The problem here is spacing. Read this:



Go through your map and fix the spacing. Then, repost in my mod queue regardless of how many maps are in it at the time and I'll check it again.

OH, now I figured out the problem. Your offset is not only off, your hit objects are snapped to another timing altogether!

The offset is 14359 I think, but the game's glitching up so I can't check. Go ask in #modHelp, because you need the correct offset before you can fix this issue.

Crimmi to the rescue!!

BPM: 115.00
Offset: 2,055

I might be a bit off though but i'll continue checking.

Good Luck!

For spacing, try Distance Snap. It's better but still needs some work. In the lower right-hand corner of the screen there's a distance snap button. Enable it, and then respace each combo (the spacing between combos is irrelevant). You're in synch with the music now which is good, you're almost there! Be strong! Imagine Endo saying you can do it if you have to!

Insane:

00:26:837 (1) - Make this spinner end when the "chi" ends, to be in synch with the music.

Normal:

Same as Insane.

Easy:

00:11:443 (1) - Delete this spinner, it's random.
00:17:704 (2,3,4) - Okay, you definitely need to use distance snap. This is hard to read.

Just use distance snap for now until you become a more experienced mapper. It's a good learning aid. It'll take you only a few minutes to respace with distance snap. I know; I had to do it before when I started mapping over two years ago.

General:
If I were you, I'd adjust most maps by using distance snap. Make sure the distance snap icon on the right side of the screen is darkened, not faded. This way, notes you place will be at a logical distance from the previous one. Then, to readjust, drag each note after the first, and distance snap will show you where it can be placed. So I'll ignore minor spacing infringements and focus on the major ones as well as other things to mod, assuming that you fix the above.

Easy:
00:10:794- Place a circle here
01:22:400 (1) - Very confusing for an easy, since it's completely covered by the previous note. Think about a different pattern.
01:21:356 (1) to 01:27:095 (1) - Too many new combos, try spacing them every four beats or so.

Normal:
00:13:921 (3) - Too close to (2)
00:30:226 (3,4,5) - Spacing errors
00:47:704 (3) - Too far from (2)
00:59:182 (2,4) - Too far away from previous notes
01:04:400 (3) - Too far from (2)
01:29:639 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing
Also, same issues about combos as above, and the overlapping patterns.

Insane:
Erratic jumps are a bit more acceptable, but your streams should follow distance snapping.
00:16:924 (6) - There's no way to know this is a repeat slider since (5) obscures it.
00:18:489 (11) - ^
Do you really have to copy and paste an earlier section to save work here? It makes it a little repetitive.

Overall, the timing was pretty good, but the lack of spacing really detracted from the map. Fix the spacing in general, PM me, and I'll be glad to take a second look and probably give a star.

K, spacing done: Comment

Hi there~
Here's the mods for your maps:

There are a lot of major issues with the maps, so I can't star this one just yet . But, they have the potential. So, I hope that you can get more mods first and apply them (including mine), and request for a recheck after that by PM. I'll be glad to star you then.
All the best for your maps!

(P/S: I think I'm getting brainwashed with all the Zettai's XD)

Hi

[general]
The music is 256kbps, the limit is 128-192kbps.

Why use so many greenlines to change slider speed? It's no need at all.
For most maps, 3 different slider speed are enough.
Remove those green lines and remap... since the slider length will change...

Do not set AR higher than OD.

BONUS 80000!

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

Hi

[general]
The music is 256kbps, the limit is 128-192kbps.

Why use so many greenlines to change slider speed? It's no need at all.
For most maps, 3 different slider speed are enough.
Remove those green lines and remap... since the slider length will change...

Do not set AR higher than OD.

BONUS 80000!

ok i changed the song's kbps to 192kbps
and i removed most of the speed change green lines
btw thx for star

ok

Here's the mod:

[Easy]

1. 00:15:098 (6) - it's placed badly in the timeline and in placement, remove it
2. 00:19:794 - do we really need a few green timing sections changing the speed here? No, we do not. Take them out and remap this section
3. 00:25:011 (1) - remove combo
4. 00:36:489 - stop with the timing sections already..... But if you have to, move it to 00:37:272 and change (5)
5. 01:22:924 (4,1) - spacing.....

[Normal]

1. 00:15:620 - put another timing section here to put the speed back to normal, change the spacing in the next section
2. 00:19:794 - I don't really like the sudden change in speed in this section, make it more gradual or keep it the same the whole time
3. 00:28:924 - (*Note) Keep the speed here and change before, this seems ok...
4. 00:35:968 (5) - 3 grids right, 2 grids down
5. 00:36:489 (6) - the sudden jump here doesn't seem too fitting...
6. 00:47:707 (3,4) - move closer to (2)
7. 00:52:663 (2,3) - spacing...
8. 00:54:228 - NO!!! please, change the speed back...
9. 01:03:359 - ugh, I hate copy+paste stuff.... same issues
10. 01:17:707 (2,3,4,1,2) - the overlapping here looks really bad, spread them them out more

[Insane]

• Ok, this is just horrible.... No offense.. But please keep these in mind...

1. Stop using the timing sections to change speed, that's a big issue.
2. Spacing must be constant in the same section
3. Do not be a Smooth Criminal
4. Look at other good beatmaps and see their spacing

Uh, yeah....

