1. Easy (1.32 stars, 166 notes)
2. Hard (2.46 stars, 314 notes)
3. Normal (1.63 stars, 196 notes)

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~~ :3

• [General]

1. offset is little bit wrong. but I'm not sure :3
2. volume is too loud~ set volume 70%
3. add this Slider-slide in your folder and set timing S:C1 like this~
   
   Click this~

   
4. Why use same 'Slider Velocity' Hard & Insane~? Change that =3=
5. Turn off the 'Letterbox during breaks'

• [Normal]

1. 00:12:867 (3) - NC
2. 00:16:607 (1) - I think this is hard to beginner so remove this slider and add circlr 00:16:770
3. 00:18:071 (3) - http://puu.sh/xiRk I think regular rhythm is better to play :3
4. 00:26:038 (3) - move this note~ :3 don't overlap this two notes for beginner~
5. 00:49:453 (2) - end 00:49:941
6. 00:51:892 (4) - move~ x112 y348
7. 01:00:672 (5) - end 01:01:160 is more playable~ :3
8. 01:04:087 (1) , 01:05:063 (2) - why just use here clap~? o.o remove please~
9. 01:10:916 (1) - remove whistle~ add finish~
10. 01:34:656 (1) - remove this slider and add note 01:34:819
11. 01:39:697 (2) - move down please~ this slider hidden by HP bar.
12. 01:44:087 (2) - end 01:44:575
13. 01:55:306 (5) - end 01:55:794
14. 01:56:282 (6) - This slider hidden by Hp bar~
15. 02:13:843 (3) - avoid overlap with 02:12:380 (1)
16. 02:17:583 (2,3) - change like this~ http://puu.sh/xj5Y
17. 02:26:526 (5,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/xj6W
18. 02:30:916 (3) - don't overlap with (2)~
    
    I recommend use easy rhythm~ because this is normal >w<

• [Hard]

1. HP +1 , OD +1
   
   
2. 00:19:697 (4) - try this~ http://puu.sh/xjhc
3. 01:04:087 (1) , 01:05:063 (2) - remove claps~ If you want use clap, you should use clap frequently
4. 01:07:502 (3) - end 01:07:989
5. 01:27:989 (2) - whistle~
6. 01:28:477 (3) - delete whistle~
7. 02:02:136 (3) - end 02:02:624
8. 02:24:575 (6) - change like this~ http://puu.sh/xjpl
9. 02:26:526 (2,3) - overlap perfectly~ http://puu.sh/xjqO

• [Insane]

1. HP +1
   
   
2. 00:31:079 (2,3,4) - This jump too sudden don't jump this part~~
3. 01:04:087 (1) , 01:05:063 (2) - remove claps~
4. 01:38:233 (9) - too far from (8)
5. 02:35:957 (3,4,5) - make triangle~ =3= http://puu.sh/xjEl

GL to your map~~ >w</

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi came from your modding queue for M4M
everything is suggestion so you can ignore this

Normal
02:08:477 how about make whistle sound on this sliders tick?
02:09:453 ^
02:20:672 (5) - Move 3 grids right 2 grids down
02:25:063 (4) - NC

Hard
00:12:867 (1) - NC
00:19:697 (4) - I think this is better

SPOILER

00:51:282 (6) - how about add note?
01:07:502 (3) - NC
01:11:404 (4) - ^
01:53:355 (1) - ^


Insane
00:03:112 (1) - how about making slider more round?

SPOILER

00:05:063 (5) - ^

SPOILER

00:20:185 (4) - NC
00:58:233 (6) - ^
01:33:843 (5) - ^
01:48:315 (5) - ^
01:52:867 (6) - ^
02:20:835 (7,8,1) - you make this patern straight? then fix it
02:33:355 (1) - NC

Strawberry wrote:

:) Hi~ From my m4m request.

[Insane]
00:22:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe this shape? http://puu.sh/y8Gm
00:39:209 (6,7) - (nazi)make perfect stack
00:40:184 (1) - the end of slider's tick should placed in x:236 y:76
00:41:648 (3) - x:272 y:257 (close the `grid snap`)
01:01:648 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - put them smooth
01:08:477 (3,4,5) -(nazi) stack better
01:38:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -(nazi) ^
02:07:014 (5,7,8) - ^
02:27:502 (6) - the end tick of slider should placed in x:164 y:148
02:28:640 (5) - should placed in x:288 y:164

[Hard]
01:11:404 (1,2) - a bit overlap
02:25:388 (7) - add NC instead of 02:25:550 (1) -
02:26:526 (3,4) - stack better
nice diff!

[Normal]
00:19:209 (1) - add NC
00:22:624 (1) - remove NC
00:34:819 (3,4) - it would be hard to read for a beginner if they are overlap a bit (IMO
00:40:022 (1) - ^
00:37:745 (1) - remove NC (as 00:34:819 -
00:51:892 (4) - add NC
00:58:721 (4) - ^
01:07:014 (4) - ^
01:13:355 (4) - ^
01:46:526 (4) - ^
01:53:355 (4) - ^
02:01:648 - ^
02:07:989 (4) - ^
02:12:379 (1) - remove NC
02:13:843 (3) - add NC

Greay mapset!!>w< Good luck!

