1. Hard (4.46 stars, 335 notes)
2. Insane (4.87 stars, 660 notes)
3. Normal (2.26 stars, 219 notes)

1. 01:20:443 (6) - 最后那个点拉到(184,168)
2. 01:25:661 (1) - 第二个点拉到(224,160) 第三个(-8,176) 第四个(24,344)
3. 02:13:661 (1,2) - 右上1格
4. 02:14:705 (3,4,5,6,7) - 往上一格

1. 00:11:574 (2) - remove new combo
2. 00:33:487 (6) - new combo
3. 00:33:748 (7) - 拉到(368,168)
4. 00:34:009 (8) - (296,80)
5. 01:48:618 (1) - 这个slider坏掉了
6. 02:42:878 (1) - ^
7. 02:13:661 (1) - 叠起来
8. 03:25:139 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
9. 03:29:313 (1,1,1) - ^

1. 00:34:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 间距缩小一点 看不出是1/4了
2. 01:34:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
3. 03:01:165 (4) - 血条挡住滑条是unrankable的

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

haha nice song star

[Normal]

1. 01:20:443 (6) - 最后那个点拉到(184,168) fix
2. 01:25:661 (1) - 第二个点拉到(224,160) 第三个(-8,176) 第四个(24,344) fix
3. 02:13:661 (1,2) - 右上1格 fix
4. 02:14:705 (3,4,5,6,7) - 往上一格 fix

[Hard]

1. 00:11:574 (2) - remove new combo fix
2. 00:33:487 (6) - new combo fix
3. 00:33:748 (7) - 拉到(368,168) fix
4. 00:34:009 (8) - (296,80) fix
5. 01:48:618 (1) - 这个slider坏掉了 fix
6. 02:42:878 (1) - ^ fix
7. 02:13:661 (1) - 叠起来 fix
8. 03:25:139 (1,1,1) - remove new combo fix
9. 03:29:313 (1,1,1) - ^ fix

[Insane]

1. 00:34:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 间距缩小一点 看不出是1/4了 fix 使用了1.3x
2. 01:34:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ fix ^
3. 03:01:165 (4) - 血条挡住滑条是unrankable的 fix

Good luck~

Teru21 wrote:

hi!

[General]
-offset : 2208
-naa.. if you want to use a soft for the hitsound.. go use soft from the begining.. (open timing setup, see the red bullets timing one? then, see the sample column, just change it to soft.)
-this song have the clap at the 2nd and the 4th white line in timing line..
-remove Easypop and betti from the tags cause its already in the Source
-remove Gumi cause its already in the artist
-03:16:295 - this point is still in kiai time
-03:23:600 - end the kiai time here here.
-i suggest you to use distance snap while mapping. so it will make your beatmap tidier. XD
-dont too much copy paste please..

[Normal]
i suggest you to make from 00:31:426 ~ 00:47:078. after that, if you want to copy paste, then copy paste.. but dont forget to change some pattern.. because if it have many copy paste pattern, it will make player bored.
00:06:382 (1) - http://i40.tinypic.com/23v0r4o.jpg
00:10:556 (1) - http://i41.tinypic.com/2rzb0vd.jpg
00:12:643 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down
00:36:122 (2) - x:224 y:144
00:36:643 (3) - x:320 y:144
00:37:165 (4) - x:408 y:176
00:37:687 (5) - x:408 y:272
if you change this^, it will looked like http://i42.tinypic.com/egsj0y.jpg
00:48:122 (1) - http://i40.tinypic.com/208uvx3.jpg
00:50:730 (5) - http://i41.tinypic.com/2vvqt6o.jpg
after you did this^ you can copy paste and rotates to the others one (from 00:52:295 ~ 01:03:774) but, change how you place a bit.. so people won't know that it's a copy pasted
01:07:948 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - 1 grid to the right
01:12:122 (6) - more tidy if you done it like http://i43.tinypic.com/2yueej5.jpg
01:13:165 (1) - x:312 y:336 if you done ^
01:13:687 (2) - x:216 y:336 if you done ^
Suggestion :
01:18:382 (2) - x:0 y:120
01:18:904 (3) - x:72 y:176
01:19:426 (4) - x:0 y:248
01:19:948 (5) - x:72 y:312
01:20:469 (6) - make the slider vertical
01:21:513 (1) - rotate it (task : ctrl + <) http://i40.tinypic.com/35idfo2.jpg
01:23:600 (2) - x:192 y:56
01:24:122 (3) - x:264 y:120
01:24:644 (4) - x:272 y:216
01:25:687 (1) - x:216 y:328
01:28:296 (3) - x:216 y:328
01:28:818 (4) - x:320 y:312
01:31:948 ~ 02:04:295 - wew.. copy paste =w= go recopy paste then change some pattern.
02:12:644 (6) - http://i40.tinypic.com/3164301.jpg
02:13:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - x:280 y:272
02:20:992 (6) - http://i43.tinypic.com/2ezhc2c.jpg
02:40:295 (4) - 1 grid to the right
02:42:904 ~ 02:50:208 - again.. go recopy paste
02:56:469 (2) - x:408 y:248
02:56:991 (3) - x:424 y:152
02:56:991 (3) - x:392 y:64
02:58:557 (6) - http://i41.tinypic.com/nf4n6f.jpg
03:00:122 (2) - x:176 y:256
03:06:904 (6) - http://i44.tinypic.com/2vi4eqc.jpg
03:10:557 (6) - make a reverse

