those wrote:

[General]

1. I'm not sure where you stand on this, but for me, mainly D is used on the significant downbeats, and not K; K is used in the middle of measures and at the end only when suitable. Okay~ I'll use this for the future :3
2. HP drain and OD should be between 4 and 7. For a song like this I would not go above 5. Fixed.
3. AR and CS should be defaulted; there are no reasons to move them around. Fixed.
4. For future reference, it's much easier to mod by looking at the timeline (instead on relying on hitsounds and/or F5) if combo colours were used. An advantage of this would be that combo numbers shown in the mod would generally still be accurate even if you removed an object earlier, and applying mods would be much easier if suggestions include removal of objects. Alright, I'll do that~

[Easy]

1. 00:22:196 (23,24,25) - kdk like 00:30:543 (35,36,37) - . Fixed!
2. 00:26:370 (29,30,31) - This ddk stands out a lot, since it's the only one different from kkd. There's really no harm in keeping with kkd. Fixed!
3. 00:27:413 (31) - If you want to use a Finish here, use D. Otherwise, with above suggestion, d.I'll use D~
4. 01:00:283 (72) - k is fine here, no need to use K as emphasis. Fixed!
5. 01:17:500 (93,94,95,96,97) - Too dense. With this you have 9/1 in a row, which may be asking for a lot. Remove (94,96). The remaining (93,95,97) I recommend d d k. Fixed!
6. 01:21:674 (100,101,102,103,104) - Just like the above, except you already have the d d k. Fixed!
7. Or, you can replace all this with a spinner from 01:17:500 (93) - to (97), while keeping (98,99) kk, and repeat for 01:21:674 - . This may be an interesting alternative, but might be more suitable in Normal and above. Nah, I'm fine with the above fix.~
8. 01:30:022 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - Just don't like the K spam. I'd leave them all k except 01:33:152 (117) - . Fixed!
9. 01:34:196 (118) - D. Afterwards, copy paste beginning here, up to 01:50:892 (142) - D. Fixed!
10. If you 01:50:892 (142) - D, you get a nice dkd dkk dkd dkk pattern. That you can copy and paste onto 01:59:238 (154) - . Fixed!
11. 02:07:586 (167) - Finally, D. Fixed!

[Normal]

1. Note: you don't have enough break points. You have filled in every 1/1 except for the prechorus part, which is asking a lot for a Normal (or any lower diff, for that matter).
2. 00:19:065 (36) - D. Fixed!
3. 00:20:109 (38,39,40,41) - Rhythmatically speaking I would try to emphasize puru puru over tsun tsun. That is, o o ooo o o ooo is much more friendly than a dense ooo o ooo. Fixed!
4. 00:28:456 (58,59,60,61,62) - Still too early in the song to have 5-note pattern. It's fine copy and pasting the first part of the chorus. Fixed!
5. 00:38:891 (84,85,86) - ddk and 00:43:065 (93,94,95) - kkk. Fixed!
6. 00:52:978 (117) - Remove this or (119), you need a break point. Do the same in the next matching part in the verse (that is, 137 or 139).
7. 00:59:761 (133,134,135) - 1/2 ooO not pleasant in Normal. Fixed!
8. 01:17:500 - Take italicized suggestion in Easy, try 01:20:630 - ddk and 01:24:804 - kdk (just use the code below for my example). Fixed!
   

   256,192,77500,12,0,79587
   128,96,80630,5,0
   128,96,80891,1,0
   128,96,81152,1,8
   256,192,81674,12,0,83761
   128,96,84804,5,8
   128,96,85065,1,0
   128,96,85326,1,8

9. Copy paste the first part of the Kiai from above, and I'll go over the 5-note patterns in the last part of the Kiai afterward, when you're done the mapset.

1. 00:02:370 (1) - This is the uniq Diff who have this note with a ''K'' And not with a ''D'' like the others diff.. Change this to ''D''~
2. 00:23:239 (25) - ''d''
3. 00:26:891 (30) - ''d'' for Continue the pattern from 00:22:717 (24)
4. 00:31:587 (37) - ''d''
5. 00:35:239 (42) - ''d'' for Continue the pattern from 00:31:065 (36)
6. 00:46:196 (54,55,56) - I think ''d k d'' Sounds better.. I listen a clap in (55)..
7. 00:52:456 (63) - ''d''..
8. 01:15:413 (89) - ''k'' .. You can use a Kat here because the 2 Previous notes was.. Kantans.. I think Sounds better..
9. 01:19:587 (95) - ''d''
10. 01:27:935 (105) - ''d''
11. 01:30:022 (107) - Move this note to 01:28:456 And remove the Finish.
12. 01:28:978 (107) - ''d''
13. 01:30:022 (x) - If you make the Last change of ''Move the note'' Put a New note with ''K''
14. 01:38:370 (120) - ''d''
15. 01:42:021 (125) - ''d''
16. 01:46:717 (132) - ''d''
17. 01:50:369 (137) - ''d''
18. 01:50:891 (138,139) - You have 2 notes in the Same position.. Erase 1.. lol o.o
19. 01:58:717 (150) - Add a note ''k''

