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Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari

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Andrea
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Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 23 ottobre 2009 at 21:54:50

Artist: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda
Title: Uminari
Source: Clannad
Tags: Anime
BPM: 152
Filesize: 6886kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,76 stars, 398 notes)
  2. Insane (4,9 stars, 433 notes)
  3. Normal (4,22 stars, 311 notes)
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari
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Another osuplayer111's map <3

Clannad <3 One of my favourite animes. :3
Last edited by Andrea , edited 7 times in total.
Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Hi xD

Per favore, metti il ritardo a 2 secondi, non 1 e mezzo.

- Normal
  • .Opinions:
    Ok, ma moooolto ripetitiva :(
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    Molte combo oltre i 10, alcune evitabili D:
    (lol@ new combo mod D:)
    .Suggestions:
    00:26:40 (5) - new combo?
    00:32:71 (8) - ^
    01:18:90 (7) - ^
    01:27:58 (6) - ^
    01:40:61 (9) - ^
    01:45:35 (7) - ^
    01:53:24 (12) - ^
    01:59:56 (10) - ^
    02:18:50 (8) - ^
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    02:24:03 (14,1) - swap new combos please
- Insane:
  • .Suggestions:
    Una cosa per le triplette strane: assicurati che TUTTE abbiano lo stesso tipo di distacco (quindi correggi cose come 00:09:42 (1,2,3) in uno spacing tipo 00:24:42 (1,2,3))
    00:42:58 (9) - new combo?
    00:53:24 (6) - ^
    00:59:95 (12,13) - perché solo due? O.o
    01:47:32 (14) - new combo?
    01:53:24 (12) - ^
    01:59:56 (10) - ^
    02:23:24 (11) - ^
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    01:40:61 (11) - new combo
    02:05:87 (8) - ^
Needs a bit of working for new combos D:
Chiamami quando hai risolto per una stella ^^

Fixed.
/me stars =3
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Andrea
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Andrea

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Hi xD

Per favore, metti il ritardo a 2 secondi, non 1 e mezzo.

- Normal
  • .Opinions:
    Ok, ma moooolto ripetitiva :(
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    Molte combo oltre i 10, alcune evitabili D:
    (lol@ new combo mod D:)
    .Suggestions:
    00:26:40 (5) - new combo?
    00:32:71 (8) - ^
    01:18:90 (7) - ^
    01:27:58 (6) - ^
    01:40:61 (9) - ^
    01:45:35 (7) - ^
    01:53:24 (12) - ^
    01:59:56 (10) - ^
    02:18:50 (8) - ^
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    02:24:03 (14,1) - swap new combos please
- Insane:
  • .Suggestions:
    Una cosa per le triplette strane: assicurati che TUTTE abbiano lo stesso tipo di distacco (quindi correggi cose come 00:09:42 (1,2,3) in uno spacing tipo 00:24:42 (1,2,3))
    00:42:58 (9) - new combo?
    00:53:24 (6) - ^
    00:59:95 (12,13) - perché solo due? O.o
    01:47:32 (14) - new combo?
    01:53:24 (12) - ^
    01:59:56 (10) - ^
    02:23:24 (11) - ^
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    01:40:61 (11) - new combo
    02:05:87 (8) - ^
Needs a bit of working for new combos D:
Chiamami quando hai risolto per una stella ^^
All fixed, thanks :3
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Non sarà spettacolar, però ecco gli esiti della mia analisi ^^

Normal
00:01:92 (2) - whistle alla fine dello slider
00:06:66 (3) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
00:10:21 (3) - whistle-finish alla fine?
00:12:98 (9,10) - togli whistle al 10, metti whistle al 9
00:18:50 (2,3) - togli whistle dalla fine dello slider ed aggiungilo al beat successivo
00:31:92 (4) - whistle
02:29:26 (3) - soft finish alla fine

Hard
00:06:66 (4) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
00:10:21 (4) - finish alla fine
00:54:82 (8) - new combo
00:57:98 (5) - ^
02:29:26 (3) - soft finish alla fine

Insane
[General] alcune serie di beat (come in 02:18:50 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) hanno uno spacing abbastanza ambiguo... allontana di un poco tra di loro i beat delle triplette + lente...
00:10:21 (4) - finish alla fine
00:26:40 (5) - new combo
02:29:26 (3) - vediti le puntate precedenti... xD

Un pò di stelle, hitsound calibrati e maestria nel new combo e questa mappa sarà migliore della clannad precedente! ^^
Andrea
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Andrea

Lokamp wrote:

Non sarà spettacolar, però ecco gli esiti della mia analisi ^^

Normal
00:01:92 (2) - whistle alla fine dello slider
00:06:66 (3) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
00:10:21 (3) - whistle-finish alla fine?
00:12:98 (9,10) - togli whistle al 10, metti whistle al 9
00:18:50 (2,3) - togli whistle dalla fine dello slider ed aggiungilo al beat successivo
00:31:92 (4) - whistle
02:29:26 (3) - soft finish alla fine

