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eufonius - Yuki no Kaerimichi

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raxar
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Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
raxar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 16, 2011 at 8:05:31 AM

Artist: eufonius
Title: Yuki no Kaerimichi
Source: Bungaku Shoujo
Tags: eufonius yuki no kaerimichi
BPM: 148http://up.ppy.sh/
Filesize: 5385kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.47 stars, 433 notes)
  2. Normal (2.29 stars, 103 notes)
Download: eufonius - Yuki no Kaerimichi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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edit July 2011: I want to delete this..If anyone could, please delete it.
note: if you like the song, then please buy the CD from any legal site, support the artist/singer of this song. and for this beatmap, I used (IIRC) Nipponsei's mp3 release and change it to lower bitrate by using LAME.

My 1st Beatmap. Ready for mod :)

Special Thanks:
Arusha Shuna for many things(Mod,etc) :)
chamelepeace710 for mod(and star)
Nivalis for mod that tells me to erase the 142 BPM(sorry chamele, I just check the start of the song :( )
Senaya for mod :)
Ichigo-Sora for mod :)

22/12/2010 uploaded
23/12/2010 uploaded the version after following AiMod suggestion.
01/01/2011 new version, edited the easy and insane diff, delete normal diff.
04/01/2011 add chamelepeace710 mod, nivalis's mod(or maybe suggestion?)
08/01/2011 add Senaya's mod, change the easy to normal
14/01/2011 Add Ichigo-sora's mod, the normal first, the insane is only a little edited atm, will edit it more later >_<
edit: finished it except the general and checking for the red line :D
16/01/2011 an edit done and volume is lowered :D

for 03:41:945 until 03:45:188, the circles are ahead of the beat, but I think it's ok, just tell me if it's not good :)
and one more thing, Ichigo-Sora said t experiment with the hitsounds, but can't it stay like this? with only one hitsound, it's a little hard for me and I guess I'm too lazy to check it one by one :(
Last edited by raxar , edited 25 times in total.
djyellow22
72 posts
Joined July 2010
djyellow22
I like this beatmap, good job! ^^

It can have some work, like a normal and hard modes.. But, so far.. It's good!
raxar
38 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
raxar
thank you for the reply(and the star) djyellow :D, the beatmap is under editing now, since I forget to check it with AiMod :(
editing is done. redownload it to see the map after I followed AiMod suggestion.
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
Ooooh, this needs a lot of work....

Anyway....

By Mod Request:

General
I think the fade-in time should be more than the current one. Make it three seconds.
Wait, the bpm is wrong....

BPM: 148

And there are a bunch of tempo changes.....
Consult a BAT or MAT for that then pm me....

I might as well star for now
raxar
38 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
raxar

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Ooooh, this needs a lot of work.... yes it is :(

Anyway....

By Mod Request:

General
I think the fade-in time should be more than the current one. Make it three seconds. the fade-in time, the start I think? Okay, I made the start at 00:02:958 for easy, insane 00:02:949 ;D
Wait, the bpm is wrong....

BPM: 148 It's already 148 xD

And there are a bunch of tempo changes.....
Consult a BAT or MAT for that then pm me....

I might as well star for now
It looks like I picked up a troubling song for my 1st map, but nevertheless, thank you for the mod and the star :)
dNextGen
4,689 posts
Joined May 2010
dNextGen
derp herp furr durr drep derp
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya

raxar wrote:

It looks like I picked up a troubling song for my 1st map
yes you did :)

Well, the bpm seems to be right, but the notes placement on the timeline, especially in the insane, feels wrong too often.
Almost everything below are just suggestions that represent only my point of view.

[Easy]
Should be renamed to Normal. Not as easy as it looks.
00:34:479 (1) - move this to 00:34:580 ?
00:41:776 (2) - move this to 00:41:877 ?
00:54:418 (12) - maybe move this to 00:54:343 ?
01:00:830 (8) - move this to 01:00:729 ?
01:03:535 (2) - this should be a bit longer, till 01:05:188 , I think.
01:07:316 (5) - move this to 01:07:215 ?
01:07:722 (6) - move this to 01:07:620 ?
01:08:127 (7) - move this to 01:08:026 ?
01:08:499 (8) - make this shorter and add a hitcircle between it and 01:10:019 (9) ?
01:10:019 (9) - make this shorter so it will end at 01:10:829 ?
01:18:933 (6) - make this longer so it will end at 01:20:858 ?

