This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-11-09 at 10:07:10 PM

Artist: Yoko Shimomura
Title: Sora
Source: Kingdom Hearts 2 OST
Tags: game disney square enix
BPM: 132
Filesize: 2839kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.19 stars, 106 notes)
2. Insane (4.84 stars, 189 notes)
3. MoNky's BeaT (4.77 stars, 191 notes)
4. Normal (3.31 stars, 86 notes)

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The more upbeat and difficult complement to Roxas.

Special guest difficulty by VanMoNky.

[Normal]
00:21:034 (2,3) - Might be a bit confusing to newbites.
00:33:016 (1) - Whistle?
00:44:006 (1,2) - Confusing to newbites.
00:51:034 (3) - Covered by 1, could be confusing to newbites.
01:00:088 (1,2,3,4) - Move this around a bit to make it easier for them newbites to read.
01:11:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think most new players will be confused by this.

[Hard]
00:46:034 (1,2) - Black approach circle, only half of it is visible, and black is generally a bad hitcircle color.
01:10:043 (4) - A little strange...Might be considered unrankable, not sure.

[Insane]
00:26:079 (2) - Stack this under the slider end?

Nice map set. Star!

[Normal]
I think there's a little too much cymbal. *warning: hitsound mod!*
00:10:043 (2) - Possibly remove the finish from the inner beat of this slider.
00:22:025 (3,1) - I'm not entirely sure if this is kosher for a Normal.
00:29:052 (4) - Possibly remove the finish from the inner beat of this slider.
00:30:043 (1) - Possibly remove the finish from the end of this slider (maybe replace with whistle?)
00:46:079 (3,4,5,6) - finish, normal, clap, finish
00:50:043 (2) - Possibly remove the finish from the inner beat of this slider.
01:01:034 (3) - Cymbal whistles on all ends of this slider? ouch.

[Hard]
01:10:043 (4) - Yeah, not rankable.

Otherwise, it's good.

Alex0686 wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:034 (2,3) - Might be a bit confusing to newbites.
00:33:016 (1) - Whistle?
00:44:006 (1,2) - Confusing to newbites.
00:51:034 (3) - Covered by 1, could be confusing to newbites.
01:00:088 (1,2,3,4) - Move this around a bit to make it easier for them newbites to read.
01:11:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think most new players will be confused by this.

[Hard]
00:46:034 (1,2) - Black approach circle, only half of it is visible, and black is generally a bad hitcircle color.
01:10:043 (4) - A little strange...Might be considered unrankable, not sure.

[Insane]
00:26:079 (2) - Stack this under the slider end?

Nice map set. Star!

Alex:

Normal - Most things were changed, I don't really intend to make this fully newbie-friendly, because it's a Normal.
Hard - Black changed to a dark grey, the slider changed to normal notes. (eh, I liked it, but you have a point)
Insane - Fixed!

Thanks.

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
I think there's a little too much cymbal. *warning: hitsound mod!*
00:10:043 (2) - Possibly remove the finish from the inner beat of this slider.
00:22:025 (3,1) - I'm not entirely sure if this is kosher for a Normal.
00:29:052 (4) - Possibly remove the finish from the inner beat of this slider.
00:30:043 (1) - Possibly remove the finish from the end of this slider (maybe replace with whistle?)
00:46:079 (3,4,5,6) - finish, normal, clap, finish
00:50:043 (2) - Possibly remove the finish from the inner beat of this slider.
01:01:034 (3) - Cymbal whistles on all ends of this slider? ouch.

[Hard]
01:10:043 (4) - Yeah, not rankable.

Otherwise, it's good.

All fixed. Thanks!

It's great, I just can say suggestions
In normal, at 00:53:061, I'd either silence the spinner and (2), or add a whistle at (1). And in Hard, at 01:12:025, I'd remove (1) and add a new combo at (4).

That's just me, I like the way it's now. Star!

Krisom wrote:

It's great, I just can say suggestions
In normal, at 00:53:061, I'd either silence the spinner and (2), or add a whistle at (1). And in Hard, at 01:12:025, I'd remove (1) and add a new combo at (4).

