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Akuno-P - Madness of Duke Venomania

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Topic Starter
BCI
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 мая 2013 г. at 19:45:26

Artist: Akuno-P
Title: Madness of Duke Venomania
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Black_Cherry_Ita mothy Hatsune Miku Gumi Meiko Kaito Megurine Luka Kamui Gakupo SkyDevil
BPM: 130
Filesize: 13671kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,43 stars, 142 notes)
  2. Hard (4,81 stars, 531 notes)
  3. Normal (3,44 stars, 306 notes)
  4. SkyDevil's Madness (5 stars, 669 notes)
Download: Akuno-P - Madness of Duke Venomania
Download: Akuno-P - Madness of Duke Venomania (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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first beatmap ahueheu

WHO ARE THESE 51 FAV? D__D

Easy - me
Normal - me
Hard - me
Madness - SkyDevil
poisonedblood
The only thing I have to add for now is maybe add to Tags "The Madness of Duke Venomania" the English title,
re-add your old Tags, and remove Kamui Gakupo from Tags since it's already in Artist.
Don't forget to re-insert your BG.
Edit: Forgot to mention you should add a preview point.
Edit 2: For what you have already made you should click Timing and under click "Resnap All Notes" and "Recalculate Slider Lengths" because some circles and sliders are still timed in 1/3 beats. Then listen to make sure it is properly timed, and if not correct it.
Slider Ticks should be either 2 or 4 since the timing is 1/4. I personally think a Slider Tick of 2 is the best out of them.
Edit: :oops: Stupid me forgot to say BPM is 130 not 120 :!: Please apply changes of Edit 2 after doing Edit 3, since you'll need to resnap all note and slider lengths after changing the BPM, do this for both diffs please.
Topic Starter
BCI
Hm...thank you very much for help, i fix it. ^^
Edit: oh, sorry, i made a mess with timing section, due to this having difficulty, but now all is ok
poisonedblood
You don't have to change things if you don't want to, these are only suggestions.
First many places should have sliders and repeat sliders instead of having lots of circles in a row.
Maybe take long sliders and change them to shorter sliders with repeats, or 2 or 3 sliders or with circles?
If I say you could add a circle, I mean adding something there.
It would be best to add sliders and repeat sliders if you want, where you think it makes sense.
I am willing to re-mod after you make changes, mostly for where to add or change sliders, repeat sliders and some new combos depending on what you add or change.

[00:06:301] 1 Should be here.
[00:22:685] ^
[00:22:916] Maybe add a circle?
[00:23:955] ^
[00:25:455] Minus 1 Repeat on that slider.
[00:26:608] 1 - 5 maybe do something with more sliders or slider repeats?
[00:28:224] Maybe use something more than just a slider?
[00:32:839] Make it 1/4 shorter
[00:34:916] Maybe add a circle?
[00:35:147] Make it 1/4 shorter
[00:35:608] Maybe add a circle?
[00:37:685] ^
[00:39:416] ^
[00:39:532] ^
[00:39:647] ^
[00:40:570] ^
[00:40:916] ^
[00:41:147] Maybe put this into 2 sliders?
[00:43:339] Maybe add a circle?
[00:43:685] Maybe remove the circle?
[00:45:301] Maybe add a circle?
[00:45:416] Maybe remove the circle?
[00:45:532] Maybe add a circle?
[00:45:647] ^
[00:46:339] ^
[00:47:378] ^
[00:47:724] ^
[00:47:839] ^
[00:47:955] ^
[00:48:301] ^
[00:48:647] ^
[00:48:993] ^
[00:49:108] ^ and start the slider 1/4 note later.
[00:50:839] 1 Should be here, also maybe do something more than just a slider with #2.
[00:52:916] Maybe add a circle?
[00:55:916] 1 Should be here.
[00:56:147] Maybe add a circle?
[00:56:608] ^
[00:57:301] ^
[00:57:532] Maybe make it 1/4 longer?
[00:58:455] Maybe add a circle?
[00:59:839] ^
[00:59:955] Maybe remove the circle?
[01:00:070] ^
[01:00:185] ^
[01:00:416] ^
[01:02:262] Maybe start the slider here?
[01:02:839] Maybe turn it into a slider 2 1/4 notes long?
[01:03:301] Maybe make it 1/4 long?
[01:07:224] Maybe add a circle?
[01:07:339] Maybe remove this circle?
[01:07:455] Maybe add a circle?
[01:07:916] ^
[01:09:070] ^
[01:09:993] Maybe start the slider here but make it 1/4 note longer so it ends where it ends before any changes.
[01:10:916] Maybe add a circle?
[01:12:301] ^
[01:25:224] ^
[01:27:070] Maybe move the 3 to [01:27:301]?
[01:27:532] Maybe add a circle?
[01:29:262] ^
[01:29:493] ^
[01:30:301] A slider should start here and end at [01:30:532] instead of the current slider.
[01:30:647] Maybe add a circle?
[01:30:762] Maybe add a circle here, move the slider 2 1/4 notes later, and make the slider 1/4 note shorter.
[01:32:378] Maybe move the 5 here?
[01:33:070] Maybe add a circle?
[01:36:878] ^
[01:36:993] Maybe remove this circle?
[01:37:224] Maybe add a circle?
[01:37:570] ^
[01:37:685] ^
[01:37:801] ^
[01:44:378] Maybe end the slider here?
[01:44:608] Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:108] ^
[01:46:224] ^
[01:46:339] Maybe remove this circle?
[01:46:685] ^
[01:47:262] Maybe add a circle?
[01:47:724] Maybe remove this circle?
[01:48:301] Maybe add a circle?
[01:49:224] The 1 should be here.
[01:49:339] The 2 should be here.
[01:49:685] Maybe add a circle?
[01:50:032] ^
[01:50:147] ^
[01:53:378] Maybe add a circle?
[01:53:724] ^
[01:56:839] The spinner should end at [01:56:147]
[01:56:839] Maybe add a circle?
[01:57:070] ^
[01:57:532] ^
[01:57:878] Maybe move the circle forward here?
[01:57:993] Maybe add a circle?
[01:58:455] ^
[01:59:032] ^
[01:59:262] Maybe move the circle forward here.
[01:59:378] Maybe add a circle?
[02:00:416] Maybe move the circle here?
[02:00:762] Maybe add a circle?
[02:02:224] ^
[02:02:339] ^
[02:02:147] The slider should end here.
[02:02:378] Maybe add a circle?
[02:02:608] ^
[02:03:532] ^
[02:04:570] Maybe move the next circle here.
[02:04:801] Maybe add a circle?
[02:04:916] ^
[02:06:993] The spinner should start here or on [02:05:147]
[02:05:378] Maybe add a circle?
[02:05:608] ^
[02:05:839] ^
[02:06:185] ^
[02:06:301] ^
[02:06:416] ^
[02:06:532] ^
[02:06:762] ^
[02:08:147] ^
[02:08:608] ^
[02:08:724] Maybe move the next note here?
[02:09:070] Maybe add a circle?
[02:10:916] Move the slider so it starts here.
[02:11:839] Maybe add a circle?
[02:12:301] ^
[02:12:993] ^
[02:13:224] Maybe move the last circle forward here?
[02:24:532] Move the slider here so it start and finishes 1/4 note earlier.
[02:25:916] The next circle should be here.
[02:26:493] Maybe remove this circle?
[02:26:839] The next circle should be here.
[02:27:301] ^ and remove the small break. Maybe make more sliders in the slow part or at the end of combos instead?
[02:30:993] The slider should start here.
[02:33:762] The spinner should start here.
[02:35:608] Maybe add a circle?
[02:35:839] ^
[02:36:070] Maybe move the last circle here?
[02:41:608] Maybe add a circle?
[02:42:416] ^
[02:42:993] Make the slider 1/4 shorter or split it into 2 or 3 sliders.
[02:44:147] If you made the slider 1/4 note shorter add a circle here.
[02:46:685] Maybe split this into different sliders?
[02:48:532] Maybe add a circle?
[02:49:570] ^
[02:49:685] ^
[02:53:378] ^
[02:54:301] ^
[02:54:416] ^
[02:54:647] Maybe Move the last circle here?
[02:55:224] Maybe add a circle?
[02:56:147] Maybe start the slider here?
[02:58:685] Maybe remove this circle?
[02:59:032] ^
[02:59:147] Maybe add a circle?
[02:59:378] ^
[02:59:724] Maybe remove this circle?
[02:59:839] Maybe add a circle?
[03:00:070] Maybe remove this circle?
[03:00:301] Maybe aad a circle?
[03:00:647] ^
[03:01:108] Maybe remove this circle?
[03:01:339] Maybe add a circle?
[03:01:455] Maybe remove this circle?
[03:01:801] ^
[03:02:493] ^
[03:02:608] Maybe add a circle?
[03:02:839] Maybe remove this circle?
[03:03:070] Maybe add a circle?
[03:03:301] Start the slider here but maybe change it to something else?
[03:05:378] Maybe add a circle?
[03:05:493] ^
[03:05:608] Maybe remove this circle?
[03:05:724] Maybe add a circle?
[03:06:070] Spinner should start here and end at [03:08:608]
[03:08:839] Maybe add a circle?
[03:09:070] ^
[03:09:532] ^
[03:09:647] The next note should be here instead.
[03:09:878] Maybe add a circle?
[03:09:993] ^
[03:10:455] ^
[03:11:378] ^ or add 1/4 note to the slider?
[03:11:839] Maybe add a circle?
[03:12:301] ^
[03:12:416] Maybe move the next note here?
[03:12:762] Maybe add a circle?
[03:13:108] ^
[03:12:339] ^
[03:13:685] ^
[03:14:147] ^
[03:14:608] ^
[03:15:070] ^
[03:15:185] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:15:416] Maybe add a circle?
[03:15:532] ^
[03:15:993] ^
[03:17:147] Start the slider here, maybe change that slider into something else?
[03:19:801] The slider should end here.
[03:19:916] Maybe add a circle?
[03:20:147] ^
[03:20:724] ^
[03:20:955] Remove the slider, add a circle here and on [03:21:070]
[03:22:108] Maybe add a circle?
[03:22:339] Remove the slider, add a circle here and on [03:22:455] and on [03:22:570]?
[03:22:916] Maybe add a circle?
[03:23:378] ^
[03:23:493] ^
[03:23:724] Remove the slider and add a circle here and on [03:23:724]
[03:24:070] Remove the slider and add a circle here and on [03:24:185]
[03:24:416] Maybe add a circle?
[03:24:878] ^
[03:25:685] ^
[03:26:147] Maybe remove the slider and add a circle here and on [03:26:262]
[03:26:493] Maybe add a circle?
[03:26:608] Delete the slider and maybe add a circle?
[03:26:839] Start a slider here that ends on [03:27:301]
[03:27:532] Delete the slider and add a circle here and on [03:27:647], [03:27:878] and [03:27:993]
[03:28:224] Start the spinner here and end it at [03:30:878]
[03:30:993] Maybe add a circle?
[03:31:455] Remove the slider but add circle here, on [03:31:685] and [03:31:801]
[03:32:147] Maybe add a circle?
[03:34:916] ^
[03:35:378] ^
[03:35:839] ^
[03:36:301] ^
[03:36:532] Maybe replace the spinner with a small break?
[03:37:916] Maybe add a circle?
[03:38:262] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:39:532] Maybe move the previous circle here?
[03:41:032] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:41:378] Maybe add a circle?
[03:41:724] Maybe move the previous circle here?
[03:41:955] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:42:301] Maybe add a circle?
[03:42:647] Make your slider 1/4 shorter and start it here.
[03:43:801] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:44:147] Maybe add a circle?
[03:44:493] Maybe move the previous circle here?
[03:44:724] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:45:070] Maybe add a circle here?
[03:45:532] ^
[03:45:993] ^
[03:46:570] Remove the slider and add circles here and at [03:46:916]
[03:47:262] Maybe add a circle?
[03:47:493] Maybe move the previous circle here?
[03:47:608] Remove this circle?
[03:58:762] Maybe add a circle?
[03:49:339] Remove the slider and add a circle here and at [03:49:685]
[03:50:032] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:50:262] ^
[03:53:724] Change the slider here for circles here, [03:54:070] and [03:54:532]
[03:54:878] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:55:224] Maybe add a circle?
[03:55:570] Maybe move the previous circle here?
[03:55:801] Maybe move the next circle here?
[03:56:147] Maybe add a circle?
[03:56:608] ^
[03:57:070] ^
[03:57:301] Maybe start the spinner here?

