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BPM: 130
Offest: 3,900
Offest: 3,900
Topic Starter
I have fixed it o.o Sry I couldn't get to it b4... I lost the song because my computer wiped out a bit x.x
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Topic Starter
Well I fixed the spacings and everything...
I added hard that uses 1/4 beat snaps
One thing I can't change is the Artist... Says I already have 2 beatmaps out...
Wait nvm I got it xD
I added hard that uses 1/4 beat snaps
Wait nvm I got it xD
Boom Clap Boom Boom Clap~
Miss you.
Miss you.
Topic Starter
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Good job ~
Volume was a little bit high for me in all 3 diffs,turn them down?
[EASY]
overall diff will be better at lv.3 or 4~
00:31:59(1)-clap?
00:40:83(1,1,1)-^
00:47:98(1,2,3)-^
00:51:67(3)-end here 00:54:44?
[NORMAL]
00:31:59(1,2,3,4,5)-clap?
01:10:36(8)-new combo here?
01:18:67(2,3,4,5,6,7)-make them more suit for the music, for example the pic shows.
[HARD]
overall diff will be better at lv.7 or 8~ 9 is a little unplayable.
Distance snap is 0.8x for now,1.0x or 1.1x will be better.
00:11:10(5,6)-spacing?
11:18:65(1)-end here 00:18:90?
00:22:60(1,2,3)-no clap?
00:31:59(1,2,3,4,5)-clap?
00:55:94(2,3,4)-replace by silder,end here 00:56:30?
01:11:32(2,3,4,5)-replace by silder,end here 01:03:67?
01:06:67(1)-slider start here 01:07:13 and add a circle here?
01:05:21(x)-break was a little bit long here ,add notes till 01:20:98 like normal do?
Star~
Sorry I forgot the pic.
Here is.
Volume was a little bit high for me in all 3 diffs,turn them down?
[EASY]
overall diff will be better at lv.3 or 4~
00:31:59(1)-clap?
00:40:83(1,1,1)-^
00:47:98(1,2,3)-^
00:51:67(3)-end here 00:54:44?
[NORMAL]
00:31:59(1,2,3,4,5)-clap?
01:10:36(8)-new combo here?
01:18:67(2,3,4,5,6,7)-make them more suit for the music, for example the pic shows.
[HARD]
overall diff will be better at lv.7 or 8~ 9 is a little unplayable.
Distance snap is 0.8x for now,1.0x or 1.1x will be better.
00:11:10(5,6)-spacing?
11:18:65(1)-end here 00:18:90?
00:22:60(1,2,3)-no clap?
00:31:59(1,2,3,4,5)-clap?
00:55:94(2,3,4)-replace by silder,end here 00:56:30?
01:11:32(2,3,4,5)-replace by silder,end here 01:03:67?
01:06:67(1)-slider start here 01:07:13 and add a circle here?
01:05:21(x)-break was a little bit long here ,add notes till 01:20:98 like normal do?
Star~
Sorry I forgot the pic.
Here is.
[Overall]
You used too many kiai times lol Kiai time can be used 1 time per 1 minute.......
[Easy]
13:82 (Break) - Redo this break!
[Normal]
13:82 (Break) - Redo this break!
01:18:66 (1) ~ 01:21:20 (1) - New combos are overused.
[Hard]
01:15:66 ( ) - Add a circle on here!
Nice soccer ball~
Star for you
You used too many kiai times lol Kiai time can be used 1 time per 1 minute.......
[Easy]
13:82 (Break) - Redo this break!
[Normal]
13:82 (Break) - Redo this break!
01:18:66 (1) ~ 01:21:20 (1) - New combos are overused.
[Hard]
01:15:66 ( ) - Add a circle on here!
Nice soccer ball~
Star for you
Try slider tick rate 2.
[Easy]
00:03:89 (1) - Finish.
00:12:89 (2) - Whistle.
00:13:36 (3) - Clap.
00:13:59 (4) - Finish.
00:25:82 (1) - Whistle.
00:26:51 (3) - Clap or finish.
