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4minute - Dreams come true

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RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 12월 19일 금요일 at 오후 12:42:32

Artist: 4minute
Title: Dreams come true
Tags: God of Studying
BPM: 165
Filesize: 3912kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Breezin' (1.95 stars, 141 notes)
  2. Cruisin' (2.35 stars, 228 notes)
  3. HardROCK! (3.72 stars, 404 notes)
  4. Sweatin' (2.65 stars, 302 notes)
Download: 4minute - Dreams come true
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is iNiS(EBA) style.
Last edited by RE1359EBA , edited 123 times in total.
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
안녕하세요

Entrance
  • 01:57:222 (4) 휘슬
    02:06:492 (4) 피니시
    02:53:754 (4) 뉴콤보
    03:05:387 (4) ^
Medium
  • 03:07:932 (10,11,12,1,2) 노말 치곤 어려운 패턴
Hardcore
  • 01:23:594 (1) 다소 보기 나쁜 점프..
    02:37:939 (5) 뉴콤보
    03:05:205 (7) ^
Extreme
  • 01:59:767 (x) 비트 추가
    02:42:029 (1) 피니시
스타
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
02:53:754 (4) 뉴콤보
[color=#4000FF]02:37:939 (5) 뉴콤보

Excuse me but what is this 'new combo'?
죄송하지만 '뉴콤보'가 무엇이죠?

그냥 새로운 노트로 바꾸라는 건가요?
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
02:53:754 (4) 뉴콤보
[color=#4000FF]02:37:939 (5) 뉴콤보

Excuse me but what is this 'new combo'?
죄송하지만 '뉴콤보'가 무엇이죠?

그냥 새로운 노트로 바꾸라는 건가요?
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc

RE1359EBA wrote:

02:53:754 (4) 뉴콤보
[color=#4000FF]02:37:939 (5) 뉴콤보

Excuse me but what is this 'new combo'?
죄송하지만 '뉴콤보'가 무엇이죠?

그냥 새로운 노트로 바꾸라는 건가요?
(5) 를 (1) 로 바꾸라는 뜻입니다.
안타깝지만, 위에 포스트에 give kudosu 눌러 주시면 안되나요?
원래 모딩해주면 쿠도수를 줘야 합니다.
이 포스트에는 주지 마시고요..
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
배경 이미지를 640x480 800x600 1024x768 그외 등등
이중 해야 화면에 다 채워짐
오프셋 다시 맞춰 주시고.. 스페이싱도 조금 그렇네요
내가 모딩 늅이라 뉴콤보 모딩만 할게요-어디까지나 의견
Entrance
00:41:150 (3) - 뉴콤보
00:42:241 (6) - ^
00:48:694 (3) - ^
01:06:143 (2) - ^
01:17:776 (2) - ^
01:29:410 (5) - ^
01:57:222 (4) - ^
02:10:127 (2) - ^
02:21:761 (2) - ^
02:50:118 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
02:50:482 (2) - 뉴콤보

Medium
00:42:241 (7) - 뉴콤보
00:48:694 (4) - ^
01:28:684 (5) - 뉴콤보 해제
01:29:047 (1) - 뉴콤보
01:57:222 (5) - ^
02:37:939 (5) - ^
02:53:754 (3) - ^
03:05:388 (3) - ^
03:07:023 (8) - ^

Hard core
00:41:150 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:42:241 (8) - ^
01:07:779 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
01:09:052 (6) - 뉴콤보
02:11:763 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
02:13:036 (6) - 뉴콤보

Extreme
00:42:241 (8) - 뉴콤보
01:09:052 (6) - ^
02:13:036 (6) - ^
02:53:754 (8) - ^
02:54:117 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
03:05:387 (8) - 뉴콤보
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
inis스타일은 모딩이 어렵다고!

스타!

