1. Basic (3,66 stars, 139 notes)
2. Heavy (4,96 stars, 268 notes)
3. ouran's Standard (4,69 stars, 161 notes)
4. Touche's Beginner (1,92 stars, 87 notes)

L_P wrote:

Hi there~

[BASIC]

07,861 add 1 note same as the position of note 2
09,516 add 1 note same as the position of note 2
11,171 add 1 return?
14,895 add 1 note
50,479 change to slider, like the previous one
54,927 change to slider, end at 58,754
105,374 change to slider, end at 105,788
114,063 note 4 move to note 2 place, note 5 move to note 4 place
121,925 change to slider, end at 122,339
133,510 end with spinner??

and i think the rhythm is quite empty. you can actually add more note between beats.

[HEAVY]

you seem to love notes very much, but i think sometimes slider is easier for player to catch the beat.

05,378 slider change with the next one? (exchange both slider on timeline) adjust the spacing, though
11,999 the three notes are quite nice but make the spacing larger?
15,516 quite messy... change position: note 4 to note 2's place
note 5 to note 6
16,343 add note same position with note 7
19,033 those two notes change to slider?
19,343 those notes change to slider
21,101 delete slider, add 1 note only, same position as the previous one
24,412 change to slider, end at next beat (slider position same as the note)
42,167 add slider, with 1 return and end at 43,031
44,169 and 44,479 combine , change to slider?
53,996 please add note
56,271 and 56,582 notes change to slider
57,927 change to slider, end at 57,409
102,064 onward s many notes yo....
126,476 the note seem to be too high wat


Yeah done~ STAR !

akrolsmir wrote:

Nice- short and sweet 3 min total playing time.

General:
The circle in the center is definitely not in the exact middle- when you spin it it moves around quite noticeably. I don't skin so I don't know how to fix this myself, but try asking around in #modhelp.
Do you really want to leave in the "Oh No!" sound? It seemed distracting IMO


Basic:
00:23:584 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you're trying to make a circle with this pattern, you'll need to move (6,7) left and up a bit.
00:31:859 (3) - Minor nitpick, but you can make symmetric by moving the middle node left 1 grid
00:43:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Dunno if the weird timing is acceptable in a normal. Also, I dislike the entire pattern because the sharp angle and overlap between 5 and 6 looks unpleasant, try something else?
00:51:306 (4) - The arcs before were nice, but this L-shape looks out of place. Try something that is part-straight and part curved, maybe?
00:56:271 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to above, I dislike the sharp angle and overlap of (2,4)
01:02:478 (1,2,3) - Little bit confusing for the easiest difficulty
01:07:029 (1) - See the note below about the final spinner.
01:14:063 (4,5) - Spaced too closely (0.69x)
01:22:752 (1) - Here to end- Do you really have to copy paste here? It's only another 10 seconds and it would feel really fresh if you could come up with different patterns. That said, if you don't remap these, make sure to make the same adjustments as you do previously.
01:33:510 (1) - Definitely on the short side... at the very least, start it on 01:33:303, though that doesn't help much. maybe delete (2,3) and starting it where (2) used to be.

Pretty good on this map, a bit on the hard side for the easiest diff in a map though.

Heavy
00:44:686 (5) - Consider using 0.5x slider velocity here
00:45:927 (1,2) - Try not to have the path of (1) touch (2)
00:47:582 (1,2) - ^
00:52:134 (1) - Not new combo
00:53:892 (4) - Why not just split this into 2 notes instead?
00:56:065 (1) - Looks too close to (2), try:

SPOILER

00:57:099 (4) - Slider looks to sharp... but at least, make it symmetrical by moving down the middle node
01:00:719 (4) - Delete- plays a lot better without this since the spacing is now consistent between the next few notes. kind of like what you did at 01:02:271 (1,2,3,4) (which, btw, I think looks awesome)
01:05:581 (1,2) - Same stuff about paths touching circles
01:06:822 (1) - This is even shorter than the other... Autoplay can't even get 2000 on this which is against the rules, I think.
01:10:339 (3,5) - Make these two symmetric, and make one a copy of the other.
01:15:718 (4,5,6) - Spacing issues. Consider using a higher grid level.
01:20:270 (4) - Move so it's mirroring (2), and adjust accordingly?
01:21:097 (1) - try 2 grids right and up, for a slightly different angle
What I said previously about copy+pasting applies- I'd highly recommend not doing it, but if you do make sure to update that section as well whenever you adjust anything.(probably by copy+pasting again)

Pretty good maps, especially considering there's only 1 other mod on this so far! Do post on more queues so you can get more feedback.

Edit: Forgot to run through AIBat.

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[Storyboard]
Missing Skin Files:
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png
spinner-background.png
spinner-approachcircle.png

Skin Dimensions:
hit0.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
hit50.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
hit100.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
hit300.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.

[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Basic] : 80477
- [Heavy] : 53582

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[Difficulty: Basic]
Breaks:
00:52:747 - The break here is 669 ms long, which is shorter than the recommended 750 ms.


