1. Clicker (4.75 stars, 700 notes)
2. Dream (5 stars, 710 notes)
3. First (2.03 stars, 86 notes)

Famfrit wrote:

Omg, sorry, but when I download your map, osu! does not recognize it. Try re-upload. then - write to queue, I'lll help you

Famfrit wrote:

ok, to start

On your map - two main BPM:

First Timing: [00:00:00]
BPM: 160
Offset: 1950
Second Timing: [00:14:525]
BPM: 160
Offset: 14525

Now put everything in rhythm and write in queue or pm

Good luck and star to motivate ^.^

mold1702 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 31 October, 2010 at 20:31:54

Artist: OP
Title: Dream Star
Source: Skip Beat
Tags: The Generous
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3957kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.66 stars, 98 notes)
2. Hard (4.76 stars, 188 notes)
3. Monster Beater (4.86 stars, 837 notes)
4. Normal (4.3 stars, 173 notes)

Download: OP - Dream Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
-Please help me to download it and help me see what the beat map 's mistake should be fixed and tell it to me.(My English is poor- -)SORRY
-REDOING THE DIFF-MONSTER BEATER.
-Thanks for supporting or giving stars.
-Give me a star if you like it.

Sunny Holic wrote:

[Hard]
AR +2 tick
00:19:587 (6) - can't see that reverse sign. reduce 1 repeat and 00:19:962 - add a note
00:22:587 (6) - ^ and 00:22:962 - add a note
00:28:400 - add a note
00:27:837 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:212 (1) - ^
00:28:775 (1) - ^
00:29:150 (1) - ^
00:30:087 (1) - ^
00:30:462 (1) - ^
00:31:212 (1) - ^
00:31:775 (1) - ^
00:32:150 (1) - ^
The rest is omitted


use Tiny grid snap(ctrl+1) and distance snap, remap all diff

Lovely Crab wrote:

不好意思..我不觉得这是个已经足够优秀的MAP,我感觉不到有很好的节奏,特别是EASY.
而最高的难度非常得难以读懂你的排列.
我的建议是先学习下其他MAPPER的MAP,然后REMAP所有的难度,到时候可以PM我要求给一个RECHECK.

no kodu for this post

1. Use grid size 3, It will help you while mapping, The sixe you're using it's annoying and won't help you get nice spaced maps.
2. You mapped like 1/4 of the song, Finish mapping it or cut the mp3.
3. It would be nice if you get a 800x600 or 1024x7 BG.
4. Preview Time must be the same for all the diffs.

1. 00:12:075 (1) - Remove New Combo.
2. 00:13:575 (1) - ^
3. 00:13:575 (2) - Delete this circle and make it a slider (End of slider: 00:13:762).
4. 00:13:950 (2) - Delete this circle.
5. 00:16:212 (3) - I would suggest to place this somewhere else, This will be confusing for new players.
6. 00:19:212 (3) - ^
7. 00:20:712 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent, Fix spacing on (3) & the following (5).
8. 00:34:212 (2,3) - Suggestion: Unstack these circles.
9. 00:36:462 (2,3,4,5) - ^ , Stacks are difficult and confusing for beginners, That's why I'm asking you to unstack those.
10. ~
11. I see many spacing problems make sure you go through the map using distance snap and check everything is ok, ie:
12. 00:50:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
13. 00:54:837 (2,3,4,5).
14. ~
15. 01:22:400 (1) - Remove New Combo.
16. You used a lot of stacks, My suggestion is to unstack at least the hardest streams to make this difficult more readable and playable.
17. Also, Finish mapping it?

1. 00:03:075 (1) - Remove New Combo.
2. 00:06:075 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:075 (1) - ^
4. 00:10:575 (1) - ^
5. 00:12:075 (1) - ^
6. 00:58:212 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not readable at all, Please change this.
7. I'll have to say that this difficulty would be to messy for me, And some of the patterns are not easy to read, consider changing some like the one I pointed above.

1. 00:25:962 (1) - Remove New Combo.
2. 00:27:087 (1) - ^
3. 00:27:462 (1) - ^
4. 00:28:212 (3) - New Combo.
5. Make sure everything is correctly spaced.

