easy]
  1. 这个应该是normal...居然才一星...
  2. 这HP drain Rate也太低了,想死都难啊,至少升3格啊D:
  3. OA升1-3格
  4. 前后BSD有变化,easy里最好别这样,保持统一的BSD
  5. 00:56:062 (x) - KIAI这开始
  6. 00:59:940 (1,2,3,4) - spacing太近
  7. 01:20:348 (x) - KIAI这结束
  8. 01:33:001 (S) - spinner这结束
  9. 01:48:307 (x) - KIAI这开始
  10. 01:59:531 (x) - KIAI这结束
[Hard]
  1. HP drain Rate还是太低了,升5-8格
  2. 00:29:123 (2) - 感觉离(1)太近了点
  3. 00:56:062 (x) - KIAI这开始
  4. 01:20:348 (x) - KIAI这结束
  5. 01:48:307 (x) - KIAI这开始
  6. 01:59:531 (x) - KIAI这结束
  7. 02:14:429 (T) - 没有用到的timing section
[Insane]
  1. 00:56:062 (x) - KIAI这开始
  2. 01:20:348 (x) - KIAI这结束
  3. 01:35:246 (x) - 我觉得stream延续到这结尾note用finish比较好
  4. 01:48:307 (x) - KIAI这开始
  5. 01:59:531 (x) - KIAI这结束
soft clap很多地方听起大声了
star
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

Breeze wrote:

Timing听起来没问题

[General]
  1. 所有难度设一个相同preview time
[Easy]
  1. 这个应该是normal...居然才一星...
  2. 这HP drain Rate也太低了,想死都难啊,至少升3格啊D:
  3. OA升1-3格
  4. 前后BSD有变化,easy里最好别这样,保持统一的BSD
  5. 00:56:062 (x) - KIAI这开始
  6. 00:59:940 (1,2,3,4) - spacing太近
  7. 01:20:348 (x) - KIAI这结束
  8. 01:33:001 (S) - spinner这结束
  9. 01:48:307 (x) - KIAI这开始
  10. 01:59:531 (x) - KIAI这结束
[Hard]
  1. HP drain Rate还是太低了,升5-8格
  2. 00:29:123 (2) - 感觉离(1)太近了点
  3. 00:56:062 (x) - KIAI这开始
  4. 01:20:348 (x) - KIAI这结束
  5. 01:48:307 (x) - KIAI这开始
  6. 01:59:531 (x) - KIAI这结束
  7. 02:14:429 (T) - 没有用到的timing section
[Insane]
  1. 00:56:062 (x) - KIAI这开始
  2. 01:20:348 (x) - KIAI这结束
  3. 01:35:246 (x) - 我觉得stream延续到这结尾note用finish比较好
  4. 01:48:307 (x) - KIAI这开始
  5. 01:59:531 (x) - KIAI这结束
soft clap很多地方听起大声了
star
all fixed
這map貌似做得不好阿...
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Good Map... Nothing has to be modded for me :3
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

Kecco wrote:

Good Map... Nothing has to be modded for me :3
thx :D
Rex
76 posts
Joined October 2009
Rex
shoot ;)
touko_old
33 posts
Joined July 2009
touko_old
star，做的挺好
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
00:16:878 (3,4) - wrong spacing
00:51:164 (4) - new combo
00:55:654 (1) - delete
01:04:225 (6) - new combo
01:28:511 (1) - start on right white tick
01:47:899 (1) - delete
01:51:572 (10) - new combo

~Hard~
00:02:389 (2) - +1 repeat
00:04:021 (2) - ^
00:05:654 (2) - ^
00:08:919 - I don't like this part blank, try adding circles on Yo! voices
00:16:062 (2) - move 1/4 left
00:19:327 (2) - ^
00:22:593 (2) - ^
00:27:593 (4) - +2 repeats
01:34:531 (2) - +4 repeats
02:02:184 (2) - move 1/4 left
02:05:449 (2) - ^
02:08:715 (2) - ^
02:13:715 (4) - +1 repeat

~Insane~
00:02:185 (1,2,3,4) - wrong spacings
00:08:919 - I don't like this part blank, try adding circles on Yo! voices
00:13:613 (1) - delete
00:13:817 (2) - move 1/2 left
00:14:123 (3) - move 1/4 left, no repeat
00:14:327 - add circle
00:22:593 (1,2,3,4) - so random - -" use circles instead
00:30:144 (10) - new combo
00:36:674 (7) - ^
00:49:327 (5) - ^
02:08:715 (1,2,3,4) - so random - -" use circles instead


+Star
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:16:878 (3,4) - wrong spacing
00:51:164 (4) - new combo
00:55:654 (1) - delete
01:04:225 (6) - new combo
01:28:511 (1) - start on right white tick
01:47:899 (1) - delete
01:51:572 (10) - new combo

