This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月19日 at 下午 01:17:24

Artist: Suara
Title: Musouka
Source: Utawarerumono
BPM: 134
Filesize: 4317kb
Play Time: 00:49
Difficulties Available:

1. Eruru (2.81 stars, 51 notes)
2. Hakuoro (4.97 stars, 344 notes)

Download: Suara - Musouka
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Just have fun with old but great anime OP "Musouka"

hello~

Music Track need 2 for all diff

Eruru(tv Size)

General Beat snap divisor is 1/8 why? this is easy you maybe to 1/4 or 1/2
The easy is only put red tick or blue because this is easy

pleasse Beat Snap Divisor 1/8 change to 1/2 or 1/4

go to Aimod and read Snapping 52 like this
so this is not snapping you must Resnapp all note pleasse and will done

Remenber is you change 1/2 or 1/4 just only put red tick or blue tick on note or slider
Don´t forget Distance Snap is very much important


and all diff is same pleasse fix all like I sayd the Eruru(tv Size)

that all

well STAR ! because i like song have great rhythm

(if my mod is help pleasse give me kudosu this is will helfully )

have questions ask me in-game or pm

Thank you so much.
I will try it possible.
But I don't know the meaning:
"go to Aimod and read Snapping 52 like this
so this is not snapping you must Resnapp all note pleasse and will done"
It seems that very important.
Please elaborate it. Thank you.

Obrigado

"go to Aimod and read Snapping 52 like this
so this is not snapping you must Resnapp all note pleasse and will done"

go to File > Open Aimod

look this picture



you have still erro snapping
and why? because this in not put red tick or blue tick

that why erro snapping

so go to Timing > Resnapp all note and will change better bit and done

that all

(no kudosu for me pleasse )

and sorry my poor inglesh

I made a lot of changes.
Welcome advices!

star ^^

先丟顆星...

等我考完試再mod...

謝謝你的星

good map

star ~

Eruru
00:08:043 (2) - end at 00:08:267
00:11:178 (3) - end at 00:11:626
00:12:073 (4) - remove reverse
00:13:864 (1) - start at 00:12:969 and end at 00:14:760
00:21:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87152
00:29:759 (4) - add circle and shorten slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87153
00:32:445 (2) - ^
00:33:342 (3) - ^ and end slider at 00:34:014 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87154
00:35:580 (1) - replaced by 3 circle?
00:43:416 (1) - end slider at 00:43:752 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87155
00:45:207 (1) - ^
01:12:072 (3) - it slider not follow the rhythm
Add hitsounds

I think two version (full and TV size) in one mapset it unrankeble.

Thank you so much
I have a problem. What mean of "^"?

Example:
00:32:445 (2) - ^
00:45:207 (1) - ^

kevin840310 wrote:

Thank you so much
I have a problem. What mean of "^"?

Example:
00:32:445 (2) - ^
00:45:207 (1) - ^

"same as above"

I see. Thank you.

Looks nice, i see forward for this map beeing ranked

Your map is perfect. Your mapping skill is improving. You also have such helpful friends. I hope this map can be ranked.
I suggest you to add a normal level.

Hi,我挺喜欢这首歌的 所以STAR的同时附上一些建议
General
SB太简陋了吧，可以更美观点么？
Uitsarunemitea
AR+1?OD-1?
从开头到02:22:260为止 没有HITSOUND?虽然默认的CLAP不合适前面的部分，但是至少要+上WHISLTE和FINISH啊
排列过于方方正正了，玩起来会比较乏味的，建议试试弯曲的SLIDER和自然一点的排列
02:30:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - 这段太偷懒了吧 可以考虑换成弯曲的SLIDER做成跳
02:48:790 (1) - 去掉NEW COMBO
02:52:372 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1) - 这段节奏不好，建议重做
03:55:730 (8,1) - 分开这个NOTE和SPINER

Hakuoro
00:00:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段的CLAP换成WHISLTE
00:03:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:06:252 (6,7) - 去掉FINISH
00:12:074 (4) - CLAP去掉
00:27:745 add note
00:56:402 (8) - 去掉CLAP
01:04:462 (8) - ADD FINISH
01:43:193 (11) - 加长到红线
01:44:312 (3) - 减短到白线 红线ADD NOTE 后面白线同样ADD NOTE
01:46:103 (8) - 减短到白线
02:00:655 (6) - 加长到白线
03:02:895 (7) - 减短到红线
03:07:092 (1) - 加长到红线
03:21:477 (1) - ^
03:36:700 (2) - 加长到白线
另外2个难度大概看了一下，还行就暂时不MOD了。
这首歌有2个已经RANK的版本，你可以找来参考一下，同时建议你找一个适合这首歌的CLAP ，默认的CLAP和歌不是很搭。
加油吧！

