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bmin11
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Armin
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bmin11
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minyeob
I think chorus part's hitsound is too big :;

Offset: -8ms
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bmin11
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MoonFragrance
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Kitsunemimi
:O

Insane:
00:35:98 (1) - Don't suddenly change spacing just because of the new timing section. Actually, I don't know what the point of that previous timing section is... Maybe remove it?
00:40:98 (1,2) - These two timing sections, move back 100ms, so that people have room for error.
00:43:23 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
00:58:48 (1,2,3) - Don't randomly make it jump...
02:05:48 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing isn't really right. Either make it regular, or 1.
02:08:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:12:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:14:48 (7,8) - This one's really off.
02:15:73 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not a good place for a jump
02:28:23 (3) - Add whistle hitsound.
02:32:23 (1) - Whistle hitsound goes on head of the slider, not end.
02:35:98 (1,2,3,1) - Put more notes in there.

That's all!
Nice map, here's your star!
MoonFragrance
my diff is finally completed :D lol

Download: Big Bang & 2NE1 - Lollipop (bmin11) [M.F.'s Normal].osu
Kitsunemimi
Broken sliders!!
Topic Starter
bmin11

Harris73 wrote:

Broken sliders!!
:o
Layola_old
Normal:
Change volume to 6.

00:19:98 (5,6) - Spacing.
01:48:73 (1) - Finish.

Insane:
Change all Normal volume to 6.

00:16:98 (1) to 00:27:98 (2) - Overlapping sliders. Please fix D:!
01:00:36 (1) - Finish.
03:08:48 (2) - ^

Could use more creative hitsounds ;o!
Topic Starter
bmin11
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Shinxyn
Hmm, it's a short song

MoonFragrance-
00:04:73 (3,4) - don't mix whistle+clap on same beat please~!
00:31:23 (1,2) - err... 1/4 beats don't sound right, stick with 1/2 please
00:36:61 (3) - this has a very bad feel during play, I suggest just stick to a single hitcircle on 00:36:73 instead..
I'm kinda sketchy on those clap+finish mixes...

Hard-it's not very hard.. on well~
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:57:48 (6,7) - right a tick
01:05:98 (3,4,5,6) - up a tick so 3 aligns with 1?
01:15:23 (6) - new combo?
01:56:98 (6) - new combo!!
hitsounds are... fine, don't like the loudness of the whistles in most parts, but they're fine
Redo Breaks~

Insane-
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:35:98 (1,2,3,4) - ow my ears, it got too loud too suddenly, have this combo volume at 3-4 ticks? (then new timing after that)
00:41:23 (2) - new combo imo (since that 1 before sounds like a lone note)
00:49:23 (4) - down a tick please~
02:21:23 - in this timing section, I suggest you remove the first whistle off every new combo's beat (first part of slider,etc)
02:31:23 (1,1) - remove sliderslide whistles please
02:32:73 - add note with whistle please
02:32:98 (3) - ^ if you added note, make this new combo
whistles follow their own pace... they're fine as well

Hard's normal hitsound volume (the only one it has) is at 5 volume ticks, while Insane's at 6~?
MoonFragrance
Zekira
Offset: 2985

[Insane]
02:35:73 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Move 1-1 away; differently placed on the timeline but stacked in this case is very offshooting (in this case, 3-1 is 1/2 away but stacked, but 1-6 is 1/4 stack too, which is a bit offshooting). (there are some exceptions, but unfortunately this one isn't.)
MoonFragrance
Topic Starter
bmin11

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 2985

[Insane]
02:35:73 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Move 1-1 away; differently placed on the timeline but stacked in this case is very offshooting (in this case, 3-1 is 1/2 away but stacked, but 1-6 is 1/4 stack too, which is a bit offshooting). (there are some exceptions, but unfortunately this one isn't.)
Thank you~
K2J
[M.F.'s Normal]
Great!

[Hard]
Cool!

