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Planetboom - Keys To The World

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Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 24 de abril de 2011 at 19:22:09

Artist: Planetboom
Title: Keys To The World
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Portable Black Square Technika
BPM: 80
Filesize: 1500kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,64 stars, 53 notes)
  2. Hard (4,98 stars, 224 notes)
Download: Planetboom - Keys To The World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready to mod ( all diffs )
Last edited by Slowmotion_old , edited 19 times in total.
Tshabalala
7 posts
Joined September 2010
Tshabalala
Nice
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hello~

General
Music track need 2 on all diffs
disable countdowm

[easy]

01:13:028 (1) - New combo?
01:21:465 (7) - hu? put red tick

[hard]

Overall dificult put to 4

00:19:403 (1) - New combo?
00:25:215 (1) - New combo?

that all

hell rock star

(Note: if my mod is help you map so give kudosu is will helpfull :))
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~

General
Music track need 2 on all diffs
disable countdowm

[easy]

01:13:028 (1) - New combo?
01:21:465 (7) - hu? put red tick

[hard]

Overall dificult put to 4



00:19:403 (1) - New combo?
00:25:215 (1) - New combo?

that all

hell rock star

(Note: if my mod is help you map so give kudosu is will helpfull :))
done~
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
Hi Hi :)

here my suggestions~

[General]
Source : DJMAX
Tag : Portable Black Square Technika
don't forget to removed .osb file and do full submitting.


[Timing section]
00:14:153 - do not exactly place audio timing section on a note. make it earlier or something
00:48:273 - ^
00:48:840 - ^
00:52:965 - ^
01:18:278 - ^
00:21:654 - why kiai ends here? 4 secs of kiai is not a good idea,,, end it at 00:37:403 or something...
01:16:590 - end kiai here
01:22:215 - useless timing section

[Hard]
00:14:340(8) - remove finish hitsound
00:14:715(10) - ^ really put finish hitsound on really heavy beat
00:30:465(1) - jumping here is totally off...
00:42:278(3) - new combo here
00:42:465 - remove new combo
00:57:653(1) - too close (10,11,12) , somehow confuse

[Easy]
don't forget to remove un-used timing section on this diff.

that's all
:)
good luck
star~
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
Well, thanks :3
Hamuko
4,713 posts
Joined April 2009
Hamuko
IRC Mod & Star
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
General
unused *.osb file...

Hard
As for me... I suggest to increase volume of hitsonds by ~9-14% (50-55%)
00:14:903 (11) - add finish
00:15:090 (12) - remove finish
00:25:965 (1) - add clap
00:28:778 (3) - ^
00:31:778 (1) - make this :
SPOILER
+ add clap to (4) + add finish to the spinner.

00:37:590 (1) - start spinner from 00:38:153 till 00:40:778. And you will make this:
00:37:590 (1) - add finish to the spinner
00:37:403 (4) - add note + whistle
00:37:590 (5) - add note
00:37:778 (6) - add note + finish
00:41:153 (1) - add note + whistle

00:41:715 (3) - add whistle
00:42:278 (1) - ^
00:45:653 (1) - make end of this spinner at 00:47:153
01:03:465 (x) - add note
01:03:653 (2) - add clap
01:06:278 (3) - ^
01:08:153 (1) - remove clap, add finish
01:08:528 (3) - add clap
01:09:653 (1) - add finish
01:15:653 (1) - make end of this spinner at 01:16:778 + add finish

Please, make this, I think it sounds much better :
01:18:840 (1) - remove finish
01:19:028 (2) - add whistle
01:19:403 (4) - add whistle, add finish
01:19:590 (5) - remove finish
01:19:778 (6) - add whistle
01:20:528 (2) - add whistle
01:20:903 (4) - add finish, add whistle
01:21:090 (5) - add whistle
01:21:278 (6) - remove finish
01:21:465 (7) - add whistle

Easy
Make BPM like in Hard! >< bpm 160
Make tick rate like in Hard! >< slider tick rate 1
Make kiai time like in Hard! >< fix timing sections
00:28:403 (5) - remove clap, add finish
Sorry, Easy needs in a lot of work, sorry, I can't mod it atm. I can make recheck when Easy was really ready.

