This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 22, 2010 at 10:34:42 AM

Artist: JohnnyFrizz
Title: \Velocity//
Source: Newgrounds
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3981kb
Play Time: 03:40
Difficulties Available:

1. Easier (2.31 stars, 227 notes)
2. Hard (4.91 stars, 498 notes)
3. Normal (3.79 stars, 312 notes)

Download: JohnnyFrizz - \Velocity//
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This is my very first beatmap... Ever! It's bad XD

I would appreciate comments, critiques, etc, anything to help me make this thing better. The song is pretty cool, and if I did okay on my first try, then that's great encouragement to do more!

I noticed a distinct lack of Newgrounds music on Osu, so I thought maybe that would be hella awesome :3


Edit 3: THANK YOU James2250 for being my first modder ever! I love you! =D See his post for edits
Edit 4: "Easier" difficulty added >_> It's not easy IMO XDDDD
Edit 5: Updated easy. Thank you Yes, and again, James2250! Also updated normal.

Edit 6: Hard difficulty! It's challenging! This is the hardest I can make it - can I request that I get some help from a skiller Osu player/beatmapper to make an Insane difficulty or the like? i'm unable to pass such a map and therefore can't gauge what's fair and unfair in the world of really hard beatmaps... so yeah.
Edit 7: Spacing overhaul on Hard! thank you Sakura301 for your time =)
Edit 8: Added background, FINALLY! Made something neat in photoshop, since Google wasn't big of a help.
Edit 9: Fixed that ugly slider, put something fun in place of the break. It's distance snapped, so no spacing issues DX
Edit 10: Added Kiai time at the epic part near the end =) It's kinda long on hard, since the other difficulties there's breaks during that time, partly.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

glad I could help
will be keeping an eye on this for new diff's

but for now, have a star

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easier: overall hitsounds could use a little bit of work in some places
(I think its easy enough)
still need background

00:15:08 (4) - align with 2
01:08:57 (x) - add note?
01:10:97 (x) - ^ *might have to adjust hitsounds if you add notes*
01:49:71 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think hitsounds could sound better here
02:15:77 (5) - new combo
02:45:94 (1) - a bit long...but if you have to keep it end at 02:56:40..
03:01:02 (5) - new combo
03:01:71 (1) - remove new combo

very odd place to end why not end around the 03:40:80 area?
I like it, much fewer mistakes than last time I modded this map so good job

Thank you BOTH!

I have considered all your edits, and now my beatmap seems much better!

And yes, easier did end at a weird spot. Dunno how that happened, but I slapped together a lazy, quick ending >_> I think it works though! I don't have much energy to work on it much, but I'm trying.

I shall create a neat background in photoshop once I have the patience to sit down and learn some better effects. I'm not going to worry aobut it while this beatmap is still in the works, I'd rather get the hits tiemd right than the background for now. I will develop a cool design, however.

Now, when I make the hard difficulty, I will NOT be able to test it that much, due to my lack of such skill in Osu... I played the heck out of my current beatmaps, making sure they played fine, but I dunno about hard. I solemnly pass hard beatmaps. Unless, I were to use 'no-fail' mode... But that hardly is proper testing.

Should I leave it at those two difficulties, come back to this when I get better at osu (get these two approved for now, of course!), or should I attempt it and try to get feedback from stronger players?

Should I leave it at those two difficulties, come back to this when I get better at osu (get these two approved for now, of course!), or should I attempt it and try to get feedback from stronger players?


