This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 stycznia 2010 at 18:12:15

Artist: SR-71
Title: Goodbye
BPM: 87,44
Filesize: 3723kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,79 stars, 185 notes)
2. Insane (4,87 stars, 475 notes)
3. Kubu's difficulty (4,98 stars, 559 notes)

Download: SR-71 - Goodbye
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first map so, I really need your help, I gave my best and I had some modding, but I still want you to check the map.

Reupload!!
1.
*Fixed BPM
*Added "Speed Up" signs
*Few spacing and notes changes
***********Thanks to strager.
2.
*Added notes [Easy]
***********Thanks to me. : )
3.
*Fixed spacing[Easy], [Insane]
*Added hitsounds [Easy]
***********Thanks to fartownik, Xgor.
4.
*Added kubu's difficulty !
***********Thanks to kuburaczek!

IRC mawd.

Gogogo.

strager wrote:

IRC mawd.

Gogogo.

Very good help from him, it made my beatmap sound way better.

Only I can't see SpeedUps? ;o
To make the storyboard only on one difficulty, you need to mark the "Diff. Specific" option. It's in the down left side of the screen in the Storyboard mode.
Your background is really small. Try to find another, bigger one.

[Easy]
Change Circle Size to Large.
Decrease Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate by 3-4 ticks.
Try to not use too much 1/4 beats, it's an Easy.
Meh, slider speed changes aren't allowed on an Easy difficulty :/
00:22:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Distance it in 0,8x Distance Spacing value.
00:52:990 (6,7) - Spacing.
00:59:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move 1/4 forward and delete (6). These notes are unsnapped (started on blue tick).
01:04:826 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move 1/4 forward.
01:07:228 (1,2,3,4) - Sssspacing... and too hard for an Easy. You need to change this pattern. I'll explain you a way how can you fix it: delete 01:07:742 (2,3,4), add 2 repeats to 01:07:228 (1), then add a note here 01:08:257, here 01:08:600, and here 01:08:943.
01:12:717 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:24:554 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:24:897 (7,1) - Spacing. Jumps like this aren't allowed on lower difficulties.
01:31:416 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:35:876 (6,1) - ^
01:46:512 (7) - Hidden slider. Delete it and add 2 repeats to (6) instead.
02:02:809 (6,7) - Spacing.
[02:12:415] - Add a break.
02:39:348 (1) - This spinner is placed on actually existing note. Move it 1/4 forward.
02:59:934 (4,5) - Spacing.

[Insane]
Distance spacing is... really big value.
Decrease HP Drain Rate by 1 tick?
IMO there's too much 2x sliders on this difficulty. You should put them only during the refrain or 'faster/louder' parts of the song.
00:23:312 (4,5) - SPACING. Place (5) on vanishing (1).
00:26:057 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:53:847 (1) - Move this spinner 1/2 forward, end it here 00:55:391 and add a note here 00:53:847.
01:03:797 (1) - Delete new combo.
01:13:746 (1) - ^
01:38:106 (6) - New combo.
01:51:487 (1) - End the spinner here 01:53:030.
02:18:162 (9) - Move 1/4 back.
03:26:180 (3,1) - Spacing.
03:30:469 (3,4) - Spacing.

Meh, it was something. It's good for a first time. You must remember to distance the notes with Distance Snapping turned on. If you don't understand something, catch me on IRC and I'll explain it to you deeper. Your map needs much work, but I'll star because it has a potential. Have fun with fixing.

~Background~
The Backgrounds proportions aren't perfect and i suggest you resize it a bit.

~All difficulties~
Please remove the countdown (It sounds bad on this song)
Add a preview point at 00:43:897.
Maybe add some kiai time?

~Easy~
Use more distance snap please
Also add hitsounds
0:33:43 - This speed up doesn't fit at all
01:46:512 (7) -It's against the rulest to cover a slider with andouther slider

~Insane~
No visible errors from what i can see.

This map has a pretty long way to go but if you work hard it will be great.
You need to have a difficulty between Easy and Insane though, that difficulty jump is pretty harsh.
*star*

played and i have a feeling this can become a great first map

star from me

*sorry i can't make a diff,song doesn't suite my mapping style*

[General]

1. Capitalize 'Kubu's Difficulty'
2. Offset 22.775
3. Change hitcircle colours, they 'merge in' with the Background too much.
4. Delete .osb from song folder.

BPM 174,85.
Offset 22.785.

Contact me again after fixes, and I'll mod diff's.

So hard >A<
Star >w</

gogogogogo

Easy
00:26:915 (1) - remove new combo...
00:28:287 (2) - ...and then add here
01:34:161 (3) - spacing
01:40:679 (1) - I think this is a really short spinner for an easy difficulty
02:39:691 (1) - start the spinner at the next blue tick

Insane
00:26:400 (1) - remove new combo
03:09:026 (8) - new combo

kubu
Awesome!

BTW this map is awesome! Great job. Star