Star! still.....

ok

Here's the mod:

[Easy]
00:15:098 (6) - it's placed badly in the timeline and in placement, remove it
00:19:794 - do we really need a few green timing sections changing the speed here? No, we do not. Take them out and remap this section
00:25:011 (1) - remove combo
00:36:489 - stop with the timing sections already..... But if you have to, move it to 00:37:272 and change (5)
01:22:924 (4,1) - spacing.....

[Normal]
00:15:620 - put another timing section here to put the speed back to normal, change the spacing in the next section
00:19:794 - I don't really like the sudden change in speed in this section, make it more gradual or keep it the same the whole time
00:28:924 - (*Note) Keep the speed here and change before, this seems ok...
00:35:968 (5) - 3 grids right, 2 grids down
00:36:489 (6) - the sudden jump here doesn't seem too fitting...
00:47:707 (3,4) - move closer to (2)
00:52:663 (2,3) - spacing...
00:54:228 - NO!!! please, change the speed back...
01:03:359 - ugh, I hate copy+paste stuff.... same issues
01:17:707 (2,3,4,1,2) - the overlapping here looks really bad, spread them them out more


[Insane]
Ok, this is just horrible.... No offense.. But please keep these in mind...

Stop using the timing sections to change speed, that's a big issue.
Spacing must be constant in the same section
Do not be a Smooth Criminal
Look at other good beatmaps and see their spacing

here's the deal, i will mod easy and normal and i will remake insane

Ok, Re-mod!!

I might as well mod LuPiiTa's diff...

LuPiiTa

1. 00:26:576 (1,2) - eh, manually change the spacing here
2. 00:44:837 (2) - finish?
3. 01:25:533 (1,2,3,4) - hmmm, there's something irregular I'm getting from this, it seems like a let-down

Insane

Well, it's MUCH better, and it's almost perfect.
Two major things, MAKE IT LOUDER and PUT MORE HITSOUNDS.

1. 00:02:576 (1,2,3) - the spacing here doesn't fit with what's next
2. 00:16:924 (7) - new combo
3. 00:37:533 (3,4) - spacing
4. 00:48:750 (11) - new combo
5. 00:52:141 (1,2) - spacing
6. 00:55:011 (5,6) - ^
7. 00:55:533 (8) - a bit weird looking isn't it?
8. 01:26:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make sure it's all equal spacing

Much better!!~

Kudosu star!!

hmmm,
Will do many post's, for now just principal things

[Timing]
It's better if the metronome follow the voice...
Use Offset: 2650 ( No scale or Snapping to new timing now )

[Easy]
You can resnap automatically with 1/2
Please, an Easy is SLOW, and using Section that make it even more SLOWER is not good... Don't use x0.5 section

[Hard]
You can resnap automatically with 1/4, Select all the Note's and move them 1/4 foward as they are on the White Tick
Please, STOP using so many Slider Velocity Change sections all-over the map... Try to use less Slider Velocity multiplier, trying to not use < x0,75 sections

[Insane]
You can resnap automatically with 1/4, Select all the Note's and move them 1/4 foward as they are on the White Tick
Same as Hard, i don't like how you use so many Slider Velocity Change...

As now... far from starring.

I Will recheck indepthly after you do those change

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Ok, Re-mod!!

I might as well mod LuPiiTa's diff...

LuPiiTa

00:26:576 (1,2) - eh, manually change the spacing here
00:44:837 (2) - finish?
01:25:533 (1,2,3,4) - hmmm, there's something irregular I'm getting from this, it seems like a let-down

Insane

Well, it's MUCH better, and it's almost perfect.
Two major things, MAKE IT LOUDER and PUT MORE HITSOUNDS.

00:02:576 (1,2,3) - the spacing here doesn't fit with what's next
00:16:924 (7) - new combo
00:37:533 (3,4) - spacing
00:48:750 (11) - new combo
00:52:141 (1,2) - spacing
00:55:011 (5,6) - ^
00:55:533 (8) - a bit weird looking isn't it?
01:26:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make sure it's all equal spacing

Much better!!~

Kudosu star!!

Done but i am noob putting hitsounds :S btw thx for your stars

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

hmmm,
Will do many post's, for now just principal things

[Timing]
It's better if the metronome follow the voice...
Use Offset: 2650 ( No scale or Snapping to new timing now )

[Easy]
You can resnap automatically with 1/2
Please, an Easy is SLOW, and using Section that make it even more SLOWER is not good... Don't use x0.5 section

[Hard]
You can resnap automatically with 1/4, Select all the Note's and move them 1/4 foward as they are on the White Tick
Please, STOP using so many Slider Velocity Change sections all-over the map... Try to use less Slider Velocity multiplier, trying to not use < x0,75 sections

[Insane]
You can resnap automatically with 1/4, Select all the Note's and move them 1/4 foward as they are on the White Tick
Same as Hard, i don't like how you use so many Slider Velocity Change...

As now... far from starring.

I Will recheck indepthly after you do those change

OK, i know u want me to put the offset so it follows the voice but i am sure other modders will tell me to change, right now ot is a bit off but i am doing my best to get the proper offset.
In easy, i will resnap it to 1/2, almost done.
About the slider velocity changes or the green lines, i quit all of them, there are ones to determine the length of the kiai mode. in hard diff there is only one green line that changes the slider speed to x0.5 so it could fit
thx for the helpful modding =D

General:
The offset is definitely off, slow down the song to .25x and listen to the metronome, you'll hear that the metronome tick occurs noticeably earlier than the beat from the song. Something like +40 on the offset fixes this. Give it a try, it plays a lot better.