00:31:59 (1) - Slider should end here 00:32:515.
00:40:82 (3) - New combo.
00:40:82 (3) - Slider should end here 00:41:746.
00:42:66 (1) - Should end here 00:43:592.
00:44:51 (1) - End here 00:46:130.
00:49:82 (2) - End here 00:50:746.
[Normal]
00:26:28 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:27:43 (1,2) - ^
00:42:66 (1) - End here 00:43:592.
00:44:51 (1) - Here 00:46:130.
00:50:51 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:11:97 (6,7) - ^
01:14:97 (2,3) - Spacing.
[Hard]
All cool.
Star, nice map!
[Easy]
00:03:89 (1) - Finish.
00:12:89 (2) - Whistle.
00:13:36 (3) - Clap.
00:13:59 (4) - Finish.
00:25:82 (1) - Whistle.
00:26:51 (3) - Clap or finish.
00:31:59 (1) - Slider should end here 00:32:515.
00:40:82 (3) - New combo.
00:40:82 (3) - Slider should end here 00:41:746.
00:42:66 (1) - Should end here 00:43:592.
00:44:51 (1) - End here 00:46:130.
00:49:82 (2) - End here 00:50:746.
[Normal]
00:26:28 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:27:43 (1,2) - ^
00:42:66 (1) - End here 00:43:592.
00:44:51 (1) - Here 00:46:130.
00:50:51 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:11:97 (6,7) - ^
01:14:97 (2,3) - Spacing.
[Hard]
All cool.
Star, nice map!
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I think what Breeze means is, is that the soccer ball should look like it's rolling instead of sitting there sliding still like that.SenichiSeung wrote:
dynamic as in? Lol >.<
Easy~
00:31:59 (1) - Shorten 1/4 of a tick so it ends on the white tick.
Redo your second break. It'll shorten a lot.
Normal~
Redo your second break. It'll shorten a lot again.
00:51:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Remove SOME of the claps here. 11 claps in a row sound bad.
01:10:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Same here.
Hard~
00:03:89 (1) - Add a clap?
00:13:82 - Remove the break.
01:02:97 (1) through 01:13:82 (4) - Hit sounds please~
Topic Starter
Oh o.o I'mma work on it... Until then, thanks ^.^Mafiamaster wrote:
I think what Breeze means is, is that the soccer ball should look like it's rolling instead of sitting there sliding still like that.SenichiSeung wrote:
dynamic as in? Lol >.<
Easy~
00:31:59 (1) - Shorten 1/4 of a tick so it ends on the white tick.
Redo your second break. It'll shorten a lot.
Normal~
Redo your second break. It'll shorten a lot again.
00:51:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Remove SOME of the claps here. 11 claps in a row sound bad.
01:10:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Same here.
Hard~
00:03:89 (1) - Add a clap?
00:13:82 - Remove the break.
01:02:97 (1) through 01:13:82 (4) - Hit sounds please~
The only thing i found was that is that the sliders sounds better with 1 on the slider tick rate and that you need to make the slider at 00:42:669 1/4 shorter on normal
*star*
*star*
Always take the following as suggestions.
[Overall]
Make the soccer(or "football" to you non-americans) ball move at least. ;P (A cool effect I noticed is on the wiggly sliders(in [Hard]), you could make them all like that. ;d)
Even out the Kiai in all the difficulties. (Make them all the same.)
Even out tick rates too.
[Easy]
00:10:13 (1) - Lengthen by 1/2.
00:28:59 (Break) - Reinsert it.
00:31:59 (1) - Shorten by 1/4th and add a finish at the end.
00:33:43 (Wide Gap) - Add a break or something please.
00:51:66 (3) - Shorten by 1/2.
00:54:43 (x) - Add note if ^ is done.
00:54:66 (Small Gap) - Add something here. >_<
[Normal]
00:13:82 (Break) - Delete it and reinsert it.
00:28:59 (Break) - ^
00:46:36 (Wide Gap) - Do something here. >_<
00:54:20 (Wide Gap) - ^
[Hard]
00:13:82 (Break) - Badly placed.