I would just try and make a hard now (if you feel like you want to make one, you wont need one to get it ranked) I can always test it for you

As requested on the modding queue will only mod Normal and Hard
[General]
One of the very few instrumental song beatmaps that i have liked, you really have some interesting patterns, nice =D

[Normal]
Dont forget to add a background and set a preview point
00:43:885 (1) - umm try remaking this note right below the spot the slider ends so that it stacks below, it looks nicer that way
00:45:428 (1) - Dont hide a slider end with a combo burst, this one wont cause much trouble, but keep in mind for future reference, reason why is because its harder to tell if it has repetition or not.
00:56:571 (6) - doesnt look too bad, but u may want to stack by remaking (or disable grid snapping and move it slightly upwards so that it's circle is exactly covered by the end of the other slider, during gameplay tho, this one's barely noticeable so i might be a bit nazi but up 2 u anyways.
01:11:657 (1,2) - I've heard that overlapping sliders like this look ugly, i personally dont mind them tho, up 2 u.
01:21:942 (3) - Try to stack below (2) ?

[Hard]
00:11:657 (3) - Spacing
00:12:000 (4) - ^
00:14:400 (3,4,5) - Combo bursts keep hiding sliders below, this confusing pattern might be fun enough to play
01:14:057 (2) - Spacing?
01:18:171 (1) - What... the... this isnt fun really, it just plain blocks the view thank god there isnt kiai here or i could see someone with seizures D: up 2 u what u do with it, but i just tell you, this is just... ugly
00:25:200 (4,5,6) - Spacing
00:26:743 (5) - Spacing
00:38:742 (2,3) - Spacing
01:38:742 (1,2) - Spacing (shorter than the rest)
01:41:828 (1,2,3) - Spacing (longer than the rest)
01:49:371 (5) - Spacing
01:57:600 (5) - Spacing
02:01:542 (3) - Spacing
02:02:914 (3) - Spacing
02:04:285 (3) - Spacing
02:05:314 (8) - Spacing
02:07:028 (7) - Spacing
02:11:142 (4) - Spacing
02:33:600 (9) - Spacing
02:39:085 (5) - Spacing
02:40:114 (8) - Spacing
02:49:714 (4) - Spacing
02:55:885 (6) - Spacing
03:06:685 (2,3,4) - Spacing
03:07:714 (5) - Spacing
03:18:514 (4) - Spacing
03:20:228 (5,6) - umm Align? also, Spacing
03:22:628 (5) - Spacing
03:26:742 (2,3,4) - Spacing
03:27:771 (4,5) - Spacing
03:32:914 (1,2,3) - Spacing
03:34:285 (2,3) - Spacing
03:34:800 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing
03:39:428 (1,3,6) - Spacing
Note: Remember spacing follows the time-distance equality rule within the same combo

Uhuh, too many spacing errors to give it a star, if you want, you can send me a forum PM for a remod after you fix them ^^

Sakura301 wrote:

As requested on the modding queue will only mod Normal and Hard
[General]
One of the very few instrumental song beatmaps that i have liked, you really have some interesting patterns, nice =D
Thank you! I really liked this song, and it felt right to turn into something enjoyable to others =)

[Normal]
Dont forget to add a background and set a preview point
I'll get around to it eventually <_<;;
00:43:885 (1) - umm try remaking this note right below the spot the slider ends so that it stacks below, it looks nicer that way
00:45:428 (1) - Dont hide a slider end with a combo burst, this one wont cause much trouble, but keep in mind for future reference, reason why is because its harder to tell if it has repetition or not.
00:56:571 (6) - doesnt look too bad, but u may want to stack by remaking (or disable grid snapping and move it slightly upwards so that it's circle is exactly covered by the end of the other slider, during gameplay tho, this one's barely noticeable so i might be a bit nazi but up 2 u anyways.
All fix'd.
01:11:657 (1,2) - I've heard that overlapping sliders like this look ugly, i personally dont mind them tho, up 2 u.
It works for me. If it's mentioned again, I'll consider changing it.
01:21:942 (3) - Try to stack below (2) ?
Looked fine to me, but that makes more sense. fix'd

