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I'm sorry for this timing, it is terrible, I just couldn't take it anymore an hour in.

162.48 BPM/368 Offset
162.12/12,191
162.14/31,456
162.13/75,883
159.56/118,800
162.00/123,258
162.22/133,650
160.00/144,017
163.13/178,502
161.59/182,944
161.26/193,306
162.94/203,702
160.93/212,560

not sure (pth)
Too much slider! D:

Easy
Again, imo, way too much slider at the beginning, it really destroys the beginning there. I can see what you're trying to do, but, yeah, just way too much. Some of your timing seems to come off as sloppy and off in the later area of the song.

Also, this feels more a lower-level Normal map.

00:00:36 (1) - I don't like these sliders, period. But if they MUST stay, I think this should be shorted by 1/2 beat.
00:03:50 (2) - Moved 1/2 beat back (<- that way). Also, shortened or lengthened (probably lengthened) 1/2 beat.
00:09:78 (3) - Way too big a jump from (2), and timing needs to be adjusted as well. Work around the distance and timing (OR replace these sliders?)
00:26:25 (4) - Move a tad away from (5)
00:33:67 (8) - Same as above.
00:37:37 (3) - Possibly shorten by 1/2 beat.
00:38:11 (4) - Same as above.
00:49:21 (3) - Maybe lengthen 1/2.
00:51:80 (4) - Forward (This way ->) 1 beat. And then shorten 1 beat.
01:08:46 (5) - A bit away from (4)
01:20:32 (4) - Same.
01:24:76 (3) - Maybe lengthen 1/2. It kinda works as it is now, but I feel it sounds better lengthened.
01:36:97 (3) - Forward 1/2 beat, adjust spacing, and shorten by 1/2.
02:03:25 (12) - Spacing from (11) to this is a bit shorter than the rest of the combo. Easiest way to fix this without busting your brain and confusing people might be to replace this and (11) with a slider (maybe?).
02:08:81 (1) - The break after this... Please take it out and put it back in, for it doesn't stretch the whole length of where you need it.
02:37:70 (1) - Starting here... Scrap what I said before. I think. I believe you might have missed some of Dawn's timings? You need her timing section in, 160.00 BPM and Offset of 144,017. Resnap beats.
02:37:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - After the timing fix, move everything back 1/2 beat, and readjust spacing at (10).
02:44:36 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move back 1/4 beat. Also, I don't like the spacing between (4) and (5). Don't go Marisa on us, please and thanks.
02:50:26 (2) - Fix spacing.
02:52:89 (1,2,3,4) - I dunno. Something's up here with the timing.
03:00:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Back 1/2. Then fix spacing.
03:42:13 (1,2,3) - Something's with the timing here as well.
03:44:71 (6) - Fix spacing.

Hard
[insert something useful to say here]

Insane
Please fix...EVERYTHING. All those continuous beats don't seem to correspond with anything in the background very well, and most of what you have in general, I can't figure out what it's supposed to be sinced to.




Sorry. Comments were first, then went through with the fixes on Easy. I'm too tired to go through Hard right now, I'll get back to you.

An64fan wrote:

not sure (pth)
Too much slider! D:

Easy
Again, imo, way too much slider at the beginning, it really destroys the beginning there. I can see what you're trying to do, but, yeah, just way too much. Some of your timing seems to come off as sloppy and off in the later area of the song.

Also, this feels more a lower-level Normal map.

00:00:36 (1) - I don't like these sliders, period. But if they MUST stay, I think this should be shorted by 1/2 beat.
00:03:50 (2) - Moved 1/2 beat back (<- that way). Also, shortened or lengthened (probably lengthened) 1/2 beat.
00:09:78 (3) - Way too big a jump from (2), and timing needs to be adjusted as well. Work around the distance and timing (OR replace these sliders?)
00:26:25 (4) - Move a tad away from (5)
00:33:67 (8) - Same as above.
00:37:37 (3) - Possibly shorten by 1/2 beat.
00:38:11 (4) - Same as above.
00:49:21 (3) - Maybe lengthen 1/2.
00:51:80 (4) - Forward (This way ->) 1 beat. And then shorten 1 beat.
01:08:46 (5) - A bit away from (4)
01:20:32 (4) - Same.
01:24:76 (3) - Maybe lengthen 1/2. It kinda works as it is now, but I feel it sounds better lengthened.
01:36:97 (3) - Forward 1/2 beat, adjust spacing, and shorten by 1/2.
02:03:25 (12) - Spacing from (11) to this is a bit shorter than the rest of the combo. Easiest way to fix this without busting your brain and confusing people might be to replace this and (11) with a slider (maybe?).
02:08:81 (1) - The break after this... Please take it out and put it back in, for it doesn't stretch the whole length of where you need it.
02:37:70 (1) - Starting here... Scrap what I said before. I think. I believe you might have missed some of Dawn's timings? You need her timing section in, 160.00 BPM and Offset of 144,017. Resnap beats.
02:37:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - After the timing fix, move everything back 1/2 beat, and readjust spacing at (10).
02:44:36 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move back 1/4 beat. Also, I don't like the spacing between (4) and (5). Don't go Marisa on us, please and thanks.
02:50:26 (2) - Fix spacing.
02:52:89 (1,2,3,4) - I dunno. Something's up here with the timing.
03:00:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Back 1/2. Then fix spacing.
03:42:13 (1,2,3) - Something's with the timing here as well.
03:44:71 (6) - Fix spacing.

Hard
[insert something useful to say here]

Insane
Please fix...EVERYTHING. All those continuous beats don't seem to correspond with anything in the background very well, and most of what you have in general, I can't figure out what it's supposed to be sinced to.




Sorry. Comments were first, then went through with the fixes on Easy. I'm too tired to go through Hard right now, I'll get back to you.

i fix the timing section that i miss and resnapped and fix spacing and do you think i should just scrap insane

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