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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
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Symbolic
Mod on request ^^


[Easy]

There's a mistake in the bg, it says: "Your own mircle" instead of "Your own miracle".
Use Slider Tick Rate 2.

00:12:79 (3) - New combo here.
00:14:55 (5) - ^
00:16:32 (7) - ^
01:09:37 (1) - This sounds weird.
01:10:25 (2) - ^
01:11:13 (3) - ^


[Hard]

There's a mistake in the bg, it says: "Your own mircle" instead of "Your own miracle".
Use Slider Tick Rate 1 or 2.

00:12:35 (5) - New combo here.
00:15:88 (5) - ^
00:31:985 - Insert break here.
00:55:80 (4) - New combo here.
00:56:69 (7) - ^
00:57:57 (10) - ^
01:02:64 (5) - ^
01:04:41 (5) - ^
01:06:17 (5) - ^
01:12:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is way too messed up, invisible. Change it.


[MX]

There's a mistake in the bg, it says: "Your own mircle" instead of "Your own miracle".
Use Slider Tick Rate 1 or 2.
Respace the map with 1,0x distance snap.

00:11:36 (5,6) - This isn't spaced right.
00:11:91 (8,9) - ^
00:13:12 (14,15) - ^
00:15:44 (7) - ^
00:34:19 (5) - Move this down 1 level 3 grid.
00:48:53 (5) - New combo here.
00:50:29 (5) - ^
00:52:06 (5) - ^
00:54:26 (2) - Shorten this slider 1/4 beat.
01:16:102 (x) - Add a spinner from 01:16:102 to 01:17:647.


Nice map and song :)
Starred *
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
It is very shameful I made typing falut :oops:

By the way, I fixed faults in this beatmap.
Thank you about modding :)
Zekira
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed. :D
DeathxShinigami
No need for me to mod this...looking good!~
bagnz0r
[MX]
- Too many stacks.
- Make more jumps.
- More insane spacing please.

That's all.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
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bmin11
Just a quick notice for you

Offset doesn't seems right. 10,617 maybe? not sure.

[Easy]
A nice challenge for the Beginners.
00:42:38 (x) - Add a note maybe?
00:47:896 (x) - plz don't make a long break for this short song T-T


[Hard]
uh... resnap plz... or is it snap in 1/8? If that so, nvm
00:31:76 (5) - How about delete that short break right after then put some notes?
00:40:36 (1) - Spacing
00:47:896 (x) - plz don't make a long break for this short song T-T
00:58:89 (2) - Spacing? don't have to
01:14:911 (x) - kind a weird ending... I would put some notes for the last climax

[MX]
00:30:91 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It doesn't seems to flow right
00:34:22 (5) - Stack under 1,2,3
00:35:54 (2) - Spacing
00:37:08 (1) - ^
01:11:16 (5) - ^
01:13:70 (10) - ^

[Overrall]
A nice song, nice beat, and a nice hitsounds. I love it! <3
But some of the breaks are just breaking the mood... plus this is a short song. I wouldn't put lots of breaks. one long break maybe or not at all.

A star for your well done
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
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James2250
easy:
01:02:01 -01:07:74- this area feels kinda clustered why not separate them a bit..
01:12:38 (1) - don't have this under the slider before it

hard:
00:55:17 (2) - remove from under slider
00:58:92 (2) - remove from under notes

MX:
00:13:92 (19) - too long combo maybe?
slightly over mapped with the 2 stack things I think
01:16:02 (1) - move forward 1/4?

have a star :P
blissfulyoshi
Offset: 10623 (I am not very good at offset though)

Easy:
00:30:69 (2) - isn't this supposed to snap to the drums a quarter note forward, if it is, there are only 2 drum beats so just make a quarter note long slider with no repeat
00:31:52 (4) - move back an eighth note
00:59:15 (2) - since there is not enough room for 4 in the pattern, make 2's spacing look like 4's
01:06:87 (6,7) - spaced too close

song felt a little repetitive with the same combo 4 times in a row or even 8 for some patterns.

