Ayana - Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho · forum

bagnz0r

Topic Starter

bagnz0r 2009-12-13T05:09:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年1月4日 at 11:27:20

Artist: Ayana
Title: Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho
Source: Kanon 2006
Tags: kanon 2006 anime kyoto animation slkk key
BPM: 130
Filesize: 10505kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.65 stars, 208 notes)
Normal (3.68 stars, 145 notes)

Download: Ayana - Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho
Download: Ayana - Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Keh! Just as promised, here it is.
Now go, star this map please.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AHeQ0JKLl4c

Update #1:
* Some spacing fixes.
* Turned down effect volume a little.

Update #2:
* Re-Encoded video.
* Added background.

Update #3:
* Added some SB crap.
* Re-done spacing in Hard diff.
* Applied suggestions.
* Normal diff.

Update #4:
* Added some notes in [Hard]
* Added "Default" skin pref.
* Disabled letterbox.

Update #5:
* Full re-submit. (Audio file cut)
* Timing fixes.
* Ready for ranking!

Update #6:
* Normal diff fixes.

Update #7:
* Some advices from Armin used.

Update #8:
* Spacing fixes.
* HP drain increased.

Last edited by bagnz0r 2010-01-04T10:27:40+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

Bass

1,846 posts

Joined January 2009

Bass 2009-12-14T14:09:49+00:00

Okay

Add a background
Make a Normal diff

Hard:
On 3 grid level
00:06:33 (3) - 1 tick left
00:15:62 (6) - ^
00:19:32 (3) - 1 tick right
00:30:85 (3) - ^
00:39:62 (3) - 1 tick left
00:40:43 (6) - 1 tick down
00:40:55 (7) - ^
00:52:55 (7) - 1 tick up
01:13:55 (3) - ^

Star~

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2009-12-15T05:04:41+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

bagnz0r

Topic Starter

bagnz0r 2009-12-15T05:08:17+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Witaj!

[General]
Can you cut this video and mp3 at 01:29:935 to the end?

[Hard]
00:58:781 (4,5) - Allign with 3
01:05:473 (1) - A little bit offscreen
01:06:166 (1) - No new combo

I know this beatmap is WIP
But I have something for U
I-G-I-V-E-Y-O-U-A-S-T-A-R

Thankie. But btw, my primary language is English.

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2009-12-15T11:46:28+00:00

Hmmm.

I wouldn't want to mod this yet; I rather do one bug mod than go back and recheck the diffs.

PM me when you're done with the diffs.

Tanmak

896 posts

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2009-12-16T14:29:55+00:00

Hmm...I see that this beatmap not pending...and has only one difficulty.

I think that this beatmap incomplete.

I won't mod now. When you complete this beatmap, please send PM.

P.S: You should remove sound in video file.

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-12-18T10:44:04+00:00

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Cut the mp3
Add breaks

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

Spacing is weird :S
Anyway, technically it's ok

Starred~

Tanmak

896 posts

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2009-12-19T04:17:15+00:00

Ok, then I mod~!

[General]
Cut music file First and End of part.
First part where is existed little sound.
Of course, remove end of part which is not this music sound, too.

[Normal]
00:37:550 (3) Move note under (2). Stacking is Vagueness.

[Hard]
00:36:627 (1) Dissolve new combo.
01:13:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Form is little ugly. Replace them.

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2009-12-19T14:16:12+00:00

Overall
Delete the .osb file and full submit

Normal
Lower the slider tick rate.

Hard
Lower the slider tick rate.
Maybe add a silenced spinner at the end? (01:28:666)

That's all

Crazy Jay

482 posts

Joined October 2008

Crazy Jay 2009-12-19T14:41:57+00:00

[Normal]
01:27:166(1) - How about set the spinner end at 01:29:704 and use 0% volume at the end.

[Hard]
about hitsounds
I think the all the notes with clap&whistle should be changed,use clap only,please
and how about add some spinners?

nice map
+star

bagnz0r

Topic Starter

bagnz0r 2009-12-19T17:56:27+00:00

Crazy Jay wrote:
[Hard]
about hitsounds
I think the all the notes with clap&whistle should be changed,use clap only,please

No... Thanks. I'd rather stay with current hitsounding.

Mashley

2,042 posts

Joined September 2008

Mashley 2009-12-20T06:02:14+00:00

Hm hm use 1,310 offset
wtf is it with the ending of the mp3 dude

Normal
No problems here

Hard
Your spacing irritates me... but whatever.

DeadAlready

1,575 posts

Joined August 2008

DeadAlready 2009-12-21T13:35:19+00:00

kanon <3

good song

stared >w</

Nakata Yuji

471 posts

Joined April 2009

Nakata Yuji 2009-12-29T00:31:27+00:00

First, add some Lead-in. It enters in too fast. This isn't a recommendation, you HAVE to.

Normal:
01:22:630 (1,1,2) - This part feels empty. Technically, it's ok, but I would prefer if it were fuller, if you catch my drift.
01:27:245 (1) - I believe this would sound better if it were audible.

Good dif.

Hard:
Okay.

Overall, this is pretty good.
However, there is much misuse of kiai, look into that.

Armin

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-12-31T11:30:41+00:00

The audio is too low. Download the song at the end of the post.
Optimize the offset: 1409

[Normal]

Overall: What a nice Normal. No major problems found, just some imperfections. Decrease the slider tick rate to 2.

00:29:092 (Break) Very short break, you can remove it.
00:37:630 (3) The start of the slider is too hidden: try to change it.
01:00:938 (8) Stack this with the start of the slider (01:00:015 (6))
01:22:630 (1,1) A bit offscreen. Try to change it?

Overall Rating 8/10

For the hitsounds modding: Download the .osu file at the end of the post.

[Hard]

Overall: Decrease the slider tick rate to 2.

01:22:630 (Break) Very short break, you can remove it.
01:13:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) Bad position. Try to change it.

Overall Rating: 7,5/10

For the hitsounds modding: Download the .osu file at the end of the post.

Download: Ayana - Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho.mp3

Download: Ayana - Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho (BagnoGamer) [Normal].osu

Download: Ayana - Kaze no Tadori Tsuku Basho (BagnoGamer) [Hard].osu

bagnz0r

Topic Starter

bagnz0r 2010-01-02T04:11:58+00:00

Armin wrote:
The audio is too low. Download the song at the end of the post.

I think it's loud enough, but thanks.

ignorethis

osu! Alumni

1,885 posts

Joined August 2008

ignorethis 2010-01-03T09:51:14+00:00

The map itself doesn't have much problem but some hitsounds are not good. I strongly suggest you find someone who is good at hitsounds to help you with that.

<Hard>
00:30:70 (1) - Move this away from the border of the screen
Also you may rise the HP draining a bit to increase the difficulty.

star'd

Cyril Scarlet

osu! Alumni

3,877 posts

Joined May 2009

Cyril Scarlet 2010-01-04T11:43:21+00:00

Good Song !!

whymeman

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whymeman 2010-01-06T05:06:15+00:00

The map seems fine so far. Bubbled then.