EDIT : 왜 쿠도수?!....ㄷㄷ
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

lRasl wrote:

EDIT : 왜 쿠도수?!....ㄷㄷ
어이쿠!
제가 모딩으로 오인하고 쿠도스를 줬군요...
죄송합니다. :oops:

쿠도스 해제했습니다 'ㅂ'
mm201
osu! Alumni
4,495 posts
Joined August 2008
mm201
Wow, it looks like we have ourselves an authentic apprentice here! :)

Offset: 655
BPM: 165.000
(there should be only one section)

All time offsets are from this new timing.

Entrance:
  1. 00:48:745 (3) - Move back by a 1/4 or otherwise just get rid of this note.
  2. 01:00:291 (1) and repeats - This is okay, but consider shortening by a 1/2.
  3. 01:53:018 (1,2,3) and repeat - Spacing. Try moving (2) down by 3 grids or so.
  4. 01:55:927 (1,2,3) and repeat - Spacing. Try moving this combo a little further down and spacing them further apart.
  5. 02:47:382 (2) - Spacing. Move left by a couple of grids.
  6. 02:50:109 (2) - Move the New Combo from 02:47:927 (1) onto this note.
  7. 02:50:836 (4) - This long n00b slider with a zillion rebounds is tacky.
  8. 02:56:654 (4) - Spacing. Move left by a few grids.
  9. 02:59:018 (2) - Same as ^ only right.
  10. 03:01:927 (1,2) - Take off the whistle. The hitsounds here should be 2 claps.
  11. 03:02:473 (3) - See 02:50:836 (4).
Medium:
  1. 00:39:836 (7) - Move back by a 1/4. Respace accordingly.
  2. 00:45:654 (6) - ^
  3. 00:48:745 (4) - Move back by a 1/4 or otherwise just get rid of this note.
  4. 01:04:473 (2) and repeats - Shorten by a 1/2.
  5. 01:23:382 (6) - Move up by a grid.
  6. 02:27:382 (6) - ^
Hard core:
  1. 00:39:846 (5) - Move back by a 1/4. Respace accordingly.
  2. 00:41:574 (2,3) - gudospsdygr6ebdxs (m980-ese for "this should be symmetric")
  3. 00:41:937 (3,4) - Spacing. Try moving (4) up.
  4. 00:45:664 (5) - Move back by a 1/4. Respace accordingly.
  5. 01:00:301 (1,2,3,4) and repeats - ARRRGGH! Too many whistles/claps!
  6. 02:54:664 (3,4) - I find this stack confusing since it's found right next to another which is faster.
Extreme:
  1. Normally, Hard Rock difficulties will be mixed up with a few different patterns rather than just flip/circle size/approach rate changes.
Please ask if you'd like some extra symmetry naziing.
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
make sure,you fix MetalMario201's mod
if you fixed,repost my queue :3

star!
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello.

my mod
SPOILER
General
Open file and delete .osb file please.
I think , Volume of hitsounds is a bit big. Please turn down 1~2.
Entrance
ok
Medium
02:27:564 add note?(new combo)
Hard core
02:27:564 add note?(new combo)
Extreme
02:27:018 (4) move to 02:27:200(white line) and put on (5,6).

Nice map , star~ ;)
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
[quote="banvi"]
ok
Medium
02:27:564 add note?(new combo)
Hard core
02:27:564 add note?(new combo)
Extreme
02:27:018 (4) move to 02:27:200(white line) and put on (5,6).[quote]

All Done. :)
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
You ignored my rule but because you're EBA-style and decided to bump my queue I'll mod anyway

Entrance
00:43:200 (1,2,3,4) - Move a grid up. Also, remove new combo on (1).
01:59:927 (1) - I don't think this fits, and it's not like an iNiS easy to put a spinner in the middle of a section IIRC. Replace wtih beats.
02:10:109 (1) - Symmetry. I think there are also sliders like this previously on. Doh.
02:41:564 (2) - Spacing? Kinda.
02:42:029 (1) - Again with the spinner.
02:57:382 (1,2,1) - Reverse selection?

Medium
00:42:291 (7,1) - Symmetry.
00:46:109 (1) - Spacing.

