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Silver Forest - (9) Destiny ~ Sutto Cirno no taan

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Essien_old
21 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
Essien_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 29, 2009 at 12:07:51 PM

Artist: Silver Forest
Title: (9) Destiny ~ Zutto Cirno no taan
Source: Rebirth
Tags: (9) Destiny ~ Always Cirno's turn
BPM: 172
Filesize: 6986kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (5 stars, 530 notes)
  2. Normal (4.16 stars, 217 notes)
Download: Silver Forest - (9) Destiny ~ Zutto Cirno no taan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First Beatmap~

Still working on maps.
Lunatic is out.
Normal is out.

Redownload if downloaded before 11/20/09 8:00 PM.
Last edited by Essien_old , edited 20 times in total.
thepianist
544 posts
Joined March 2009
thepianist
Hi!

I guess this is a mod4mod? lol (:

My two cents:

00:07:015 (1) - These kinds of long fast repeats are really hard to sightread/know. Consider separate into multiple single sliders or single repeat sliders.
00:09:094 (1) - ^
00:29:047 (9) - New combo
01:39:024 (6) - Extend a beat.
01:55:011 (4) - Replace
01:57:090 (4) - ^
02:39:024 (1) - ^
02:53:019 (1) - End slightly earlier?

But! Fun to play (: ^^ Star
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Change background colour to pink.
This song sounds disturbingly familiar. I think I've modded or played it before...oh.
Preview point not set.

[Lunatic]

I'm not sure if the 18m max score is rankable.

00:00:017 (1) - Your first note should not lie before your first offset marker.
00:21:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shift these so that the 5 from the previous combo stacks with one of the notes?
00:23:002 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Oh noes, imperfect hexagon. Shift these so that the centre is at the origin, and then use 60 degree rotations to find the locations of the other points.
00:50:040 (1,2,3,4) - Could be a better diamond.
01:33:066 (11) - Take this slider to 1/2 BPM?

Pretty nice overall, although it could use moar jumps. XD

Star~
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Essien_old
21 posts
Joined November 2009
Topic Starter
Essien_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Lunatic]
00:12:55(6) - Distance issue between (5-6) and (6-7). [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left to fix this issue?
00:54:15(5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?

Good song :3
Good luck for your 1st map XD

Star here :3
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

[Lunatic]
00:56:51 (4) - Extend by 1/2 a beat?
00:59:30 (4) - ^
01:02:09 (4) - ^
02:21:62 (4) - ^
02:24:41 (10) - ^
02:28:34 (1) - Delete the note and move the slider back here. Set the .5xBPM timing section's offset here to 148,299. Extend the slider by 1/8th so that it matches with the white tick it originally ended at.
02:43:25 (14) - Note here?


That is all. Crazy diff :D
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
00:04:883 (1) - start at 00:04:708 sound better
00:27:208 (1~6) -Spacing , I think it is too confuse
02:12:732 ~ 02:16:918 - I think this spacing is too crazy for play..
02:44:825 (1) - end at 02:45:871

that's it for now...
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
01:32:096 (7) - clap here
01:36:045 (7,9) - clap on 7th, remove clap on 9th
01:40:098 (3,4,5) - clap 3rd and 5th, remove clap from the slider
01:52:084 (5) - clap here

Not bad, for your 1st attempt of making a beat map! ;)
Maybe check spacing on the last section of the song and set hitsounds better, the rest was ok ^^
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
Add a preview point.

You should add more and more hitsounds. I'm too lazy to write ALL the hitsounds suggestion, then I made a .osu file with the hitsounds. Accept it only if you like it. :)

In the hard I added some hitcircles in this position: 00:48:662, 00:50:058, 00:51:453.

Anyway I think [Lunatic] is not rankable because it hase 20 mil of points (and the max is 10 mil o_o)

Download: Silver Forest - Kero (9) Rebirth (Essien) [Normal].osu

Download: Silver Forest - Kero (9) Rebirth (Essien) [Lunatic].osu
Alice
2,672 posts
Joined October 2008
Alice
Ahhh I wanted to map this so hard ;__;

The name is not kero (9) rebirth.
But (9) Destiny ~ Zutto Cirno no taan ((9) Destiny ~ Always Cirno's turn)
Also, all those suwako (background, colors) does't fit. It's supposed to be Cirno singing about her, and against Suwako, so, you need to do something related