[hard]
dont use 3 on the slider tick rate because it isn't a 1/3 beatmap
00:49:688 (4,1) - untidy. the (1) covered by (4)
00:55:425 (10) - not fit to the music
01:03:773 (6) - ^
01:46:556 (1) - 1 grid down
01:48:643 (1) - end the slider here 01:48:904
01:55:947 (10) - not fit to the music
02:00:121 (6) - ^
02:04:295 (6) - ^
02:38:730 - how bout filling this like the normal one?
02:42:904 (1) - end the slider here 02:43:165
02:46:035 (6) - not fit with the music
02:50:208 (6) - ^
03:02:730 (6) - ^
03:06:904 (6) - ^
03:26:991 ~ 03:28:556 - fill this

GL

Faust wrote:

Normal:

HP Drain & OD +1

Pretty much it. Once you've read what I've written about Insane, go through this difficulty and make any appropriate changes.

Hard:

Might want to refer to my modding on the Insane difficulty before you attempt to fix anything here, since I'd have already listed and mentioned down the various things that you should do in every difficulty in general.

- 00:13:948 (1) - Shift this slider to - 00:13:817 - instead. Of course, it should end on the white tick.

- 00:36:643 (1) - Shift this 6 grids right.

- 00:44:991 (1) - ^ Not enough space, so just move it as far left as you can.

- 00:50:208 (1) - Bad overlap. Move this away from the previous slider.

- 01:11:078 (7) - Stack properly on the previous (3).

- 01:13:165 (1) - Not really sure why you'd choose to place this here.

Well, your next chorus is pretty much a re-hash of the previous. If you're willing, make the changes I listed above.
Really isn't much to say about the ending.

Insane:

Not a bad difficulty. Hitsounded moderately well, few confusing patterns and note placements.
Easy-going and not much to complain about.

Resnap ALL your inherited timing sections. Mass-select them in Timing & Control Points and add 24 offset.

All difficulties seem to have this issue. So if you do this for Insane, do it for all.

Remember to redo the preview-point timing as well since it probably isn't snapped correctly due to offset changes.

- 00:02:730 (3) - Could look a lot better if you had the slider-points at the correct angles. Slider-shaping is actually pretty crucial to aesthetics. Having to see a beautifully crafted map is a joy to mod, and play.

Here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

- 00:03:774 (3) - Again:

SPOILER

- 00:04:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - If you heeded my recommendations above, then I also suggest you follow this:

SPOILER

- 00:06:643 (2) - Try this:

SPOILER

Remember to follow the slider-points accurately and position the sliders as I have.

- 00:07:687 (4,5) - Rather you move these towards the left.

- 00:08:208 (6,7) - Use the same sliders I provided above and replace the current ones.

Alternatively, you can just use the same sliders for any such identical ones throughout the map if you'd like. It does save the trouble if you want to consider remaking some sliders to look better.

- 00:10:817 (2,3) - Here's what I suggest:

SPOILER

- 00:11:861 (4,5,6,7) - You could reverse the selection on these. Don't select all 4 notes at once.

Select 4 & 5 and reverse the selection. Just follow through with 6 & 7.

- 00:12:643 (8) - If you took my suggestion above. Shift this note lower to avoid proximity issues.

- 00:14:600 - Add a note here as well as - 00:14:730 - . Stack them on top of (3) and add a hit-finish to the last.

- 00:34:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is honestly, very ill-advised. It's not very intuitive at all, even for a honeycomb.

Here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

- 00:35:600 (2) - If you'd like, you can remake the slider as I did:

SPOILER

Be sure to follow the points closely and you should be able to replicate this perfectly.

- 00:42:643 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - As I mentioned above.

- 00:43:948 (2) - Another suggestion:

SPOILER

I really do think you should spend a while learning to make smoother-flowing sliders.
They are very well-suited to this song and map, and you'll have gained much experience about mapping.

I'm very supportive if you think you can make better looking sliders than simply single-point ones.
Effort is always appreciated in some form or another.

- 00:48:122 (1) - Slider-points are out of the place. I don't need to add anymore now that I've said all I should.

- 00:50:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try this:

SPOILER

- 01:07:687 (4) - Stack this slider properly to the previous (2) note.

- 01:13:687 (1,2,3) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left.

- 01:17:339 (1,2,3) - Move this pattern lower. It's currently obscured by the previous slider.

- 01:35:339 (1,2,3) - Creative, at least.

I cannot say for sure if this is a good idea to keep, but if you get complains about this then you'd be better off changing it. So you should let it stay for now.