Would you like to add the video? I know I have it, I'm sure I can figure a way to remove the sound from it and upload it for you.
Topic Starter
BCI
Has been a couple of things that I had not to agree, but most of all I fixed, thank you very much for so great mod :)

poisonedblood wrote:

Would you like to add the video? I know I have it, I'm sure I can figure a way to remove the sound from it and upload it for you.
Hm, yes, I would like to see here the video. Give you a video so you can cut out the sound of it? so I understand
poisonedblood
Will recheck your Diff.
I have uploaded the video here http://www.mediafire.com/?44fm4vl767y9yhd
You open the song folder and drag it there, after choose insert background and select it.
Just add about -640ms to the Video Offset.

Edit: I think you need to click "upload beatmap..." -> "full Submition" for it to upload the video correctly.
I tried downloading it and it didn't have it, it was the same as downloading with no video.
Maybe around -1200ms would be better...
Topic Starter
BCI

poisonedblood wrote:

Just add about -640ms to the Video Offset.
-705, another not obtained

Add a video, thx~
never tired to give you a kudosu :)
edit: fixed, I checked the card and the video was seen
poisonedblood
Diff re-check :D
Sill main problem, more then 3 slider speeds. Slider speeds are set inside "timing" -> "timing setup panel" -> "slider velocity multiplier.
Change them preferably to 0.75, 1.00 and 1.50.
Make sure your sliders are of the correct length after you change anything.
Make sure you use distance snap almost everywhere. You can decide not to use it for things like jumps but try to use it more. I see a lot of spacing errors.
"File" -> "AIMod" This can help you find spacing errors, although it won't point out if the spacing between a new combo and the note before it it too long or short.
The length is based by the distance between the first and second circle, so don't follow what it says if you're making a jump somewhere in a combo.

When you finish your other diff I can look at it if you want.
*Just looked through your easy and watch out for things timed in 1/6 notes, they should be timed in 1/4 notes*

Again mod is optional, especially if it ends in "?".

For New Combos (New Combo = NC)
[00:07:685] Remove NC
[00:09:070] Add a NC
[00:10:916] Remove NC
[00:24:532] ^
[00:25:455] Add a NC
[00:32:378] Remove NC
[00:33:762] Add a NC
[00:35:995] Remove NC
[00:36:532] Add a NC
[00:37:685] Remove NC
[00:41:147] ^
[00:42:070] Add a NC
[00:43:224] Remove NC
[00:50:378] Add NC
[00:50:839] Remove NC
[01:00:532] ^
[01:01:455] Add a NC
[01:01:916] Remove NC
[01:10:916] Maybe add a NC?
[01:11:147] Maybe remove NC?
[01:24:301] ^
[01:25:455] Remove NC
[01:26:378] Add a NC
[01:27:762] Remove NC
[01:30:993] ^
[01:31:916] Add a NC
[01:33:301] Remove NC
[01:36:532] ^
[01:37:455] Add a NC
[01:38:608] Maybe remove NC?
[01:43:224] Add a NC
[01:44:147] Remove NC
[02:02:378] Start a NC
[02:02:608] Remove NC
[02:26:378] ^
[02:37:455] ^
[02:38:378] Add a NC
[02:39:532] Remove NC
[02:42:301] ^
[02:42:993] ^
[02:43:916] Add a NC
[02:45:070] Remove NC
[02:45:762] ^
[02:49:455] Add a NC
[02:50:608] Remove NC
[02:54:993] Add a NC
[02:56:147] Remove NC
[02:58:224] ^
[02:58:455] ^
[02:59:147] Add a NC
[02:59:839] Remove NC
[03:01:224] ^
[03:01:916] Add a NC
[03:02:378] Remove NC
[03:03:416] Add a NC
[03:10:224] Remove NC
[03:11:608] Add NC
[03:12:070] Remove NC
[03:14:378] Add NC
[03:14:608] Remove NC
[03:22:685] Add a NC
[03:22:916] Remove NC
[03:33:993] Add NC
[03:35:147] Remove NC
[03:39:762] ^
[03:40:685] Add a NC
[03:46:224] ^
[03:46:455] Remove NC
[03:54:532] Add NC
[03:54:878] Remove NC

Other Mod
[00:23:032] - [00:23:147] Maybe make it a slider?
[00:24:185] Maybe add a circle?
[00:28:570] ^
[00:29:378] - [00:29:839] Maybe make a slider with a reverse arrow?
[00:30:070] - [00:30:416] Maybe make it a slider?
[00:32:147] Maybe add a circle?
[00:32:378] Maybe start the slider here and add a reverse arrow? Maybe make it 1/4 note longuer so it ends on [00:33:301]?
[00:34:685] Maybe remove this circle?
[00:37:685] - [00:37:916] Maybe make this a 1/4 note slider with a reverse arrow?
[00:39:301] Maybe make 2 1/4 note sliders? or Make a slider with reverse arrows until [03:39:762]
[00:41:147] Maybe make it 1/4 note longuer?
[00:41:724] Instead of a slider, maybe put a circle here?
[00:42:416] Maybe add a circle?
[00:43:455] - [00:44:378] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[00:44:839] - [00:45:647] Maybe make consecutive 1/4 note sliders here?
[00:47:608] - [00:48:070] ^ but leave a circle somewhere (because of odd number of circles)
[00:48:301] Maybe make this a 1/4 note slider?
[00:48:647] ^
[00:49:224] Maybe add a circle here and start the slider on [00:49:339]? If you put the circle before you could change 2 of the 3 circles to make a 1/4 note slider.
[00:50:378] - [00:50:839] Maybe make this a slider?
[00:51:416] - [00:52:532], [00:51:762] - [00:51:878], [00:51:993] - [00:52:108] Maybe make some 1/4 note sliders here instead of the current slider?
[00:52:224] If you did this ^, then maybe add a circle here?
[00:55:916] - [00:56:147] Maybe make it a slider?

Empty Space? How about instead...
[00:59:839] Add a circle?
[01:00:070] - [01:00:185] How about 2 stacked circles or a 1/4 note slider?
[01:00:416] Maybe add a circle?
[01:02:608] ^
[01:04:224] Maybe start the spinner here? and end it ate [01:06:762]
[01:06:993] Add a circle. - [01:07:455] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[01:07:685] Maybe turn this circle into a 1/4 note slider with a reverse arrow?
[01:09:070] - [01:09:532] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. I think a circle and a slider on [01:09:301] - [01:09:532] sounds good too. You decide though.
[01:27:762] - [01:28:685] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[01:29:147] Maybe put all these circles in a single 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows? You decide though.
[01:31:339] - [01:31:570] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:33:070] Maybe make this a 1/4 note slider?
[01:33:301] - [01:34:224] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[01:36:532] - [01:37:224] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[01:37:455] Maybe put all these circles in a single 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows? You decide though.
[01:39:301] - [01:39:762] Maybe turn this into a slider? You decide though.
[01:40:224] This slider dosen't seem to be snapped in the middle and at the end. Move the last gray square a bit so it snaps to a 1/4 note.
[01:40:916] Maybe delete this circle?
[01:42:070] If instead to where the slider ends, you could add circle. If you do start the NC here instead of at [01:43:224]
[01:44:839] - [01:45:301] Maybe turn this into a slider? You decide though.
[01:45:762] - [01:45:993] Maybe put a 1/4 note slider in here?
[01:46:455] - [01:46:570] Maybe turn it into a 1/4 note slider?
[01:46:801] - [01:47:378] Maybe make consecutive 1/4 note sliders here?
[01:47:493] Start the slider on [01:47:608], delete next slider, make the slider 1/4 note longuer, and add a circle on [01:47:955]
[01:48:532] Maybe make consecutive 1/4 note sliders here? But leave a circle somewhere (because of odd number of circles)
[01:49:224] - [01:49:339] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider?
[01:49:570] - [01:49:685] ^
[01:49:916] - [01:50:147] Maybe make this a 1/4 note slider with a reverse arrow?
[01:56:839] - [01:57:301] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[01:57:532] - [01:57:762] Maybe make it a slider?
[01:57:993] - [01:58:224] ^
[01:58:685] - [01:59:032] ^
[01:59:262] - [01:59:378] ^ although I'm not against changing it either...
[02:00:070] Maybe stop the slider here and make [02:00:301] - [02:00:416] a slider?
[02:00:993] - [02:01:224] Maybe make it a slider?
[02:03:070] - [02:03:301] Add a circle and ^
[02:03:416] - [02:03:532] ^
[02:03:993] - [02:04:224] ^
[02:04:801] - [02:04:916] Maybe make it a slider, or stack them?
[02:05:147] You must delete this circle, the spinner starts here.
[02:08:032] Instead of a circle here, how about one on [02:07:916] and [02:08:147]?
[02:08:724] - [02:09:070] Maybe make this a slider?
[02:12:993] - [02:13:224] Delete the circle on [02:13:108]. You can even make it a slider if you want.

Choose one of these:
1. [02:26:378] - [02:27:301] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. Delete the reverse arrow slider on 02:27:647.
2. [02:27:301] How about instead start a slider here that ends on [02:28:224]? Maybe make a slider from [02:26:378] - [02:26:839]?