Hard:
00:30:69 (2) and 00:31:52 (4) - same as easy
00:58:92 (2) - stack this under the purple 3
01:02:45 (4,1,2,3) - y is spacing smaller here
01:05:54 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - " " (or you might want to change all the larger spacings to this smaller one)

Mx:
00:31:62 (4) - move an eighth note forward
00:12:16 (9,10) - make parallel to 6,7 to form a straight line?
00:25:61 (4) - this and the repeats of this felt random because this is supposed to follow the guitar I guess, but the guitar goes on even after this stops. What is this supposed to snap to then? It just has a random start and end point in my opinion.

Nice map. Star.
tieff
Good map.
Decrease sample volume, please.

[Easy]
00:54:29 (3) - Remove clap from end.
01:08:41 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:13:48 (4) - Add note with clap.
00:17:23 (4) - Clap?
00:25:39 (2,3) - Spacing?
00:27:16 (2,3) - ^
00:28:92 (2,3) - ^
00:45:91 (1) - Remove clap.
00:51:20 (1) - Whistle.
00:54:29 (2) - Remove clap from end.
00:57:16 (3) - Nazi. Right a bit.
00:59:80 (3) - New combo?
01:04:66 (2) - Clap.
01:08:41 (2) - Remove clap from end.

[MX]
00:50:54 (2) - Clap.
00:54:29 (2) - Clap on start.
01:15:91 (7) - Add note.

Cool hitsounds, star!
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

tieff wrote:

Good map.
Decrease sample volume, please.

[Easy]
00:54:29 (3) - Remove clap from end.
01:08:41 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:13:48 (4) - Add note with clap.
- IMO, I think no clap is sounds better.
00:17:23 (4) - Clap?
- Same.
00:25:39 (2,3) - Spacing?
00:27:16 (2,3) - ^
00:28:92 (2,3) - ^
00:45:91 (1) - Remove clap.
00:51:20 (1) - Whistle.
00:54:29 (2) - Remove clap from end.
00:57:16 (3) - Nazi. Right a bit.
00:59:80 (3) - New combo?
01:04:66 (2) - Clap.
- IMO, I think no clap is sounds better.
01:08:41 (2) - Remove clap from end.

[MX]
00:50:54 (2) - Clap.
- IMO, I think no clap is sounds better.
00:54:29 (2) - Clap on start.
01:15:91 (7) - Add note.

Cool hitsounds, star!

Fixed :)
fartownik
[Easy]
SPOILER
00:31:468 (4) - 1/4 back.
01:14:152 (3) - End on 01:16:137.
01:16:358 - Add a spinner end on 01:17:902.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:14:146 (1) - It's outside a screen a bit. Move it.
00:15:028 (3) - ^
00:15:911 (1) - ^
00:17:234 (4) - New combo.
00:17:675 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:56:278 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
00:56:719 (1) - Move to the right a bit.
00:57:602 (1) - ^
00:58:043 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
01:16:241 - Add a spinner. The same like in Easy.
[MX]
SPOILER
00:15:359 - Add a note.
00:30:800 - 00:31:793 - This part feels weird.
01:05:764 (3) - Delete.
01:05:984 (4,5) - Move 1/4 back.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

fartownik wrote:

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:31:468 (4) - 1/4 back.
01:14:152 (3) - End on 01:16:137.
01:16:358 - Add a spinner end on 01:17:902.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:14:146 (1) - It's outside a screen a bit. Move it.
00:15:028 (3) - ^
00:15:911 (1) - ^
00:17:234 (4) - New combo.
00:17:675 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:56:278 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
00:56:719 (1) - Move to the right a bit.
00:57:602 (1) - ^
00:58:043 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
01:16:241 - Add a spinner. The same like in Easy.
[MX]
SPOILER
00:15:359 - Add a note.
00:30:800 - 00:31:793 - This part feels weird.
01:05:764 (3) - Delete.
01:05:984 (4,5) - Move 1/4 back.