That's just me, I like the way it's now. Star!

Normal: I don't like silent notes, so I took your second suggestion.
Hard: Changes were made, although not exactly like that.

Thanks!

This is a very good map, all of the following mod are suggestions just take what you like and ignore what you don’t

Normal:

00:08:016 (5) – This whistle doesn’t sound very good imo, you could put this part in “soft”. + whistle.
00:14:052 (3) – Reposition this so it doesn’t land on 00:15:043 (2) – make a symmetrical triangle in the upper grid instead?
00:21:034 (2,3) – I wouldn’t recommend having these two sliders at this angle since 2 is longer than 3 it looks odd, but its not a major issue, you could position 2 vertically just above 3.
00:49:097 (1,2) - ^ Same thing but less noticeable here.
00:51:034 (3) – Maybe place this diagonally opposite 2?
01:13:061 (1) – New combo for color contrast.

Hard:

00:06:056 (2) – This overlaps on the slider slightly, not a problem but looks a little messy.
00:46:034 (1,2) – Not symmetrical with 00:46:079 (3) –

This is just a general statement about the small sliders such as 00:58:095 (5) – you could use two beats here in particular instead it looks a bit neater imo. You could alternate between sliders and beats where it looks best.

Insane

Reduce the difficulty by 1? That still puts the tick at 8.

00:04:006 (1,2,3) – The distance between these is rather short, this might annoy people.
00:04:052 (4) –This is being extremely picky but the slider at 00:08:016 (6) – is shaped better imo, you could use that shape here.
00:08:016 (6) – Make all lines straight on this slider (the vertical one is the one that caught my attention)
00:14:097 (1,2,3,4) – Same thing about the distance between these, it really messes with accuracy.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) – Why is the distance between these shorter than 00:15:012 (2,3,4) – when they are the same length on the time line? Not sure if this was intentional.
00:14:052 (5,2,3,4,5,6,7) – You could arrange this placement better by putting 5 in the same line as 4 (vertically) and having 6 and 7 symmetrical with 3 and 2. You may have to alter other combos if you take this placement.

00:22:070 (1) – Too many repeats? You could map triplet streams here after say 4 repeats.
00:41:011 (3) – Looks better vertically straight or horizontally straight.
00:44:006 (1,2,3) – Distance…
00:48:016 (6) – Could be neater.
00:56:079 (7) – Soft finish this.
00:58:095 (5) – Distance from 00:59:006 (6) – is too far, try stacking this.
00:59:006 (6) – This many repeats needs some added whistles or something instead of just claps.
01:02:025 (6) – Make this vertically above 5 and diagonally symmetrical to 7.
01:06:079 (1,2,3) – Sounds better in soft finishes imo.
01:10:043 (1) – Lovely slider shape

Sorry for the extreme Nazi of this mod! This is really good and I mean it, I just thought the more suggestions the better (probably got carried away), anyway here is a well deserved star!

Shulin wrote:

This is a very good map, all of the following mod are suggestions just take what you like and ignore what you don’t

Normal:

00:08:016 (5) – This whistle doesn’t sound very good imo, you could put this part in “soft”. + whistle.
00:14:052 (3) – Reposition this so it doesn’t land on 00:15:043 (2) – make a symmetrical triangle in the upper grid instead?
00:21:034 (2,3) – I wouldn’t recommend having these two sliders at this angle since 2 is longer than 3 it looks odd, but its not a major issue, you could position 2 vertically just above 3.
00:49:097 (1,2) - ^ Same thing but less noticeable here.
00:51:034 (3) – Maybe place this diagonally opposite 2?
01:13:061 (1) – New combo for color contrast.

Hard:

00:06:056 (2) – This overlaps on the slider slightly, not a problem but looks a little messy.
00:46:034 (1,2) – Not symmetrical with 00:46:079 (3) –

This is just a general statement about the small sliders such as 00:58:095 (5) – you could use two beats here in particular instead it looks a bit neater imo. You could alternate between sliders and beats where it looks best.

Insane

Reduce the difficulty by 1? That still puts the tick at 8.