[Difficulty: Heavy]
Snapping:
00:15:721 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:24:409 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:27:926 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:28:857 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:29:788 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:31:650 (5) - Unsnapped circle.

Spinner Length:
01:06:822 (1) - The spinner here is 621 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms.

So you'll want to fix the snapping, the skinning, and the preview times. Once you get these down, I'll come back and star it!

x3Touche wrote:

I'll tomorrow makes u a Easy diff c: Please wait for them

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Mañana yo te hago una Easy duff c: Espérala por favor

x3Touche wrote:

No le cambies nada, está aun en WIP (Va al 48%, mañana la termino sí o sí c: )

x3Touche wrote:

Lista, para pending DD

Yourmessageintooshortduh .

Crimmi wrote:

I was gonna save this for my version of this song but you can have this:

Ekaru wrote:

General:

-Make the purple and green combo colors a bit lighter; they're sometimes hard to see ATM and blend in with the BG, but making them a tad lighter would fix that problem.

Heavy:

00:04:965 (3,4,5) - I would move (4) down a bit to continue with the curve you started with (1,2,3).
00:06:827 (2) - Similarly, move (2) to the left a bit to flow into the curve you have with (3,4,5).
00:38:066 (1,2,3) - (3) is under (1)'s end; this makes (3) hard to see.
00:51:720 (1,2,3,4) - The music here is begging for jumps. Can you please add some here? ^_^
00:54:616 (1) - This slider should end on the beat (or white tick); there really isn't anything to support the blue tick for this slider.
01:05:581 (1,2,3) - Oh, I used this pattern when I started mapping 3 years ago! Unfortunately, most people hate this pattern; the positioning of (3) under the slider end makes you think it's right after (1), so you don't notice the (2), and then you cry. This is a very easy map, so I would just move (3).
01:06:512 (4) - (4) should be on the white tick; the way you mapped this part gives it a "vocal" feel, but this goes against the vocals here.
01:21:097 (1) - Again; end on the white tick, please.
01:32:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section should be full of jumps.

I kinda liked this, so have a kudosu star!

x3Touche wrote:

Un pequeño modding para tí :3

[Basic]

00:59:788 : (1-2-3) se verían mejor orientados hacia afuera, por ende el circle 2 muevelo 2 a la derecha y 3 hacia abajo (Usando grid 3)
01:26:683 : (4) estaría mejor siguiendo el ritmo de todo ese combo, por ende déjalo en 01:26:890

En las otras diffs no vi nada para modear, eso sí evita usar tanto el hitsound "Finish" ya que se escucha mal D: ponle algún sonido en soft como sugerencia :3

Eso n_n (Me parece raro que nadie modee mi diff xD)

p3n wrote:

[General]
- Is ouran still doing the standard diff? If so please move this mapset to "work in progress" on your next upload. Move it to pending after all maps are "finished". Finished :B

- The skin you used is not done very well: Spinner is not centered and hitbursts are too wide. Those are the two most obvious things you should fix. Also: You will need a matching approaching circle. You can just use the standard one from the template set you can download in the updater but the file should be included in your skin to prevent mismatching with custom skin packs. Don't forget to do a full submit to add new files. Ok, I'll ask touche to mod this, specially the spinner... the histburst it's ok i think o.o, I'll add the approach circle.

- Tune down the comboburst soundfiles a bit. They are louder than your song file. I don't know how D:!

- Maybe remove "Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA2" from the source and add it to the tags instead. The song title is way too long otherwise ("Dance Dance Revolution SuperNOVA2 (TERRA) - STARS(Re-tuned by HAL)-DDR EDITION-") barely fits the screen width... Changed, the source now is DDR SuperNova2


[Touche' Beginner]
- Use a fixed SV here please...It is completely unnecessary to use 1,20x SV just to reduce it with 3 different custom multipliers. I suggest sticking to 0,8x - 1,0x SV (use whatever feels right for you and change in the timing tab).
- You will have to remap the complete map with the new settings and be sure you won't have to change SV or distance spacing again - test your settings before you start all the work.

00:06:620 (1,2,3) - do not switch between different spacings randomly. It is best to stick to one fixed spacing for beginners difficulties distance snapping). Depending on your used SV and your overall mapping style (mainly 1/1 tapping or vocals/melody follow) you should use something that allows for your dominant beatpattern (in this case 1/1 beat distances) to not overlap and look clean.
00:19:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - beatplacement is not "wrong" but the constant in-line 1/1 circle tapping is very boring and not what you would call "good mapping". Keep the beat in mind but try to map the most dominant part of the song especially for beginners difficulties. At least support the vocals by using sliders where they fit the hold outs and lyrics.
00:26:480 (1,2,1) - Most objects can be placed better by using curved shapes and interesting placements instead of boring straight lines and stacks: http://puu.sh/5EqO http://puu.sh/5EqQ just random examples. Create some fitting and interesting patterns by using all of the editors features (rotate, mirror, etc.)
00:36:411 (5,6) - Maybe use the playfield a bit more and don't just stack stuff in the middle
01:27:718 (1,2,3) - The idea is very good but execution is lacking. To create patterns like this use a very precise top slider with the top beeing exactly in the middle (you can move around the complete combo afterwards), copy paste it to the correct timespot and rotate it by 60° clockwise, place it without gridsnapping until you are satisfied with the shape, copy paste the new slider and mirror horizontal. The result will differ depending on how good the source slider is so just keep trying until you like it.

