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Cool Joke - UNDO

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Topic Starter
Hamuko
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XepherX3
lol here is your map fixed up:

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Alphonse].osu

download and replace it with yours in your songs map

osu/songs/...
Topic Starter
Hamuko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mattoi
Aqui está o fácil pronto. Espero que ajude. Here is the right easy. Hope I help.
[attachment=0:bf53e]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Edward].osu[/attachment:bf53e]
popoyo
Hard diff incompleta~

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Scar].osu
bmin11
This is what I got so far
Done with beats. WIP on hitsounds

Teara, I changed some timing sections so can you edit it again? Thanks

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Code B11].osu
Teara
Me and Bmin's parts sofar~

@ Bmin~ Ok done it, but please for the love of that all is holy~ work on the collaboration diff now~ delete the diff Code B11. Its hard to do things like this =p

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Breeze
o.o 鋼の錬金術師
The title Cool Joke - UNDO(FMA 3rd Opening)
I think (FMA 3rd Opening) is uncessary to add in title, you should write it in tag or source
Star
bmin11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Kotomi-chan
*Easy dif is... Short.
*Medium. Not all errors, but ...
- 00:56:727 > add a beat
- 00:59:665 > remove the beat
- 00:59:665 - 01:02:339 > the beats are a bit off of time
- 01:03:700 > move the beat to here {10}
- 01:42:297 > ^ {1}
*Collaboration diff is cool, really cool.

You win a star (Y)
yosef1992
nice map, keep up the good work ;D :D
Fhatii-chan
Annime
altought i don't like FMA, this looks like a nice beat map to play :3
SakuraMiku_old
n.n

boa!!!!! :) :)
Fhatii-chan
there was not much to do in this difficulty, really niinii Dx

but i still work in taiko map and i hope i doing ok

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu
Teara
:)

latest part + hitsounds

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
arien666
To Fhatii-chan

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Fhatii Taiko Oni].osu

Fixed timing and some hitsound as Taiko only map :3
Good luck XD
Fhatii-chan

arien666 wrote:

To Fhatii-chan

[attachment=0:aafa1]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Fhatii Taiko Oni].osu[/attachment:aafa1]

Fixed timing and some hitsound as Taiko only map :3
Good luck XD
OwO take this Diff, you did it, not me ^_- its correct
Lilly-chan_old
;3 good one :>
bmin11
Gave some change on kiais

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Jinxy
[Easy]
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.

[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all

Not modding this until you get it fixed.

[Collab]
Looks good enough.
Topic Starter
Hamuko

JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.

[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all

Not modding this until you get it fixed.

[Collab]
Looks good enough.
Done and Done \o
Shinxyn
MattWin's-
Can't expect much from a one star I guess~
01:19:797 (7) - newcombo please
Remap the last combo please, it throws the the pace you mapped for the rest of the map >:!

Medium-
Lol, please fix what JInxyjem said first, cuz the map's really messed up right now
You resnapped all notes, good, but fix hitsounds.... and....... please move the notes to 1/2 (red and white ticks) beat snap divisor, most of the notes that resnapped went on 1/4 (blue ticks)...

Collab- Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard
not constant at all xD, but the insane parts make 13mil work, I guess
Please increase overall diff by 1
The ending Kiai section could use more hitsounds please
Nevertheless, the map's fairly good

I can't mod Taiko >.<
Topic Starter
Hamuko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
bmin11
Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard
Exactly
Agnes
Hello there.
Commencing Proto-Bubble checking, go~
Discussing with blissfulyoshi about this.
This color will be things I stated. This color will be things Yoshi pointed out.

~General~
Artist: Yes.
Song: Yes.
Timing: Seems okay.
Tags: Put the guest mapper(s) name(s) in the tags for every difficulty.

Errors
Volume hitsound seems high. Mind lowering it towards the end? (Pointed out by both myself and yoshi)

[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.

01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1

[Medium]
No idea what the combo pattern Medium may be following. Overlapping notes, plays like an easy...
00:40:148 (8) - Spacing
Check using AIMod for crazy spacing errors (Ctrl-Shift-A)
Doesn't really follow a consistent pattern...

00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
To fix the consistency, I recommend mapping to the lyrics or doing some combo reflections.