00:04:006 (1,2,3) – The distance between these is rather short, this might annoy people.
00:04:052 (4) –This is being extremely picky but the slider at 00:08:016 (6) – is shaped better imo, you could use that shape here.
00:08:016 (6) – Make all lines straight on this slider (the vertical one is the one that caught my attention)
00:14:097 (1,2,3,4) – Same thing about the distance between these, it really messes with accuracy.
00:16:011 (2,3,4) – Why is the distance between these shorter than 00:15:012 (2,3,4) – when they are the same length on the time line? Not sure if this was intentional.
00:14:052 (5,2,3,4,5,6,7) – You could arrange this placement better by putting 5 in the same line as 4 (vertically) and having 6 and 7 symmetrical with 3 and 2. You may have to alter other combos if you take this placement.

00:22:070 (1) – Too many repeats? You could map triplet streams here after say 4 repeats.
00:41:011 (3) – Looks better vertically straight or horizontally straight.
00:44:006 (1,2,3) – Distance…
00:48:016 (6) – Could be neater.
00:56:079 (7) – Soft finish this.
00:58:095 (5) – Distance from 00:59:006 (6) – is too far, try stacking this.
00:59:006 (6) – This many repeats needs some added whistles or something instead of just claps.
01:02:025 (6) – Make this vertically above 5 and diagonally symmetrical to 7.
01:06:079 (1,2,3) – Sounds better in soft finishes imo.
01:10:043 (1) – Lovely slider shape

Sorry for the extreme Nazi of this mod! This is really good and I mean it, I just thought the more suggestions the better (probably got carried away), anyway here is a well deserved star!

Woot. <3 long posts, thanks for taking the time to do this.

Normal: Mostly done.
Hard: Half done, the second was done so that it does line up in play mode. The short sliders, eh. I like them.
Insane: Mostly done.

Thanks a ton!

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

[Overall]
Try to use Distance Snap. It helps you alot
Use hitsounds less. Less is more. You made a good effort on soft hitsounds

[Normal]
Looks fine. Focus on hitsounds and go through with your Distance Snap on

[Hard]
00:50:043 (3,4,5) - Doesn't flows to me. Not a problem though

[Insane]
00:33:016 (1) - you fooled me good. Not a problem I think


I like the song and how you mapped, so starred

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
00:22:070 (1) - Spacing? eh, it's probably a minor jump
00:29:006 (3) - Use shift to disable grid snap and align perfectly between 2 and 4 (move a fraction more to the left)
No problems found

[Hard]
No problems found

[Insane]
00:39:097 - A finish note here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190
01:14:097 (1) - Move the slider forward a tick and place a note here. Shorten the slider accordingly http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/191

Great beatmap Starred

bmin11 wrote:

[Overall]
Try to use Distance Snap. It helps you alot
Use hitsounds less. Less is more. You made a good effort on soft hitsounds

[Normal]
Looks fine. Focus on hitsounds and go through with your Distance Snap on

[Hard]
00:50:043 (3,4,5) - Doesn't flows to me. Not a problem though

[Insane]
00:33:016 (1) - you fooled me good. Not a problem I think


I like the song and how you mapped, so starred

Awesome. Thanks. (especially for the IRC stuff after)

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
00:22:070 (1) - Spacing? eh, it's probably a minor jump
00:29:006 (3) - Use shift to disable grid snap and align perfectly between 2 and 4 (move a fraction more to the left)
No problems found

[Hard]
No problems found

[Insane]
<span>00:39:097 - A finish note here? <a href="http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190" class="smarterwiki-linkify">http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/190</a></span>
<span>01:14:097 (1) - Move the slider forward a tick and place a note here. Shorten the slider accordingly <a href="http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/191" class="smarterwiki-linkify">http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/191</a></span>

Great beatmap Starred

Everything was fixed/added; I missed the accidental mini-jump on Normal, lol. (and how do you notice that tiny other thing on Normal?)

[Normal]
00:08:016 (5) - I don't really like this slider, it sounds weird for the tail of the slider to be on the offbeat.

