1. Love (4.86 stars, 570 notes)
2. Normal (2.95 stars, 273 notes)

Patchouli wrote:

Let's go!!!

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

request from my queue

[General]

●lead-inは2500がいいかなっと思いました　始まるのが長い気がしたので SB注意のやつ用にで長くしてあるんですが、あれって消えるの遅いですね ><; ちょうどサークルに被るのでどうしようか迷い中。 SB注意の消したら2500でも良いかも。とりあえずこのままいってみます。

[Normal]

●00:33:322 (5,1) - これに変えてみてはどうですか　このほうが簡単になりますし　http://puu.sh/c9sD ok~ change it
●00:39:615 (2) - 曲げてみてはどうでしょうか　なんかキレイに見えるのはきのせいでしょうか　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/211079 ^
●02:29:965 (1,2,3,4,1) - これはちょっと難しいと感じます　なので(3,4,5)を繰り返しのスライダーを使ってみてはどうですか　配置は(2)の左ななめ上がいいかと思います。http://puu.sh/c9vA 　とりあえず今のままで行きたいです！ 注意多いようなら使わせていただきます。
●03:48:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - これはきついと感じます。変えることって出来ますか？ 注意覚悟でここだけ難しめにしています。><! ここも他の人次第で変更するかもです。
●04:03:951 (x) - Add circle?　おわりはこれでいいかと 　ごめんなさい、no change><

[LOVE]

●どうでもいいんですが、難易度名を Love にしてみてはどうでしょうかｗ　ましろのSymphonic Loveの最高難易度が Loveとなってるんでｗ ok~. 最初だけ大文字の方が違和感なくなりますね
●00:43:392 (5) - ここにニューコンボ追加　そして　00:43:601 (1) - このニューコンボを削除 fixed
●01:59:755 (1) - これ大丈夫なんですかね　ちょっとわかりませんが 　私もわかりません！なのでとりあえずこのまま
●04:03:951 (x) - Add circle?　おわりはこれでいいかと ごめんなさい、no change><

Good map!!!!!!

こんだけです　

kudos今ないんで　もらったら☆としてなげます

1. 00:53:881 (3,4) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214727
   

   252,332,53881,1,2
   316,260,54301,1,0

2. 01:52:622 - Add a note? And like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214730
   

   112,176,112622,1,0
   176,104,113042,5,0

3. 02:47:588 (3,4) - I think it's better~ (white-blue-red-white lines) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214732
4. 03:48:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Too hard... Maybe remove 03:49:895 (4) & 03:50:315 (6)

1. 00:23:252 (1) - Maybe use 1/8?
2. 00:46:748 (3) - Reverse? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214734
3. 00:47:168 (4) - ^
4. 00:56:399 (3) - Stack on 00:55:979 (1)?
5. 01:23:042 (2) - 2 Grid up
6. 01:33:741 (4,5) - first Slow..then fast..lol......It's strange>3<
7. 02:45:175 (1) - To 02:46:329? And add a note at 02:46:748 I really think it's better~
8. 02:59:755 (2) - Wow...
9. 03:53:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like these...Maybe change to this? Too long..So I photo twice...:33
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214738
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214739
   

   304,248,234511,5,0
   368,200,234720,1,2
   296,164,234930,1,0
   228,224,235140,5,2
   164,176,235350,1,0
   228,128,235560,1,2
   296,164,235769,5,0
   360,116,235979,1,2
   312,52,236189,1,0

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~
From my queue~

What a awesome SB...

[Normal]

1. 00:53:881 (3,4) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214727 good. change it
   

   252,332,53881,1,2
   316,260,54301,1,0

2. 01:52:622 - Add a note? And like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214730 sorry , no ><. this is international. because it excites the after( 01:55:979 (1) ~ )
   

   112,176,112622,1,0
   176,104,113042,5,0

3. 02:47:588 (3,4) - I think it's better~ (white-blue-red-white lines) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214732 sorry, no change ><;
4. 03:48:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Too hard... Maybe remove 03:49:895 (4) & 03:50:315 (6) I know.. but i like this. I hear the opinion of other people

[Love]

1. 00:23:252 (1) - Maybe use 1/8? sorry, no change
2. 00:46:748 (3) - Reverse? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214734 good. change it
3. 00:47:168 (4) - ^ ^
4. 00:56:399 (3) - Stack on 00:55:979 (1)? no .this is international. and Pattern has changed little
5. 01:23:042 (2) - 2 Grid up fixed
6. 01:33:741 (4,5) - first Slow..then fast..lol......It's strange>3< really>3<? I hear the opinion of other people
7. 02:45:175 (1) - To 02:46:329? And add a note at 02:46:748 I really think it's better~ ok~ change it
8. 02:59:755 (2) - Wow... wow.. bad?
9. 03:53:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like these...Maybe change to this? Too long..So I photo twice...:33 good. change it
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214738
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/214739
   

   304,248,234511,5,0
   368,200,234720,1,2
   296,164,234930,1,0
   228,224,235140,5,2
   164,176,235350,1,0
   228,128,235560,1,2
   296,164,235769,5,0
   360,116,235979,1,2
   312,52,236189,1,0

That's all~
Nice map STAR~

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[General]
I think your offset might be wrong. I was getting consistent late hits. Try 612 ms and see what you think. Please wait for a change. because I have a bit early this offset I want to hear the opinion of other people

