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DJ Sharpnel - 20031023

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Leorda
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Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 Februari 2010 at 20:37:25

Artist: DJ Sharpnel
Title: 20031023
Source: SharpnelSound
Tags: trance dance
BPM: 179,1
Filesize: 4199kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ballet (1,37 stars, 63 notes)
  2. Cheer (2,4 stars, 82 notes)
  3. Dance (4,36 stars, 128 notes)
  4. Freak (5 stars, 265 notes)
Download: DJ Sharpnel - 20031023
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd beatmap. Some Techno or Trance that make you feel better. Feel free to listen my map! This map contains skin, mp3, and background!
Update in December 23, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (VanMoNky and Lokamp suggestion), Insane difficulty (Freak) added.
Update in December 24, 2009 : Fix all difficulty execpt Ballet and Cheer (xxheroxx's suggestion), changes some difficulty name (Step to Dance)
Update in December 25, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (AngelHoney and Tanmak suggestion)
Update in December 26, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (Brezze, Armin, NoHItter, and Derekku Chan suggestion)
Update in December 29, 2009 : Changes some offset and BPM (Zekira's suggestion), Fix Freak diff (-SiN-'s suggestion)
Update in December 30, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (Zekira and abalee's suggestion)
Update in January 01, 2010 : Fix Cheer diff and change some skin color (Kytoxid's suggestion)
Update in January 02, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Gens, blissfulyoshi and Lissete's suggestion), slider5 added
Update in January 03, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (roxkyuubiforever and Doomsday93's suggestion)
Update in January 07, 2010 : Fix all diff (Lybydose and Shulin suggestion), skin added
Update in January 09, 2010 : Fix all diff execpt Ballet and Cheer diff (Lybydose suggestion)
Last edited by Leorda , edited 20 times in total.
Vanmonky
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Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

[General] (I'm still in tryout, learning to catch the right timing. Sorry if the offset's wrong.)
BPM : 179
Offset : 5420
I doubt about this but I think the song needs two timing points.

[Ballet]
The distance is a little too big.
01:12:402 (1) - Do not place a note close to the end of spinner. It's too hard for beginner since this is an easy diff.

[Cheer]
00:21:117 (3) - Distance error.

[Step]
Cool.

And star!
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Ballet
00:44:245 (3) - clap on this slider's end
01:12:402 - new beat
01:13:072 (1,5) - finish here
01:17:765 (1) - add clap on the 1st repeat of this slider
01:27:150 (2) - end it with clap

Cheer
00:08:715 (5) - clap the 4th, set only finish on 5th
00:24:469 (2,3) - link them with a slider
00:48:268 (1,1) - fill the break time between these beats!

Step
00:25:474 (spinner) - no hitsounds's volume for this spinner
00:48:268 (1,1) - again, fill the break time between these beats!
01:09:720 (spinner) - another spinner with no hitsouns's volume

That's a good start for this map! Star'd :3
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset: 5395

[Ballet]

It's ok

[Cheer]

It's ok

[Step]

00:40:223 (9) - New combo
00:54:972 (5) - ^
00:56:312 (9) - ^

[Freak]

00:57:569 (16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - What? This is unrankable. Do something else
01:13:743 (9) - New combo
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
I will mod it probably tomorrow :)
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

[General] (I'm still in tryout, learning to catch the right timing. Sorry if the offset's wrong.) I still can see those tiny words
BPM : 179
Offset : 5420 NO
I doubt about this but I think the song needs two timing points.

[Ballet]
The distance is a little too big.
01:12:402 (1) - Do not place a note close to the end of spinner. It's too hard for beginner since this is an easy diff.Fixed

[Cheer]
00:21:117 (3) - Distance error.Fixed

[Step]
Cool.

And star!

Lokamp wrote:

Ballet (Fixed)
00:44:245 (3) - clap on this slider's end
01:12:402 - new beat
01:13:072 (1,5) - finish here
01:17:765 (1) - add clap on the 1st repeat of this slider
01:27:150 (2) - end it with clap

Cheer (Fixed)
00:08:715 (5) - clap the 4th, set only finish on 5th
00:24:469 (2,3) - link them with a slider
00:48:268 (1,1) - fill the break time between these beats!