[Collaboration]
Many unneeded timing sections.
The collaboration diff is sort of... weird. It fluctuates everywhere, as everyone else stated.
00:11:025 (8) - New combo.
00:45:410 (1) - Spacing fine, remove the combo for lyrics.

This is all the modding we can do for now. Use all other difficulty mods for examples on how to fix.
Make the last timing section's BPM something that divides into 171.Perferrably, it should be 21.375.


[Fhatti Taiko Oni]
Solo modded by AgnesChan. ...Huh, never witnessed a Taiko Oni map that's four stars...
May want to rename this to"Fhattu Taiko Futsuu." Seems too easy to be a true Taiko Oni map... if you REALLY want it to be Oni, follow the beat, but with intense 1/4 streams. I have never mapped a Taiko map before, but I can tell from Taiko mapping experts this isn't really Taiko Oni.


Overall: This is NOT prepared for proto-bubble. Please, fix the mistakes stated above. Remind myself or Yoshi so we can check over again for the proto-bubble. Proto-bubble delay, star delay...
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD I CAN SLEEP NOW. YESSSS

Edit: Star'd for fixes. Yay.
bmin11
Gave volume change for those useless timing sections (that was the point really....). Blame my head
Fixed the spacing error and newcombos
Now I will wait Teara to fix his timing :)
Wish you have a good night, Agnes

P.S. don't know how I should fix those fluctuates....... I'll try to fix it

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Teara
Unneeded Timing points deleted~

hitsounds finished 100%

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
bmin11
Fixed some part. Do not upload Teara's version. Mine includes it

Fixed again

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Sure
Hi, Just collab mod requested by bmin.

00:16:286 (3) - unsnapped
01:04:181 (4) - ^
01:05:760 (5) - ^
01:22:602 (3) - ^
01:46:286 (5) - ^
01:46:374 (6) - ^
01:46:637 (8) - ^

00:45:410 (7) - new combo
00:58:918 (6) - spacing

02:39:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no good.. change to (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
02:44:183 (2) - stack it with 1 correctly
03:22:604 (4) - spacing or new combo


star ;)
bmin11
and again
didn't fixed Teara's part yet

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Teara
Yk's mods~

bmin's parts are fix'd~ and mine

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Mattoi

AgnesChan wrote:

[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.

01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1
Of course, MattWin's Easy was modded by Teta268. It was meant to be easy, for starters, with easy timing and short lenght.
[attachment=0:64dcc]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:64dcc]
mago104
Nice Map :D :idea: :P :!: :x :lol: :roll:
EEeee
Map looks good, just delete the .osb folder, there is some useless Storyboarding going on, with the "fail-background" file
make sure u delete the osb, and make the "fail-background" isn't doing anything in edit/design

*star
James2250
easy has countdown on halftime while the other 3 have no countdowns
fullmetal does not need to be in tags twice
does stack leniency need to be so far to the left on 2 diff's?

easy:
looks fine

medium:
hp drain is very low
00:42:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move onto white ticks to follow lyrics
00:51:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:02:253 (8) - snap endpoint to white tick
01:03:656 (9) - ^
01:05:235 (1) - start at 01:05:060 end at 01:07:867
01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - white ticks
01:17:341 (1) - end on white tick
01:23:832 (1,2,3) - white ticks
01:31:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:393 (10) - new combo
01:53:481 (5) - ^
02:02:077 (3,4) - white ticks
02:08:218 (4) - I wouldn't end with clap

taiko:
*meh* no idea about taiko

collab:
looks nice
Mattoi
I've made the changes as James2250 said.
[attachment=0:15394]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu[/attachment:15394]

Hope I help~
anonymous_old
MattWin's Easy
SPOILER

Too short, but no errors here.

Medium
SPOILER

00:40:498 (9) : Put a slider here that ends at 00:41:727.
01:11:025 (9) : One grid-space to the left.
01:50:148 (7) : One tick later, (at 01:50:323.)

Fhatii Taiko Futsuu
SPOILER

00:40:148 (8) : Remove this beat.
00:51:025 (27,28) : Forward by 2 ticks, and make them both DON.
00:51:551 (29) : KAT.

Use less sliders in a taiko map.

Collaboration
SPOILER

good.