[Insane]
There are 2 unsnapped notes.
As chamelepeace710 said, you have to find an experienced mod to help you with this.

Good luck ;)
raxar
38 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
raxar

senaya wrote:

raxar wrote:

It looks like I picked up a troubling song for my 1st map
yes you did :)

Well, the bpm seems to be right, but the notes placement on the timeline, especially in the insane, feels wrong too often.
Almost everything below are just suggestions that represent only my point of view.

[Easy]
Should be renamed to Normal. Not as easy as it looks.
00:34:479 (1) - move this to 00:34:580 ?
00:41:776 (2) - move this to 00:41:877 ?
00:54:418 (12) - maybe move this to 00:54:343 ?
01:00:830 (8) - move this to 01:00:729 ?
01:03:535 (2) - this should be a bit longer, till 01:05:188 , I think.
01:07:316 (5) - move this to 01:07:215 ?
01:07:722 (6) - move this to 01:07:620 ?
01:08:127 (7) - move this to 01:08:026 ?
01:08:499 (8) - make this shorter and add a hitcircle between it and 01:10:019 (9) ?
01:10:019 (9) - make this shorter so it will end at 01:10:829 ?
01:18:933 (6) - make this longer so it will end at 01:20:858 ?

[Insane]
There are 2 unsnapped notes.
As chamelepeace710 said, you have to find an experienced mod to help you with this.

Good luck ;)
All of easy's mod done, and for the insane all of notes have been snapped, thank you for the mod and the star :)

@dnextgen
thank you for the star 8-)
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Ichigo-Sora
[General]
- Add some hitsounds (clap, whistle, finish). Experiment and see what sounds nice ^^
- Hitsounds sound a bit loud (since the song is very quiet) D: Maybe lower them a bit?

[Normal]
  • 00:10:256 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm. Maybe change it to something think this? (You can make it have less repeats)
SPOILER

  • 00:24:749 (4) - Move to 00:24:647 or 00:24:850?
    01:06:810 (4) - New combo?
    01:08:533 (8) - Move to start at 01:08:431 and extend it to 01:09:242?
    01:13:296 (1) - Remove new combo
    01:15:729 (1) - End of slider is not snapped
    01:16:641 (2) - Move to 01:16:539
    01:17:654 (5) - Move to 01:17:553?
    01:18:972 (6) - New combo?
    01:21:404 (1) - Remove new combo?
[Insane]
- This difficulty need quite a bit of revision D:
- I really don't think you need multiple (red) timing sections. You might need to get someone to check ><
- A large number of the notes on blue ticks should actually be on white ticks. Try and go through the song to see what sounds right.

  • 00:10:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stream kinda feels out of place ><
    00:10:753 (7) - End of slider not snapped
    00:17:138 (1) - End + Middle of slider not snapped
    00:18:152 (2) - End of slider not snapped
    00:20:381 (6) - End + Middle of slider not snapped
    00:25:753 (5) - Move to 00:25:652?
    00:30:821 (4) - Middle note of slider is not snapped; Maybe start it at 00:30:922 (4), make the middle note at 00:31:327, and end it at 00:31:733?
    00:43:996 (5) - End of slider not snapped
    00:44:807 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Check spacing!
    00:51:496 (7) - End of slider not snapped
    01:11:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Check Spacing!
    01:35:077 (7) - New combo?
    02:36:978 (7) - End of slider is unsnapped
    03:27:451 (6,7) - Spacing
    03:42:046 (10) - New combo?
    03:43:667 (1) - Remove new combo?
Not bad for your first beatmap ^^ Keep working at it, and good luck (: Star~
raxar
38 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
raxar

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

[General]
- Add some hitsounds (clap, whistle, finish). Experiment and see what sounds nice ^^
- Hitsounds sound a bit loud (since the song is very quiet) D: Maybe lower them a bit?