Step (Fixed)
00:25:474 (spinner) - no hitsounds's volume for this spinner
00:48:268 (1,1) - again, fill the break time between these beats!
01:09:720 (spinner) - another spinner with no hitsouns's volume

That's a good start for this map! Star'd :3

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset: 5395 Change!

[Ballet]

It's ok

[Cheer]

It's ok

[Step]

00:40:223 (9) - New combo (Fixed)
00:54:972 (5) - ^ (Fixed)
00:56:312 (9) - ^ (Fixed

[Freak]

00:57:569 (16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - What? This is unrankable. Do something else (I don't know what do something else? But I changes to repating slider)
01:13:743 (9) - New combo (Fixed)
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
Freak

00:20:698 (8,10,12) - remove ?
00:40:223 (1) - end at 00:40:726 ?
00:41:564 (1) - end at 00:42:569 ?
00:54:804 (8) - remove ?
00:56:145 (8) - ^
00:56:983 (9) - new combo ?
00:26:815 to 00:37:541 remove break time ? and add notes?

Dance

01:15:115 (1) - end at 01:15:618 ?

Cheer

?!?!?!??!?!

nice map~

star~ :) :)
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

AngelHoney wrote:

Freak

00:20:698 (8,10,12) - remove ? (Fixed)
00:40:223 (1) - end at 00:40:726 ? (Fixed)
00:41:564 (1) - end at 00:42:569 ? (Fixed
00:54:804 (8) - remove ? (Fixed)
00:56:145 (8) - ^ (Fixed)
00:56:983 (9) - new combo ? (fixed)
00:26:815 to 00:37:541 remove break time ? and add notes? (No)

Dance

01:15:115 (1) - end at 01:15:618 ? (no)

Cheer

?!?!?!??!?!

nice map~

star~ :) :)
Thanks AngelHoney, one word....
Moe Moe AngelHoney-chan
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~, Are you have good christmas time?

[Ballet]
all unsnapped.

01:12:434 (x) - Add note?

[Cheer]
all unsnapped.

[Dance]
Fine.

[Freak]
01:31:173 - 01:33:854 How try arranging low volume in first part, and higher and higher gradually?
Leorda
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Leorda

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~, Are you have good christmas time?

[Ballet]
all unsnapped. (Fixed)

01:12:434 (x) - Add note? (No, It's hard for beginner player)

[Cheer]
all unsnapped. (Fixed)

[Dance]
Fine. (Thanks)

[Freak]
01:31:173 - 01:33:854 How try arranging low volume in first part, and higher and higher gradually? (Fixed)
Thanks for modding ^^
Breeze
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Breeze
OK, here we gooooooooo mod~

[General]
  1. delete osb. file, it seems to be not used
  2. Since you have changed your offset, you should select all timing section and add the time you changed in offset to them all, it seems to be 12ms
  3. Still, reset preview time at 72434 in all diffculties
[Ballet]
  1. 01:25:171 (4) - clap instead of finish
[Cheer]
  1. fine
[Dance]
  1. 01:09:417 timing section - what's this timing section set for? If it doesn't mean something, please delete it
[Freak]
  1. suggestion - harder one doesn't mean smaller hitcircle, bigger one will played more comfortable, you could ignore it
  2. 01:31:173 - 01:31:508 - why just here KIAI time?
others seems good
star!
Armin
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Armin
Offset: 5402, then resnap all the notes

[Ballet]

No problems, just add more hitsounds.

[Cheer]

00:09:752 Clap
00:10:087 Remove the clap
00:23:160 Whistle
00:24:501 Whistle at the start+whistle at the end
00:42:936 Add a whistle on the repeat
00:46:288 Whistle

[Dance]

00:41:939 Clap
00:42:274 Remove the clap
01:15:123 Whistle at the end
01:16:799 Whistle
01:17:134 Remove the whistle at the start
01:23:168 Add a finish
01:28:531 Whistle at the start+whistle on the second repeat

[Freak]

No problems found.