01:07:13 (2) - How annoying.
[Al2e10's DIF]
Some of the jumps are mean. >_< But fine, I like jumps.
01:23:74 (4,5) - Don't sound so well, maybe add a spinner starting at (4)?
01:26:28 (3,4) - Remove these.
Well, decent map, I'll throw my small bit of support held in a star. ^,^
[Overall]
Make the soccer(or "football" to you non-americans) ball move at least. ;P (A cool effect I noticed is on the wiggly sliders(in [Hard]), you could make them all like that. ;d)
Even out the Kiai in all the difficulties. (Make them all the same.)
Even out tick rates too.
[Easy]
00:10:13 (1) - Lengthen by 1/2.
00:28:59 (Break) - Reinsert it.
00:31:59 (1) - Shorten by 1/4th and add a finish at the end.
00:33:43 (Wide Gap) - Add a break or something please.
00:51:66 (3) - Shorten by 1/2.
00:54:43 (x) - Add note if ^ is done.
00:54:66 (Small Gap) - Add something here. >_<
[Normal]
00:13:82 (Break) - Delete it and reinsert it.
00:28:59 (Break) - ^
00:46:36 (Wide Gap) - Do something here. >_<
00:54:20 (Wide Gap) - ^
[Hard]
00:13:82 (Break) - Badly placed.
01:07:13 (2) - How annoying.
[Al2e10's DIF]
Some of the jumps are mean. >_< But fine, I like jumps.
01:23:74 (4,5) - Don't sound so well, maybe add a spinner starting at (4)?
01:26:28 (3,4) - Remove these.
Well, decent map, I'll throw my small bit of support held in a star. ^,^
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit. I'll assume that this map is up to date.
Detailed Modding go!
Osz. File Check (Done)
[Easy] (Done)
[Normal] (Done)
[Hard] (Done)
[Al2e10's DIF] (Done)
Overall: This map is going to need some work. The breaks appear to be just thrown in while there should be some notes to fill in that blank space. But the song is only about a minute and a half so at least 2 breaks would be enough (if they can fit). Also, its possible to use different beats so you don't have to stick with the main beat. Sticking with one set of beats would get you stuck when it comes to mapping. Also, make sure to use the distance snap to save you trouble later on. I'll drop my star in then.
Detailed Modding go!
Osz. File Check (Done)
SPOILER
Video: No
SB (Story Board): Yes (The SB needs a lot of work.)
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 4.00 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)
SB (Story Board): Yes (The SB needs a lot of work.)
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 4.00 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)
[Easy] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 129.998 (Try changing it to 130.000) / 3,900 ms
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40 (Looks a bit fast for [Easy].)
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 70 ( 58 Circles / 10 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 119
[Current] Max Score: 116,326
[Current] Star Rating: 2.11
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.3
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
Note: You will have to go through the whole map and use the distance snap. Also, make sure to lower the slider velocity first. The errors posted below is mainly the layout issues.
00:06:43 (1,1) - With these two this close, it can cause confusion on when to hit the note.
00:13:82 (B) - This break seems to be wasting notes away. Try finding some places to add in some notes and then put in the break. I thought the next section is supposed to start at 00:18:66.
00:23:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - Streams like this could be replaced with sliders instead. at least 4 of the notes. You want to make this "easy".
00:28:59 (B) - This break feels kinda unneeded. Try looking into adding a note or two. Maybe a slider.
00:31:70 (1) - This slider stars 1/4 late. Move it 1/4 back and adjust the end point.
00:33:43 (B) - You can replace this break with a 3-note repeating slider.
00:38:97 (B) - For this one, you could redo this part around here. You can try adding in a spinner.
00:44:51 (1) - You could try making this a repeating slider since a one-way this long doesn't look too neat and it takes up enough space in the grid.
00:46:36 ~ 00:47:74 (?) - You could try adding in a note or two here. Even a repeating slider can work.
00:55:59 (1,1) - Not sure about the kiai use here...