[Insane]
Awesome!

heintsi
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Topic Starter
bmin11

heintsi wrote:

Cool map but not big fan of song :) reminds too much of allo papy but whatever xD
allo papy???
:?
GbL
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Topic Starter
bmin11

GbL wrote:

[Hard]

00:47:23 (x) - add a note
00:47:48 (x) - ^
01:08:98 (1) - fix spacing
01:46:98 (1) - ^

[Insane]

02:36:73 (1) - remove new combo
02:55:23 (9) - new combo
03:03:23 (9) - ^



Star
.
Thank you :)
yeahyeahyeahhh
IRC mods! Star~!
heintsi

bmin11 wrote:

heintsi wrote:

Cool map but not big fan of song :) reminds too much of allo papy but whatever xD
allo papy???
:?
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6107 ah meant this map but thinking again it doesn't have much similarities :D

I'll take another look on map when i'm back from army ~8days
Topic Starter
bmin11
This map won't be fixed from now on, because I can't log in
So this map is going to be ranked like this or graveyarded (actually requested already, but I have no respones)
WyndII
oh lol, i hear this in our local radio station and i found this =D
Good map btw~
Topic Starter
bmin11
They even put Korean songs on radio??
Anyway, Thanks for the star :)
Hope all the error could be fixed this thanksgiving
anonymous_old
MF's Easy
SPOILER

00:36:67 (3) : Move this back by 1/8 of a beat. (Timing > Snap Divisor)
01:08:047 : Add a beat here.
01:08:235 : Add a beat here.

normal
SPOILER

00:42:485 : Remove 1 and make the slider before it go once more. (you might want to flip that slider horizontally)
00:53:985 : Time for etna-sliders. (I made this edit so you could see.)

hard
SPOILER

00:14:985 : Combine these two into a slider.
DeathxShinigami
[MF's Easy]
00:36:36 (2,3) - make these new combos?

[Normal]
Lower the drain by 1. way to much for a song like this.

[Hard]
00:43:23 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda ew. doesn't really work to well change to stack?
01:40:98 (1) - Move this to the center thats how it usually works when a note appears rght after a spinner.

Overall: I think the artist is wrong. Shouldn't it be Big Bang feat. 2NE1 - Lollipop? But I'm not sure since I can't confirm,
Topic Starter
bmin11
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Shulin
I like this song, so here is a random mod:

Note, these are just suggestions and most of them are hit sounds, I should point out that when I give a hit sound mod I always follow the song i.e. clap where the song claps, also my mod is really fussy. However, feel free to ignore all of my suggestions :D

Easy:

SPOILER
General You start off with the audio at 7, then at 00:12:48 you reduce it to 6. I suggest increasing the volume to 8 or keeping it at 7 rather than reducing the volume of the hit sounds when the song starts.

00:02:98 (1) – Try adding a clap hit sound at the end of the slider, reduce the audio of the clap to 5, then go back to normal audio [You have it set to 7.]
00:03:73 (2) - ^
00:06:98 (1) - ^
00:09:98 (4) – Finish here sounds better than two claps imo.
00:15:98 (4) – Clap at the end of the slider.
00:19:98 (1,1) – Increase volume for maximum effect.
00:20:98 (1) – Add a clap at the very end of the slider. [4th beat].
00:23:98 (3) – Clap at the end of the slider. [3rd beat]
00:25:98 (2) - ^
00:27:98 (1,1) – Increase volume to maximum for effect.
00:32:36 (3) – Clap, clap and finish at the end.
00:34:23 (2) – Clap 2nd beat, clap and finish 3rd beat.
00:35:48 – Add a beat here an easy player would expect it since its on a white tick.
00:35:98 (1,1,1) – 3 finishes in a row overpowers the vocals, try clap, clap, finish.
00:37:23 (1) – Clap end of slider.
00:39:23 (2) – Clap end of slider.
01:06:73 (1,2,3) – 3 finishes, clap, finish, finish?
01:12:48 (4) – I’d avoid hiding beats in easy but otherwise its ok.
01:23:98 (1,2) – Increase volume for maximum effect.


Normal:

SPOILER
General: Too many whistles... seriously. If you take any of my suggestions please reduce the number of whistles.

