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Topic Starter
All notes are not snapped and random. It's unrankable.BTW timing is out.BPM is 165 and offset is 24030.
Sorry no star for now. You can PM me recheck this when you fixed it.
[Overall]
Use distanse snap for make.
Use sounds for map.
Try use xierbaliti's BPM and offset and try make easy, good easy. Use background's colors for bit's color.
Down slider tick, down slider victory.. really, try make easy with distanse snap, and write me in PM, i see it and modding~
star for good song~
Use distanse snap for make.
Use sounds for map.
Try use xierbaliti's BPM and offset and try make easy, good easy. Use background's colors for bit's color.
Down slider tick, down slider victory.. really, try make easy with distanse snap, and write me in PM, i see it and modding~
star for good song~
add a star :)
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just suggestion ~
give me kudosu
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just suggestion ~
SPOILER
[normal]
其實Normal的circle可以弄大一點的
這首歌的spinner其實還不錯
但是音不太準
00:53 slider
01:10 spinner
01:14 slider
01:20 circle
01:54 slider
03:45 circle
其實Normal的circle可以弄大一點的
這首歌的spinner其實還不錯
但是音不太準
00:53 slider
01:10 spinner
01:14 slider
01:20 circle
01:54 slider
03:45 circle
SPOILER
那希望你下次的map能ranking~~wwwww[hard]
開頭的大致上沒問題~
但是後面的slider和spinner跟circle之間相距太小
很容易會miss的
2:38 slider
2:58 circle = =
3:29 circle +1
還有麻煩你下次把BPM調慢一點
開頭的大致上沒問題~
但是後面的slider和spinner跟circle之間相距太小
很容易會miss的
2:38 slider
2:58 circle = =
3:29 circle +1
還有麻煩你下次把BPM調慢一點
give me kudosu
Hey there, the timing xierbaliti provided seems to be spot on.
Here is the re snapped version of normal. ( attachment )
Also for hard, reduce slider tick and I'd suggest to use a slider Velocity of 1.5, seems to be the best.
Also, distance snap is pretty much a must
This is a nice song, if you dont mind, I'd love to make you a guest diff, difficulty you can decide if you want a guest diff
Download: Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora) [Normal Resnapped].osu
Download: Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
Here is the re snapped version of normal. ( attachment )
Also for hard, reduce slider tick and I'd suggest to use a slider Velocity of 1.5, seems to be the best.
Also, distance snap is pretty much a must
This is a nice song, if you dont mind, I'd love to make you a guest diff, difficulty you can decide if you want a guest diff
Download: Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora) [Normal Resnapped].osu
Download: Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
thanks for letting me recheck it . It's better than before,but it's still unrankable.
You should use distance snap. Distance snap is very helpful to map. Teara's diff is very good, you can study something from it,and fix the map.
-Normal-
please make circle size larger.
And please use distance snap.
here's some suggestion
00:28:575 (4,1) - move (4) to 00:28:393 and move (1) to 00:28:757
00:43:484 (?) - add a circlre here.
00:45:484 (1) - start at 00:45:848 end at 00:47:302
01:05:120 (?) - also add a circle here?
01:37:848 (4) - end this silder at 01:38:030
01:55:666 (3) - so strange jump, it should be close to the end of 01:53:848 (2).
02:13:120 (1) - end this spinner at 02:14:575
02:55:302 (1) - end it at 02:56:393 and add a new repeat slider start at 02:56:757 end at 02:57:848
02:58:757 add a circle here and move 02:59:302 (1) - to 02:59:120(red line)
03:27:302 (1) - like 02:55:302 (1) , two sliders here.
-Teara-
00:34:211 (1) - end at 00:34:575?
00:36:939 (1) - end at 00:37:848 is better. ._.
You should use distance snap. Distance snap is very helpful to map. Teara's diff is very good, you can study something from it,and fix the map.
-Normal-
please make circle size larger.
And please use distance snap.
here's some suggestion
00:28:575 (4,1) - move (4) to 00:28:393 and move (1) to 00:28:757
00:43:484 (?) - add a circlre here.
00:45:484 (1) - start at 00:45:848 end at 00:47:302
01:05:120 (?) - also add a circle here?