Fixed :)
minyeob
Go go MoonFra!

[MX]
00:17:45 ( ) - Add a circle on here.
01:02:45 (5,6) - Make 1/4 beat slower (Later)

I'm charging my kudosu points so I can't give it now
First, here's a regular user-star. ;)
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

minyeob wrote:

Go go MoonFra!

[MX]
00:17:45 ( ) - Add a circle on here.
01:02:45 (5,6) - Make 1/4 beat slower (Later)

I'm charging my kudosu points so I can't give it now
First, here's a regular user-star. ;)
Fixed. Thank U :D
vincerio
>w< b really love this song~ ;)

star~ :oops:
WyndII
[Easy]
totally fine..

[hard]
Song Setup:
HP drain rate : Adjust > or = 6
Overall diff: The song is fast... Increase a bit.

[MX]
Song Setup:
HP drain rate : Adjust > 6
Overall diff: The song is fast... Increase a bit.
00:53:85 (5) - new combo
00:54:07 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:29 (2) - new combo
00:55:065 - 01:07:749 = needz moar hitzound
01:08:962 - 01:15:800 = ^
note that the combos change when you change the first.
Also, that's all. lol. xD
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Easy]
  1. 01:16:13 (1) - Maybe make silent hitsound?.
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:16 (2,3) - 1 grid down,
  2. 01:16:13 (1) - Maybe make silent hitsound?.
[MX]
  1. 01:16:13 (1) - Maybe make silent hitsound?,
  2. Also, need nazi.
Mafiamaster
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed :)
Sleep Powder
[MX]
01:07:96 (x) - Add a Note here?
01:08:18 (1) - Or move this away from the previous combo (1)
01:11:38 (7) - Remove?
01:11:49 (7,8,9) - Move 7 to the previous white tick.
01:11:94 (10,11) - Move to previous white tick.

The other difficulties were perfect to me.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed :)
orioncomet
Ruby ~ <3
Jeffro
Don't place offsets exactly on the first note pl0x, i recommend setting offset back 1 white tick.

[Easy]
00:42:60 (1,1,1,1) - remove claps

[Hard]
00:24:73 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern at all. Doesn't fit the song.

[MX]
00:09:29 (1) - wut, spinner before offset? Don't do that!
00:24:73 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, I don't like this section.

Other then that. Good job! Starred.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed :) thx u :D
ignorethis
<Easy>
01:04:66 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - A bit confusing as they overlap.

<Hard>
Circle size +1.
00:24:73 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ...I can't see the relation between these notes and the music?
Needs a bit improving.

<MX>
Overall set to 8 plz.
00:24:73 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Remap plz.\

Other than that this map's pretty decent. Keep up the good work.
v2b
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
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Tanmak
[Easy]

00:58:20 - This Slide note whose length is strange.

I will give you star~

Good luck~~
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed :) thank you :D
panic_on
star~~~~
EEeee
Easy
Too easy, in a good way, nothing wrong here

Hard
01:07:96 (5) - add new combo here, remove from the next note, this is to keep the pattern neat, since u have most of em ending with 4

Mix
00:17:895 - fix break
00:29:36 (4) - new combo, helps the jumpish pattern

That's all ^^, why did u give me maps without a lot of problems, nice mapping

*star
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

EEeee wrote:

Easy
Too easy, in a good way, nothing wrong here

Hard
01:07:96 (5) - add new combo here, remove from the next note, this is to keep the pattern neat, since u have most of em ending with 4

Mix
00:17:895 - fix break
00:29:36 (4) - new combo, helps the jumpish pattern - Oh, it was spacing wrong O_o (not a jump) thank you >w<

That's all ^^, why did u give me maps without a lot of problems, nice mapping

*star
Thank you >A</
Lokamp
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:24:73 (1,2) - I would probably move these two forward to the red ticks, because where they are may make it difficult for beginners when starting from a break. Also, possibly consider changing (2) into a slider which ends at 00:26:49 (1)'s position.
00:54:29 (3) - End this on the white tick

[Hard]
00:17:01 - New note?
00:17:23 (1) - Move forward 1/4 tick?