So, star. Keep workin'
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
Easy
Make BPM like in Hard! >< bpm 160
Make tick rate like in Hard! >< slider tick rate 1
Make kiai time like in Hard! >< fix timing sections
00:28:403 (5) - remove clap, add finish
Sorry, Easy needs in a lot of work, sorry, I can't mod it atm. I can make recheck when Easy was really ready. ok

So, star. Keep workin'[/quote]
H a i n e k o
1 post
Joined February 2011
H a i n e k o
Nice star BRO <3
GL :)
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old
Thanks thanks thanks ♥
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hey.

Cool BG.

Kiai in Easy is way long.It should be cut as in Hard.

[Easy]
Increase volume please.

00:03:653 (1) - Finish?
00:05:153 (2) - Cut this slider at 00:06:465?
00:17:528 (1) - Finish?
00:23:528 (1) - It's only half-beat after the long spinner,delete this note?
00:51:653 (1) - Finish?
00:54:653 (1) - ^
00:57:653 (1) - ^
01:13:028 (4) - Move finish to 01:12:653 (3).
01:21:278 (8,9) - Change to a slider? Beginners might have some problems with reading such spacing.

[Hard]
00:29:340 (1) - 2x? :o
00:54:278 (1) - It's to close to previous object,fix distance.

Star.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
(Some irregular claps, like the first combo at hard, try to make it claps every 2 beat?

[Hard]
00:04:215 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing
00:05:340 (8,9,10) - ^
00:10:403 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76960, (1) remove NC
00:21:653 (1) - finish?
00:31:590 (x) - should have notes here?
00:33:840 (1~7) - only (4) clap?
01:19:215 (3,4,5,6) - left 1 grid
01:20:715 (3,4,5,6) - right 1 grid

[Easy]
no spacing problem.

Quite big difficulty gap between hard and easy, add a normal?
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there!
Here's the mod for your song:
kurohacker's mod
[General]
The kiai time for both diffs should be the same, especially since the first one in Easy is really long.... Follow the Hard's kiai time.
I agree with wmfchris, you should definitely add a Normal diff for a better spread.

[Easy]
Maybe OD+2?
0:17:528 [1] - The clap at the end feels kinda out of place, maybe use a finish here instead.
0:28:403 [5] - ^
0:48:840 - Although it does sound fine as it is, but you can't really hear the claps here. If you plan to use the claps, I suggest changing the audio timing section here to Normal instead of Soft.
0:54:653 [1-4. 1-2] - Maybe add a clap at the reverses of [1] and [2] of both combos, and also at [4]?
0:59:903 [spinner] - This spinner's very long, maybe you can shorten it and let it start at 1:03:653 instead? Fill the gap before with notes.
1:06:653 - Same case as in 0:48:403.

[Hard]
This feels more like an Insane rather than a Hard...
Also, this might just be me, but the circle size is kinda small, maybe CS-1?
The claps in this diff is quite random in some sections, such as the beginning of the song, so I suggest you change the hitsounds in a way that there is a sort of rhythm in the map.

0:10:965 [1] - Delete new combo here.
0:14:153 [7] - Add new combo here.

The maps still need a lot of work, but it shows a promise, so a star for you~
Good luck! :)
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Slowmotion_old

wmfchris wrote:

(Some irregular claps, like the first combo at hard, try to make it claps every 2 beat?

[Hard]
00:04:215 (3,4,5) - uneven spacing LOL?
00:05:340 (8,9,10) - ^ LOL²
00:10:403 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76960, (1) remove NC what is NC?
00:21:653 (1) - finish? done
00:31:590 (x) - should have notes here?yeah
00:33:840 (1~7) - only (4) clap?i like it
01:19:215 (3,4,5,6) - left 1 grid ok
01:20:715 (3,4,5,6) - right 1 grid ok

[Easy]
no spacing problem.

Quite big difficulty gap between hard and easy, add a normal?
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello!
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[Easy]
00:05:153 (2) - Can you make this slider go up to the white tick? It sounds odd where it is right now :o
01:21:278 (8) - Add 1 repeat
There are a lot of spinners in this difficulty, and that is both tiresome to the players wrists and a bit boring. Could you get rid of a couple of them and map those areas?
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[Hard]
About those claps in the diff, could you put them in parts where the drums are mosu aduible (as in, you can clearly hear when the drummer is hitting them.) because they sound randomly placed.

00:43:028 - What about this gap, it's perfect to use in this map :(

Still a lot of spinners but not as bad as [Easy]
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Sorry, I can't star this map yet, it still feels a bit incomplete. :? But you can message me another time when you feel it's better than it is now.
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