01:37:848 (4) - end this silder at 01:38:030
01:55:666 (3) - so strange jump, it should be close to the end of 01:53:848 (2).
02:13:120 (1) - end this spinner at 02:14:575
02:55:302 (1) - end it at 02:56:393 and add a new repeat slider start at 02:56:757 end at 02:57:848
02:58:757 add a circle here and move 02:59:302 (1) - to 02:59:120(red line)
03:27:302 (1) - like 02:55:302 (1) , two sliders here.
-Teara-
00:34:211 (1) - end at 00:34:575?
00:36:939 (1) - end at 00:37:848 is better. ._.
Updated thanks
Download: Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
Download: Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
[General]
[Teara's Insane]
- I got 2 osb.file, - - - (Flora).osb and Seven Sisters of Purgatory - Nanairo no Niji Kakeyou (Flora).osb, they are not used, so delete them and full submit
- BG is a little big, the allowed biggest size is 1024x768 pixel
- Set a preview point on each difficulty
- Source : Rengoku no Nanashimai (seven sisters of purgatory or the seven stakes of purgatory)
- Add Teara to all difficulties' tag
- To all difficulties : Hit volume sounds loud, try 60%-80%
- There are many spacing errors, you should use distace snap to put notes
- Same as [Normal],spacing looked chaotic, however you could play spacing in harder diff. but it has some regular pattern to follow, maybe you could look at other mappers' map to learn how to play with spacing
- 00:34:120 (9) - put it at 00:34:211
[Teara's Insane]
- 00:34:757 (2) - I think it would makes pleyers misread its spacing :/ Suggest put it under the slider end of (1)
- 00:52:575 (2) - spacing a little far
- 01:33:939 (1) - unrankable spinner, autopaly should at least could earn 2000 bonus while this one could only get 1000
- 03:01:211 (1) - ^
- 03:44:848 (1) - ^
- 04:06:575 (1) - silence the spinner end better imo
[OVERALL]
Offset 755 snap 1/4th and also map on 1/4th
can't find anything else wrong
so star from me
Offset 755 snap 1/4th and also map on 1/4th
can't find anything else wrong
so star from me
pm me when all of the above suggestions have been fixed and I will mod
All done.. but lastBreeze wrote:
[Teara's Insane]
- 00:34:757 (2) - I think it would makes pleyers misread its spacing :/ Suggest put it under the slider end of (1)
- 00:52:575 (2) - spacing a little far
- 01:33:939 (1) - unrankable spinner, autopaly should at least could earn 2000 bonus while this one could only get 1000
- 03:01:211 (1) - ^
- 03:44:848 (1) - ^
- 04:06:575 (1) - silence the spinner end better imo
Thanks
Download: seven sisters of purgatory - Rengoku no Nanashimai (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
Seems you're AFK these days...
Fixed all the mod then call me back~
Fixed all the mod then call me back~
Topic Starter
oh.. i was updating on the beatmap but i neva wrote on a post
yea.. fixed the suggestions exept for the offset one =.=
yea.. fixed the suggestions exept for the offset one =.=
Request Accepted
Nothing's wrong with the BG
...Spoiler boxed
Nothing's wrong with the BG
...Spoiler boxed
SPOILER
Sorry Normal
Why so Linear?
00:29:484 (5,1) - i know it's different in combo but fix the spacing?
01:34:939 (1,2) - strange placing IMO :/
01:53:666 (2,3) - move 1/2 beat later, it sounds better
02:56:575 (2) - move to the next white tick and remove 1 repeat
02:59:757 (3,4) - sounds strange :/ especially using 1/4 beat in normal. remove (3)?