- 01:51:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You could replicate the previous stream I showed you and replace this one.

- 02:11:339 (2) - Previous slider covers this note up. Move this somewhere the player can clearly anticipate.

- 02:17:861 (1,2,3) - Too close to previous note.

- 02:19:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Shift this stream a little lower. It's too close to (3).

- 03:16:296 (1,2,3) - Shift this further away from the previous notes.

- 03:18:383 (1) - Stack this slider on the previous (2).

- 03:22:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Would be nicer if you'd have made this into a full circle.

That's it.

• - Original Title was Chic☆Chick, you can add a star symbol instead. e.g: Chic*Chick
  - Source should be Easypop only, keep BETTI in tags. You don't need to put both of them in.
  
  

  Quote from NicoNico wrote:

  EasyPopと申します。
  楽曲聴いて頂きありがとうございます。

  - Preview Time should be same on all difficulties.
  
  

  Normal - 64816
  Hard - 64816
  Insane - 64426

  - ummm..I can't even hear any hitsounds clearly ~o~ I guess you should change into Normal hitsound set, or just increase your hitsounds volume

• - It's was a bit boring. Though it was a Normal diff, you can map it better

• 00:31:164 (T) - I didn't get your meaning for 1.5x speed. Slider Velocity was crazy, doesn't fit the song too. >.< I suggest to remap this part.
  00:51:251 (6) - Choose another rhythm instead of a long 1/4 beats repeat slider will be much better. I suggest rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/cnTh (clap on (7)and(9))
  00:55:425 (10) - ^
  00:59:599 (6) - ^
  01:31:686 (T) - Same with 00:31:164
  01:42:121 (5,6,7,8,9) - Avoid these type of 1/4 slider streams in Hard too!
  01:51:773 (6) - Same with 00:51:251
  02:00:121 (6) - ^
  02:39:773 (3) - Spacing
  02:45:773 (4,5,6) - Sorry, this part looks like 4 circles, could you please move (6) like this? http://puu.sh/cnVi
  02:50:208 (6) - uh, you really love this XD
  03:02:729 (6) - ^ (should be the last one
  03:30:903 ~ 03:31:947 - Add notes here
  
  
  
  Insane
  [list:79809]- I'm interested what's the reason you set STR 3 on Insane.
  - This difficulty need works, I won't pick too much error from here, but only suggestions XD

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Some Suggestions
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Normal

OD (Overall difficulty) -1 then will be more read

00:06:381 (1) - I can see my self is bad symentric i will teach you how make perfect look this http://puu.sh/ckHG this with 4 point just bad use 5 most better look this http://puu.sh/ckJa this with 5 point is most better try you can the future you will mapper improve great also if you fix this you have carefully spacing at 00:08:468 (2,3,4) only EASY and NORMAL never do it random NEVER just you know it
00:10:555 (1) - bad symentric again try improve you can
00:52:294 (1) - ^ again bad symentric don't try use 6 point just 5 if you wanna arc slider
00:56:468 (1) - ^ (same)
01:00:642 (1) - ^ (same)
01:21:512 (1) - ^ (same)
01:25:687 (1) - ^ (same)
01:37:165 (3,5) - use stack i mean this http://puu.sh/ckLC when you fix this carefully spacing at 01:40:294 (1)
01:43:426 (4,2) - http://puu.sh/ckNK This call "overlaps" when i get 300 score or something the default skin is too big and lot read will be clean and un-overlaps if you do this 01:44:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/ckOi this lot better and gameplay good if you not like try change something you owm my opinion
01:48:642 (1) - same happened 00:52:294 (1) try 5 point
01:52:817 (1) - ^ (same)
01:56:991 (1) - ^ (same)
02:01:165 (1) - ^ (same)
02:47:078 (1) - ^ (same)
02:52:294 (3) - grid 1 right and 1 up
02:52:817 (4) - grid 1 right and 1 up
03:16:295 (1) - ^ use 5 point
03:20:469 (1) - ^

I just help you and teach how make great arc slider but you flow and relax is good also copy-paste is still fine when you fit this song is repetive lyrics if you copy arc and past is just fine but don't try same plae just change or rotate something my opinion