01:02:51 (9,1) - ^
Notes: This difficulty is going to need some work. Try to avoid using breaks where it doesn't really need to be placed.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40 (Looks a bit fast for [Easy].)
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 70 ( 58 Circles / 10 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 119
[Current] Max Score: 116,326
[Current] Star Rating: 2.11
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.3
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
Note: You will have to go through the whole map and use the distance snap. Also, make sure to lower the slider velocity first. The errors posted below is mainly the layout issues.
00:06:43 (1,1) - With these two this close, it can cause confusion on when to hit the note.
00:13:82 (B) - This break seems to be wasting notes away. Try finding some places to add in some notes and then put in the break. I thought the next section is supposed to start at 00:18:66.
00:23:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - Streams like this could be replaced with sliders instead. at least 4 of the notes. You want to make this "easy".
00:28:59 (B) - This break feels kinda unneeded. Try looking into adding a note or two. Maybe a slider.
00:31:70 (1) - This slider stars 1/4 late. Move it 1/4 back and adjust the end point.
00:33:43 (B) - You can replace this break with a 3-note repeating slider.
00:38:97 (B) - For this one, you could redo this part around here. You can try adding in a spinner.
00:44:51 (1) - You could try making this a repeating slider since a one-way this long doesn't look too neat and it takes up enough space in the grid.
00:46:36 ~ 00:47:74 (?) - You could try adding in a note or two here. Even a repeating slider can work.
00:55:59 (1,1) - Not sure about the kiai use here...
01:02:51 (9,1) - ^
Notes: This difficulty is going to need some work. Try to avoid using breaks where it doesn't really need to be placed.
[Normal] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 129.998 (Try changing it to 130.000) / 3,900 ms
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 3 (Sounds really off with level 3. Try keeping it at 2.) / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 136 ( 126 Circles / 7 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 173
[Current] Max Score: 455,376
[Current] Star Rating: 3.23
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
Note: You will have to go through the whole map and use the distance snap. The errors posted below is mainly the layout issues.
00:13:82 (B) - This break seems to be wasting notes away. Try finding some places to add in some notes and then put in the break. I thought the next section is supposed to start at 00:18:66.
00:28:59 (B) - This break feels kinda unneeded. Try looking into adding a note or two. Maybe a slider.
00:38:97 (B) - For this one, you could redo this part around here. You can try adding in a spinner.
00:44:51 (1) - This silder could be redone a bit or the whole think. Maybe add a shorter [repeating] slider with a note or two.
00:46:59 (1) - The spinner sounds like it ends 1/2 too early.
00:47:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The streams goes compacted, then more spaced out then compacted again....
00:55:59 (1,1) - Not sure about the kiai use...
01:02:51 (9,1) - ^
01:16:36 ~ 01:17:97 (?) - Its just blank here...? Try to look into adding a note or two. Maybe a slider.
01:18:20 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why the single note combos? It doesn't seem like it is needed like this.
01:21:43 (B) - This break appears at an odd time, right in the middle of a set of beats and it also doesn't seem needed...
Notes: This difficulty is going to need plenty of work too.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 3 (Sounds really off with level 3. Try keeping it at 2.) / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 136 ( 126 Circles / 7 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 173
[Current] Max Score: 455,376
[Current] Star Rating: 3.23
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
Note: You will have to go through the whole map and use the distance snap. The errors posted below is mainly the layout issues.
00:13:82 (B) - This break seems to be wasting notes away. Try finding some places to add in some notes and then put in the break. I thought the next section is supposed to start at 00:18:66.
00:28:59 (B) - This break feels kinda unneeded. Try looking into adding a note or two. Maybe a slider.
00:38:97 (B) - For this one, you could redo this part around here. You can try adding in a spinner.
00:44:51 (1) - This silder could be redone a bit or the whole think. Maybe add a shorter [repeating] slider with a note or two.
00:46:59 (1) - The spinner sounds like it ends 1/2 too early.
00:47:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The streams goes compacted, then more spaced out then compacted again....
00:55:59 (1,1) - Not sure about the kiai use...