[Hard]
00:15:043 (2) - I don't really like this slider, it sounds weird for the tail of the slider to be on the offbeat.
00:50:043 (3,4,5) - This was awkward for me to read and play
01:01:034 (3,4,5) - ^

[Insane]
00:55:088 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt weird to me during my first run.
00:59:006 (6) - This is the only slider that repeats more than once, so it I didn't get it on my first sight read.

Star

varq wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:016 (5) - I don't really like this slider, it sounds weird for the tail of the slider to be on the offbeat.

[Hard]
00:15:043 (2) - I don't really like this slider, it sounds weird for the tail of the slider to be on the offbeat.
00:50:043 (3,4,5) - This was awkward for me to read and play
01:01:034 (3,4,5) - ^

[Insane]
00:55:088 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt weird to me during my first run.
00:59:006 (6) - This is the only slider that repeats more than once, so it I didn't get it on my first sight read.

Star

Changes have been made to your suggestions.

~Normal~
Delete unused timing sections - 36,872 + 43,501 + 43,842
00:11:068 (1) - should start on white tick
00:18:095 (1) - ^
00:21:034 (2) - offscreen when play with Hard Rock mod

~Hard~
Delete unused timing sections - 36,872 + 43,501 + 43,842
00:10:077 (2,3) - too close

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star

I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all...

[General]
I don't know this is just me or not, but the Normal diff seems to be harder than Hard diff.

The Hard diff take the first place, and Normal diff take the second place.

[Normal]
00:17:070 (3) - Add clap at the whole slider.
00:18:095 (1) - Add finish.
00:21:034 (2) - Add clap at the whole slider.
01:06:079 (2) - Remove finish at the beginning.
01:17:251 - Remove break.

[Hard]
Sweet~

[Insane]
Love it~

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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~
Anyway Kytoxid, I've finished a Hard diff (maybe) just now. Hope you like it ^^

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Sora (Kytoxid) [MoNky's BeaT].osu

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

BPM: 132,00
Offset: 435 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Normal]

00:11:068 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary.
00:18:095 (1) - ^
00:32:025 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:29:052 (4) - New combo.
00:46:079 (3,4) - Spacing. Too close.

[Insane]

00:13:016 (2,3,4,5) - These change of spacing can confuse players during play.
00:43:061 (9) - New combo.

Normal
00:04:052 (2) - end this slider with finish
00:07:070 (4) - finish here
00:08:016 (5) - finish on this slider's end
00:15:043 (2) - clap the 1st repeat of this slider
00:18:095 (spinner) - finish here
00:20:088 (1,2,3) - start these sliders with claps
01:14:052 (3) - clap here

Hard
00:15:043 (2) - clap (or finish) the 1st repeat and the end of this slider
00:18:095 (4) - clap and finish this slider's end
01:02:081 (spinner) - try only soft finish for this spinner

Insane
00:16:034 (4,7) - clap the 4th, clap and finish the 7th

Ok, I agree with you: this is the ideal compliment of your previous Kingdom Hearts map! ^^
Merit of fine hitsound placing and time sections, of course... ;3

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yea....like hell I'd find something to fix >.<

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
Delete unused timing sections - 36,872 + 43,501 + 43,842
00:11:068 (1) - should start on white tick
00:18:095 (1) - ^
00:21:034 (2) - offscreen when play with Hard Rock mod

~Hard~
Delete unused timing sections - 36,872 + 43,501 + 43,842
00:10:077 (2,3) - too close

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star

Awesome. All fixed, thanks!

VanMoNky wrote:

I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all...

[General]
I don't know this is just me or not, but the Normal diff seems to be harder than Hard diff.

The Hard diff take the first place, and Normal diff take the second place.

[Normal]
00:17:070 (3) - Add clap at the whole slider.
00:18:095 (1) - Add finish.
00:21:034 (2) - Add clap at the whole slider.
01:06:079 (2) - Remove finish at the beginning.
01:17:251 - Remove break.

[Hard]
Sweet~

[Insane]
Love it~

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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *~
Anyway Kytoxid, I've finished a Hard diff (maybe) just now. Hope you like it ^^

Fixed, and uploaded. Let's see how others think of it. I'm fine with it, personally.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

BPM: 132,00
Offset: 435 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Normal]

00:11:068 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary.
00:18:095 (1) - ^
00:32:025 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:29:052 (4) - New combo.
00:46:079 (3,4) - Spacing. Too close.

