This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 22 de agosto de 2010 at 17:17:26

Artist: Kajiura Yuki
Title: A Song Of Storm And Fire
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle
Tags: Tsubasa Chronicle a song of storm and fire anime Clamp
BPM: 140,02
Filesize: 9452kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0,75 stars, 105 notes)
2. Normal (2,69 stars, 174 notes)

Download: Kajiura Yuki - A Song Of Storm And Fire
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello everyone, this is my first map hope it has not so much wrong xD. enjoy and leave a comment =D.


Edit: 20/08 Easy added

General

Tell me what Clamp means in tag. Remove all other tags in all difficulties. One of your tags is a source and the other is the name of the song.

Remove kiai time in beginning. It doesn't start on a strong note and there is no benefits when there are no notes to hit. That includes that small timing section too.

Beats needs to be thoroughly checked over. Don't create patterns. Map to the beat or the vocals. I wont give a very thourough mod since you didn't stats the title of your song or the artist. Just know that a great deal of your beats are fabricated as in you created them and the real beats are nearby but you don't use them. Listen carefully and comb through your map and listen for the beat, if you hear that your note is off move it. This needs a lot of work before I can even consider starring it.

Lastly I think you should make a hard and possibly an insane. The rhythms are there.

Easy

00:42:498 (1) - Move to 00:42:641 - ?

00:49:640 (10) - Move to 00:49:497 - (Extend the end to cover for it)

01:10:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move all of these to the next tick

01:13:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

01:40:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Check the placement of these notes in the time line.

02:31:248 (6) - Place here 02:31:099 -

02:33:340 (7) - Place here 02:32:743 -

02:59:043 (6) - Delete this note and bring 02:59:491 (7,8,9) - back a tick. Then take 03:00:836 (9) - and move it forward to 03:00:985 - , then reduce it's size by a tick.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22607 < Timeline

03:14:883 (1) - I suggest starting this here 03:14:733 - and extending it to 03:16:377 -

03:23:699 - Add a note

03:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move all of these forward 1 tick

03:30:602 - Add a note

03:30:872 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move forward 1 tick.

03:34:309 (1) - Place here 03:34:458 -

Normal

Most of this difficulty doesn't follow the beat accurately.

00:20:954 (1,2,3,4) - Claps sound odd. They are to loud for the tones and don't fit the song IMO. Soft whistles if anything should go there.

00:28:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fix the beat man. It's completely off. It's too messed up for me to help you find a beat. Sorry.

00:32:642 (3,4) - Place these on the next red ticks.

00:33:740 (6) - Move forward to the white tick.

00:34:115 (7,8) - White ticks.

00:36:070 (1) - Move to 00:36:142 - and remove one repeat.

00:36:690 (1) - Move to 00:36:784 - and remove 1 repeat.

00:37:427 (1,1) - I have no idea what you should do with these.

Really you need to snap a lot of these notes to 1/4th or 1/2th. Go into timing setup and select the timing section with the notes and select snap to new timing and select 1/2th notes. click okay and then go closely through the map. Preferably at 50%, and listen for the rhythm.

01:10:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing needs to be proportional. These notes shouldn't all have the same spacing since 01:11:065 (3,4) - are closer together.

01:40:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random spacing. Make the spacing equal. You must fix this.

01:54:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too hard for a normal.

01:58:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

02:57:997 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Spacing needs to be equal.

Hey ~

General;
- Ehh...I'm not sure if your timing is the correct in any section of the song, I'm pretty sure it has multiple timing sections but you should as someone who knows about this.
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Use this colors for all diff ??
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 Combo1 : 174,0,0
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 225,51,51
Combo4 : 234,81,6

- Okk...why did you put kiai time at the start ?? Take it out.
- View > Grid level > 3 (most precise) For all diff
- Consider doing another diff, maybe a diff between hard/insane ??
- Tags should be just: CLAMP (All capitalized) take out the rest, also consider adding some character names

Easy;
- Use distance snap of 0.7x or 0.8x
- Slider tick 2 or 0.5 ?? 2 is better in my opinion
- Re-map this...seriously, well some parts are good (: but most of them ehhh, well is pretty boring even for a easy
- Slider velocity 1.00 or 0.90

Normal;
- Slider tick 2
- Ehh, consider using more notes, but not randomly, place them according to the beat
- Slider velocity 1.40

* No star, maps need a lot of work, you can ask me to check again this once you find the correct timings

osu! Timing Help!

• Only 1 timing point is needed:
  1. BPM 140 , Offset 5320

Good Luck!

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