1. Easy (2.3 stars, 113 notes)
2. Hard (4.43 stars, 211 notes)
3. Normal (3.66 stars, 147 notes)

HanzeR wrote:

Wow, such a pretty song and map

[General]
Offset for intro sounds better at 2683 IMO Tested and sure

[Hard]
Drain +1 BPM is low so the drain will stay
OD +1 Not suppose to be very hard so this will stay too.
00:11:644 (3) - move to 00:11:449 No Change , I want the whistle at the end to sound correct.
00:12:228 (1) - move to 00:12:033 ^
00:24:390 (5) - this slider is ugly compared to all your other pretty ones D: maybe try copying 00:23:086 (3) - Was testing slider shapes , But changed
00:52:270 - Add a note here, follows the drums better Okay
01:19:009 (4) - move to x308 y44 Looks fine to me.

[Normal]
00:13:214 - You should include a spinner here, like in hard. It fits the music better and a timing change like that would be hard for newer players to read. I only add Spinners if I can't seem to find anything to put, and I tend to keep spinners low in easier diffs
00:45:259 (4) - maybe curve this around more? Like this http://puu.sh/R1hY Looks nicer done!
01:10:042 (2) - ^ ^
01:25:368 (3) - ^ ^
01:29:607 (4) - ^ ^
01:15:259 (5) - x320 y204 Done
01:40:205 (8) - move to 01:40:368 and end at 01:40:857 Done

[Easy]
Not much to change, looks great
00:50:477 (6) - try and make this more symmetrical, like this http://puu.sh/R1nX Made some changes


I'm going to be listening to this song all day its so pretty . Great job and good luck in ranking!!

kratozjc wrote:

Hi, here's my mod

[General]
Be more consistent in ur spacing
And try to do ur sliders simmetrical

[Easy]

00:15:260 (1) - Too near use ds0.8x Didn't notice this , Fixed
00:19:825 (1) - ^
00:52:759 - Add a NC No Change
00:53:086 - Remove NC ^
01:02:542 (6) - Stacks may confuse begginers , suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400477 Fixed


[Normal]

00:03:072 - 1 grid left Eh , Think this isn't really a big issue , So left this note the same
00:13:592 (4) - Too far use ds0.9x Fixed
01:23:337 (2) x176 y204 Tiny Change

[Hard]

00:24:390 (5) - This slider should end on 00:25:042 Oops , Must have Changed it when I fixed the slider up , Fixed now
00:32:216 (4) - Make this simmetrical like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400499 k
00:53:738 (1) - Make this simmetrical ^
01:39:912 (7) - Move to 01:40:368 and finish at 01:40:857. Sounds better K


Good luck with ranking

TheVileOne wrote:

General

00:13:019 - Unsnapped green line
00:14:967 - ^

Easy

00:30:912 - Add note? You did the same thing for the other sequences. Alright!
00:36:455 (1) - Would look better if this was slightly more away from 00:34:825 (2) -
00:43:955 (3,4,5,6,7) - Doesn't play the best. I suggest replacing the repeater with a single note, and start the beat long slider here 00:44:607 - You can finish the pattern with a note here 00:45:912 - http://puu.sh/V3ig If I change this , I have to change all the other notes in this section , and I think its fine as is because it follows the vocals nicely
01:38:738 (5,1,2) - Weird going inward. Flip? Have this 01:40:368 (3) - on the left side of 2 instead. Talked to him a bit about this, Leaving as is for now

Normal

00:12:033 (3,4) - These sliders shouldn't be different. Done
00:17:542 (5,1,2) - the curve kind of changes its path here.I don't want to break your flow so fix only if you think it should be fixed. Position Changed
00:26:346 (6) - finish? Added
00:54:716 (2) - Blanket with previous slider? http://puu.sh/V3Dj Done
01:02:868 (5) -Move to make a more wavy transition? http://puu.sh/V3FQ Changed
01:14:281 (3,4,5,1) - Is the spacing supposed to be different through here? Changed
01:36:129 (2) - Should be in front of 1 IMO. Done
01:38:738 (6,8) - You didn't use asymmetry for the whole song. Why at the very end? Vocal change to Instrumental Change , Wanted to mix things up

Hard

There might be too many whistles in this difficulty. The other difficulties, it was hard to tell the hitsounds from the actual beat of the song. The hitsounds stand out in this difficulty for some reason. I can't really say for sure at the moment, I can't mod hitsounds right now.

Remove countdown from Hard.

00:04:241 (4) - Raise slightly? Slider is a bit low for the positioning of the previous part. It's fine as is, but might just be a tad better higher. Done
00:09:501 (5) - Even out the move points to make a perfect slider. Done
00:11:644 (3) - ^
00:31:564 (2,3,4) - Curve kind of flattens here. Make it more consistent. Okay
00:42:651 (4) - Not sure I like going back for this slider. The position is fine , Unless you can show me something better
01:07:270 (5,6,1,2,3) - Line up better? Changed a bit

I like the ending. Good job.

