1. Easy (3.06 stars, 194 notes)
2. Hard (4.92 stars, 315 notes)
3. Normal (3.72 stars, 226 notes)

itankn wrote:

On the whole

you don't have hitsounds

the Easy and Normal's rhythm is too similarity


Easy and Normal
01:54:132 the break is too long will add something in soon


Normal
00:56:542 This kind of sliders are not very good I wasn't sure about these but i will change them now
01:52:430 it's not necessary to have a new combo fixed
02:19:696 maybe you can put the note 7 to other place fixed


Hard
00:35:610 You can add some notesyeh i knew about this i just had nothing there because what i had before sucked

nold_1702 wrote:

First of all,BPM=175 not 175.03,You must change it.
offset:283 fixed

Edit:Ahh...Won't make a GD for you...
Your map is the way need many improvements.

Therefore,I would like to give some advice to you.

In hard,you don't need to follow the same distance in the whole map.
That's just...I don't want to say this word.

Also,the spacing in [Hard] is just too urgent.That's not pretty.
On the other hand,there's no hitsound. I will fix this later.


In [Normal], I don't know why you use small Cicle Size,
and the rhythm is just...not good.
Thirdly,the same problem,you must add some hitsound in it. Circle size is normal not small.

[Easy] is too hard for a easy map.
I suggest you CZ +1. Sorry im a bit of a noob whats CZ?

overall,you must have a diff under 3.0 stars ,otherwise,you can't get a rank.
3.6 stars = not allowed
Must be under 3.0

I hope you could improve more your mapping skills.

Or map again when you 're good enough in playing osu! mode.
Thanks for the help im still trying to improve my mapping.

---Assault[K]--- wrote:

This song kind of caught my attention, but i'm lazy to mod so here's a little something.
Change artist to just S3RL, i mean thats what Takuya did for pika girl.
also Song title: T-T-Techno feat. Jesskah ??? Thanks both fixed

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Heey I found this little guy floating around:

Dj S3RL - T-T-Techno Feat. jesskah
=> Uploaded on 20th of Feb.

This map was updated 19th of Feb.. Appears you've made an error while changing the Artist/title.

To change the title of this song, you will need to do the following:
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

At the moment, theres just 2 copies xD

Also Jesskah with a captial J

W h i t e wrote:

where is the song;;?

I can't mod this, when you fix it, I modding this song

• 
  konachan.com - 126102.jpg and 125490.jpg exceed the limit of size(1024*768). Please crop them.
  
  [Hard] has different preview time. Set same one.
  
  Speaking of countdown speed, one is half on [Hard] but others are normal on rest diffs. Set same one.
  
  Set combo colors on [Easy] and [Normal] as well as [Hard].
  
  I recommend you to add KIAI on [Easy] and [Normal] too.

• 
  Some patterns are same as normal ones...please use original pattern...

1. 00:30:454 (1,2) - Don't overlap the slider on easiest diff.
2. 00:51:025 (1) - Newbie cannot read the number of repeat. Change the pattern like below.
   
3. 00:53:424 (5,1) - The spacing is too wide. Place (1) again with grid level 2 or smaller one.
4. 01:02:339 (6) - Same as 00:51:025 (1).
5. 01:24:281 (4) - Unsnapped note.
6. 01:25:654 (2,3) - Don't overlap.
7. 01:45:197 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing.
8. 01:52:740 (1) - Remove new combo.
9. 01:53:425 (3,2) - Don't overlap.
   Same suggestions as above in rest time of copy&paste'd patterns.

• 
  OD is higher than hard's one? Set OD4.
  And circle size is larger than hard's one too?...it's not recommended though...

1. 00:22:226 (6,7) - Normal-player cannot read this overlapping. Put (7) on not overlapping place.
2. 00:24:968 (1) - Place it at x:160 y:160 to make the spacing of (1,2,3,4) be consistent.
3. 00:30:454 (1,2,3,4) - Don't overlap sliders with each other. It's too confusing pattern as normal diff.
4. 00:38:681 (5) - Unsnapped note.
5. 01:15:369 (3) - This shape is too confusing for normal-player.
   Same suggestions as above in rest time of copy&paste'd patterns.

• 
  OD5 is low as hardest diff. At least set OD6. (though I recommend OD7 since you use HP7 and AR7)

1. 00:42:111 (1) - This note doesn't follow the music correctly. Remove a repeat and extend it to 00:42:454.
2. 00:42:797 (1) - It's better not to stack it with the end of slider. And remove new combo.
3. 00:42:818 (T) - This green line is not snapped correctly.
4. 00:52:568 (1,2,3,4) - Not good idea to overlap these circles under slidertrack.
5. 00:54:110 (1) - Remove new combo.
6. 01:02:854 (1,2) - This pattern doesn't follow the music well. Try one below.
   
7. 01:04:769 (T) - This green line is not snapped correctly.
8. 01:14:339 (1) - It's hard to read because of overlapping. Please put it on not overlapping place or somewhere else.
9. 01:21:197 (12) - Add new combo because the spacing will change.
10. 01:34:911 (T) - This break is too long. I think you can map since 01:43:140.
11. 02:02:168 (7) - Oh, it shouldn't follow red line. Should follow white line here.
12. 02:17:253 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing. It's kinda confusing pattern.
13. 02:42:111 (1) - Same as above.
14. 02:49:311 (1) - Too neat from previous note.