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eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-14T22:39:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 10, 2009 at 6:01:41 PM

Artist: Ai Ootsuka
Title: Planetarium
BPM: 99.02
Filesize: 7254kb
Play Time: 04:37
Difficulties Available:

Hard (3.9 stars, 458 notes)
Insane (4.44 stars, 573 notes)
Normal (2.48 stars, 249 notes)

Download: Ai Ootsuka - Planetarium
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The picture!! What's wrong with it...

Last edited by eirrol 2009-07-10T22:12:20+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

hunnykilla

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hunnykilla 2008-03-15T05:48:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

peppy

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peppy 2008-03-15T07:44:47+00:00

Same here. The song title is also Planetarium

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-15T18:51:30+00:00

Sorry, I just noticed that I spelled the title wrong. Reuploaded.

peppy

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peppy 2008-03-15T19:04:02+00:00

99bpm..
around 6134ms offset

resnap recalc recheck.

your beat placement is mostly good, so i think if you fix the timing this has a chance of turning out nicely.

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-17T21:19:21+00:00

Well, the offical piano score says it's 100 BPM. But I changed it, also fixed some spacing errors. Please have a look again! I'm putting hope on this one!

mtmcl

mtmcl 2008-03-18T12:15:51+00:00

Downloaded the map but it doesn't work. Seems the mp3 file name is in some freaky gibberish language. Unfortunately, Osu! doesn't speak freaky gibberish language.

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-18T17:57:00+00:00

Whoa!! I'll change it right now! Don't say it in such mean way!

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peppy 2008-03-18T19:20:57+00:00

Oh I forgot to mention that... my brain just automatically went and renamed it after the download

mtmcl

mtmcl 2008-03-22T23:17:34+00:00

You may have misread peppy's offset.

6134 ms.

Fix it.

(Grrrr... I'm mean.)

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-22T23:17:51+00:00

This time it should be good!!

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Echo 2008-03-23T11:01:02+00:00

99.00 is definitely too slow when you get to the end. Try 99.02. Don't forget to check through after you resnap and recalculate!

I think the map design is good, but a little untidy at times, eg. at the beginning 1, 3 and 5 are different distance from each other. Imo it would look better if they were equal.

Starred.

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-23T19:41:09+00:00

OH MY GOD
99?99.02?100?!
Or is it not constant?
I changed it to 99.02 and fixed spacing errors!

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Echo 2008-03-25T00:35:02+00:00

OK, I'm picking on some very small details now, but it would sound a lot better if the following were fixed:

Slider at 2:27 should be made shorter so it ends at 2:27.94
Slider at 3:10 should be made longer so it bounces at 3:10.96 and ends at 3:12.18
Slider at 3:15.21 should have its length adjusted while beat snap divisor is at 1/6, so that it ends exactly at 3:16.42
Beats 3 and 4 at 3:35.81 should be moved a quarter beat earlier to 3:35.66
Similarly, beats 1 and 2 at 3:38.23 should also be moved a quarter beat earlier

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-25T00:36:19+00:00

Thanks. I've fixed that.

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Echo 2008-03-25T01:25:06+00:00

Echo49 wrote:
Slider at 3:10 should be made longer so it bounces at 3:10.96 and ends at 3:12.18

You missed this one

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-25T01:25:31+00:00

おおおおおおおおお
Sorry, now I got it

PS wow, everyone is online...

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Echo 2008-03-25T01:53:38+00:00

eirrol

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eirrol 2008-03-25T02:06:52+00:00

Thanks!!

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awp 2008-03-28T02:48:34+00:00

Fantastic song and appropriately fantastic beatmap to it.

The only thing is, you've got a few breaks that aren't even a second long - are those necessary? And five minutes long with only one four second break?

You are cruel.

now let's see some lighter difficulties =3

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