[Hard]
00:11:657 (3) - Spacing
00:12:000 (4) - ^
Fix'd - Does it really make that much difference >_>
00:14:400 (3,4,5) - Combo bursts keep hiding sliders below, this confusing pattern might be fun enough to play
I play it fine, and it seems fun/interesting, keeping it in for now.
01:14:057 (2) - Spacing?
Moved it down a little.
01:18:171 (1) - What... the... this isnt fun really, it just plain blocks the view thank god there isnt kiai here or i could see someone with seizures D: up 2 u what u do with it, but i just tell you, this is just... ugly
tbh I hate this too XD but I don't want to just put a break in, so I'll change it eventually. Ignore this one exists for now, i'm just deleting it and putting a break in until I fix it XD
00:25:200 (4,5,6) - Spacing
This took lots of messing, I dunno what's wrong with grid align <_< after 5 minutes of adjusts, fixed.
00:26:743 (5) - Spacing
;_; Leave me alone! (fix'd )
00:38:742 (2,3) - Spacing
How did you notice that!? I think it's fixed now? Didn't even see a problem before 0.o
01:38:742 (1,2) - Spacing (shorter than the rest)
I'm confused, but I think I fixed it? Unsure of the problem 0.o
01:41:828 (1,2,3) - Spacing (longer than the rest)
Makes sense, fixed
01:49:371 (5) - Spacing
01:57:600 (5) - Spacing
02:01:542 (3) - Spacing
02:02:914 (3) - Spacing
02:04:285 (3) - Spacing
02:05:314 (8) - Spacing
02:07:028 (7) - Spacing
02:11:142 (4) - Spacing
02:33:600 (9) - Spacing
Purposely spaced! Supposed to be a challenge! =| -fixes anyway-
02:39:085 (5) - Spacing
02:40:114 (8) - Spacing
02:49:714 (4) - Spacing
02:55:885 (6) - Spacing
03:06:685 (2,3,4) - Spacing
03:07:714 (5) - Spacing
03:18:514 (4) - Spacing
03:20:228 (5,6) - umm Align? also, Spacing
03:22:628 (5) - Spacing
03:26:742 (2,3,4) - Spacing
03:27:771 (4,5) - Spacing
03:32:914 (1,2,3) - Spacing
03:34:285 (2,3) - Spacing
03:34:800 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing
03:39:428 (1,3,6) - Spacing
All these nitpicky spacing issues fixed [I HOPE]. I did the majority of the beatmap without distance snap XD I didn't like what distance snap had to offer. Most of the spacing imho don't hinder it's gameplay in the slightest, since it seems so miniscule, but it does look unprofessional. I'll PM you for a remod and hope to get a star =D
Note: Remember spacing follows the time-distance equality rule within the same combo

Uhuh, too many spacing errors to give it a star, if you want, you can send me a forum PM for a remod after you fix them ^^

Thanks for your assistance!

You can avoid distance snapping in between combos, or use longer distance snapping (Hold alt and drag the line at the top right) or shorter depending on what's needed, Insane can avoid dinstance snapping if justified (for example a certain pattern that is understandable for the player) making random patterns with random spacing more than challenge will make players RAGE and maybe a bubble popping, but it's up to you in the end.

As a side note, you dont HAVE to follow everything i say, if you disagree, at least give me a reason as to why (in spacing cases for example) and most of the stuff i said for Normal were just suggestions to make it prettier, if you give me a reason as to why you did that spacing i wont mind ignoring that spacing, i just pointed it out because i thought you overlooked it.

Now on to the re-mod:

Normal:
Umm looks cool now ^^
No errors found

Hard:
Ok spacing appears to be fine now. Also if ur looking for something to put instead of the slider, u can use a spinner, but up 2 u in the end ^^
It's really up to u if to keep the hidden sliders behind combo bursts, since ur the mapper and it's your map, i was just pointing my opinion on theese kind of stuffs, some people seem to like theese anyways, so yeah i'll just ignore that.
No errors found

Ok looks like the map is good now +Star, didnt bother opening AIMod this time as i trust what you said in your post.