Hard
it's... WAY too easy to be called hard... and messed up
00:32:030 (7) - move to the next white tick
00:34:211 (9) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat
00:43:302 (8) - move to the next white tick
00:47:666 (1) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat and add 2 more repeats
00:49:484 (1) - ^
00:52:030-00:55:666 sounded really strange :/
01:02:575 (5) - move to the next white tick
01:10:575 (1) - the slider vector line = Orz, no problems here tho
01:16:393 (1) - add 1 more repeat
01:17:848 (1) - ^
01:21:484 (1,2) - move to the next white tick
01:27:939 (1,2) - ^
01:30:848 (7) - ^
01:33:393 (11) - ^ and shorten the slider by 1/2 beat
01:37:848 (4) - lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat
02:23:120 (6,7) - spacing
02:24:575 (1,1) - unrankable, why? because the spinner's end time is the same with the slider beginning. move the slider timing a little bit forward OR shorten the spinner
02:28:757 (2,3) - move to the next white tick
02:53:666 (4,5) - oh no spacing _ _;
02:57:666 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - makes no sense with the song :/ change it
03:03:848 (3) - move to the next red tick
03:28:393 (2,3) - move to the next white tick
03:29:848 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again, makes no sense with the song. change it
03:33:120 (1) - shorten the spinner by 1/4 beat
Teara's Insane
some parts are undermapped for an insane diff
00:41:484 (3) - move 1 tiny grid down?
02:04:211 (7) - remove new combo?
Why so Linear?
00:29:484 (5,1) - i know it's different in combo but fix the spacing?
01:34:939 (1,2) - strange placing IMO :/
01:53:666 (2,3) - move 1/2 beat later, it sounds better
02:56:575 (2) - move to the next white tick and remove 1 repeat
02:59:757 (3,4) - sounds strange :/ especially using 1/4 beat in normal. remove (3)?
Hard
it's... WAY too easy to be called hard... and messed up
00:32:030 (7) - move to the next white tick
00:34:211 (9) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat
00:43:302 (8) - move to the next white tick
00:47:666 (1) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat and add 2 more repeats
00:49:484 (1) - ^
00:52:030-00:55:666 sounded really strange :/
01:02:575 (5) - move to the next white tick
01:10:575 (1) - the slider vector line = Orz, no problems here tho
01:16:393 (1) - add 1 more repeat
01:17:848 (1) - ^
01:21:484 (1,2) - move to the next white tick
01:27:939 (1,2) - ^
01:30:848 (7) - ^
01:33:393 (11) - ^ and shorten the slider by 1/2 beat
01:37:848 (4) - lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat
02:23:120 (6,7) - spacing
02:24:575 (1,1) - unrankable, why? because the spinner's end time is the same with the slider beginning. move the slider timing a little bit forward OR shorten the spinner
02:28:757 (2,3) - move to the next white tick
02:53:666 (4,5) - oh no spacing _ _;
02:57:666 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - makes no sense with the song :/ change it
03:03:848 (3) - move to the next red tick
03:28:393 (2,3) - move to the next white tick
03:29:848 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again, makes no sense with the song. change it
03:33:120 (1) - shorten the spinner by 1/4 beat
Teara's Insane
some parts are undermapped for an insane diff
00:41:484 (3) - move 1 tiny grid down?
02:04:211 (7) - remove new combo?
Topic Starter
its okkArusha Shuna wrote:
Request Accepted
Nothing's wrong with the BG
...Spoiler boxedSPOILERSorryNormal
Why so Linear?
00:29:484 (5,1) - i know it's different in combo but fix the spacing?
01:34:939 (1,2) - strange placing IMO :/
01:53:666 (2,3) - move 1/2 beat later, it sounds better
02:56:575 (2) - move to the next white tick and remove 1 repeat
02:59:757 (3,4) - sounds strange :/ especially using 1/4 beat in normal. remove (3)?
Hard
it's... WAY too easy to be called hard... and messed up
00:32:030 (7) - move to the next white tick
00:34:211 (9) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat
00:43:302 (8) - move to the next white tick
00:47:666 (1) - shorten the slider by 1/4 beat and add 2 more repeats
00:49:484 (1) - ^
00:52:030-00:55:666 sounded really strange :/
01:02:575 (5) - move to the next white tick
01:10:575 (1) - the slider vector line = Orz, no problems here tho
01:16:393 (1) - add 1 more repeat
01:17:848 (1) - ^
01:21:484 (1,2) - move to the next white tick
01:27:939 (1,2) - ^
01:30:848 (7) - ^
01:33:393 (11) - ^ and shorten the slider by 1/2 beat
01:37:848 (4) - lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat
02:23:120 (6,7) - spacing
02:24:575 (1,1) - unrankable, why? because the spinner's end time is the same with the slider beginning. move the slider timing a little bit forward OR shorten the spinner
02:28:757 (2,3) - move to the next white tick
02:53:666 (4,5) - oh no spacing _ _;
02:57:666 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - makes no sense with the song :/ change it
03:03:848 (3) - move to the next red tick
03:28:393 (2,3) - move to the next white tick
03:29:848 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again, makes no sense with the song. change it
03:33:120 (1) - shorten the spinner by 1/4 beat
Teara's Insane
some parts are undermapped for an insane diff
00:41:484 (3) - move 1 tiny grid down?
