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FictionJunction KAORI - Yume no Tsubasa

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Lizbeth
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donneschdeg 7 Januar 2010 at 13:48:02

Artist: FictionJunction KAORI
Title: Yume no Tsubasa
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle
Tags: Everlasting Songs Kajiura Yuki Lissette
BPM: 90
Filesize: 7760kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,22 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4,46 stars, 316 notes)
  3. Lissette's Normal (2,02 stars, 150 notes)
Download: FictionJunction KAORI - Yume no Tsubasa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Part of TRC OST Project: Yume no Tsubasa, my favorite song of this OST, is from Everlasting Songs album by FictionJunction.

Enjoy the map! n_n

To check Tsubasa Chronicle OST Project Click Here
Last edited by Lizbeth , edited 16 times in total.
Lissette
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Lissette
:P
dkey
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dkey
star :)
ccbp
411 posts
Joined August 2009
ccbp
Omg, this is one of my favourite songs!

I wonder whether I can make a diff of this song >_>
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Sure! why not? n_n

thanks for starring guys :)
ccbp
411 posts
Joined August 2009
ccbp
Ok, here's my mod:
[normal]
01:03:44 (1) - remove the finish hitsound and add it to the end of the slider

[hard]
01:47:11 (2) -
01:48:78 (3) -
01:50:78 (2,3) - add soft whistle

sorry for my nasty hitsounds modding ;_; I'm not very good at it.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.
- Cut the mp3 please.

[Easy]

Fine.

[Lissette's Normal]

Fine, too.

[Hard]

00:53:44 (6) - New combo.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth

osuplayer111 wrote:

- Cut the mp3 please.
ill do this after ccbp upload his diff. =)

thanks for modding guys :)
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Y..Yume no tsubasa !! ♥♥
statementreply
Pro Tester
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Joined June 2009
statementreply
:o
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
thanks for starrin' S i R i R u and statementreply >W<
yaya
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yaya
really good map .

something i can find.
Hard
00:37:011 (9) - no clap.
01:09:044 (2) - no finish.
01:14:078 (2) - no finish.
01:17:011 (1) - clap . no finish
01:17:044 (2) - no hitsound
01:17:078 (3) - clap .no finish.
01:20:011 (2) - no finish.
01:22:011 (3) - no whistle

same like after breaktime . i dont suggest you add so much hitsounds . this isnt a noise song..

dont continuous use finish hitsound . it's really noisy,and will destroy your map.
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
good map,I could not find anything wrong
+star
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

really good map .

something i can find.
Hard
00:37:011 (9) - no clap.
01:09:044 (2) - no finish.
01:14:078 (2) - no finish.
01:17:011 (1) - clap . no finish
01:17:044 (2) - no hitsound
01:17:078 (3) - clap .no finish.
01:20:011 (2) - no finish.
01:22:011 (3) - no whistle

same like after breaktime . i dont suggest you add so much hitsounds . this isnt a noise song..

dont continuous use finish hitsound . it's really noisy,and will destroy your map.
All fixed.. thanks for modding.
Thnx Crazy Jay
gdeath
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Joined May 2009
gdeath
Overall:
you have two osb files.plz remove one of them

Easy & Normal:
the last spinner make players wanna play more.coz everyone clearly know the song is not ended.
the spinner will be fine to end on 02:28:044(suggestion)

[Easy]
fine

[Lissette's Normal]
decrease slider tick.1 tick is fine.(suggestion)
coz if you use high tick in the song of lower BPM,it will sound bad.

[Hard]
fine

shooting star^^
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!

gdeath wrote:

Overall:
you have two osb files.plz remove one of them
idk, I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked, but it's there, you wanna delete?

[Easy]
01:27:011 (1) - add a finish on this -_-, it's on Liss's, you decide, I'd like a finish here

[Lissette]
can't find nothin'

[Hard]
01:27:011 (1) - same as Easy
This was extremely fun, it flowed well at the beginning and gained it's difficulty towards the end

STAR!!!
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Nice song and map~

[Easy]
01:23:12(1)-Sounds weird,remove whistle?
01:25:12(4)-I suggest to delete 2 repeat and move to 01:25:78,at the same time add a note here~
01:52:45(1)-Remove whistle?

[Lissette's Normal]
01:54:45(x)-Add a note here?

[Hard]
Fine~

Star~
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Thanks for modding gdeath, eee and kino77. n.n

Removed the extra osb file.