I'm aware that I don't have to follow EVERYTHING you say, but really did feel like changing most of it once it was mentioned, and I didn't have a problem for most of it. Like I said, really appreciate your input =)

Some of the hiding doesn't even seem like hiding (to ME, anyways) and seems to be a decent challenge. I can get an S full combo on normal/easier, and 2.8mil A on Hard, so it all seems possible. There weren't any mistakes I felt were the beatmap's fault, simply my own sweaty, semi-functioning hands

Thanks for that tip on distance snapping, didn't know you could do that 0.o will have to remember from now on!

Will have to find some more modders =)

Sorry, but i don't like that song.. I won't mod normal and hard.

Overall
Change Artist to Johnny Frizz and lowercase the title.
Maybe add some Kiai Time
Set a preview point!

Easy
00:15:085 (4) - 1 tick to the right
00:59:657 (6) - 1(2) tick(s) to the right
01:10:971 (x) - add a circle
01:22:285 (x) - map this break
01:51:428 (1,2,3,4) - You can space this better.

Normal (cause that one really bugged me)
02:19:885 (1,2,3,1) - Like this:


Good Luck with your map!
~Star~

JohnnyFrizz's NG's username is spelled without the space, so I thought it would be logical to replicate that - though in the background, there clearly is a space. I think everything should remain as-is >_>

I'm sorry you don't like that song =( thank you for the help you're offering anyway!

I didn't know what Kiai was until earlier today... Eh, I don't think it's necessary <_< It messed me up on two maps I played that had it.

Easy
00:15:085 (4) - 1 tick to the right
00:59:657 (6) - 1(2) tick(s) to the right
01:10:971 (x) - add a circle
01:22:285 (x) - map this break
01:51:428 (1,2,3,4) - You can space this better.

All fixed.

Fixed That.... What was that in normal XD I guess I was a little careless because that wasn't intentional.

Good luck with your Queue =)

Arhar.

General;
Preview point an all diffs.
Use grid level 3 on all diffs and re-space them.

Easy;
00:08:228 (3,1,2) - Spacing.
01:55:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This isn't terribly appropriate for an easy.
02:00:685 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1) - This is also not approproate.

Normal;
00:12:685 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
00:39:942 (1,2) - These don't fit the rhythm.
00:45:428 (1) - Also does not fit.
00:54:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing.
01:09:600 (6) - Ugly.
01:18:685 (1,2) - Doesn't fit.
01:58:285 (1) - Spacing.
02:13:028 to 02:24:000 - Spacing is awful.

Hard;
00:13:714 (1,2,3) - Unreadable.

That's about it, have a star.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Arhar.

General;
Preview point an all diffs.
Use grid level 3 on all diffs and re-space them.

Easy;
00:08:228 (3,1,2) - Spacing.
[Fix'd]
01:55:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This isn't terribly appropriate for an easy.
[The difficulty is called "Easier" and not just Easy for a reason.]
02:00:685 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1) - This is also not approproate.
[^]

Normal;
00:12:685 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
[Fix'd]
00:39:942 (1,2) - These don't fit the rhythm.
[Fix'd]
00:45:428 (1) - Also does not fit.
[Intentional.]
00:54:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing.
[Minor, but fix'd]
01:09:600 (6) - Ugly.
[Well, I don't know how to make a symmetrical circle, so deal with it.]
01:18:685 (1,2) - Doesn't fit.
[Listen closer; also intentonal]
01:58:285 (1) - Spacing.
[Fix'd]
02:13:028 to 02:24:000 - Spacing is awful.
[More interesting that way.]

Hard;
00:13:714 (1,2,3) - Unreadable.
[Readable.]

That's about it, have a star.

Thanks for your criticism =D

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[easier]
01:11:314 (2) - Bad spacing
03:12:000 (3) - Aligns with (2).

[normal]
00:02:400 (1) - Bad spacing
00:04:114 (3) - ^
00:11:314 (2) - ^
00:39:771 (1) - ^
00:47:486 (1,2) - Use the same spacing as 00:48:343 (4,5)

[hard]
01:03:942 (6) - Bad spacing
[All suggestions fixed.]