02:04:211 (7) - remove new combo?
thanx for all the suggestionsfix everything exept the ones i have to change
do it when i finish my hwHi!
抱歉使用中英结合...刚开始用英文mod的时候发现有些不会用英文说...英文太烂了见谅>_<
[General]
Set a preview point on each difficulty:Timing->Set Current Psition As Preview Point.
I'm not good at offset,I think both offset are good,ask MAT for help~
Delete .osb files~
[Normal]
HP drain and Overall Difficulty too high for normal
音效混乱,尝试音效模式?
建议:把1/2拍的note重叠起来会比较好看.把note的位置放的好看些~
00:34:211 (2,3) - Spacing?
00:32:757 (9) - Switch new combo?
00:35:302 (4) - New combo?
00:40:757 (5) - ^
00:42:757 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:44:030 (1) - ^
00:45:848 (1) - Start here 00:44:393?
00:54:393 (1) - 1 grid down?
00:56:393 (1) - Start here 00:56:030?
00:59:666 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:848 (3) - 1 grid down?
01:02:575 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:757 (3) - 1 grid down?
01:05:302 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:06:393 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:939 (1) - ^
01:11:666 (1) - ^
01:13:120 (1) - ^
01:16:393 (1)~01:21:848 (2) - Confusing new combo...
01:22:211 (3) - New combo and remove other new combo after this?
个人不喜欢不断的new combo,根据歌词或节拍设长一些的combo都不错~
01:53:484 (2) - Remove it?
02:00:757 (3) - Up 1 grid?
02:13:120 (1) - Start here 02:11:666 (1)?
02:23:302 - Remove break time?
02:31:302 (1) - 结束的地方不合适.两种方案,1:开始的地方不变,结束于02:34:939 (1),接着map.2:先map到02:34:939 设spin,结束于02:37:120~
03:38:939 (1,1) - 各减一次重复?
[Hard]
HP drain and Overall Difficulty too high!!!
New combo 混乱,参照normal
建议:把slider画的好看些~
00:32:030 (7) - White tick plz~
00:33:484 - I think you lost a note here?
00:47:666 (1,1,1,1,1) - What the hell of these slider...x_x
02:01:848 (9) - Red tick?
02:02:939 (1) - White tick?
02:15:302 (1,2) - Whats this spacing for?
[Insane]
00:41:484 (3) - 1 grid down?
03:59:120 (1) - End with white tick?
04:01:848 (1) - Move to white tick?
No star for now~
PM me if you fixed~
抱歉使用中英结合...刚开始用英文mod的时候发现有些不会用英文说...英文太烂了见谅>_<
[General]
Set a preview point on each difficulty:Timing->Set Current Psition As Preview Point.
I'm not good at offset,I think both offset are good,ask MAT for help~
Delete .osb files~
[Normal]
HP drain and Overall Difficulty too high for normal
音效混乱,尝试音效模式?
建议:把1/2拍的note重叠起来会比较好看.把note的位置放的好看些~
00:34:211 (2,3) - Spacing?
00:32:757 (9) - Switch new combo?
00:35:302 (4) - New combo?
00:40:757 (5) - ^
00:42:757 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:44:030 (1) - ^
00:45:848 (1) - Start here 00:44:393?
00:54:393 (1) - 1 grid down?
00:56:393 (1) - Start here 00:56:030?
00:59:666 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:01:848 (3) - 1 grid down?
01:02:575 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:757 (3) - 1 grid down?