Hard core
00:41:200 (5) - Symmetry. Half a grid right. Yes.
00:46:654 (4,5) - Symmetry.
01:25:019 (6) - Symmetry.
01:27:927 (6) - ^
02:50:473 (7) - Spacing. Also maybe center (6,7).
03:10:291 (4,5,6,7) - Spacing

I'm assuming... the last one is the same so I won't mod that

Hope you don't get too many to the grid AIMod spacing suggestions.
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

IAmNotShinta wrote:

Entrance
00:43:200 (1,2,3,4) - Move a grid up. Also, remove new combo on (1).
01:59:927 (1) - I don't think this fits, and it's not like an iNiS easy to put a spinner in the middle of a section IIRC. Replace wtih beats.
02:10:109 (1) - Symmetry. I think there are also sliders like this previously on. Doh.
02:41:564 (2) - Spacing? Kinda.
02:42:029 (1) - Again with the spinner.
02:57:382 (1,2,1) - Reverse selection?
Medium Hard core
All Done.
Sorry about ignoreding your rule. :|
Last edited by RE1359EBA , edited 1 time in total.
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Don't think you read the rules of my Queue right. e.e''
( I Don't mod osu! maps, only taiko )
Star for nice map~

I wouldn't mind making a taiko for this though~
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi!

My suggestions:

[Generally]

  • 00:47:382:Add a Circle
    01:09:018(1,1):Spacing,too far
    02:13:018(1,1):^

[Ordinary]

  • 02:42:109:Spinner starts here? (Also in other diffs)
[Severity]

  • 01:27:927(6):Whistle at the end of this slider
    03:05:201(7):New combo

[EXTREME]

  • OD-1
    01:27:927(6):Whistle at the end of this slider
    03:05:201(7):New combo
Good map!

~STAR~
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

impossiblexu wrote:

[Generally]

]00:47:382:Add a Circle
01:09:018(1,1):Spacing,too far
02:13:018(1,1):^


[Ordinary]

  • 02:42:109:Spinner starts here? (Also in other diffs)
[Severity]

  • 01:27:927(6):Whistle at the end of this slider
    03:05:201(7):New combo
[EXTREME]

  • OD-1
    01:27:927(6):Whistle at the end of this slider
    03:05:201(7):New combo
Red Text : Done!
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-Background need be 800x600 or 1024x768, so look for another one or risize it
-The God of Study.png if u don't use this please delete it and this "THE GOD OF STUDY" too.
-Delete 4minute - Dreams come true (RE1359EBA).osb
-Offset 685 is better that u present offset, ask to someone else about it too

Well feels good mapped =)
Star~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

[General]
strange BG
02:03:927-02:15:745-02:27:564-02:44:655-02:56:927-03:08:473 Maybe kiai mode?

[Daringly]
00:47:381 (2,3) - 1 grid right
02:04:307 (1) - i think it's too high, move it down
02:15:941 (1) - ^
02:56:655 - add circle?

[Severity]
01:46:110 (4,5,6) - 1 grid down?
02:20:655 - add circle?
03:05:201 (7) - new combo?

[Extreme]
01:05:018 add circle?
01:16:655 - ^
02:20:655 - ^
02:23:382 (8) - may be like this?

02:52:111 (2) - 1 grid right
03:03:747 (2) - 1 left
star~
Daerren
28 posts
Joined January 2010
Daerren
goku Modding!

bg: where's the background? I have a black screen

[Generally]:
spacing issues. go over the whole map and fix the spacing.

[Daringly]:
spacing issue here, too

all these diffs have spacing issues. please fix that.
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

Delete the osb.file and then fully sumbit...
Consider adding Kiai Time...
Go through all your difficulties and correctly do the spacing...