Starred. :D
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Derekku
[General]
*"DJ" and "Sharpnel" aren't needed as tags since they would already be searched in the artist field. Having the title split as tags is fine though, I guess. :?
*Add an audio lead-in of at least one second, please.
*Phew, that's a bright spinner-circle xp
*Timing is off, but I can't figure it out. It's fine at the beginning, but after the first break, I stay 15-20 ms early until the end. I'm not sure if a second offset is needed in the song or if the whole thing is 20ms late. orz

[Ballet]
*Perhaps raise overall diff a tick or two?
The kiai starting on empty space is kinda awkward, so I'd extend the spinner one white tick.
The kiai could also be fixed to start on the white ticks (they're a little bit off), but that's just for neatness sake.

[Cheer]
*Perhaps raise overall diff a tick or two?
00:08:076 (3) - Expected a new combo here.
00:40:255 (5) - And here.

[Dance]
*Perhaps raise overall diff a tick or two?
00:25:506 (1) - Dunno why you have two inherited sections to silence this. (And I think it'd sound better with an audible finish, anyway)
01:09:752 (1) - Same with this. You have three sections on it, and the silence is just kinda meh.
01:31:205 (1) - And this one. Why the inherited section? <.>;

[Freak]
*>.> Is there a reason that the offset isn't set in this diff? Please set it to match the others' and resnap.
*Maybe raise overall diff one tick (and a bigger circle size?)
*Perhaps add kiai in the same spot as the other diffs? OR If you only wanted it for the last streams, you need to enable it for each inherited section. You only had it on the first. (At least one section looks unused, though)
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Overall
Delete .osb file and full submit

Dance:
00:25:474- Why is this uninherited?
Lots of unsnapped notes
Use AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A)

Freak:
Lots of unsnapped notes
Use AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: *wow for once I agree with xxheroxx's offset* 5395. I'm pretty positive about this.
Wait a minute...
BPM: 179.10. Darn it I knew something was incredibly wrong; it was sounding so late at the end. Don't forget to fix up all the slider lengths and stuffs.

Fix this first and post it in my queue again after you've done that. It's hard to mod an off-timed map D:
abalee
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abalee
agreed with Zekira's timing.

seems AIMod also could not find some spacing issuse...
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
F
01:09:800 (1) - 1/8 forward ?

Leorda wrote:

Thanks AngelHoney, one word....
Moe Moe AngelHoney-chan
>///<
Leorda
4,416 posts
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Topic Starter
Leorda

abalee wrote:

agreed with Zekira's timing.

seems AIMod also could not find some spacing issuse...
I already fix it.
Maybe AIMod is jammed
LOL
-SiN-
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-SiN-
YO! masih blm pny style sendiri ya.. klo kotak2 gitu tipe mapper baru (yg Freak).. :|
coba blajar jump notes.. lbh bnyk yg seneng ketimbang stream..

[Freak]
00:20:805 (8,9,10) - spacing
00:24:155 (1,2) - they are ugly.. make it symmetric

overall is good.. need a jumps imo

note: easy FC on freak xD 3x100
Leorda
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Leorda

-SiN- wrote:

YO! masih blm pny style sendiri ya.. klo kotak2 gitu tipe mapper baru (yg Freak).. :|
coba blajar jump notes.. lbh bnyk yg seneng ketimbang stream..

[Freak]
00:20:805 (8,9,10) - spacing
00:24:155 (1,2) - they are ugly.. make it symmetric

overall is good.. need a jumps imo

note: easy FC on freak xD 3x100
Makasih ya! Kalau distance spacingnya x1.0 nggak apa-apa kan kalau jump?
Biasanya kalo pattern saya sering yang zig-zag dan kotak, sayangnya :(
BTW, style gue ilang gara-gara di marahin sama BAT :(
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[Ballet]
01:23:786 (2) - maybe do something so that this note is directly on the y-axis?
(wait, I forgot to point out that before this the notes come too soon after a spinner for an Easy. But I dunno, might just be me overfanatic on Easy diffs)

[Cheer]
00:42:915 (1) - a bit nazi-ish but the slider is obviously not curved too well...
01:09:716 (1) - note so soon after spinner for a Normal? Might just be me again lol.