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Hard

HP and OD need -1

00:13:947 (1) - this i not sure is fine... just by me i think is not sure fine try expend time my opinion you can sayd no if you wish anyway just remove this spinner
00:32:468 (4,5) - this not perfect stack try click at 00:32:468 (4) and look this http://puu.sh/ckU0 the next (5) is 0.06x is not perfect and forever get 100 score pleasse make perfect 0.00x
00:35:599 (1,1,1,1) - pleasse this just incosienty combo and confused pleasse remove new combo all i mean this http://puu.sh/ckUL
00:41:860 (6) - put new combo
00:55:164 (8,9,10) - incosiente spacing fix spacing this just weird play test
01:07:947 (6) - end blue tick no no please end here at 01:08:468 also when you fix carefully spacing at 01:08:990 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:11:077 (7) - put new combo and at 01:12:121 (1) - remove new combo
01:19:425 (7) - put new combo and at 01:20:468 (1) - remove new combo
01:34:034 (6) - put new combo and at 01:34:816 (1) - remove new combo
01:54:903 (5) - put new combo
02:11:599 (7) - put new combo and at 02:12:642 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:947 (7) - put new combo and at 02:20:990 (1) - remove new combo
02:45:773 (4,5,6) - the (4),(5) when i get this above 300score this is complety hidden the (6) the repeat try change this puu.sh/ckXk then will be clean to people need konw this slider have repeat or not also carefully spacing at 02:47:077 (1)
02:57:512 (7) - put new combo and at 02:58:555 (1) - remove new combo
03:14:208 (7) - put new combo and at 03:15:251 (1) - remove new combo
03:22:555 (7) - put new combo and at 03:23:599 (1) - remove new combo

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Insane

HP and OD need -1

stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that all i think and sorry my suck eng anyway
good luck

Pokie wrote:

你的文件夾裡有三份osb喔, 其中一份包含亂碼 會導致不能解壓
只留下有用的一個 再full-submit一遍吧

-----
EDIT:

General

• - Original Title was Chic☆Chick, you can add a star symbol instead. e.g: Chic*Chick
  - Source should be Easypop only, keep BETTI in tags. You don't need to put both of them in.
  
  

  Quote from NicoNico wrote:

  EasyPopと申します。
  楽曲聴いて頂きありがとうございます。

  - Preview Time should be same on all difficulties.
  
  

  Normal - 64816
  Hard - 64816
  Insane - 64426

  - ummm..I can't even hear any hitsounds clearly ~o~ I guess you should change into Normal hitsound set, or just increase your hitsounds volume

Normal

• - It's was a bit boring. Though it was a Normal diff, you can map it better

01:44:990 (2) - Avoid overlapping circles under slider, it will cause hard-reading to newbies :p
01:58:556 (3) - ^
03:07:948 (1) - Spacing error



Hard

• 00:31:164 (T) - I didn't get your meaning for 1.5x speed. Slider Velocity was crazy, doesn't fit the song too. >.< I suggest to remap this part.
  00:51:251 (6) - Choose another rhythm instead of a long 1/4 beats repeat slider will be much better. I suggest rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/cnTh (clap on (7)and(9))
  00:55:425 (10) - ^
  00:59:599 (6) - ^
  01:31:686 (T) - Same with 00:31:164
  01:42:121 (5,6,7,8,9) - Avoid these type of 1/4 slider streams in Hard too!
  01:51:773 (6) - Same with 00:51:251
  02:00:121 (6) - ^
  02:39:773 (3) - Spacing
  02:45:773 (4,5,6) - Sorry, this part looks like 4 circles, could you please move (6) like this? http://puu.sh/cnVi
  02:50:208 (6) - uh, you really love this XD
  03:02:729 (6) - ^ (should be the last one
  03:30:903 ~ 03:31:947 - Add notes here
  
  
  
  Insane
  [list:b3afa]- I'm interested what's the reason you set STR 3 on Insane.
  - This difficulty need works, I won't pick too much error from here, but only suggestions XD

00:31:685 (3,4,5) - I wonder. This pattern appears frequently! Whoa.
01:20:468 (9) - Dividing combo for long stream wasn't bad though
01:29:860 (T) - It will be perfect if those "dons" wasn't from the song.


All right, that's all.
GUMI is great

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Megpoid Gumi means Auto-Star.

Pokie wrote:

改名字的話 最保險的方法是在該難度改完後, 保存, 直接Full-submit (不要退出
然後再改掉剩餘難度後Standard-submit

雖然那顆星並不是太重要啦XD

Tony wrote:

Hai there! You requested a mod in my queue, so here I am!

[General]
there are 4 osb files. Remove the unused ones should be fixed
Add more hitsounds (whistles and finishes). I only see claps, which is pretty boring. sorry~~

[Normal]
I see that you used clap on downbeat. The song has the clap on upbeat. I suggest adding claps on upbeat and remove those from downbeat. (to be similar like in other difficulties) fixed?
00:14:729 - add a note here or just drag the break to start there fixed
01:55:425 (5) - stack this with (3) fixed

[Hard]
00:13:947 (1) - too short spinner. make a slider out of it! fixed sorry for that..

