1. Eternal (4.92 stars, 391 notes)
2. Harmonious (2.18 stars, 159 notes)
3. Melodious (4.31 stars, 200 notes)

1. You could add Nexon devcat to source

1. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo
2. Map itsself is fine for me, but I'm afraid the spacing is a little far for a normal diff, and also there are few unusual spacing in this diff.

1. 00:30:683 (S) - This spinner is a little short, auto play could only get 1000 bonus, it should could get at least 2000 bonus. Even though this is fine for me, present rank standard don't like short spinner
2. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo

Breeze wrote:

Oh wow, Mabinogi, I love this game ヾ(≧∇≦*)
If you like, you could take any skin sprites from my Mabinogi map (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆ﾉﾉ
Girls' Generation - It's Fantastic

Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are just suggestions

[General]

1. You could add Nexon devcat to source

[Glasslake]

1. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo
2. Map itsself is fine for me, but I'm afraid the spacing is a little far for a normal diff, and also there are few unusual spacing in this diff.

[Eternal]

1. 00:30:683 (S) - This spinner is a little short, auto play could only get 1000 bonus, it should could get at least 2000 bonus. Even though this is fine for me, present rank standard don't like short spinner
2. 02:45:495 (S) - Spinner starts here better imo

So maybe you should add another easier diff if possible
Map is neat
star

• • 00:30:450 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:30:584 (end it here 00:31:398) and add a repetition at the previous slider (00:30:235 (6))

samipale wrote:

you really so like Tanaka Rie~

the rhythm of login music in this song mentions the time i played mabinogi...

note putting is so neat like DJPop and great placement.easy to mod and hard to find mistakes~

i just find one

[Eternal]
01:13:724(8) - spacing,or newcombo

and suggestion
also [Eternal]
01:46:747(1) - although there's new combo but the distance from previous note is too close so that when play it seems not good

here's your star

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. I think you don't need the "j-pop" and "jpop" tags since you can set this map to Pop [Japanese]. It's your desire, anyway.
2. I made a slidertick hitsound just for you. Please use it, so the claps on slidertick won't sound weird. Extract the .rar file to the map's folder.
3. Three minutes of play time with only 5 seconds of break? It's unrankable, especially for [Melodious] and [Eternal] diff. [!]

[Easy]
-- The distance is a bit too far for an easy diff.
-- This diff looks like a normal diff, but I can't consider this as it because the star rating is just 2.19.
-- I found some jumps here..
00:13:724 (1) - This spinner ends too close to the next note. It's too hard for an easy diff. I suggest you to reduce it to 00:15:584.
01:10:933 (1) - It's almost like an overlapping slider.
01:46:747 (1) - If you reduce this to the fit place, 01:47:677, it's too short. If you leave it, the next note is too close to the end of spinner. Remember, this is an easy diff. Consider replace spinner to some other thing?

[Melodious]
00:42:561 (2) - Add clap at the beginning to keep the clap pattern.
01:08:142 (1) - ^
01:12:328 (4) - Add clap at the repeat.
01:14:189 (6) - Add clap at the end.
01:47:212 (2) - Remove clap from the beginning.
02:15:119 (2) - Add clap at the beginning.

[Eternal]
01:08:724 (2) - Nah remove this. Overmapped.

Star.

Lissette wrote:

Eternal
00:30:468 (1) - start the spinner 1/4 later, so you can place a note here, sound good, dont you think? Fixed
01:46:631 - add note? That's kinda over-mapped ><, sorry not gonna do this
02:45:495 (1) - start in the red tick Fixed

Melodious
02:31:425 (1) - stack with prev slider start point, to make it look prettier Fixed
02:16:514 (3) - new combo Fixed

Star!