I'll do this later, since it could take a long time :| and I forget how to lower the volume <_<

[Normal]
  • 00:10:256 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm. Maybe change it to something think this? (You can make it have less repeats)
SPOILER

  • 00:24:749 (4) - Move to 00:24:647 or 00:24:850?
    01:06:810 (4) - New combo?
    01:08:533 (8) - Move to start at 01:08:431 and extend it to 01:09:242?
    01:13:296 (1) - Remove new combo
    01:15:729 (1) - End of slider is not snapped
    01:16:641 (2) - Move to 01:16:539
    01:17:654 (5) - Move to 01:17:553?
    01:18:972 (6) - New combo?
    01:21:404 (1) - Remove new combo?
All of normal's mod done :D
/
[Insane]
- This difficulty need quite a bit of revision D:
- I really don't think you need multiple (red) timing sections. You might need to get someone to check >< I'll have someone check it after I done this, I'll ask jericho
- A large number of the notes on blue ticks should actually be on white ticks. Try and go through the song to see what sounds right.I revised the insane to match the white tick, I have done only a little though atm, I'll edit this insane again later <_< it's finished now :D

  • 00:10:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stream kinda feels out of place ><
    00:10:753 (7) - End of slider not snapped
    00:17:138 (1) - End + Middle of slider not snapped
    00:18:152 (2) - End of slider not snapped
    00:20:381 (6) - End + Middle of slider not snapped
    00:25:753 (5) - Move to 00:25:652?
    00:30:821 (4) - Middle note of slider is not snapped; Maybe start it at 00:30:922 (4), make the middle note at 00:31:327, and end it at 00:31:733?
    00:43:996 (5) - End of slider not snapped
    00:44:807 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Check spacing!
    00:51:496 (7) - End of slider not snapped
    01:11:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Check Spacing!
    01:35:077 (7) - New combo?
    02:36:978 (7) - End of slider is unsnapped
    03:27:451 (6,7) - Spacing
    03:42:046 (10) - New combo?
    03:43:667 (1) - Remove new combo?
I'll do the insane list later, sorry if I disappoint you >:( edit: finisheit :D

Not bad for your first beatmap ^^ Keep working at it, and good luck (: Star~ Thank you ;)
Things other than the [general] and the checking of red line is finished, and I repositioned the stream that is out of place, I hope it's good (:
but for 03:41:945 until 03:45:188, the circles are ahead of the beat, but I think it's ok, just tell me if it's not good :) I'll also add this to the 1st post so the others could notice it :D
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
As Ichigo-Sora said "Add some hitsounds (clap, whistle, finish). "

peaceful song melody~ :)

the bg.jpg should be 800X600~

del the .osb file(cuz this .osb file is useless)

Normal

00:06:202(x) - add a circle
00:16:742(x) - ^
00:17:147(1) - make slider end at 00:17:958
00:18:060(2) - del
00:18:262(3) - move to next white line(00:18:364)
00:19:073(4) - start at 00:19:174 and finish at 00:19:985
00:23:229(1) - whistle
00:24:039(3) - use a slider replace this circle(start at 00:24:039 finish at00:24:445)
00:24:850(4) - whistle
00:28:093(2) - ^
00:29:715(1) - ^
00:30:931(4) - move 1 grid up and 1 gird left(lv3)
00:36:202(1) - whistle
00:37:823(1) - add whistle at the beginning of slider
00:37:823(1) - Cut short this slider to 00:39:445

00:40:256(x) - add a circle
00:40:661(x) - ^
00:41:066(x) - ^(at the same time,add a whistle hitsound)
00:44:310(5) - add a whistle hitsound at the beginning
00:45:729(8) - move to next white line(00:45:931)
00:50:796(5) - whistle
00:50:796(5) - move 1 grid right(lv3)
00:51:202(6) - ^
00:51:404(x) - circle
00:51:506(7) - del
00:52:418(9) - whistle
00:53:026(10) - nc
00:53:026(10) - Cut short this slider to 00:53:837
00:54:141(11) - move to 00:54:039
00:54:343(12) - move to 00:54:647
00:56:370(2) - move to 00:56:269
00:56:776(3) - move to 00:56:674
00:59:107(7) - move to 01:00:323
01:03:566(2) - change the shape of slider
01:08:431(5) - ^

Insane
remember...
this is a peaceful song
some circle make me unsuitble
like 00:10:044~00:11:665
this section is full of circles,but it doesnt fit this tune

2nd (red) timing section is useless

preview point is different with Normal

this diff still needs a lot of work.... keep walking ;)

5 star (go on walking)
Zelos
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Joined May 2010
Zelos
Your offset seems correct.

also ichigo-sora dont know what he is talkin about, you used them because you wanted to change the volume it looks like.
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