[02:30:416] Maybe remove this slider?
[02:32:839] Maybe delete this circle and start the spinner here? End the spinner on [02:35:378]. The spinner really should start here so if you think the circles are to close to when the spinner starts, you could always delete the circles that are after the slider.
[02:35:839] Just move the next slider here? You could if you want, move the slider to [02:35:608] and move the circle to [02:36:301]
[02:36:762] - [02:37:108] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows?
[02:38:378] - [02:38:839] ^
[02:39:762] - [02:40:685] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[02:41:839] Maybe delete this circle? You usually don't put the circles for the beats during the pauses inbetween lyrics. I think it's odd that you do it here.
[02:42:070] ^
[02:43:916] - [02:44:378] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows?
[02:46:685] - [02:47:147] ^ and delete the current sliders
[02:47:839] Add a circle
[02:47:955] ^ and stack it
[02:48:070] ^
[02:48:416] Delete the circle here
[02:48:532] - [02:48:762] Maybe make a slider here?
[02:49:455] - [02:49:916] Either make it a 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows, or add a circle on [02:49:570] and [02:49:801] and stack them.
[02:50:839] - [02:51:762] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[02:53:147] Maybe delete this circle?
[02:53:839] Maybe add a circle? Starting at [02:53:378] this could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[02:58:455] - [02:58:570] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider?
[02:58:685] Delete this circle
[02:58:916] Add a circle and maybe make it a 1/4 note slider?
[02:59:839] - [02:59:955] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider?
[03:00:185] - [03:00:301] ^
[03:01:224] - [03:01:339] ^
[03:02:262] Add a circle and stack the circles from [03:01:916] - [03:02:378]
[03:02:608] - [03:02:724] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider?
[03:02:955] - [03:03:070] ^
[03:03:301] Move the slider here.
[03:05:378] - [03:05:493] Make this into a 1/4 note slider. If you did not change the other ones into 1/4 note sliders, instead make this 2 stacked circles.
[03:05:608] Delete this circle.
[03:05:724] - [03:05:839] Make a 1/4 note slider. If you did not change the other ones into 1/4 note sliders, instead make this 2 stacked circles.
[03:06:070] Start the spinner here and end it at [03:08:608]
[03:08:839] - [03:09:185] Add a slider? If not at least add them as circles
[03:09:185] Delete this circle.
[03:09:301] Add a circle.
[03:09:762] Delete this circle. Stack the 2 circles before and after in different spots.
[03:10:224] - [03:10:455] You could make this into a slider, you decide though.
[03:11:608] - [03:12:070] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[03:12:301] - [03:12:532] Make this into a slider?
[03:13:685] - [03:14:147] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[03:14:378] - [03:14:839] Here could be a good place to make a slider with a reverse arrow. You decide though.
[03:15:070] - [03:15:185] Stack these 2 circles.
[03:16:570] Finish the last slider here.
[03:16:801] Start the current slider here or make 2 stacked circles.
[03:17:147] The spinner should start here and end on [03:19:801]
[03:19:916] Maybe add a circle?
[03:27:532] Maybe delete this circle?
[03:28:108] ^
[03:28:224] Delete the circle and start the spinner here and end it on [03:30:762]
[03:30:993] Add a circle, maybe make it a slider with [03:31:224]?
[03:31:685] - [03:31:916] Maybe keep the start as a circle but keep this part of the slider only?
[03:34:916] - [03:35:032] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider?
[03:35:608] - [03:35:839] Maybe make it a slider?
[03:36:070] - [03:36:301] ^
[03:38:262] - [03:38:608] ^ or a slider with a reverse arrow if you start it at [03:37:916]
[03:41:032] - [03:41:378] ^ or a slider with a reverse arrow if you start it at [03:40:685]
[03:43:801] - [03:44:147] ^ or a slider with a reverse arrow if you start it at [03:43:455]
[03:45:070] - [03:46:224] The end is similar to this, how about a 1/2 note slider with reverse arrows?
[03:50:839] This slider dosen't seem to be snapped at the end. Move the last gray square a bit so it snaps to a 1/4 note.
[03:51:532] Remove the reverse arrow, and add a circle here.
[03:51:762] Add a circle here, the next new combo should start here though.
[03:52:108] - [03:52:455] Maybe make this a slider? or a slider with a reverse arrow if you start it at [03:51:762]
[03:52:801] - [03:53:032] Keep those stacked like the others.
[03:54:878] - [03:55:224] Maybe make this a slider? or a slider with a reverse arrow if you start it at [03:54:532]
[03:57:301] Maybe start the spinner here and end it on [03:59:839]?
Backfire
I dunno...you want me to make a taiko diff with less than 4 stars? Thats not really possible...erm...I can try.
Topic Starter
BCI

Backfire wrote:

I dunno...you want me to make a taiko diff with less than 4 stars? Thats not really possible...erm...I can try.
lol, I hike have sealed o,o I saw it just now, so yes, thank you, i willing to wait as you need. :3

fixed~
poisonedblood
With all the progress you made, and now that this is in pending, you totally deserve a stars from me! :)
I modded both hard and easy, as always those are just suggestions.
I hope I didn't repeat anything I told you to change that you wanted to keep.
If so, I'm sorry.
I can always recheck afterwards, I just don't want to impose my thoughts on you.
(I already feel like I did a lot...)

I can't wait to see this ranked! :D

EDIT : In case I missed any unsnapped sliders, please click "recalculate slider length".

[Easy]
[00:16:916] #1 Maybe add a reverse? or #2 Move the slider so it starts on [00:16:455]. If you do #2 you could add a circle on [00:16:224]
[00:47:608] - [00:50:378] This part feels weird to listen to. Maybe change something with the sliders?
[00:50:839] Maybe add a New Combo
[00:58:685] Start the New combo here instead of at [01:00:070]?
[01:01:455] Start the New Combo here instead of at [01:01:916]?
[01:04:224] If you want to put a spinner near here, this is where it should start instead of a circle. Also the spinner isn't snapped anyways.
[01:09:993] The slider should start here. Add a reverse arrow so it still ends on the same spot.
[01:12:532] Maybe remove this New Combo?
[01:26:378] Maybe start the New combo here instead of at [01:27:301]?
[01:31:916] Maybe add a New Combo here?
[01:35:608] Maybe delete this circle?
[01:41:608] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [01:42:070]?
[02:02:378] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [02:02:839]?
[02:04:570] Maybe put the reverse arrow here so it ends on [02:04:916}?
[02:05:147] If you do ^, then you can start the spinner here.
[02:10:916] - [02:11:839] This part feels weird to listen to. Maybe change something with the circles? Maybe do something with sliders?
[02:32:839] Maybe delete this New Combo?
[02:33:762] #1 The spinner should start here or #2 on [02:32:839]. If you choose #1, maybe make [02:32:839] into a slider or something.
[03:01:685] Maybe delete this circle?
[03:03:301] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:04:570] Maybe this is where the reverse arrow should be, so it ends on [03:05:839].
[03:06:070] If ^ is done, Start the spinner here.
[03:14:147] Maybe end the slider here and add a circle on [03:14:378]? If so add a new combo on this circle instead of on [03:14:839].
[03:17:147] The spinner should start here.
[03:22:685] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [03:23:147]?
[03:28:224] The spinner should start here.
[03:30:993] - [03:32:147] This part feels weird to listen to. Maybe change something with the circles? Maybe do something with sliders?
[03:33:762] - [03:34:916] ^ Although you should start the spinner on [03:34:916].
[03:36:532] If you changed where the spinner started, ^ , maybe you could end it here?
[03:36:993] - [03:37:916] If you dislike that it's to short to put a break here, you could add a slider here. If you choose to do so, you should make it's volume lower at the start.
ex: Timing -> Timing setup panel -> + at [03:36:993] -> audio -> %. Just make sure you add one sfter to make the sound back to normal by the time the slider ends.

[03:40:685] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [03:41:147]?
[03:51:762] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [03:52:224]?
[03:57:301] The spinner should start here. But if you don't want to change it because it would break the pattern then don't change it.
[03:59:839] The spinner should end here though.


[Hard]
[00:36:532] Maybe add a New Combo here?
[00:37:685] Maybe remove the New Combe here?
[00:39:301] Maybe add a New Combo here?
[00:42:070] ^
[00:43:224] Maybe remove the New Combo?
[00:44:839] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:46:685] ^
[00:47:262] Maybe add a circle to match [00:52:801]
[00:47:378] ^
[00:48:762] Maybe add reverse arrows until it reaches here?
[00:49:455] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 1/4 note in length?
Or you could just make a 1/4 slider with reverse arrows from [00:48:993] to [00:49:455].

[00:49:801] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 1/4 note in length? It would be better to start it on [00:49:685] and make it a New Combo.
[00:50:032] - [00:50:147] Maybe add a slider?
[01:01:455] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [01:01:916]?
[01:29:147] Maybe add a New Combo?
[01:35:378] Maybe delete this circle?
[01:38:147] ^
[01:42:301] Start you slider here and put the circle on [01:42:993]. Make this circle the New Combo instead of [01:42:532].
[01:45:762] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [01:44:839]?
[01:48:532] Add a New Combo here?
[01:50:608] Maybe remove the New Combo here. Make it match ^
[01:50:608] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 1/4 note in length?
[01:50:955] ^
[02:11:493] Maybe end the slider here?
[02:11:839] Maybe add a New Combo? It's still fine if you don't add one.
[02:12:532] Maybe start the slider here and add a circle on [02:12:416]?
[02:30:993] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:32:608] Maybe delete this circle?
[02:32:732] ^
[02:35:608] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 1/2 note in length?
[02:37:455] ^
[02:37:916] ^
[02:47:147] Maybe end the slider here?
[02:47:839] Maybe just keep a circle here?
[02:49:455] Maybe make this a 1/4 slider with reverse arrows?
[02:54:647] Move the circle at [02:54:762] here?
[02:57:762] Maybe start the New Combo here instead of on [02:58:455]?
[02:59:839] Maybe add a New Combo?
[03:02:608] Maybe add the New Combo here instead of on [03:01:916]?
[03:04:801] - [03:05:839] This part feels weird to listen to. Maybe change something with the circles? Maybe do something with sliders?
[03:08:839] Move next the slider here.
[03:09:532] Start the slider here and a reverse arrow so it still finishes on the same spot.
[03:16:570] Maybe end the slider here?
[03:16:801] Maybe start the slider here?
[03:17:147] Start the spinner here instead of the circle?
[03:32:147] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 3/4 note in length?
[03:33:993] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 1/2 note in length?
[03:43:224] Maybe end the slider here?
[03:54:070] This slider isn't snapped to a 1/4 note. 1/2 note in length?
Topic Starter
BCI

poisonedblood wrote:

With all the progress you made, and now that this is in pending, you totally deserve a stars from me! :)
Thank you~

poisonedblood wrote:

(I already feel like I did a lot...)
Not just a lot. You've done a very much for me ^^

Fixed.
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Easy]
00:17:147 (1) - unstack (hard for beginners)
00:18:762 (3) - delete whistle and clap
00:38:839 (2) - unstack
00:44:378 (2) - ^
01:11:147 (2) - spacing.
01:24:532 (2,3) - ^
01:27:762 (3) - ^
01:34:224 (4) - unstack
01:35:839 (3) - spacing.
01:37:916 (5) - unstack
01:39:762 (2) - ^
01:41:147 (5) - move away from (2) (or stack on it)
01:45:301 (7) - unstack.
02:40:685 (8) - ^
02:45:762 (2,3) - move away from (6)
02:56:839 (6,7) - unstack with (5)
03:00:070 (4,5,1) - unstack with (3)
03:14:378 (1) - unstack
03:24:070 (3) - ^
03:25:455 (1) - ^
03:41:147 (1) - spacing?
03:46:224 (3) - unstack
03:53:608 (3,4,1) - unstack with (2)


[Hard]
AR-1 or -2 plz.
Use the clap regularly.on the second white beat and the 4th white beat. use it unregularly might be very noisy and not nice.
00:09:070 (1) - spacing.
00:09:993 (2,3) - the spacing should be the same
00:11:378 (6) - ^
00:47:147 (2,3,4) - unstack
00:48:070 (2) - why the spacing is only 0.16x ?! stack or move it away.
01:12:301 (9,10) - weird spacing. if you want to do a jump,plz use larger spacing.
01:50:493 (6,7) - not fit the rhythm
02:13:224 (x) - why not add a note?
03:46:455 (2) - don't feel so noisy?
03:49:224 (2) - ^
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Too much :<
need more mods.
you should make the notes fit the rhythm more fluently..
and you can reference the map others make,and learn how to make you map looks better.