1. 00:38:891 (1,1,1) - Mixed'1/2'Triplets is not recommended.. Change this to ''d k k'' Fixed!
2. 00:44:109 (3) - ''D'' Fixed!
3. 00:51:413 (2,1,1) - The same of the First Point.. Change this to ''k d d''.. I know is Easy for the Low BPM.. But Really is highly recommended Avoid this.. Like in Muzukashiis.. Avoid Mixed'1/4'Triplets.~ Wanna keep this one, doesn't seem too hard and as you said it's still low BPM; if this gets suggested again i'll change it, tho. :3
4. 01:00:022 (x) - Put a note ''k'' Fixed!
5. 01:08:109 (2,1,1) - The same of the First and Third Points.. xD Change this to ''k d d''~ Same As Other Reason >w<//
6. 01:15:413 (6,1,1) - The same.. You know.. Change this to ''k d d''.. Same ><
7. 01:17:500 (1) - Hm.. Maybe.. Slider? Extended the spinners instead~
8. 01:21:674 (1) - (^) The same~ ^
9. 01:24:804 (1) - Know you know why is Better have 4 Colours :3/ Oh and.. The same of the Others points.. So change this to ''d d k'' Fixed!
10. 01:59:239 (2) - ''D'' Fixed!
11. 02:05:500 (2,1,1) - The same of the Others Points.. xD Change this to ''d k k'' or ''d d k''. Wanna keep this one ;w;
12. 02:06:543 (1,1,2,1,1) - So hard for a Normal diff.. Yes. xD.. so.. Change 02:07:587 (1) to ''D'' And that is all~ Now is more ''Normal'' ;D Fixed!

1. 00:19:065 (39) - ''D''
2. 00:20:109 (43,44,45) - Change this to ''ddd''.
3. 00:23:239 (56) - ''d''
4. 00:26:109 (68,69,70) - Yes.. Is not Recommended have Mixed'1/4' Triplets in a Muzukashii (Hard) Diff. Change this to ''kkk''.
5. 00:27:413 (73) - ''D''
6. 00:28:456 (77,78,79) - Change this to ''ddd''.
7. 00:31:587 (91) - ''d''
8. 00:34:456 (103,104,105) - Change this to ''kkk''~
9. 00:35:761 (108) - ''D''
10. 00:49:326 (152) - ''d''
11. 00:49:587 (153,154,155) - The same of the 4th Point. Change this to ''kdd'' or ''kkd''.
12. 00:50:109 (156) - ''k''
13. 00:53:500 (169) - ''d''
14. 00:56:630 (183) - ''d''
15. 00:57:674 (187) - ''d''
16. 01:01:848 (204) - ''d''
17. 00:57:935 (188,189,190) - You know.. Change this to ''ddk''.
18. 01:02:891 (209) - ''d''
19. 01:04:196 (214,215,216) - Retry~ Change this to ''kdd'' or ''kkd''.
20. 01:07:587 (229) - ''d''
21. 01:10:196 (239) - ''d''
22. 01:11:239 (244) - ''d''
23. 01:18:283 (273) - ''d''
24. 01:19:326 (277) - ''d''
25. 01:20:630 (282,283,284,285,286) - Change this Pattern to ''d k d k d''.
26. 01:21:935 (287) - ''d''
27. 01:22:717 (290) - ''d''
28. 01:22:978 (291) - ''d''
29. 01:34:196 (326) to 01:50:370 (394) - Depends if you make The changes in the Begin.. You will pass the changes to this part..~
30. 01:50:892 (395) - ''D''
31. 01:51:935 (399,400,401,402,403) - Ohno.. Change this to ''ddddk''.
32. 01:52:717 (404) - ''k''
33. 01:52:978 (405) - ''d''
34. 01:53:239 (406) - ''d''
35. 01:53:500 (407) - ''k''
36. 01:53:761 (408) - ''d''
37. 01:55:848 (416) - ''d''
38. 01:59:239 (430) - ''D''
39. 02:00:022 (433) - ''d''
40. 02:00:283 (434,435,436,437,438) - You know.. Change this to ''ddddk''.
41. 02:01:326 (440,441,442) - yes. Change this to ''ddd''.
42. 02:04:196 (452) - ''d''
43. 02:07:065 (465,466,467) - Yes~ Change this to ''kdd''.