[Insane]

00:13:016 (2,3,4,5) - These change of spacing can confuse players during play.
00:43:061 (9) - New combo.

2ms, eh, it can stay. XD

Some of the stuff was changed though, thanks!

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
00:04:052 (2) - end this slider with finish
00:07:070 (4) - finish here
00:08:016 (5) - finish on this slider's end
00:15:043 (2) - clap the 1st repeat of this slider
00:18:095 (spinner) - finish here
00:20:088 (1,2,3) - start these sliders with claps
01:14:052 (3) - clap here

Hard
00:15:043 (2) - clap (or finish) the 1st repeat and the end of this slider
00:18:095 (4) - clap and finish this slider's end
01:02:081 (spinner) - try only soft finish for this spinner

Insane
00:16:034 (4,7) - clap the 4th, clap and finish the 7th

Ok, I agree with you: this is the ideal compliment of your previous Kingdom Hearts map! ^^
Merit of fine hitsound placing and time sections, of course... ;3

Mostly fixed. Awesome thanks!

Armin wrote:

[Normal]

00:08:160 Clap at the start+ clap on the second repeat
00:15:433 ^
00:18:955 Clap
00:21:342 Clap at the start
00:22:251 Clap at the start
00:30:433 Remove the whistle, add a finish at the start instead
00:44:523 Remove the clap at the end, add a clap on the second repeat
00:55:433 Remove the clap at the start, add a clap on the first repeat
01:01:342 Whistles here sounds a bit random
01:07:705 (1,3) Remove the whistle, add a finish at the start instead
01:14:523 clap

[Hard]

00:02:251 Spacing? D:
00:02:705 clap
00:48:160 Remove the whistle, add a finish at the start instead

[Insane]

00:04:069 Clap at the start
00:04:523 Remove the whistle, add a finish at the start instead
00:08:160 ^
00:15:887 (1,7) claps
00:44:523 Finish at the start+ clap on the first repeat+ clap at the end
00:48:160 Remove the whistle, add a finish at the start instead

ç_ç I can't see other of wrong. Starred!

Fixed, thanks!

General: Add 1 or 2 seconds of lead-in. Not necessary, but I think it would make it better.

Normal:
There is really nothing wrong with Normal, mapwise.
I would like to make some recommendations though.

There were some parts that seemed a bit hard for Normal, like:
00:44:006 (1,2) - Too quick for a beginner
01:11:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe too much? I may be severely underestimating the capabilities of a beginner, but it's still something to think about.

Also, I think you could increase overall difficulty by a tick or 2, seems more fun a little faster, and it is still fairly easy.

Hard:
There is something wrong if I can S rank at 99.7% on sightread. You must make this harder.
Maybe you could consider turning this into Normal+.

Points of noticeable ease:
00:04:006 (1,2) - It feels really empty between the two, and this is a hard map. Should at least sound more like 00:44:006 (1,2) -
00:14:097 (1,2) - ^
00:22:070 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a spinner?
00:29:052 (1) - Make this into multiple notes?
00:32:070 (3) - ^
There is probably more if you look at it. Otherwise, this is fine too.


MoNky's beat:
00:59:075 (3) - Very tricky. Seeing as there's only one set of jumps that doesn't really lend itself to the rest of the map, I suggest you take out the jumps.
I would also recommend increasing the circle size and the overall difficulty.
Everything else is fine.

Insane:
I would recommend increasing the circle size and HP Drain.
Otherwise, it's ok.

I star this map for you.

Nakata Yuji wrote:

General: Add 1 or 2 seconds of lead-in. Not necessary, but I think it would make it better.

Normal:
There is really nothing wrong with Normal, mapwise.
I would like to make some recommendations though.

There were some parts that seemed a bit hard for Normal, like:
00:44:006 (1,2) - Too quick for a beginner
01:11:079 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe too much? I may be severely underestimating the capabilities of a beginner, but it's still something to think about.