[Generally]
Background? ADD ONE!!
Why is this using a 1/4 snap!? Use a 1/2...Daringly uses one! And this difficulty is suppose to be easier!
00:25:745 (2) - extend this slider to end at 00:27:200
00:28:655 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:29:927
00:30:836 (4) - change this into a slider that ends at 00:31:200
00:31:564 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:33:018
00:34:473 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:35:745
00:36:655 (4) - change this into a slider that ends at 00:37:018
00:40:291 (1) - make this a slider that repeats twice to end at 00:40:836 (removing the 2)
00:43:200 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:44:836 (removing the 2)
01:00:291 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:01:382
01:11:927 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:13:018
01:47:200 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:48:655
02:00:836 (3) - move this note to 02:00:655
02:04:291 (1) - extend this slider to end at 02:05:382
02:15:927 (1) - extend this slider to end at 02:17:018
02:23:564 (x) - add a note here
02:23:745 (4) - move this note to 02:23:927
02:39:564 (1) - extend this slider to end at 02:41:382
02:55:200 (3) - move this slider to 02:54:594 and shorten it to end at 02:55:836
02:56:291 (x) - add a repeating slider that repeats once and ends at 02:56:655
02:57:382 (1) - shorten this slider to end at 02:58:745
03:07:927 (4) - remove this note
03:08:291 (5) - remove this note
02:33:758 (1) - UNSNAPPED!
02:34:121 (2) - ^
02:45:755 (1) - ^
03:05:388 (1) - ^
03:05:932 (2) - ^
03:06:841 (3) - ^
03:07:932 (4) - ^
03:08:114 (5) - ^
03:08:295 (6) - ^
03:08:659 (1) - ^
03:10:840 (3) - ^
03:11:204 (1) - ^
CHECK YOUR SPACING!! GO THROUGH EVERY NOTE!!

[Daringly]
AIMOD detects 58 UNSNAPPED NOTES!!! FIX THEM!!
BACKGROUND!!! >.> Its not fun playing on a black screen...

[Severity]
25 UNSNAPPED NOTES DETECTED!!!
NO BACKGROUND!

[Extreme]
25 UNSNAPPED NOTES DETECTED!!!
NO BACKGROUND!!

Notice that I didnt go through the other 3 difficulties...you really need to get this map under control...
Spacing = Horrible
Snapping = To many non-snapped notes
Difficulties = All have no BG for some reason!

*sigh* Go through this mapset again...its very poorly done... >.> EDIT EDIT EDIT!! and once you've done that...EDIT SOME MORE!!!
Once you've fixed all of these problems, get back to me....

Work hard to show me that you can earn my STAR!

NO STAR!! (FOR NOW!)
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
God of studying…… ;)

[General]
Resnap all notes
This beatmap doesn't have BG Image,please fix it.
Delete the osb file,reupload it.
EBA style?You can use EBA skin & hitsounds.
No kiai? :?

[Generally]
00:27:381 (3,4,5) - Spacing
00:30:291 (2,3,4) - ^
00:33:200 (2,3,4) - ^
00:36:109 (2,3,4) - ^
00:39:018 (2,3,4) - ^
00:40:836 (2,3,4,5) - ^
etc.
So many spacing problem.Use AI mod to fix it.(Ctrl+Shift+A)

[Daringly]
00:27:200 - Add a circle
00:33:018 - ^
00:47:745 (3) - 2 grid right
01:03:200 (1) - Too close to the 01:02:655 (6)

[Severity]
01:04:564 - Add a spinner?
loser101_old
128 posts
Joined April 2010
loser101_old
Breezin'
Nothin'
Great.

Crusin'
same^

Sweatin'
same ^

Hard Rock
Same ^
Great Song :)
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
General;

Why is there no background?
There's a couple of unused files in the song folder, delete them, and full submit.
Perhaps you'd like to use the Ouendan names for the difficulties; Kigaru ni Ouen , Kakan ni Ouen, Gekiretsu ni Ouen and Karei ni Ouen, in order of easiest to hardest.
Lots of unsnapped notes, you might wanna check that out.

Generally;

00:42:291 (1,2) - That's a pretty big jump there. Flip 2, 3, 4 and 5? You might want to put a new combo on the 2 as well.
01:24:836 (3) - Down a grid, there's a bit of overlap with the previous slider.
01:27:745 (3) - Move this down a grid as well.
01:29:382 (4) - I think this should be below the slider, so vertically flip it.
01:49:927 (1,2) - There's a bit of overlap from the previous slider here. You could move this whole combo down and flatten it a bit, maybe.
02:39:564 (1,2) - Move down a lot of grids, I'd like this slider to be close to the bottom of the playing area.