If you can do this, your map would be very nice.
My first map is also awful....and it lasts 9 months and finally ranked.(Because I'm so lazy to change it too much)
Good luck
poisonedblood
I can't help you much with spacing and patterns.
All I can say is try to make patterns and improve hitsounds or seek help of modders for this.
I'm just good with where a circle or a slider should be, where they start and when they finish.
(Although I still have difficulty knowing what's good in easy and sometimes normal difficulties.)

A few more mods but not many (Less then the other times anyway).

[Easy]

General: Why is there less break time in the Easy then in the Hard difficulty?
One or the other:
#1 Add a break or breaks somewhere.
#2 Or map some breaks in the Hard difficulty.
I think your map could use more sliders.

[00:13:685] Start the slider here and add a reverse arrow so it finishes at [00:14:378]?
[00:42:070] Maybe add a New Combo?
[00:43:224] Maybe remove New Combo?
[01:04:224] Maybe start the spinner here?
[02:49:455] Maybe add a New Combo?
[02:54:070] Maybe remove New Combo?
[02:54:993] Maybe add New Combo?
[03:41:147] Maybe remove New Combo?
[03:57:647] Start the spinner here like on Hard?


[Hard]

[00:24:070] - [00:24:301] Maybe make it a slider?
[00:31:685] Is this note necessary?
[00:39:993] ^
[00:40:224] ^
[00:46:339] Maybe add a circle?
[00:47:147] Maybe instead of a circle, add a reverse arrow so the slider finishes here?
[00:47:839] - [00:47:995] Add something here? (2 more slider repeats, a 1/4 note slider, 2 circles)
[00:50:032] Maybe revome the slider here, extend the last slider here, and add a circle on [00:50:147]?
[00:52:570] Maybe make the slider end here? Maybe put 2 stacked circles instead?
[01:24:301] Is this slider necessary?
[01:25:685] This should be seperrated into 2 sliders. One from [01:25:455] to [01:25:685], and the second from [01:25:801] to [01:26:032].
[01:27:301] Is this note necessary?
[01:42:647] Maybe end the slider here?
[01:42:993] - [01:43:108] Maybe make it a 1/4 note slider? or add a circle on [01:43:108]?
[01:48:993] Instead of a circle, another reverse arrow would be better.
[01:50:378] Maybe add a reverse arrow so the slider ends here?
[01:50:493] It sounds much better when this is a 1/4 note slider. But please move it so it starts on [01:50:608].
[01:50:995] It sounds much better when this is a 1/4 note slider.
[01:56:262] Maybe end the spinner here?
[01:57:993] - [01:58:455] Do something here like a slider or a reverse slider where the circles are. I think just the circles like this are plain.
[02:02:378] - [02:04:570] It's ok if you don't change it, but I just find it a bit plain.
[02:09:993] - [02:10:455] Do something here like a slider or a reverse slider where the circles are. I think just the circles like this are plain.
[02:11:839] - [02:12:416] Many notes are stacked here, maybe make some 1/4 note slider or 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows?
[02:13:224] The slider should end here.
[02:50:608] - [02:51:070] Why not make one 1/4 note slider with reverse arrows?
[02:52:685] The slider should end here.
[02:54:647] Maybe extend the slider here, maybe add a circle? If you don't add anything, at least remove the circle on [02:54:762]
[03:05:493] End the slider here so it it's 1/4 note slider.
[03:05:724] Add a circle or make it a 1/4 note slider with [03:05:839].
[03:23:724] Maybe add a circle
[03:23:839] ^
[03:23:378] - [03:24:185] If you want, the circle that are 1/4 note apart could be sliders.
[03:31:801] Maybe end the slider here?
[03:34:570] Maybe add a circle
[03:54:301] The slider should end here.
Kei
Hi~! omg a Gakupo song *¬*

General

I think you should change samples volume to 60.
Fix spacing of both difficulties and watch overlaps ^u^

[Easy]

This looks like a normal difficulty. I recommend you to rename this difficulty as Normal and increase approach rate to 2.
Doing this you'll be needing a Easy. I can make you a guest Easy or Insane difficulty if you want *-*~ I would like to make one~

00:06:301 (1) - Try this spacing: http://puu.sh/6zlj
00:10:916 (3) - Replace (3) with a slider with endpoint at 00:11:608. Add finish to slider endpoint (Delete (4) and (1), also, add new combo at min 00:12:070 note).
00:13:455 (7) - Don't hide notes like this. It's hard and confusing for easy/normal difficulties. Move this note somewhere.
00:14:839 (1) - uhmm I think it would look better if you move 1, 2, 3, and 4 somewhere because it overlaps with previous note (6). Don't forget to fix all the spacing after doing this c:
00:17:147 (1) - Same as in 00:13:455 (7).
00:20:839 (2) - Move 2 and 3. they're hidden by the previous slider (4).
00:21:762 (4) - Spacing. Don't change spacing on Easy and Normal difficulties.
00:24:532 (4,5,6,7) - Try something like this http://puu.sh/6zqu? c:
00:35:608 (4) - I think this would confuse new players ;n; but it's only my opinion.
00:36:532 (6) - Hidden by previous slider (3).
00:38:839 (2) - Again >.< don't hide notes.
00:40:685 (2) - Move down a bit this note, so it looks better and previous slider doesn't hide it.
00:44:378 (2) - Another hidden note >3<
01:06:993 - Change kiai time end here. When you change timing don't forget to fix all the timing sections too c:
01:30:070 (2,3) - Move this notes a bit to the right >.< don't overlap notes with previous ones :c
01:41:147 (5) - Move this note somewhere. Again overlap .-. fix all this kind of problems in the map by yourself now c:
01:47:608 (5,1,2,3,4) - Nice pattern! Try to make more patterns like this. It looks really good.
02:49:455 (7) - New combo.
02:54:993 (7) - New combo.
02:58:224 (2,3,4,5) - Try a better pattern .-. this doesn't look good and don't hide 4,5 and 6 at 3 endpoint.
03:59:839 - Add Finish.

About samples:

Try to make the sound samples follow the music rhythm >.< they the way you put them sounds weird imo :?
Claps should be like this:

00:12:070 (4) - Add Claps and delete claps&whistle of the next note.
00:12:993 (6) - Add claps and delete claps&whistle of the next note.

[Hard]

Here are various spacing problems. Fix them with distance snap.

00:25:455 (1) - Spacing, also its hidden a little by (10).
00:48:070 (2) - Confusing spacing again.
00:50:378 (1) - Add finish at start only.

Well this difficulty its ok. It has various spacing problems that make the difficulty a bit confusing to play so please fix them with distance snap •u•
Try to make better patterns, place in a better looking way the notes and watch overlaps too c: that's all.
Kudosu star because I support Gakupo c: ~
Topic Starter
BCI
OMG three mods in a row o,o
then all fixed, message will be corrected.
and yet kudosu for you :)

I can make you a guest Easy or Insane difficulty if you want *-*~ I would like to make one~
Welcome, it's will be funny. ^^
Then I need on Easy diff, Insane I expect the other person.
Kei
OK! I'll start today with my Easy when I get home. ^u^
Kei
Well here's my guest (Sorry for doublepost >o<).
Hope you like it~ oh also, don't forget to add 'Keilara' on all difficulties tags when you add it c:

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Duke of Madness Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [Keilara's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
BCI
resurrect ><
Shizuroh
hey can i make a guest difficulty insane? I already made a small start so i can show you that i can map :D

RE-EDIT hehe need to give the hitsound files too

soft-hitsound2 and normal-hitsound2
http://up.ppy.sh/files/clap1.wav

(save link as: normal-hitclap2 in your song map and then copy and paste it in the same map, and call it this time soft-hitclap2)

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Duke of Madness Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [Skydevil's Madness].osu
Topic Starter
BCI

SkyDevil wrote:

hey can i make a guest difficulty insane? I already made a small start so i can show you that i can map :D...yes, you can *____*" i love your start <3

RE-EDIT hehe need to give the hitsound files too

soft-hitsound2 and normal-hitsound2
http://up.ppy.sh/files/clap1.wav

(save link as: normal-hitclap2 in your song map and then copy and paste it in the same map, and call it this time soft-hitclap2) thanks ^^
I'll upload your difficulty when you do it :3
Shizuroh

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

hey can i make a guest difficulty insane? I already made a small start so i can show you that i can map :D...yes, you can *____*" i love your start <3

RE-EDIT hehe need to give the hitsound files too

soft-hitsound2 and normal-hitsound2
http://up.ppy.sh/files/clap1.wav

(save link as: normal-hitclap2 in your song map and then copy and paste it in the same map, and call it this time soft-hitclap2) thanks ^^
I'll upload your difficulty when you do it :3
lol ofc im going to finish it o_o i just needed permission for it :3, i guess i'll finish it in less than a month (depends on how much homework i get) D:

Edit: I love the part after the refrain (those jumps <3)

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Duke of Madness Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [Skydevil's Madness].osu
Kei
The current offset doesn't sound good.
I suggest you to change offset to 520 (-12).
It sounds waaay better than the current one in my opinion. If you do this don't forget to resnap all notes and sections in all difficulties.
Topic Starter
BCI

Kei wrote:

The current offset doesn't sound good.
I suggest you to change offset to 520 (-12).
It sounds waaay better than the current one in my opinion. If you do this don't forget to resnap all notes and sections in all difficulties.
looks good, fixed. thanks >w<
jossieP
yooo checking timing here

BPM: 130,000 (current)
Offset: 511 (-9 on current I got 0ms early =3=)
Topic Starter
BCI

ikari_kyon wrote:

yooo checking timing here

BPM: 130,000 (current)
Offset: 511 (-9 on current I got 0ms early =3=)
oh, thank you~ >w<"
ryuu
привет :3
ну во-первых,я люблю эту песню >w<
во-вторых,я люблю этот арт на бг >www<
и в-третьих,всё,что напишу - просто пожелания. можешь всё игнорить.

изи,как попросила,не трогаю.

[Normal]

00:07:434 (3) - убери клап.
00:06:280 (1,2) - конец слайдеров - клап .
00:07:664 (4,1,2,3) - клап.
00:11:357 (4) - начало - клап.
00:25:434 (6) - нк.
00:26:587 (1) - убери нк.
00:44:818 (1) - вот на этом комбо я бы добавила розовый комбоцвет (ибо лука). не знаю,как тебе,но я думаю,будет мило.
00:47:587 (1) - а тут бирюзовый.
00:49:434 (4) - убери повтор и закончи на 00:50:126.
00:50:587 (1) - передвинь на белый предыдущий тик и снова розовый.
00:50:818 - добавь ноту.
00:53:126 (1) - я бы закончила его на 00:55:452. а ноты бы клепала с начала киайя/припева.
01:04:434 (1) - закончила бы на 01:06:520. и киай,следовательно. и ноту тогда сюда 01:06:972 -
01:10:895 (2,3,4) - передвинь на предыдущий красный тик. и 01:11:818 (4) - продли до 01:12:511. и про снап не забудь.
01:24:741 - и 01:25:203 - добавь ноты.
01:45:741 (1) - зелёный комбоцвет.
01:47:587 (5) - закончи на 01:48:049 и на конец клап.
01:48:511 - добавь ноту и красный комбоцвет.
01:50:357 (4) - закончи на 01:50:818 и на конец клап.
01:51:280 - добавь ноту и зелёный комбоцвет.
01:54:049 (1) - аналогично,как и на 00:53:126. начни припев раньше.
02:05:126 (1) - и тут,как на 01:04:434
02:10:895 (1,2) - передвинь на предыдущий красный тик. и второй слайдер продли до 02:12:972.
03:06:049 (1) - я думаю,поняла XD
03:17:126 (1) - и тут тоже.
03:28:203 (1) - и тут.

