• 1. BPM 156 , Offset -150

WyndII wrote:

I Love it!!!!

Alace wrote:

Back to WIP

ayey wrote:

Hi!
I can only do Note Mod >.>
[Novice]
01:36:009 (x) - Add a note?
[Oh, sorry, I don't think it's good. I actually follow the vocal and also the rhythm.]
02:23:701 (x) - ^ if you follow vocal
[Oh, sorry, I don't think it's good. I actually follow the vocal and also the rhythm.]

[Junior]
00:21:778 (x) - Add a repetition?
[Yeah, good idea.][/b]
02:22:547 (x) - Add a note?
[Oh, sorry, I don't think it's good. I actually follow the vocal and also the rhythm.]
02:23:124 (x) - ^
[Oh, sorry, I don't think it's good. I actually follow the vocal and also the rhythm.]
02:23:701 (x) - ^
[Oh, sorry, I don't think it's good. I actually follow the vocal and also the rhythm.]
02:35:432 (1) - Remove it?
[This is also a good idea but, I don't feel the climax here if I remove it. So, sorry :3]

[Senior]
02:11:201 (1,2,3) - idk it feels weird
[Hmm.. I wonder what makes you feel like that..]

The SB is just beautiful , i love it <3
ed~
[Ahh, haha. Thanks for the star and for the mod :3]

JauiPlaY wrote:

:) nice map!
star 4 u~

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

You have 2 .osbs. Delete the one that isn't being used.
Aha, you must downloaded the older version. Please re-download the newer one lol :3
Why do you have a photoshop file?
Aha, you must downloaded the older version. Please re-download the newer one lol :3
Are you not going to finish the storyboard?
Aha, you must downloaded the older version. Please re-download the newer one lol :3
Keep your stack leniency the same across all the difficulties, unless you have a reason for it, that is.
I have a reason :3
Use grid snap 3 from now on, it makes things much neater.
I think there's nothing wrong with the hitcircles placements :3

Novice;

Your sliders are covering that cool SB at the start... maybe vertically flip everything up to 00:04:470 (1) - ?
I don't think the SB is that awesome lol. Well, it's a good idea anyway.
00:07:740 (1) - New combo?
Oh, why not? :3
01:35:624 (2) - New combo?
Oh, why not? :3

Junior;

Your notes are covering that awesome SB again.
I don't know how to fix this, so I just flipped it vertically.
00:04:470 (5) - New combo?
Oh, why not? :3

Senior;

02:54:086 (10) - Straight?
Oops, lol. Thanks for noticing :3

Call me back for a star.
Oh, I don't get any star? Lol thanks for your star and your mod :3
AND FOR YOUR PINK STAR YAAY LOL :3

samipale wrote:

Hi,hi
Yoo!

[General]
Many strange timing points?
03:20:336(1) - I saw you use time section to low the volume but why also use mute spinnerbonus.wav and spinnerbonus2.wav?
osu! doesn't let mapper to completely silence any sound. So, I manually silence it using custom hitsound.

[Novice]
01:22:932(7) - Hmm..This finish sounds too weird...for me.
The music has a sound effect like that. Fixed anyway.

[Junior]
Just suggestion,OA+1?I'm not sure
Oh, ok :3
01:03:316(4) - Here(leave 01:03:893 blank,not following the vocal) looks good, but plays bad imo(because of the placement cheated?)But 03:00:240 plays well
Ok, I fixed the (4). But only the beginning :3
01:17:163(1) - Finish instead of whistle?
Ehm.. Sorry, I like how the way it is :3
01:22:932(7) - Same as Novice
Yeah, fixed.
02:48:316(1,2,3) - Spacing lol
Anything wrong..? A little jump is okay I think.
Hmm..00:47:740(1),01:00:047(2),02:56:970(2) - missed clap like 01:46:201(1),02:44:663(2)?
Oh yeah @@ Thanks for noticing :3

[Senior]
01:17:163(1) - Same as Junior
Ehm.. Sorry, I like how the way it is :3
01:22:932(7) - ^
Yeah, fixed.
02:35:816(4) - ...clap?Since following the music
YOU ARE SMART!!
02:46:586(4,6) - The only place you use stack in this map...I thought it was 1/4 and got 100 at (6) D:
Err, sorry I don't understand..
02:56:586(2) - Oh yay Lukaluka :3 Here newcombo instead of 02:56:393?
lol haha. Sorry but, I separate them based on the style.
　
[Lyrics]
00:38:605(LyricsE-12png) - Is "...which always shows me the way" the english translated version of "教えてくれる"? I'm sure "Smiling"="微笑んでる" and "while standing in the wind"="風の中"
01:17:740(LyricsJ-201.png) - "そんな風に考えたら苦しくなるもんね" is the correct lyric (English needn't to change)
01:30:624(LyricsJ-26.png) - "残しておきたいのよ" is correct (meaning like "hope that leave me alone")
01:35:047(LyricsJ-27.png) - omg Isn't it the same with J-26?But the English is right...