S h i o n wrote:

Will mod this map later by editing this post~

General
- Why not have a normalhit for softclap?
- Too many copy&paste in Normal and Hard. Be careful.

Normal
00:12:867 (1,3) - the shape doesn't look so good as a whole.
00:16:770 (1) - give a quite finish on this note.
00:20:184 (2) - can be stacked better with 00:18:233 (3)
00:24:575 (1) - give a quite finish on this note.
00:58:721 (1) - kinda uncertain repeated time because lyric is not so recognisable.
01:03:111 (1) - make finish 1/2 later
01:10:916 (1) - ^
01:19:209 (1) - give a quite finish on this note.
01:25:062 (4) - you can make this note out of 01:24:575 (3) - a bit to make it more visible , like a distance of x1.20. That's absolutely ok. Same as 02:34:819 (3,4).
01:27:014 (1) - give a quite finish on this note.
01:04:575 (3,1) - overlap problem
02:05:550 (1) - give a quite finish on the end of this slider.
02:12:379 (4) - stack it better with 02:10:428 (2)

Hard
00:16:282 (1) - End point --> 320,96
00:20:510 (x) - add note
00:32:380 (1,2) - This plays really awkward. Delete (2) and add note on 00:33:193 (2) and 00:33:355 (3). Same as 01:27:014 (1,2).
00:54:819 (5,1,2) - stack perfectly. (turn DS to x0.0 and then put 1,2 on end of 5)

Insane
01:08:965 (4,5) - I don't like how the anti-jump cuts the flow.
01:28:965 (4,5) - ugly

Insane is ok I guess, but really be careful with those copy&paste in Normal and Hard.
Star~

S h i o n wrote:

Normal
00:24:575 (1) - quite finish, I mean that you can turn volume to 40% because it's too loud.

regenz wrote:

MOD4MOD

General
Hmm I think you put offset in wrong place of beat i think heavy beat should start here
00:01:160 ( you can here clearly this is heavy beat 00:08:964
** this one is not effect gameplay but effect pulse osu icon in song selection mode ( this is important to rank to )
** and next i think your offset is close to perfect but i get +8 form you. so think offset should 1160+8 = 1168 (at least plz fix offset position )

there are some place that can be put cymbal hitsound like 01:58:233 but I think you intention to not use it. if you want to let me mod cymbal sound told me again then,
Normal
AR+1 current AR3 seem this diff is easy not normal.
Kiai time in this diff not same as hard and insane please fix.

01:24:575 (3,4) - intention to use wrong space ? but i guess you want to made the number 4 of slider to see clearly but i think it's better to use 0.8 ds


Hard

slider tick 0.5 is unrankable plz change to 1 atleast
02:18:233 add note + whistle.

Insane OD+1 it's very easy to SS this with OD6

same slidertick problem as hard
01:12:380 (5,6) - not perfect align
01:44:574 add note?
01:57:745 after this please check your whistle hit sound it's seem wrong and different with hard difficult and i think this one (insane) is wrong
** if you move offset to 1160(or 1168) you 'll notice it that it 'll appear in 2nd beat and 4 beat ( big white tick count 1st beat of measure. )
02:35:306 (1,2,3,4) - can made this jump better. ( i mean made it a good shape like diamond star pentagon etc..)



Not Bad as new mapper. told me that you need me to mod finish(cymbal) hitsound or not and i'll star this.

goodluck

thanks for mod4mod

1. 00:07:997 (2) - I think to be consistent with the other slider parts, it should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353218
2. 00:21:493 (3,4) - this spacing may be confusing... it's 2/3 but same distance with 1/3s
3. 01:01:819 (5,6) - in this part, I think stacking 5,6 and 8,9 would be fun, and fits to the drum in music
4. 01:17:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
5. 01:56:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
6. 02:27:510 (6,1) - this spacing is confusing too orz thought it's 2/3
7. 02:28:810 (5) - no reverse move here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353219

1. 00:04:908 (1) - why not just cew combo on this? imo, stacking with different colors do not look good, and should be avoided if possible.
2. 00:06:859 (5) - ^
3. 00:08:323 (3) - this is gonna be confusing...
4. 00:29:461 (2) - second reverse arrow may be hidden... maybe unrankable
5. 00:53:363 (3) - moving down 3 grids looks better imo...
6. 01:47:997 (3) - ^
7. 02:28:323 (5) - o.o sounds weird
8. 02:34:339 (2) - second reverse arrow may be hidden... maybe unrankable

1. 00:37:753 (3,4,5) - weird blanket..?
2. 01:32:388 (3,4,5) - ^
3. 01:19:217 (1) - wrong finish..?
4. 01:25:071 (4) - I think you can add finish at the end...