Easy:
(BTW, these timing points are before the offset change).
00:07:011 (3) - Too close to (2)
00:16:141 (1) - Lengthen a quarter beat to fit 1/2 notes.
00:29:707 (1,2,3) - Stack these three or space them out properly in .8x; a random .4x is confusing.
00:55:794 (4) - Looks weird halfway under (3), consider moving down until it is completely separate, e.g:
01:10:924 (1,2) - Make these more symmetric
01:20:315 (1) - Not new combo
01:26:576 (2,3,4) - Spacing

Normal:
(This is after the offset change- it was here that it started affecting my score and thus made me notice it)
00:39:660 (3) - Doesn't fit rhythm- should be 1/2 beat long with 2 repeats instead of random 3/8th with 1 repeat. Delete the last point on this slider and it fits.
01:03:660 (2) - Start of this slider has no counterpart in music, change this to just a circle on

LuPiiTa's hard:
00:26:877 (2) - Move farther from (1)- the .5 velocity should not interfere with spacing like this.

Insane:
(After offset change)
00:16:181 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not a fan of overmapped streams like this, but I guess that's a personal preference.
Mostly fine besides the overmapped streams.

Much more playable now (after the offset change), good job! Starred.

HI
You post in my mod4mod queue so please mod this : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28561

[General]
Lead-in = 1 second or more

[Easy]
00:06:248 (2,3) - spacing
00:13:031 (4,5) - ^ an Easy diff should not have any jumps
00:52:683 (2,3) - 1 gird left
01:25:553 (1,2) - spacing

[Normal]
00:55:683 (2) - this slider start on a blue line,kinda unreadble
01:03:901 (2,3,4) - spacing

[LuPiiTa's Hard]
00:34:683 (3) - maybe a 1/4 repeat slider back is better

[Insane]
00:02:596 (1,2,3) - spacing
maybe add some jumps in some place is better,when the ending of the song you can make the spacing bigger

sorry for my poor english 0.0

lol por fin me paso por aquí , perdón por la tardanza

Mi mod~ >w<

General
Muy bien!, el skin me encantó~
Y mejoraste bastante desde la primera vez que jugué este map

Easy
No amontones tanto las notas, considera que ésta dificultad es para principiantes y se pueden llegar a confundir.

00:29:727 (1) - Clap
00:30:770 (3) - ^
00:33:901 (2) - Clap al principio del slider
00:34:944 (3) - Clap
00:35:466 (4) - Clap al final del slider
00:37:553 (1) - Agrega sonido de Finish solo a la primera nota del slider
00:52:683 (2) - Un cuadro (grid) a la derecha
01:03:901 (1,2) - Mejor has de nuevo esos sliders D:
01:15:118 (5) - Nuevo combo
01:15:640 (1) - Elimina el nuevo combo

Normal
00:56:335 (4) - Sin ofender, pero esto slider se ve algo mal, vuelve a intentarlo
01:21:379 (1) - A partir de aquí está algo difícil, trata de no hacerlo tan Hard

Perdón por el mini mod, lo que mas te falta son hitsounds pero no sabría decirte así que mejor lo dejo a manos de alguien que sepa mejor

Hard
LOL mi dificultad, quizá le haga unos cambios a algunas partes

Insane
00:52:422 (2,3,4) - Se ven un poco mal, vuelve a hacerlos

Por lo demás, ésta dificultad me pareció muy bien (al menos para mi), solo debes mejorar la presentación de varios de tus sliders

Star + Kudosu star!

Modding time.
[General]

1. Your timing is absolutely wrong.That's unrankable.Please find someone to check it.
2. Add LuPiiTa to tag.
3. Remove unnecessary Lead-in.

[Easy]

1. Why this difficulty only have the finish hitsound.You must add the clap and whistle hitsounds as well!!
2. 00:04:161(4)-Add a new combo here.
3. 00:25:031(6)-Bad and ugly arrangement.Also it'll make confused to newbie.
4. 00:45:118(x)-This places is not appropriate to put a spinner here.There has some accent point here.
5. 01:01:814(x)-^ Same.
6. 01:03:901(1.2)-These slider are ugly...please change it if possible.
7. 01:10:944(1.2)-wtf...These slider are too ugly...
8. 01:21:379(1~)-For this part..Make the note like this is not a good idea.Well probably they are fine but they place still to random foe me.

[Normal]

1. Why this difficulty only have the finish hitsound.You must add the clap and whistle hitsounds as well!!
2. 00:08:335(1.2.3.4)-Inconsistent spacing.Please make the spacing more regularly.
3. 00:11:466(x)-This spinner is too short in Normal.If possible,use some notes to instead of.
4. 00:32:596(x)-I prefer add a beat here.
5. 00:38:596(2)-Extreamly ugly.
6. 00:43:533(4.1.2.3)-This type of arrangement will make confused to newbie.
7. 00:56:335(4)-Weird slider!Also.the red point of the slider is unreadable.That'll make confuse.
8. 00:58:422(1.2.3)-inconsistent spacing.
9. 01:01:683(x)-Thi spinner is too short for normal
10. 01:04:161(4)-A New combo here would be nice.
11. 01:12:248(3.4)-Don't make 1/4 notes in Normal.That's unfair to the players.
12. 01:14:335(3.4)-^ Same.
13. 01:18:248(8.1.2)-Inconsistent spacing.
14. 01:23:727(2)-Hidden!Don't do that in Normal.