[Hard]

фишка с комбоцветами тоже тут остаётся,так что я уже не буду писать про это ниже :3

00:06:511 (2) - убери клап в начале,поставь в конец.
00:06:972 (3,4) - и тут клапы только в конце.
00:08:126 (6) - клап в начале.
00:09:049 (1) - только клап на начале и втором повторе.
00:10:664 (3) - клап в начало.
00:40:203 (3) - измени форму.
01:45:510 (3) - нк.
01:54:280 (1) - как и в нормале.
02:38:126 (6) - нк.
02:39:049 (1) - убрать нк.
02:39:510 (3) - нк.
02:42:280 (5) - нк.
02:42:972 (1) - убери нк.
02:43:895 (3) - нк.
02:51:972 (1) - убери нк.
02:52:203 (2) - нк.
03:00:049 (1) - убери нк.
03:00:511 (2) - нк.
03:01:895 (5) - ^

всё.
если будут вопросы,напиши в игре или тут пмку кинь :3
удачи ~
Topic Starter
BCI
мне с фишкой понравилось. но, я думаю, пусть всё будет в фиолетовых тонах ;w;
алсо, большое спасибо за мод и звезду :3
Lucy-Kaede

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34991
i' ll mod your beatmap six days ago. this will be considered for m4m? if not, sorry :)
Ofc :D

General
Preview Times
Make normal preview time 116839 like the other diffs ._.

Kiai Times
Normal: Kiai4
Currently: 03:59:818
Change to 03:59:809
Like the other diffs
These have to be the same for ranking o_0

Optional:
Disable to countdown :3

Kei's Easy
After 02:11:818 (1) - This is a pretty big break..
02:24:511 (1) - Maybe you could map these soft harmonics to fill in some of the break time, and keep the players intrest :)

02:35:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Highlight all of these on the timeline, hold alt and bring them all left one grid so that they sit on the center line :)
02:47:126 (2) - Move to x:184, y:224
02:48:972 (3) - x:256, y:176 (the center again)
03:18:049 (x) - Add a note here? (x:200, y:120)

03:28:664 (1) ~ 03:34:895 (1) ~ Add break time in here.

Norma
01:59:357 (8) - Consider adding a note.
02:09:049 (4) - ^
02:42:972 (5) - This touches the hp bar, fix? (._.)
03:30:972 (1,2,3) - Could something be done with these without stacking 4 things?
~
Maybe something like this, but I dont know..

03:48:972 (1) - Bring this down 1 grid to sit level with 03:46:664 (1)? (If so, fix the following few notes)
03:56:818 (1,1) - Remove combos.

Hard
00:11:126 (4) - Grid level 4, move one grid down, and one right. To avoid an unrankable slider stacking issue.
00:11:587 (5) - Can move this accordingly too.
00:17:587 (1) - The start and end of this slider should not overlap -- fiix!!
~
What about this?

176,248,17587,6,8,B|160:264|100:244|100:188|160:164|176:180,1,150.000000596046,8|0
01:02:818 (6) - Nice trap xD
Actually, swap (6) and (7) places with the timeline (and distance snap). It sounds alot more fitting :)
(Might have to rotate (7 - the new slider), by about 15* to get it to fit nicely~

02:00:972 (5,6) - Stack Leniency again.
Usually you would move the second note, but in this case move (5) up one, and right one grid to keep (6) fitting nice and snug with (4) & (1) ^^

03:42:280 (4) - You should make this a straigh slider, or curvy, but not its current shape ._.

03:44:818 (4) - Touches the hp bar. (move it down a little)


This is nice~
Topic Starter
BCI
update, thanks >w<
Santa Claw
Um, I'm pretty sure the title is "Madness of Duke Venomania" ^^"
Topic Starter
BCI

Santa Claw wrote:

Um, I'm pretty sure the title is "Madness of Duke Venomania" ^^"
when I load the map with a new name, this appears :o how to update the name without creating a new map? о_о
Kei

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Kei's Easy
After 02:11:818 (1) - This is a pretty big break..
02:24:511 (1) - Maybe you could map these soft harmonics to fill in some of the break time, and keep the players intrest :) Hmm yeah it is a good idea but I'm not sure >.< If another modder more tells me to do this, I'll do it.

02:35:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Highlight all of these on the timeline, hold alt and bring them all left one grid so that they sit on the center line :) Done :3
02:47:126 (2) - Move to x:184, y:224 Ok.
02:48:972 (3) - x:256, y:176 (the center again) ^
03:18:049 (x) - Add a note here? (x:200, y:120) Hm I'm not sure about that. It may be a bit hard for an easy. Once again: If someone else mentions this again I'll do it.

03:28:664 (1) ~ 03:34:895 (1) ~ Add break time in here. Done.

Thanks!
Update :3

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Duke of Madness Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [Kei's Easy].osu
Santa Claw

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

Santa Claw wrote:

Um, I'm pretty sure the title is "Madness of Duke Venomania" ^^"
when I load the map with a new name, this appears :o how to update the name without creating a new map? о_о
Did you use Full Submission or Standart Submission?
Topic Starter
BCI
Full Submission
^ this :o
wowshakhov
Topic Starter
BCI
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
спасибо большое >< на кудоску
Reiji-RJ
Привет, м4м :3

[General]

  • Santa Claw wrote:

    Um, I'm pretty sure the title is "Madness of Duke Venomania" ^^"
  1. Да, вроде название такое ^. Почитай этот топик: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443. Там сказано, как переименовывать. ок, вижу, уже не нужно, я слоу.
  2. Есть ли видео лучшего качества? Ибо это ужасно.
  3. У тебя в папке есть неиспользованные файлы: default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, default-x.png, удали их и сделай фуллсабмит.
  4. fruit-ryuuta.png - он тебе нужен? Зачем? Полностью ктб скина нет же. Удали?
  5. Отключи Letterbox during breaks во всех диффках (Кею скажу в моде его диффки)
  6. Отключи Countdown во всех диффках. (То же самое^, Кею скажу)
  7. Так же ты можешь использовать в скине свой (или дефолтный) slidertick.png
  8. Так же в тайминге во всех диффках поставь метроном 6/4.
[Kei's Easy]

  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks.
  2. Disable countdown.
  3. 00:06:280 (1) - asymmetrical slider. To make it symmetrical move 2nd followpont 1 grid right, 3rd 1 grid up and 3 grids left, 5th 3 grids left.
  4. 00:09:049 (1) - reduce to the previous red line (00:09:511 - )
  5. 00:09:972 (1,2) - bad for easy, make this:
  6. 00:09:972 (1) - remove nc after ^
  7. 00:30:972 (1) - ^ don't combospam
  8. 00:39:280 (2) - ^
  9. 00:44:818 (x) - note with finish
  10. 00:53:126 (1,1) - too short time for recovery from spinner. So reduce slider to 00:54:972 -
  11. 00:55:895 (1) - asymmetrical, to make it symmetrical, move the 2nd followpoint 2 grids right and 4th 2 grids left.
  12. 01:06:972 ~ 01:10:895 - map this space.
  13. 01:32:357 (1,1) - make it symmetrical
  14. 01:23:587 (1) - if the middle tick doesn't cross the "y" axis - slider isn't symmetrical, work more on it. Example:
    192,240,83587,38,0,B|188:276|204:316|256:336|312:316|324:276|320:224,1,220.000001192092
  15. 01:24:972 (2) - ^
  16. 01:27:280 (2) - ^
  17. 01:37:895 (1,2) - ugly overlap
  18. 01:40:664 (2) - watch your symmetry
  19. 01:43:434 (1) - ^ meh
  20. 01:53:934 (1) - start from 01:54:049 -
  21. 01:56:818 (1) - symmetry.
  22. 01:59:587 (1) - ^ YOUR SLIDERS, WHY THERE IS NO SYMMETRY? Fix them all.
  23. 02:07:895 (x) - map this part
  24. 02:13:434 (x) - too long break, start mapping from here 02:24:511 -
  25. 02:49:895 (1) - 1 grid right
    You have to map till end.
[Normal]

  1. У тебя такой же св, как в изе. В следующих мапах используй разный св. А еще в нормале можно спейсинг побольше, ибо нечитаемо.
  2. 00:16:895 (5) - финиш на конец
  3. 00:25:895 (2) - убери финиш
  4. 00:37:664 (1,2,3,4,1) - следи за спейсингом.
  5. 00:50:357 (1) - финиш
  6. 01:06:972 (1) - финиш
  7. 01:09:972 (1) - нет. Не делай такое в нормале
  8. 01:11:818 (4) - начни с 01:12:049, а тут поставь ноту
  9. 01:23:587 (1) - убери
  10. 01:48:510 (1) - стакни лучше
  11. 01:51:280 (1) - ^
  12. 01:51:280 (1,2,3) - сделай одинаковый спейснинг
  13. 01:58:203 (5,6) - анстакни,слишком много объектов сразу
  14. 02:24:510 (1) - симметрия, все дела. Еще сделай так, чтобы сам слайдер был по центру экрана
  15. 02:31:895 (3) - 1 грид вправо
  16. 02:45:049 (7) - убери (вообще не юзай 1/4 в нормалах и изях)
  17. 02:56:126 (6) - ^
  18. 03:03:280 (1) - финиш же
  19. 03:08:818 (1) - ^
  20. 03:34:895 (1) - финиш, ну!
  21. 03:54:511 (1) - ^
  22. 03:54:972 (2,3,4) - сделай спейсинг одинаковым
[Hard]

  1. 00:19:895 (5) - и далее ритм странноват, можно сделать так:
  2. 01:32:357 (4) - финиш убрать
  3. 01:39:741 (4,1) - спейсинг
  4. 02:00:972 (5,6) - не стакай так, или сделай искусственный стак. (подвинуть 1 слайдер на грид вниз и вправо)
  5. 03:10:895 (6) - не очень D:
  6. 03:15:972 (7,8) - до этого не было синих тиков, теперь есть. Странно.
  7. 03:21:972 (8) - :<
  8. 03:34:087 (2) - начни с белого
  9. 03:36:511 (1) - финиш
  10. 03:43:203 (6) - ^ на конец
  11. 03:54:049 (1) - ^
  12. 03:56:126 (1,2,3) - мех
Неплохо, удачи тебе!
Topic Starter
BCI
Есть ли видео лучшего качества? Ибо это ужасно.
видео ж можно найти. найти бы того, кто вырезал б из него звук :o

спасибо большое ^^
rEdo
[Kei's Easy]
why it's not mapped until the end of the song? :c
0:09:972 (1) - I'd just make it longer, so it lasts on a white tick.
0:44:818 (x) - add a note here?
1:06:972 - 1:10:895 - that gap is just too huge, map this part!
1:45:741 (x) - same like before, add a note here.
1:54:049 (1) - start it on a white tick, and end it at 1:56:357 (another white tick).
2:07:895 - 2:11:818 - well, yeah.
3:06:049 (x) - add a spinner at this place, like you did in previous choruses? if you're going to implement it, end it at 3:08:357.
3:28:664 - 3:34:895 - map this part.