[Dance]
00:19:465 (2) - tail symmetry to the head
00:21:475 (1) - ^
(are the green points really not snapped to the ticks? I dunno, looks neater if you make them so)
00:42:915 (1,2) - sorry for being a bit picky on sliders, but I think they really look better if they're curved nicely with head-tail symmetry...

[Freak]
00:53:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing's orzviously screwed up...
01:23:122 (1) - why don't you make this look like 2?
abalee
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abalee
inherit the timing section in [Cheer] and [Dance], or delete them if useless.
after section inherited run the AIMod to check if any notes are not snapped.

Dance:
01:25:132 (6,1) - spacing.

others' are rankable.
Leorda
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Leorda
Thanks Ms. abalee for modding! And Mr. Zekira, I'm sorry I don't know what you mean....
BTW, what is proto-bubble?
-SiN-
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-SiN-
Abalee is a man.. LOL!
Leorda
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Leorda

-SiN- wrote:

Abalee is a man.. LOL!
Uhhhh, sorry. Ms. Abalee......
It's depending on avatar :cry:
Maybe abalee is Sissy!
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
ok :3

[Ballet]
Seems fine ^^

[Cheer]
Fine too ^^

[Dance]
Fine x3

[Freak]
ok <3

And that's all! I'm not good at all at mod sharp maps, but the map seems so correct <3 Starred
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

.osb file is unused; it can be deleted.
The first and last hitcolours are too similar; I recommend deleting #5.
DJ Sharpnel, being the artist, does not need to be included in tags; remove it.
Timing sections are inconsistent across the difficulties.

The following images are identical to the default one; delete them and force the default skin instead.
- sliderfollowcircle.png
- spinner-osu.png
- spinner-spin.png
- hit300.png
- hit300g.png
- hit300k.png

Remember to do a resnap and full upload after these changes.

Sliders are curved kinda weirdly. For example, 00:21:475 (1), 00:42:915 (1), 00:43:585 (2) on Dance are all not symmetrical. Adjusting them a little to make the end and start points at the same height will make it look much neater, in my opinion. These sliders exist throughout all difficulties, so I recommend going through them and making them neater.

[Cheer]

01:15:082 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I thought this looked messy. Put the 1 of the second combo right under the 1 of the first combo, and curve the 1 slider more so that its endpoint lands on 3. Then replace 2 with the new 1's horizontal reflection.

The other difficulties are fine, apart from what was mentioned above.

Star~
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]
The following images are identical to the default one; delete them and force the default skin instead.
- sliderfollowcircle.png
- spinner-osu.png
- spinner-spin.png
- hit300.png
- hit300g.png
- hit300k.png
Can I change the color skin?
That's skin is precious....
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Remember to do a resnap and full upload after these changes.

Sliders are curved kinda weirdly. For example, 00:21:475 (1), 00:42:915 (1), 00:43:585 (2) on Dance are all not symmetrical. Adjusting them a little to make the end and start points at the same height will make it look much neater, in my opinion. These sliders exist throughout all difficulties, so I recommend going through them and making them neater. (FIXED)

[Cheer]

01:15:082 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I thought this looked messy. Put the 1 of the second combo right under the 1 of the first combo, and curve the 1 slider more so that its endpoint lands on 3. Then replace 2 with the new 1's horizontal reflection. (I don't know what you mean.....)

The other difficulties are fine, apart from what was mentioned above.

Star~
Thanks for star!
Please proto-bubble!
BTW, what is proto-bubble?
Gens
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Gens
[General]
  1. You forgot to force default skin!
  2. The image "sliderb5.png" from the skin is missing!
[Cheer]

01:12:396 - Inherit this timing section.
01:33:842 - ^

[Dance]

01:09:720 - Inherit this timing section.
01:12:401 - ^

[Freak]

01:12:402 - Inherit this timing section.