Also, I think you could increase overall difficulty by a tick or 2, seems more fun a little faster, and it is still fairly easy.

Hard:
There is something wrong if I can S rank at 99.7% on sightread. You must make this harder.
Maybe you could consider turning this into Normal+.

Points of noticeable ease:
00:04:006 (1,2) - It feels really empty between the two, and this is a hard map. Should at least sound more like 00:44:006 (1,2) -
00:14:097 (1,2) - ^
00:22:070 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a spinner?
00:29:052 (1) - Make this into multiple notes?
00:32:070 (3) - ^
There is probably more if you look at it. Otherwise, this is fine too.


MoNky's beat:
00:59:075 (3) - Very tricky. Seeing as there's only one set of jumps that doesn't really lend itself to the rest of the map, I suggest you take out the jumps.
I would also recommend increasing the circle size and the overall difficulty.
Everything else is fine.

Insane:
I would recommend increasing the circle size and HP Drain.
Otherwise, it's ok.

I star this map for you.

General: There's lead-in on all the difficulties but Normal already.
Normal: Fixed the first part, decided to leave the second part as-is.
Hard: Eh. I make easy hards, generally. I'd rather leave it how it is.
Insane: HP drain can go up a chunk, I don't really like small circles.

Thanks!

MoNky's beat:
It's ok. I'd only add a new combo at 00:36:034 (6), since it follows a different pattern (1/3)
Bonus points for having pretty sliders!

Normal
00:10:043 (2) - [Suggestion]Finish NO, Whistle YES

Hard
00:06:079 (3) - VERY LOUD WIHSTLZ

Monky's Beat
00:31:034 (1) - little little little spacing

Insane
Nothing

Star-ite, olololol. great map. <3

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Everything I noticed, you probably don't need to change everything here.

[General]
Here's the custom hitsound library: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=15407
If you really feel like cymbal crashing, find some softer cymbals.
edit: or use lots of different cymbals so it isn't do repetitive.

[Hard]
00:06:079 (3) - I don't think there needs to be cymbal here.
00:09:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god no.
00:17:070 (2) - Less is more.
00:18:095 (4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - look here
00:57:070 (3) - and here
01:05:088 (1) - and here

[MoNky]
Whistles should maybe be less common.
00:04:052 (4) - Mmm, maybe make the start further away from the end? It's kind of a mean slider. edit: Err, never mind.
00:08:004 (7,8) - IMO 8 should be to the right of 7
00:55:043 (4) - If you can figure out how to make this slider nicer, that'd be great.

[Insane]
00:04:052 (2) - IMO there shouldn't be finishes on both ends.
00:08:016 (6) - Ditto.
00:10:043 (3,4,5,6) - Cymbal crashes aren't supposed to be like candy on Halloween.
00:28:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whistle abuse of a different kind.
00:46:079 (3,4,5,6) - Probably not.
01:06:079 (1,2,3) - Well, it's not quite so bad in comparison...
01:10:043 (1) - Probably not.
01:11:079 (1,2,3) - Probably not.
01:12:025 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - Too much cymbal here, too.

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Normal
Hard
MoNkeY Beat
Insane
I suggest you create a skin for this map and Roxas, so they kind of go together.

Loogiesquared wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

Good.

Hard

SPOILER

00:01:022 (4) : Add a beat.
01:12:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) : Space these in way that shows the difference between the first combo and the second combo.

MoNkeY Beat

SPOILER

Good.

Insane

SPOILER

Excellent

I suggest you create a skin for this map and Roxas, so they kind of go together.

Thanks for modding.

I'd make a skin, except my ability to touch Photoshop/GIMP is approximately zero, so let's stay on the safe side. XD

Fixed all.

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Sora (Kytoxid) [MoNky's BeaT].osu

VanMoNky wrote:

Fixed all.

Upload completed. Thanks!

Looove this music!