[LuPiiTa's Hard]

1. 00:21:640(1.2.3)-Inconsistent Spacing! The spacing is not same as the previous notes.
2. 00:26:857(2)-New combo herew due to slider speed change suddenly.
3. 00:32:335(4.5.6.7.8)-Inconsistent spacing.The spacing is not the same.
4. 00:35:857(3)-Use some notes to instead of this slider.
5. 00:45:901(x)-Please resnap this green line regularly due to here's the start of the Kiai Time.
6. 01:00:509(1)-Don't stack here?
7. 01:23:466(5)-A new combo here would be nice.

[Insane]
Have a quite check of this.You shou ld resnap all the green line!.
You can put some jump to make it more fun.
please check the spacing at the beginning.00:02:596(1.2.3)-

This mapset need more improvement :<

General

--add "LuPiiTa" to the tags

Insane

00:02:596(1,2,3) - the spacing is weird. Making it equal.
00;28:161(spinner) - finish?
00:55:683(5) - the slider should start here. Then add a note at 00:55:553 (where the slider had originally started at)
01:00:640(1) - unstack note? makes it more clear that it is 1/4 tick away.
01:11:335(x) - add note
01:12:379(9) - the stream should end on this note.
01:12:509(10) - delete this note and try adding notes at 01:12:640, 01:12:770(add a clap onto this note), 01:13:031, and at 01:13:161.
01:14:596(6) - move note 1/4 tick forward, and then fix spacing
01:04:292(1) - remove new combo
01:04:683(4) - new combo
01:27:509(x) - i feel it sounds better if you add a note here and delete the finish hitsound on combo 7


LuPiiTa's Hard

00:07:031(3,4) - switch these two notes around:
00:11:466(spinner) - add finish
00:16:683(3) - this slider should start 1/4 tick earlier (it ends in the same place tho). Then fix spacing
00:26:857(2) - spacing
00:40:553(5,1) - follow vocals more? I was consider starting the slider here instead of the note because the vocals end there, but it's fine to leave it as is since there are other background sounds that match the way these notes play.

Normal

00:08:335(1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - this may be a little tough for a beginner to follow. However, you have an easier difficulty, so i guess it's fine. (i'm not commenting on any other usage of the 1/4 tick notes)
00:14:335(4) - fix spacing
00:24:770(x) - either add a note here or fix the spacing of 00:24:509(8,1)
01:01:553(spinner) - start the spinner here
01:02:596(spinner) - add finish
01:03:640(2) - delete note
01:19:292(1,2,) - i would move this note a litle further away frmo the end of the previous slider
01:20:596(2,1) - even if there is a huge pause, I would not disregard spacing and put the note this close in a normal difficulty.

--You may want to rethink some usage of 1/4 tick notes. it's not a huge deal tho.

Easy

00:12:379(x) - add note with finish and with new combo
00:13:031(1) - remove new combo then move this note to 00:13:292 and fix spacing
00:34:901(spinner) - the spinner really should end here, and then add a note at 00:46:683. (I know the spinne is a little short tho for a beginner. If the spinner is too short, then just replace it with a note. I really don't think you should skip that note at 00:45:901)
01:02:596(spinner) - ^
01:04:422(2) - replace slider with a note
01:04:944(3) - start slider 1/2 tick back.

Nice map :3
Star~

kanpakyin's mod done
winber1 mod done
harder insane diff. done

Ok,here's my mod,and sorry for the delay >.<

[General]

1. The timing at the beginning is off,i can't help you with the timing,but try to ask to some people who can help with the timing
2. The diffs of this map except the hard and the insane have many weird patterns that are confusing,but oh well.

[Easy]

1. 00:25:031 (6) - I don't like so much how this slider fits in the song,I think it's better to short this slider and add a note on 00:26:596 - ,like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:15:640 - Add a note?
2. 00:38:596 (2) - Flip this slider vertically (CTRL+J)
3. 00:43:553 (4) - 1 grid down
4. 00:51:379 - Add a note?
5. 00:53:466 - Add a note?

[LuPiiTa's Hard]

1. 00:26:857 (1) - I know that this is a slowdown,but this decreasing of spacing kills the flow. Maybe put this under the note 5?

[Insane]

1. 00:02:596 (1,2) - What's this spacing?D: move the note 2 3 grids down to adjust the spacing
2. Some streams are placed in a weird mode,but oh well

Well,this map needs a bit of work but i'm sure that with other mods this map will get better!
Star!

Hello.
I won't be nazi,so I'll just point out those problems that should be fixed.

[General]
Last Kiai (01:25:553 ~ 01:29:205) looks weird. I'd like you to disable it.

Also,I want to hear more hitsounds,please check out guest Hard difficulty,and see how they should be used.

[Easy]
00:45:118 (1) - This spinner is off-lyrics,and it's kinda sudden.I suggest you to remove it,and simply add 2 notes to 00:45:901 and 00:46:683.
01:01:814 (1) - ^ Same.

[Normal]
00:56:335 (4) - Not sure about such sliders.Slider ball almost stops while holding,so it may cause slider breaks,you know.