• Up the S.V to 1,60. 1,40 in this Diff is so Boooring. Fixed!

1. 00:19:065 (57) - ''D'' This would make Muzukashii oddly harder then oni, sadly.. so no ;w;~~
2. 00:20:109 (61,62,63,64,65) - I think ''ddkkd'' Is better. cries plz no
3. 00:27:413 (94) - ''D'' Fixed!
4. 00:34:587 (128) - ''d'' Fixed!
5. 00:35:761 (132) - ''D'' Fixed!
6. 00:41:761 (159) - ''k'' Fixed!
7. 01:34:196 (389) - ''D'' Fixed!
8. 01:35:239 (393,394,395,396,397) - I think ''ddkkd'' Is better. cries stop no!!!
9. 01:42:543 (426) - ''D'' Fixed!
10. 01:50:891 (464) - ''D'' Fixed!
11. 01:59:239 (501) - ''D'' Fixed!
12. 02:06:804 (537,538,539,540,541,542,543) - Change this to kdkkkkd. cries i like the current one more

1. 00:44:630 - What about adding a note with a d here? It'll be consistent with 00:46:196 (1,2,1) - and fits really well too. Actually, noticed these two small patterns were unconsistent with the rest of this map so I removed them >w<~~
2. 00:52:456 (2) - I'd use a d instead since you'll be using only that for the other patterns,or maybe you could alternate d with k by adding a k at 01:09:152 (1) - Added d~[/b]
3. 01:17:500 (1) - Add a finish here to begin this phrase? Nah, doesn't have a finish in the BGM so I don't think I should add one here. I'll consider it, tho.
4. 01:20:630 (2,3,1) - Here I would use a k d k instead of a k k d,as I think it fits better with the singer's changement of pitch. There's no need to change that at 01:24:804 (2,3,1) - ,since at 01:25:848 (1) - the singer's changement of pitch isn't high. Done~
5. 02:07:065 (3) - As there are some cymbals played in the bg,I suggest you to add a finish here,to follow these cymbals. NOP, but thanks for the suggestion :3

1. 01:33:413 - Imho,it could be better to add a note with a d here to follow the synth in the bg. Done~
2. 01:33:674 (1) - Add a kat here,to follow the synth's pitch going up after 01:33:413 - Done!
3. 01:56:891 (1) - K here,along with 01:58:456 (2) - ,to keep the consistency with the previous pattern? Fixed~~
4. 02:07:065 (2) - Again,add a finish here to follow the cymbals in the bg? Nah ><~

1. 00:18:543 (1) - You should add a finish here,like you did on the Fuutsu diff, Done
2. 00:51:804 - Add a note with a d here to make 00:51:674 (2,3) - a triplet? If you hear the bg,there are some drums that are played in this way,and following them would be pretty cool Added :3
3. 00:59:630 (1) - d here? A k imho doesen't fit that well here :U fixed
4. 01:21:935 (2,2) - d in these places? As now I think that they fit better,even when linked with 01:23:761 (1,2,3) - . fixed in a different way :3

Nyquill wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:20:630 (1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure if breaking off flow here on a muzu is such a great idea. Up to you, but I'd rather keep the k d k d. cries no stop plz!!!111
00:35:761 (2) - If you're leading into this section with a 2nd and 4th beat kat batter, might be better to leave this as a D Fixed!
01:14:109 (2) - Changing to d would make the K after better to hit. Fixed!