太感謝你了
真的發現很多錯咧!說不盡的感謝

Done and continuing editing

Hi~ :3

Hakuoro
Urutoryi
这两个diff我感觉都不错，不过Eruru有些地方需要修改下

[Eruru]
我感觉最好不要在蓝线上放note，大部分图的note都是放在白线和红线上的
00:03:789 (1) - 我知道你是想对准00:04:461和00:04:908两个地方，不过一个slider应该是做不到的，现在这样听起来好别扭，建议拆成一个slider一个圆圈
00:10:728 (1) - 尽量不要碰到前面那个slider，这样不美观
00:23:263 (4) - 我感觉蓝线上的那个repeat听起来好别扭
00:27:965 (5) - 尽量不要用1/8，特别在最简单的难度上，而且3/8听起来很别扭
00:30:427 (3) - 缩短1/4
00:31:434 (4) - 前移1/4
00:42:962 (1) - 缩短1/2，弄得像00:45:201 (3)一样，听起来会协调些
00:49:846 (6) - 后移1/4
01:04:004 (7) - hitsound呢? 我觉得在最后面放个clap好点
这个diff到后面听起来就好像没完一样 > > 把spinner换一个位置吧

希望最后一个diff能早点完成，我很喜欢这歌 :3

Star~

謝謝!這樣子就更容易玩了，再次謝謝你的幫助。

K mod

Folder
You have SIX .osb files, all not used, and 3 are not even for this song... Delete? This will require full submit.

General
Look in AiMod more.

Eruru
AR -1
OD -2
00:12:072 (4) - Spacing

Urutoryi
AR -2
OD -1
00:34:236 (1,2,3) - Make these same combo? (Your choice)
01:18:118 (1) - Add finish to spinner
01:38:714 (1,1,1) - Make these same combo? (Your choice)
02:22:148 (1) - Add finish to spinner

Hakuroro
01:15:655 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:148 (4) - Spacing
01:38:043 (6,7,8) - Spacing
01:45:431 (6) - Delete this note and then replace directly on end of slider.
02:21:924 (1) - Finish to spinner
02:34:462 (10) - New combo
02:48:790 (1) - Remove new combo

I won't mod other two because, 1 is Taiko, and other is not done.

Star.

Thanks for your modding. I'm so happy.

Done and continue ediiting

It is a terrible, good music score.
It became your music score reference.


..my music score.. I hope ..mod.. star if it avoids it.

from #modreqs

General
Your BGs must be 640x480, 800x600 or 1024x768. It will be cool if all of them will have similar resolution.
Crop or find another pictures. Full submit after that.
Your BG is not showing in-game. Fix it. Your BG is not showing on site. Fix it.
Imo, 1004ms is not so much for audio lead-in. Make it 1500ms for all diffs.
Set preview point at 00:50:581 . I think it will be sounds better (He-he, you miss preview point in Eruru )
Try to keep your combo-numbers constantly.
Diffs have different length. Try to fix it at least for Urutoryi

Eruru
BPM is 134 here as in other diffs. Fix that and resnap all notes.
Set slider tickrate 1 as in other diffs
Too much 1/2 in easiest diff
00:25:950 (2) - don't use sliderslide whistle here, it sounds bad.
01:19:226 - fturn off your kiai at this point (this suggestion for all diffs)

Urutoryi
HP -1, AR +1
00:20:133 - remove this break

Hakuoro
00:23:491 (6,7) - very hard to read
02:30:208 (1,1,1) - combo spam
02:19:239 (11) - this note is not snapped
03:52:148 (6,7,8) - keep distance, very unexpected.
03:55:730 (8) - remove this note

Thank you for your help!
Why different diff has different time?
Because I think the greater player, the more length he can play.
So I don't want to change the time. But Urutoryi can be longer.

What's meaning of "spam"?
I don't want to change the BGs. But I can adjust thier size. Does it matter?

Thank you so much.

Combo spam = a lot of using new combo on some notes on end. Almost it looks ugly.