[Insane]
00:08:208 (6) - add New Combo to split the combo pattern fixed
00:12:250 (6) - ^ fixed
00:38:208 (1) - useles New Combo. Remove it fixed
00:44:728 (1) - ^ and add New Combo here 00:46:034 (8) - fixed
00:54:380 (7) - Add New Combo to split the combo pattern fixed
01:23:337 (6) - ^ fixed
01:27:772 (8) - ^ fixed
01:46:555 (5) - ^ fixed
01:54:902 (7) - ^ fixed
02:20:990 (9) - ^ fixed
03:23:599 (9) - ^ fixed

You have a lot a work to do with the hitsounds. If you have any questions feel free to ask me in-game.
Lovely song from Megpoid Gumi! Good Luck~ cya

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww~
You requested in my queue~

General

-Ive noticed that some of the sliders... They dont end on a tick, they end in the middle on it ._. fix~
-Also, About the hitsounds... there could be more claps and whistles, you can ask me about it later on, right now im focusing on the placement and ticks. i don't know how to make a great hitsounds

Normal

-00:06:381 (1) - Make slider end at 00:07:164 and reverse. fix
-00:10:555 (1) - Make slider end at 00:11:338 and reverse. fix
-00:14:208 (1,2,3) - Move to 00:13:947, sounds better and follow the beat. year~~
[The slider tick off parts]
-00:31:426 (1) - End at 00:31:947. fix
-00:32:469 (2) - End at 00:32:990. fix
-00:33:512 (3) - End at 00:34:034. fix
-00:34:555 (4) - End at 00:35:077. fix
[Back to regular]
-00:37:686 (5) - The slider shound end at 00:38:729. fix
[Slider tick parts again]
-00:39:773 (1) - End at 00:40:294. fix
-00:40:816 (2) - End at 00:41:338. fix
-00:41:860 (3) - End at 00:42:381. fix
-00:42:903 (4) - End at 00:43:425. fix
[Regular]
-00:46:034 (5) - Should end at 00:47:077. fix
[Slider ticks]
-00:48:121 (1) - End at 00:48:642. fix
-00:50:729 (5) - End at 00:51:251. fix
[Regular]
-00:51:773 (x) - Add a note. year~~
[Slider ticks]
-00:54:903 (6) - End at 00:55:425 and reverse. fix
-00:56:468 (1) - End at 00:56:990. fix
-00:59:077 (5) - End at 00:59:599. fix
[Regular]
-01:00:121 (x) - Add a note. no~
[Slider ticks] (I think you get the idea now, just to extend it to the next white tick so i'll just tell which one)
-01:00:642 (1) fix
-01:03:251 (5) - After extending to white tick, reverse. fix
-01:07:947 (7) fix
-01:16:294 (7) fix
-01:20:468 (6) fix
-01:21:512 (1) fix
[Regular]
-01:25:164 (x) - Add a note? no~
[Slider ticks]
-01:25:686 (1)
[Regular]
-01:29:077 (1) - Move spinner to 01:29:860 and shorten it to end at 01:31:425. no~
[Slider ticks]
-01:31:947 (1) fix
-01:32:990 (2) ^
-01:34:034 (3) ^
-01:35:077 (4) ^
-01:38:207 (5) ^
[Regular]
-01:39:773 (x) - Add note. no~
[Slider ticks]
-01:40:294 (1) fix
-01:41:338 (2) ^
-01:42:381 (3) ^
-01:43:425 (4) ^
-01:46:555 (5) ^
-01:48:642 (1) ^
-01:51:251 (5) ^
[Regular]
-01:52:294 (6) - Add an note? no~
[Slider ticks]
-01:52:816 (1) fix
[Regular]
-01:56:468 (7) - Move to 01:56:338. year~
[Slider ticks]
-01:56:990 (1) fix
-02:01:164 (1) fix
-02:03:773 (5) - After extended, make it reverse.no~
-02:08:468 (7) fix
-02:12:642 (6) fix
-02:16:816 (7) fix
-02:20:990 (6) fix
[Regular]
-02:40:294 (4) - Move to 02:40:164. good!
-02:40:555 (x) - Add note. it will be unusual~
-02:40:816 (1) - Move to 02:41:338 and shorten to 02:42:642. no~ too short spinner
-02:40:816 (x) - Add note. X
-02:41:077 (x) - ^ X
-You will need to delete the inherited timing point after you do that ^
[Slider ticks]
-02:45:512 (5) - After extended, make it reverse. fix
-02:47:077 (1) ^
-02:54:381 (7) ^
-02:58:555 (6) ^
-03:02:729 (7)^
-03:06:903 (6) - After extended, make it reverse. ^
-03:16:294 (1) ^
[Regular]
-03:17:860 (x) - Add a note.no~
-03:19:816 (x) - ^ X
[Slider ticks]
-03:20:468 (1) fix
[Regular]
-03:22:034 (x) - Add a note. no~
[Slider ticks]
-03:27:773 (7)fix