[Insane]
I don't see any reason to use 1.5x velocity for the whole map,cause you can just set right velocity in the timing panel,but..anyway..
00:02:596 (1,2) - These 2 objects snapped in 1x,so fix distance.Place (2) right between (1) and (3).
01:08:727 (1) - This note is off,move it to 01:08:857.

Deserves a star.
Best of luck to you.

Hi.

Easy:

1. 00:10:422 (1, 3)-Add finishes on those notes?
2. 00:12:248 (1)-Add a finish.
3. 00:13:553 (3)-Fix the spacing on this note by using the distance snap. It's better like that.
4. 00:19:814 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
5. 00:45:118 (1)-It's kind of weird having the kiai time start off while the spinner is going... Maybe you should try removing that spinner and replace it with a repeat slider. Start the slider off on 00:45:118, have it it go in a repeat on 00:45:118 and end it on 00:46:683. It's a suggestion, by the way.
6. 00:54:148-Aww... Why must the kiai time end here? I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:01:553.
7. 01:01:814 (1)-The same thing I mentioned on 00:45:118. Start the slider off on 01:01:814, have it it go in a repeat on 01:02:596 and end it on 01:03:379.

Normal:

1. 00:14:326 (6)-Fix the spacing on this slider by using the distance snap. oh, and another thing, have this slider go into a curve.
   Like this.
2. 00:46:683 (2)-Fix the spacing on this note by using the distance snap.
3. 00:49:292 (7)-Fix the spacing on this slider by using the distance snap.
4. 00:52:683 (2)-This note is a bit off screen. Fix this.
5. 00:54:248-It's better to end the kiai time on 01:01:553.

LuPiiTa's Hard:

1. 00:54:248-It's better to end the kiai time on 01:01:553.

Insane:

1. 00:54:248-It's better to end the kiai time on 01:01:553.
2. 01:03:640 (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 , 9, 1)-Hmm.... Remove the 3rd note from 01:03:640 and have this stream go into this curve path. Like this. It plays way better like this, in my opinion at least.
3. 01:16:944 (10)-Fix the spacing on this note by using the distance snap.

You need to put a little more effort with the hitsounds on Easy and Normal. But I won't force you on that.

Good luck, man.

Star.

-kevincela- mods done
IceBeam mods done
Roddie mods done
Skin Update

Timing:
1st timeline:
BPM: 115.000
Offset: 833

2nd timeline:
BPM:116.000
Offset: 7087

3rd timeline:
BPM: 115.000
Offset: 10210

Hello! Nice song! Hopefully you will be able to get this ranked~


Nothing for Normal~ Hope I helped a little... Star for a nice Normal!

Hello there~
You solved a riddle in my mod queue~ :3

Insane

So yeah, for some reason this just applies for Insane~
It's just a minor thing but would be so kind and adjust your Inherited Timing Sections?
Doesn't seem like you did so when you changed you Timing points to a different BPM/Offset~
Uhm well~

00:07:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just a suggestions for hitsounds here: I Would add a finish (or sth different, what you like) add the first tick of every slider and at 5+6. I would probably at a finish at the Spinner after too~.
00:10:470 : I'm not sure about this one but you could probably at a note here (I get the feeling that here's something missing whenever I play that part~ .,.)
00:23:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1 Grid up~ So 5+8 stack with 00:22:992 (5,6,7).
01:12:818 (4,5,6,7,8) - What's up with the spacing here? ]Fix this please~(Should look like this then~) (You should check the spacing for every note after that, when you fixed this~)
01:18:036 (1) - Uhm well, I think the finish at the beginning of this slider is enough but well...~
01:19:079 (1) - ^
01:20:123 (1,2) - ^
01:22:209 (1,2) - ^
01:24:296 (1,2) - ^
01:18:557 (2,3) - I would add some whistles here~ (to point out the whistle from the music "stronger". I would decrease the Volume of those whistles though~)
01:19:601 (2,3) - ^
01:21:166 (1,3) - If you were to remove the finishes at the end of the sliders I pointed out, add finishes here~
01:23:253 (1,3) - ^
01:25:340 (1,3,5,7) - ^

That's everything for Insane~

LuPiiTa's Hard

01:24:296 (1,2,3,4) - Since the ending is like getting "faster" I would add finishes at those sliders (start and end).... Everyone has a different taste though~ :3

This map is pretty solid~, Didn't find anything special here~ :3

Normal

00:07:087 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not to sure about this~, Makes sense but may be a bit to hard for "advanced beginners". Would change this to a slider probably~, Another thing: I would add finishes at those notes~
00:08:638 (1,2) - I would add finishes here too then~
00:09:155 (1,2,3,4) - I miss the spinner here (since theres one at your Insane and a longer Spinner at the Hard diff)~ ;_;, Maybe change it too one and add a finish on it? :3
00:19:340 (2) - 1 Grid left and 2 up~ (4 needs ot be re-adjusted then and everything after 4 too~)
00:19:862 (3) - 2 Grids up (so it stacks with the end of 00:18:557 (1).
00:41:253 (2) - 1 Grid up~
00:44:123 (5) - I would remove this slider and add a spinner from, 00:43:862 - 00:44:644~
00:44:905: I would add a note with a clap here~
00:45:427 (2) - Add clap~
01:25:340 (1,2,3,4) - I would add some finishes here as well~

I guess that's it for Normal... o.o

Easy

00:21:427 (4,5,6,7) - Could you move this two grids to the left? :3
00:25:340 (7) - To make this stack with the end of 00:22:731, you probably have to switch to Grid 4, and move it 1 Grid to the left then~
00:57:688 (2) - Missing clap? o.o (Try to add one at 00:58:731 too then, like you did at 00:56:644~)
01:12:818 (4) - Meh, 1 Grid up~ .,.