Daringly;

00:47:745 (3) - Make it symetrical.
01:26:473 (1,2,3) - Move these up a bit, there's some overlap.
01:54:836 (6,2) - Overlap.
02:35:572 (6,2) - ^
03:08:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flip horizontally to prevent overlap.

I'll post more later.
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

DiamondCrash wrote:

Generally;
00:42:291 (1,2) - note 2 did new combo
01:49:927 (1,2) - note 1~7 move down and some deformed
ALL Done!

Daringly;
00:47:745 (3) - Make it symetrical. (What is symetrical?)
01:26:473 (1,2,3) - Move these up a bit, there's some overlap.
01:54:836 (6,2) - Overlap.02:35:572 (6,2) - ^
03:08:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flip horizontally to prevent overlap.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
general: offset: 675

[extremety]

approach rate -2

01:22:292 (3,1) - this jump is way too big

[severity]

nothing

[daringly]

nothing

[generally]

01:09:018 (1,1) - jump is too big for an easy difficulty
02:13:018 (1,1) - ^


good job

since there is a timing error, you must fix it and repost in my queue before i can star your map.

good luck~
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

my modding
[General]
모든 노트의 스냅을 맞추세요 지금 어긋나 있습니다.

[Generally]
00:48:655 (2) - remvoe whistle
01:00:291 (1) - End Notes remove finish
01:01:564 (2,3,4) - remove whistle and 01:01:564 (2,4) - add clap
01:11:927 (1) - End Notes remove finish
01:13:200 (2) - change clap
01:23:564 (1) - fix spacing
01:55:927 (4) - add finish
01:56:291 (5) - remove whistle
01:56:654 (6) - add clap
01:57:200 (1) - End notes change finish
02:17:200 (2) - change clap
02:23:382 (2,3,4) - hmm.. u can use slider?
03:07:932 (4,5,6) - ^

[Darngly]
01:29:382 (7) - remove clap
01:55:927 (1) - change finish
01:56:283 (2) - remove whistle
01:59:944 (1) - 02:03:927 End here
02:10:124 (1) - Start Notes add finish
02:18:291 (6) - remove clap
02:36:654 (1) - change finish
02:37:018 (2) - remove whistle
02:42:109 (1) - add finish

[Severity]
01:01:199 (2,3) - remove whistle
01:16:107 (5) - change finish
01:55:928 (1) - ^
01:56:292 (2) - remove whistle
02:36:655 (1) - change finish
02:37:019 (2) - remove whistle
03:05:201 (7) - add new combo

[Extremity]
AR -1 OD+1

01:55:927 (1) - change finish
01:56:291 (2) - remove whistle
01:58:291 (5) - change finish
02:36:654 (1) - ^
02:37:018 (2) - remove whistle
03:05:200 (7) - add new combo


전체적으로보면 난이도 별 노트 차이가 없네요... 단순히 Difficulty 만 올렸을뿐이지..
거기다 노트 박자가 보컬박자이신데..
엇박자가 너무 많아 난이도 낮은 맵도 어려워 보이더군요..
+star
Lunaba
62 posts
Joined September 2010
Lunaba
~Overall~
  1. Capitalize the title. (Be careful with that, i'll write how to do it at the end of the post)
  2. Offset: 680 (Why don't u take timing from ranked one?)
  3. "God Of Study" goes to souce i think.
  4. Hitsounds are a bit loud, decrease volume to 50%?
~Generally~
  1. AR +1
  2. HPDrain -1
  3. 01:09:018 (1,1) - Be careful with such a jumps and easiest difficulty. The space between them is too much.
  4. 01:22:836 (2,1) - I'm not sure if this is the same situation, but that's kinda confusing spacing.
  5. 01:24:836 (3,3) - Make those two slider 1/2 shorter and start 1/2 earlier.
  6. 01:42:473 (3,1) - Too big space.
  7. 01:45:382 (3,1) - Same.
  8. 02:13:018 (1,1) - Same.
  9. 02:45:745 (1,2) - Same.
  10. 02:57:382 (1,2) - SAME.
  11. 03:06:836 (3,4) - SAME.
Those spacings would give much problems to newbies. Make sure you took care about this.