Hard

-Wow, this is alot better then the other one ^^
-00:46:555 (3) - Move to 00:46:686. no~
-00:46:555 (x) - Add a note. X
-00:51:121 (5) - Delete it. no~
-00:55:294 (9) - ^ no~
-00:55:425 (9) - Lose 2 reverses, its too much. no~ i think it's better
-00:59:468 (5) - Delete it. X
-01:03:642 (5) - ^ X
-01:29:599 (1) - Move spinner to 01:29:860 and end it at 01:31:294.fix~ but end at 01:31:425
-01:37:686 (4) - Lose a revese. X
-01:47:860 (1) - Lose 3 reverses, its too much. X
-01:51:642 (5) - Delete it. X
-01:55:816 (9) - ^ X
-01:59:990 (5) - ^ X
-02:04:164 (5) - ^ X
-02:05:599 (x) - Add note? X
-02:06:121 (x) - ^ X
-02:07:164 (x) - ^ X
-02:07:686 (x) - ^ X
-02:08:077 (x) - ^ X
-02:13:947 (x) - ^ X
-02:14:468 (4) - ^ X
-02:40:816 (1) - End spinner at 02:42:642.no~
-02:45:903 (5) - Delete it. X
-02:46:034 (5) - Lose 2 reverses. X
-02:50:077 (5) - Delete it. X
-02:50:207 (5) - Lose 2 reverses. X
-02:51:512 (x) - Add note? X
-02:52:034 (x) - ^ X
-02:53:077 (x) - ^ X
-02:53:599 (x) - ^ X
-02:54:121 (x) - ^ X
-03:02:599 (5) - Delete it. X
-03:02:729 (5) - Lose 2 reverses. X
-03:06:773 (5) - Delete it. X
-03:08:208 (x) - Add note? X
-03:08:729 (x) - ^ X
-03:09:773 (x) - ^ X
-03:10:294 (x) - ^ X
-03:10:816 (x) - ^ X
-03:31:686 (x) - Add a spinner and end it at 03:32:729? NO!!!!

._. Sorry, im tried right now, ill continue modding it soon. never mind~~
I took a look at insane and its pretty good. ;D thanks~
You can always find me in game for any help or more modding or if you just wanna chat x3 >3<
Hoped this helped you ^^ Fine~
Star~ THANKS!!!

ax_pokl wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:686 (3,1) - Normal里来Jump？fix
01:55:947 (6,7) - 纯粹坑新手的。。slider吧 我覺得這樣好
[Hard]
00:40:816 (4,3) - 有点压着了。保持原樣
00:51:251 (6) - 比较难判断，拆成2个把。^
01:07:555 (6) - 加一个？不~
01:19:164 (7) - ？X
01:29:860 (1,1) - 实在太短。保持原樣
01:47:077 (2,3,4) - 来2个蓝线？fix
01:54:381 (4,7) - 这个压得大了。fix
02:15:773 (4) - 好高。。fix
03:26:729 (1,1) - 这个break还是删掉吧。我覺得這樣好
03:30:903 (1) - 来个大转盘？堅決不！
[Insane]
00:10:554 (1) - 这个位置很尴尬 還好啊~~
00:34:293 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这种类型的真的很难啊。。（不是不能读，是打不到。。）這是insane難度
00:42:641 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 每次这个都很乱，又snapp。^
00:46:685 (4,5,6) - 两次碰到这个坑爹形的。^
00:58:033 (4) - 放个蓝线如何？在头的位置加一点abnormal X
01:13:685 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ..
01:56:468 (4) - 再来一个？X
02:12:381 (5,1) - 来个蓝线？X
02:14:207 (1,2,3) - reverse? 這個不錯~
02:15:250 (1,2,3) - ^
02:49:163 (1,2,3,4) - 可以再远点。X
02:44:468 (4) - 02:52:815 (1) - 02:54:120 (4) - 蓝线？X
02:57:121 (2) - 加个？X

From ax_pokl's Mod Queue

Banana wrote:

（还记得你的）野生香蕉出现了！

insane
00:13:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - 前面有过跳了，这里最好跳一下 X
00:39:511 (1) - 复制粘贴后起码把排列改掉啊. .复制粘贴后起码把排列改掉啊. .复制粘贴后起码把排列改掉啊. . .... 初次作圖嘛
00:49:555 (6) - 建议半拍滑条 X
00:50:599 - 加个圈 ok~
00:52:033 (9) - 后面两个圈去掉，这个改半拍滑条 X
00:55:816 - 加个圈 X
00:55:947 (6) - 这个我是觉得滑条比较适合，看你怎么觉得了 保持原樣w
01:05:337 (5) - 重叠用的有点多 我覺得這樣還行吧
01:06:251 - 加个圈 ok~
好像后面基本都复制的- - 结尾和hard保持一致


hard
01:47:860 (1) - 也许提前四分之一拍 fix
01:49:164 (2) - 这种排列用多了,不一定要顺着的,来点角度 唔...還是保持這樣吧~
01:51:773 (6) - hard的话,这种用半拍滑条代替就好,不需要用这么密的(送分送的好,暂时不用改 0.0
02:16:816 (6) - 延长四分之一拍 X
03:26:729 - 这个break可去掉,map掉也好 fix

easy
00:29:860 - 这边break的尾巴拉了一下 fix
02:39:774 (3,4) - 用滑条,新手不会 fix
02:48:121 (2) - 这边好多一拍一拍的，可以有些变化 保持原樣w

排列还要继续努力,现在很没梗的感觉 初次作圖~~還有很多要學習~~我會努力的

General stuff~ wrote:

