Hello, sorry for the delay
General:
- For Easy, Normal and Hard I strongly recommend you turn up the volume to 70%
- The video's quality is bad, if you wish I could try to get you one a little better just say so ~
- Eh, I'm not totally sure about the current timing, I'm not good myself with timing so I suggest you to maybe get someone who is an expert to check it
- Disable the display storyboard in front of combofire in all diffs
Skin:
- Nothing wrong, what I'm going to list here are just my opinions on the skin and some suggestions to improve it (sorry I really really get picky when it comes to skins, don't take my comments to seriously they are just opinions ><)
- Default-1, default-5, default-6, default-8, default-9 are not well centered, the biggest issue here is default-1 you can clearly see the problem when the combos reach 10+
- I'm not a big fan of the font you used (at least imo it doesn't suit when it comes to numbers) I think there are better fonts that would be great for a song like this
- The play-skip imo is a little small
- The reverse-arrow would look way better if it didn't have that gradient, or maybe a grey to white gradient would be better but if I were you I would use a thicker border for it and just plain white for the fill
- You can see that the tone of purple you use for pause-retry is not the same as for pause-back and pause-continue, if possible please try to make them the same
- The score bar overlaps the score numbers which results in this
http://puu.sh/jrB5 and it looks pretty bad, try to make the score bar smaller
- Mmm, the scorebar ... colors ? The purple and red don't go well imo a shade of purple and white gradient will be better
- The slider ball you use, the colors in it a bit too brigth and colorful imo maybe a darker one will fit more
- If you need help or can't solve this I would be more than glad to help you! I can even make some elements for you >< I really like this song so much!
Easy:
- Uh, at first Kei gave you a guest Easy diff right ? I was wondering where it went because it just stopped being mentioned suddenly so I wanted to know if this is still Kei's diff or if you made it yourself
- AR is very low, AR3 suits more imo
- 00:06:280 >> The clap doesn't fit imo, use a normal finish
- 00:10:895 >> This repeat slider doesn't fit at all, make a slider from here to 00:11:587 with a normal finish at the end
- 00:40:434 >> Add a whistle maybe so it doesn't feel too empty ?
- 00:43:895 >> ^
- 00:55:895 >> It feels weird to start the kiai time with no note/slider or something, the emphasis goes away and it kind of ruins the chorus moment, I strongly suggest you add a note here
- 01:09:972 >> I think a 1/2 slider with a repeat arrow will fit more
- 01:56:818 >> Same as 00:55:895
- 02:10:664 >> Delete this note ?
- 02:26:818 >> Replace the clap with whistle
- 02:31:434 (1,2) >> Replace the claps with whistles
- 03:36:511 >> Imo it will give a better effect and feeling if you end the spinner here and silence it, then start mapping at 03:37:895
Normal:
- 00:07:203 >> Instead of the slider, just add a note here
- 00:11:126 >> Add a note
- 00:19:895 >> Add a finish
- 00:26:357 >> Add a note
- 00:33:972 >> ^
- 00:35:587 >> New combo ?
- 00:37:664 >> Move this note to 00:37:434
- 00:42:972 >> Add a note
- 01:06:049 >> This touches the hp bar way too much
- 01:10:434 >> Is not a good idea to use blue ticks, try ending it here it still sounds good
- 02:04:549 >> End the slider here and add a repeat
- 02:11:357 >> Same as 01:10:434
- 02:12:972 >> Use whistle instead of clap
- 02:24:511 ~ 02:32:357 >> Replace all the claps used in this part with whistles
- 02:54:972 >> New combo
- 03:05:818 >> Add a note ?
- 03:36:511 >> Silence the end
Hard:
- OD +2
- 00:10:895 (3,4) >> Add clap at the end of (3) and remove it from the start of (4) then add a clap at the end of (4)
- 00:26:357 >> Add a note
- 00:31:895 >> ^
- 00:37:434 >> ^
- 00:42:972 >> ^
- 01:32:818 >> ^
- 01:38:357 >> ^
- 01:43:895 >> ^
- 02:01:434 >> Stack under (6)s start
- 02:24:511 ~ 02:32:818 >> I was expecting this whole part to be in slowdown not only the 1st slider, also whistles sound way better than claps in this calm part
- 02:41:818 >> These streams don't fit
- 02:44:818 >> Add a note
- 02:50:357 >> ^
- 02:55:895 >> ^
- 03:02:472 >> Move this to 03:02:703
- 03:27:280 (5,6,7,8) >> Try to make something a bit easier to hit ?
- 03:34:203 (3,4) >> I strongly suggest you change these sliders, (3) looks like a normal slider and that can confuse layers, (4) looks rather ugly
- 03:36:511 >> Delete this spinner and add a note at 03:37:895
SkyDevil's Madness:
- For your dif I will suggest you to decrease the sections with volume 80% to 70%
- 00:16:549 >> Add a note
- 00:16:664 >> Remove new combo then new combo at 00:17:126
- 00:18:741 >> Remove new combo if you did ^
- 00:48:857 >> Nothing at this point but look at this picture please
http://puu.sh/jtzx it's super crowded
- 00:51:741 >> New combo
- 00:54:511 >> You could try something more fun and creative
- 00:56:587 (3,4) >> I recommend you stack notes like this as you can see here
http://puu.sh/jtJv if you do this with notes that are like this the playfield looks way better and you will have less crowded or confusing patterns
- 01:00:049 >> New combo
- 01:03:049 >> Add a note
- 01:11:818 >> To make it even better, move this to 01:12:049 and shorten the slider until where it ended before. After that add a note at 01:11:587
- 01:53:357 >> Add a note
- 02:00:972 >> New combo
- 02:54:395 >> Remove the clap
- 02:56:357 >> It would be cool if you did this with all the streams around the map
- 03:36:972 >> Increase the volume gradually
- 03:42:857 >> Add a note
- 03:48:626 >> Add a note
* As you can see this still has a long way to go