I don't want to change the BGs. But I can adjust thier size. Does it matter?

Yes, BG with wrong resolution is unrankable. Resize your BGs or find them with 800x600 (best choice).

Thank Aleks719 again.
Please redownload it again after 6/14 09:49 (GTM+0)

Lets see....

Where's the Video.avi? Also, delete Suara - Musouka (kevin840310).osb from the song folder (the one with the double space in the filename and no codes. What's up with the SB keeping the shorter maps playing even after passing it? You have to set them into each difficultly to fix this, not in the .osb file.

[Eruru]

..... Why is this difficulty extremely short?

Another thing, please make sure to keep a future note of the fact that using a lower distance snap with a higher slider velocity can make the map play more oddly because of the uneven flow of movement.

[Urutoryi]

Stopped at 02:24:163? Also, there's only one section that uses normal hitsounds while the rest of the map uses soft....

00:24:387 (6,1,2) - Doesn't look very neat and appears cluttered in gameplay.


[Hakuoro]

00:50:581 (?) - A speed up warning SB would help here.
00:51:476 (4) - The clap would sound better at the white tick.
01:04:909 (?) - A Slow Down warning SB would help here.
01:47:671 (2,3) - Too far apart and also misleading following up with 01:48:230 (4,5).
01:55:058 (?) - A speed up warning SB would help here.
02:09:387 (?) - A Slow Down warning SB would help here.
02:59:312 (?) - A speed up warning SB would help here.
03:42:297 (?) - A Slow Down warning SB would help here.
03:43:193 ~ 03:49:685 - Why are you using normal hitsounds that stands out while soft hitsounds would fit better?
03:55:730 (1) - This spinner could have ended soft and quiet....

It feels like some of the notes and sliders are recycled with some copy and pasting used. It wouldn't hurt to take a bit more time into figuring out some newer beat patterns or to use different notes.

Overveiw

Honestly, it would be better to take more time into looking at what can be improved for this map. There are some things that needs to be addressed as well like with the SB. I've noticed you're missing the speed up.png in the song folder. Another thing, it would be best to try to map the other two difficulties to the same lengh as [Hakuoro]. Don't use play time lengh as a reason for making things easier or harder.

Thank you for your checking. I appreciate to you.
I deleted video.avi. So it' wouldn't have video. Maybe there is so wrong in the beatmap.
The problem of SB's length. I thought the way to solve it. But I can't play OSU! these day. I will submit it few days later.
There was a "speed up" . But it is so ugly that I cancelled it. I will make a beautiful one later.
Because your advice. I will cut "Hakuoro" length as "Urutoryi" So there will be two kinds of play times.

whymeman wrote:

Lets see....

Where's the Video.avi? Also, delete Suara - Musouka (kevin840310).osb from the song folder (the one with the double space in the filename and no codes. What's up with the SB keeping the shorter maps playing even after passing it? You have to set them into each difficultly to fix this, not in the .osb file.

[Eruru]

..... Why is this difficulty extremely short?

Another thing, please make sure to keep a future note of the fact that using a lower distance snap with a higher slider velocity can make the map play more oddly because of the uneven flow of movement.

[Urutoryi]

Stopped at 02:24:163? Also, there's only one section that uses normal hitsounds while the rest of the map uses soft....

00:24:387 (6,1,2) - Doesn't look very neat and appears cluttered in gameplay.


[Hakuoro]

00:50:581 (?) - A speed up warning SB would help here.
00:51:476 (4) - The clap would sound better at the white tick.
01:04:909 (?) - A Slow Down warning SB would help here.
01:47:671 (2,3) - Too far apart and also misleading following up with 01:48:230 (4,5).
01:55:058 (?) - A speed up warning SB would help here.
02:09:387 (?) - A Slow Down warning SB would help here.
02:59:312 (?) - A speed up warning SB would help here.
03:42:297 (?) - A Slow Down warning SB would help here.
03:43:193 ~ 03:49:685 - Why are you using normal hitsounds that stands out while soft hitsounds would fit better?
03:55:730 (1) - This spinner could have ended soft and quiet....

It feels like some of the notes and sliders are recycled with some copy and pasting used. It wouldn't hurt to take a bit more time into figuring out some newer beat patterns or to use different notes.