00:19:98 (5,6) – Increase volume for maximum effect. Add finish?
00:27:98 (5,6) - ^
00:29:23 (1,1,1) – I think you could have done more with the beat here.
00:37:23 (1) – Add a clap to the 2nd beat.
00:37:98 (2) – Remove clap from 2nd beat.
00:39:23 (1) – Clap 2nd beat.
00:44:98 (1) – Add clap at the end of the slider.
00:51:48 (2,3,4) – Clap, Clap Finish, Clap Finish.
00:52:73 (5) – Remove finish at the end of the slider.
00:56:235 – I was expecting a beat here.
00:56:735 - ^
01:00:36 (4) – Add finish and clap, also try moving to the white tick, I know it does not coincide with the vocals but it does coincide with the beat.
01:04:23 (9) – Remove whistle.
01:12:235 – Beat?
01:14:73 (5,1,2,3,4,1) – 6 whistles in a row?!… Remove from 1, clap 3, and remove from 01:16:98 (1)
01:17:98 (3) – Remove whistle. Clap instead?
01:19:23 (6) – Unnecessary whistle.
01:19:735 – Expecting a beat.
01:19:98 (8) – Remove whistle…
01:20:98 (1) - ^
01:21:98 (3) - ^
01:38:73 (1) – Add finish to this spinner.
01:56:98 (1) – The whistles have come back, a regular beat sounds better in these places imo.
02:00:48 (6) – Remove whistle, keep clap.
02:00:98 (1) – ^
02:03:98 (3) – Remove.
02:19:98 (1,1) – Increase volume for effect.


Hard:

SPOILER
General: Timing: 60 BPM just for hard?! Did something go wrong with the timing on this difficulty? You have it at x2 BPM for most of the song… that shouldn’t be the case, if you wanted to slow things down then use x0.5 the BPM, I wouldn’t recommend lowering the actual BPM for the whole song and then x2 the rest of it so its in beat.

Most of what has been said about the hit sounds and volume can be applied here so I’ve concentrated less on the hit sounds for Hard. My biggest concern is the BPM and timing sections.

00:02:98 (1) – Clap end of slider.
00:06:98 (1) - - ^
00:15:48 (2,3,4,5) – Beats instead of whistles.
00:25:98 (3,4,5,1) – Over use of whistles.
00:27:98 (2) – Increase volume for effect.
00:35:985 – Timing section 60BPM for no reason [You don’t even use a slider]
00:36:61 (3,4) – Out of beat, as a result of ^
01:00:985 – Maximum audio? You don’t do this on the other difficulties and I would recommend a maximum of 8 on this song.
01:09:98 (3,4,5) – Rethink these whistles.
01:23:98 (1,2) – I would have recommended increasing the volume at this point but it can’t go any higher.
01:40:985 – Its gone quiet again…
01:48:73 (12) – This is an example where you could have used x0.5
02:52:987 – This timing section would not be necessary if you kept 120BPM, you could have used x2 here.

Overall - I can't fault the layout of this map I like it but the use of volume control and hit sounds is scattered. The fact that it differs so rapidly for each difficulty is often a bad sign. The timing on hard worries me so, I'll star it though. I hope this mod helped and good luck :D
Topic Starter
bmin11
For Hard, I used bpm 60, because I wanted to map the introducing part and it has to be slow....
02:52:987 – This timing section would not be necessary if you kept 120BPM, you could have used x2 here.
Wouldn't work. If it was 120 BPM x 2, that sliders would be so fast that it won't be diff Hard. Used 180 BPM

I do agree with whistles. I just didn't fix it, because I thought I won't be able to log in for a long time.
Thanks for fixing it for me. Helped alot (laziness)
MoonFragrance
DeathxShinigami
Orz.

For all you ctb lovers

Now with 100% perfection. Yay for smaller circle size.

Download: DeathxShinigami - Big Bang & 2NE1 - Lollipop [Hard] (2009-10-12) CatchTheBeat.osr
Tanmak
[MF's Easy] and [Normal]

Fine.

[Hard]

00:58:48 (1,2,3) 이건 일부러 멀게 배치를 한 것인가요? -ㅅ-a
01:44:48 (4,5) 노트가 조금 가깝네요.
02:37:23 (2,3) ^

국내에서 꽤나 히트친 Lolipop이 예전부터 올라왔던 노래네요. 별 드리겠습니다. ^-^*

p.s.: 우려되는 것이..제가 볼 때, osu!에 올라와있는 비트맵 중 서클 크기가 4단계 이상(4단계가 이 비트맵의 Hard와 같음.)인 맵은 꽤나 드물어 보이던데(아무래도 크기가 작으면 플레이하기가 꽤나 까다로워지니까..) Hard의 서클 크기는 괜찮을지 걱정입니다. -_-;
Topic Starter
bmin11
Decreased the hit circle size by 1
TraineeAHS
Star.
Sure
nice map star~
Luneko
Hi ^^

|Blue = Suggestion | Red = Change plz | Green = Design |

[M.F.'s Easy]
00:52:485 (1) - Remove this note
01:08:235 - Add note
Good!