:)
Leorda
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Leorda
[Easy]
02:16:448 (x) - Place note here

[Lissette's Normal]
00:20:448 (1) - No new combo please
00:21:782 (3) - New combo
00:33:782 (x) - Place note here
02:05:115 (1) - No new combo please
02:06:448 (1) - ^
02:07:782 (1) - ^
02:18:448 (1) - ^

[Hard]
02:23:782 (2) - Don't too far away with 1
02:24:115 (3) - Don't too far away with 2


Good beatmap! I give you a star
Yes_old
525 posts
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Yes_old
:) :)
jericho2442
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jericho2442
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Essien_old
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Joined November 2009
Essien_old
Easy:
no problems found

Normal:
00:41:115 (3): Move the circle 1 grid to the right for irregular shape/spacing
02:15:448 (6): ^ and if you do this, move (7) also.

Hard:
02:05:115 (6): Move the circle 1 grid to the right to align with (5)


Don't forget that these are suggestions. Don't have to follow them!
star~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Normal:

01:11:078 (3) - new combo

Easy:

00:54:044 (1) - better to make the combo after it
01:10:044 (1) - ^
02:02:044 (4) - this slider sounds late.. its better at 2:01:782 or 2:02:115

beautiful map :)
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
thank you all guys for taking your time modding this map

n.n
ACC
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ACC
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lumiere
163 posts
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Lumiere
ise algo pero nose como postearlo liz Dx ... enseñame ;_;
Lumi ...

pd: Star!
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lumiere
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Lumiere

Lizbeth wrote:

a ver Lumi, Que es lo que quieres hacer? subir un beatmap? n.n
nuuu agregue cosas a tu mapa ala dificultad hard , pero no tengo idea como ponerlo para ke veas ke fue lo ke agregue
;__;
Lizbeth
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lumibot solo tienes que adjutar la dificultad que modificaste en el post, como si fuera posteando una imagen :)
Dusty
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Dusty
[Lissette's Normal]
02:24:011 (1) - Unsilence the end?

[Hard]
01:01:011 (8) - Unstack from (6,7) and move to be aligned vertically to (4,5)?
02:37:078 (1,2,3) - Symmetricize that somehow?

It's good, *star
Lumiere
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Joined November 2008
Lumiere
Bueno Liz!., hoy Liss me explico algunas cositas muy útiles y creo que puedo postear ahora xd
aquí voy ;3

[Hard]
01:43:044 (1) - Nuevo
01:43:078 (1) - Movido
01:44:011 (2) - Nuevo
01:44:028 (3) - Nuevo
01:44:044 (4) - Nuevo
01:44:078 (1) - Movido
01:45:011 (2) - Movido
01:45:044 (3) - Movido
01:45:078 (4) - Movido
01:46:011 (5) - Movido
01:46:044 (1) - Movido
01:47:011 (2) - Movido

01:52:011 (1) - Nuevo
01:52:028 (2) - Nuevo

02:24:044 (1) - Nuevo Spin (clap)
02:26:078 (1) - Nuevo (clap)
02:27:044 (1) - Nuevo(clap)
02:27:078 (2) - Nuevo(clap)

02:28:044 (1) - Nuevo(clap)
02:28:078 (2) - Nuevo(clap)
02:29:011 (1) - Nuevo
02:29:028 (2) - Nuevo
02:29:044 (3) - Nuevo
02:29:061 (4) - Nuevo

02:29:078 (1) - Movido
02:30:011 (2) - Movido
02:30:078 (3) - Movido

*Los combos Movidos, son los que como dice la palabra, movi para acomodar siertas partes ;3
-Bueno eso es lo que realize en el mapa, si ai que cambiar los numeros de los combos Hazlo nomas, porque yo fui agregando y moviendo entonces si se ven mal los numeritos (1,2,3,4 etc) eso no se acomodarlo bien. era para que vieras los que habia puesto >.< , lo mismo por los sonidos si hay que quitarlos o agregar nuevos sonidos (Clap , Finish) ai que chekearlo.
[Este es mi primer post de este tipo osea de Mod xd, ojala sea útil esto y no aya dejado la embarrada nomas >.<]
Con cariño Lumibot ;3

Download: FictionJunction KAORI - Yume no Tsubasa (Lizbeth) [Insane].osu
Lizbeth
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Lumi muchas gracias por tu moderacion n.n, que honor (tu primer mod post) En cuanto tenga mi pc voy a chekear todo lo que moderaste n_n gracias por gastar tu tiempo en esto.
Also thanks Dusty, ill check all tomorow :3

Edit: Already checked the modding thnks Dusty and Lumi.

Lumiere me encantaron tus cambios, los agregue inmediatamente, jejeje n.n chekealo cuando puedas. Ese kudosu estuvo bien ganado :P Deberias hacer un mapa, saldria buenisimo XD

grax :)
Lissette
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Si lumi deberias mapear, a mi tambien me encantaron tus cambios ^^
Myridium
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Myridium
Offset is off!