Ok I'll save my star, You may call me after getting some mods (3-4 at least) so I'll re-check and prob. star it. Good Luck

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Use grid size 3, It will help you while mapping, The sixe you're using it's annoying and won't help you get nice spaced maps.
2. You mapped like 1/4 of the song, Finish mapping it or cut the mp3.
3. It would be nice if you get a 800x600 or 1024x7 BG.
4. Preview Time must be the same for all the diffs.

Easy

1. 00:12:075 (1) - Remove New Combo.
2. 00:13:575 (1) - ^
3. 00:13:575 (2) - Delete this circle and make it a slider (End of slider: 00:13:762).
4. 00:13:950 (2) - Delete this circle.
5. 00:16:212 (3) - I would suggest to place this somewhere else, This will be confusing for new players.
6. 00:19:212 (3) - ^
7. 00:20:712 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent, Fix spacing on (3) & the following (5).
8. 00:34:212 (2,3) - Suggestion: Unstack these circles.
9. 00:36:462 (2,3,4,5) - ^ , Stacks are difficult and confusing for beginners, That's why I'm asking you to unstack those.
10. ~
11. I see many spacing problems make sure you go through the map using distance snap and check everything is ok, ie:
12. 00:50:337 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
13. 00:54:837 (2,3,4,5).
14. ~
15. 01:22:400 (1) - Remove New Combo.
16. You used a lot of stacks, My suggestion is to unstack at least the hardest streams to make this difficult more readable and playable.
17. Also, Finish mapping it?

Normal

1. 00:03:075 (1) - Remove New Combo.
2. 00:06:075 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:075 (1) - ^
4. 00:10:575 (1) - ^
5. 00:12:075 (1) - ^
6. 00:58:212 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not readable at all, Please change this.
7. I'll have to say that this difficulty would be to messy for me, And some of the patterns are not easy to read, consider changing some like the one I pointed above.

Hard

1. 00:25:962 (1) - Remove New Combo.
2. 00:27:087 (1) - ^
3. 00:27:462 (1) - ^
4. 00:28:212 (3) - New Combo.
5. Make sure everything is correctly spaced.

Ok I'll save my star, You may call me after getting some mods (3-4 at least) so I'll re-check and prob. star it. Good Luck

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Shouldn't the artist be "the generous"? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_generous

Easy;

I don't think you should have a 2x section. Why don't you make the slider speed quicker, and keep it the same throughout? I'd suggest 0.80.
00:04:575 (4,1) - Spacing error.
00:07:575 (4,1) - ^
00:10:575 (4,1) - ^
00:12:075 (1,1) - Remove new combos.
00:14:525 - This timing section shouldn't be a non-inheriting one. Remember to resnap all notes after you delete it.
00:16:212 (3) - Don't have this slider completely overlap 1 like that.
00:16:212 (3,1) - Spacing.
00:19:212 (3) - Don't have this slider completely overlap 1 like that.
00:21:087 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:22:212 (5,1) - ^
00:31:587 (3,1) - ^

Stopped there, go through the map carefully and check for similar errors yourself.

Normal;

Loads of spacing errors. Check it yourself.

Hard;

Loads of spacing errors, and you should make the HP drain, Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate larger in the difficulty settings.

wmfchris wrote:

[SB]
*untitled22.jpg" does not exist

[Dream] *overuses of finish
0:06:637 (6) 1/2 forward(,,Not undersyand. MY English is poor)
0:55:012 (7,9,10,11) delete finish on (7,10,11) and finish on beginning of (9)(OK)
1:12:825 (1,3) stack (3)on ending of (1)(OK)
1:56:325 (10) new combo(OK)
2:02:325 (10) ^(OK)
2:43:574 (6)no whistle, finish(OK)
need 2X warning(OK)
so many spacing error so I won't list them here, check with AI mod.

[hard]
3:19:212 (1,3) (1) starts 1/2 laters (cut it shorter), (3)move backward to white tick(Not understand)
3:21:274 (1~5,1~5) 1)Stack properly 2) (1)is extremely weirdOK
^ there should be more like this, edit them all
3:46:962 (1~7) make it symmetrical


-Check AI mod.
-Open distance spaciong and grid level 3 to resnap all

star

wmfchris wrote:

[dream]
0:06:637 (6) 1/2 forward 向前半拍

[hard]
3:19:212 (1,3) (1) starts 1/2 laters (cut it shorter), (3)move backward to white tick(Not understand)
(1) 遲半拍開始(cut左半個slider)，(3)後移 (1/3拍？ 時間放唔岩位