~Daringly~
  1. No other mistakes, but very big spacing. Use 0,6x distance and re-space the map Orz.
I suggest you remove one of harder difficulties 'cause they look very much simillar.


You did well, but take care about easier ones.


(Oh, sorry me >///< I forgot to write about title.

So okay, you just need to do it without quitting the editor. Just use File->Open to change between difficulties. When you are sure that all difficulties have similar titles, don't quit, upload it.

If you'll have problems with that, catch me In-Game)
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
[General]
"God of Study" goes into Source +1
Offset: 667
Add kiai between 02:03:927--02:27:564 ?
BG need to resize to 1024*768.
Try these two
BG


[Generally]
Yea, EBA style, but you need to consider the spacing since it's a easy..

00:39:745 (4) - clap here
01:42:473 (3,1,2) - Spacing..maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/33512
02:01:382 (4) - whistle?

[Daringly]

00:26:836 (4,5) - Spacing ( You need spacing like 00:25:745 (2,3) )
00:32:655 (3,4) - ^
00:39:019 (5,6,7) - Whistle---Clap---Finish?

[Severity]
00:36:654 (7) - add whistle? (You have 00:30:836 (7,8) whistle here )
01:41:382 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these?
02:52:109 (2) - Move to here to increase the spacing between 02:52:109 (2,3) ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/33514
03:03:745 (2) - ^
03:06:291 (11) - Finish?

[Extremity]
Maybe delete this diff? Too many copy&paste from Severity...

Pretty EBA, good job :)

RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

Selee wrote:

[Generally]
00:39:745 (4) - clap here
01:42:473 (3,1,2) - Spacing..maybe like this?02:01:382 (4) - whistle?

[Daringly]
00:26:836 (4,5) - Spacing ( You need spacing like 00:25:745 (2,3) )
00:32:655 (3,4) - ^
00:39:019 (5,6,7) - Whistle---Clap---Finish
[Severity]
00:36:654 (7) - add whistle? (You have 00:30:836 (7,8) whistle here )
01:41:382 (1,2) - Increase the spacing between these?02:52:109 (2) - Move to here to increase the spacing between 02:52:109 (2,3) ?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/33514
03:03:745 (2) - ^
03:06:291 (11) - Finish
New Better BG. Thanks. :)
Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
Great job overall. My only suggestion would be to add kiai during the choruses.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Revived
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

Larto wrote:

Revived
Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkks!! :)
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
heyhey. >o<

General
Change title to Dreams Come True >_>
Add the bg (I see you have the file in the folder)
Aand thing about adding kiai time

Generally
Distance spacing is too high imo
00:31:018 (x) - add a note here
00:36:836 (x) - ^
01:57:200 (1) - start it at 01:57:018. If you do this, extend it to finish where it used to
02:23:745 (3) - remove this beat. If you do this, add one at 02:23:564 and another at 02:23:927. The way it is now sounds a little off imo
02:47:927 (1) - jump on the easier diff? o-o

Daringly
Same about Generally diff in distance spacing
03:07:564 (8) - new combo

Severity
00:27:200 (x) - add a note here
03:05:201 (7) - new combo

Extremity
03:05:201 (7) - new combo

It's all. Good luck here ^-^
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
Blue : Done!
thick Text : my comment.

Wiinter wrote:

Generally
Distance spacing is too high imo
00:31:018 (x) - add a note here
00:36:836 (x) - ^
01:57:200 (1) - start it at 01:57:018. If you do this, extend it to finish where it used to
02:23:745 (3) - remove this beat. If you do this, add one at 02:23:564 and another at 02:23:927. The way it is now sounds a little off imo
02:47:927 (1) - jump on the easier diff? o-o

Daringly
03:07:564 (8) - I do new combo 3:07:018 (7) instead of 3:07:564 (8).