You will have to remap the whole thing because of the SV-mess anyway so while you are at it try to make it as interesting but still as clean as possible. This is not an easy thing to do and I know that. Just don't give up. Ya po wn deja de flojear y modea la diff! xD


[Basic]
- Whenever possible try to map the big white ticks.
- It is great to use your custom sample for the upbeats but it needs to be more consistent. Please check the different parts for missing claps on the upbeats.

00:14:481 (5,1) - use slider instead to at least cover the big white tick, use custom clap on start + end if you change it
00:16:550 (X) - add note
00:16:964 (1) - use custom clap on start + end
00:19:446 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - use some sliders or at least map the big white ticks
00:26:067 (7) - maybe use an upbeat slider instead (end on big white tick)
00:33:101 (X) - add note
00:33:514 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - use some clever sliders inside this beatpattern to support the vocals/melody
00:39:721 (1) - spinner makes ablsolutely no sense here, a possible use for a spinner would be 00:38:066 - 00:39:307 but here it just doesn't fit in any way. Use a spinner at the suggested timeframe if you want but definetely map this following part from 00:39:721 on properly
00:46:341 (1) - if you really want to use lazy spinners here instead of mapping it properly you should use 2 combined spinners: 1st from 00:46:341 - 00:47:582 and a 2nd spinner from 00:47:996 - 00:49:237
01:29:580 (X) - add note?
01:32:269 (1) - maybe use a slider from 01:31:855 up to this point to better match the song

Most of the boring 1/1 taps could be improved by using some sliders that support the vocals maybe you can improve it a bit overall.


[Heavy]
- Hitsounds need a complete overhaul. Most finish hitsounds sound really off (00:04:137 (5)) as you randomly use them on the upbeats. You can be 90% sure to use finish hitsounds correctly if you place them on big white ticks.
- Using random soft-whistles can throw the player off the beat and it sounds just bad (00:52:961 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6)).
- I suggest reading some guides to generally improve your mapping and hitsound usage.

00:54:616 (1,...) - the first KIAI is mapped alot better than the previous part. Try to improve the rest of the map the same way
00:54:616 (1) - if you implement jump patterns like this one make sure to at least have consistent jump-spacing inside the combo (you have 1,6x and 2,3x in one pattern and it doesn't play very good, stick to one distance inside the pattern)

Wow! thanks a lot for the mod! The map it'sbetter now, specially in the hitsounds (i'm very bad at that xD) I did almost everything

Mapset still needs much work but the basics are here so keep it up.

ouranhshc wrote:

Here is my diff

regenz wrote:

Form net & 2004 mod thread

General

- Skin Your spinner circle is bad it 's not well round when spinning. Touche will fix this
- The slider ball ( arrow one in your skin ) not change direction when slider is returning . ( I 'm not pro with this but i donno how to make it
return sorry ) I don't know how too

Beginner

00:45:514 (4) - remove this finish the correct position of this fin is 00:46:341
00:52:961 (5) - fin head ( finish sound at start of slider )
00:54:616 (1) - ^
00:54:616 (1) - remove fin form tail
00:57:927 (3,4,5,6) - saperate this set is better than stack
01:21:097 (1) - fin head

Ya tuch tienes más trabajo ò0ó!

Basic

00:06:620 (1) - fin ( add finish sound )
00:09:930 (1) - fin head and tail
00:11:585 (1) - ^
00:19:860 add note
00:23:170 ^ ( if you think add note is make it hardder you can change it to slider return and it's easier instead of pure circles.
00:26:480 add note + fin
00:33:101 (1) - fin
00:36:411 (4) - ^
00:36:825 (1) - fin centre
00:38:066 (2) - fin
00:39:721 (1) - fin head
00:49:651 (4) - ^
00:54:616 (1) - ^
00:59:995 (4) - remove fin
01:01:237 (2) - fin head
01:04:547 (2) - ^
01:07:029 (1) - fin
01:31:028 (2) - fin head
01:31:855 (4) - ^
01:32:683 (5,6) - fin
01:33:510 (1) - fin

Fixed!

ouran 's standard


00:39:721 (1) - fin head
00:48:824 (6) - fin tail
00:57:927 (3) - is better to move this slider to other position it's very close to hp bar

nice half vocal map

I have to contact you :B

Heavy

same hitsound suggestion as Basic

00:15:723 (5,6) - can unstack this it's a bit confuse ?
00:44:686 (5) - this slow is a bit hard to read new combo (maybe solve it )
00:52:961 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - normal hitsounds more fit i think.
00:55:858 add note
01:06:822 (5,1) - i think very long slider is not fit can change other things ? spinner is fine In another mod someone said me to delete the spinners there...
01:31:855 add note + fin

vocal map part is nice