You could add the folowing tags: Vocaloid2
if you want~
It would be good if you would turn the volume up to 60 or even 65; You can hear the hitsounds better that way ^^

Normal

Song Setup stuff wrote:

-HP Drain Rate +1/+2
-Circle Size +1 (but you can keep it the way it is now if you dont want to change it )
-AP +1
-Overall Diff +2

Difficulty wrote:

-00:06:381 - Add whistle~
-00:10:555 - ^
-01:04:164 - Add hitcircle (with whistle sound, if you want ^^ )
-01:04:816 - Add clap
-01:05:867 - ^
-01:06:903 - ^
-01:10:034 - ^
-01:12:121 - ^
-01:13:164 - ^
-01:14:222 - ^
-01:15:265 - ^
-01:21:512 - Add whistle
-01:25:686 - ^
-02:00:121 - Add clap
-02:20:990 - You could place the slider like this:

SPOILER

-03:26:729 - New Combo
-03:30:930 - ^

Hard

Song Setup stuff wrote:

-HP Drain Rate +1
-AP +1/+2
-Overall Diff +1/+2

Difficulty wrote:

-From 00:50:990 to 00:52:034 - Add whistle
-From 00:55:164 to 00:56:208 - ^
-From 00:59:338 to 01:00:381 - ^
-From 01:37:686 to 01:38:077 - ^
-From 01:51:512 to 01:52:555 - ^
-From 01:59:860 to 02:00:903 - ^
-From 02:04:034 to 02:05:077 - ^
-From 02:45:773 to 02:46:816 - ^
-From 02:49:947 to 02:50:990 - ^
-02:57:512 - New Combo
-From 03:02:468 to 03:03:512 - Add whistle
-03:14:208 - New Combo

Insane

Song Setup stuff wrote:

-HP Drain Rate +1
-Overall Diff +1/+2 (but OD 8 is what I recomend for Insane difficulties)

Difficulty wrote:

-From 01:08:208 to 01:08:860 - Add whistle
-From 02:04:686 to 02:05:208 - ^
-From 02:50:599 to 02:51:121 - ^
-From 03:07:294 to 03:07:816 - ^

This is all I could find, I hope it halp'd ya~! ^^
PS: I love all songs with Gumi, especial this one~
+1 star

General stuff~ wrote:

You could add the folowing tags: Vocaloid2 fine~
if you want~
It would be good if you would turn the volume up to 60 or even 65; You can hear the hitsounds better that way ^^ I think it's fine~

Normal

Song Setup stuff wrote:

-HP Drain Rate +1/+2 fine~
-Circle Size +1 (but you can keep it the way it is now if you dont want to change it ) don't want to change
-AP +1 fine~
-Overall Diff +2 fine~

Difficulty wrote:

-00:06:381 - Add whistle~ ok~
-00:10:555 - ^ ok~
-01:04:164 - Add hitcircle (with whistle sound, if you want ^^ ) X
-01:04:816 - Add clap ok~
-01:05:867 - ^ ^
-01:06:903 - ^ ^
-01:10:034 - ^ ^
-01:12:121 - ^ ^
-01:13:164 - ^ ^
-01:14:222 - ^ ^
-01:15:265 - ^ ^
-01:21:512 - Add whistle fine~
-01:25:686 - ^ ^
-02:00:121 - Add clap fine~
-02:20:990 - You could place the slider like this: yes~

SPOILER

-03:26:729 - New Combo ok~
-03:30:930 - ^ ^

Hard

Song Setup stuff wrote:

-HP Drain Rate +1 fine~
-AP +1/+2 ^
-Overall Diff +1/+2 ^

Difficulty wrote:

-From 00:50:990 to 00:52:034 - Add whistle X
-From 00:55:164 to 00:56:208 - ^ ^
-From 00:59:338 to 01:00:381 - ^ ^
-From 01:37:686 to 01:38:077 - ^ ^
-From 01:51:512 to 01:52:555 - ^ ^
-From 01:59:860 to 02:00:903 - ^ ^
-From 02:04:034 to 02:05:077 - ^ ^
-From 02:45:773 to 02:46:816 - ^ ^
-From 02:49:947 to 02:50:990 - ^ ^
-02:57:512 - New Combo No~
-From 03:02:468 to 03:03:512 - Add whistle X
-03:14:208 - New Combo X

Insane

Song Setup stuff wrote:

-HP Drain Rate +1 yes~
-Overall Diff +1/+2 (but OD 8 is what I recomend for Insane difficulties) sure~

Difficulty wrote:

-From 01:08:208 to 01:08:860 - Add whistle X
-From 02:04:686 to 02:05:208 - ^ ^
-From 02:50:599 to 02:51:121 - ^^
-From 03:07:294 to 03:07:816 - ^ ^

This is all I could find, I hope it halp'd ya~! ^^ yes~
PS: I love all songs with Gumi, especial this one~ thanks~
+1 star Nice!!!

Thanks mod~ pretty nice song right?