[Oni]
00:21:935 (70) - Should change to d and 00:22:196 (71) to kat. Not only is this bad for flow (which is pretty important here since most people will be probably DTing), but following vocals won't be hindered by this change. Fixed!
00:29:500 (104,105,106) - Suggesting you turn this into dkd. kdk just doesn't sound all that great + this is better for flow as well. Fixed!
00:33:935 (125,126) - Reverse the kats and dons here please. Fixed!
00:40:717 (154,155) - ^ Fixed!
00:42:804 (163,164,165) - This will do better as a kkd (listen to that snare) Fixed!
01:13:978 - You can totally get away with adding a don here. Makes for good flow with the next ddk too. no omg stopppp!!!11
01:15:413 (310,312,315,316) - Because of what you have going at 01:13:326 (301,305) , it would be REALLY nice if you found a way to make these Ks. nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!1111111

Other two diffs are fine (more like, I can't tell if theres diffuculty issues since I've never played anything easier than a muzu before).

Oh wait sorry didn't notice the new diff one sec...

I'm sorry I have no fucking clue how to mod slow taikos orz

Miracle Lotus wrote:

[Kantan]
Just want to say that the difficulty feels really empty, fill in some gaps if you can. Ok~

01:18:543(2) Would be better to make it a k object. Nah, then it would feel a little weird to have three Ks in a row when they all are spaced out for me; may change if i get another suggestion for this tho~
01:49:326 Add a d object here. I don't think long 'streams' in easy would be good and making this longer is a bit meh ><~

[714's Oni]
I'll say this, your map is disorganized.
00:24:543(94,95)- Make 94 a k and 95 a d.
00:39:674(161,162,163)- 161 and 163 ks
00:47:630(192)- Remove k and replace it with d
00:50:500(213)- ^
00:59:630(256)- ^
01:12:674(313)- ^
01:42:283- Add a d
01:43:587(447,448,449,450,451)- Make it k/d/k/d/k/d

Other than that, everything else seems okay.

Sync wrote:

-6 to the offset sounds perfect to me -- try it out. I actually used the ranked map's MP3 and Offset-- Considering that it's ranked and not super old I assume it's correct and it sounds a bit too early for me; I'll see what to do, but for now i'm keeping it at what it was.

[714 Oni]
00:18:016 (65) - Consider making this a kat -- ddkdk definitely follows the percussion here better than ddddk.
00:18:537 (68) - I'd use a big-kat here instead. The percussion here is high-pitched and it just sounds awkward with a big don.
01:04:972 (281,282,283) - Making this into a 5-note stream would be consistent with what you did two stanzas previously and follow the music great.
01:51:929 (484) - make this a kat to keep up the flow (one kat per white tick)
01:55:581 (502,503,504) - I'm not a fan of having three kats in a row here -- it sounds bad and kind of catches you off guard while you're playing. Instead, make 01:55:842 (503) a don.
02:00:277 (521,522,523,524,525) - I think kdkkd would follow the music perfectly here, at the cost of being harder to play than kdkdd. do as you wish
02:02:624 (533) - Make this a kat here instead to imitate the melody

[Oni]
00:41:239 (156,157,158,159) - This part is awkward as hell... I'd change it do kdk d instead. kkd is fine but honestly it just ruins the flow and having a k on the upbeat sounds awful. Fixed!

[Muzukashii]
00:25:065 (2) - Not a fan of how this part plays -- making this a don would feel a lot better and even though you're using white k -> red k quite often (like at 00:20:630) it doesn't fit well here because of the kat at 00:25:326 (3). Personally, I'd prefer to keep the kat there so removing it here would be optimal. Fixed!
00:29:239 (2) - ^ Fixed!
00:34:456 (1) - Add a kat here Fixed!
00:56:370 (2) - see 00:25:065 (2) Fixed!
00:58:456 (2) - Make this kat a don and make the don on the downbeat a kat. see 00:25:065 (2) for reasoning Fixed!
01:02:630 (2) - see 00:25:065 (2) Fixed!
01:06:804 (2) - ^ No Thanks >w<
01:07:326 (1) - Yeah, this kat is definitely unnecessary. Sounds spammy, really. Fixed!
01:10:978 (2) - see 00:25:065 (2) Fixed!
01:13:065 (2) - ^ Fixed!
01:15:152 (3) - ^ Fixed!
01:40:196 (2) - ^ Fixed!
01:48:544 (2,1) - see 00:58:456 (2) Fixed!
01:58:456 (2) - see 01:07:326 (1) Fixed!
02:05:239 (2) - see 00:25:065 (2) Fixed!

