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Venetian Princess - Outer Space

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aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2009
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aRiskOfRain
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 October 2009 at 15:39:48

Artist: Venetian Princess
Title: Outer Space
BPM: 119
Filesize: 3406kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4.57 stars, 286 notes)
  3. Normal (3.21 stars, 228 notes)
Download: Venetian Princess - Outer Space
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is a great song, so enjoy!

EDIT: 18/8/09 - Easy added and Normal nerfed.
EDIT: 21/8/09 - Easy hardened and Hard hardened.
EDIT: Some of the new suggestions added.
Last edited by aRiskOfRain , edited 8 times in total.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
I'm not sure about the BPM... It's really Hard to check lol Sorry about that!

[Easy]
1:22:49(Break) - Redo this break please
I think slider is overused. Please use more circle instead of sliders D:

[Normal&Hard]
Can you make [Hard] more harder? I think it's too similar with [Normal].......
Kinda boring, but well mapped.

I'll re-check this later, Good luck!
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
adam2046
1,653 posts
Joined April 2008
adam2046
Offset: 26,372 I reckon.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
V Easy:V
SPOILER
ZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzz
This Diff is really boring even for being a Easy,due to you used almost only sliders and that difficulty has very low slider velocity.
*WARNING OF EGOISM* :twisted: My beatmaps has pretty fun and diverse Easy (Check them out)

V Normal V
SPOILER
This difficuity is far too similar to Hard in some parts.....not similar but identical like 1:06:960 - 1:22:842, 1:47:296 - 2:03:178 , 2:35:699 - 2:38:277 and 2:43:766 - 2:51:582
Make these parts easier on Normal or make these parts on Hard harder!

V Hard V

:)


When it's far from the most interesting map i have played it still gets a star
*star*
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
[Normal]
These are all just suggestions; you don't have to follow them if you don't want to
Suggestions:
01:12:03 (1) - I think this works much better if you make this reverse at every red tick
01:46:06 (1) - This would work better if you place a spinner at the next blue tick, then make the spinner finish at 01:47:07.
01:52:37 (1) - Make this do the same thing as 01:12:03's suggestion.
02:54:38 (1)- move forward 1/2 a beat and place one last Hit circle here
02:58:42 (1) - ^

Great Beatmap!

[Hard]
01:34:72 (9) - Make this a slider that ends where (10) is, and In my opinion, (Azure_Kyte hides)
01:35:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think a jump would be cool here. It's your map, You don't have to do this, I just think this is a great place to do it. A vertical flip would work just fine ;p
01:47:83 (3,7,11) - Remove the claps here and place notes in the spaces which fall off out of DS a little. Small jumps here would be cool. If you do this, you could place notes so that 2,4,6,8 and 10 line up. Again, you don't have to do this.
02:47:58 (13) - Shorten this so that it ends at 02:49:59. Begin a new slider at 02:50:10, which reverses at every white tick until the new combo.
02:54:38 (1) - Finish hitsound here?
02:58:42 (1) - ^

Overall, a great beatmap and song; Keep up the good work!
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Easy~
01:22:84 (7) - Suggestion: Add a finish
02:03:17 (7) - Suggestion: ^

Normal~
02:58:38 (6) - Stack this on the fading 2.

Hard~
02:25:36 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the end of this slider.
Inherit your timing sections at 02:47:54 and 02:51:58
Also lower the overall volume on those two timing sections to the first one's volume.
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Looked at a while back, relooked.

Looks fine to me, star.
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Nice map overall.. However, Hard was kinda repetetive at points but that's just an opinion I guess.

+Star power!
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
How dare you not add the video!
Here, i got you one with 10 MB, no sound, and okay quality.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/woohoo.avi

Real modding incoming soon. What I've seen so far was okay, but I need to check it thoroughly ^_^
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Larto wrote:

How dare you not add the video!
Here, i got you one with 10 MB, no sound, and okay quality.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/woohoo.avi

Real modding incoming soon. What I've seen so far was okay, but I need to check it thoroughly ^_^
Awsome Mr Larto, but could you put it on Filefront or something, as I can't save it... And now I feel bad.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
If you're using firefox, I think you CAN save it? Ctrl + S go.

MODDING GO!

Overall: Could use some more hitsounds, especially on Easy.

Hard is good. Much copypasta but okay.

Normal:
00:37:46 (7,1) - jump is weird.
00:45:78 (7,8,1) - you could just un-stack the (8) and make the spacing more normal, that'd be new-player friendly, too.
01:38:72 (1,2,3) - 1/4 stacks on normal? D: Sure?
01:43:51 (4,5,6) - spacing is sort of unsteady.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,947 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Timing: 119bpm
Offset: 26372

[Easy]
Tick rate should be 1
Not much else to say. Everything is pretty good.

Don't give kudosu for this. There's nothing wrong with your map so my modding is pointless. Ready to be ranked, that's for sure.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
Uh oh, the avi is too long, and I can't shorten it... anyone know how? *useless face*
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter

DiamondCrash wrote:

Uh oh, the avi is too long, and I can't shorten it... anyone know how? *useless face*
Use a video editing software.
Movie Maker is default on all computers that run on Windows
Powerdrone
464 posts
Joined October 2009
Powerdrone
Do you mean that you don't want to map the entire video? I think if you only map a certain amount, it will automatically end after the last hit circle right?

Also, I'll be modding this map because this song is amazing. XD

Edit: Oops, I fail.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

NoHItter wrote:

Use a video editing software.
Movie Maker is default on all computers that run on Windows
Can't open avi files, need a codec, and I'm not downloading something off some god-awful shady back-alley website, thank you very much.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Don't you want to get this ranked anymore? I liked it :[
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
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aRiskOfRain

Larto wrote:

Don't you want to get this ranked anymore? I liked it :[
Really? I didn't. :3

I'll probably take it out once I get another one out of the graveyard and ranked...
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