00:52:08 - Maybe a note here?
00:52:96 - ^
00:53:85 - ^

00:56:05 (2) - Move 1/4 beat forward
00:56:27 (3) - Move to 00:56:49.
00:56:71 (1) - Move forward 1/4 Beat
00:56:94 (2,3) - Move forward half a beat
00:57:82 (4) - Move back 1/4 beat

[MX]
No Problems Found :)

Overall, a good map, although some of it isn't mapped to my taste, you've done a lot of good work on it, and it plays well.

Starred
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Hard]
00:17:01 - New note?
00:17:23 (1) - Move forward 1/4 tick?

00:52:08 - Maybe a note here?
00:52:96 - ^
00:53:85 - ^

00:56:05 (2) - Move 1/4 beat forward
00:56:27 (3) - Move to 00:56:49.
00:56:71 (1) - Move forward 1/4 Beat
00:56:94 (2,3) - Move forward half a beat
00:57:82 (4) - Move back 1/4 beat
Umm... i think our mapping style is different.
i foucus on drum sound and melody.
but i think your style is focus on vocal.

sorry, i don't want to change my style ;w;
but others are fixed :)
Remco32
Easy
01:02:45 (3) - Move one lvl3 grid to the left.

Hard
01:16:13 (1) - Raise the hitsound volume, so you can hear the Finish hitsound (a little)

Nice map, have a star.
Yes_old
MX -

00:30:80 (1) - feels kinda weird to me ;-;

easy -

00:48:11 (1,2,1,2) - parts like this are so boring! maybe try-
00:48:55 - add note
00:49:44 - make slider ending at 00:50:32
00:49:88 (1) - erase

01:07:30 (5) - spacing
01:07:96 (x) - note
01:08:19 (1) - delete
jericho2442
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :) thank you >w<
Mashley
Perfect. Have an imaginary bubble.
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All is fine.

[Easy]

I suggest to use 1 tick rate for this diff.

00:48:11 (1) - A note too early after the spinner is too hard for an easy difficulty.

[Hard]

00:30:02 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:80 (2) - New combo.

01:12:38 (1,2,3,4) - This change of snap divisor can confuse. Try to change it.

[MX]

01:15:90 (1) - Remove new combo.
Armin
Good map! Starred. :)

[Easy]

Perfect <_<

[Hard]

00:24:734 Clap
00:26:499 ^
00:28:264 ^
00:30:028 Clap+ finish
00:54:293 Whistle at the start
01:08:411 ^

[MX]

00:13:592 Remove this hitcircle, I think it doesn't follow the rythm.
00:15:357 1/4 back
00:26:276 (5,6,7) Make a straight line. (move the (1) one square above)
00:28:261 As above ( move the (1) one square down)
00:34:438 Clap
00:35:320 ^
00:41:497 ^
00:42:379 ^
Lizbeth
suggestions

Hard
00:31:46 (3) - move 1/4 earlier
00:48:77 (3) - same
00:48:99 - add note here, and remove next slider
01:09:18 (1,2,3,4) - move 1/4 earlier

MX
00:40:06 (1) - extend to the next tick, and remove the circle
00:55:06 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 earlier

Easy
00:30:91 (1,2,3) - this is hard to catch for a beginner... try placin note at: 00:30:91 - 00:31:35 - 00:31:79
01:07:74 (7,1) - turn this two into a spinner... just ssuggestion XD

nice map
star!
La Valse
캬악퉷 :!:
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Ra-s
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