You should turn it down to about 11, 100.
Lizbeth
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Lissette's Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

00:11:077 (4) - New combo

Starred~
Mok
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Mok
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
It's ok.

[Easy]
I think you should add some beat who follow more the voice, but it's ok too if the map follow the bass rythm!
Seems fine anyway ^^

[Lissette's Normal]
I think you should use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Seems fine ^^

[Hard]
I think you should use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Seems fine ^^

That's all for your map! I'm glad to star it and hope to see it ranked soon :D I hope too you will ask me to mod other maps x3
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
nice map!!

star~ :) :)

i think you need it...

Download: hitcircle.rar
Lizbeth
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Thanks but since this map is part of a project i dont want that have a different skin.
thanks for starring ^^
Diasios
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Diasios
Offset: 11.110 (much better imho)
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Thanks xxheroxx, is fixed.
Mashley
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Mashley
Pubbled ;o
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Derekku
[General]
*Delete the two .osb files in the folder.
*I really like the different colored bg effect

[Easy]
00:42:776 (1) - starts on the red tick after the previous slider, but 02:08:443 (1) - doesn't start until the white tick after. Care to make them match up? :)

[Normal]
Looks fine.

[Hard]
Very nice.

I'm not gonna pop the pubble, since these are just minor issues. Great job to both of you!

EDIT: Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
Diasios
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Diasios
Cut the mp3

+kudosu star

Derekku Chan wrote:

Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
11,095 is a bit wrong, don't you think? 11.110 seems better :roll:
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth

xxheroxx wrote:

Cut the mp3

+kudosu star

Derekku Chan wrote:

Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
11,095 is a bit wrong, don't you think? 11.110 seems better :roll:
indeed, 11,110 look better for me too...
also i already cut the mp3 a while ago, you may wanna redownload the map.
osb extra file, deleted.

thanks for modding Derekku Chan and xxheroxx, and thanks for the kds star *.*
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Derekku
*tests again* I'm still getting 10-20ms early hits when testing, but I won't argue. XP
Armin
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Armin
loving this song*

Remember: Don't feed me kudosus if my post isn't really useful.

[Easy]

Overall: No spacing/timing/stacking/snapping problems found.

00:16:443 (1) Use a finish instead
00:31:110 (2) This seems a random slider <_<. Maybe try to do something like this:

01:03:109 (3) Finish at the end
01:12:443 (4) Make this slider symmetrical with the previous (2)
01:41:776 (1) Finish at the start
01:49:110 (3) This slider breaks the "clap"-rythm. Try to fix it, adding a clap at the start
02:01:110 (3) Make this symmetrical with the previous (1)

Overall Rating: 8/10

[Lissette's Normal]

Overall: No spacing/timing/stacking/snapping problems found. Some sliders are asymmetric, this make the difficulty a little ugly.

00:16:443 (1) Finish
00:43:109 (1) On this slider the "clap-rythm" is broken. You should fix this using a custom hitsound
00:47:776 (3) Clap+finish
01:18:443 (4) Finish at the end
02:23:110 (4) A bit offscreen D:, try to fix it

Overall Rating: 7,5/10

[Hard]

Overall: No spacing/timing/snapping problems found. Some hitobjects aren't staked perfectly, but this isn't a big problem xD.

00:59:443 (3) Make this symmetrical with the previous (2)
01:46:109 (4) and 01:46:443 (5) should be placed like in the picture:

01:51:443 (3,4) Make them symmetrical with (1) and (2)

This difficulty is perfect, I found just some little imperfections ^^

Overall Rating: 9/10
Takuma
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Takuma
i love your maps, but i'm going to nitpick on some things~

hard:
hmm, it feels that some parts lack hitsounds. D:
01:43:776 (1) - jump doesn't flow with the music imo. :\
01:45:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - big spacing here doesn't fit to me either.

i'm sorry. ;~~;

ps lizbeth and lissette are gods
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Thanks Takuma ^^
I also love your maps *.*

Thanks for de modding, all fixed, also Armin modding, thx n_n
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Hard~
  1. 00:13:776 (9) - Move a tad bit to the right so it's evenly spaced with 7 and 8.
  2. 00:30:443 (4) - Move a little farther from 3 like how 2 is.
  3. 01:23:776 (2) - Mirror with 1.
  4. 01:24:776 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo, then make 01:25:109 (2) a new combo.
  5. 01:56:443 (2) - Mirror with 1.
  6. 02:33:776 (3) - Mirror with 1.
  7. 02:40:443 (3) - Mirror with 2.
  8. 02:44:443 (3) - Mirror with 1 again lol.
  9. 02:54:776 (3) - Mirror with 2....
Nice maps!
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