Star~

Thank you very much!

General:
Set the same preview point for every difficulty.

Easier:
00:08:228 (3) Spacing
00:57:942 (1) ^
01:20:228 (1) ^
01:36:000 (1) ^
02:25:371 (4) ^
03:36:342 (2) ^
03:40:800 (1) ^

Normal:
I won't mod this because 20+ Spacing errors in AIMod. You can fix those for yourself.

Hard:
Even worse 50+ Spacing errors in AIMod. Please fix those by yourself. I if you don't know you can run the AIMod by pressing Control+Shift+A.


If you fixed all of this you can send a request for a mod in my queue again before I won't mod this.
That why you won't get a star yet.

How is it, that after fixing 25+ spacing issues, at least ONE of the modders using a so-called "AIMod", now yours gives almost twice as many? I can't eye any more spacing issues that aren't INTENTIONAL. Everything looks fine. Are you sure that your AIMod is giving a valid reading?

Edit:
Lol, this AIMod is a joke. Easier and Normal seemed to actually point out legitimate MILIMETER OFF (doesn’t affect gameplay) spaces, which I fixed. The problems it still gives me for Normal are about intentional spacing

And then on Hard... Wow, that is JOKE. I go to correct a note in the sequence, and it says it's correct when I make it look even WORSE. And then, after about 3 "corrections" it stops working completely. The bars don't move at all when I adjust the actual note. I went through and I looked at everything, and the spacing is fine, you're just an anal modder, which is unnecessary. None of the spacing affects gameplay or appearance impact. All of the spacing in hard is either adjusted to a very appropriate level which is visually acceptable TO THE EYE, and AIMod is just a calculation that makes for complete unnecessary movement. The majority of the spacing is intentional - some spots where it's spaced out a little more, and some of the slider combos are purposely parted as well.

Thanks, but no thanks. I won’t ask you to mod again because you're telling me to rely on unreliable calculations.

Hi~
Requested mod session

[Easy]
00:11:657 (3,5) - align it with 1?
00:33:600 (2) - spacing
When you fix it, respace this section, spacing must be consistent in easy and normal difficulties
00:56:571 (1) - "broken" slider. Delete it and put it again
01:04:457 (5) - spacing
01:07:542 (5) - new combo
01:12:685 (6) - ^
01:33:257 (3) - ^, delete new combo here 01:33:942
01:37:371 (5) - ^, delete new combo here 01:38:057
01:56:571 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:00:342 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:55:542 (3) - ^
00:57:600 (1) - ^
01:05:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no jumps on normal
02:13:028 - 02:24:000 - respace this section (spacing must be consistent in easy and normal difficulties)
02:26:742 (8) - new combo?
02:39:771 (2) - spacing

[Hard]
02:33:600 (9) - spacing (in harder difficulties don't change it mid-combo)

~star

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hi~
Requested mod session

[Easy]
00:11:657 (3,5) - align it with 1?
00:33:600 (2) - spacing
When you fix it, respace this section, spacing must be consistent in easy and normal difficulties
00:56:571 (1) - "broken" slider. Delete it and put it again
[Oops! I wonder how that happened 0.o wasn't broken before.]
01:04:457 (5) - spacing
01:07:542 (5) - new combo
01:12:685 (6) - ^
01:33:257 (3) - ^, delete new combo here 01:33:942
01:37:371 (5) - ^, delete new combo here 01:38:057
01:56:571 (5) - ^
[Everything listed is Fix'd; thanks!]

[Normal]
00:00:342 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:55:542 (3) - ^
00:57:600 (1) - ^
01:05:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no jumps on normal
02:13:028 - 02:24:000 - respace this section (spacing must be consistent in easy and normal difficulties)
02:26:742 (8) - new combo?
02:39:771 (2) - spacing
[With some dismay, I fixed everything but the last suggestion. I feel like keeping it interesting <_<]

[Hard]
02:33:600 (9) - spacing (in harder difficulties don't change it mid-combo)
[Fix'd]

~star

Thank you!

