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Hinata Girls - Yakusoku

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deadbeat
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deadbeat
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 30 December 2010 at 10:11:49 a.m.

Artist: Hinata Girls
Title: Yakusoku
Source: Love Hina
Tags: Kaneko promise EEeee
BPM: 152
Filesize: 4741kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. EEeee's Promise (4.62 stars, 368 notes)
  2. Kaneko's Promise (2.57 stars, 124 notes)
  3. My Promise (3.01 stars, 238 notes)
Download: Hinata Girls - Yakusoku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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revived :3

timing help from happy30
thanks to
EEeee and Kaneko for their diff's :)
thanks to Lizbeth and osuplayer111 for the bubbles
thanks to Kirby for rank
Last edited by deadbeat , edited 62 times in total.
Ema Skye
91 posts
Joined June 2008
Ema Skye
Your comboburst is fine ^^ but your timing is off xD you also should use the distance snap to help you, it would look better.

BPM : 152
Offset : 29113

There it is :) fix this and resnap all notes in 1/2 ! 1/6 is wrong :o

Then your map will be ready to be modded :)
Ema Skye
91 posts
Joined June 2008
Ema Skye
Download: Hinata Girls - Yakusoku (deadbeat) [proof o.o].osu
deadbeat
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9,218 posts
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deadbeat
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

BPM: 152,00 - Offset: 29.135 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Easy]

The sections don't have any type of sound (Sample Set) - Choice soft hitsounds.

Some spacing are incorrect. Use distance snap correctly.

00:29:011 (1) - Extend and end here -> 00:30:516.
00:36:004 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:37:081 (4,5) - ^
00:45:071 (2,3) - ^
01:38:060 (3,4,5) - Adjust spacing.

[Normal]

The sections don't have any type of sound (Sample Set) - Choice soft hitsounds.

Some spacing are incorrect. Use distance snap correctly.

00:37:042 (1,2) & 00:38:021 (3,4) - Same patterns but different spacing. Adjust it.
00:42:055 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:02:029 (1,1) - ^
01:03:008 (2,3) - ^
01:15:031 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:086 (1,2,3) - ^
01:39:000 (2,3) & 01:39:079 (4,5) - Same patterns but different spacing. Adjust it.
01:48:008 (6,7,8) - Spacing.
01:52:042 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:48:086 (2,3,4) - ^
02:54:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:07:042 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:09:000 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:19:065 (1,2,3) - ^
03:27:094 (3,4,5) - ^
03:42:094 (2,3,4,5) - ^
04:12:075 (2,3,4,5) - ^

Follow this example for correct spacing: http://up.ppy.sh/files/beatspacing-1.jpg

I suggest to re-map all the spacing.
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!!

[All Difficulties]
Timing = I'm not very sure :S

Use Soft Samplesets :/

I was modding through the maps and noticed there were tons of unsnapped slider enpoints, I pointed all of them out in [Easy] when I found out I can just say Resnap All Notes and Recalculate All Sliders. Give the map a quick check after it's done.
Most of the mods are regarding the unsnapped slider endpoints, I put all the mods aside from those in BOLD, so be sure to follow those after re-snapping and recalculating.

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:33:067 (3) - endpoint not snapped
00:37:042 (3) - spacing too close to (2)
00:38:060 (5) - reverse this
00:43:034 (3) - endpoint not snapped
00:46:050 (3) - ^
00:48:008 (1) - move endpoint 1/4 back
00:50:045 (3) - end 1/2 forward
00:52:081 (4) - ^
00:54:039 (1) - ^
00:58:093 (4) - end 1/4 later
01:02:068 (2) - end 1/2 forward
01:07:002 (1) - end 1/4 back
01:07:081 (2) - end on the next white tick
01:10:018 (1) - end on the closest white tick
01:12:095 (1) - end 1/4 later
01:14:013 (2) - ^
01:23:080 (1) - move 1/2 back (also, be sure to get some distance with the next note)
01:25:097 (1) - end 1/4 later
01:28:034 (4) - ^
01:28:093 (5) - ^
01:25:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - make sure everything is spaced after changes
01:35:064 (1) - begin 1/2 earlier, end the same place
01:36:083 (2) - end on white tick before
01:47:009 (2) - move 1/2 later
01:50:084 (1) - end 1/4 back
01:52:042 (2) - end 1/2 forward

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:43:014 (4) - end on following red tick / replace finish with a whistle
00:54:039 (1) - end on previous white tick
01:30:071 (3) - end on next white tick
01:35:045 (1) - ^
01:41:056 (4) - ^
01:49:066 (8) - spacing; too close to (7)
02:13:034 (2) - end on next white tick
02:32:029 (3) - end on previous white tick
02:35:045 (1) - end on next red tick
02:36:083 (3) - end on white tick
I'm gonna stop with these "end on [blank] tick," just make sure all the sliders end on a proper beat, :P
03:16:050 (1) - end on white tick
03:56:096 (2) - move 1/2 back; space afterwards
04:00:091 (2) - ^
04:04:006 (1) - ^
I probably missed some things... but I'll see if I can recheck after these fixes are made