01:02:51 (9,1) - ^
01:16:36 ~ 01:17:97 (?) - Its just blank here...? Try to look into adding a note or two. Maybe a slider.
01:18:20 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why the single note combos? It doesn't seem like it is needed like this.
01:21:43 (B) - This break appears at an odd time, right in the middle of a set of beats and it also doesn't seem needed...
Notes: This difficulty is going to need plenty of work too.
[Hard] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 129.998 (Try changing it to 130.000) / 3,900 ms
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 3 (Sounds really off with level 3. Try keeping it at 2.) / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped (The distance snap could be a bit higher...)
[Current] Objects: 191 ( 177 Circles / 12 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 229
[Current] Max Score: 1,020,520
[Current] Star Rating: 4.71
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.9 (It feels a bit questionable to me, but as long as there is enough notes to support this level, then its fine.)
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
Note: You will have to go through the whole map and use the distance snap. The errors posted below is mainly the layout issues.
00:23:05 (B) - This break seems to be wasting notes away. Try finding some places to add in some notes.
00:36:90 (1,2,3) - Kinda doesn't make sense to me...... but if you add a note at 00:36:66, it should sound more reasonable.
00:38:97 (B) - Some hitnotes could replace this break.
00:43:59 ~ 00:44:28 (?) - Did you try checking to see if you can add in some notes here?
00:44:51 (1) - The spinner sounds like it ends 1/2 too early...
00:46:13 (B) - Not sure if a break could be here. Try looking for a possible places to put the notes.
00:47:97 ~ 01:08:51 (?) - Not sure out the kiai use around here. Make sure its reasonable so you don't overdo it with the fountains....
01:08:28 (6) - Sounds like there should be two notes, not three.
01:15:43 ~ 01:15:90 (?) - Sounds like its missing some notes...
01:16:59 (B) - A repeating slider could replace this break. Or maybe a few notes...
01:21:43 (B) - Weird place to put a break and its wasting space on the timeline. Also, its the end of the map so its really pointless...
01:26:05 (1) - The final note sounds more like two beats, not five.
Notes: This difficulty needs just as much work as well.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 3 (Sounds really off with level 3. Try keeping it at 2.) / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped (The distance snap could be a bit higher...)
[Current] Objects: 191 ( 177 Circles / 12 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 229
[Current] Max Score: 1,020,520
[Current] Star Rating: 4.71
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.9 (It feels a bit questionable to me, but as long as there is enough notes to support this level, then its fine.)
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
Note: You will have to go through the whole map and use the distance snap. The errors posted below is mainly the layout issues.
00:23:05 (B) - This break seems to be wasting notes away. Try finding some places to add in some notes.
00:36:90 (1,2,3) - Kinda doesn't make sense to me...... but if you add a note at 00:36:66, it should sound more reasonable.
00:38:97 (B) - Some hitnotes could replace this break.
00:43:59 ~ 00:44:28 (?) - Did you try checking to see if you can add in some notes here?
00:44:51 (1) - The spinner sounds like it ends 1/2 too early...
00:46:13 (B) - Not sure if a break could be here. Try looking for a possible places to put the notes.
00:47:97 ~ 01:08:51 (?) - Not sure out the kiai use around here. Make sure its reasonable so you don't overdo it with the fountains....
01:08:28 (6) - Sounds like there should be two notes, not three.
01:15:43 ~ 01:15:90 (?) - Sounds like its missing some notes...
01:16:59 (B) - A repeating slider could replace this break. Or maybe a few notes...
01:21:43 (B) - Weird place to put a break and its wasting space on the timeline. Also, its the end of the map so its really pointless...
01:26:05 (1) - The final note sounds more like two beats, not five.
Notes: This difficulty needs just as much work as well.
[Al2e10's DIF] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 129.998 (Try changing it to 130.000) / 3,900 ms
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.4 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 201 ( 184 Circles / 15 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 228
[Current] Max Score: 1,148,472
[Current] Star Rating: 4.76
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.9 (Might be a bit rough, but depends on how the notes are set.)