Severity
00:27:200 (x) - add a note here
03:05:201 (7) - new combo

Extremity
03:05:201 (7) - new combo
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah
only suggestions

~General~
I recommend that you use the next kiai time : 01:00:291 - 01:23:564
in all diffies :D


~Generally~
- the spacing not the best, you should fix most suitable to a easy
USE THE DISTANCE SNAP

~Daringly~
01:45:200 (3) : down 5 grid and move 1 grid left

~Extremity~
01:22:291 (3,1) : WHATTT !! ?? fix it the spacing


star
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~General~
I recommend that you use the next kiai time : 01:00:291 - 01:23:564
in all diffies :D
This map is overally 'bit' hard.(But, Insane is exception)
If There insert kiai, very dazzling and be 'manic' and This map is 'many' hard. so, I don't permission. sorry

~Generally~
- the spacing not the best, you should fix most suitable to a easy
USE THE DISTANCE SNAP
I will fix spacing this difficulty's all note.(Distance spacing : 1.0x)

~Daringly~
01:45:200 (3) : down 5 grid and move 1 grid left

~Extremity~
01:22:291 (3,1) : WHATTT !! ??(DON'T OVER :? ) fix it the spacing
You appear too much concentrate at spacing.
I make many hard to insane. so, this note doesn't have fix
bold text : My comment
red text : was done or will done.
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
I saw nothing wrong. (im not very good at modding iNiS though)

But your BG wasnt showing up.

Re-put your background in and full submit.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph_here and here is my little mod:

Generally:

01:27:745 (3) - start at 27:927 ?
01:41:927 (2) - move to 42:109?
01:44:836 (2) - move to 45:018?
01:57:200 (1) - start at 57:018?
02:00:836 (3) - move to 00:655?
yeah..same suggestion to the following notes on the diff. OK here is my idea: I don't think the notes should follow the singer's voice on a really easy diff. especially on this song, many of the singer's voice starts on the red line.. I played with a little confuse because I try to follow the rhythm to play...and I think the same thing will happen to the people who didn't listen to this song before. well, just suggestion~

Daringly Severity Extremity:

OK I didn't find big mistakes on these diffs. But the Extremity is too similar with the Severity diff.... I wonder if it is just copy then paste and just make a little changes...? I think you should try to make them different. or I could say this..all theses diffs are using the saming patterns and things.. It is a little boring. the extremity can be much harder, add some notes to make it full.

Well , I think that's all. I didn't listen to much Korean songs, but this song is good~ and I kind of like your hitsounds.

star~
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
HI
Here's my Mod4Mod

[Generally]
00:27:381 (3,4,5) - 2 gird down
00:33:200 (2,3,4) - 2 gird up
00:36:655 (5,1) - spacing
00:42:291 (6,1) - ^
OH,I have to say, an Easy should have only 1 distance snap if the note's rhythm isn't uniform
So,I'll skip spacing errors
00:46:109 (1) - asymmetric
01:49:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too below
02:05:564 (2,3,4) - asymmetric,try to make the 2 and 3 into a slier I think will be better
02:27:564 - add a circle?

[Daringly]
00:47:745 (3) - asymmetric
01:21:927 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - do like this
SPOILER
02:25:927 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:58:836 (2,3) - do like this
SPOILER
02:14:473 (2) - start at 02:14:291
03:08:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - do like this
SPOILER

[Severity]
01:58:291 (5) - delete it
02:39:018 (4) - move to 02:38:836

[Extremity]
delete this diff or I won't star
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Generally]
00:27:381 (3,4,5) - 2 gird down
00:33:200 (2,3,4) - 2 gird up
00:36:655 (5,1) - spacing
00:46:109 (1) - asymmetric
01:49:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too below