~ ~ ~

I guess that's it. A proto-bubble (or pubble) is a new element in terms of the ranking process. It's the element that can happen before the common bubble, though it's optional. If you recieve a pubble, your map will get more attention~
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. You forgot to force default skin! You mean? Change the preferred skin to default? NO WAY!
  2. The image "sliderb5.png" from the skin is missing!FIXED
All Fixed
[Cheer]

01:12:396 - Inherit this timing section.
01:33:842 - ^

All Fixed
[Dance]

01:09:720 - Inherit this timing section.
01:12:401 - ^

All Fixed
[Freak]

01:12:402 - Inherit this timing section.

~ ~ ~

I guess that's it. A proto-bubble (or pubble) is a new element in terms of the ranking process. It's the element that can happen before the common bubble, though it's optional. If you recieve a pubble, your map will get more attention~
Wow, no-one give me a pubble :cry:
Can you give me a pubble?
Lissette
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Lissette
Ballet
reduce overall difficulty by one tick
slider velocity is the same as the higher diff, plz reduce it

Cheer
Resnap all notes
00:48:611 - you should map this break time, you already have two breaktimes and it's a short song (and is easy to map that part)

Dance
Resnap all notes
00:48:611 - you should map this break time too

Freak
Resnap all notes
00:48:611 -you should map this break time too
01:16:087 (3,4) - move half beat,remove one repeat of (4), and place a beat here 01:16:087
01:23:619 - add note
01:24:289 - add note
01:31:832 (9) - new combo
01:33:172 (9) - new combo

Star!
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Lissette wrote:

Ballet
reduce overall difficulty by one tick
slider velocity is the same as the higher diff, plz reduce it

Cheer
Resnap all notes
00:48:611 - you should map this break time, you already have two breaktimes and it's a short song (and is easy to map that part)

Dance
Resnap all notes
00:48:611 - you should map this break time too

Freak
Resnap all notes
00:48:611 -you should map this break time too
01:16:087 (3,4) - move half beat,remove one repeat of (4), and place a beat here 01:16:087
01:23:619 - add note
01:24:289 - add note
01:31:832 (9) - new combo
01:33:172 (9) - new combo

Star!
ALL FIXED
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Sorry for late reply.

I agree with Kytoxid on the comobo color issue. the first and fifth comobo color are too similar, so you should delete the fifth combo color.

Ballet:
Combo mod: (Since I didn't fully grasp your pattern on this diff, I did it where I thought it fit)
00:08:075 (4) - new combo
00:40:235 (2) - ^

Cheer:
Why is the slider tick 1 in this diff when every other diff has a slider tick of 2?
Combo mod:
00:50:956 (5) - new combo

Dance:
Combo mod:
00:21:475 (1,2,3) - fits your pattern of comboing more if you gave each of these their own combo
00:50:956 (9) - new combo

Timing section mod:
00:26:81 - Unneeded timign section. Please remove.
01:12:06 - ^

Freak:
Combo mod:
00:44:255 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:38:895 (1)?
00:46:936 (3) - ^
00:56:902 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to make this and the previous combo 8 notes long
01:16:752 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 01:13:736 (1)

Timing section mod:
01:31:17 - move back a quarter note


============
Nice map. Star.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Dance
01:15:076(1) - Turn it to another direction (south would be cool). The way that is now, looks like that the slider does have 2 loops, not just one.

Freak
I don't like diffs with tiny spacing but with a super fast overall. Makes the gameplay feel a bit unatural, I think :/ I would reduce, at last one >_<

All
The timing sections are off. Fix them, please.