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:11:51 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos when its not really needed.
00:16:82 (1,1,1) - ^ (Also, with irregular spacing.)
00:17:51 ~ 00:17:97 (?) - Some notes could go here...
00:24:43 (1) - This could look more neat if it was lined up with 00:23:28 (2). Just a suggestion though.
00:24:43 (1,2) - Irregular spacing.
00:32:97 (1,2) - It kinda feels odd where these are because I thought the break would start here at least.
00:52:59 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - The diamond shape is off. Make sure this jump is evenly set.
00:59:51 (1) - Could remove the new combo from this.
01:07:13 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The line up doesn't look even.
01:16:59 (B) - There could be a way to add in some notes than to throw in another break...
01:18:66 (1) - Try removing the new combo from this note.
01:23:74 (4,5) - At the point where (4) is, I was thinking between either a slider or spinner to replace it and extended to at least 01:25:13.
01:26:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds like it should be just two notes than five...
Notes: This map would need some work too and make sure the jumps are carefully set as well.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.4 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 201 ( 184 Circles / 15 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 228
[Current] Max Score: 1,148,472
[Current] Star Rating: 4.76
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.9 (Might be a bit rough, but depends on how the notes are set.)
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:11:51 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos when its not really needed.
00:16:82 (1,1,1) - ^ (Also, with irregular spacing.)
00:17:51 ~ 00:17:97 (?) - Some notes could go here...
00:24:43 (1) - This could look more neat if it was lined up with 00:23:28 (2). Just a suggestion though.
00:24:43 (1,2) - Irregular spacing.
00:32:97 (1,2) - It kinda feels odd where these are because I thought the break would start here at least.
00:52:59 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - The diamond shape is off. Make sure this jump is evenly set.
00:59:51 (1) - Could remove the new combo from this.
01:07:13 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The line up doesn't look even.
01:16:59 (B) - There could be a way to add in some notes than to throw in another break...
01:18:66 (1) - Try removing the new combo from this note.
01:23:74 (4,5) - At the point where (4) is, I was thinking between either a slider or spinner to replace it and extended to at least 01:25:13.
01:26:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds like it should be just two notes than five...
Notes: This map would need some work too and make sure the jumps are carefully set as well.
Overall: This map is going to need some work. The breaks appear to be just thrown in while there should be some notes to fill in that blank space. But the song is only about a minute and a half so at least 2 breaks would be enough (if they can fit). Also, its possible to use different beats so you don't have to stick with the main beat. Sticking with one set of beats would get you stuck when it comes to mapping. Also, make sure to use the distance snap to save you trouble later on. I'll drop my star in then.
Easy:
00:54:43 (4) - Hidden behind slider.
Normal:
First spinner is weirdly placed.
Hard:
01:07:36 (3) - Makes the stream hard to read. Point the bottom upwards or downwards instead of over the next note.
Last difficulty:
Fine!
Starred.
00:54:43 (4) - Hidden behind slider.
Normal:
First spinner is weirdly placed.
Hard:
01:07:36 (3) - Makes the stream hard to read. Point the bottom upwards or downwards instead of over the next note.
Last difficulty:
Fine!
Starred.
Easy:
Normal:
Hard:
Al2e10's DIF:
Nice map. Star.
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:06:43 (1,1) - these notes seem a little too close together.
00:38:51 (1) - This jump seemed rather random. It is very small and serves very little purpose in my opinion. If you do get rid of the jump, please remove the new combo also to be consistent with previous parts in the song
You are only supposed to have kiai sections once every minute of playable beatmap, so the ending of your song breaks this rule. Please change your kiai sections.
Combo mod;
00:49:82 (2,3) - add new combo to make this similar to the previous few combos of sliders
00:06:43 (1,1) - these notes seem a little too close together.
00:38:51 (1) - This jump seemed rather random. It is very small and serves very little purpose in my opinion. If you do get rid of the jump, please remove the new combo also to be consistent with previous parts in the song
You are only supposed to have kiai sections once every minute of playable beatmap, so the ending of your song breaks this rule. Please change your kiai sections.