[Normal]
Remove timing points: 01:33:741, 02:16:539, 03:01:853 fixed

[Love]
01:06:066 (1) - New combo, since you have the BPM change? ok. fixed
01:33:758 (1) - ^ Although this wouldn't look as nice if you changed it. NC 01:34:161
02:16:556 (8) - ^ fixed
02:48:496 (6) - ^ ^
Remove timing point: 03:36:574 ^

Nice, have a star. <3

winber1 wrote:

Love

00:18:427 (4,5,6,1) - lol this is just annoying me cuz the shape is a little off. http://puu.sh/dP9V thanks~ change it

SPOILER

If you want to try it out you can use the codes below.
Use

348,176,17378,6,0,B|404:176,2,40,4|0|0
308,108,17797,2,0,B|332:76,2,40,4|0|0
232,84,18217,1,4
158,111,18427,1,4
112,176,18636,1,4
124,256,18846,1,4
180,312,19056,6,0,B|180:364,7,40,4|0|0|0|0|0|0|0

to replace:

348,176,17378,6,0,B|404:176,2,40,4|0|0
308,108,17797,2,0,B|332:76,2,40,4|0|0
232,84,18217,1,4
156,104,18427,1,4
100,160,18636,1,4
100,240,18846,1,4
160,292,19056,6,0,B|160:344,7,40,4|0|0|0|0|0|0|0

00:30:699 - add note? ok. fixed
00:34:056 - ^ ^
00:46:329 (2,3,4,5,6) - why not center around y-axis? no change ><
01:08:671 (4) - move note to 01:08:776 to follow vocals more sorry, this note to follow bgm
01:20:595 (6) - why is this snapped to a purple tick? ._. move to 01:20:629. Also, fix the spacing after if you want since it is a little off. lol mistake. ><; thanks
01:24:091 (8) - it's just easier to read, and imo also fits better if you did something like http://puu.sh/dPcr change pattern
01:59:755 (1) - i am a little hesitant to do something like this. it may be better to not completely stack the notes so that the player can read the slider. i see. change it
02:32:483 (3,4) - something like this fits better http://puu.sh/dPey nice idea. change it
02:35:839 (6) - this slider doesn't really fit since the song is playing blue ticks right now... ( it would have fit in places like 01:51:364 (5) >_> ) i think it's fit bgm
02:48:479 (1) - this slider is really pointless imo. It also makes the break star in a weird place. i would delete it I hear the opinion of other people
03:33:741 (1,2,3,4) - move this combo up a bit so combo 4 is in the center fixed
03:34:581 (5,6) - these sliders should be using 1/8 ticks, not 1/6. fixed~
03:36:678 (7) - new combo? sorry, no change

Normal

AR +2? THe AR is really slow right now for a Normal imo. It also makes it easier to read with a fast AR. AR +1

01:31:224 (1,2) - having these two the same length as 01:32:902 (3) - just isnt' a good thing imo, even if the notes are obviuosly squiggly. sorry, no change ><
02:29:965 (1,2,3) - stuff like this is a little confusing for beginners. just something to reconsider. ok.. change it
03:36:678 (4) - new combo sorry, no change
03:48:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - may you could replace some notes with sliders :/, i just don't like having all these consecutives in thsi diff. ok... change it

sorry for late mod. good luck~

• 
  Lead-in3秒は少し長いかも･･･

• 01:27:028 (5) - 右側に斜め45度にしてみては?
  02:02:483 (6) - 少し縦のラインが(5)とあっていないのが気になります
  03:50:525 (1) - むむむ、ここのWhistleの音が気になりました、Finishを使ってみるとか?

• 01:08:881 (5,1,2) - Whistleの使い方に違和感を感じました、多分この音はパンチが強いからだと思います。この使い方をしたいならClapの様な音ではなく、別の音を使うなら違和感がなくなるかもしれません
  02:19:685 (5,1,2,1,2) - ^
  02:33:112 (5,1,2,3) - ^
  02:48:479 (1) - 白チックで始めた方がいいかと
  02:59:755 (2) - プレイしていて楽しいスライダーですがunrankableなはずです、MATとも確認しました
  03:34:581 (5) - NC?
  03:50:525 (1) - WhistleではなくFinishを使うとか?

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
Mod request from my queue
何か質問があればPMお願いします。
全て提案です

Overall

• 
  Lead-in3秒は少し長いかも･･･ ok. 2.5秒に変更

Normal

• 01:27:028 (5) - 右側に斜め45度にしてみては? fixed~
  02:02:483 (6) - 少し縦のラインが(5)とあっていないのが気になります 少し右に移動しました！形はちょっと思いつかないのでとりあえずこのままで～
  03:50:525 (1) - むむむ、ここのWhistleの音が気になりました、Finishを使ってみるとか? すいません。no change ><

Love

• 01:08:881 (5,1,2) - Whistleの使い方に違和感を感じました、多分この音はパンチが強いからだと思います。この使い方をしたいならClapの様な音ではなく、別の音を使うなら違和感がなくなるかもしれません パターンを変えました！
  02:19:685 (5,1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
  02:33:112 (5,1,2,3) - ^ ^
  02:48:479 (1) - 白チックで始めた方がいいかと fixed!
  02:59:755 (2) - プレイしていて楽しいスライダーですがunrankableなはずです、MATとも確認しました 確認までしていただいてありがとうございます ><! 薄々感じておりました 修正
  03:34:581 (5) - NC? fixed
  03:50:525 (1) - WhistleではなくFinishを使うとか? すいません。no change ><

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