[Daringly]
00:47:745 (3) - asymmetric

[Severity]
01:58:291 (5) - delete it (Consider...)
02:39:018 (4) - move to 02:38:836

[Extremity]
I don't think delete this difficulty. sorry.
DONE.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Extremity

00:41:200 > bad slider.
00:42:291 > ^
01:50:109 > slider :o
02:08:109 > ^
02:08:473 > ^
02:55:018 > ^
Star 8-)
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
모딩 들어갈께요~
초보지만 잘 부탁드려요~

[Generally]
00:46:109-전 노트와 간격이 좀 넓어서 초보자가 하기 약간 힘들것 같네요
01:11:927-전 노트와 간격이 넓은것 같아요.
02:15:927-^

[Daringly]
슬라이더가 HP바에 닿는게 조금씩 보이는데 한칸씩만 내려주시면 좋을것 같아요 :D

[Severity]
이상 없습니다~ :)

[Extremity]
역시 이상 없어요~ :)

딱히 지적할게 없을만큼 잘 만드신것 같아요
꼭 랭크되길 기원합니다
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

amnb9280 wrote:

모딩 들어갈께요~
초보지만 잘 부탁드려요~

[Generally]
00:46:109-전 노트와 간격이 좀 넓어서 초보자가 하기 약간 힘들것 같네요
01:11:927-전 노트와 간격이 넓은것 같아요.
02:15:927-^

[Daringly]
슬라이더가 HP바에 닿는게 조금씩 보이는데 한칸씩만 내려주시면 좋을것 같아요 :D

[Severity]
이상 없습니다~ :)

[Extremity]
역시 이상 없어요~ :)

딱히 지적할게 없을만큼 잘 만드신것 같아요
꼭 랭크되길 기원합니다
전부 수정했어요. :)
오랜만에 모딩 한번 해보네 ㅎㅎ
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello. Don't give kudosu. This is only for information!

I looked at your map, but unfortunately doesn't meet the requirements:

- Which easy, and normal difficulty?
- Easiest difficulty is too hard, and greater than 2,0 star!
- HARD ROCK is unrankable, because same as Sweatin'.
- Difficulties is messy.
- This rhythm is very weird/not to the rhythm.
...And much problem.

Please, read the ranking criteria: 87

This is not acceptable in 2014! Good luck!
[ Joey ]
390 posts
Joined May 2013
[ Joey ]
Hello! ~M4M~

Kazuya wrote:

Hello. Don't give kudosu. This is only for information!

I looked at your map, but unfortunately doesn't meet the requirements:

- Which easy, and normal difficulty?
- Easiest difficulty is too hard, and greater than 2,0 star!
- HARD ROCK is unrankable, because same as Sweatin'.
- Difficulties is messy.
- This rhythm is very weird/not to the rhythm.
...And much problem.

Please, read the ranking criteria: 87

This is not acceptable in 2014! Good luck!
So unfortunately, what Kazuya says is correct, I'll go through and post any big problems I see.


HARDROCK!
Wow this map feels old lol
I don't think a difficulty name like this is rankable
You miss very important notes in the song, such as these 00:26:473 - 00:27:200 - 00:27:927 - You shouldn't skip hardly any white ticks.
00:37:382 (1) - I don't recommend using long sliders like this
01:10:472 (11) - ^
00:48:836 - Weird spot for a break, I would map this part.
So you shouldn't map to pure vocals. Map the the music beat
01:06:109 (5) - NC should be here
01:20:473 (16) - Combo runs too long



You have the same problems in the other difficulties. Map more to the music, not only the vocals

I would also try to find a higher quality background.
And change the difficulty names to Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane.

Hope this helps!
Good luck!
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

Kazuya wrote:

This is not acceptable in 2014! Good luck!

[ Joey ] wrote:

HARDROCK!
00:48:836 - Weird spot for a break, I would map this part.
01:06:109 (5) - NC should be here
01:20:473 (16) - Combo runs too long
I also think that there are many problem in my map, because it maked before 3 years.
So, I will do large-scale construction this map if time is sufficient.
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