strager wrote:

Full submit. The map wasn't fully submitted.

Symbolic wrote:

[Hard]

Add a Background please.
Added.

00:30:63 (4) - New combo.
00:31:03 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:23 (4) - New combo.
00:32:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
Sorry, but I think it's not necessary.

00:45:43 (1) - I'm sorry but this isn't rankable, you can't see which way the slider goes because of the start- and endpoint are overlapping, that is not allowed. You have to change the shape of the slider so that the start- and endpoint don't overlap OR you have to storyboard an arrow which way the slider will go.
00:48:64 (1) - ^ sliders can't overlap themselves.
00:55:04 (1) - ^
There are already this kind of sliders in Canon (O2 version)+, so I think it's ok.

02:20:03 (8,9,10) - Remove these jumps, space them with d-snap on.
Added a new combo at [7], see if others feel fine.

04:16:62 (BREAK) - What is this 53 second break useful for? Since there are no notes behind it, remove it. Also, a 53 second break = insane
Removed.

Very fun map!
Starred *

gdeath wrote:

Edit:done

Mafiamaster wrote:

Really creative beatmaps! Song is awesome :3
I saw nothing wrong!

gdeath's Thanatos~
Oh wait, one thing
00:35:82 - Redo break. It'll shorten ;_;

Ekaru wrote:

Only one thing:

middle difficulty:

You know those letter sliders? Yeah, get rid of them. How they're done is confusing and, in some cases like the O and part of the A, unrankable. XP

Other than that, good! Star!

Armin wrote:

SPOILER

Resize the image Eleuseus x Leontius The max size should be of 1024x760px. <<fixed

-Leontius
00:30:828 Remove the clap; add a finish <<refused
00:31:228 clap <<refused
00:32:428 remove the clap <<refused
00:47:431 remove whistle <<refused
00:53:832^ <<fixed
00:55:033 whistle at the start <<fixed
00:56:233 remove whistle <<refused
00:56:633 whistle at the start <<fixed
00:57:833 remove whistle <<refused
00:58:233 whistle at the start; remove the whistle at the end <<fixed
00:59:033^ <<fixed
00:59:834 whistle <<fixed
01:00:234 remove whistle <<refused
01:01:034 remove whistle <<fixed
01:40:432 finish <<fixed
02:20:419 finish <<fixed
02:20:619 remake this break <<fixed
02:36:022 whistle <<fixed
02:36:422 remove whistle <<fixed

Eleuseus
00:33:828 clap? (I'm not sure about this) <<refused
00:35:429 ^ <<refused
01:34:031 finish at the start <<fixed
01:40:431^ <<fixed
01:51:430 remove clap <<fixed
01:54:631^ <<refused
02:14:819 remove whistle at the end? <<refused
02:20:419 finish? <<refused
02:45:222 (1,2,3,4) Unintuitive Spacing <<fixed

I like this difficulty! °A°

gdeath's Thanatos
01:09:034 spacing
03:21:820 Finish
03:25:020 ^
04:14:820 ^
<<need to check with gdeath

That's all.
Starred!

LuigiHann wrote:

mp3 filesize is much larger than it should be... 320kbps is overkill for osu. You should convert it down to 192kbps at most.

kino77 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod~
What a cool map~
I like it~

[Leontius]
01:18:03(1)-End here 01:18:63? <<感觉还是不加长的好
01:21:53(2,3)-Spacing? <<改掉了

[Eleuseus]
Nothing found~

[Thannatos]
00:41:83(1)-连打的起始点让我很费解... <<被gdeath否决了。。。

Star~~

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Eleu

03:17:22 (1,2,3) - 建议slider带过。因为在双倍bpm。手会不经意打快。 <<是您太触了吧。。。
nice map.

Than

双倍速度那里。note小+喷星星+overall7+间距大。让我茫然。

我觉得note够小了。不要跟随ds去排，做的间距小一点，会好读也好打一点。 <<gdeath说不改

我感觉timing有问题。Than那张刚开几个note我打不到300.我timing太烂~也测不准。 <<貌似是稍微有一点点快，但他能很容易的打到300，而且这是awp测的，我也测不准，只能等timing高人了。。。

Lokamp wrote:

Leontius
01:21:53 (3) - move it 1-2 squares down <<fixed.
03:51:62 (4,4) - clap the beat and the slider's end
03:58:42 (6,3) - ^
04:02:02 (4) - whistle this slider and end it with a finish <<fixed.

Eleuseus
Wonderful! ;3

Thanatos
Perfect ^^

A star for this epic beatmap ^^

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- You need an easier difficulty. <<It seems not necessary for now.

[Leontius]

01:20:83 (1) - A note after the spinner is too hard for an easy difficulty. <<The spinner is long enough that people can get ready before the note.
01:24:03 (1) - ^
01:27:23 (1) - ^
02:14:01 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal/easy. <<Fixed.

[Eleuseus]

02:13:61 (8,9,10) - Wrong spacing. Adjust it. <<Fixed.

[Thanatos]

01:40:23 (7) - Too close from (6). <<Fixed.
02:46:82 (4) - New combo. <<It'll confuse the slider and bg because of red note color, so refused.
03:44:42 (1) - Starting from here all notes are on blue lines. Adjust last offset! <<Fixed.

Zekira wrote:

First offset: 29233
Fixed.

[Thanatos]
The selection of which notes have New Combo is weird here (on the first part, at least)... get someone to doublecheck those.

Pasonia wrote:

Eh, I'm sorry but was Leontius a new difficulty? I was about to note that there's a shortage of easier difficulties.

It has been there for a long time.

Leontius

00:34:083 (3) - Distance TOO FAR. Either snap it all the way up (which would make the two sliders look pretty close) or newcombo this one.
01:54:023 (1,2,3,4) - This one is a spacing issue, but I selected all four because I want all four elements to not be as far from each other, YET not that close either, like a square rather than a rectangle. In-combo jumps like this are sorely not needed in easier difficulties.
03:15:042 (1,2) - I suggest you newcombo 2 and remove it from 1, because there's an obvious spacing issue.
03:16:082 (4) - Move closer to slider end of 3.
03:31:022 (3) - Move this circle upwards so it's further from 2 and 4 yet maintain the same distance from both.
04:10:082 (3,4) - Pull closer to slider end of 2.