ZUN - Toono Gensou Monogatari · forum

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-01-24T06:15:17+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月10日 at 20:46:53

Artist: ZUN
Title: Toono Gensou Monogatari
Source: Perfect Cherry Blossom
Tags: EVA-X chen
BPM: 141
Filesize: 5937kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0.72 stars, 91 notes)
Hard (4.24 stars, 201 notes)
Insane (4.83 stars, 463 notes)

Download: ZUN - Toono Gensou Monogatari
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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diff [Insane] is made from EVA-X's old map (Have his consent)--->http://osu.ppy.sh/s/4262

It's my first time to make a half star easy diff 0.0

^_^ thx to all ~

Last edited by Gens 2010-06-26T00:55:21+00:00, edited 54 times in total.

dkey

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dkey 2010-01-25T09:50:00+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-01-27T04:08:50+00:00

thanks ^.^

Randy96

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Randy96 2010-01-29T02:03:47+00:00

hey there
Can't wait to see it finished!

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-01-29T05:57:58+00:00

^.^ will add hitsound soon

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-01-31T15:43:57+00:00

moded on irc
Star~

Edit:Recheck~
Great!10vote~和我中期谱的图一样，用绿线射杀players听觉 lol
01:49:358 (1,1,1) - 建议remove new combo
我知道你想要用四个new combo分别来强调这里的四个重音，不过看起来不是很适合，主要是不太美观。
既然你其他地方也同样这样使用new combo我就不多说什么了.好坏与否，我也不清楚lol

[Insane]
02:03:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 对于这个串加whistle的方法，每相隔一条白线加一个whistle.其他串whistle加法同理
以下举个例子
02:04:145 (4,1) - remove whistle
02:03:613 (3) - add whistle
02:04:039 (3) - ^
02:04:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 用volume渐消来慢慢降低声音

[Hard]
00:22:124 --->>00:28:081 no clap,plz.use whistle only or other hitsounds~

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-02-02T16:52:29+00:00

要迟些才能再check and fix了... 忙啊忙

thx gd~

Edit:fixed...

v2b

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v2b 2010-02-03T09:31:23+00:00

☆

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-02-03T10:38:14+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-02-03T13:57:24+00:00

我很喜欢那个小圈slider的

fixed all.

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-03T16:39:19+00:00

hi~
做的不错嘛，easy的BG太可爱了XD
虽然我没有天然风那么大手笔，但是一个star还是可以的~

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-02-03T22:41:04+00:00

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

Offset: 1,705 (slightly ater than yours)
BG3 and BG2 are too big for backgrounds. I've fixed them for you, so just copy BG2 and BG3 from the attachment below into your folder.

Download: Backgrounds.zip

[EASY]

Looks good

[HARD]

No problems

[INSANE] (call this "EVA-X's Insane"?)

Pretty fun diff actually.

00:44:252 (5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps seem to come out of nowhere, and feel out of place. Remove them? or maybe just make the jumps smaller.
01:23:401 (1) - This spinner also feels a bit weird. It comes out of nowhere, and is very short too. You should map something else here methinks.
01:33:613 (1) - ^

Nice map. Quite fun, I must say

Starred

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-02-03T23:41:51+00:00

人才啊中国制图界的巨星 >_> 垫子嫁给我吧

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-02-04T04:09:14+00:00

hmm ~ ~0

fixed the jump,but I want to keep those spinner,because I can't get another mapping style to instead of ~ ~

network is bad,submit later

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-02-04T14:06:57+00:00

面对这些庞大的绿线，我该说什么好

star+kds star

Tonoko

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Tonoko 2010-02-04T15:18:07+00:00

thx to all star ~ ~

still working for this

TKiller

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TKiller 2010-02-05T11:02:06+00:00

hard is more like normal for me, think about renaming difficulty.

Insane:

0:28:933 - don't like how those beats under sliders sound. I'd remove them and make sliders longer by 1/4 timing division.

1:21:699 don't like second slider. Like it better when remove second slider and make first longer by 1/2 of timing division

2:11:911 and 2:13:613 - how about placing a beat at those places under the end of sliders?

last 2 sliders: after finishing all work mind about changing beat snap to 1/8 and move them exactly one timing division backwards in timeline, makes them sound better in my opinion.

Well, those are only my thoughts, nice work anyway. Though I think it need "harder" hard