~Hard~
00:02:389 (2) - +1 repeat
00:04:021 (2) - ^
00:05:654 (2) - ^
00:08:919 - I don't like this part blank, try adding circles on Yo! voices
00:16:062 (2) - move 1/4 left
00:19:327 (2) - ^
00:22:593 (2) - ^
00:27:593 (4) - +2 repeats
01:34:531 (2) - +4 repeats
02:02:184 (2) - move 1/4 left
02:05:449 (2) - ^
02:08:715 (2) - ^
02:13:715 (4) - +1 repeat

~Insane~
00:02:185 (1,2,3,4) - wrong spacings
00:08:919 - I don't like this part blank, try adding circles on Yo! voices
00:13:613 (1) - delete
00:13:817 (2) - move 1/2 left
00:14:123 (3) - move 1/4 left, no repeat
00:14:327 - add circle
00:22:593 (1,2,3,4) - so random - -" use circles instead
00:30:144 (10) - new combo
00:36:674 (7) - ^
00:49:327 (5) - ^
02:08:715 (1,2,3,4) - so random - -" use circles instead


+Star

All fixed!
Thx for your mod ;)
orioncomet
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orioncomet
[Easy]
01:01:980 (1,2) - abit hear to read for Easy look like hidden note when playing, imo
01:54:838 (5) - wrong spacing

[Hard]
00:06:266 (3) - spacing?
01:20:654 - add break?

[Insane]
01:27:287 (3) - new combo?

starr ~
xBubu
248 posts
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Topic Starter
xBubu

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
01:01:980 (1,2) - abit hear to read for Easy look like hidden note when playing, imo
01:54:838 (5) - wrong spacing

[Hard]
00:06:266 (3) - spacing?
01:20:654 - add break?

[Insane]
01:27:287 (3) - new combo?

starr ~
All fixed~
Thx ;)
gdeath
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Joined May 2009
gdeath
All fine to me
Star.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO!

OMG ANOTHER EUROBEAT!!

[Easy]
Please check this diff, are you following rhythm or vocal?
00:20:144 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:22:593 (2) - New combo
00:34:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:12:185 (5) - Move 5 grid down
01:15:654 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:17:287 (5) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:18:919 (6) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider and 4th repeating slider
01:33:613 (B) - I think the breaks are too long
01:54:838 (5) - New combo and add a finish hitsound

[Hard]
01:20:654 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?
01:59:940 (B) - ^

[Insane]
01:20:552 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?

Great song
STAR
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

OMG ANOTHER EUROBEAT!!

[Easy]
Please check this diff, are you following rhythm or vocal?
00:20:144 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:22:593 (2) - New combo
00:34:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:12:185 (5) - Move 5 grid down
01:15:654 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:17:287 (5) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:18:919 (6) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider and 4th repeating slider
01:33:613 (B) - I think the breaks are too long
01:54:838 (5) - New combo and add a finish hitsound

[Hard]
01:20:654 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?
01:59:940 (B) - ^

[Insane]
01:20:552 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?

Great song
STAR
Thx ;)
all fixed!
loading127
13 posts
Joined March 2009
loading127
~star!
Shinkuu
231 posts
Joined June 2009
Shinkuu
c(づ￣ 3￣)づ ❤star❤
Trans_Am
85 posts
Joined August 2009
Trans_Am
:oops:
lincya
1 post
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lincya
STAR!
hvick225
352 posts
Joined November 2008
hvick225
=w=
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
@.@ video is kinda flashy
hmm... do you know how to add hitsounds to slider repeats? some sound lacking

Easy- pretty fair and easy... could've focused less on vocal, but fine
the notes that are 1/2 next to each other could look better (maybe stack), but no big deal
01:48:307 - don't use full volume suddenly (compared to the first kiai section and the other diffs)

Hard- Good~
00:07:899 (3) - ..just stack this please
00:08:715 (4,5) - sounded like it could find on the (4) instead, maybe remove 5 and add finish hitsound to 4?
00:16:878 (1) - almost sounds kinda weird since 00:15:246 (1) has 4 repeats, and this note as 5.... though I do here some extra sound near the end... what do you think?
00:20:144 (1) - add some whistles to ends/repeats, this slider seems like a slight gap in hitsounds
00:24:225 (3) - ^
00:25:654 (4) - ^
00:27:593 (4) - wouldn't a finish hitsound fit the end nicely?
02:06:266 (1) - same as 00:20:144
02:10:347 (3) - ^
02:11:776 (4) - ^

Insane- wah, surprise jumps... fairly extreme too... ;-;
00:08:715 (4,5) - same comment as Hard
00:20:654 (7) - would sound better ending on the "whoa!" sound imo (00:21:368) (respace if you change)
01:29:123 (5,10) - people are not ganna like those sliders here >: just make it all circles
01:31:980 (1) - I'm pretty sure your mapping the the guitar here... so... end this when the guitar ends please (01:33:001) (don't need to respace if you do change this)
01:35:144 - just add a note and stack 01:35:246 (1) with this combo (remove new combo too)?
Last timing panel is unused, remove~
Add some more whistles to the vocals you mapped (sorta like in Hard) cuz you added a few extra notes, but they don't really make any sounds.. (there were some gaps in the instrumental parts too, but not as noticable)

Looking good so far
xBubu
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Topic Starter
xBubu
Fixed!


