1. Easy (0.57 stars, 51 notes)
2. Hard (4.86 stars, 180 notes)
3. Normal (2.97 stars, 104 notes)

S i R i R u wrote:

sorry for late

Just my opinion ! you can ignore which point you don't like it !

and sorry for my bad english skill.


Normal

I don't see you use tick for c hit sounds, maybe you wanna try tick late 1 ?
sorry if you need 2 but i can't find them

same opinion about 3rd color for ① on last part ( same with MOD in Hard ) done


Hard

same suggestion with Normal about tick late

00:13:573 (3) - I think delete this note and add at 00:13:351 ~ 00:13:573 is matching with the song nty
00:20:018 - I know this is your style but how about to add note here + c clap sound ? :3 done

01:34:240 ~ 01:37:795 - how about to add spin here ? nty



01:05:795 (1) - 01:07:573 (1) - 01:09:351 (1) - 01:11:129 (1) -
01:12:907 (1) - 01:14:684 (1) - 01:16:462 (1) - 01:18:240 (1) -

maybe try to add 3rd color for these point ? okay


(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

YodaSnipe wrote:

Normal

Looks fine to me ^^

Hard

00:27:351 (2) - Slider up 1 right 1 nty
00:28:018 (3) - Slider right 1 nty
00:30:240 (1) - Hitcircle down 1 nty
01:29:240 (6) - Feels slightly off, I think it might need to be moved 1 tick over on the timeline. it correct where it is
01:30:129 (8) - Same here is it because its a slider?

Good map ^^

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions.

[General]
(Not Yet) Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Each mapset must have at least two osu!standard difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
Although there are exception, most map follow this rule.
I consider that it is better to make Easy diff.
or,try more easier [Normal] diff?　i made it easier

Does set the preview point? done

[Normal]
01:20:018 (1)　　add finish? done

[Hard]
00:47:129 (2)　　add whistle? done
01:20:018 (1)　　add finish? done

Sorry, I can't find a problem..
I wish your map is Ranked. star~~
Bye~

1. maybe add a pause background? because buttons don't look nice in my skin

1. 00:19:573 (1,2) - add finish ?
2. 00:28:462 (4) - I think it's not good to use "kick slider" here, changing to 2 sliders is better
3. 00:30:240 (1) - add finish
4. 00:51:573 (1) - ^
5. 00:55:129 (1,3) - ^
6. 01:08:018 (1) - I think should use reverse, and add finish here
7. 01:16:240 (2,1) - I think should use same color to more readable for new players
8. 01:34:240 (1) - maybe change into a longer slider or spinner? because BG has some voice

1. 00:10:240 (3) - put in the center of the slider circle ?
2. 00:12:018 (3) - ^
3. 00:13:129 (2,3) - use circle slider ?
4. 01:34:240 (1) - like normal

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

0x57CB36 wrote:

Hi, from your queue

nice song~


[Skin]

1. maybe add a pause background? because buttons don't look nice in my skin

i'll think about it

[Normal]

1. 00:19:573 (1,2) - add finish ? done
2. 00:28:462 (4) - I think it's not good to use "kick slider" here, changing to 2 sliders is better
3. 00:30:240 (1) - add finish done
4. 00:51:573 (1) - ^ done
5. 00:55:129 (1,3) - ^ done
6. 01:08:018 (1) - I think should use reverse, and add finish here Not too sure what you meant
7. 01:16:240 (2,1) - I think should use same color to more readable for new players breaks the "colour hax"
8. 01:34:240 (1) - maybe change into a longer slider or spinner? because BG has some voice I tried this at first, but i didn't really like it

[Hard]

1. 00:10:240 (3) - put in the center of the slider circle ?
2. 00:12:018 (3) - ^
3. 00:13:129 (2,3) - use circle slider ?
4. 01:34:240 (1) - like normal

Good luck~

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
the offset is totally wrong , it need to be about 1821(+25). I see the post before and notise that you changed mp3 file , do you forgot to fix timing after mp3 changed.. my bad
BG is 640x480 png file.. better to change to 800x600 jpg file done
Normal diff is 3.05 stars.. and the diff's design is not that easy to play as a map's easiest diff imo.. I strongly suggest you to make an Easy diff , for better diff spread

[skin]
you need to add a score-comma.png done
you should add sliderboder , add this code under the [Colours] , like this http://puu.sh/cim1

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

done

[Normal]
HD-1 , OD-1 , if you really don't want to add an Easy diff done
00:19:573 (1,2,1) - I don't know why to use 1.5x ds here , it might be confusing for newbies to read rhyme
01:16:240 (2,1) - change to slider? it is hard for newbies to play imo

[Hard]
OD-1? it is kinda too high for this diff imo done
00:19:129 (4) - move this up a bit plz , it is nearly out of the screen.. done
00:27:351 (2,3) - spacing between this 2 sliders looks too small.. it is same to play but I'd like to see the spacing larger done
00:44:462 (1) - this slider is out of the screen , need to fix done
00:45:351 (2) - try to end at 00:45:684 - ? sound much better to me nah, i like where it is now
00:51:129 (1,2,3,4,5) - move this right and down a bit ? the spacing between 00:50:684 (7,1) - is too small when playing done
00:54:240 (3) - make this slider arc a bit? the end of it is nearly out of screen done
01:12:240 (3) - this slider touch the HP bar.. move it down a bit plz done
01:18:240 (1,1,2,3) - this is really confusing , the spacing is the same but the rhyme is not. move 01:19:018 (2) - up a bit , or it is really easy to read as it's at 01:19:129 - done
01:23:573 (1,2,3) - oh , I don't know why you always like to put objects near the edge of the screen.. I don't think it is a good idea , you'd better fix this..done
01:33:351 (7,8) - I suggest move this left a bit to make 8 is in the middle of the screen and line up with 01:34:240 (1) - , it will looks much better done

nice combo color using
but the diff spread is kinda bad , Normal diff is too hard to play as the easiest diff imo
and there are too many objects very near the edge of the screen , I think it isn't good
if you want to add Easy diff for better diff spread , I'm glad to come back to this map :3

GigaClon wrote:

from #modreqs
From 01:02:265 (1) - to 01:19:820 (5) - the combos are all the same color. They should alternate like the rest of the song.