Overveiw

Honestly, it would be better to take more time into looking at what can be improved for this map. There are some things that needs to be addressed as well like with the SB. I've noticed you're missing the speed up.png in the song folder. Another thing, it would be best to try to map the other two difficulties to the same lengh as [Hakuoro]. Don't use play time lengh as a reason for making things easier or harder.

I don't really find anything bad about this map, except that the first two difficulties (Eruru and Urutoryi) were very easy, then the third difficulty (Hakuoro) was the only one giving me troubles because of the HP drain. I've yet to pass that difficulty tough...

Good job on the map!
Honestly, I couldn't find any flaws, so I can't really help you in any way...
But I say this; Adding a new difficulty to not have that from Easy to Hard jump

EDIT:
I forgot to star this D:
Sorry D:

a few suggestions

Maybe you can cut the unused part of mp3 to make the file size smaller

[Hakuoro]
01:08:043 add a note or extend the slider?
02:11:626 add a note?
02:12:521 add a note or extend the slider?

I love Hakuoro difficulty !! Very nice !! STAR!

Here we go.

~Eruru~
00:06:252 (5) - Maybe shorten by 1/2?
00:12:073 (4) - Same as above.
00:13:417 (1) - End this spinner at 00:14:760.
00:45:208 (4) - Finish on later end of repeater?
00:57:745 (2) - Maybe lengthen this slider 1/2?
00:58:417 (3) - Remove the clap from the middle of this repeater.
01:08:268 (1,2) - A triple repeater would work better imo.
01:19:461 (1) - Turn on 1/4 snap. End this spinner at 01:24:499.

~Urutoryi~
00:12:073 (4) - Remove repeat and place a note at 00:12:745. Make a similar change to 01:16:550 (4) and 02:21:028 (4).
00:19:909 (5) - Soft finish here.
01:18:118 (1) - End spinner at 01:19:237.
01:28:417 (5) - Clap on slider end?
02:22:596 (1) - End spinner at 02:23:715.

~Hakuoro~
02:23:268 (2) - Make this slider repeat once.

Very Nice Map. I'd star you... but... something happened to all the stars. Weird.

This mp3 cropping... It is horrible. Definitely not rankable quality. I would find somebody else to do the cropping for you - ask around in #modHelp when you get the chance.

Hakuoro:

00:02:223 (7,8) - This doesn't look very good. Here's a better one:

456,232,2223,2,2,B|436:336|336:336,1,175,2|2
320,256,2894,2,8,B|305:263|384:272|380:200,2,87.5

(Go into the .osu, and look at the third number in the [Hit Objects] section to find what line to overwrite)

00:09:387 (8,9,10) - I think it would flow better if you replaced (8) and (9) with hitcircles.
00:25:954 (4,5,6) - Can you make these curved? It would flow better and be more entertaining
00:36:252 (2,3) - These don't look good because the middle point isn't centered. Here's a guide on how to make pretty sliders: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
00:48:790 (5,6,7) - These notes have lots of emphasis. I would make these jumps.
01:38:043 (3,4,5) - I would move (4,5) out from under (3). It would feel better.
01:47:447 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks like gradually spacing 1/2s, due to the spacing between (3) and (4) and (4) and (5) being inconsistent. I recommend fixing this.
01:57:969 (9) - Replace this with either a repeating 1/4 slider or 3 hit circles 1/4 apart. It would flow better.
02:01:103 (11) - I... would just remake this into something else.
02:22:596 (1,2) - This is... anti-climatic. Maybe end with a spinner instead?

Urutoryi:
^Sure you got that name right? That isn't pure Japanese... but OK.

00:16:775 (6,7,8) - Bit confusing to newer players due to the low OD, I would make it so that (6) and (8) don't overlap like that.
00:39:386 (1,2,3) - ^Same thing
01:04:014 (7) - Can you center that middle point, please? It would look better.
01:53:268 (5) - This... has seen better days, I'm sure
01:59:312 (5) - Align this with (1) and (3), please

Eruru:

00:24:834 (1) - This could blanket around (5)'s end better. See: Guide from earlier
00:25:953 (2) - ...and this could do better around (1)'s end.
00:39:834 (2) - I'm pretty sure you could make this more symmetrical pretty easily
01:20:021 (1) - Spinners should start on a strong note. This doesn't, so it feels weird.

...and map it all the way, please. This just isn't acceptable in 2011.

Good map! Just needs some tidying up

thx reqs~

[General]
offset +30ms?