Guess that's it then....

Uhm well, nothing else "wrong" with the mapset~
Song is good too imo~

Have this star~

A little Mod

[Easy]

Fine

[Normal]

00:08:638 (1) - New combo

[LuPiiTa's Hard]

00:17:514 (4) - Maybe finish?

Good Map ^^

Star~

Hushu mod done
Yomeiro mod done
MoodyRPG mod done

thanks reqs~

[overall]:
Fine


[Insane]:

1. 00:23:775 (1) - Finish noisy Remove
2. 00:24:296 (4) - ^
3. 00:24:818 (7) - ^
4. 00:25:340 (10) - ^
5. 00:25:601 (1) - soft finish better?
6. 00:30:949 (6) - New combo
7. 00:38:775 (6) - ^
8. 01:12:818 (4,5,6,7) - why spacing...maybe spacing x1.0 put better?

[LuPiiTa's Hard]:

1. 00:52:992 (2) - Remove Finish
2. 00:54:036 (2) - end 00:54:557 -

nice diff

[Normal]:

1. 00:08:638 (1) - Spacing
2. 00:09:543 (2) - ^
3. 00:12:036 (3) - ^
4. 00:12:818 (5) - ^
5. 00:14:905 (1) - ^
6. 00:30:036 (1) - Slider hidden x_x repeace? or change
7. 00:43:340 (3) - Spacing
8. 00:56:514 (5) - move to 00:56:644 -
9. 01:13:210 (3) - move to 01:13:340 -

many spacing miss T_T Please check
Grid snap off distance snap 1.2 put better

[Easy]:

1. 00:10:210 (2) - Distance snap 0.0 grid snap off put better
2. 01:01:340 (1) - beginning Normal finish

Fight~

star(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★

heya. Most of this stuff are just suggestions. I think it'd be better if you'd follow them, though.

General
Video has wrong aspect ration, it needs to be 4:3 I think. I'm stupid, my video player auto-stretches the video files to 16:9
Talking about the video already, could you get a better quality video from somewhere? The video doesn't look very good
Reduce the volume in all sections by at least 15%... please. The hitsounds are kinda too loud :<

Insane
Can you remove some of the claps? There are way too many IMO... would sound better with fewer claps.
00:10:470 - add a note here? I know it's 1/2 after the spinner, but it's an insane diff so it should be fine.
00:11:123 (2) - remove clap, add finish
00:19:340 (3) - add finish
00:40:470 (1) - ^
00:41:514 (5) - ^
00:49:079 (2) - this slider's length is kinda hard to predict... how 'bout removing one repeat add adding a note instead, or maybe try to split it up into 2 sliders?
00:54:818 (10) - fix stacking
00:58:992 (6) - remove this slider, add a single note there instead and add another note at 00:59:253 - ? I think this makes the pattern easier to read.
01:05:514 (1) - same as 00:49:079 (2)

Lupiita
00:20:123 (2) - move this 2 grids left n 2 down and
00:20:383 (3) - this one 3 down and
00:21:166 (4) - this one also 3 grids down to make the pattern look a bit better.
00:25:601 (1) - spacing mistake? I'd say move this one further away. Since you use 0.50x BPM multi, double the spacing here.
00:36:557 (2) - 1 grid left to fix small spacing mishap.
01:04:210 (4) - 1 grid right
01:08:123 (4,5,6,7,8) - try to arrange this into a more geometical pattern? should be a proper pentagon.

Normal
00:33:688 (3,4,5,6) - turn this pattern into a equilateral triangle (damn had to look that word up.)

00:55:079 (4) - I personally don't like this slider. Turn it into simple 1/1 repeat slider?
01:01:862 - add a note here?
01:16:209 (6) - add NC
01:24:296 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - any reason why the spacing here is reduced to the rest of the map?

Easy
Ahhh... it's hard to map decent Easy maps... I can't help myself but to think that this map plays very weird in some parts :<
But heck.... I think it's still OK...
00:36:296 (1) - if you already use slidertick claps, then add them. The claps should be on the ticks instead of the repeats :<
The same goes for most other sliders, too... Some sliders got claps, some don't. Weird.

Star 'n go.

~General~
- There are two of the same bg in the song folder @_@. I know they have your names on it for the difficulties but you could easily sb your names into maps (and then the thumbnail image on the site wouldn’t have a name on it in the bottom right corner). Up to you though, it really isn’t a problem at all, just a personal preference of mine
- The soccer ball hitcircle is slightly larger than the hitoverlay. Can you make it smaller so it fits inside the overlay better?

~Easy~
00:10:210 (2) - stack it better (have it align with the ending of the slider)



~Twinkle twinkle little star~

S o r d a mod done
Tenshi-nyan mod done (There are a few issues i didnt add, and I couldnt find a better quality video )
Haneii mod done (About the names on the BG, i may use SB to put them, but later coz i am lazy now )

hi hi

Na importante que decir aparte que el video pesa mucho para lo mal que se ve, lamentablemente nose donde puedes encontrar uno mejor.

