artpiggo wrote:

Sorry for late modding

Is there BG background. I downloaded and didn't find it? but it isn't large problem

Normal W..W.Wonderfull no mistake for me at all
but I want you to add note after last spinner. I think it should have
and you should use grid lvl 3 please for better distance snap : )

็Hard
00 56 203 add finish sound I think
01 03 615 1,2,3 put in more beutiful triangular
01 29 732 not beautiful one
Wonderful as ever : D

Insane is So Wonderful too. but I want you reduce some HP drain for 1 or 2. I can play it with mouse
and I suggest that when you will break distance snap rule, please use distance snap 2.0x instead of random position of them

Very perfect map!

Combo1 : 247,172,60
Combo2 : 252,158,201
Combo3 : 81,157,234
Combo4 : 145,240,98

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Your mp3 is 256 kbps, you need a 192-128kbps to get this ranked
- Use these colors ??

Combo1 : 247,172,60
Combo2 : 252,158,201
Combo3 : 81,157,234
Combo4 : 145,240,98

Easy;
- 00:15:968 >> Add a finish ??
- 00:35:732 >> ^
- 01:03:968 >> ^ also start kiai time here
- 01:30:615 >> End kiai time here

Normal;
- Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note
- 01:03:615 >> Add a finish
- 01:15:262 >> ^

Hard;
- Good ~ just fix the kiai time so it starts and ends on a note

Insane;
- Start and end kiai time on a note
- Good ~

* Star ~

senaya wrote:

Wow.. It's good, I wasn't able to find anything.
Just one suggestion.

[Hard]
This is kinda easy for a hard level. Maybe you can at least make AR+1? It won't hurt much..

I guess it's almost finished

wmfchris wrote:

sorry for late modding~

[general]
Timing is off X_X + 20ms at least
Unique the ending time?

[Insane]
clap on the 3rd beat is a bit weird... and use a softer clap plz
00:23:929 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing
00:27:282 (1,3) - finish on (1), whistle instead of finish at (3)
00:49:164 (3,4,5,6) - (3,4) right 1 grid, clap clap clap is so loud? o_o
00:49:870 (1,1,4) - right 1 grid
01:06:811 (3,4,5) - better fix this uneven spacing

[Hard]
00:24:438 (7) - down 1 grid
00:26:203 (5) - spacing?
01:20:909 (1~5) - follow the 1.0x spacing
01:28:497 (3) - down 1 grid

[Normal]
ok

star

val0108 wrote:

気まぐれＭＯＤです o/
[Easy]
HP AR OD +1
この難易度だけ気合タイムずれてます._.
00:58:321 (3) - New combo(!?)

[Normal]
01:23:556 (1,2) - スライダーにしてみては？

[Hard]
00:21:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - センターに置いてみては？
00:58:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:48:262 (1) - スピン始め00:48:438
00:47:026 (1,2) - ｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞ離したほうがいいかも
01:13:850 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo
01:15:262 (2) - New combo
00:38:556 insaneと同じ0.5で置いてみては？._.
[Insane]
00:18:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - センターで置いてみては？
00:20:203 (7) - スライダーのはじめを00:19:321 (4) - の切り替えし部分に重ねると綺麗に置けます
00:23:732 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:438 (7) - new combo
00:25:850 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:203 (2) - new combo
00:27:968 (1) - Remove new combo
00:28:673 (6) - new combo
00:49:144 (5,6) - 1grid 左
00:51:262 (5) - new combo
01:05:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この部分だけこの置き方はいきなりすぎるかな・・・？
01:07:674 (1,2,3,4) - 2grid 上
01:08:909 (5,6,7,8,9) - 3grid 上
01:11:026 (4) - new combo
01:21:615 (5) - ｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞ1.5で置いてみては？

01:24:085 (4) - new combo

ナイスマップ！！gogo~

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Easy~
  
  Have nothing to say....
  
  ~Normal~
  
  Aww... Grid level 2???

1. 00:39:278 (2): Turn off both grid and distance snap and move to x:180 y:160. (Avoiding both of them is okay.)
2. 00:40:160 (4): Do the same thing and move to x:276 y:64.
   
   ~Hard~
   
   Have nothing to say....
   
   ~Insane~
   
3. 00:48:984 (3,4): Highlight them both (Hold ctrl) move one grid right.
4. 00:49:160 (5,6): Highlight them both and move one grid left.

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello.

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Easy~
  
  Have nothing to say....
  
  ~Normal~
  
  Aww... Grid level 2???

1. 00:39:278 (2): Turn off both grid and distance snap and move to x:180 y:160. (Avoiding both of them is okay.)
2. 00:40:160 (4): Do the same thing and move to x:276 y:64.
   