[Hakuoro]
0.00.879(3) - delete last waypoint
0.01.327(4) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.13.864(2) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.39.834(3,5) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.41.402(8,10) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.51.924(5) - ^
1.01.775(4,5,6) - x0.0 spacing and off gridsnap
1.03.566(2) - delete 2nd waypoint
1.44.312(3,5) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
1.45.879(8,10) - delete 2nd waypoint
1.56.402(5) - ^
1.57.297(8) - ^
1.59.312(6) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
2.00.432(9) - delete 2nd waypoint
2.05.805(3) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)

[Urutoryi]
0.09.387(5) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.12.745(5) - x0.0 spacing and off gridsnap
0.13.640(1) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.14.088(2) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.17.223(8) - 1grid down and left
0.17.894(1,2,3) - delete 2nd waypoint and delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.24.834(1) - delete 2nd waypoint
1.11.626(1,4) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
1.29.312(1) - delete 2nd waypoint
2.16.103(1,4) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
2.18.342(5) - delete 2nd waypoint

[Eruru]
0.44.309(2) - resnap(isn't snapped)
1.20.021(1) - Start:1.19.237 End:1.24.387

Hi.

[General]

- Why your BG size is 640x480 ? Can you find BG size is 1024x768 or 800x600 ?
- In beginning of song you shouldn't use clap sounds
- This is my mod style you can change or not.

[All Difficulty]

Please follow my "Sound Guide" follow and fix them all difficulty.

I want to give star this map :3

Love this song.

Download: Suara - Musouka (kevin840310) [Sound Guide].osu

Your storyboard is bugged in [Hakuoro], causing players to get stuck after they finish the map. You should delete the scripts of "speed up.png" (those shown in the spoilerbox below) because it's AFTER the map finished (at 143,715 ms), and it definitely shouldn't be there.
Open the .osu file, find the code above, and delete them. Remember to Revert to Saved in the editor after you save it in the notepad because the code's still in osu!'s memory until you revert.

Good luck

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[General]
offset +30ms?


[Hakuoro]
0.00.879(3) - delete last waypoint
0.01.327(4) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.13.864(2) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.39.834(3,5) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.41.402(8,10) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.51.924(5) - ^
1.01.775(4,5,6) - x0.0 spacing and off gridsnap
1.03.566(2) - delete 2nd waypoint
1.44.312(3,5) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
1.45.879(8,10) - delete 2nd waypoint
1.56.402(5) - ^
1.57.297(8) - ^
1.59.312(6) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
2.00.432(9) - delete 2nd waypoint
2.05.805(3) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)

[Urutoryi]
0.09.387(5) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.12.745(5) - x0.0 spacing and off gridsnap
0.13.640(1) - delete 2nd waypoint
0.14.088(2) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.17.223(8) - 1grid down and left
0.17.894(1,2,3) - delete 2nd waypoint and delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
0.24.834(1) - delete 2nd waypoint
1.11.626(1,4) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
1.29.312(1) - delete 2nd waypoint
2.16.103(1,4) - delete last redwaypoint(change white waypoint)
2.18.342(5) - delete 2nd waypoint

[Eruru]
0.44.309(2) - resnap(isn't snapped)
1.20.021(1) - Start:1.19.237 End:1.24.387

Why does waypoint mean? I little don't know what are they

sorry,poooor english

mean...

[Hakuoro]
00:14:312 (3,4,5) - reduce the spacing on these notes (so they can form a better triangle with the whole combo)
00:45:208 (6) - new combo?
01:13:193 (6) - ^
01:49:685 (8) - ^
hmm...a silly question.
why not make the whole kiai sections to be speed up sections?
and since the gap of difficulty between this diff and [Urutoryi] is not big i think you should try to make this diff harder.

other diffs looks fine and here's a star.

[General]

- Your BGs are of 640x480, please change it to 1024x768, not with the same image obviously.
- Where is the video? please put it in all diffs, with the same video offset and full submit.

[Eruru]

Down a little the difficulty, you must have a difficulty with less than 3 stars. I say:
HP Drain Rate 1
Approach Rate 2
Overall Difficulty 1
Also change some patterns to reduce the difficulty.

You need the second kiai time in this difficulty, need to be the same in all.
00:13:447 - Very short spin I think, start on 00:12:999
00:33:596 (1) Make this slider otherwise, feels as if the slider was shorter.
00:56:432 (4,5) Change these two notes for a slider, considering the previous pattern like this, can be confusing for beginners.