Cool map! If you submit any other map, I would like to mod it >_<

Nice maps may get a star~
Gens
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Gens

Leorda wrote:

Gens wrote:

[General]
You forgot to force default skin! You mean? Change the preferred skin to default? NO WAY!
Well, it'd be way better if you do this, since you included many elements from the default skin (in another color) that might look weird using other skins.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

-offset: 5,409 (a little later than yours)
-It could be just me, but that BPM feels slightly off. It sounds too slow/too fast when i turn the BPM up/down by a small amount. It doesn't play too badly so for now ill assume that is just me
-Why have you got 4 combo colours set when you are only using orange and yellow? you should remove the two extra combo colours.

[BALLET]

00:22:815 (2) - Make this longer by 1/4?
00:40:235 (1) - ^

[CHEER]

Looks good

[DANCE]

00:22:731 (2) - Move this 1/4 forward. Sounds off where it is now. If you do this, move (3) a little closer to (2) as well.
00:48:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 etc...) - Long rows of beats like this quickly become boring. You should map some more interesting patterns here, like you have at the beginning of this map.
01:24:289 (x) - Beat here?

[FREAK]

Nothing pops out at me, so I guess this is fine, if only just

Well, Its much better and more interesting than the other map of yours I modded. Its got some flaws but its not a disaster

At least its worthy of a star from me this time around ;)
Leorda
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roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Dance
01:15:076(1) - Turn it to another direction (south would be cool). The way that is now, looks like that the slider does have 2 loops, not just one.

Freak
I don't like diffs with tiny spacing but with a super fast overall. Makes the gameplay feel a bit unatural, I think :/ I would reduce, at last one >_<

All
The timing sections are off. Fix them, please.

Cool map! If you submit any other map, I would like to mod it >_<

Nice maps may get a star~
ALL FIXED

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

-offset: 5,409 (a little later than yours)
-It could be just me, but that BPM feels slightly off. It sounds too slow/too fast when i turn the BPM up/down by a small amount. It doesn't play too badly so for now ill assume that is just me
-Why have you got 4 combo colours set when you are only using orange and yellow? you should remove the two extra combo colours.

[BALLET]

00:22:815 (2) - Make this longer by 1/4?
00:40:235 (1) - ^

[CHEER]

Looks good

[DANCE]

00:22:731 (2) - Move this 1/4 forward. Sounds off where it is now. If you do this, move (3) a little closer to (2) as well.
00:48:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 etc...) - Long rows of beats like this quickly become boring. You should map some more interesting patterns here, like you have at the beginning of this map.
01:24:289 (x) - Beat here?

[FREAK]

Nothing pops out at me, so I guess this is fine, if only just

Well, Its much better and more interesting than the other map of yours I modded. Its got some flaws but its not a disaster

At least its worthy of a star from me this time around ;)
FIXED ALL

Gens wrote:

Well, it'd be way better if you do this, since you included many elements from the default skin (in another color) that might look weird using other skins.
OH NO! WHAT WOULD I DONE!!!
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meh
Lybydose
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Popping pubble because one of the difficulties has extra uninherited timing sections

Dance

00:25:474 - Delete this timing section (or inherit it)
01:18:435 - ^

Make sure you resnap after you're done.

Fix your Kiai sections to begin at exactly 72,410 ms in all difficulties. Also, kiai turns off in the Freak difficulty earlier than the other difficulties. Make sure to set Kiai in all those timing sections at the end.

Everything else is just a suggestion; you don't have to change them if you don't want to. You have a few ugly sliders, and it would look nicer if you made them more symmetrical:

Ballet

00:06:749 (3) - The weird red point on this makes it look strange
00:10:769 (1) - ugly slider
00:12:109 (1) - ^

Cheer

00:23:499 (3) - ugly slider
00:46:950 (3) - ^
01:23:130 (1) - ^

Dance

00:18:139 (3) - slightly asymmetrical, but still noticeable
00:42:894 (1,2) - ugly sliders
Leorda
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Lybydose wrote:

Popping pubble because one of the difficulties has extra uninherited timing sections How Dare You

Dance ALL FIXED

00:25:474 - Delete this timing section (or inherit it)
01:18:435 - ^

Make sure you resnap after you're done.