AIBat v3.0 wrote:

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[Easy]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:019 - snap to 00:13:007
00:14:967 - snap to 00:14:955

[Hard]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:019 - snap to 00:13:007
00:14:967 - snap to 00:14:955

[Normal]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:019 - snap to 00:13:007
00:14:967 - snap to 00:14:955

[ModTrace]

Easy
00:44:281 (4) - Remove the clap on the start.
00:49:825 (4) - Move to {x:216 y:328}.
00:50:151 (5) - Move to {x:160 y:316}.
00:50:477 (6) - Move node #1 to {x:116 y:280}, move node #2 to {x:56 y:196}, move node #3 to {x:128 y:100}, move node #4 to {x:208 y:96}, move node #5 to {x:260 y:136}.
00:54:716 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:180 y:76}.
01:15:260 (4) - Add NC.
01:15:586 (1) - Remove NC.
01:20:151 (1) - Remove NC.
01:20:477 (2) - Add NC.
01:21:455 (3) - Move to {x:280 y:140}.
01:24:716 (1) - Remove NC.
01:26:020 (2) - Add NC.
01:27:651 (1) - Remove NC.
01:28:303 (2) - Add NC.
01:30:912 (5) - Move node #5 to {x:80 y:24}, add NC.
01:35:151 (1) - Move to {x:364 y:288}.
01:35:477 (2) - Move to {x:308 y:276}.
01:36:129 (3) - Add NC.
01:38:738 (5) - Add NC.
01:39:227 (1) - Remove NC.

Hard
00:32:216 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:33:031 (5) - Remove this slider.
00:33:194 - Add a slider from here until 00:33:520, with a whistle on the end.
00:33:846 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:34:173 (2) - Add a clap.
00:34:825 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:35:640 (5) - Remove this slider.
00:35:803 - Add a slider from here until 00:36:129, with a whistle on the end.
00:36:455 (1) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:36:781), remove the clap on the end.
00:37:759 (4) - Remove the clap on the start.
00:39:064 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:39:390 (2) - Add a clap.
00:40:042 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:41:673 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:41:999 (2) - Add a clap.
00:42:651 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:43:466 (5) - Remove this slider.
00:43:629 - Add a slider from here until 00:43:955, with a whistle on the end.
00:44:281 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:44:607 (2) - Add a clap.
00:45:260 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:46:890 (1) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:47:216), remove the clap on the end.
00:49:010 (5) - Move node #1 to {x:436 y:84}, move node #2 to {x:472 y:128}.
00:49:499 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:49:825 (2) - Add a clap.
01:34:173 (1) - Move node #1 to {x:292 y:120}, move node #2 to {x:452 y:16}.
01:35:151 (2) - Move node #1 to {x:464 y:108}, move node #2 to {x:380 y:160}.
01:35:640 (3) - Move to {x:396 y:200}.
01:35:803 (4) - Move to {x:440 y:216}.
01:35:966 (5) - Move to {x:452 y:264}.
01:36:129 (6) - Move to {x:424 y:300}.
01:37:107 (3) - Move to {x:200 y:228}.

Normal
00:32:216 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:33:846 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:34:173 (2) - Add a clap.
00:34:825 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:36:455 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:36:781 (2) - Add a clap on the start.
00:37:759 (4) - Remove the clap on the start, remove the clap on the end.
00:39:390 (1) - Add a clap.
00:40:042 (3) - Add a clap on the end.
00:41:673 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:41:999 (2) - Add a clap.
00:42:651 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:44:281 (1) - Remove the clap.
00:44:607 (2) - Add a clap.
00:45:260 (4) - Add a clap on the end.
00:46:890 (1) - Remove the clap on the start, add a clap on repeat #1 (at 00:47:216).
00:48:194 (3) - Remove the clap on the end.
00:49:825 (4) - Add a clap.
01:07:107 (1) - Remove NC.
01:07:433 (2) - Add NC.
01:09:716 (1) - Remove NC.
01:10:042 (2) - Move node #2 to {x:416 y:124}, move node #4 to {x:292 y:120}, add NC.
01:23:086 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:200 y:304}, move node #3 to {x:160 y:276}.
01:23:738 (2) - Add a finish on the start, remove the finish on the end, move node #1 to {x:200 y:216}, move node #2 to {x:164 y:188}, move node #3 to {x:126 y:214}.
01:29:607 (4) - Move node #1 to {x:172 y:172}, move node #2 to {x:188 y:124}, move node #3 to {x:288 y:128}, move node #4 to {x:304 y:176}.
01:36:781 (3) - Move node #1 to {x:280 y:96}, move node #2 to {x:352 y:12}.
01:38:738 (6) - Add NC.