   ~Hard~
   
   Have nothing to say....
   
   ~Insane~
   
3. 00:48:984 (3,4): Highlight them both (Hold ctrl) move one grid right.
4. 00:49:160 (5,6): Highlight them both and move one grid left.

And that's it. But in case you don't understand it sometimes, just use a translator.
Also to be honest, they have to send you stars so your beatmap will get higher then to get it ranked in the future and because they liked the song.. Don't you want to get excited in it huh.:-)

Thank you and good luck. *Star*

Kitsuneko wrote:

できた！

PS:タグに僕の名前追加お願いします∩( ・ω・)∩
Diff名も長ければKitsunekoに変えちゃっても大丈夫ですー

IceBeam wrote:

Hello~

The only problem I see with song folder is empty .osb file,but it's not that neccesary to delete it.

[Easy]
00:41:395 (1,2,3,4,1) - As you're using symmetrical pattern here,move all these notes 2 grids right,to make 00:42:807 (3) centered.
00:57:631 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^ Same suggestion.Maybe move all these notes 4 grid left to make this pattern symmetrical?
01:04:689 (2) - Finish sounds great here,how do you think?
01:15:984 (2) - ^
01:18:807 - ^

[Normal]
00:17:042 (2,3,4,5,6) - Moving 2 grids down will make it symmetrical.
00:28:337 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Same.2 grids right.
00:39:984 (3,4,5,6) - ^ 1 right?
00:44:219 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this:

SPOILER

01:04:689 - As in Easy,how about adding a finish here?
01:07:513 (3) - ^
01:15:984 (2) - ^
01:18:101 (1) - ^
01:18:807 (2) - ^

[Kitsuneko]
AR 8 seems to fast for this difficulty,I'd suggest 7.

00:35:748 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - All these stacks confused me,they broke the flow..Also,if you're following vocals here,then remove 00:35:925 (2) note?
00:40:513 (4,1) - Ah,this spacing is really confusing,stack 00:40:513 (4) with 00:40:689 (1) instead?
01:21:631 (5) - Move it few grids down to make pentagon-spaced pattern.

[Insane]
Just pure awesomeness.

Nice mapset overall.
Star~

IceBeam wrote:

[Kitsuneko]
AR 8 seems to fast for this difficulty,I'd suggest 7. fixed

00:35:748 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - All these stacks confused me,they broke the flow..Also,if you're following vocals here,then remove sry,no
00:35:925 (2) note? ummm,nah..
00:40:513 (4,1) - Ah,this spacing is really confusing,stack 00:40:513 (4) with 00:40:689 (1) instead?okay, fixed
01:21:631 (5) - Move it few grids down to make pentagon-spaced pattern. fixed

Haneii wrote:

~Hard~
00:07:513 (1) – can you make this curve more symmetrical? fixed~

whymeman wrote:

Huh...? I see a file named apploachcircle.png, but isn't it supposed to be named approachcircle.png?Done!! Also, comboburst-0 and comboburst-1 are WAY up at the top of the play field. Can you atleast reduce the hight by 1/3 to let the images appear at the center?Done!!
And WHY is the spinner-metre and spinner-background at the size of 1034 x 691? Its supposed to be 1023 x 692.Done!!

whymeman wrote:

Don't worry, I didn't forget about you. I just found some decent images for the comboburst replacements and i'm in the processor of making them right now http://puu.sh/2DqU

Just had some trouble to search for them, and other issues to deal with.

Okay, that took a bit longer than I expected.... But anyways, I was able to make some combobursts for the map at a decent size and style. Also GIMP compressed to save a few KB form the file size.

whymeman wrote:

Much better.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Why is KanaRin not in the tags? Add pls

Kana's Taiko Oni:
01:32:042 - end the kiai here to be consistent with other diffs and because I don't see a need for stars after the song ends

Kitsuneko:
00:06:454 (1) - new combo here (wanted to have 2 shorter combos here like the following 2 combos)
00:46:689 (2,3,4) - I don't really like the antijump here

Insane:
01:19:337 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 01:08:219 (1)

================

Fairly good for a first map. Popping over the kiai timing and tag,but besides that there is not too much to fix. (I would like it if all your sliders were symmetrical xD) After fixing that, contact me, and I'll decide what to do after that at that time. For now, star!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Forgot to check this earlier, change the slider tick rate to 2 for all diffs (2 fits the music a lot better than 1/2, according to me and a few other ppl I asked)

Tell when you change it, and I'll rank. (Also, no kds pls)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Ranked!