[Urutoryi]

This is the hard difficulty? If yes, please change the difficulty because for the AR some patterns are confusing.
HP Drain Rate 5
Approach Rate 6
Overall Difficulty 5

00:14:790 (1) Too close to the previous note.
00:34:715 (1) ^
01:18:148 - Very short spin, same as easy.
01:39:193 (1) Too close to the previous note.
02:22:626 - Short spin again.

[Hakuoro]

AR7 feels better for a slow song like this.
00:14:790 - Why there are a break, considering that in the previous difficulty there aren't breaks? I suggest to map this part.
00:29:790 (4) nazi, move (4) 1 grid left? is very close to the previous circle.
00:49:939 (9) Down this note, is very close to the previous, considering the jumps.
00:57:327 (1,2,3) Inconsistent spacing, also, when you add a 2x velocity usually use a major spacing, but here is the same, please fix it.
01:36:506 (1,2) Spacing.
01:54:417 (9) Down this note.

Star because I like the song <3

hello

some unsnapped green section: (told by AIBat)
Eruru:
00:50:581
01:19:237

Hakuoro:
00:50:581
01:04:909
01:19:237
01:55:052
02:09:387
02:22:372

Urutoryi:
00:14:760
00:20:190
00:50:581
01:19:237
01:55:052
02:22:596

okay...

Eruru:
00:07:177 (1,2) - i know this blaket is perfect : ( . . but since this is easy...maybe make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137135 if you do it the next note is better placed like that too http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137139
00:11:655 (3,4,5) - 1 grid right
00:27:551 (4) - make it stack with (1)? it should look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137138 (with some i make a blanket and changed some a bit)
00:30:014 (2) - 1 grid right
00:32:029 (1,2) - well . . i don't like this rythm pattern too much (some sliders looks ugly in this pattern in normal and easy diff) i can suggest you with this pattern xD
00:35:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - well . . .oh it's just too box and small . .well . . forget it's not a big problem though. . .it's just me that don't like box pattern too much xD ( because i can't mod box pattern)
01:11:656 (1,3) - make it pretty slider xD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137142


Urutoryi:
00:16:805 (6,7,8) - well . . .maybe change it into reverse slider?
00:28:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well . . .i just http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137144 . . looks . . a bit . . messy xD maybe try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137147 well i'll make it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137145 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137146 if i were you xD...
00:47:029 (1,5) - nazi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137150
01:05:834 (3) - 1 grid up
01:34:492 (6) - 2 grid left
01:34:268 (5,6) - make it follow the pattern ?

Hakuoro:
00:11:208 (2) - make it end at 00:11:656 ?
00:24:864 (1) - make it end at same place as (5)?
00:27:327 (1) - 1 grid down

can't find anything other than that : (

sorry for all my nazi since i can't find anything major here xD
well . . .
good luck

ok i only mod easy, cause you didnt follow instruction at all

03,820 note here, and then slider at 4,044 may be stack on the note
24,864 similar thing
26,879 add note
28,894 similar with 03,820
53,745 slider starts here end 54,193 54,641 add note
107,402 add return please, 108,297 delete return

and you arent finished yet O.o

so a bit more

normal
add a break at 20387
34,715 weird new combo
119267 whats this : http://puu.sh/4VmW fix it
and this : end of song : http://puu.sh/4Vnd should end kiai at end of spinner

yo

[General]

1. kiai的位置要擺在線上
2. 第2張SB感覺沒有用阿 那不像是背景 感覺比較像是對話中的畫面在來你設的位置也沒排好
3. 星數沒有低於3顆星的是unrank的 這是rule
4. mp3切斷的位置有些奇怪 至少用淡出的效果帶過去吧

[Eruru]
00:23:297 (4,5) - 間距
00:27:103 (4,5) - ^
00:36:282 (3,4) - 對最簡單的難度來說這樣的排法不是很好
00:39:416 (1,2) - ^

[Urutoryi]
AR太高 用5試試看吧
00:34:714 (1,1) - 這兩個NC是無意義的 改掉吧
01:39:192 (1,1) - ^
02:02:701 (2,4) - 重疊
02:10:312 (3) - 為什麼歪掉了??
02:17:028 (2,3) - ^