Hard
00:06:66 (4) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
00:10:21 (4) - finish alla fine
00:54:82 (8) - new combo
00:57:98 (5) - ^
02:29:26 (3) - soft finish alla fine

Insane
[General] alcune serie di beat (come in 02:18:50 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) hanno uno spacing abbastanza ambiguo... allontana di un poco tra di loro i beat delle triplette + lente...
00:10:21 (4) - finish alla fine
00:26:40 (5) - new combo
02:29:26 (3) - vediti le puntate precedenti... xD

Un pò di stelle, hitsound calibrati e maestria nel new combo e questa mappa sarà migliore della clannad precedente! ^^
Updated, thanks!
Diasios
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Diasios
*w* clannad

starred
whymeman
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~

[Normal] (Done)

00:00:35 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
01:36:27 (5,6) - There's a sligh spacing jump here. Maybe reshaping the slider can help fix this?
The Map also needs a preview point.

[Hard] (Done)

00:00:35 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
The Map also needs a preview point.

[Insane] (Done)

00:00:35 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
The Map also needs a preview point.

Overall: Well, I only see some minor errors to look into, but make sure to look into getting that note before the offset issue looked at and set a preview point as well.
Andrea
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Andrea

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~

[Normal] (Done)

00:00:35 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
01:36:27 (5,6) - There's a sligh spacing jump here. Maybe reshaping the slider can help fix this?
The Map also needs a preview point.

[Hard] (Done)

00:00:35 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
The Map also needs a preview point.

[Insane] (Done)

00:00:35 (1) - You have a note before the first offset here.
The Map also needs a preview point.

Overall: Well, I only see some minor errors to look into, but make sure to look into getting that note before the offset issue looked at and set a preview point as well.
Added preview point on all diff's.
Added another offset for the first note.

All fixed! Can you re-check and maybe bubble? :D
Jerrysr
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Jerrysr
nice <3
I like it :D
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Well...... why do you map a song that has been mapped for not too long ago ....

Nevermind :D

I can't really find any faults except for that 00:27:98 (5) on hard looks like it should be placed under 1 and 3 (but that maybe was the idea :roll: )

I loved how you woked with the hitsounds in this map, GJ with that :)

I suggest you should add more tags (Just Anime is a bit lame)

Also i get the impression that a easy would be easy to make to this map (but it's ok w/o it :| )

*star*
Edit:Fixed the bad link
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yaya
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yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
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Andrea

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Why your normal is full of 1/2 beat . player will fell boring . Heh, i don't know what i can add.

Hard
02:18:50 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly . Fixed

Insane
I think this is a soft song , it doesnt fit very big jump and big distance . only need beautiful placement, there'll be perfect . Is an insane so i'm sure is ok.
whymeman
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whymeman
Well, the map seems to be fine so far. But just do one more double check for any needed changes and i'll bubble.

Edit: The map looks good now. Bubble for you then.
Andrea
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Andrea

whymeman wrote:

Well, the map seems to be fine so far. But just do one more double check for any needed changes and i'll bubble.
I Don't have nothing to fix. Re-check much times. Can you bubble please? :3

EDIT : Thanks <3
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Hard~
01:40:81 (2) - Suggestion: This clap sounds like its out of place, like nothing is accompanying it. What you could do is add a clap at 01:41:40 (5). It would sound much better imo.
02:06:07 (2) - ^ Clap on 5.
(If you don't agree with this, then remove 2's clap and add it only to 5.)

Insane~
01:40:81 (3) - Same suggestion as Hard. Add a clap at 01:41:40 (6)
02:06:07 (2) - ^ Clap on 5.

Edit: Awesome, bubbled!
orioncomet
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>O</
whymeman
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lissette
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:)
Andrea
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Andrea

whymeman wrote:

[Hard]

02:27:58 (1,2,3) - The spacing looked odd when I really look at it now. (1) and (2) has a bigger gap than (2) and (3). If you can make the spacing the same as (1,2), that would be nice.

That was the only thing that I really saw on this map to look at.
Sorry but i don't want to change it :< I like this type of spacing. Can you rank it ? >_<
tieff
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tieff
Wtf with soft-hitclap custom hitsound? It's too loud.
I won't pop, 'cos it's not serious thing. Fix if you want and I'll rebubble.
Andrea
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tieff
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tieff
After this 01:42:192 normal hitsounds sound really loud for me.
Andrea
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Andrea
Ok i'm going to fix.

When you're back i update, so can you re-bubble, ok?
Yumiko
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Yumiko
Gj, andre <3 starred :3
Mafiamaster
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Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks :3
mican
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star~
tieff
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tieff
Insane contains many illegal spacing, but it isn't big deal for me.

Ranked!
godlyhalo
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Metroid
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Metroid

godlyhalo wrote:

This song is an exact repeat of
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/30307

Dunno how a 2nd version of this song got ranked....Normally repeats are discouraged (I think).

no, you can remap any song as long as it's not a pure copy.

Also, they're not discouraged, I remapped shanghai honey because I found the original boring.
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