Thx so more much for shinxyn's mod! ;)

About 00:08:715

DJPop wrote:

I don't like this part blank, try adding circles on Yo! voices
I also think so :?
Last edited by xBubu , edited 1 time in total.
xBubu
248 posts
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Topic Starter
xBubu
oops!
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[General]
Offset: -5 from current

[Easy]
01:04:225 (1,2) - swap new combos
01:56:266 (1,2) - ^
01:59:736 (4) - end the kiai here

[Hard]
00:45:042 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:49:327 (1) - ^
01:03:613 (1) - remove new combo?
01:20:348 (1) - remove new combo
Same with the repetitions afterwards
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Offset: -5 from current

[Easy]
01:04:225 (1,2) - swap new combos
01:56:266 (1,2) - ^
01:59:736 (4) - end the kiai here

[Hard]
00:45:042 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:49:327 (1) - ^
01:03:613 (1) - remove new combo?
01:20:348 (1) - remove new combo
Same with the repetitions afterwards
All fixed :D
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:
- Remove "djmax" from tags. It's already in the source. HOWEVER
- Instead of actually removing it, put a space between "dj" and "max", since some people search DJMAX as DJ MAX (like I used to :()

Easy:
- At the beginning, it was definitely Easy, but during the parts with Kiai Time, the rhythm got a bit too complicated for an Easy. If you know what I mean, I suggest remapping those parts to make it easier.
- I recommend making a Normal. Those parts I told you to remap were Normal material. Also, with the current difficulty spread, I don't think this is rankable...

Normal Mod~
01:00:751 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:55:649 (3,4) - ^

Hard:
- Recheck the spacing for this diff. It's difficult to tell what the Distance Spacing is, since it changes a bit. If it isn't meant to change, you've got spacing errors in this diff.

Insane:
- HP Drain is ridiculous. I miss 2 sliders and boom, fail. Reduce by 1 or 2

Combo Mod~
00:45:241 (4) - New Combo.

Normal Mod~
- Check spacing with AIMod (Ctrl + Shift + A)
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Remove "djmax" from tags. It's already in the source. HOWEVER
- Instead of actually removing it, put a space between "dj" and "max", since some people search DJMAX as DJ MAX (like I used to :()

Easy:
- At the beginning, it was definitely Easy, but during the parts with Kiai Time, the rhythm got a bit too complicated for an Easy. If you know what I mean, I suggest remapping those parts to make it easier.
- I recommend making a Normal. Those parts I told you to remap were Normal material. Also, with the current difficulty spread, I don't think this is rankable...

I has make easier for this difficulty :D

Normal Mod~
01:00:751 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:55:649 (3,4) - ^

Hard:
- Recheck the spacing for this diff. It's difficult to tell what the Distance Spacing is, since it changes a bit. If it isn't meant to change, you've got spacing errors in this diff.

Insane:
- HP Drain is ridiculous. I miss 2 sliders and boom, fail. Reduce by 1 or 2

Combo Mod~
00:45:241 (4) - New Combo.

Normal Mod~
- Check spacing with AIMod (Ctrl + Shift + A)

All fixed!
xipan_old
54 posts
Joined March 2009
xipan_old
嗯 很刺激
不过 会不会太难？
那几段跳 如果摆得再近一点 也许玩的人会多一些
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

xipan wrote:

嗯 很刺激
不过 会不会太难？
那几段跳 如果摆得再近一点 也许玩的人会多一些
為了刺激 我放棄人氣
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Hard]
Nazi: 01:18:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 2 (level-3) grids right? Makes a small, unnoticeable jump and also arranges the beat in the middle.

Video is quite choppy...
xBubu
248 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
xBubu

JInxyjem wrote:

[Hard]
Nazi: 01:18:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 2 (level-3) grids right? Makes a small, unnoticeable jump and also arranges the beat in the middle.

Video is quite choppy...
Fixed! :D
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
insane:

01:10:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those jumps like that are too hard to catch , please make them more closed each other

00:08:914 (5) - remove it

easy:

lazy

overrall
remove the "DJ MAX"which from the tags cuz it already in the source
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
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YGOkid8

tsukamaete wrote:

remove the "DJ MAX"which from the tags cuz it already in the source
no it isn't :P
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJ MAX

notice the space? some people search by DJ MAX instead, that's why :(
xBubu
248 posts
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xBubu
OK, all fixed
Narutofoe
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Joined December 2008
Narutofoe
The Map needs a new skin maybe a whole skin the Treble clef blends in with the red too much
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
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