[Hakuoro]
00:09:417 (8,9,10) - 感覺這時機用jump並不是很恰當的 因為在00:09:753 - 明顯加一拍會比jump來的合適
00:34:715 (1,1) - 這兩個NC是無意義的 改掉吧
00:39:864 (3,4,5) - 間距不均
00:41:432 (8,9,10,11) - 間距怪怪的 怎麼變小了??
00:57:775 (3,7) - 重疊
01:10:984 (9) - 不適合
01:36:506 (1,2,3) - 間距
01:57:999 (9,10,11) - 不均的間距
02:15:462 (7) - 不適合

音效部分最好重新檢查過一次~感覺蠻亂的 可是我音效做的蠻渣的 所以不能幫到你

[Eruru]

痾...感覺這比較像Normal...如果是easy的話1/2slider未免多的過分了點

00:06:282 (4) - +1 repeat

00:26:879 (3) - 關掉distance snap 和 grid snap 然後和(1)重疊好一點吧o.o

00:49:940 (6) - spacing

[Hakuoro]

fine

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[Urutoryi] 和 [sound guide] 是什麼關係... ?

Hello~ my mod

[General]
Bg must be 800*600,1024*768
Fix clap sounds

[Eruru]
i think, Volume make 70-80%
00:00:462 (1) - remove clap?
00:03:820 (1) - remoce clap?
00:07:626 (2) - remove clap?
00:12:103 (4) - add finish
00:12:999 (1) - add finish
00:23:297 (4) - add clap? and End slider here 00:23:297 (4) -
00:23:969 (5) - End slider here 00:24:193 (5) -
00:25:984 (2) - add clap
00:26:879 (3) - ^
00:27:775 (4) - ^
00:28:670 (6) - ^
00:29:118 (1) - ^
00:33:148 (3) - ^
00:33:596 (4) - remove clap and remove finish add whistle
00:34:715 (5) - add whistle
00:35:163 (6) - ^
00:36:730 (2) - add clap
00:37:626 (3) - add clap
00:38:073 (4) - remove clap
00:38:521 (5) - add clap
00:38:968 (6) - remove clap
00:39:417 (1) - add clap
00:41:208 (3) - end slider remove clap
00:42:103 (4) - ^
00:44:342 (2) - remove clap
00:44:790 (3) - ^

[Hakuoro]
i think, Volume make 70-80%
00:00:909 (3) - 1 grid up
00:02:924 (8) - 1 grid left?
00:03:596 (9) - 1 grid down?
00:03:820 (10) - remove NC
00:04:044 (1) - add NC
00:09:417 (1) - ^
00:10:760 (1) - 1 grid right
00:11:208 (2) - 1 grid right
00:15:014 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - add whistle?
00:15:909 (5) - remove clap
00:17:924 (1,2,3) - remove clap and add whistle
00:19:491 (4) - add whistle
00:28:894 (1) - 1 grid down
00:30:909 (7,8,9,10,11) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/153980 and add combo
00:36:282 (2) - end slider add clap
00:48:820 (1) - add NC
00:49:044 (6) - 2 grid left
00:49:491 (8) - 2 grid right
00:52:402 (1) - add NC?
00:53:969 (1) - remove NC?
00:54:193 (1) - add NC?
00:54:641 (4) - 2 grid up?
00:55:984 (1) - add NC
00:59:566 (1) - ^
01:06:730 (7) - ^
01:08:073 (1) - end slider remove clap and remove NC
01:08:521 (5) - add NC
01:08:969 (3,4,5) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/153983
01:10:312 (7,8,9) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/153984 and add NC
01:18:820 (2) - add finish
01:31:805 (1) - 1 grid right?
01:33:372 (1) - Remove NC
01:33:596 (2) - add NC
01:35:387 (7) - add NC
01:36:506 (1) - remove clap
01:38:073 (4) - 1 grid right
01:38:745 (6) - 1 grid right
01:38:745 (6,1,1) - remove finish and add whistle (i think this better)
01:38:521 (5) - add clap, remove finish
01:39:641 (1) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/153986
01:42:551 (6) - add NC
01:45:685 (1) - ^?
01:53:297 (5) - add NC
01:53:521 (6) - 2 grid left
01:53:744 (7) - 2 grid right?
01:56:880 (6) - add NC
02:00:462 (9) - ^
02:01:805 (1) - remove NC
02:02:253 (6) - add NC
02:04:044 (6) - add NC
02:06:730 (5) - add clap
02:11:208 (7) - add NC
02:12:551 (1) - remove NC
02:12:999 (2) - add NC
02:17:701 (6) - add NC?