01:05:302 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:06:393 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:939 (1) - ^
01:11:666 (1) - ^
01:13:120 (1) - ^
01:16:393 (1)~01:21:848 (2) - Confusing new combo...
01:22:211 (3) - New combo and remove other new combo after this?
个人不喜欢不断的new combo,根据歌词或节拍设长一些的combo都不错~
01:53:484 (2) - Remove it?
02:00:757 (3) - Up 1 grid?
02:13:120 (1) - Start here 02:11:666 (1)?
02:23:302 - Remove break time?
02:31:302 (1) - 结束的地方不合适.两种方案,1:开始的地方不变,结束于02:34:939 (1),接着map.2:先map到02:34:939 设spin,结束于02:37:120~
03:38:939 (1,1) - 各减一次重复?
[Hard]
HP drain and Overall Difficulty too high!!!
New combo 混乱,参照normal
建议:把slider画的好看些~
00:32:030 (7) - White tick plz~
00:33:484 - I think you lost a note here?
00:47:666 (1,1,1,1,1) - What the hell of these slider...x_x
02:01:848 (9) - Red tick?
02:02:939 (1) - White tick?
02:15:302 (1,2) - Whats this spacing for?
[Insane]
00:41:484 (3) - 1 grid down?
03:59:120 (1) - End with white tick?
04:01:848 (1) - Move to white tick?
No star for now~
PM me if you fixed~
Here is my updated version. reason some parts are under mapped is because there is little breaks and they serve as a "get ready for next part" =p also max score is also a factor
Also I prefer the 24,030 offset.
Download: seven sisters of purgatory - Rengoku no Nanashimai (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
Also I prefer the 24,030 offset.
Download: seven sisters of purgatory - Rengoku no Nanashimai (Flora) [Teara's Insane].osu
[Normal]
Set a preview point
Consider work more on Hitsounds
00:33:484 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem + alignment here
00:52:939 (1,2) - alignment?
01:02:211 (4) - this one is a lil bit too far. It breaks alignments
01:11:666 (4,5,6) - alignment + spacing here
01:33:120 (1) - stack with previous (1)
01:35:302 (x) - fill this hole.
02:32:030 (1,2) - spacing here
02:33:120 (3,4) - ^
02:09:484 (1,1) - align?
02:59:120 (1,2,3) - spacing here
03:23:302 (1) - put on line
03:31:120 (1) - align with previouses
03:34:575 (1,2) - align
03:35:302 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - this is pretty messy
You need to work more on that Diff ! Hitsounds are random, it's not really pretty, and new combo usage feels random too.
I hope that Hard is WIP, and that it's the very first version because it's ugly, I won't mod it.
[Teara's]
01:13:484 (1,3) - Symetry here
01:21:484 (1,2) - ^
01:25:120 (1,3) - ^
02:37:848 (1,2,3,1) - align all of these?
03:56:757 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like the spacing here...
04:01:939 (1) - Tip! Spinners are now centered !
Set a preview point
Consider work more on Hitsounds
00:33:484 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem + alignment here
00:52:939 (1,2) - alignment?
01:02:211 (4) - this one is a lil bit too far. It breaks alignments
01:11:666 (4,5,6) - alignment + spacing here
01:33:120 (1) - stack with previous (1)
01:35:302 (x) - fill this hole.
02:32:030 (1,2) - spacing here
02:33:120 (3,4) - ^
02:09:484 (1,1) - align?
02:59:120 (1,2,3) - spacing here
03:23:302 (1) - put on line
03:31:120 (1) - align with previouses
03:34:575 (1,2) - align
03:35:302 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - this is pretty messy
You need to work more on that Diff ! Hitsounds are random, it's not really pretty, and new combo usage feels random too.
I hope that Hard is WIP, and that it's the very first version because it's ugly, I won't mod it.
[Teara's]
01:13:484 (1,3) - Symetry here
01:21:484 (1,2) - ^
01:25:120 (1,3) - ^
02:37:848 (1,2,3,1) - align all of these?
03:56:757 (3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like the spacing here...
04:01:939 (1) - Tip! Spinners are now centered !
Topic Starter
=) remaped hard (and its not finished)
gonna finish soon
gonna finish soon
Topic Starter
bak from AFK~ sending requests to every1 to mod again