[Normal]
0:44:126 (3) - shouldn't you fix its length?
0:49:434 (4) - ^
2:45:049 (7) - add a new combo.
3:57:741 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier, perhaps?

[Hard]
0:08:126 (6) - I'd move that finish to the beginning of the next note.
0:19:895 (1) - add a finish at its beginning.
0:42:511 (8) - delete that finish, I guess?
1:00:049 (5,6) - move (6) to a red tick, or add an another note on the blue tick before (7). sounds and plays a lot better like that.
1:29:818 (3,4,5,6,7) - I'd go with something like that: click!
1:43:434 (11) - unnecessary finish.
1:48:510 (1) - check the distance snap, and then replace that note. it's placed quite too far right now.
2:09:049 (3,4,5) - move them by one grid to the right.
2:30:510 (3) - I don't really like sliders like this one.
2:44:357 (7) - don't use finishes like that, like in the real meaning of this word... _^_"
2:49:434 (10) - ^
2:51:972 (7) - a good example how it could be used - at this slider's end.
2:57:511 (1) - you had a similar pattern of hitsounds before, use a finish here.
3:00:511 (1) - ^
3:24:049 (4) - too far spacing.
3:43:203 (6) - another good place for a finish.
3:54:049 (1) - ^

there you go.
Topic Starter
BCI
fixed, thanks you rEdo~ >w<
HakuNoKaemi
Redone the mod anyway

Gomen the wordwall

[General]
  1. Combo-colour 2 and 3 are really similiar, exchange 3 and 4 ?
  2. Make the kiai end at 218126 ( 03:38:126 ) so you have a fountain at the end (yes, it's rankable i that case) and not use a kiai where it don't stay so good
  3. There are many other vocaloid singing there... why only Gakupo is in the list? ( 00:44:818 - 00:55:895 : Megurine Luka & Hatsune Miku, 01:45:741 - 01:56:818 : Megpoid Gumi, Meiko, 02:57:741 - 03:08:818 : Kaito ( i know, just him using the female pitch lol )
[Kei's Easy]
  1. Rhythmn
    1. Why this is mapped so much less than other difficulties?
    2. 00:33:280 (1) - Move it in 00:33:741 and
      00:33:280 (x) - Create a circle
      01:06:972 (3) - After that note, suggesting:
    3. 02:07:895 (3) - ^
  2. Graphic
    1. Might be better if you refine the difficulty with grid size 4 and make some slider finer
    2. 00:24:511 (3) - This could be better like a blanket
    3. 00:30:972 (1,1) - Make the curvy
    4. 00:57:741 (2) - Blanket
    5. 01:00:972 (3) - ^
    6. 01:23:587 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Uhm, overlapping life all? Try to change it to use less overlaps
    7. Try to remodern the map by trying to make graphic better following what I said in the rest
[Normal]
  1. Rhythmn
    1. 01:09:972 (1) - End 1/4 after (blue tick)
    2. 01:26:357 (6) - End 1/4 after (white tick)
    3. 02:10:895 (1) - End 1/4 after (blue tick)
    4. 03:33:280 (6) - Make it an 1/2 slider. Follow music better
    5. 03:34:203 (8) - End 1/4 before (blue tick)
  2. Spacing
    1. Asking you why you did lower the distance snap somewhere.... it make no sense! (example: 01:27:280 (1,2,3,4) - ). There's NOTHING like antijump feeling in those places!
  3. Graphic
    1. Might be better if you refine the difficulty with grid size 4
    2. Using Shaped and Curvy Patterns, Blankets and parallelism can make the graphic better
    3. 00:09:049 (1) - This could be better like a blanket
    4. 00:12:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern curvy
    5. 00:16:895 (5,1) - Parallelize ?
    6. 01:00:972 (3) - ^
    7. 01:23:587 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Uhm, overlapping life all? Try to change it to use less overlaps
    8. 00:43:895 (2,3,1) - hmm someone arleady pointed it and you fix'd... the graphic correction here anyway (it's a bit curvy...)
    9. 00:49:434 (4,1) - Curving
    10. 00:57:741 (5,1) - parallelism
    11. Try to remodern the map by trying to make graphic better following what I said in the rest
  4. Combos
    1. 02:49:434 (6) - Add a New Combo here
  5. Hitsound
    • The hitsound pattern can be simplificated to a clap on upbeats ( 2nd and 4th white lines every 4/4 and some finish, anyway
    1. FInishes in places like 00:38:818 doesn't sound that good
    2. Some Claps arent there (example: 02:45:049 (1)) add it?
[Hard]
  1. Rhythmn
    1. 00:21:164 (x) - Add a Note?
    2. 01:09:972 (1) - It end 1/4 before (blue tick)
    3. 01:44:126 (1,2) - Change it to

    4. 01:47:818 (6,7) - Liked it better before ( the double doublets ) as it was following music better . As slider is confusing because it doesn't give the correct feeling ( gave there by one single repeating 1/1 slider )
    5. 01:48:626 (x) - Add a Note here, you should not pass so quickly between soundlines ( from following voice to drums )
    6. 01:58:203 (4,5) - It'll follow music and play better like
      [img]puu.sh/eDz9[/img]
    7. 02:10:895 (1) - Make it end 1/4 before
    8. 02:29:818 (1,2,3) - I.. made it before anyway. The slider like this is EPIC while following violin(and that's the reason i put it there, the need for some rhythmic mod)

    9. 03:34:203 (2) - More precise like the slider I suggested at 02:29:818 (1,2,3) and end it 1/4 before(blue tick)
    10. 03:57:511 (1) - I do think this don't follow anything here, mapping with hits and circles is better.
  2. Graphic
    1. Might be better if you refine the difficulty with grid size 4
    2. Using Shaped and Curvy Patterns, Blankets and parallelism can make the graphic better (Some graphical suggestion are in the Normal one, you know arleady that you should avoid partial overlaps and that you can shape or curve patterns better or even use finer blankets.
  3. Hitsounds
    1. 00:26:587 (1) - The clap is only at the end...
    2. 00:28:549 (2) - Sure of that clap? it sound... off
Better than average, and you're at your first tentative (in the sense, you yet have to have a first ranked)
Shizuroh
I guess you aren't going to check my old post (its buried so far away o-o)
Sorry for the delay Q_Q my exams just've finished Q_Q
I'm going to finish a huge part in the refrain ^_^ meant weekend T_T

EDIT: SIGH BECAUSE OF THE NAME THE MAP IS NOW APART OF YOUR MAP T_T

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Madness Of Duke Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [Skydevil's Madness].osu
Topic Starter
BCI
why only Gakupo is in the list?
sourse of the song - Evils Kingdom, the saga of seven deadly sins. one vocaloid embodies the one evil. :3

thank you HakuNoKaemi >w<~
move to wip, work on hitsounds

SkyDevil wrote:

Sorry for the delay Q_Q
dont worry ^_^ thanks and good luck~
HakuNoKaemi
Even if at the end he did really love Gumi?
Topic Starter
BCI

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Even if at the end he did really love Gumi?
Yes.
Shizuroh

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Even if at the end he did really love Gumi?
Somehow he does o_o Oh well, gakupo is crazy :3 GUMI IS AWESOME <3
riffy
star~ :3
go! go!
Topic Starter
BCI

-Bakari- wrote:

star~ :3
go! go!
oh, thank you :D
M a n a
I didn't realize your thread is M4M queue ;A; So i'm here for M4M :)

[Kei's Easy]

01:37:895 (1) - Make perfect blanket ><
Nice diff,but a bit dissapointed because there some overlap notes.

[Normal]

01:56:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Streams OAO Why don't you copy-paste 02:02:357 part? 'cause it has similar rhythm.
02:07:895 (1) - Overlapped by hit-300. I suggest to put this note at x: 256 y: 192
02:39:510 (5) - Why you don't NC this? because the other part (like 02:45:049) you make the note NC

[Hard]

00:21:164 (3) - Weird placement ><
00:30:972 (9) - NC start here?
01:58:203 (4) - Why don't you just stack this note with (3)? It looks more good
02:10:895 (1) - It sounds weird to put this note in the blue tick,put it in the previous red tick? It sounds more good ><
03:03:741 (2) - Make perfect blanket

That's all~
I love gakupo!! x3 Star~
Good luck!
Topic Starter
BCI
thanks you M a n a >w<
cmn_891127
Hi, Black_Cherry_Ita~
From cmn's mod queue~

General
  1. Skin: You are missing spinner-clear.png/spinner-osu.png/spinner-spin.png as you have a custom spinner skin.
  2. Skin: You are also missing default-comma.png/default-dot.png/default-percent.png/default-x.png
  3. Skin: "comboburst-0.png" the name should change to comboburst.png, since you have only one comboburst.
  4. Slider tick rate: hard is 1, but normal and easy are 2, you should make them: hard ≥ normal ≥ easy
Hard
  • perfect~ nothing to say~
Normal
  1. 00:43:895 (2,3) - change to a 1/1 slider
  2. 00:55:895 (1,2,3,4) - not in a line, (2) move right 1 grid
  3. 01:04:434 (1) - why don't you map here?
  4. 03:34:895 (1) - end at 03:36:511, and add a note at 03:37:895
Easy
  • perfect~ nothing to say~
beautiful mapset and skin~
Good luck~
Topic Starter
BCI
thank you for mod and star ^_^~
Leorda
Privet

General
* Your fail-background is over 1MB, you need to compress it until it below 1MB
* I feel the repeating slider are not centered


Easy
00:09:972 (1) - Snap the repeating slider at blue tick is doesn't make sense. You should change this part
00:37:434 (x) - Add note here?
00:55:895 (1) - Too soon from spinner for easy diff. It's hard for beginners after the spinning the spinner
01:56:818 (1) - ^
02:36:049 (1) - ^ also, new combo for preventing of bug
03:38:357 (1) - ^


Normal
00:30:972 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern
00:32:357 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
00:55:895 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts, it makes average players go hard to see the circle
01:00:511 (4) - New combo for your combo pattern
01:42:972 (6) - ^
02:07:895 (1) - Same issue as 00:55:895 (1)
02:10:895 (1) - I suggest you to remove the clap at head slider. It doesn't fit to the music
02:11:818 (2) - ^
03:08:818 (1) - Too far from spinner for normal. Make sure the circle is on inside the spinner, not outside


Hard
01:04:434 (2) - End this slider to 01:04:664 for following vocal?
01:40:434 (2) - Not stack perfectly with previous circle
01:46:895 (4) - Move the 2nd sliderpoint to 1 grid down for perfect blanket combo (Nazi)
02:10:895 (1) - I think it's better for end this at 02:11:472 for following vocal
02:30:049 (4) - New combo for your combo pattern?
02:31:203 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?
03:38:357 (1) - New combo for preventing of bug