The Futsuu and Kantan look great, though you might want to consider lowering the OD and HP by 1 on the Kantan (doesn't affect too much, really). Fixed too. :3 Thanks for the mod~

08:37 Byakugan249: 00:02:370 (1) - mm~ K here. it'll go along with the cymbals in this part
08:40 Elly-chan: okies
08:41 Byakugan249: 00:10:717 (10) - maybe a D here? the thump of the drums change compared to the other patterns
08:42 Elly-chan: mm nah ><
08:42 Byakugan249: lol alright :3
08:42 Byakugan249: 00:19:065 (19) - same as my 1st suggestion
08:43 Elly-chan: okies
08:45 Byakugan249: 00:52:456 (63) - make this a k. that d sounds unfitting with this part IMO
08:46 Elly-chan: mm idunno.. it'd be surrounded by ks then and then i usually place a don at that same sound for ex 00:51:413 -
08:46 Elly-chan: 00:51:413 - *
08:47 Byakugan249: alright keep this in mind
08:47 Elly-chan: okays~
08:48 Byakugan249: 01:13:326 (87) - K here. there's cymbals in this part, and it'll be consistent with ht next K
08:48 Byakugan249: the*
08:50 Elly-chan: done~
08:51 Byakugan249: off to normal--i mean Fuutsu ><
08:52 Elly-chan: lol aighties
08:52 Elly-chan: :3
08:53 Byakugan249: 00:18:543 (35) - maybe a K here to go along with the clash in the cymbals?
08:54 Elly-chan: added
08:55 Byakugan249: 00:27:413 (56) - same as above
08:56 Elly-chan: should i make the note after that a d?
08:56 Elly-chan: feels really awkward to have k k K k
08:56 Elly-chan: imo
08:56 Byakugan249: let me run through it
08:56 Byakugan249: yea make it a d
08:57 Elly-chan: k
08:57 Elly-chan: fixes
08:57 Elly-chan: fixed
08:58 Byakugan249: 00:35:239 (77,78,79) - K K d here. the K's match the cymbals. the d follows it up, or you can do k k d. either will work
08:59 Elly-chan: mm can it be K D k ? x'D
08:59 Elly-chan: i like the D o3o
08:59 Byakugan249: yea that works :3
09:00 Elly-chan: done
09:01 Elly-chan: actually back to 00:27:413 - 
09:01 Elly-chan: idk if i shoudl change that or not
09:01 Elly-chan: because the next note is where my clap pattern would be but now it's a D
09:01 Elly-chan: and in the second kiai it's a D here too
09:01 Byakugan249: ahh ok leave it for consistency
09:01 Elly-chan: okies
09:01 Elly-chan: anythin else on normal? *w*
09:02 Byakugan249: lol not yet :P
09:03 Byakugan249: 01:15:413 (170,171,172) - this should be dkd instead of kdk because the d's match the drums
09:15 Elly-chan: aa keep posting the mods orz
09:15 Elly-chan: i have to go afk
09:15 Elly-chan: x'D
09:15 Byakugan249: ahh sure~
09:18 Byakugan249: 01:39:935 (224,225,226) - alright umm... kdd here. it'll go along with the instrumental, especially the volume
09:19 Byakugan249: 01:49:848 (250,251,252) - kdd this time. same reason as above.
09:20 Byakugan249: 01:58:456 (273) - k here. same reason
09:20 Byakugan249: 02:04:717 (289) - ^
09:21 Byakugan249: 02:05:500 (291,292,293) - dkk here. same reason
09:22 Byakugan249: Hard:
09:23 Byakugan249: 00:20:109 (43,44,45) - ddd. there's nothing in the instrumental that changes.
09:24 Byakugan249: 00:28:587 (78,79) - in this case, do kk since the 1st note in this 3-plet is a k
09:25 Byakugan249: 00:57:935 (188,189,190) - i'm feeling dkd instead to show the emphasis in the instrumental
09:25 Byakugan249: 01:04:196 (214,215,216) - ^
09:28 Byakugan249: 01:35:240 (330,331,332) - same as 00:28:587
09:29 Byakugan249: 01:43:848 (366) - k instead. the instrumental in the 3-plet is like a bommerang. it goes back to the start of the instrumental
09:31 Byakugan249: 02:00:022 (433,434,435,436,437,438) - do the same pattern like you did on 01:51:674 (398,399,400,401,402,403) - for consistenct
09:33 Byakugan249: Insane:
09:33 Byakugan249: 00:18:543 (55) - K here. it goes with not only the drums, but the cymbals as well
09:35 Byakugan249: 00:51:152 (202,203,204,205,206,207) - do kdk kdd. it goes along with the instrumental in this part
09:37 Byakugan249: and we're done~ \:D/