El mapeo se ve bien, a pesar q no me gusto la cancion...
Una star de regalo ^^
Sldos.






PD: "IF YOU HAVEN'T DOWNLOADED THIS MAP SINCE JUNE 2ND OF 2001 (02-06-11), PLEASE..." Existia osu en el 2001 :3?

There's a problem, maybe it's just me. When I download the song I can see only 2 difficulties... Easy and Normal.

I think I'll mod these ones, then when we'll fix this problem I'll recheck the map. (you will find me with IceBeam on the WIP section)


[General]

*Video's quality is bad. I suggest you to add this (if you need to compress it don't hesitate to call me): http://www.mediafire.com/?bb5v6dqs7rl6kne
* Add in tags also "Super Once"


[Easy]

00:23:775 (6) - If I were you, I'd add a new combo here
00:25:601 (1,1) - Recovery time in this time is short and may confuses a newbie: fix it by reducing the spinner of 2/1 or... by removing this hitcircle 00:28:470 (1).
00:36:296 (1) - I expected that you followed the clap-pattern here...
01:15:688 (3) - Why did you made this start on a red tick while you were following a 1/1 rhythm? (=white) Please move it 1/2 forward

[Normal]

00:10:210 (4) - I wouldn't suggest you to stack this since its position from the timeline is different from the previous pattern... [00:09:155 (1,2,3) - ]
01:09:688 (1) - I didn't expect the last repeat [maybe because 01:05:514 (1,2,3) - had just one repeat]
01:22:209 (1) - please don't overlap this with the previous slider >_<

Thx Astom for the star and the correction xd
And thx Armin for the video and the mod
All done
Btw, if you read this try redownloading and see if the other diffs appear

[Easy]
Good. Some notes sound strangely off sync though.
[Normal]
Same as above. \o/
[Hard]
Good as well =w=
[Insane]
01:11:775 - These parts are what I mean by off sync.

01:18:557 (2,3) - whistle whistle
01:19:601 (2,3) - ^ :3

star~

Hope you don't mind me bothering you in the pm.
and sry i'm late.

[Insane]
00:10:470 (1,2,3) - seems not fit to me...but i can't think of a way to make it good.

[Hard]
00:02:919 (4) - new combo?
00:59:253 (1,2) - i would like (1) repeat+1 and (2) be a note at 01:00:557...
01:23:253 (3) - (nazi)1 grid left?

[Normal]
good diff. but...
01:24:296 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what is this stream...
try the way mapped in the Hard diff.

[Easy]
fine.

P.S. i guess the pause screen is not scaled right.

[Easy]
Control the stacked note... and stack with
00:06:311 (x) - Add a Note and stack 00:06:572 (8) - under this like http://puu.sh/2wwZ
00:10:210 (2) - Restack with distance snap 0.0x while pressing Shift

[Normal]
Use more Slider Shapes, as many are linear...
00:09:931 (3,4) - Spacing (little)
00:11:775 (2,3) - ^ (little)
00:12:296 (4,5) - ^ (little)
00:12:818 (5,6) - ^ (heavy)
00:57:166 (1) - make this curved?
00:59:253 (4) - ^
01:02:383 (3) - You can delete this, if you're following voice

[LuPiiTa's Hard]
Use more triplet in the Kiai
00:35:775 (1) - Make it like this

[Insene]
00:10:992 (x) - Add Hit Circle
00:21:427 (10) - Put More effort, and do somthing like this or use this Code

372,84,21427,2,0,B|368:92|368:92|364:88|364:88|360:96|360:96|352:92|352:92|348:104|348:104|340:100|340:100|332:108|332:108|324:104|324:104|316:116|316:116|308:112|308:112|300:120|300:120|292:112|292:112|284:116|284:116|276:104|276:104|268:108|268:108|260:100|260:100|252:104|252:104|248:92|248:92|240:96|240:96|236:88|236:88|232:92|232:92|228:84,1,219.999990463257,8|0

one of the characters is so similiar to Hitsugaya Toshirou of Bleach O.O

OzzyOzrock's mod done!
justnobody's mod done!

justnobody wrote:

P.S. i guess the pause screen is not scaled right.

All images are scaled in proper size to osu!
HakuNoKaemi's mod done!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

00:10:992 (x) - Add Hit Circle

I didnt add this because i like how it sounds now + it doesnt fit with the singer's voice
I hope this is my first ranked map >.<

Hola ~

[Easy]
00:16:470 : Este clap no va
00:18:036 : Clap
00:35:775 : ^
00:36:296 : Este clap no va
00:37:340 : ^
00:38:383 : ^
00:39:427 : ^
00:43:079 : Clap
00:55:079 : Un grid arriba
01:19:079 : ^

[Normal]
01:01:340 : Finish

[LuPiiTa's Hard]
Slider Tick Rate : 2
00:44:644 : Finish
01:01:340 : ^
01:27:949 : ^

[Insane]
00:10:210 : Finish
00:44:644 : ^
01:01:340 : ^

Buen mapa ~

You kind of read the rules in my modding queue but didn't get it....I'm feeling well today so here's a mod anyway

I think the timing is much more complex than it seems. Right now you could barely map the vocals but it looks so terribly wrong on the timeline. You should get some more "professional" timing help. Selee alone will not be enough here I guess. /duckandrun

[Easy]
00:04:485 (5) - replace by a slider starting at 00:04:224 (red tick to white tick) to better match the lyrics and difficulty
00:12:036 (2,3) - replace by a slider and repeat 1x (start + end on the red ticks, turning point an big white tick)
00:14:905 (1,2) - could follow the song much better than this. 00:45:949 (2,3) - Is a good example of how you can do it.
Hitsounds could still use some work to better match the song.