Nice job~
Topic Starter
BCI
all fixed, thank you Leorda >w<
BeatofIke
STAR~
Topic Starter
BCI
big thanks BeatofIke >w<"
Aurele
Hi, From my Modding Queue ~ ♥

That's a little suggestion for : [Hard]

00:43:203 to 00:44:357 : Why not like this for the third slider http://puu.sh/ieJ1 ?
Also, if you do this, remmeber to put a Clap to 00:44:357
riffy
Хай, а меня модить не позвали :<
Ну и ладно, сам пришел :D

Easy
00:06:280 (1) - давай так, а то там красный изгиб не в тему смотрится http://puu.sh/ifV3
00:11:357 (2) - короткий слайдер, начало задевает конец, новичку не очень ==> давай так http://puu.sh/ifVq можешь его тоже изогнуть, если продлишь.
00:26:357 (5,1) - с (5) НК переставт на (1)
00:30:972 (4) - и сюда нк потом
00:36:511 (3) - коротковат
01:26:357 (4) - ^
01:36:049 (2,3) - нет, нет, нет! я запутался! Как так, Два аппроач серкла у слайдера D:
01:38:818 (5) - просится НК
01:59:587 (1) - коротковат (такие короткие слайдеры можно заменять двумя нотами. вместо начала и конца слайдера, ставишь по ноте)
02:10:203 (2) - а вот этого коротышку фиг исправишь -.- Может что-то придумаешь?
02:28:203 (1) - генератор наркоманских фигур для слайдеров? Сделай красиво!
02:36:510 (1) - коротышки атакуют! замени двумя нотами
02:45:280 (5,6,1,2) - с (1) НК переставить на (2) \ и на (5) добавить НК
03:47:587 (2) - красный уголочик испортил вид слайдера
03:53:587 (2) - коротышка-слайдер! очень мерзопакостный! замени двумя нотами
03:55:434 (3) - убей их всех! D:

Normal
D: Бака! Почему все так хорошо! ><

Hard
02:30:049 (1) - нарко-слайдер http://puu.sh/ig2G WTF! СТРЕЛОЧКА ВНИКУДА D:

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Шикарно~
Жалко, что меня так и не позвали модить эту карту :<
А еще, а еще! Тут в тэгах мику. <3
Удачи с мапой.
Надеюсь мой мод спам пригодится.
Topic Starter
BCI

-Bakari- wrote:

Жалко, что меня так и не позвали модить эту карту :<
да я б позвала, но у тебя была заполненная очередь. :с

thanks you Gabex3 and -Bakari- again, some was fixed :3
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ Here's my mod!~ and sorry for being a bit late! >< (a forum PM request)

  • [General]
  1. Delete your .osb file on your folder it is unnecessary to have this file because you don't have any SB's for this map.

    [Easy]
  2. 00:06:280 - Remove all "clap"s from notes here up to "00:11:587"
  3. 03:10:203 (2,1) - Make them (more) symmetrical like this: (as shown on the pic below)


    [Normal]
  4. 00:26:818 (4,5) - Is this a jump? Please get rid of this since this is just a normal diff.

    [Hard]
    Looks fine~
That's all!~
Nice Map!~ Goodluck! :D
Star!~ :)
Topic Starter
BCI
thank you for mod and star Kirino Kousaka ^_^~
Shizuroh
Map finished :D

00:11:608 to 01:06:993 = Stream part
01:08:147 to 02:07:339 = Jump part
02:07:916 to 02:13:455 = Short stream part /o/
02:24:532 to 02:35:608 = Jump part :3
02:35:724 to 03:59:839 = Long Stream and Jump part :D

998 combo owo almost 1000 o.o

Done~

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Madness Of Duke Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [Skydevil's Madness].osu
Topic Starter
BCI
yay this is finished! big thanks SkyDevil~
so, sorry but i change OD (-1) because your score is for approval, not rank ><"
Shizuroh

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

yay this is finished! big thanks SkyDevil~
so, sorry but i change OD (-1) because your score is for approval, not rank ><"
what is OD O.O xD anyways im fine with it XD Im btw still sorry for taking so much time D:

btw the romaji title of this song is Venomania kō no Kyōki, and the japanese title is ヴェノマニア公の狂気 :3 -If you care- (maybe its possible to ut ko no kyoki in the tags XD)
Topic Starter
BCI
hm, i think english name is more popular, so not~
Shizuroh

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hm, i think english name is more popular, so not~

Yeah probably not.
lovhin456
Hello, sorry for the delay

General:
- For Easy, Normal and Hard I strongly recommend you turn up the volume to 70%
- The video's quality is bad, if you wish I could try to get you one a little better just say so ~
- Eh, I'm not totally sure about the current timing, I'm not good myself with timing so I suggest you to maybe get someone who is an expert to check it
- Disable the display storyboard in front of combofire in all diffs

Skin:
- Nothing wrong, what I'm going to list here are just my opinions on the skin and some suggestions to improve it (sorry I really really get picky when it comes to skins, don't take my comments to seriously they are just opinions ><)
- Default-1, default-5, default-6, default-8, default-9 are not well centered, the biggest issue here is default-1 you can clearly see the problem when the combos reach 10+
- I'm not a big fan of the font you used (at least imo it doesn't suit when it comes to numbers) I think there are better fonts that would be great for a song like this
- The play-skip imo is a little small
- The reverse-arrow would look way better if it didn't have that gradient, or maybe a grey to white gradient would be better but if I were you I would use a thicker border for it and just plain white for the fill
- You can see that the tone of purple you use for pause-retry is not the same as for pause-back and pause-continue, if possible please try to make them the same
- The score bar overlaps the score numbers which results in this http://puu.sh/jrB5 and it looks pretty bad, try to make the score bar smaller
- Mmm, the scorebar ... colors ? The purple and red don't go well imo a shade of purple and white gradient will be better
- The slider ball you use, the colors in it a bit too brigth and colorful imo maybe a darker one will fit more
- If you need help or can't solve this I would be more than glad to help you! I can even make some elements for you >< I really like this song so much!

Easy:
- Uh, at first Kei gave you a guest Easy diff right ? I was wondering where it went because it just stopped being mentioned suddenly so I wanted to know if this is still Kei's diff or if you made it yourself
- AR is very low, AR3 suits more imo
- 00:06:280 >> The clap doesn't fit imo, use a normal finish
- 00:10:895 >> This repeat slider doesn't fit at all, make a slider from here to 00:11:587 with a normal finish at the end
- 00:40:434 >> Add a whistle maybe so it doesn't feel too empty ?
- 00:43:895 >> ^
- 00:55:895 >> It feels weird to start the kiai time with no note/slider or something, the emphasis goes away and it kind of ruins the chorus moment, I strongly suggest you add a note here
- 01:09:972 >> I think a 1/2 slider with a repeat arrow will fit more
- 01:56:818 >> Same as 00:55:895
- 02:10:664 >> Delete this note ?
- 02:26:818 >> Replace the clap with whistle
- 02:31:434 (1,2) >> Replace the claps with whistles
- 03:36:511 >> Imo it will give a better effect and feeling if you end the spinner here and silence it, then start mapping at 03:37:895

Normal:
- 00:07:203 >> Instead of the slider, just add a note here
- 00:11:126 >> Add a note
- 00:19:895 >> Add a finish
- 00:26:357 >> Add a note
- 00:33:972 >> ^
- 00:35:587 >> New combo ?
- 00:37:664 >> Move this note to 00:37:434
- 00:42:972 >> Add a note
- 01:06:049 >> This touches the hp bar way too much
- 01:10:434 >> Is not a good idea to use blue ticks, try ending it here it still sounds good
- 02:04:549 >> End the slider here and add a repeat
- 02:11:357 >> Same as 01:10:434
- 02:12:972 >> Use whistle instead of clap
- 02:24:511 ~ 02:32:357 >> Replace all the claps used in this part with whistles
- 02:54:972 >> New combo
- 03:05:818 >> Add a note ?
- 03:36:511 >> Silence the end

Hard:
- OD +2
- 00:10:895 (3,4) >> Add clap at the end of (3) and remove it from the start of (4) then add a clap at the end of (4)
- 00:26:357 >> Add a note
- 00:31:895 >> ^
- 00:37:434 >> ^
- 00:42:972 >> ^
- 01:32:818 >> ^
- 01:38:357 >> ^
- 01:43:895 >> ^
- 02:01:434 >> Stack under (6)s start
- 02:24:511 ~ 02:32:818 >> I was expecting this whole part to be in slowdown not only the 1st slider, also whistles sound way better than claps in this calm part
- 02:41:818 >> These streams don't fit
- 02:44:818 >> Add a note
- 02:50:357 >> ^
- 02:55:895 >> ^
- 03:02:472 >> Move this to 03:02:703
- 03:27:280 (5,6,7,8) >> Try to make something a bit easier to hit ?
- 03:34:203 (3,4) >> I strongly suggest you change these sliders, (3) looks like a normal slider and that can confuse layers, (4) looks rather ugly
- 03:36:511 >> Delete this spinner and add a note at 03:37:895

SkyDevil's Madness:
- For your dif I will suggest you to decrease the sections with volume 80% to 70%
- 00:16:549 >> Add a note
- 00:16:664 >> Remove new combo then new combo at 00:17:126
- 00:18:741 >> Remove new combo if you did ^
- 00:48:857 >> Nothing at this point but look at this picture please http://puu.sh/jtzx it's super crowded
- 00:51:741 >> New combo
- 00:54:511 >> You could try something more fun and creative
- 00:56:587 (3,4) >> I recommend you stack notes like this as you can see here http://puu.sh/jtJv if you do this with notes that are like this the playfield looks way better and you will have less crowded or confusing patterns
- 01:00:049 >> New combo
- 01:03:049 >> Add a note
- 01:11:818 >> To make it even better, move this to 01:12:049 and shorten the slider until where it ended before. After that add a note at 01:11:587
- 01:53:357 >> Add a note
- 02:00:972 >> New combo
- 02:54:395 >> Remove the clap
- 02:56:357 >> It would be cool if you did this with all the streams around the map
- 03:36:972 >> Increase the volume gradually
- 03:42:857 >> Add a note
- 03:48:626 >> Add a note

* As you can see this still has a long way to go
Shizuroh

lovhin456 wrote:

SkyDevil's Madness:
- For your dif I will suggest you to decrease the sections with volume 80% to 70% - Done
- 00:16:549 >> Add a note - Didn't Notice that there could be also a note XD
- 00:16:664 >> Remove new combo then new combo at 00:17:126 - No i prefer too keep it this way '_' XD
- 00:18:741 >> Remove new combo if you did ^ - >w<
- 00:48:857 >> Nothing at this point but look at this picture please http://puu.sh/jtzx it's super crowded - Sorry Q_Q, changed it
- 00:51:741 >> New combo
- 00:54:511 >> You could try something more fun and creative - Did le random looping XD
- 00:56:587 (3,4) >> I recommend you stack notes like this as you can see here http://puu.sh/jtJv if you do this with notes that are like this the playfield looks way better and you will have less crowded or confusing patterns -Yeah i wasnt that experienced when i did that part, this is a beatmap of almost 2 months XD
- 01:00:049 >> New combo -Done
- 01:03:049 >> Add a note - Done
- 01:11:818 >> To make it even better, move this to 01:12:049 and shorten the slider until where it ended before. After that add a note at 01:11:587 - I think it sounds too fast that way :c
- 01:53:357 >> Add a note - Euhm i letted it stay XD
- 02:00:972 >> New combo -Done
- 02:54:395 >> Remove the clap -Done
- 02:56:357 >> It would be cool if you did this with all the streams around the map - What do you mean?
- 03:36:972 >> Increase the volume gradually -I dunt see any difference but alright XD
- 03:42:857 >> Add a note -Done
- 03:48:626 >> Add a note - Did something else with it XD