Only Lunatic and Normal? You plan to do more right? (if you need help as i really wanted to map this i'm ok v_v)

Normal
I'm not gonna bug with hitsounds as Armin already modded them.
00:37:84 (1) - endpoint sounds strange.
01:02:96 (1) - unfitting to me. either try changing it (would be better i think) or try doing something to 01:06:10 so it won't sound strange

Lunatic
around 00:21:20 i don't think all those finish are necessary:
00:21:27 (2) - remove finish
00:21:62 (4) - remove finish
sounds better i think
02:48:66 (1,2) - looks a bit untidy, 1 grid up both of them ;/


I love it, but as said Armin, high score oh wow (btw max score isn't 10m but 15m)
Mystearica
Mystearica
[Lunatic]

Well, I tried to play it...I realized this was beyond my playing skill level >_>

Felt like a mess to me...you should play more maps before attempting this. I would honestly recommend that you gain more playing experience, it really will help you with your mapping. I'm not trying to talk you down or anything, but this was just wtf to me.

Those streams are especially ugly, and I think they're a bit over-the-top. Well, I know I mapped insane shit like Shounen A so I guess I'm not one to talk but I really hated those. I also had a tough time reading your map in general, and the rhythm felt very messy in parts.

As well, remember to set a preview point in the future and try not to use combo colors that blend in with your background. For example your blue is fairly hard to see sometimes.

You could've easily followed the drumbeat in the song to set a nice and easy hitsound pattern, I feel that you've overdone this. All those claps and whatnot are unnecessary.

[Normal]

Again, hitsounds should be reworked. As well, you should fix up your rhythm in general because some parts are very confusing. Take 00:02:096 (1,2) for example, you should adjust parts like this to match to something; vocals or an instrument, up to you.

Arrangement is again a little messy, I can only recommend that you play some solid maps and see what people generally tried to do in those maps.

Overall, no offense but I would recommend remapping this when you have gained more experience. I would be more than happy to offer you some service again at that point in time.
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~

[Normal]
Hmm.....Repeat slide note(1/4 or 1/2 beat) is too many. =w=
Change some part?

00:57:732 (2,3,4,5) too difficult.
02:15:522 (2) New combo.

[Lunatic]
Fine.

Starred.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Normal]
Increase overall difficulty (to 5?)
Decrease circle size (by 1 tick?)
Increase drain?

1/4 repeating sliders are terrible on Normals, partly because they make playing Taiko a horrible experience. Change them?
Long 1/4 repeating sliders are worse because they're boring.

00:17:061 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This shape is too flat, so it looks funny
00:33:066 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Long 1/4 repeating sliders :(; change?
01:02:009 (3) - Down a bit
01:22:049 (5) - Make it more curvy so it doesn't overlap (4)?
01:43:095 (7) - Move lower-right sliderpoint right 1 grid.

[Lunatic]
Don't like modding Insanes. :?

01:58:077 (1) - Delete.
01:59:065 (1) - Delete.
01:58:095 (1) - Start at 01:58:077, end at 01:59:065.
02:42:038 (3) - Please, no ridiculous overlapping sliders.
02:52:067 (1,2) - Break distance snap and move farther away?
02:53:019 (1) - If you have to silence the spinner, it probably doesn't belong there.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
This map is nice ^^
So manny Kero (9) remixes! \o/

//Normal//
  1. The Overall Dificulty is too low that makes the gameplay a little confusing. Please, raise 2 or 3 points.
  2. 00:08:546(1) - This slider is taking waaaay too long. This is my idea: mirror this one and make it end at 00:09:767, then you copy and past it at 00:09:941, mirroring the new one to the other side, and deleting the slider at 00:10:813. I hope this pic helps you:
    SPOILER
  3. 01:23:197(1) - a little bit far. Move it closer to the previous note.
  4. 01:40:639(5) - New Combo here. Not on the next note =/
I'm out of time to mod Lunatic now, but I'v played it and it's awesome :]

Star o/
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
zerozaber
43 posts
Joined June 2009
zerozaber
Only for normal [because i can't play lunatic lol]

the circle is too large for 4+ star map [i though the best size is normal size]
i think your song setup is too easy compare to beat of the song[player that can play this song easily can play harder song setup too]

i've come too late to give you mod about beat time [many people already said it]
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet

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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 8:31 pm (over 5 months ago)
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