Great map, I didn't find anything wrong, so I give my little shiny star to you~

Good luck! n_n

00:08:004 (7,8) - I just really don't like this in [VanMoNky], the way the combo moves backwards, and how it's kinda hidden.
doesn't matter, Star!!! xD
looks like you've gotten enough mods here, I really like insane btw. I'm sorry I couldn't mod ;_;

Make sure to VanMoNky's name in the tags for all the diffs

Normal:
Combo mod: (since some of your combos seems to form patterns, I did not mod any combos that seemed to form a pattern)
00:22:705 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:08:160 (5)

Hard:
Combo mod:(since some of your combos seems to form patterns, I did not mod any combos that seemed to form a pattern)
00:07:705 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:11:342 (4)

MoNky's BeaT
Normal mod:
01:00:433 (4) - it seems sort of weird that you have followed distance snap in this section and then all of a sudden have a note that is not distance snapped, so please the spacing here.

Combo mod:
00:08:046 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with 00:18:955 (1)
00:48:046 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to be consistent with the beginning
00:51:683 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with the beginning
00:58:955 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 10 to be consistent with the beginning

Timing section mod:
01:16:796 - silence the end of the spinner?

Insane:
Timing section mod:
00:49:29 - move back a quarter note

Nazi mod: (Sadly, I just felt like doing this, so if you want, you can disregard this section)
00:26:796 (2) - align with the end of 1 (about half a grid off right now)

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Nice map. Star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Make sure to VanMoNky's name in the tags for all the diffs

Normal:
Combo mod: (since some of your combos seems to form patterns, I did not mod any combos that seemed to form a pattern)
00:22:705 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:08:160 (5)

Hard:
Combo mod:(since some of your combos seems to form patterns, I did not mod any combos that seemed to form a pattern)
00:07:705 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:11:342 (4)

MoNky's BeaT
Normal mod:
01:00:433 (4) - it seems sort of weird that you have followed distance snap in this section and then all of a sudden have a note that is not distance snapped, so please the spacing here.

Combo mod:
00:08:046 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with 00:18:955 (1)
00:48:046 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to be consistent with the beginning
00:51:683 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with the beginning
00:58:955 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 10 to be consistent with the beginning

Timing section mod:
01:16:796 - silence the end of the spinner?

Insane:
Timing section mod:
00:49:29 - move back a quarter note

Nazi mod: (Sadly, I just felt like doing this, so if you want, you can disregard this section)
00:26:796 (2) - align with the end of 1 (about half a grid off right now)

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Nice map. Star.

Many changes. Thanks!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Make sure to VanMoNky's name in the tags for all the diffs
MoNky's BeaT
Normal mod:
01:00:433 (4) - it seems sort of weird that you have followed distance snap in this section and then all of a sudden have a note that is not distance snapped, so please the spacing here. Done

Combo mod:
00:08:046 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with 00:18:955 (1) Done
00:48:046 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to be consistent with the beginning Done
00:51:683 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with the beginning Done
00:58:955 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 10 to be consistent with the beginning Done

Timing section mod:
01:16:796 - silence the end of the spinner?

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Sora (Kytoxid) [MoNky's BeaT].osu

VanMoNky wrote:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Make sure to VanMoNky's name in the tags for all the diffs
MoNky's BeaT
Normal mod:
01:00:433 (4) - it seems sort of weird that you have followed distance snap in this section and then all of a sudden have a note that is not distance snapped, so please the spacing here. Done

Combo mod:
00:08:046 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with 00:18:955 (1) Done
00:48:046 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 to be consistent with the beginning Done
00:51:683 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to be consistent with the beginning Done
00:58:955 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 10 to be consistent with the beginning Done

Timing section mod:
01:16:796 - silence the end of the spinner?

Uploaded.

Kingdom Hearts.

[Normal]:
00:13:614 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: Vertical Flip this triangle and then move it to the top so the jump between (3) and the next (1) isn't so big? (Probably making (3) stack over (1) or something)

There isn't much else to say. This is a well-made map set. Good job !

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Kingdom Hearts.

[Normal]:
00:13:614 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: Vertical Flip this triangle and then move it to the top so the jump between (3) and the next (1) isn't so big? (Probably making (3) stack over (1) or something)

There isn't much else to say. This is a well-made map set. Good job !

Yeah, I was thinking about how to fix that, that's an awesome idea. Thanks!

And it has been done.

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