*SB the names of the people in the collab
arien666
Another modding for Taiko diff :3

[Fhatii Taiko Futsuu] Taiko mod
00:20:14 ~ 00:32:77 - [Suggestion] I guess this part needs to be Kiai Time part
00:31:37(48) - Set end into 00:32:77
00:34:18 ~ 00:36:99 - [Suggestion] I don't think blank part is good idea... Why don't you add some patterns?
00:40:49(9) - Set end into 00:41:55
00:59:09(44) - Move to 00:58:91
00:59:27(45) - Set end into 01:00:49
01:05:06(55) - Set end into 01:06:28
01:11:37(65) - Set end into 01:12:42
01:39:44(Kiai start) - Move to 01:40:14
02:02:60(167) - Set end into 02:04:35

Okay...
Good luck for you :3
And keep going.

Geez... I gave a star already...
ps. Don't give a kudosu for this reply :3
Doomsday
Ok, lets get on with this then

  1. Offset: 8,910 (a little eariler than yours)
  2. Like James2250 has already said, you should remove one of the "fullmetal"'s from the tags. having the same word in the tags twice is pointless.
[MATTWIN'S EASY]

No problems, but this is awfully short. You should map more of the song in this diff if you can

[MEDIUM]

-Lower the tickrate to 1. It sounds better that way to me

00:45:937 (8) - Stack this on the start of (9)?
00:54:358 (4) - Stack this on the start of (5)?
01:05:235 (1) - Move this 1/2 earlier? (and if you do this, make it 1/2 longer
01:25:762 (1) - Make this a whole beat shoter?

[FHATTI TAIKO FUTSUU]

I'm no taiko buff, but this seems fine enough, even though there doesn't seem to be many stacks or streams like the sort i normally see in taiko maps. i guess this isn't intended to be a Taiko Oni map then :P

[COLLABORATION]

00:16:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden spacing change feels awkward to me. You can keep it if you want, I just thought I'd throw that out here.
01:34:348 (2,1) - awkward-feeling jump. with all those stacks going on reading a rather sudden jump like this is a bit jarring. Perhaps close this gap up
03:56:804 (4) - Why not just change this slider for a hitcircle?

Nice map. I wasn't expecting much to be honest, so its a nice little surprise. :)

Starred
Mattoi
Well okay, as you requested, there is the SB stuff
[attachment=0:645d9]mattwinsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=1:645d9]tearasb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=2:645d9]bminsb.png[/attachment:645d9]

I'll post Teta268 and Fhatii Taiko Futsuu later.

About the .osu files you already have them.
Mattoi
[attachment=1:0e460]fhatiisb.png[/attachment:0e460]
[attachment=0:0e460]tetasb.png[/attachment:0e460]

3 attachments per post -.-
bmin11
All fixed. I still don't have the SB you told me before

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Kytoxid
[General]

Delete the .osb.
Easy and Medium have unrankably low stack leniency.
MattWin's Easy is the only diff with countdown enabled.

[MattWin's Easy]

00:39:095 (2) - I don't think it looks very good to have a hitcircle partially below a slider.

Ends a bit too abruptly, I'd recommend mapping a bit more.

[Medium]

00:30:323 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:02:253 (8) - Move this to the left a bit so that 5,6,7,8 form a diamond?
01:11:025 (9) - Slightly out of line for a square.
01:11:727 - Break seems a bit short; warning arrows appear the instant the break starts. Consider making 10 a slider, and removing the break.
01:25:762 (1) - End this 1/2 later.
01:55:937 - Random break, doesn't fit. Why have breaks in kiai, the most epic part of the song? :P
02:02:604 (4) - Doesn't end neatly on the stack.

[Collab]

00:16:990 (7) - Identical sliders in a row, one of which is 1/2 BPM, makes me sad. :(
00:28:392 (1,2) - This jump is not a likable one. :(
01:03:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I thought this part just played like and sounded like chaos. It's just so fast and so unreadable.
01:51:376 - Same thing for parts of this kiai section. Maybe I'm just a terrible osu! player.
03:20:498 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Watch for spacing.
03:34:446 (1) - Move it 1/4 later? Sounds better, plays better.
03:43:305 - End kiai here?