The correct version http://music.goo.ne.jp/lyric/LYRUTND78892/index.html

IMO you don't change all the Japanese cursive syllabary/Chinese characters to Chinese characters/Japanese cursive syllabary because they can always be converted by each other.I just point out the places which are really wrong
This will answer all the lyrics mods. It's hard to separate a japanese lyric with the english lyric to two parts. So, I ignore the japanese -> english meaning, and separate the english lyric without seeing the japanese lyric. Sorry if you don't understand, but I think it's okay. Also, about the japanese lyric. I got the lyric from here: http://wenwen.soso.com/z/q136559483.htm So, err, which page is wrong?

Poor English again
. 　 .
　ω
I love that smiley lol! Thanks for modding and for your pink star yaaayy :3

02:46:586(4,6) - The only place you use stack in this map...I thought it was 1/4 and got 100 at (6) D:
Err, sorry I don't understand..

[Lyrics]
00:38:605(LyricsE-12png) - Is "...which always shows me the way" the english translated version of "教えてくれる"? I'm sure "Smiling"="微笑んでる" and "while standing in the wind"="風の中"
01:17:740(LyricsJ-201.png) - "そんな風に考えたら苦しくなるもんね" is the correct lyric (English needn't to change)
01:30:624(LyricsJ-26.png) - "残しておきたいのよ" is correct (meaning like "hope that leave me alone")
01:35:047(LyricsJ-27.png) - omg Isn't it the same with J-26?But the English is right...

The correct version http://music.goo.ne.jp/lyric/LYRUTND78892/index.html

IMO you don't change all the Japanese cursive syllabary/Chinese characters to Chinese characters/Japanese cursive syllabary because they can always be converted by each other.I just point out the places which are really wrong
This will answer all the lyrics mods. It's hard to separate a japanese lyric with the english lyric to two parts. So, I ignore the japanese -> english meaning, and separate the english lyric without seeing the japanese lyric. Sorry if you don't understand, but I think it's okay. Also, about the japanese lyric. I got the lyric from here: http://wenwen.soso.com/z/q136559483.htm So, err, which page is wrong?

Nivalis wrote:

Hi VanMoNky!
Hi Nivalis :3
Let's see...

[Novice]
00:00:240 (1) - Tested with DoubleTime + HardRock, and the reverse arrow touches the HP bar (which is quite annoying for me). Perhaps move it?
You grabbed the older version lol :3
01:41:778 (1,2) - The curves' angle aren't same, grid lv3 may help here
Honestly, I don't really understand what you mean..

[Junior]
02:12:547 (1) - Add whistle at end?
Hmm.. Only a single whistle is not good here..

[Senior]
Nothing found
Oh great

Can't find much... Star, awesome map!
Thanks for you mod :3 and also for your star

Arusha Shuna wrote:

damn you for being too awesome

Arusha Shuna wrote:

damn you for being too awesome

ignorethis wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

damn you for being too awesome

SPOILER

Normal whistle doesn't fit this song :/

don't kd me

Selee wrote:

I love this song >w<

ayey wrote:

Arghh....
This BM is too awesome
ed~

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-SiN- wrote:

☆⌒ヽ(*'､＾*) drop

aria.. zzz

Neethime wrote:

;) Wow awesome SB and Skin!
Thanks :3. Yeah, it's a nice skin. Shinde made it :3
And map itself is quite perfect to me,so let me try my best to give some suggestions?lol

[General]

- 00:06:20 This timing point,volume 50 seems a bit loud to me,40 may be better.
If you think so, alright.
- Is there any difference between timing point 00:06:20 and 00:13:12?If not,please remove second one.
It was yes, but since you ask me to lower down the volume, I think you're right.
- Personally,kiai time is a bit too long,many people are not fans of long kiai...so maybe just keep the third kiai section?
Hmm.. Well, I will definitely do this if other modder also ask me for this. Kiai time on every reffs is my style anyway.. :3


[Novice]

00:58:701 (1) - you may close grid snap and move slider point like this (notice left one)
Actually, I don't see any difference lol but I fixed it in my way.
01:00:240 (1) - ^ this one.
Oh, ok.