[Normal]
00:13:985 (2) - Star slider here
if ^ then : 00:13:735 - Add note here
00:16:985 (1,2) - Nothing bad with these... just feels kinda weird
00:20:985 (1,2) - ^
00:28:735 - Add note
00:28:985 - ^
01:02:735 (6) - Start new combo
01:05:235 - Add note
01:05:735 - ^
01:09:235 - ^
01:09:735 - ^
01:10:235 - ^
01:17:235 - ^
01:17:735 - ^
01:18:235 - ^
At all a rly nice diff

[Hard]
Perfect!

KillerRind~
PS : Star!
Topic Starter
bmin11
Only took the new combo issue for [Normal]. Sorry...
00:13:985 (2) - Star slider here
if ^ then : 00:13:735 - Add note here
The slider is starting there and the red suggestion sounds weird for me... I mean the song didn't even start, so didn't fixed
Please tell (or post) the reason for the red suggestion.

Oh, and it won't be updated until my next holiday (not sure when)
Thank you
Henkie
New difficulty coming up, with new background and mp3, i'll change the timing sections for all difficulties where needed and mail the complete beatmap back to bmin~

EDIT: Finished everything, replaced background for all diffs with the one from my old lollipop map, same for .mp3 file, changed offsets according to the new .mp3 file for all diffs, same for ALL timing sections of all difficulties( ×.× ), add my own difficulty, changed creator name from HenkieBP to bmin11, difficulty is called " Henkie's *pop* "

I think this deserves a kudosu actually, but maybe i should wait till some people (BATs) see the results.. D:

Mailing song folder to bmin11
Topic Starter
bmin11
Will upload on my next holiday

Reason why Henkie deserves a kudos are...
1. Fixed the timings due to mp3 change
2. BG given
3. Advised the map
4. He is cool
DeathxShinigami
Consider using this as a preview point.

00:57:098 - Set it here?

Don't award me kudosu until all of you etheir disagree or agree with my point.
askerlate47
s.t.a.r~
Jinxy
[Easy]
Add a lead-in time for at least 2 seconds.

[Normal]
Nazi 00:19:086 (3) - Move one grid to the right.

[Hard]
Add a lead-in time for at least 2 seconds.
00:33:036 (1,2,3,4) - What is this? Change to 00:33:073 (2) and 00:33:098 (3), remove (4)

[*pop*]
Okay, the "Background and .mp3 blah blah" is UGLY.
I don't mind the "Difficulty by", but don't let it keep fading and reappearing.


Starred, I guess.
MoonFragrance
Topic Starter
bmin11
All fixed
Kytoxid
Beatmap looks really good already, there are just some suggestions.

[General]

Any tags?

[M.F.'s Easy]
No issues.

[Normal]
00:45:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - Weird looking stacks. Set distance snap to 0.0x, lock them together.
01:08:061 (1) - Remove new combo here, or add new combos in the surrounding sections.

[Hard]
01:04:061 (6) - Move the new combo from the next note onto this one?
01:08:061 (6) - ^
01:12:011 (7) - New combo?
01:18:036 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle?
01:52:011 (1,2) - Center these, so they stack right on 5?
01:56:011 (6) - Combos are a bit weird in this section (where different groups say the chorus).

[Henkie's *pop*]
The text fading in and out at random times was a bit distracting, but otherwise, it's all good. :)

Starred!
Henkie
Here's my diff
Deleted fading on "difficulty by"
asked bmin what to do with the other storyboard and fixed

JInxyjem wrote:

[*pop*]
Okay, the "Background and .mp3 blah blah" is UGLY.
You COULD say it nicer you know.

Download: Big Bang & 2NE1 - Lollipop (bmin11) [Henkie's pop].osu
Kerensa
hey ^^

M.F easy:
00:02:110 [3]i think this is too close to the previous note.

Normal:
* i don't really have any problem with this difficulty, but i realise the spacing in the map is abit on even, i mean one time there is no gap and the next time there is a small gap, i just think it looks weird. i think it would look better if there are around the same distance lengthen away.

Hard:
01:40:360 [6]move this up one tiny sqaure?

Henkie;s:
01:07:360 [5-8]this is weird.... i don't get it.

star star for you you ^^
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