Yo modding ur song because of ur request.

General:
Like accelerator said u need a BG thats 800x600 or 1024x768 here i resized the BG take them if u like http://puu.sh/6C72 http://puu.sh/6C6X

Eruru:
00:01:805(2) - 1 grid down for the 3rd point
00:06:282(4) - add clap at 00:06:730
00:07:626(2) - x:456 y:144 for the end point
00:53:969(1) - x: 240 y:264 for the 2nd point and x:288 y:240 for the end point so that itd look like a curve slider.

Hakuoro:
Nothing to point out

This is the best i can do. GL

Hi Nymph here and request from my mod queue~
默认中文MOD了..可恶没赶上2KUDO的位置

General:
那个..Storyboarding板块底下的那个Display the storyboard in front of combo fire.. 既然你没有做SB 那么开着肯定没什么必要 至于不关有什么影响我不太清楚 总之为了避免麻烦关了最好

艾露露:
Issues
00:50:611 (1) - KIAI这的绿线没有对齐 请对齐一下

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:177 (1) - Normal最好是别这么跳 反正这方面也没规定 但是肯定会有人挑
00:44:342 (2) - 就这2离1远了点不是0,8spacing了 应该不是故意的吧 最好整齐一些 后面类似的不挑了
高潮部分用了好多四分之一的普通或者转折SLIDER 听起来并不是很顺 推荐再多用点二分之一长SLIDER试试

Hitsound
感觉HITSOUND很零碎 尤其是CLAP 这一个那一个 试着按固定的套路下几个听一下试试 虽然现在这样也无不可
比方说 00:00:462 (1) - 这里一下就用了2个 00:03:820 (1) - 然后尾巴上一个 后面那点就全没有了..感觉很怪
同理 有的whistle中间也断开了
00:29:118 (1) - 像这个开头CLAP我觉得有点别扭 我个人觉得头和尾都应该是whistle才对
00:32:029 (1,2,3) - 这里的话 感觉节奏都断开了= = 前面一直白线 为什么这里突然红线做节奏了呢
KIAI节奏觉得不太好 好乱的样子 就先不谈HITSOUND了

哈克奥罗:
Issues
00:19:939 (5) - 后面加个休息时间吧
00:50:611 (1) - 绿线没有对齐
01:04:939 (1) - ^
01:55:088 (1) - ^
02:09:417 (1) - ^

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:48:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个是想对称吗？建议对称的好一点 要不5在中间就没意义了啊 01:53:297 (1) - 这也是
01:39:193 (1,1) - 这COMBO没什么必要的 去了吧

Hitsound
00:06:730 (7) - 这个静音我没太明白意义..
00:43:447 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 我个人是不喜欢FINISH太集中 不过也没什么不好 换做是我 可能就改一部分CLAP或者WHISTLE了

先这些了=A=话说HARD比NORMAL好不少啊=_=

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding ur song because of ur request.

General:
Like accelerator said u need a BG thats 800x600 or 1024x768 here i resized the BG take them if u like http://puu.sh/6C72 http://puu.sh/6C6X

After I upload with new BG. The website doesn't show pictures.
What can I do?

kevin840310 wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding ur song because of ur request.

General:
Like accelerator said u need a BG thats 800x600 or 1024x768 here i resized the BG take them if u like http://puu.sh/6C72 http://puu.sh/6C6X

After I upload with new BG. The website doesn't show pictures.
What can I do?

try saving it to a PNG format maybe that will work

其实我觉得hakuoro里的finish真心多了...
然后hakuoro做的比Erurul要好...花了我1PC就FC了..normal花了3个...

Eruru

00:05:611 - 为了世界使节奏饱满我在这弄加了个圆圈，试试吗？
00:25:984 (2) - 滑条00:24:864 (1) - 如果选择不踩白线开始的话...(2)可以试试缩减1/2?
01:08:297 (1) - 试试将音效换成白线吗？ 像这里01:08:521
01:34:940 (3) - clap从这里开始的话，建议从01:33:596开始
01:59:342- 要试着在这里加clap吗？



hakuoro
00:45:238 (1) - 不需要finish会好一点吗？和00:43:447 (3) - 这个一样就可以了吧

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