[Junior]

00:04:855 (2) - try to move this a bit lower? covered by HP bar.
Ok. :3
01:03:316 (4) - one more repeat?
Hey, it should be done @@ Someone also asked for it lol. Thanks :3
01:20:047 (4) - clap at end instead of start?
Oh, I don't think so.
01:20:816 (6) - clap at end
Hmm... Nope?

[Senior]

OD+1?
Oh no. This song is relaxing and catchy. Higher OD won't fit to the song.
00:02:932 (6) - All hail symmetry! click this
Ok :3
00:43:509 (5) - Nicer to look? click this
Yeah of course.

Your map deserve two stars~
Thanks for your mod! Especially for the pink star yaay :3

Arusha Shuna wrote:

i regret nothing

Shulin wrote:

Sorry for the delay.
It's okay :3 Thanks for your mod :3

General:

-- Offset seems early to me (I was lagging so I won't suggest one xD)
If other modder point this out again, I will try to fix it.
-- Max SB size is 800 x 600 right? If so then bg2 and kira are too big.
Fixed. I don't use "Kira.png" anyway, lol.

Novice:

00:29:278 (1) - The direction is a little odd to me, maybe rotate by 90 degrees.
Alright.
00:46:393 (1,1) – Slider slide sounds bad, use C1 or reduce volume?
Oh, ok.
01:31:009 (1) – Maybe extend this to 01:31:778 and add clap to keep with SB rhythm.
Fine.
01:37:163 (1) - Slider slide sounds weird appearing mid slider =S
Oh, ok.
01:44:855 (1,1) – Reduce volume of this slider slide (or C1)?
Oh, ok.
01:47:547 (2) - New combo.
:3
02:26:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
XD
02:47:163 (1,2) – Confusing stack?
Oh, it's okay. Newbie player must learn the approach circle.
03:20:432 (1) – End at 03:27:932 like other diffs.
No problem.

Some of the red tick notes felt too hard for Easy but I don’t know since I’m not a new player.
I don't think so, Shulin :3

Junior:

-- + 1 OD please? xD
Err, ok if that's fine with you.

00:40:047 (x) - Note?
Oh, no. This part, I follow the rhythm.
01:03:316 (4) – Remove return?
Ok, back to the it was. Someone was asking me to increased it. Lol.
02:28:316 (1) – Start at 02:28:124?
Ok.

Oh yeah, some note hit the hp bar like 01:28:509 (4) – but I don’t think that’s important.
Oh, it's not a big problem I think :3

Senior:

-- Remove countdown.

02:28:316 (1) – Start at 02:28:124?
Oh, haven't I?
02:55:047 (2) - The way this overlaps with 02:54:086 (10) - looks bad imo.
Okay, fixed.
03:20:336 (1) - Start at 03:20:432, end same place.
Alright.

All minor things, great map.
Yay! Thanks Shulin! Another pink star from you lol :3 :3 :3

Garven wrote:

Aaah, I'm so late. D:
It's okay, Garven :3

[SB]
J-28.png - I think "barefooted" is an awkward conjugation. "barefoot" would probably work better imo
Ok :3
J-35a.png - "Had just been brighten" With the context of "It's just that the future I envesion... "okay, that one needs fixing too. "Envisioned" Anyway, "It's just that the future I envisioned back then" "Had just been brighten" Is this supposed to be "brighter"?
Fixed :3

[General]
It sounds kind of weird to suddenly hear the slider slide during the kiai sections. I'd just keep them all silent.
Done :3

[Novice]
02:47:163 (1,2) - This might be a little tricky getting the rhythm down for new players.
I don't think so. It's only one there, so I hope new players could learn the approach circle.

[Senior]
Maybe up OD by one? It'd make 02:54:855 (1) - this part easier to read, if anything.
If I do it, then this diff will be no fun to play. Higher OD will ruin my diff since the song itself is a relaxing song.

Good work on this!
Thanks fo your mod :3 I love you.