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ I'm here to help your map ~

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Lack of hit sound. and why is the lyric so small~ ><" please don't use too much scale. xD

[Normal]
Approach Rate +1 ok
00:14:729(x) = add note + finish? X
00:31:425(1) = use finish instant of clap. fine~
00:32:468(2) = remove clap. it doesn't fit the sound. fine~
00:37:686(5) = ^ ^
00:40:816(2) = ^ ^
00:46:034(5) = ^ ^
00:46:555(5) = ^ ^
01:00:121(x) = ^ what?
01:04:845(1) = use finish instant of clap. fine~
01:21:512(1) = add finish. fine~
01:31:947(1) = use finish instant of clap. ^
01:48:642(1) = add finish ^
01:56:990(1) = ^ ^
02:13:686(1) = ^ ^
02:22:034(x) = add note + finish? X
02:24:903(1) = add finish what?
02:59:599(1) = ^[/color] ok~
03:12:615(2,3,4) = This is too much for "normal". Please use distance snap. fix~
03:16:294(1) = add finish ok~
03:31:425(2,3) = remove note and do it like this?? http://puu.sh/fdGf X

[Hard]
Overall Difficult -1 fine~
Timing = 01:56:729 remove Kiai time yes~
01:04:816(1) = add finish fine~
01:56:990(1) = ^ ^
02:22:034(x) = how about add note here ? + add finish X
02:43:903(1) = add finish ???
02:59:599(1) = ^ X
03:16:294(1) = ^ fine~
03:26:990 = This feels very weird . how about add some note here?? do it like this? http://puu.sh/fdwA yes~
03:31:164 = This is also feels weird? do it like this? http://puu.sh/fdx2 X

[Insane]
Approach Rate +1 fine~
Overall Difficult -1 ^
00:52:164(10) = remove note because there no beat or vocal here? X
01:00:512(10) = ^ X
01:04:816(4) = add finish fine~
01:21:512(1) = ^ X
01:52:686(10) = remove note because there no beat or vocal here? X
01:56:468(4) = move it to 01:56:338 yes~
01:56:990(1) = add finish fine~
02:01:034(10) remove note X
02:22:034(x) = add note + finish X
02:42:903(1) = add finish fine~
02:46:995(10) = remove note X
02:59:599(1) = add finish X
03:03:642(10) = remove note X

This map is great! It would be a shame if it is lack of hit sound. >w<" >w<
Okay, That's all! thx~
Good luck! Please ranked this map ne? >w<" i will make the dream come true!! Trust me!!!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Midasmens ~

Mod time for my Queue ~


Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change same 'PreviewTime : 64816' in all diff. All fix~
2. Open phonic diff test file : SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046.
   Need fixed this error,change 1.4 it's ok.

[Insane]

1. 00:48:121 - Add finish. no~ too noisy
2. 00:52:294 - ^ ^
3. 00:49:816 - Add a note to here will be better. no~
4. 00:50:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try like this,more curve. fix~
   
   

   134,212,50989,5,0
   146,182,51120,1,0
   166,160,51250,1,0
   194,141,51380,1,0
   220,128,51511,1,0
   256,124,51641,1,0
   292,128,51773,1,0
   318,141,51903,1,0
   346,160,52034,1,0
   366,182,52164,1,0
   378,212,52294,1,0

5. 01:25:946 (2) - Try some down this? score touch HP bar. fix~
6. 01:48:642 - Add finish.

[Normal]

1. 01:31:947 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.

That's all ~

Good luck ~

S h i a wrote:

;)

[Normal]
00:41:860 (3) - 这个尾巴会touch HP bar. 建议改个方向或者压低一点 fix~
00:51:773 (1) - 跟slider有叠置 为了美观可以改个方向 为了不产生spacing warning 后面00:52:294 (2,3) - 也改下位置 把slider調整了一下
00:59:077 (5) - 同00:41:860 fix~
01:03:251 (5) -

SPOILER

fix~
02:20:990 (6) - 让这个Slider和5之前的空隙好看一点 fix~
<3 good normal

[Hard]
00:51:121 (5) - 删掉这个NOTE？fix~
00:52:816 (2,3) - 2跟1有个不好看的重叠 这样好点

SPOILER

fix~
00:54:381 (5) - newcombo fix~
00:55:294 (9) - 同00:51:121 然后00:55:425 (5) - 的尾巴往左下45度 fix~
00:59:468 (5) - 同00:51:121 fix~
01:03:642 (5) - 删掉 fix~
01:04:816 (3) - newcombo? 建议 fine~
01:28:816 (4) - 提前至01:28:686 (4) 结束时间不变 fix~
01:37:686 (4) - 尾巴挡住了 换个方向 fix~
01:51:642 (5) - 删掉 fix~
01:55:816 (5) - ^ ^
01:56:729 (7,8) - ^ ^
01:59:990 (5) - ^ ^
02:45:903 (5) - ^ 02:46:034 (5) 顺带尾巴调整下 fix~
02:50:077 (5) - ^ ^
03:02:599 (5) - ^ ._. >_<