Star~
bmin11
Fixed my part. I didn't change the one that you couldn't read. I would consider it if two more people complains about it

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
whymeman
[Medium]

01:25:762 (1) - This spinner ends 1/2 too short. Could expand it 1/2 more with a finish.

[Collaboration]

02:36:288 (10) - Ends kinda odd like its 1/2 too short or too long.
02:44:007 (5,1) - Was stacking it like this intentional?

Also, your comboburst is a bit too wide. The max px on the width is 500, but the current one is 512. And don't forget to force default the skin....
Mianki
Medium:

01:07:86 There should be a small break between the spinner and the circle imo. A circle right after a spinner is way too difficult in this difficulty. But not a big prob.
01:19:09 ^^

Nice map and the song rocks :D
Star~
Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Teara
All mods applied, thanks.

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Detective Tuesday
Easy
01:00:148 (3) - Slider end is too far from next combo.

01:05:060 (4) - too far from (3)... Mattafack, the spacing of this combo is generally messy. Move the (3) to make an even triangular patten of (1, 2, and 3), and then throw the (4) where the (1) is.

Medium

00:49:972 (4) - Move slider end closer to (5)

01:08:569 (2) - Should be closer to (3)


Collab

00:14:006 (7) - Lower a tick.


3:06:463 - I feel like you should just start the break here. There's no reason to set up a vibe just to leave it hanging for the next 3 measures.

Nice map overall. Star for you. Good luck, your birthday approaches.
barbareela
meeeeu otooto-san *-*


Gostei do teu map, ficou bem legal... Só tem algumas partes fora de sync, maas isso tu conserta.
Quando fizer outro, me manda *-*
blissfulyoshi
Make sure to write every guest mapper's name in the tag section for every map.
Not going to mod the taiko diff.

MattWin's Easy
Change the source to Full Metal Alchemist like the other diffs
You might want to disable the countdown in this diff.

Normal mod:
I did not like the overlapping notes in the diff. (Ex: 00:27:165 (3) and 00:39:095 (2)) They detract from the aesthetic appeal of the map.

Timing section mod:
01:08:218 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Normal
You might want to disable the countdown in this diff.

Normal mod:
Again, I do not like the overlapping notes

Timing section mod:
01:59:797 - move back a quarter note

Collaboration:
I really do not like the difficulty spikes in this diff.

Normal mod:
01:54:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this was very hard for me to read

Timing section mod:
01:54:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - unneeded timing section, please remove

====================
Nice map overall. Contact me again after you fix the map (remember what I post is my sugggestion and opinion, not what I am forcing you to do). I'll consider p-bubbling it then. Star.
penaxo
good beatmap loved
im play in the ctb 8-)
Teara
Remapped a big part :>

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Starrodkirby86
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Encrypto
Well,you already have 2 golden stars,so theres nothing more to say.

Great Map,all is working fine,and I want this ranked NOW ^-^

*star*
Mattoi
All the changes to my difficulty (but it's with the same lenght), I think there are no problems~
[attachment=0:0a01b]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:0a01b]
Don't give kudosu
Agnes
Going for pubble now!
Skyripper
[collab]

00:24:182 (7) - move closer to 6 or new combo it (jump)
00:28:918 (3) - move closer to 2 or new combo
00:58:918 (6) - move closer to previous number or new combo
01:54:182 (3) - ^
03:32:779 (4) - move away from previous number or new combo
Cheedar
Nice map. \(*-*)/
Larto
Not bad.
whymeman
Alright then....
Pasonia
Sorry for quick and incomplete modding.

Offset is O - 20 to me, O - 10 to Kytoxid, so currently it's -15ms from original.

Easy:

00:39:777 (3) - Out of bounds slider end.
Topic Starter
Hamuko
Fixed, and offset is 8.909 acording to Kytoxid and CheeseWarlock. XD
bmin11
Oh shi what is going on :o This map got bubbled without fixing those mods.
Anyway Fixedexcept the timing Pasonia has suggested because I don't know if this is the fixed version or not (I lost the track)

Please fix the timing for me if it is not the fixed version


Poof, just saw the post above


P.S I was wondering why Larto just said Not bad and didn't gave a bubble and just realized he is not BAT anymore :(

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
GladiOol
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
maal
Star :3
bmin11
Nice sig
NoHitter
Overall
Add a center point in the spinner?
Delete the .osb and resubmit

MattWin's Easy
Too short, IMO

Medium
Sliders could be neater and symmetrical :
example: 00:46:101 (9), 01:35:575 (5)

Collaboration
01:39:797 - What's with the kiai time here?
03:57:564 - What's with the timing section here?