Combo mod;
00:49:82 (2,3) - add new combo to make this similar to the previous few combos of sliders
Normal:
SPOILER
00:11:74 (7,1) - notes feel a little too close together
Also pay attention to kiai rule I mentioned in easy.
Combo mod:
01:18:20 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this new combo spam seems random
You might want to go through this difficulty and nazi spacing since there are quite a few points in the map where there are 1-2 grid (3) errors
Also pay attention to kiai rule I mentioned in easy.
Combo mod:
01:18:20 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this new combo spam seems random
You might want to go through this difficulty and nazi spacing since there are quite a few points in the map where there are 1-2 grid (3) errors
Hard:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
01:26:05 (1) - I would not want to make wait 5s just to hit this note. I advise you map the break or delete this note.
Also remember the kiai rule.
01:26:05 (1) - I would not want to make wait 5s just to hit this note. I advise you map the break or delete this note.
Also remember the kiai rule.
Al2e10's DIF:
SPOILER
add kiai?
Combo mod:
some of the new combo spams seemed out of place in the beginning, especially since you only used in twice in the map.
00:41:51 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
Combo mod:
some of the new combo spams seemed out of place in the beginning, especially since you only used in twice in the map.
00:41:51 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
Nice map. Star.
It would be nice if the soccer ball rolls
[Easy]
I hope you can map the entire song for easy. Don't have to but I don't like the ending
00:31:70 (1) - make this slider starts at 00:31:59
[Normal]
00:42:43 (x) - add a note
00:51:90 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
Uh......... wait...... I see that the spacing for the notes are slightly wrong.... go through with distance snap on
01:21:43 (x) - Why is there a break?
[Hard]
00:42:66 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:11:51 (2) - I know it looks better, but spacing
01:21:43 (x) - Same as Normal
[Al2e10's DIF]
Uh........ Distance snap? You have some killer jumps over there. I won't touch it because I'm not sure about it.
00:16:82 (1,1,1) - It would be nice if this were jumps, but meh
00:31:59 (1,1) - a huge jump, but it is playable so nvm
00:55:13 (2,3) - unexpected jump
Nice song. Starred
[Easy]
I hope you can map the entire song for easy. Don't have to but I don't like the ending
00:31:70 (1) - make this slider starts at 00:31:59
[Normal]
00:42:43 (x) - add a note
00:51:90 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
Uh......... wait...... I see that the spacing for the notes are slightly wrong.... go through with distance snap on
01:21:43 (x) - Why is there a break?
[Hard]
00:42:66 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
01:11:51 (2) - I know it looks better, but spacing
01:21:43 (x) - Same as Normal
[Al2e10's DIF]
Uh........ Distance snap? You have some killer jumps over there. I won't touch it because I'm not sure about it.
00:16:82 (1,1,1) - It would be nice if this were jumps, but meh
00:31:59 (1,1) - a huge jump, but it is playable so nvm
00:55:13 (2,3) - unexpected jump
Nice song. Starred
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Tsunku - Space Soccer (SenichiSeung) [clap clap out~].osu
Download: Tsunku - Space Soccer (SenichiSeung) [clap clap out~].osu
Hard:
00:28:59 (B) - This break feels unneeded. Try looking into adding a note or two.
00:38:97 (B) - For this one, you could redo this part around here.
00:44:51 (1) - This silder could be redone a bit or the whole think. Maybe add a shorter slider with a note.
00:46:59 (1) - The spinner sounds like it ends 1/2 too early.
00:47:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The streams goes compacted, then more spaced out then compacted again....
00:28:59 (B) - This break feels unneeded. Try looking into adding a note or two.
00:38:97 (B) - For this one, you could redo this part around here.
00:44:51 (1) - This silder could be redone a bit or the whole think. Maybe add a shorter slider with a note.
00:46:59 (1) - The spinner sounds like it ends 1/2 too early.
00:47:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The streams goes compacted, then more spaced out then compacted again....
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