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K-S-O 2008-11-29T06:37:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, March 21, 2009 at 10:31:38 AM

Artist: Jeb Million
Title: The Paradise Line
BPM: 129.97
Filesize: 8647kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:

Canary (0.66 stars, 124 notes)
Ellay (4.92 stars, 420 notes)
Merrysville (1.88 stars, 176 notes)

Download: Jeb Million - The Paradise Line
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This song is a remix of the train-riding theme from the original Mother game, also known as Earthbound Zero to the fan community. This song was mixed by the original composers with added vocals and was released by Nintendo during the game's Japanese launch.

Last edited by K-S-O 2009-03-21T17:32:27+00:00, edited 31 times in total.

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K-S-O 2008-11-30T01:27:53+00:00

I appreciate the attention given to Snow Man but I would like some modding for this map.

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James 2008-11-30T06:47:15+00:00

try 129.96 and 400 hope it works

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K-S-O 2008-12-05T22:31:35+00:00

Not bad at all. I do like how the timing section is right at the beginning of the song.

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awp 2008-12-08T19:36:52+00:00

SUPER NAZI

[Canary]
02:09:67 (2) - this note needs to be about 1 grid snap at the precise level farther from the slider tail in order to be consistent.

[Ellay]
00:44:72 (1) - People're probably going to complain that this note isn't far enough away from the end of the last combo. I'm cool with it, but in case you think it'll be a problem for other people and want to pre-empt it.
00:57:41 (8) - This one's too close also.
02:39:21 (1) - Move this slightly so it's not over/underlapping the tail from the previous 4 slider

[Merrysville]
Circles feel too large for me. Everything's all overlappy.

Other comments: dunno how STRONG RED BACKGROUND feels with red notes. It's faded to make it playable, but eh =\
Also, this song could really use some claps, I think.

I think the BPM's a tad slow. Try 129.968 instead. Yeah, it's +0.008. I said it was a tad slow.

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K-S-O 2009-01-09T23:20:34+00:00

I made the changes you suggested, except for the claps suggestion. I will try that later.

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-01-09T23:57:09+00:00

[Canary]
00:26:25 (1) - spacing is very tight here, move the slider farther away
00:47:95 (1) - spacing tight
01:32:73 (1) - and again
01:54:42 (1) - and again

[Merrysville]
01:44:73 (4) - note is hidden under previous slider

[Ellay]
00:33:17 (1,2) - spacing WAY too close
00:34:33 (1) - ditto
00:44:72 (1) - ditto
00:50:49 (1) - ditto
00:55:10 (1) - ditto
00:57:41 (8,1) - these are spaced wider but still too close
01:00:18 (1) - spacing too close
01:15:88 (5,8) - ditto
01:34:80 (1) - ditto

nice job with hitsounds but watch out for that spacing x_X

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Mogsy 2009-02-07T07:07:32+00:00

Canary:
-Some parts of this lack hitsounds where I think they'd be appropriate. (02:28:128 - 02:41:054, especially)
-Shouldn't there be a break after 01:25:343?

Merrysville:
-Hitsounds again. (like the beginning)
-Shouldn't there be a break after 01:25:343?

Ellay:
-00:26:94 (3) - Line up the starting point with 1.

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K-S-O 2009-02-22T18:45:20+00:00

Now with more clapping.

That took me long enough.

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Mogsy 2009-03-04T21:07:07+00:00

Time well spent; here, have a bubble.

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Gens 2009-03-09T20:01:53+00:00

SUPER NAZI (btw I use grid level 3)

[Canary]
00:41:02 (1,2,3) - These 3 Beats look irregular (too far) compared to 00:42:87 (4,5,6).
00:47:95 (1,2) - 2 is abit far from 1.
01:03:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like the first suggestion

[Merrysville]
00:29:94 (1,2,3) - These are too close compared to 00:22:56 (1,2,3)
00:33:17 (1,2) - ^
01:23:73 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:29:03 (1,2,3) - Spacing is irregular (3 is too close compared to 1,2)
02:08:04 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (4 is too close compared to 1,2,3)
03:12:91 (2,3,4) - (4 is too close)

[Ellay]
Nah If I nazi this it wouldn't be so notable so bah.

Of course, the beatmap is pretty-well made. Starring!
~~btw, have you ever considered lowering abit the volume of the Beats? I personally don't like the beat volume at max :<~~ ~~Nah the mp3 is abit high of volume so it doesn't really matters~~ or maybe it DOES matters. but ah w/e.

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K-S-O 2009-03-15T05:30:53+00:00

So, spacing issues that were overlooked. Those are easy enough to fix, which I did.

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RemmyX25 2009-03-21T17:32:27+00:00

Man, I hate to do nazi mod, but I gotta....

Merrysville:
00:24:86 (7,8) - These two feel unaligned ever so slightly but noticable by my OCD
00:26:94 (3) - Random suggestion - Maybe add another repeat to this slider?

Ellay:
Woah hit circles are tiny.

Not comfortable ranking this myself, but maybe another BAT could throw his/her two cents in? It has my support.

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K-S-O 2009-03-21T17:37:34+00:00

Strange. I don't remember making the circles that small.

Well I fixed the issues you brought up. If there are more, I'll be glad to fix them.

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Kharl 2009-03-24T17:57:22+00:00

Looks fine for me. Alright then...

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