Hello~

General
Delete .osb file and Full-submit

Easier
01:00:342 (6) - None at end
01:13:371 (3) - None
01:14:400 (1) - Start at 01:14:057

Normal
00:19:542 (2) - None
00:19:885 (3) - Finish
00:39:428 (5) - None
00:40:800 (4) - ^
01:12:685 (2) - ? Redesign the slider..
01:26:057 (6) - Reduce 1 reverse

Hard
-Erase useless bookmarks please..
02:24:000 (1) - Put to middle
221,828 - Make this an inheriting timing section

Star..

sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

General
Delete .osb file and Full-submit
[Keep getting told that, and seeing it... what IS an .osb file, why is it created, and what does it do if it stays?]
Easier
01:00:342 (6) - None at end
01:13:371 (3) - None
01:14:400 (1) - Start at 01:14:057
[Fix'd]

Normal
00:19:542 (2) - None
00:19:885 (3) - Finish
00:39:428 (5) - None
00:40:800 (4) - ^
01:12:685 (2) - ? Redesign the slider..
01:26:057 (6) - Reduce 1 reverse
[Erhm... mostly fixed - except some of these just make it sound too weird @_@]

Hard
-Erase useless bookmarks please..
[Used them to get places without listening to the song 100 times deleted]
02:24:000 (1) - Put to middle
221,828 - Make this an inheriting timing section
[All fix'd]

Star..

Thanks for modding!

.osb file is a file which is used for a storyboard
Your map does not have a storyboard, and then an .osb file is only a waste of a file size

Ah. Thank you! I'll keep that in mind =)

Hi

[Easier]
00:10:971 (1) - Add a finish?
00:32:914 (1) - This slider is overfinish..... Remove one of them?
00:34:285 (3) - ^
00:35:657 (1) - ^
00:37:028 (3) - ^
00:56:571 (1) - Maybe try allign with 4 from right to make nice pattern?
01:08:228 (3) - Really, I don't like this note is stacked with 2, don't stack plz
01:10:971 (1,2) - I think overlapped by previous slider doesn't looks good
01:13:371 (3,4) - Can you don't stack with 2?
01:56:571 (1,2) - I think this object makes confuse for beginner player. Can you don't stack it?
02:46:457 (1) - Phew, the spinner is waaaaay too long, can you crop it?
02:59:657 (5) - New combo
03:02:057 (4) - ^
03:13:371 (1,2) - Maybe delete 1 repeating slider in 03:13:371 (1) and move 03:15:085 (2) to 03:14:742?
03:15:085 (2,3,4) - Spacing error

[Normal]
00:17:142 (3,4,5) - This 1/2 beat is not fit to the music, IMO. Delete one of them?
00:17:828 (6,7,8) - ^
00:35:314 (1) - I think this slider doesn't fit at the rhythm. Move forward to white tick and delete the object at 00:37:028 (2)?
00:45:257 (x) - Add note?
01:12:685 (2) - Unrankable Slider LOL (Do not overlap the slider themself, I see the reverse arrow wrong way, It's must be you add the point. Please remove one)
02:29:828 (1,1,1,1) - Ok, this is a combo spammer. I suggest you to remove the new combo three of them
03:08:571 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - It's really combo spammer! You have to remove them!