Fix your Kiai sections to begin at exactly 72,410 ms in all difficulties. Also, kiai turns off in the Freak difficulty earlier than the other difficulties. Make sure to set Kiai in all those timing sections at the end.

Everything else is just a suggestion; you don't have to change them if you don't want to. You have a few ugly sliders, and it would look nicer if you made them more symmetrical: SHUT UP YOU FOOL!

Ballet ALL FIXED

00:06:749 (3) - The weird red point on this makes it look strange
00:10:769 (1) - ugly slider
00:12:109 (1) - ^

Cheer ALL FIXED

00:23:499 (3) - ugly slider
00:46:950 (3) - ^
01:23:130 (1) - ^

Dance ALL FIXED

00:18:139 (3) - slightly asymmetrical, but still noticeable
00:42:894 (1,2) - ugly sliders
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Kytoxid
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Leorda wrote:

How Dare You
XDD

Sorry, found that very amusing.
Shulin
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Shulin
General:

~ BG image size 800x600 is preferred, but your current BG seems to be of decent quality.
~ Delete the .osb and full submit.
~ Force default skin by Song Setup > Storyboarding > Preferred Skin > Default.


Dance:

00:25:474 - Move this timing section to 00:25:509 if you want to silence this spinner but see below:
00:25:509 (1) - Why is this spinner now silenced but not on the other difficulties?
00:26:933 - Move this inheriting section to either 00:27:017 (if you want the whole spinner silenced) or 00:26:849 if you want to end it with a beat, but see above.
01:09:730 (1) - Why is this spinner silences but not on the other difficulties?

Freak:

01:31:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Silent beats are awful, especially when starting a stream, I'd start the volume off louder at least 30% and raise gradually. Oh and the gradual increase volume thing doesn't work so well in soft imo XD
01:33:854 - Delete this timing section its redundant.

The maps are fine, you seem to have changed the things mentioned ealier but I guess I'll leave it to Lybydose to re-pubble.

~ Star :D
James2250
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all the maps seem fine to me
(will leave it up to another MAT to pubble as I have had too many popped recently to keep making more :P )
Leorda
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James2250 wrote:

all the maps seem fine to me
(will leave it up to another MAT to pubble as I have had too many popped recently to keep making more :P )
Are you gave me a pubble?
Lybydose
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Leorda wrote:

Are you gave me a pubble?
A few minor suggestions first:

Freak

01:31:506 - 01:33:851: Add kiai to all these sections? The other difficulties have kiai here, but this one does not.

Also, I think normal hit sounds fit the stream better. You can barely tell the volume is steadily increasing with soft sounds. If you do use normal hit sounds, lower the volume a bit.

Dance

00:21:489 (1,2) - fix spacing
00:57:502 - add circle here maybe?

EDIT: Re-Pubble
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Leorda
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Lybydose wrote:

Leorda wrote:

Are you gave me a pubble?
A few minor suggestions first:

Freak

01:31:506 - 01:33:851: Add kiai to all these sections? The other difficulties have kiai here, but this one does not.

Also, I think normal hit sounds fit the stream better. You can barely tell the volume is steadily increasing with soft sounds. If you do use normal hit sounds, lower the volume a bit.

Dance

00:21:489 (1,2) - fix spacing
00:57:502 - add circle here maybe?
ALL FIXED
Leorda
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Kytoxid wrote:

XDD

Sorry, found that very amusing.
*Leorda kill Kytoxid until Kytoxid's blood is empty
Leorda
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Why are BAT not mod my map? Do the pubble popped when I re-submit?
But, I give a mod request to BAT
happy30
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happy30

Leorda wrote:

Why are BAT not mod my map? Do the pubble popped when I re-submit?
But, I give a mod request to BAT
pubbles won't get popped when you re-submit (for now at least)
since there are alot of other pubbled maps you'll have to wait a bit for a BAT to appear.
if the BAT accepted your mod request, he/she will mod it soon, maybe he/she got more maps on his/her modding list, what means youll have to wait till it's the turn of your map.

I checked the map and i didnt find any errors. :)
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