* As you can see this still has a long way to go
First of all, sorry i was kinda sleeping so i didnt saw this mod XD THANK YOU :3

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Madness of Duke Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [SkyDevil's Madness].osu
lovhin456

SkyDevil wrote:

- 02:56:357 >> It would be cool if you did this with all the streams around the map - What do you mean?
I mean decreasing the space like that when it comes to streams so it looks way better, more neat
Shizuroh

lovhin456 wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

- 02:56:357 >> It would be cool if you did this with all the streams around the map - What do you mean?
I mean decreasing the space like that when it comes to streams so it looks way better, more neat
ah okay i will look at it after school xD
Topic Starter
BCI
- Uh, at first Kei gave you a guest Easy diff right ? I was wondering where it went because it just stopped being mentioned suddenly so I wanted to know if this is still Kei's diff or if you made it yourself
She asked me to remove difficulty because she has not time to edit it due to new mods. this is my diff~

big big thanks lovhin, most fixed >w<~
Shizuroh

lovhin456 wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

- 02:56:357 >> It would be cool if you did this with all the streams around the map - What do you mean?
I mean decreasing the space like that when it comes to streams so it looks way better, more neat
Anyway I looked at it and I thought this was kinda a special case because this stream is way longer than the other of 5 circles XD
riffy
RE-check~
нефиг делать же ><

Easy
ну и что я тут забыл? это же BCI's Easy D:

Madness
nc = new combo D:
00:14:126 (8,1) - move NC from (1) to (8) look better new-combo nazi
00:19:780 (6,1) - i suggst you to stack 6 and 1 and place nc at 6
00:21:857 (5) - nc
00:46:664 (4) - can confuse players :<
00:54:164 (6) - nc
01:02:587 (7) - ^
01:09:280 (1,1) - remove new-combo spam
01:23:126 (6) - new combo + delete new combo at 01:23:587 (1)
02:06:164 (6) - new combo
I suggest you to use HP Drain 6

Hard
00:13:434 (5,1) - начало (5) и конец (1) пересекаются. стакни их
00:20:587 (2) - так вкуснее http://puu.sh/m8T2
00:42:280 (7) - я бы подправил. не совсем по обводке
00:42:972 (9,1) - нк на (9) перемести. лазам больно ><
01:02:818 (6) - такая сложная форма чутка не к месту
01:07:434 (2,1) - ^
01:36:972 (6) - нк
01:42:049 (6) - нк
02:13:434 (7) - чутка не по обводке
02:30:049 (1) - похож на обычные. внезапный слишком :<
02:37:203 (4,1) - пересекаются
02:55:895 (5,1,2,3) - нк на пятерку переставить?
03:05:126 (7,9) - слегка отдели :3
03:18:741 (4,5) - не обвелся ><
03:24:741 (6) - нк
03:27:626 (6) - ^
03:27:626 (6,2) - не аккуратно смотрятся
03:34:203 (3) - внезапный

Normal
00:21:280 (3) - сильнее погни
00:49:434 (4,1) - стакни ><
01:06:049 (1) - не аккуратно смотрится
02:58:203 (2,4) - (2)- не обводка \ 4 - откуда такая форма? D:
03:00:049 (5,6,1) - cтрашноваты

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Looks better! Star!
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Удачи с мапой :3
/me runs пока палкой бить не стали ><
Topic Starter
BCI
thank you again bakari, most fixed \:D/
riffy
поправить мост это круто, да /D:\
ax_pokl
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
[General]
good map. you can ask for a Bat or Mat.
You can use different colors. these colors are too same.
Or you can use dark-purple afer light-purple but not the simillar color.
The song is long.
(you must not follow all of my suggestions.)
[Hard]
very well.
00:49:203 (5) - change to two circles?
01:09:972 (1) - it seems a little strange.
01:26:357 (3,4) - why not make a jump?
(01:26:357 (3,4) - not nc / nc, and you can change slider to circle)
01:39:280 (4,1) - stacked.
01:44:357 (3,1) - stacked.
02:00:511 (4,5,6) - the stack is a little serious. try to make them far.
03:27:280 (5,6) - ..
03:39:511 (5) - no stack.
[Normal]
00:12:049 (1) - jump?
01:38:587 (1) - no red line.
02:39:511 (1) - no red line.
02:45:049 (1) - no red line.
03:45:280 (3,2) - stacked.
[Easy]
00:06:280 (1,2,1,2) - the song too long. delete it?
03:37:895 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) -
same reason.
[From ax_pokl's modding queue]
Shizuroh
Sorru Recently saw this one xD

Madness
nc = new combo D: ~I know
00:14:126 (8,1) - move NC from (1) to (8) look better ~okay new-combo nazi ~LOL
00:19:780 (6,1) - i suggst you to stack 6 and 1 and place nc at 6 ~I placed NC at 5 and redone this whole part ><
00:21:857 (5) - nc ~kay
00:46:664 (4) - can confuse players :< ~Fix
00:54:164 (6) - nc ~
01:02:587 (7) - ^ ~Talking about random NC'ing...
01:09:280 (1,1) - remove new-combo spam ~No T.T
01:23:126 (6) - new combo + delete new combo at 01:23:587 (1) ~
02:06:164 (6) - new combo ~Sure
I suggest you to use HP Drain 6 ~Fine~

Derp. Thank you xD

Download: Kamui Gakupo - Madness of Duke Venomania (Black_Cherry_Ita) [SkyDevil's Madness].osu
lovhin456
Sorry for taking so long, but here are the skin elements http://puu.sh/nYQ2 I hope you like them, if there is something you want to change or anything else just tell me ~
Topic Starter
BCI
i'm back and revive this~ big big thanks to lovhin ^w^~
@ax_pokl: i don't appile your suggestions because i think this is useless
Leorda
Hi there

[Easy]
* AR +1 or +2? Your current approach rate is slow...

00:39:280 (1) - Why whistle at tail slider?
01:27:280 (5) - These slider needs more wavy I guess...
02:36:511 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them


[Normal]
00:55:895 (1,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them
00:59:357 (2) - Remove this note? It makes a good rhythm if you remove it
01:06:049 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a good blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/338784
02:07:895 (1) - Same issue as 00:55:895 (1,3)
02:28:203 (1) - Remove the annoying whistle at sliderbody
03:03:280 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:33:280 (5,6) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi)
01:53:126 (6) - Remove the annoying whistle at sliderbody
01:58:203 (4) - Snap the tail slider at blue tick makes
02:35:818 (1) - While your custom spinner color is lavender-bright purple-pink, this possible blend with them. Do colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339372
03:08:818 (1) - ^
03:40:664 (1) - Arrange the shape slider like this to make perfect blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339374


[SkyDevil's Madness]
01:02:126 (4,5) - This object is touch the HP Bar
02:34:203 (3) - New combo for 0,5x slider
02:57:280 (10) - Add clap


Once you done all, forum PM me~
Topic Starter
BCI
fixed everything, wait to SkyDevil ^w^
Shizuroh
''I will do it as fast as i can''

fast enough? :3

Leorda wrote:

[SkyDevil's Madness]
01:02:126 (4,5) - This object is touch the HP Bar ~kay
02:34:203 (3) - New combo for 0,5x slider ~kay
02:57:280 (10) - Add clap ~kay

Once you done all, forum PM me~ ~what will happen o3o
./curiosity

http://puu.sh/AG6o
Topic Starter
BCI

SkyDevil wrote:

what will happen o3o
maybe a bubble \:D/

thank you, that's so fast \:D/ updated!
Leorda
"Hm? I never seen that Gakupo's mansion in Japan. That mansion might be appear when her husband are dead" <- just kidding

Bubbled
Shizuroh
yay :D this was my first GD i made and will also be the first GD of me that can get ranked :D
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
very well made

[Normal]
looks ok

[Hard]
02:30:049 (1) - I'm very sorry to have to be the one to tell you this but this kind of slider violates the current ranking criteria: "Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed."
02:35:818 (1) - it might not be advisable to put a note so soon after the end of a spinner given that some players may need to possibly stop spinning early in order to hit this note, which may be detrimental to their playing experience by causing frustration.
03:34:203 (3) - unfortunately this is another example of sliders that violate that particular ranking criterion

[Skydevil]
00:56:126 (1) - I think maybe it might be better to perhaps end this one full white tick earlier and put another note here in order to avoid the difficulty I mentioned on Hard in which the player might have to stop spinning early in order to hit a note or miss it and become frustrated, which would make their playing experience of your map worse?
01:18:049 (1) - this note and the others like it, it might be better if you ended the sliders on the blue ticks rather than the white ones because there is a very strong component of the melody that falls on the blue tick whereas there is not such a strong beat on the white tick you are currently ending it on
Shizuroh

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Skydevil]
00:56:126 (1) - I think maybe it might be better to perhaps end this one full white tick earlier and put another note here in order to avoid the difficulty I mentioned on Hard in which the player might have to stop spinning early in order to hit a note or miss it and become frustrated, which would make their playing experience of your map worse? ~I'm not sure,,, the slider will be VERY short then DX but you're really pro so i don't know what to do DX I hpoe its a suggestion DX
01:18:049 (1) - this note and the others like it, it might be better if you ended the sliders on the blue ticks rather than the white ones because there is a very strong component of the melody that falls on the blue tick whereas there is not such a strong beat on the white tick you are currently ending it on ~ oh i really haven't noticed that o3o Fixed~
http://puu.sh/BMBo

EDIT: ./starts running through your profile because i thought you were gone ./sees chatlogs me: LETS READ--- ./10 min later\. Those chatlogs about saturos are @_@
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BCI
thanks Leorda for my first but short bubble \:D/
thank you Saturos ewe fixed and updated!
Yuukari-Banteki
[Hard]
Looks good

[SkyDevil]
I still don't like the spinner-note combinations but I see your comment on them and it makes sense. If you're interested, a fairly good way of finding out what parts of your map are unintuitive or frustrating to players is to have a friend that gets A's and B's on maps of a similar difficulty level and spectate them while they play your map. The things they consistently mess up on will be the ones that are unintuitive or out-of-line. :) This works for all difficulty levels and I use it on my Easies frequently.

Edit: derp forgot to rebubble the first time
Shizuroh

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
Looks good

[SkyDevil]
I still don't like the spinner-note combinations but I see your comment on them and it makes sense. If you're interested, a fairly good way of finding out what parts of your map are unintuitive or frustrating to players is to have a friend that gets A's and B's on maps of a similar difficulty level and spectate them while they play your map. The things they consistently mess up on will be the ones that are unintuitive or out-of-line. :) This works for all difficulty levels and I use it on my Easies frequently. ~ah okay :D I will ask some people in the afternoon XD

Edit: derp forgot to rebubble the first time
yay rebubble thanks :3
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