[Hard]
00:14:057 (2) - This object is hidden
01:40:457 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is soo weird
02:55:542 (5,6,7) - ^

Not bad
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Hi

[Easier]
00:10:971 (1) - Add a finish?
[Fix'd]
00:32:914 (1) - This slider is overfinish..... Remove one of them?
00:34:285 (3) - ^
00:35:657 (1) - ^
00:37:028 (3) - ^
[I see what you mean. Fix'd]
00:56:571 (1) - Maybe try allign with 4 from right to make nice pattern?
[Fix'd]
01:08:228 (3) - Really, I don't like this note is stacked with 2, don't stack plz
[Fix'd]
01:10:971 (1,2) - I think overlapped by previous slider doesn't looks good
[Fix'd]
01:13:371 (3,4) - Can you don't stack with 2?
[You don't seem to like stacking v_v" It's fine in my opinion.]
01:56:571 (1,2) - I think this object makes confuse for beginner player. Can you don't stack it?
[One of the many reasons it's not simply called Easy, but Easier <_<]
02:46:457 (1) - Phew, the spinner is waaaaay too long, can you crop it?
[Fix'd]
02:59:657 (5) - New combo
03:02:057 (4) - ^
[All fix'd]
03:13:371 (1,2) - Maybe delete 1 repeating slider in 03:13:371 (1) and move 03:15:085 (2) to 03:14:742?
[Messes everything up v_v"]
03:15:085 (2,3,4) - Spacing error
[Umm... Fix'd?]

[Normal]
00:17:142 (3,4,5) - This 1/2 beat is not fit to the music, IMO. Delete one of them?
00:17:828 (6,7,8) - ^
[You're right, it doesn't, and I knew that when I put it in there.]
00:35:314 (1) - I think this slider doesn't fit at the rhythm. Move forward to white tick and delete the object at 00:37:028 (2)?
[Fix'd, much better]
00:45:257 (x) - Add note?
[Fix'd]
01:12:685 (2) - Unrankable Slider LOL (Do not overlap the slider themself, I see the reverse arrow wrong way, It's must be you add the point. Please remove one)
[Never even noticed it was pointing the wrong way XD Normal was my most buggy beatmap since this was my first attempt ever at beatmapping. Half the map was glitched sliders that didn't work appropriately because I could never get them to work XDD!! Thanks for pointing that out. fix'd]
02:29:828 (1,1,1,1) - Ok, this is a combo spammer. I suggest you to remove the new combo three of them
[...It looked good as all different combos though =| Fix'd]
03:08:571 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - It's really combo spammer! You have to remove them!
[It looks better that way; I don't see the problem.]

[Hard]
00:14:057 (2) - This object is hidden
[Fix'd...]
01:40:457 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is soo weird
[...And? It's fun >_>]
02:55:542 (5,6,7) - ^
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Not bad
STAR

Thank you!

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Easier
00:10:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - evenly space these
00:38:400 (1) - IMO, you should map this instead of using a long spinner
01:31:885 (1,2) - remove new combo?
02:45:085 (1) - remove this spinner and map from the start of the spinner to the kiai time
02:59:657 (1,2) - not liking this in an easy
03:13:371 (1) - remove 1 repeat
03:15:085 (2) - start this on the previous white tick, then remove a repeat
03:16:800 (3) - move this to here : 03:16:114
03:17:828 (4) - move this to here : 03:17:485
03:25:371 (4,1) - not to crazy about this on the easiest diff
03:26:742 (4,1) - ^
03:28:114 (4,1) - ^
03:35:657 (1) - shorten this to here : 03:36:000
03:37:028 (4,1) - remove thisl
03:37:028 (x) - start a slider here and end 03:37:371
03:38:742 (1) - shorten this a white tick

Normal - your sliders start in awkward places
01:26:057 (6) - add a repeat
03:07:885 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - new combo spam is a NO NO
03:40:457 (1) - remove new combo

Hard Overall - make it were all those 1/2 don't overlap so much.
00:13:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks ugly
00:24:342 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:714 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:457 (1) - ^
01:08:571 (2) - new combo
01:14:057 (2) - ^
01:40:457 (6,7) - fix it so that (7) isn't hidden
01:41:485 (9) - kinda hidden
01:42:857 (4) - kinda hidden
01:49:371 (5) - new combo
01:49:714 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:800 (6) - new combo
02:05:657 (1) - remove new combo
02:06:171 (4) - new combo

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