I'll star after I see some improvement :U
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
if there's anyone good with timing, it would help

i stopped where i stopped because timing seemed off, and the last notes i placed sounded good on 1/8, , , so , , , meh

Download: Hinata Girls - Yakusoku (deadbeat) [EEeee].osu
deadbeat
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deadbeat
Looking good so far :)
Looking forward to the rest of it :D
awp
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awp
silly little timing mod

1. Offset: 29,127ms BPM: 152.05
2. Offset: 54,405ms BPM: 152.00

The BPM is a shaky sort of consistent; only a few bars are out of sync at a single timing point so it doesn't seem worth-while to really nazi the timing, but the starting definitely felt off to me so tadaa.
eee
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Joined January 2008
eee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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deadbeat
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deadbeat
thanks..i did most of them. some didn't seem quite right.. so i didn't change them/changed them slightly differently
ShaggoN
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Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Yellow: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Easy]
  1. Resnap all notes
  2. 01:07:082 (2-3) - Little spacing issue
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:046 (3-4) - Very little spacing issue
  2. 01:01:011 (2-3) - ^
  3. 02:36:064 (2-3) - ^
  4. 03:20:006 (2-3) - ^
  5. 04:03:008 (5-6) - ^
  6. 04:12:066 (2-3) - ^
Overall
  1. I would use soft hitsound samples here, or make normal samples not so loud
Good work :D
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
@_@ i still need to work on some hitsounds

Download: Hinata Girls - Yakusoku (deadbeat) [EEeee].osu
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
00:35:440 (1) - move it some squares right due to spacing
00:38:597 (5) - shrink this slider of a timing tick and then add a repeat on it
00:54:405 (1,2,3,4) - fix spacing for this combo series
01:23:615 (1,2) - move the beat a square left and make the slider curve on the right instead of on the left
01:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - again, fix spacing
01:42:957 (1,2) - move 1st a square up and the 2nd 2 squares up
01:56:378 (spinner) - remove hitsounds's volume for this spinner

Normal
[General] lower overall hitsounds's volume, please...
00:32:283 (2) - remove clap from this slider's end
00:46:489 (4) - move it a square down
01:03:681 (spinner) - remove finish here
01:07:826 (2) - move this beat far away from the slider
01:56:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing...
01:57:957 (spinner) - remove hitsounds's volume here
02:15:720 (4) - new beat here. If you add it, new combo on the previous slider
02:44:931 (7) - no finish here
03:12:957 (1,2,3,1,2) - fix spacing
03:25:589 (1,2) - move them 3 squares up and a square left (grid level 3)
03:31:905 (1,2) - move them a square up and a square left (grid level 3)
03:35:457 (spinner) - end it on 03:37:431
03:51:247 (1) - move it 2 squares up and 2 squares left (grid level 3)
03:52:431 (3) - move it 1-2 squares down and 1-2 squares right
04:08:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing
04:13:747 (spinner,spinner) - set hitsounds's volume to 0 for these spinners and remove finish (end 1st spinner on 04:15:720)

... there is still a lot of work to do with spacing, butI know you can improve this map! Star ;3
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Easy
  1. 00:31:889(2) - End at 00:33:467
  2. 00:50:435(3) - End at 00:52:408
  3. 01:10:194(1) - End at 01:10:983
  4. 01:33:483(3) - End at 01:35:062
  5. 01:40:589(6) - End at 01:41:181
  6. 01:59:931(x) - I think that would be better end kiai here~
Normal
  • No prob :3
EEeee
Add "EEeee" to the tags
  1. 01:57:591(Timing Section) - Would be better end kiai at 02:00:304
  2. 03:08:965(9) - New Combo
  3. 03:38:462(Timing Section) - Would be better end kiai at 03:38:561
Overall
The volume in Easy and Normal is waaaaay too lowd. Low a lot, please.
And clap hit sounds doesn't fit really well with this song.
If you could find a cool custom hit sound (I think that EBA soft clap would be cool here), it would be better.


Nice and cute song!
Star :]
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
:)

Easy:fine

Normal:02:57:168 (3) spacing
03:06:641 (3) ^
03:32:299 (3) ^
04:16:707 (1) start in 04:16:510

EEeee:03:08:571 (7,8,9) Spacing
Blackiris
192 posts
Joined April 2009
Blackiris
Star.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hinata Girls - Yakusoku (deadbeat) [EEeee].osu
Cyril Scarlet
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Favorite Song ♥
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Deadbeat, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

General:
BPM: I really dont know what to say here, it feels right,, but iono. Question mark here.
Offset: I guess right
Tags: more tags, more tags :P

Easy:

The only thing i could focus on is the "bad" distance snapping. It's not really wrong but a neat map is much easier to play.

Normal:

A little better but again, the only thing i could focus on is the "bad" distance snapping. It's not really wrong but a neat map is much easier to play.

EEeee:
00:46:095 (3) - Soft whistle
01:50:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I really like this part of the map, use this in future maps more please :P
01:57:591 - Hitvolume 1 higher maybe? It's really soft.
02:50:419 (5) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) down

Nice maps and song tough, keep it up ^^
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