You could have made bmin11's name darker so it will not blend too much with the bg
bmin11
I fixed mine and Teara's part

You could have made bmin11's name darker so it will not blend too much with the bg
YES PLEASE!!

Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Mattoi
Due to a lot of people saying it's too short, I've made my difficulty a bit bigger. Maybe I'll extend it more.

[attachment=0:29793]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:29793]
Topic Starter
Hamuko
I want it ranked NAO '-'
lepidopodus
For Fhatii Taiko Futsuu, I think HP drain rate is a little high for Futsuu. (under 5 is fine for Futsuu as I think...)
...and MAX Overall Difficulty? even Oni don't set overall like that. I suggest to lower under 5 (5? ok, but It Futsuu...)
(Futsuu means Normal, right? So let's make them like Normal diff....)
(Well actually this seems a little harder than what we called Futsuu... but much easier than Muzukashii, as there are no 1/4 continuous notes.)

Star...
Fabricio4p
Nice map o/ star'd
Topic Starter
Hamuko

lepidopodus wrote:

For Fhatii Taiko Futsuu, I think HP drain rate is a little high for Futsuu. (under 5 is fine for Futsuu as I think...)
...and MAX Overall Difficulty? even Oni don't set overall like that. I suggest to lower under 5 (5? ok, but It Futsuu...)
(Futsuu means Normal, right? So let's make them like Normal diff....)
(Well actually this seems a little harder than what we called Futsuu... but much easier than Muzukashii, as there are no 1/4 continuous notes.)
Fixed..i think :/
Ana Kagura
:lol: :[lucky:78a2e][google:78a2e][/google:78a2e][/lucky:78a2e]twisted: :arrow: :D :)
holycow666
nice map, dude!
star'd 8-)
Felipeec
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
fabriciorby
Oi, mapa da hora né,

flw
PedroGabriel
Nice map! :)
rust45
I'm afraid I'm going to pop the pubble for only minor things too.

[Tags]
The guest mappers names should be in the tags of every diff.

[MattWin's Easy]
The "Letterbox during breaks" toggle is unchecked while it is checked in the other diffs, and I don't see the reason for this.
00:39:786 (3) - This slider goes into the scoreboard, not too big of an issue but doesn't look nice.

[Taiko]
00:20:137 - I don't think the kiai fits.

You get a star at least. Call back after some fixes, I'll recheck and pubble.
Topic Starter
Hamuko
fixed '-'

rank it NAO :cry:
rust45
Mm, yep it all checks out in my eyes.

Here is your Proto-bubble
Topic Starter
Hamuko
thanks thanks :D

CAN YOU GUYS RANK IT NAO?

or i'm gonna kill everyone
Bne-chan
Cool map -rs
Froslass
Mattwin
00:18:031 (4) - stack with the end of (2)
00:50:312 (2) - do not overlap (3)
00:53:821 (1) - huh, short spinner for easy?
00:57:330 (2) - align with (1)
00:58:031 (1) - and then align with (2)
01:06:452 (1) - same as 00:53

Medium
Hitsound volume is too high
00:20:838 (3) - new combo
00:26:101 (2) - align with (1)
00:28:382 (1,2) - spacing
00:40:487 (9) - align with (8)
00:49:259 (2) - align with (1)
00:51:014 (6) - ugly slider
00:51:014 (6,7) - this pattern sucks
00:53:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:56:628 (6) - ??????... Why this is not a new combo?
00:59:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stop making sucky patterns, plz
01:02:242 (8,9) - ugly sliders
01:15:575 (6) - align with (5)
01:21:189 (6,7,8) - inconsistent spacing
01:22:417 (9) - spacing
01:34:172 (2) - do not overlap (1)
01:44:172 (5) - align with (4)?
01:50:312 (7) - new combo and then remove next new combo

Taiko
I don't mod taiko, sorry.

Collab
This is fuckin' awesome

Medium needs A LOT of work. Easy, too. Think before requesting bubble. Star.
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Hamuko
fixed.. i think '-'
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