[Normal]
00:07:087 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This part seems pretty tough for a "normal" use repeating sliders to make it more difficulty appropriate
00:42:557 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:340 (3) - instead of the circle a 1x repeat slider would fit the vocals much better (start 2 1/4 ticks earlier on red tick, turn on blue, end on white http://puu.sh/2z3P)
Some spacings felt weird but that might just be the result of the 1,2X spacing

[LuPiiTa's Hard]
00:38:514 (1) - better use a 1/4 1x repeat slider here to match the beat and vocals (http://puu.sh/2z4p)
01:15:427 (2,3) - not in line, move (3) 1 grid left
01:16:470 (4) - move to 336/320

other than that pretty much ok

[Insane]
00:10:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - As I said I'm not sure about the timing. This part plays horribly off imo. It does follow "something" but intuitive it is not. Don't have a suggestion to "fix" this other than "get some more professional timing help"
00:58:210 (5) - place 1 grid down + 1 grid right
00:59:253 (7) - new combo (and delete new combo from following)
01:02:644 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - long stream doesn't fit here well, delete (4) and (6) and rearrange to fit spacing
01:03:427 (1) - delete new combo and start new combo on next


I still see the timing problem but this can be fixed I guess.
~star

[General]

1. Siento algo atrasado el timing, no se tú, pero intentaria corregirlo.

[Easy]

1. 00:12:036 (2,3) Las notas apiladas son dificiles de leer para los nuevos jugadores.

[Normal]

1. 00:37:340 (2,3) Espaciamiento

[Insane]

1. 00:02:919 (5,1) Corrige estos dos slider, puedes hacerlos mejor.
2. 00:15:688 (1) Quita el nuevo combo y agregalo en la nota siguiente
3. 01:18:036 (1~) Tal vez mas jumps y algo mas bonito para esta ultima parte ?

Eso es todo la verdad, no ando con muchas ganas de modear ... pero el mapa esta muy bueno ^^
Star.

PD no modee la hard porque me parece que esta muy bien :d

really a good map

Have a star~

darck360's mod done!

p3n's mod done!

eldnl's mod done!

Daigurenhyourinmaru: Thx for ur star

MOAR

Hi at first ^-^

about your Easy

00:10:190 wrong spacing
00:12:036 wrong spacing at Combo 2 and 3
00:16:470 wrong spacing at Combo 3
00:48:818 wrong spacing at first Combo
01:02:644 ^ at Combo 2 and 3
01:17:514 ^ from 2 until 5

try to change them please .

you can use dinstance snap to change that . i am going to mod the other difficultys tomorrow . Hope i helped you for now a little^^

yo

<Easy>
Fine :3

<Normal>
00:49:862 (3,4,5) - right lef 1gird(gird level small)
00:58:470 - add a note?
00:58:992 - ^

<LuPiiTa's Hard>
00:11:644-add soft-whistle?
00:11:775 - hmm remove this soft-clap and add it to 00:12:036 ?
00:18:557 (1,2) - make a jump?
00:29:775 (1) - add a soft-finish?

<Insanse>
00:19:079 (2) - remove this soft-clap?
01:05:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - rearrange it?
01:10:731 (1) - new combo

star~

thx reqs~

[Insane]
1.05.514(1~6,1~6) - no good mapping...

[Easy]
0.04.224(5) - spacing
0.07.093(1) - 1grid right(this diff is easy,check all(1) spacing)
0.11.123(1) - 1grid down
0.12.036(2) - spacing
0.13.079(3) - ^
0.16.470(3) - ^
0.44.644(1) - 1grid up
0.48.818(1) - spacing
1.01.340(1) - 1grid right
1.18.036(1,2,1) - like this

[general]
SB element: for the HP bar, it's quite lol that he's eye is covered, what if you make the figure in front of the bar, or extend the bar and put the figure on the right?

[Insane] <- in the beginning part, the claps maybe too much.
00:17:514 (7,8) - remove clap on (7), clap on beginning of (8)?
00:18:557 (1,3) - stack?
00:19:340 (3) - + finish
00:21:427 (10) - remove clap, spacing issue for (9,10)
00:23:253 (6) - + whistle?
01:00:036 (5,6) - putting (5,6) on the top of (1~4) to form a triangle like last time would be better?
01:15:688 (8,8) - + whistle?

- quite a lot of spacing issue, try to refer your AI mod?

[Hard]
00:35:514 (6) - right 1 grid for correct spacing
nice!

[Normal] OD+1?
00:14:905 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:17:514 (7,8,1) - ^ (Here maybe you can put (7,8) right+up 1 grid, (1,3) up 1 grid) [many spacing problem like this, try to fix them with the AI mod (Ctrl+Shift+A), I may not list all of them here]
00:28:992 (3,4,5) - ^
00:36:296 (1,2,3,4) - make them unique, either all curve slider or all stright slider? the placement of (4,1) would be a bit odd, try to move (1) elsewhere.
01:02:644 (3,1,2) - spacing
01:19:079 (1,2) - make this one symmetrical to last combo's (1,2)

you can also try to use more different variations~